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6 years 10 months ago #1 by Yolandria
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  • Another First Gen tale! Hope you enjoy and post your thoughts in the comments below!

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    6 years 10 months ago #2 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • October 11th, 2007

    I swear that was coincidence. Seriously, that's actually a bit unnerving for me, coming up right after writing that micro.


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    6 years 10 months ago #3 by mhalpern
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  • Ok I am not going to put out the two big reveals (I think), but I will say this, Tansy has been watching movies almost 11 years ahead...

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    6 years 10 months ago #4 by null0trooper
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  • Schol-R-LEA wrote: October 11th, 2007

    I swear that was coincidence. Seriously, that's actually a bit unnerving for me, coming up right after writing that micro.


    National Coming Out Day?

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  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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  • Squeeeee~

    Sorry, I had to!

    There was so much in here, even a dissertation on Star Wars. (100% accurate, of course...)

    Even if we know where Tansy is going, and it is a beautiful thing where she ends up, seeing her actively talking to that utterly vicious streak of hers, channeling it, is at least a little disturbing. I know this is Gen 1, and Tansy still has a lot of healing to do, but God have mercy on anyone, anything, and Older One that threatens her cubs. I kind of want to see Tansy psychically obliterate someone...

    I loved the confrontation she had with Roz. They are somewhat similar women. Forward, showing off outwardly, but squishy in the middle!

    Lord Paramount, thy motives for staying through Halloween are at least a little suspect! I'm guessing fewer detentions through the remainder of October?!

    The talk between Ironknife and Wyatt, and Hippy weighing in on things with Stronghold and Megs, was Danny shifting in public the seed that brings the Amazons? Hippy seemed remarkably grown up compared to how she has been. I'm guessing the loss of Sara, accepting it, and her new friendship with Alyss is finally bringing her to an "okay" space. But others might take her acceptance the wrong way, as inaction, and grow the divide.

    I like that Marty is starting to grow into the woman we know she should be, and not the brat we last saw at Christmas in Kerry's story. Her ego is starting to deflate, and she's being molded into an actual heroic persona. Stronghold's temper gets brought up, and with the fight in the cafeteria, I get the impression that Marty is going to be the guide that keeps him where he should be, and less of a Williams-type "hero."

    And lastly...The Witch. She's stolen a body! She could be any of Danny's harem! But we now know she's his first! I'm guessing the reveal of who she's hiding as will be from Danny's perspective, but only known to us readers! Very excited!
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  • I think the witch is Miki Koizumi, just involved enough with Danny to be a love interest but far enough away not to be in view of his other friends and not related to another student

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  • Katssun wrote: Squeeeee~

    Sorry, I had to!

    And lastly...The Witch. She's stolen a body! She could be any of Danny's harem! But we now know she's his first! I'm guessing the reveal of who she's hiding as will be from Danny's perspective, but only known to us readers! Very excited!


    Do we know that she's Danny's first?
    In the scene with Kayda and Mrs. Horton, when Danny was hung over after some time with Shine after Coyote messed with him - in September - he was asked if he had gotten laid, to which he blushed. So at that time, he'd already been doing horizontal pushups.

    And the way the witch was thinking, that he didn't seem like a boy losing his virginity, is another pretty explicit clue.

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  • mhalpern wrote: I think the witch is Miki Koizumi, just involved enough with Danny to be a love interest but far enough away not to be in view of his other friends and not related to another student


    Whereas I think she's someone else :) I just hadn't considered that she'd gone the route mentioned, even though it makes more tactical sense in hindsight.

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    6 years 10 months ago - 6 years 10 months ago #10 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Schol-R-LEA wrote: October 11th, 2007

    I swear that was coincidence. Seriously, that's actually a bit unnerving for me, coming up right after writing that micro.


    National Coming Out Day?


    Huh, I wasn't even thinking of that when I wrote that, and I rather doubt E. was either, but... hmmn.

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    6 years 10 months ago - 6 years 10 months ago #11 by Malady
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  • That Epigraph was a surprise, given how it's said as a bad song, but even if it is bad, doesn't mean it can't connect to things, and now I'm trying to figure out how it relates to the story.

    Cool look into character relationships in this one-shot!

    Blackrose and Tansy... Do we feel more on Tansy's side as we've seen her POV more? How much do we know about Blackrose's actions??

    The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?

    Reveals of some things like Wyatt selling that medical spell, progress on Tansy helping Peeper, etc, cool!

    The largest surprise was The Witch's reveal of more information about her current identity...

    Oh, and Adam Ironknife, (was confused about which Adam, initially), actually calming down, instead of being so... focused on being security, like Wyatt said.

    As a semi-literary person, the stuff about Star Wars really stuck in my mind. [ Click to expand ]


    And ending with Marty and Stephen, instead of some of the character tied into the bigger plots at work... Hmm. Interesting.
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    6 years 10 months ago #12 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?


    New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:

    The Secret of the Forger's List Chapter 2 wrote: “Calm down, damn it, calm down!” screamed Stronghold as he fought to somehow get a grip on the writhing dinosaur that was doing his damnedest to kill him. Razorback finally got a good purchase on the leather bomber and used it to fling the redhead twenty feet away into the trunk of a hundred year old oak tree that arrested his movement with a groan of protest. “Damn it, son that was my favorite jacket!”


    It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:

    A Pocket Full of Tansy wrote: Montana roared with outrage and hurled Tansy nearly fifty yards to slam into the hundred plus year old oak tree that was between the Crystal and Laird Halls. Two ribs snapped from the impact and her breath was expelled from her body as she landed in an unceremonious heap at the base of the tree.



    It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.

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    6 years 10 months ago - 6 years 10 months ago #13 by Malady
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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?


    New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:

    It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:

    It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.


    Oh. ... Well, now it's got Capitals in its name.

    And since Capitals Are Magic, lol, that tree might get even more prominent. ... Its spirit connected with Tansy, IIRC? ... Is it the oldest tree on school grounds?? Hmm... ... Wonder what it looks like in the Astral...
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  • mhalpern wrote: I think the witch is Miki Koizumi, just involved enough with Danny to be a love interest but far enough away not to be in view of his other friends and not related to another student


    Review still brewing, but I'm already seconding this, hard. 'Left-handed guy betting his left arm' levels of certitude. I mean, she just happens to have the one similar sort of GSD to Danny with grief about it for maximal sympathy, the very first one to be there for him after that shifting mess, and the way she just appears when he's at his worst, and is the very first amical soulder at this moment of total vulnerability just too well-timed to be honest now I think about it (it's not paranoia when body-snatching Mythos crazies are around), and the fact we only really see her on-screen when Danny is there where most of his stalkers are in other stories too, and is conveniently out of Poe so she wouldn't know about Danny not really being a virgin when she made her move...

    Besides, Eruption neglecting to mention the cat-girl thing out loud is just the sort of misleading needed to deflect suspiscions. Heck, now I looked again at her intro, it also accounts for that reaction to Tansy, beyond the plausible deniability about the 'no more catgirl porn modeling propositions'... And we have only her word that she met Kayda later in the same chapter.
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  • elrodw wrote: Do we know that she's Danny's first?
    In the scene with Kayda and Mrs. Horton, when Danny was hung over after some time with Shine after Coyote messed with him - in September - he was asked if he had gotten laid, to which he blushed. So at that time, he'd already been doing horizontal pushups.

    And the way the witch was thinking, that he didn't seem like a boy losing his virginity, is another pretty explicit clue.

    True, I forgot to check the time frames.

    Still, he hadn't been as clumsy as she had thought a boy losing his virginity would be, or as emotionally fixated, but that would come with time.


    The way I read this line was that The Witch thinks she's Danny's first. Danny was better than she expected for a virgin. But she still expects her own experience in seducing men to control him the way she'd done with others.

    Is it that The Witch's plan to wrap him around her finger going to backfire because Danny has a harem, and can also have a reverse harem...? :P

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    But The Witch settled in on an appearance before her plan shifted to using Danny. The sympathetic cat girl might be too much of a coincidence. My desserts and entrees are still on Fairy Girl.
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  • of course we can nix the one I was hoping was the Witch, Exquisite so with that bundle of joy out of the question, I am saying Miki.

    Also towards the beginning I think I saw potential foreshadowing of a baby GOO returning. But that could be wishful thinking, still the evil way to do that is if she's "not the demon they're looking for" only no mind trick involved for that to be true...

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?


    New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:

    The Secret of the Forger's List Chapter 2 wrote: “Calm down, damn it, calm down!” screamed Stronghold as he fought to somehow get a grip on the writhing dinosaur that was doing his damnedest to kill him. Razorback finally got a good purchase on the leather bomber and used it to fling the redhead twenty feet away into the trunk of a hundred year old oak tree that arrested his movement with a groan of protest. “Damn it, son that was my favorite jacket!”


    It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:

    A Pocket Full of Tansy wrote: Montana roared with outrage and hurled Tansy nearly fifty yards to slam into the hundred plus year old oak tree that was between the Crystal and Laird Halls. Two ribs snapped from the impact and her breath was expelled from her body as she landed in an unceremonious heap at the base of the tree.



    It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.


    And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?

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  • Valentine wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?


    New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:

    The Secret of the Forger's List Chapter 2 wrote: “Calm down, damn it, calm down!” screamed Stronghold as he fought to somehow get a grip on the writhing dinosaur that was doing his damnedest to kill him. Razorback finally got a good purchase on the leather bomber and used it to fling the redhead twenty feet away into the trunk of a hundred year old oak tree that arrested his movement with a groan of protest. “Damn it, son that was my favorite jacket!”


    It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:

    A Pocket Full of Tansy wrote: Montana roared with outrage and hurled Tansy nearly fifty yards to slam into the hundred plus year old oak tree that was between the Crystal and Laird Halls. Two ribs snapped from the impact and her breath was expelled from her body as she landed in an unceremonious heap at the base of the tree.



    It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.


    And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?

    Or 7...

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  • Changes of pace are always welcome. Let's see what this one entails.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.


    And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?


    I dunno, I mean, can you imagine being that age? I'd expect that after that much life you'd feel, well, thin and stretched, like too little butter on too much toast... ;)

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    The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”

    You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?


    Not unless Semiramis Vesmarran changed her name. I heard she's got an eye on "Nesmith" for a potential surname.

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    Conversations began to speculate over what would happen for Halloween this year, with wide eyed freshman being regaled of the battle that had taken place the year previously.

    By using precog powers unique to readers, namely reading stories having already reached that point, I can see many, many disappointments in the future of the most enthusiastics gamblers. Unless Morpehus made a point of avoiding the action for the sake of No Spoil.


    JG does have some Outcast Corner action paused for Parents Day, but with Original Evil ready to erupt it might be helpful to have some of the other characters' physical and mental places marked on the stage. Conversely, if the Rejects are scheduled to pull some major jerkassery with Danny, that's less likely to involve Absinthe (former target) and more likely to involve Eldritch.

    So, not so much of a No Spoil as Not Appearing In Those Scenes. For an example of the latter, I have a WhatIF story that's obviously set on Parents Day and introduces an Ojibwe shaman. That doesn't make it logical for her to get involved in a fight with the Shaman-Killer. If anything, she would have been informed by of the potential threat by her totem and asked (by Whateley Admin, Whateley Security, some spirits, and maybe even passers-by) to please reign in her son's enthusiasm.

    Hardric wrote: *Record Scratch needle* Wait, that pile of shit was a senior? And he was about to hit on what looked like a frosh girl when WitBitch mind-whammed him?


    Think about it. Girls and women compare notes. A freshman girl is his best chance to meet someone on-campus who might not have been warned about him yet.

    One very small point in his favor is that exemplar girls tend to grow up real big real fast.


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    “Thank you, Fredrick, that's very generous of you.”

    “My pleasure.”

    Literally what he said. And Hartford's.


    We can't be letting the kids have all the fun!

    IIRC, Paramount and Dr. Diabolik are two of the donors with whom Elizabeth enjoys having a conversation.


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    “That's your problem now,” Wyatt returned affably as he entered the car and pressed the button for the top tier. “And welcome to it.”

    Wait, the Betas are litterally the Alphas now?


    No, but their team leader is, by default, on the Alpha Council and Ironknife did start the year at the intersection of Senior and Acceptable, outside the union of "Not Me!" and "Hell no".


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    “You haven't heard? Dump Truck saw Franks shape shift into a girl and made a huge stink over it. I figured Danny would laugh it off, I mean, what shifter hasn't walked the other side of the street, am I right?”

    ... Incredible, my respect for Irondork is actually sinking even lower.


    This is Stormwolf, not Iron Star :) but I can't recall him ever not being shown as a (Lawful Stupid, ESTJ) judgemental prick. Exemplar-7 means he can survive continuing to be one. On the other hand, it's been mentioned that shifters are widely seen as furry deviants, thus somehow deserving of abuse.



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    Are you upset somebody is taking issue with the amount of homophobia on this campus? Because I'm missing the problem here, Adam.

    What he said, seconded so hard.


    Not that Cody's been very active on that front in his first three and a half years, but that's the downside of "live and let live" (and having been in a subordinate position to some Scary Bitches)


    If I were in your place, honestly, I'd do everything I could to make homophobia the most lame, has been, so last century thing on campus.


    Unlike many of his peers, it looks like he learned what Freya was willing to demonstrate.

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  • null0trooper wrote:

    The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”

    You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?


    Not unless Semiramis Vesmarran changed her name. I heard she's got an eye on "Nesmith" for a potential surname.

    I was thinking about other girls having curfews problems for staying too long in Poe, something Sahar must definitely have done at least some times. Disadvantage of quoting a whole paragraph.

    This is Stormwolf, not Iron Star :) but I can't recall him ever not being shown as a (Lawful Stupid, ESTJ) judgemental prick. Exemplar-7 means he can survive continuing to be one. On the other hand, it's been mentioned that shifters are widely seen as furry deviants, thus somehow deserving of abuse.

    I know that's Ironknife. Yeah, Stormdork would have been better. And that attitude about shifters is another thing he needs to change about him, like, yesterday, and another thing to deal with in general... Heck, except Mindbird, how many Betas with more than three lines have ever been cast in a positive light.
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  • Schol-R-LEA wrote:

    Valentine wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.


    And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?


    I dunno, I mean, can you imagine being that age? I'd expect that after that much life you'd feel, well, thin and stretched, like too little butter on too much toast... ;)


    I bet it had a great birthday party.

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  • Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?


    I don't have anything to back this up, but what if the tree in question was previously used as the hiding place for a certain talisman that Nimbus used to influence his catspaw in The Riddle of Sapho?

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  • Hardric wrote:

    The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”

    You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?


    No, this would be Shannon "Glamorous" Pruitt, one of the cottage fixers.

    I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
    Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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  • cprime wrote:

    Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?


    I don't have anything to back this up, but what if the tree in question was previously used as the hiding place for a certain talisman that Nimbus used to influence his catspaw in The Riddle of Sapho?


    :blink: ... Did that do bad things to the tree spirit? ... If so, then what?

    ----

    Hmm... So, when is The Witch gonna have some sorta confrontation with Tansy, as she's sorta Danny's protector? Or did she leave that role?

    ... Random thought, Peeper's special sight is gonna go wonky and reveal the Mythos on campus or something. ... Is he gonna find Sara's paper??
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  • Malady wrote: That Epigraph was a surprise, given how it's said as a bad song, but even if it is bad, doesn't mean it can't connect to things, and now I'm trying to figure out how it relates to the story.

    Music is like people. It can be redeemed.


    Speaking of redemption... TWFKAH thinks that she's going to turn Danny, but she doesn't yet realize that Tansy was just foreshadowing. Banned Aids was good, but he ain't got nothin' on Emotional Support Kitty.

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  • Of course it can. My two favourite examples of crap turned gold (both originated from Cher):

    - "I Got You Babe" as done by UB-40 and Chrissie Hynde (of The Pretenders fame)
    - "Bang Bang I Shot You Down" covered by Nancy Sinatra

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  • On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.

    So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.

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    6 years 10 months ago #30 by Valentine
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  • Ametros wrote: On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.

    So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.


    I don't see her taking a GSD case either. Or a minority.

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    6 years 10 months ago #31 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Ametros wrote: On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.

    So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.


    Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...

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  • Ametros wrote: On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.

    So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.

    Helps hide her speech patterns and Miki is probably an exemplar, meaning by hijacking her body she gets her mental capabilities, minor GSD would be a fine indication of a BIT

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...

    :whistle:


    That detail didn't escape my grasp, but her multilingual fluency is one of the factors why I think she likely isn't Miki with her not-entirely-fluent English.

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  • Ametros wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...

    :whistle:


    That detail didn't escape my grasp, but her multilingual fluency is one of the factors why I think she likely isn't Miki with her not-entirely-fluent English.

    From previous chapters, we know Wondercute has tried to recruit her, and she skips around. So what full time female would Wondercute recruit, that isn't part of Wondercute..

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  • Ametros wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...

    :whistle:


    That detail didn't escape my grasp, but her multilingual fluency is one of the factors why I think she likely isn't Miki with her not-entirely-fluent English.

    That's a good point. No matter how fluent, it's far harder for a non-native speaker to replicate a different accent convincingly than for a native.
    I mean, Kallista would probably be able to replicate a Japanese accent in her native Greek. But to replicate a Japanese accent in English, without mixing her own Greek accent in it? MUCH harder for anybody who's not a Siren.

    Even in writing it's hard. I'm rather fluent in (written) English if I may say so myself, and I have seen so many Funektic Aksents over the years that I can usually recognize a few of them... but writing say, a Russian accent? That's an entirely different matter.

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  • Sir Lee wrote: Even in writing it's hard. I'm rather fluent in (written) English if I may say so myself, and I have seen so many Funektic Aksents over the years that I can usually recognize a few of them... but writing say, a Russian accent? That's an entirely different matter.


    Actually, Sir Lee, if you had not told me you weren't a native speaker, I would never have guessed it from your writing. I am embarrassed to admit you write English better than plenty of Americans I know.

    As far as writing a Russian accent? Hmm, I would say more 'w's, in odd places. Like Newclear Wessels, of Star Trek fame. A couple of cliche expressions, like bozhe moi and a sprinkling of expletives from Russian Dash Cam videos. Just watch a few dozen and the curse words will pop out. Stuff like Blyad' (The F Bomb), der'mo, the number 2 pile and so on.

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    6 years 10 months ago - 6 years 10 months ago #37 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • I find that gavno works well, though my understanding is that unlike der'mo, actual Russian speakers generally don't use it as an expletive the way English speakers do (or the way Japanese speakers use kuso, for that matter, which IIUC can be a lot less harsh than the English 'shit', depending more on the tone you take than the word itself). It is sometimes used to describe something, but you wouldn't shout it if, say, you hit your thumb with a hammer. Or at least that's my impression.

    Also, makes sure to throw in a nichevo or two, because no one does fatalistic resignation like the Russians.</stereotype>

    Wait, where we going with this, again? I think I lost track of the actual topic. Anyway, I agree that the Witch probably would want to avoid having to deal with imitating a Japanese accent when actually speaking in a language other than Greek. Unless she has a spell for than, I guess.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: As far as writing a Russian accent? Hmm, I would say more 'w's, in odd places. Like Newclear Wessels, of Star Trek fame. A couple of cliche expressions, like bozhe moi and a sprinkling of expletives from Russian Dash Cam videos. Just watch a few dozen and the curse words will pop out. Stuff like Blyad' (The F Bomb), der'mo, the number 2 pile and so on.


    "b" being the third letter in the alphabet, a Russian speaker should not have any problem pronouncing an English "v" unless they have a speak impediment. "w" is more problematic letter, leading to "whiskey" being loaned into Russian as "виски".

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  • Since we do have a cooking section on the forums now, should we talk about the horror of Wyatt not only ordering a steak medium rare (and not rare), but furthermore, putting steak sauce on it?!?!

    The Crystal Hall staff are already great cooks, we know that from Ayla and the teachers. They would know how to cook a proper steak.

    Why would Wyatt ruin a perfectly good cut of beef!
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  • There are two kinds of people in this world. The kind who don't tell a bear how to eat his food, and the food.

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    6 years 10 months ago - 6 years 10 months ago #41 by Anne
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  • Kettlekorn wrote: There are two kinds of people in this world. The kind who don't tell a bear how to eat his food, and the food.

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    Yep the bear eats his food the way he wants to eat his food. Argue with him about his tastes at your own peril. For bears are like dragons, and thou art crunchy and taste good with whatever sauce the bear prefers or not!!!
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