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Question The Trouble With Karma

7 years 2 weeks ago #1 by Kristin Darken
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    Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
    7 years 2 weeks ago #2 by Malady
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  • Hilarious!

    Nice to see Petshop has good self-esteem!

    Ember... Hugging that doesn't sound at all like a good idea...

    Bio-devs being able to replicate Mutant traits... Did we know that yet?

    And this Wondercute is a lot more exclusionary than the original.

    Petshop as a foil to Jobe. ... She's likely a high level if she can make full beings.

    Woah, that Giggles info!

    The resolution 'was' hinted at.

    OMG. Karma's history!

    That stinger! Are there even more down there? Anything to do with the Disappearance?
    7 years 2 weeks ago #3 by Valentine
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  • Well that was an interesting twist at the end.

    I'm getting the impression that this Wondercute is more a club than a training team too.

    I hope Achoo has graduated.


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    7 years 2 weeks ago #4 by mhalpern
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  • Of course Imp gave her daughter the code name "Karma" wait if she's 7 in 2016 that means she was born in 2009 and could have happened in 2008.

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    7 years 1 week ago #5 by MM2ss
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  • Oh Imp, what have you gotten yourself into?... Also, tribbles! Awesome! (yes, I am a nerd/geek)
    7 years 1 week ago #6 by Anne
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  • So Imp has multiplied? Hmmm wonder who the other factor in that multiplication is? Is this Mischief's younger half sister? One hopes!
    On tribbles... one wonders that it has taken this long! Or maybe this is only the most successful iteration of them!?
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  • Mischief and Karma being half-sisters does seem likely, given Imp's history. If that is the case, I would wonder about the interaction between Mischief and Karma. Would Mischief be a moderating influence or an instigator?
    7 years 1 week ago #8 by Angeldude
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  • What have you done, Morpheus? What have you done?

    You've doomed us all is what you've done!

    If she was born in either 2008 or 09, then that means we're only a year away in Gen 1 from seeing Mischief get a baby sister.

    We know that the Imp has done business with the White Lady in the past. I wonder if Glyph will have any knowledge of Karma's existence, kind of like how AJ was invited when they were young.

    Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
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    7 years 1 week ago #9 by Hardric
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  • Aaaaaand let's see that story:

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    Okay, that was a rooll of excellent fun. Just a thing though: Wouldn't had it been better to try to keep the final twist spoilered for the first page? I read the story first, but there are always some curious who will check the thread here first, and ruining the big plot twist to them is perhaps not the best move.
    7 years 1 week ago #10 by mhalpern
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  • Anne wrote: So Imp has multiplied? Hmmm wonder who the other factor in that multiplication is? Is this Mischief's younger half sister? One hopes!
    On tribbles... one wonders that it has taken this long! Or maybe this is only the most successful iteration of them!?

    Considering she is 7 years old, that means she was born in 09 most likely

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    7 years 1 week ago #11 by mhalpern
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  • Hmm i wonder if Imp is going to collect some fur to use as art/ distraction supplies...

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    7 years 1 week ago #12 by MM2ss
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  • Or maybe find one of the next generation of them and a taser to use as distraction supplies... Just imagine the horror and hilarity that could result.
    7 years 1 week ago #13 by mhalpern
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  • Maybe next iteration will be less stable and will be used as a hold out...

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    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #14 by Dreamer
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  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


    The Trouble With Karma comments
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    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #15 by null0trooper
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  • The <Petshop Creations> Gun needs to be A Thing!

    Also, the ending reminded me of:

    Christmas Chicanery wrote: Inside was a mouse, darting back and forth as it nosed around the scratched interior. Just an ordinary, white-skinned, red-eyed mouse.

    Oh, no. No, no, no nononono...

    It wasn’t long at all before the mouse looked up at the two of them, dark beady eyes flicking back and forth as it watched them. Greasy could’ve sworn it smiled and winked at him right before squeaking in a high, shrill voice:

    “Mom! Dad!” A moment later, it added a belated “Hi!”

    Mom?

    Greasy looked over at the crystal-skinned girl in confusion, and found that she was already looking back at him, the featureless curve of her face impossible to read.

    What the hell did you do?

    They turned to stare back at the mouse, who waved at them.

    Simultaneously, they said “Oh, hell no.”


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    7 years 1 week ago #16 by Kettlekorn
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  • Hardric wrote: Just a thing though: Wouldn't had it been better to try to keep the final twist spoilered for the first page? I read the story first, but there are always some curious who will check the thread here first, and ruining the big plot twist to them is perhaps not the best move.

    Why would somebody who doesn't want to see spoilers visit the discussion thread for a story they haven't read?

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    7 years 1 week ago #17 by konzill
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  • Lol. Punished for getting caught, also who was her current babysitter?
    7 years 1 week ago #18 by MM2ss
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  • Check with Doyle medical...in the psych ward...
    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #19 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • Next to their English teacher, Mr. Narbon. Poor Artie, he just happened to overhear Petshop talking about pink carnivorous hamsters and it triggered his PTSD... the fact that his reflexive response was to shift, leading to him getting swarm-glomped by the Wondercute members present, didn't help.

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #20 by Katssun
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  • In spite of herself, she let out a squeal of joy, realizing that her fantasy of swimming through a pool of cute furry animals had just come true.

    :cheer:

    The moment that Mr. Turner said, “While that sounds like a fine punishment, you aren’t a student here so I can’t assign you punishments that way…” it all clicked instantly.

    We hadn't seen Karma use any powers. The red and black sailor fuku. Seven years old. Everything takes place in the evenings or weekends. Not even a student. Close enough for her mother to be called, so she must live in The Village. There could only possibly be one answer.

    I love twists like that. All the clues were there the whole time. But there's always just one line immediately before the reveal that pieces all them together.

    I wonder if Karma's real name has any significance. Art reference or cartoon? Speaking of which, loved the Elmira reference to what Imp calls Petshop.

    As for the other tidbits, is Petshop making a bunny that Morgana can play with, out of...spite?! :silly:
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  • Katssun wrote: I wonder if Karma's real name has any significance. Art reference or cartoon? Speaking of which, loved the Elmira reference to what Imp calls Petshop.


    The Moirai of Greek myth are also known as the Fates.

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    7 years 1 week ago #22 by jmhyp
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  • Meow Mix? Seriously?

    But the real burning question should be: What about the quadrotriticale? (I'm shocked it isn't in the Firefox spelling dictionary. :) )
    7 years 1 week ago #23 by Malady
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  • I'm more shocked at the implication that Karma goes to school in Dunwich, the Mythos town... But I guess its alright?
    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #24 by Echo
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  • An entertaining read and nice to see some of the plotlines progress.

    I'm looking forward to seeing this particular shoe drop in G1, it should be a good opportunity for jokes and hilarity. With Whately and Imp's history it should be interesting to see if the writers decide if Karma is a product of family planning or if Imp hired a (hopefully graduate) biodevisor to use IVF to produce a zygote and put together an exowomb and use to grow it to maturity. Imagine a room with shifting muted lights and snippets of music and various voices reading prose being heard, with various pieces of medical equipment standing along one wall and a sizeable translucent tank and a rocking chair having pride of place..

    Regarding the tribbles, I'm in hindsight somewhat surprised we haven't seen theiir like before. With all the immature biodevisors around Whateley, tribble outbreaks ought to be at least yearly events. Of course that might also be one reason Stan and Morrie take have flamethrowers, explosives, incendiaries and other heavy weapons on their rounds. Now I'd love to see someone create a mogwai. Of course that kind of large scale pest control might also be a lesser known secondary duty of the Cape Squad.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • Echo wrote: Regarding the tribbles, I'm in hindsight somewhat surprised we haven't seen theiir like before. With all the immature biodevisors around tribble outbursts ought to be at least yearly events.


    Why would anyone 'want' to make a tribble? It's not a weapon or utility item, and Petshop only made it 'cause it was cute.

    And there aren't that many biodevs who can make actual creatures, IIRC? Help me think of one other than Jobe and Petshop...

    Most biodevs set themselves to biological alteration and biological warfare?
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  • Malady wrote: Why would anyone 'want' to make a tribble? It's not a weapon or utility item, and Petshop only made it 'cause it was cute.

    Actually...

    The Trouble with Karma wrote: “Tribbles,” Mr. Turner said in a flat tone. “What were you thinking?”

    Amelia squirmed under his gaze. “One of the guys in the science fiction club asked me to make it,” she explained defensively. “They wanted a mascot…”

    That is:
    1. Apparently some sci-fi geeks want to make tribbles. Meaning that they might have tried to commission one from biodevisors before.
    2. Cute may have played a part in convincing Petshop, but she wasn't the one who came up with the idea of making tribbles, and she was doing it as a commission.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #27 by Malady
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  • Sir Lee wrote:

    Malady wrote: Why would anyone 'want' to make a tribble? It's not a weapon or utility item, and Petshop only made it 'cause it was cute.

    Actually...

    The Trouble with Karma wrote: “Tribbles,” Mr. Turner said in a flat tone. “What were you thinking?”

    Amelia squirmed under his gaze. “One of the guys in the science fiction club asked me to make it,” she explained defensively. “They wanted a mascot…”

    That is:
    1. Apparently some sci-fi geeks want to make tribbles. Meaning that they might have tried to commission one from biodevisors before.
    2. Cute may have played a part in convincing Petshop, but she wasn't the one who came up with the idea of making tribbles, and she was doing it as a commission.


    Ohh... Thanks! ... ... Hmm... Shouldn't the commissioners also be held to task as well? ... I think they should, if they asked for the replication feature... But did they...

    And how much did they pay?

    Lol if the Pikachus were due to her taking a commission from the Anime club. The lesson being that Petshop should think her commissions through more, and people should stop commissioning these things...

    If anyone commissions a Chocobo to go with the Final Fantasy Trio... :silly:

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    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #28 by Angeldude
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  • Speaking of Petshop splicing an energizer trait into one of her creations, it's likely that she'd be able to create lifeforms with other powers. While she has expressed discomfort in modifying her own body, it's not out of the question that she could work with humans as a base and give them mutant powers right from the start.

    Speaking of which, has Jobe every worked with mutant traits directly like Petshop has? If he hasn't, then it could very well mean that Petshop might actually be more powerful than Jobe.

    [EDIT] If she manages to isolate the regen trait like she did with the energizer trait, she could very well succeed where Bio-Regenetics failed.

    Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
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    7 years 1 week ago #29 by Valentine
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  • Malady wrote: I'm more shocked at the implication that Karma goes to school in Dunwich, the Mythos town... But I guess its alright?


    I'm more worried for the town.

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  • Angeldude wrote: Speaking of Petshop splicing an energizer trait into one of her creations, it's likely that she'd be able to create lifeforms with other powers. While she has expressed discomfort in modifying her own body, it's not out of the question that she could work with humans as a base and give them mutant powers right from the start.

    Speaking of which, has Jobe every worked with mutant traits directly like Petshop has? If he hasn't, then it could very well mean that Petshop might actually be more powerful than Jobe.

    [EDIT] If she manages to isolate the regen trait like she did with the energizer trait, she could very well succeed where Bio-Regenetics failed.


    Wait a sec, I think maybe giving Energizer traits isn't that big of a thing... No I'm not crazy, just remembered Dr Broad, Nacht's old friend, is supposed to have done this to herself, although admittedly it wasn't that stable... Maybe it's easier a decade later.
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  • Hardric wrote: Wait a sec, I think maybe giving Energizer traits isn't that big of a thing... No I'm not crazy, just remembered Dr Broad, Nacht's old friend, is supposed to have done this to herself, although admittedly it wasn't that stable... Maybe it's easier a decade later.

    Considering Belfatso is no longer Baron Harkonnen-class overweight, I think someone has already succeeded.
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  • Hardric wrote:

    Angeldude wrote: Speaking of Petshop splicing an energizer trait into one of her creations, it's likely that she'd be able to create lifeforms with other powers. While she has expressed discomfort in modifying her own body, it's not out of the question that she could work with humans as a base and give them mutant powers right from the start.

    Speaking of which, has Jobe every worked with mutant traits directly like Petshop has? If he hasn't, then it could very well mean that Petshop might actually be more powerful than Jobe.

    [EDIT] If she manages to isolate the regen trait like she did with the energizer trait, she could very well succeed where Bio-Regenetics failed.


    Wait a sec, I think maybe giving Energizer traits isn't that big of a thing... No I'm not crazy, just remembered Dr Broad, Nacht's old friend, is supposed to have done this to herself, although admittedly it wasn't that stable... Maybe it's easier a decade later.

    there is a simple explanation of why it might be easier in Gen 2, blame Roulette.

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    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #33 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • Well, I don't think it was ever said if Dr. Venereal was a Devisor or a Shimmelhorn Engineer, though just what the difference between them (aside from one being a mutant trait and the other something else) isn't clear. She did claim that her mentor was a Shimmelhorn Scientist, and that she in turn gained her abilities as a result of another one from back in the 1940s, but that doesn't necessarily mean Dr. Venus isn't a mutant herself - other Shimmelhorners seem to have tried taking mutant students before (such as Dr. Pygmalion, whom Delta Spike had hooked with the chance of a Devisor student who was also a brainwashed hot chick).

    Also, she was setting up Dr Macabre when she said that, so it might have been BS in the first place.

    But I have no idea if it would even matter, the fact remains that she managed it, even if it was unstable. Note that the Energizer trait may have been of why the tribbles were unstable as well.

    I do wonder if the instability was from protein antagonism (which is a known problem with hot-growing new organisms, though it sounds like it is messier than what happened here) or some other known stability problem which Petshop had anticipated because it was a familiar one.

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  • The instability seems more like what the Asguard in Stargate where suffering, they were clones of clones of clones

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  • A peek into E. Claire's troubled dreams the night after the Tribble Incident:
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    Congrats on the promotion, by the way.

    null0trooper wrote:

    Katssun wrote: I wonder if Karma's real name has any significance. Art reference or cartoon? Speaking of which, loved the Elmira reference to what Imp calls Petshop.


    The Moirai of Greek myth are also known as the Fates.

    And her first name comes from Imp's best friend pre-manifestation.

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    7 years 1 week ago #36 by Valentine
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  • Schol-R-LEA wrote: Well, I don't think it was ever said if Dr. Venereal was a Devisor or a Shimmelhorn Engineer, though just what the difference between them (aside from one being a mutant trait and the other something else) isn't clear. She did claim that her mentor was a Shimmelhorn Scientist, and that she in turn gained her abilities as a result of another one from back in the 1940s, but that doesn't necessarily mean Dr. Venus isn't a mutant herself - other Shimmelhorners seem to have tried taking mutant students before (such as Dr. Pygmalion, whom Delta Spike had hooked with the chance of a Devisor student who was also a brainwashed hot chick).

    Also, she was setting up Dr Macabre when she said that, so it might have been BS in the first place.

    But I have no idea if it would even matter, the fact remains that she managed it, even if it was unstable. Note that the Energizer trait may have been of why the tribbles were unstable as well.

    I do wonder if the instability was from protein antagonism (which is a known problem with hot-growing new organisms, though it sounds like it is messier than what happened here) or some other known stability problem which Petshop had anticipated because it was a familiar one.


    I believe that the difference between a Devisor and a Shimmelhorner is that a Shimmelhorner is never going to be able to work backwards to Gadgeteer range. Jericho is making a simpler set of his armor as a gadget, Möbius will never be able to make his stuff into gadgets. Both are still Devisors.

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  • Hmm... I wonder if Karma's interacted with the Cody Twins...

    And checked Wiki and checked story. It is true that it's never explicitly said that Petshop made the Pikachus, instead of some other biodev.
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  • Valentine wrote: I believe that the difference between a Devisor and a Shimmelhorner is that a Shimmelhorner is never going to be able to work backwards to Gadgeteer range. Jericho is making a simpler set of his armor as a gadget, Möbius will never be able to make his stuff into gadgets. Both are still Devisors.

    Doubt it. I think it's a lot more likely that they're just two different methods of accomplishing the same task (attaching a bubble of warped physics to a device to enable it to function in ways it should not). Devisors do it through their mutation. Shimmelhorn engineers probably use a weak psi trait.

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  • Valentine wrote: Jericho is making a simpler set of his armor as a gadget, Möbius will never be able to make his stuff into gadgets. Both are still Devisors.


    Jerico is both a devisor and a gadgeteer.
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  • Well played, hiding Karma's parentage by using our assumptions against us. That reveal may or may not have gotten a *squee* out of me for Imp's sake.

    As for Petshop's talent, I did wonder if there's much of a market for designer familiars among mages - and indeed a similar thought was brought up by Samantha. In fact, that Energizer trait alone could be useful to knock out technical bugs in an area - let alone the potential for what the energy then gets used for.

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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  • Yeah, GIFs with Sound did a shorter clip from the Pikachu march thing (clip in question starts at 1m 8s, and note that the clip immediate after it is mildly, and amusingly, NSFW):

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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  • If you recall, my own suggestion was similar - that such was reality-bending tech was a potential for all humans when they reach some sort of psychological condition that triggers it, just as Psi, Ki control, and Magic are, and that the Devisor trait gives a boost to this the same way the Wiz and Ki Mastery traits do. However, I am not a Cabal member (TINCC) and can only speculate on this.

    Admittedly, this idea was also influenced by A Miracle of Science where Science-Related Memetic Disorder is a communicable disease transmitted through literally contagious ideas (which is why I named that TVtropes page after it when I launched it).

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  • A shorter lived version of Tribble with fewer generations would be an effective holdout against energizers and power armor...

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    7 years 1 week ago - 7 years 1 week ago #44 by Malady
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  • mhalpern wrote: A shorter lived version of Tribble with fewer generations would be an effective holdout against energizers and power armor...


    Mmm. And it seems the original is stable, so it's reusable!

    So, power outages are gonna start happening in the stories... And a Blizzard's coming... Whoops, Blizzard's in Gen1... Now I'm thinking of someone codenamed Blizzard...

    Wait... Is this the furthest point in Gen2 that we have? ... Lol if there's a power outage during a Sim Run or something.
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  • Malady wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: A shorter lived version of Tribble with fewer generations would be an effective holdout against energizers and power armor...


    Mmm. And it seems the original is stable, so it's reusable!

    So, power outages are gonna start happening in the stories... And a Blizzard's coming... Whoops, Blizzard's in Gen1... Now I'm thinking of someone codenamed Blizzard...

    Wait... Is this the furthest point in Gen2 that we have? ... Lol if there's a power outage during a Sim Run or something.

    best to keep the original/new original separate 8 generations before poof sounds like a reasonable limit, 255 is enough to be cute and effective, but not enough for apocalypse

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    7 years 1 week ago #46 by Morpheus
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  • My original intention with Karma was to keep her as a minor background character who kept popping up, without revealing her parentage for awhile.

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  • We WOULD have seen Karma with her babysitter - in fact, the babysitter for the 'brat pack' - if I hadn't been flooded out 7 months ago, or if reconstruction had happened quickly. My muse has ideas of Laura and Karma and Imp - and techniques and tools for babysitting, and of course Imp's reaction. And Karma's reaction. which will probably be an epic on-campus event rivaling the Ninja attack of Team Kimba infamy. Or Ayla's 'prank' involving some anatomy.

    I still intend to do that, but living in very, very close quarters out of boxes with family in dust and some residual mold and construction debris is really making it hard to get some solitude to think about writing. It'll happen - eventually.

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    elrodw wrote: I still intend to do that, but living in very, very close quarters out of boxes with family in dust and some residual mold and construction debris is really making it hard to get some solitude to think about writing. It'll happen - eventually.


    Trust me on this: many of us understand just how wonky cognitive processes on antihistamines can get, and that having to camp out in one's home is not exactly relaxing. I suspect that many of the story ideas you have jotted down but not fleshed out can be written after your house is back in operation and still fit into Gen2 Year One.

    Even then, there still need to be a few hijinks left for the following years (or pawned off on a new set of naive freshmen!)

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  • Wow! Thank you for that incredible reveal at the end. Your writing is magnificent and storylines are deeply meaningful.
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  • I was reminded today while reading up on Robert Heinlein that tribbles are actually Martian flat cats with the serial numbers only slightly obscured....
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  • Hmm... We never actually see Karma unlocking Petshop's Lab Door or Wondercute's Club House Door...

    Assume she has lockpicks on her, or has she actually manifested with some lockpicking ability? Variant of Imp's PK Field?
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  • Probably the mundane sort of lockpicking; if Karma had manifested, and realized it (I suppose she could just think such a power is normal, but I doubt it), she'd gleefully tell everyone about it.

    Keep in mind, as we see with the Cody twins and students such as Ember, Diz Aster, and Miranda Mahren, early manifestation is a big deal; while it isn't true that early activation leads to high power levels, the reverse - that a high power level is often a factor an early activation - does seem to have some validity. At least, the teachers all seem to think it does.

    Given how this ties into Braeburn's theory about the degree of transformation correlating to power level, I expect that his research found a similar correlation about age - let's call it "Braeburn's Rule", a statistical heuristic that indicates that early activators may need additional attention. I can easily see this as something he'd published on well before "The Braeburn Report" (just what April Arendt's former employers did with that information doesn't bear consideration, eew).

    Even if this isn't really true, children with super-powers lead to an obvious concern about them lacking maturity and impulse control. This is bad enough in teenagers, as we see all the time in the series, and it does seem to be more of a problem with pre-freshman students such as the Three Little Witches.

    Anyway, given how eager Susan Moira is to become a student a Whateley, I can't see her keeping it a secret, especially since all of the adults in her life must be watching like (Super)hawks for signs of manifestation.

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  • I was under the impression that she hadn't manifested at all. She's just one of those troublesome and precocious children who have the seemingly supernatural ability to get into places they shouldn't be able to.

    Walk through doors as they're shutting, wave goodbye from a bus their parents never noticed them slipping on to, end up on the baggage carousel at airports...

    The how doesn't really matter, just that it repeatedly happens.
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  • Katssun wrote: I was under the impression that she hadn't manifested at all. She's just one of those troublesome and precocious children who have the seemingly supernatural ability to get into places they shouldn't be able to.

    Walk through doors as they're shutting, wave goodbye from a bus their parents never noticed them slipping on to, end up on the baggage carousel at airports...

    The how doesn't really matter, just that it repeatedly happens.


    So she's a odds-warper like Hazard? :D


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  • While I agree with Schol-R-LEA's assessment that Karma probably has not manifested yet, I can think of a reason as to why she would keep her manifestation hidden from her parents. Being removed from the regular school would mean leaving her classmates behind. That said, the Cody twins were outed to their father as manifested mutants the Friday prior (per Tears and Fears: Part 1 via wiki), and were told that they were being transferred to the Junior High program the following Monday. Whether or not this actually happens is yet to be written. If she was close to the Cody twins at school, this transfer might shift the calculus between staying in the regular school and shifting to the Junior High program.

    That said, I have a few guesses as to what Karma's powers might be when she manifests:
    • Mid-grade Probability Warper, focused on the whole 'your past come back to bite you' theme. Possibly Jinx-like in nature, though Murphy level impact.
    • Low-grade Manifestor, likely limited to short-lived version of various tools and devices used in her mother's former line of work. Inspired by Karma's line 'I can manifest, just don’t tell Mama…'
    • Mid-grade precog. She brings up cleaning Hawthorne, despite the traditional detention not having come up anywhere else in the story. While it is entirely possible that she heard of it around campus, it's not something likely to have come up in casual conversation. For us as long-time readers, we know that Hawthorne is a traditional punishment, so this incongruity slips under our radar.

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  • Well, Mischief would likely tell a lot to her little sister?

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    We have too little info to tell, since Braeburn Report info is confirmed.. Somewhat unreliable...

    But she's the child of two supers so high meta chance...

    We've seen no kid like that who's never mutated? GSD might count as Always Active Powers?

    Ebon Flow and Cardiac's kid?
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