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Question Amongst the Shadows!!!
- Yolandria
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- Schol-R-LEA
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I swear that was coincidence. Seriously, that's actually a bit unnerving for me, coming up right after writing that micro.
Oooh, the claws are out...
He was currently wearing a T-Shirt that had four different US Navy Dazzle camouflage patterns under a plaid vest that Tansy was pretty sure was the Black Watch Tartan and a hot salmon pink neck tie festooned with cyan blue polka dots.
Agggh! My mind's eye is on fire!
“It's just an old pawn shop buy, nothing special.
Well, that one guitar, slung way down low.... meh, no biggie, she isn't exactly hurting for tickets, with her money.
“When I went to book the simulator, I found out Ms. Hartford has it booked out for the whole weekend.”
“What?” demanded Johnny. “They can do that?”
“Evidently,” Sayyid replied with a shrug. “I wonder who she's going to put through that wringer?”
Heh, if only you knew...
Of course it wouldn't be Whateley without some strangeness and the normally laid back, low maintenance girls he found himself the significant other of were ever so slightly distant.
This line? I actually laughed out loud at this line.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- mhalpern
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- null0trooper
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Schol-R-LEA wrote: October 11th, 2007
I swear that was coincidence. Seriously, that's actually a bit unnerving for me, coming up right after writing that micro.
National Coming Out Day?
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- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Amongst the Shadows comments
I love how Lanie isn't worried about that, compared to how she was when we first met her that is a huge change.“Let's just get detention,” she murmured, her eyes stubbornly closed.
Eh, talking to Old Tansy like that, just a little creepy, at least only targeting bad people. Rosalyn helping out Tansy like that, plus admitting she was wrong about Tansy, nice. *facepalms* Rosalyn needs to start speeches better, and yikes, death threat if Tansy hurts Lanie, good thing it never came to that. Nice to see Tansy stand up for herself and make Roz realize she is messing with fire.
Halloween at Whateley, let's hope it isn't nearly as exciting as last year. Marty and Stephen on the Fixer's patio making out and necking, nice to see them not being shy anymore. Great, more DT groupies calling themselves the Bad Boyz, pathetic. And DT has only gotten worse, that boy is going to end up in traction or worse at this rate.
Hippy 18 now and smoking out in the open, can see why she is annoyed though, thought of Sara not being searched for, ouch.
*sigh* I thought that was the case with Gothmog, so out of touch with what being young is like.“Circe said last year she had no sense of Sara at all and Mrs. Carson said that when she was finally able to contact Gothmog he didn't seem to care she had gone missing. Gave her some cock and bull story about how he wasn't worried, and Elder Beings get summoned or captured all the time, and then went on this tangent about how he was imprisoned in a bottle in England for twenty years in the eighteen hundreds and was responsible for inspiring this guy Granville to invent the vibrator. What a crock of shit.” She turned and spat angrily onto the patio.
All that said to Hippy about Sara, seriously forgotten what young relationships are like. Hehehe, love Erin's response to Powerhouse. At least Sayyid is able to keep the peace. Hopefully, Archer is thrown off the Gadgeteer board with what he is up to. Johnny, you don't talk about a guy's sister right in front of them that way, if Stephen wasn't a gentleman you would already have a fist in your face. Hartford has the simulator booked out for the weekend, I have a bad feeling for Lanie, Kayda, and Tansy right now.
Tansy using a guitar to shield herself from Jericho's outfit, smart move. Peeper was subjected to that outfit, not even he deserves that, even when he was at his worst. A device to deny or deactivate Peeper's power, finally! Peeper wants it, interesting.
A chance with girls by changing his outfits to reasonable ones and Jericho responds like this, classic class clown. 10k, whoa, Tansy is very serious about helping Peeper.A grin split Jericho's face. “And give up show business?” he demanded.
Hehehe, Jericho noting Tansy's talent with the guitar and how she enjoyed playing at the picnic. Tansy judging Jericho as quite handsome, dang, without those crazy outfits of his girls would be swarming him.
Jericho read her like a book by her reaction. And giving her the guitar, plus that response to Tansy at the last part of this section, Jericho keeps impressing me.“Some things you don't need eyes to see,” he replied softly. “Music speaks to you, it was your solace when you were lonely, wasn't it? Let your imagination take you to better places when this life got to be too much. And I bet it comforts you while you walk this road back to humanity, doesn't it?”
Circe confirming Lanie and Tansy bested Kigatilik in the March of Dreams and was the same demon attacking the school.
Between nearly the entirety of her own department, Mrs Carson, Ms Hartford and the Trustee Fredrick Coveanu, the conference room was quite full.
A desperate Kigatilik might be even more dangerous. Oh good, preparing for another attempt on Kayda, this time Kigatilik is toast. Parents day and Halloween, I fear it will be Parents day as it could do more damage before being destroyed them. Hope no one loses their parents.“Somewhere it thinks it won't be found,” Elyzia Grimes told him. “Demons are bi-dimensional creatures and not native to this plane. By killing its Astral Form, Elaine and Tansy have made it vulnerable to complete destruction in the Prime Material Plane. It will be desperate and exceptionally cautious.”
Maria grilling thick cut steaks, I would be fighting back drooling like Wyatt too. Why are Lanie and Tansy being slightly distant to Wyatt? *groan* Bit put off how he and Kayda survived and the teepee, nothing happened, get over it! Something special for Lanie and Tansy, go big, Wyatt. A royalty check from McGraw-Hill Medical and he still has 50k left over, dang.
The spell Fungi perfecta imago Kodiak had taught him was taking the diagnostic medical community by storm, being hailed as the most significant step in diagnosis since the invention of the X-Ray.
Adam Ironknife asking Wyatt Alpha Male advice, oh boy. How to handle the Capes, talk about what happened with Danny and DT. Drag Race sounds interesting, ouch, bullying and the fallout led to Freya gaining control of the Alphas. Drag Race beaten that severely, yikes. Hehehe, glad Wyatt is behind what Stephen did and saying they will beat down any gay bashers.
Adam better learn to pick his words more carefully, he is lucky Wyatt cut him off right there.
And we see why he came to Wyatt for advice. Make gay bashing unhip and only the diehard idiots like DT will keep it up.“Adam, this is your problem if you make it your problem,” Wyatt told him sagely. “You're not a member of the faculty and student discipline isn't in any way one of the duties of the Alpha Male. If the Capes want to throw down over something, that's between them, whoever they throw down with, and security. Admin will hand out the punishments, not you. Your job is to set an example and have enough stuff going on that kids are too busy to mix it up with each other. You get all the issues, and none of the power. You make this your business, I promise you, you will have a miserable year.”
Star Wars and Wyatt doesn't get why Luke wants to leave Alderaan, *sigh*
At this point Wyatt should be quiet and let them explain. I love hearing how Lanie and Tansy explain Star Wars to Wyatt. Poise going to Dartmouth and met 2 other mutants, nice. More allies to deal with the Bastard and his army is always good.“Oh sure, pick on the nerd,” she retorted with much long suffering. “Do you warm up or stretch before you put your foot in your mouth, baby?”
Worried about dealing with the Bastard, being the best man he can for Lanie and Tansy, learning magic, good thing he has Lanie and Tansy to help him with all these worries. Taking down the Don, rescuing Skybolt and Cavalier by going into their mindscape with Lanie, Fey, and Aunghadhail, Wyatt doesn't realize how much good he has done.
Breaking out into a playful pillow fight, Kodiak and Grizzly not having expected this when they brought them together, sure didn't expect it when we first met them.“I don't deserve you two,” he whispered, reaching down to kiss them both. As he did so, he reached a bit further to place the bottle on the far night stand of the bed.
“Just so you realize it,” Tansy told him drolly.
“And keep it firmly in mind!” Elaine added.
Great, TWFKAH strolling with a smile on her face, thinking her plans for Danny are coming together thanks to her manipulations of DT. She stole someone else's body, all this time I thought she made herself a new body using dark magic. This makes it harder to identify her. Ewww, Danny slept with her, need to find out which freshman girls he has slept with recently to narrow it down. Bwahahaha, losing his virginity, you aren't his first you idiot. And back to manipulating DT, we know why he is acting differently this year at least.
A dinner picnic for Marty and Stephen, things are going well. Marty that in love in Stephen, aww.
Daydreaming about their life together, how sweet.“Enjoying the view, enjoying being next to you and day dreaming about spending my life with you,” she told him as she guided his lips to hers.
Asking what Steve's parents are like, probably worried they won't accept her. Yikes, even the thought of someone hurting Marty gets Stephen tense with anger. For a teen his age to keep control over his temper as well as he does, it is a testament to Stephen's upbringing. Marty starts menstruating next year and afraid of it a little, every girl is. Good advice from his dad, going to sleep angry just tends to cause issues. Marty and Stephen are so cute together, a good way to end the story.
Love this change of pace, just slice of life for all of them. Starting with Lanie and Tansy, the Rosalyn for a short while, DT's new group of freshman flunkies, the Capes and poor Hippy with everything involving Sara. Curious what Hartford has in store in the sims for Lanie, Kayda, and Tansy. Tansy helping out Peeper like this and loved her interactions with Jericho, he proves himself to be one of the most insightful teens around once more. And all that talk of the demon and threat to the school, I just hope no one dies when he returns.
Interesting how things are going with Wyatt, Lanie, and Tansy, plus royalties for a spell of that caliber. Wonder if other students have ever gotten royalties for spells. Yikes, Drag Race aka Drag Queen, the fallout of all that leading to Freya taking control of the Alphas, hope the school put in new rules after that incident to avoid a repeat. And love the advice Wyatt gave to Adam, don't make something your problem, let it sort itself out in this case.
Star Wars and Wyatt not getting the movie, he is going to be exposed to a lot more 'nerd' culture by Lanie and Tansy. And the Witch is getting overconfident, I hope she trips up and reveals her identity soon, possibly by Danny doing something unexpected. And once more Marty and Stephen are so cute together. Can't wait for more.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Katssun
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Sorry, I had to!
There was so much in here, even a dissertation on Star Wars. (100% accurate, of course...)
Even if we know where Tansy is going, and it is a beautiful thing where she ends up, seeing her actively talking to that utterly vicious streak of hers, channeling it, is at least a little disturbing. I know this is Gen 1, and Tansy still has a lot of healing to do, but God have mercy on anyone, anything, and Older One that threatens her cubs. I kind of want to see Tansy psychically obliterate someone...
I loved the confrontation she had with Roz. They are somewhat similar women. Forward, showing off outwardly, but squishy in the middle!
Lord Paramount, thy motives for staying through Halloween are at least a little suspect! I'm guessing fewer detentions through the remainder of October?!
The talk between Ironknife and Wyatt, and Hippy weighing in on things with Stronghold and Megs, was Danny shifting in public the seed that brings the Amazons? Hippy seemed remarkably grown up compared to how she has been. I'm guessing the loss of Sara, accepting it, and her new friendship with Alyss is finally bringing her to an "okay" space. But others might take her acceptance the wrong way, as inaction, and grow the divide.
I like that Marty is starting to grow into the woman we know she should be, and not the brat we last saw at Christmas in Kerry's story. Her ego is starting to deflate, and she's being molded into an actual heroic persona. Stronghold's temper gets brought up, and with the fight in the cafeteria, I get the impression that Marty is going to be the guide that keeps him where he should be, and less of a Williams-type "hero."
And lastly...The Witch. She's stolen a body! She could be any of Danny's harem! But we now know she's his first! I'm guessing the reveal of who she's hiding as will be from Danny's perspective, but only known to us readers! Very excited!
- mhalpern
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- elrodw
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Katssun wrote: Squeeeee~
Sorry, I had to!
And lastly...The Witch. She's stolen a body! She could be any of Danny's harem! But we now know she's his first! I'm guessing the reveal of who she's hiding as will be from Danny's perspective, but only known to us readers! Very excited!
Do we know that she's Danny's first?
In the scene with Kayda and Mrs. Horton, when Danny was hung over after some time with Shine after Coyote messed with him - in September - he was asked if he had gotten laid, to which he blushed. So at that time, he'd already been doing horizontal pushups.
And the way the witch was thinking, that he didn't seem like a boy losing his virginity, is another pretty explicit clue.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- null0trooper
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mhalpern wrote: I think the witch is Miki Koizumi, just involved enough with Danny to be a love interest but far enough away not to be in view of his other friends and not related to another student
Whereas I think she's someone else

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Discussion Thread
- Schol-R-LEA
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null0trooper wrote:
Schol-R-LEA wrote: October 11th, 2007
I swear that was coincidence. Seriously, that's actually a bit unnerving for me, coming up right after writing that micro.
National Coming Out Day?
Huh, I wasn't even thinking of that when I wrote that, and I rather doubt E. was either, but... hmmn.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- Malady
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Cool look into character relationships in this one-shot!
Blackrose and Tansy... Do we feel more on Tansy's side as we've seen her POV more? How much do we know about Blackrose's actions??
The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
Reveals of some things like Wyatt selling that medical spell, progress on Tansy helping Peeper, etc, cool!
The largest surprise was The Witch's reveal of more information about her current identity...
Oh, and Adam Ironknife, (was confused about which Adam, initially), actually calming down, instead of being so... focused on being security, like Wyatt said.
"Hero of A Thousand Faces" Ugh... not gonna go into my issues with the Monomyth.
And Tansy has deeper criticism... "a Harrison Ford paint job over a pile of John Wayne and Humphrey Bogart characters" ... Right, she's possibly even more literary than the Lit Chix? Jadis and Tansy were book nerds back in the day...
Really wondering who is the book-nerdiest, Ayla, Tansy, Jadis, or actually one of the Lit Chix. ... Still, Loophole did TA for Richard Lord's class about The Prince...
Pillow Fight! Nice!
And ending with Marty and Stephen, instead of some of the character tied into the bigger plots at work... Hmm. Interesting.
- E. E. Nalley
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Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:
The Secret of the Forger's List Chapter 2 wrote: “Calm down, damn it, calm down!” screamed Stronghold as he fought to somehow get a grip on the writhing dinosaur that was doing his damnedest to kill him. Razorback finally got a good purchase on the leather bomber and used it to fling the redhead twenty feet away into the trunk of a hundred year old oak tree that arrested his movement with a groan of protest. “Damn it, son that was my favorite jacket!”
It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:
A Pocket Full of Tansy wrote: Montana roared with outrage and hurled Tansy nearly fifty yards to slam into the hundred plus year old oak tree that was between the Crystal and Laird Halls. Two ribs snapped from the impact and her breath was expelled from her body as she landed in an unceremonious heap at the base of the tree.
It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Malady
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:
It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:
It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.
Oh. ... Well, now it's got Capitals in its name.
And since Capitals Are Magic, lol, that tree might get even more prominent. ... Its spirit connected with Tansy, IIRC? ... Is it the oldest tree on school grounds?? Hmm... ... Wonder what it looks like in the Astral...
- Hardric
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mhalpern wrote: I think the witch is Miki Koizumi, just involved enough with Danny to be a love interest but far enough away not to be in view of his other friends and not related to another student
Review still brewing, but I'm already seconding this, hard. 'Left-handed guy betting his left arm' levels of certitude. I mean, she just happens to have the one similar sort of GSD to Danny with grief about it for maximal sympathy, the very first one to be there for him after that shifting mess, and the way she just appears when he's at his worst, and is the very first amical soulder at this moment of total vulnerability just too well-timed to be honest now I think about it (it's not paranoia when body-snatching Mythos crazies are around), and the fact we only really see her on-screen when Danny is there where most of his stalkers are in other stories too, and is conveniently out of Poe so she wouldn't know about Danny not really being a virgin when she made her move...
Besides, Eruption neglecting to mention the cat-girl thing out loud is just the sort of misleading needed to deflect suspiscions. Heck, now I looked again at her intro, it also accounts for that reaction to Tansy, beyond the plausible deniability about the 'no more catgirl porn modeling propositions'... And we have only her word that she met Kayda later in the same chapter.
- Katssun
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True, I forgot to check the time frames.elrodw wrote: Do we know that she's Danny's first?
In the scene with Kayda and Mrs. Horton, when Danny was hung over after some time with Shine after Coyote messed with him - in September - he was asked if he had gotten laid, to which he blushed. So at that time, he'd already been doing horizontal pushups.
And the way the witch was thinking, that he didn't seem like a boy losing his virginity, is another pretty explicit clue.
Still, he hadn't been as clumsy as she had thought a boy losing his virginity would be, or as emotionally fixated, but that would come with time.
The way I read this line was that The Witch thinks she's Danny's first. Danny was better than she expected for a virgin. But she still expects her own experience in seducing men to control him the way she'd done with others.
Is it that The Witch's plan to wrap him around her finger going to backfire because Danny has a harem, and can also have a reverse harem...?

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But The Witch settled in on an appearance before her plan shifted to using Danny. The sympathetic cat girl might be too much of a coincidence. My desserts and entrees are still on Fairy Girl.
- mhalpern
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Also towards the beginning I think I saw potential foreshadowing of a baby GOO returning. But that could be wishful thinking, still the evil way to do that is if she's "not the demon they're looking for" only no mind trick involved for that to be true...
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- Valentine
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:
The Secret of the Forger's List Chapter 2 wrote: “Calm down, damn it, calm down!” screamed Stronghold as he fought to somehow get a grip on the writhing dinosaur that was doing his damnedest to kill him. Razorback finally got a good purchase on the leather bomber and used it to fling the redhead twenty feet away into the trunk of a hundred year old oak tree that arrested his movement with a groan of protest. “Damn it, son that was my favorite jacket!”
It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:
A Pocket Full of Tansy wrote: Montana roared with outrage and hurled Tansy nearly fifty yards to slam into the hundred plus year old oak tree that was between the Crystal and Laird Halls. Two ribs snapped from the impact and her breath was expelled from her body as she landed in an unceremonious heap at the base of the tree.
It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.
And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?
Don't Drick and Drive.
- mhalpern
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Or 7...Valentine wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote:
Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
New? No. Well, it had always been there, half way between the Crystal Hall and Laird Hall. If you look at the Campus Map it's about where the statue of Noah Whateley is, but on the other side of Schuster Hall. We first see it described in The Secret of the Forger's List as Stronghold fights Razorback:
The Secret of the Forger's List Chapter 2 wrote: “Calm down, damn it, calm down!” screamed Stronghold as he fought to somehow get a grip on the writhing dinosaur that was doing his damnedest to kill him. Razorback finally got a good purchase on the leather bomber and used it to fling the redhead twenty feet away into the trunk of a hundred year old oak tree that arrested his movement with a groan of protest. “Damn it, son that was my favorite jacket!”
It's further described with significant prominence in A Pocket Full of Tansy:
A Pocket Full of Tansy wrote: Montana roared with outrage and hurled Tansy nearly fifty yards to slam into the hundred plus year old oak tree that was between the Crystal and Laird Halls. Two ribs snapped from the impact and her breath was expelled from her body as she landed in an unceremonious heap at the base of the tree.
It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.
And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?
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- Hardric
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Yeah, and for some reason, i don't think you'd get a birthday pass like Kayda. Maybe because that's the wrong day.Only in the sense that the longer you delay your departure, the more trouble you both will get in, the Spirit replied.
That makes the arguing a little ridiculious, although cute. You're already getting all the You Time you could literally dream, in the flesh could be more special, but thinks about it.Tansy smiled down on her for a moment, then thought the better of it, leaning down to kiss her. As their lips parted, she smiled and said, “I don't want to go, baby, but I have to.” She ran her hand along Elaine's cheek and projected her thoughts. I'll be in dream space as quick as I can.
Ah'll be waiting.
Euh, unless they're more or less Fourth Wall Winks, this category of voices in the head isn't good. Like ever.So, we can fuck over bad people? Old Tansy asked sullenly from the cage in her mind she was kept in.
Yes, New Tansy told her. We can fuck over all the bad people you want.
Old Tansy's smile was malevolent. Good.
You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”
Weeeeell, you do have a passive which isn't just disappearing in a poof of smoke.“Shut up and listen,” Rosalyn growled as the car came to a stop and the doors opened. “Don't think your little apology tour and a couple of kind turns buys you out of what you've done. Lanie is a big girl, and she for what ever reason let you into her life, and if you hurt her, Tansy, well, we're all plant food eventually...”
Meh. Not letting your feet crunched is a thing, but pushing too far isn't selling the change that well. And that second voice in the head isn't a friend. Not really sure about the other one too, by the way.After a moment of trying, Tansy decided not to suppress the smile her lips wanted. “Roz, that was almost sweet,” she purred, holding the doors open. “And I'm going to take that in the spirit of you wanting to help Elaine and say thank you. I know nothing I can say will change your mind, and yeah, I'll admit sex was my weapon of choice. But honey, you and I have the same shoe size for that glass slipper.” Rosalyn bristled, but Tansy stepped forward menacingly. “As for whether I've turned over a new leaf, well, lets just say the bars on the cage aren't for the tiger, and, sweetheart, you aren't the tiger. Don't you ever threaten me again.”
By using precog powers unique to readers, namely reading stories having already reached that point, I can see many, many disappointments in the future of the most enthusiastics gamblers. Unless Morpehus made a point of avoinding the action for the sake of No Spoil.Conversations began to speculate over what would happen for Halloween this year, with wide eyed freshman being regaled of the battle that had taken place the year previously.
An Hawaiian shirt... Kill him with fire! Put an end to his misery.Marty had shed the school's uniform for a nice pair of jeans and her favorite NYPD T-shirt while Stephen was looking very studly in a floral printed Hawaiian shirt he wore open over a red T-shirt that clashed with the colors of the Hawaiian to an interesting effect.
*Record Scratch needle* Wait, that pile of shit was a senior? And he was about to hit on what looked like a frosh girl when WitBitch mind-whammed him? *Barfs* *Looks at the wiki* How did I forgot that loser? To conclude, search for WitBitch for an answer about that situation. Don't forget to tell us if you find her, we'd like to know her current identity. And for some unfathomable reason, i think Skybolt and Cavalier would liike to know it too.David was a senior and stooping to recruit freshman was looked down on generally as poor form. While David had always been a prick and a bigot, suddenly it seemed like he was throwing away what social cachet he had left as fast as he could. The part that wasn't wishing she was alone with her lover wondered why.
You're not doing a good job of dissuading her. Not that's a problem anyways, the jerks deserve it.“God, I love you,” he chuckled as he came off her neck to kiss her mouth.
I remember reading the vibrator story in the forum threads about Sara post-disparition. That said, Christmas could perhaps be coming sooner than Hyppolyte thinks...“Circe said last year she had no sense of Sara at all and Mrs. Carson said that when she was finally able to contact Gothmog he didn't seem to care she had gone missing. Gave her some cock and bull story about how he wasn't worried, and Elder Beings get summoned or captured all the time, and then went on this tangent about how he was imprisoned in a bottle in England for twenty years in the eighteen hundreds and was responsible for inspiring this guy Granville to invent the vibrator. What a crock of shit.” She turned and spat angrily onto the patio.
Sayyid, read again that final comment of Pendragon about Captain Condom Junior, 'fire at first opportunity'. It has been two monthes now, he has to have done something warranting it by now.“Easy to shove around,” Powerhouse opined as he arrived. “Not that Archer is a mental giant and into deep political maneuvers.”
Erin rolled her eyes. “Pot? This is kettle, about that black thing?”
Completely unphased, Powerhouse just grinned. “Hey, I never claimed to be a mental giant either, who needs to be when...”
“You're hung like a horse,” the women at the table chorused in a nauseated tone. “Could you find some other catch phrase?” Marty demanded.
Wow, now we have reached the point where even Assholo has to admit how obvious it is he is a reject. A pity he lacked so much brains when he faced Nimb– Wahahahaha, couldn't say it with a straight face (Are we ever seeing OMAG and the other Losers someday? Or is the former now locked to a well-earned fate of paintball training target for the Grunts?).“No,” Stephen replied. “They're The Rejects. The Losers call themselves the Rat Patrol. Archers' Bitches call themselves the Bad Boyz. With a Z, so you know they're all virgins.”
I see, I see, a redhead girl and a blonde... really close, and a black-haired girl agonizing a little watching her and over the fact part of her wants to join the action and the other is dead-set faithful to her own blonde... close friend. Just a wild crazy random shot in the dark.“You must have not gotten my email,” Sayyid told her. “When I went to book the simulator, I found out Ms. Hartford has it booked out for the whole weekend.”
“What?” demanded Johnny. “They can do that?”
“Evidently,” Sayyid replied with a shrug. “I wonder who she's going to put through that wringer?”
And that's when we discover he actually sews them himself. Be very, very afraid of Jericorp's future fashion department.The blonde wasn't sure what was the greatest crime against fashion and general decency: the colors, the horrific mixing, wearing a tie over a T Shirt or the burnt sienna corduroy pants he was wearing. Really! Corduroy! Where in the name of all that was Holy did he buy corduroy pants? She was glad she hadn't eaten yet and quickly gravitated to the guitar so as to have something to look at in self defense.
With hindisght, it's a wonder people take Jericho's... 'blind acting' seriously. And I'm not talking about the idea 'of ducking course the Gadgeteer/Devisor with the right focus of talent will fix his sight problem ASAP', but the clothing. It takes skill and visual confirmation to raise up to that level of... art? And because I didn't make a quote about it, kudos for finding a way to fix the Peeper problem (although it could lead to the end of wonderful highjackings of that radio station during the Finals).“I thought you were blind?” Tansy asked with a smirk, controlling her stomach with an iron will to look the boy in the face.
Ehhhh... On one hand, the acknowledgement is sweet and everything, and nice seeing that coming from Jericho, but... personal feeling but I feel like this is... cured-ham-fisted and overplayed for me (cured ham can be quite salty).“You're welcome, Tansy,” he replied. “Welcome back.”
“Back?”
“Back to the human race.”
Not to deride the millenia-old mage and daughter of Helios with precognitive powers, but... the link between an ice demon and a blizzard can be seen as relatively obvious even by us mere mortals.“There is no question now that the demon which attacked the school was the same entity that Mrs. Carson saw bested by students Elaine Nalley and Tansy Walcutt in the March of Dreams,” Circe declared to the room.
While the offer of help is generous, I think the actual reas–“In that vein,” Paramount said, catching the eye of the Headmistress as he did so. “With your blessing, Elizabeth, I will remain until after Halloween. Just in case.” Mrs. Carson nodded.
Literally what he said. And Hartford's.“Thank you, Fredrick, that's very generous of you.”
“My pleasure.”
The curiosity about how good exactly Whateley-grade steaks are aside, this line also reminds me Songbird. Last time we saw her, Zenith was swearing vengeance on her (forgetting the same point the Squirrels did about Imp: Would Carson take someone she thinks would cause ill to Whateley in any ways in the staff?). So I'm genuinely curious, is there anything planned about her in the future?“I'll have one of those,” Wyatt declared to Maria, doing his best not to drool at the sight of the grill full of thick cut steaks she was grilling.
And on how many more is Bedside Rug sitting on? Rhetorical question.The spell Fungi perfecta imago Kodiak had taught him was taking the diagnostic medical community by storm, being hailed as the most significant step in diagnosis since the invention of the X-Ray.
Wooooohoooo, Irondork is back... What's up, lacking bullying victims to grind further in the mud with law, and you want the Alphas to go back to the good old habits?“Let me walk with you, this will take a while,” the other replied. Again Wyatt began walking towards the elevator, allowing Ironknife to press the call button for him. “I need your advice, Alpha Male stuff.”
Wait, the Betas are litterally the Alphas now? So again, where is the problem? You can attack them outside and inside the law now, you got more power Assholo ever did. Or actually helping people if you are remotely interested in living up your so-called hype (I'm objective, I'm acknowledging that possibility despite how obvious the former is).“That's your problem now,” Wyatt returned affably as he entered the car and pressed the button for the top tier. “And welcome to it.”
... Incredible, my respect for Irondork is actually sinking even lower. No, seriously, I didn't think it could be possible. If people didn't know about it until, maybe hypothtetically theoretically it could mean he wasn't comfortable with the idea at all? Especially for a schoolwide revelation in an environment you know is fucking crawling with bullies when he's already getting all the grief about the cat parts of his physiology? My humble opinion, using common sense, moron. (Bonus salt points, that one comment about the side of the street reminds me the teenagers reacting to the FiM premiere who started Bronies React... by offering this wide open target to the bronies for their own reaction to it. Way to mark points, Irondork.)“You haven't heard? Dump Truck saw Franks shape shift into a girl and made a huge stink over it. I figured Danny would laugh it off, I mean, what shifter hasn't walked the other side of the street, am I right?”
Eugh. And he was still thinking that with this sort of experience in the past. Morbid curiosity, were they a Poesie? Also, it shows some blatant hypocrisy from some people when it comes to shifters like that. Aren't ugly enough for not bedding them, uh?Drag Race mess
*Eye twitching*... Fuck. You. With. A. Rusted. Chainsaw. You really thought Danny shifted in front of one of his many, many, many bullies for shit and giggles? Of fucking course the shift was unvoluntary, and if it was, odds were that shifting back wasn't in the cards, especially in the grips of the probably devastating emotional distress a total humiliation like that would represent, especially for someone who is chew-toy/sex toy/abuse victim for a depressingly high number of people in that school and will probably see that number rise even higher after that mess. You even fucking saw some of that in the past. I mean, we knew Irondork is an ultra sanctimonious asshole not really thinking that far ahead, but despite doubts, I hoped he could show more empathy than a fucking shovel! And where the fuck is the problem that someone helped Danny, personal consequences be damned, namely choosing Good over Law, as opposed to soemone I just cannot remember the name right now. Thinks it's starting with 'Iron' and finishing with 'Knife' (if he ever gave any value to the former)...Adam nodded. “That's the problem,” Ironknife told him. “Danny had a meltdown. Burst out crying, didn't shift back, or say anything! Then Mega-Girl picks a fight with Dump Truck over it, right in front of the teachers, hell the whole school! And the Capes all back her up and her boyfriend, Stronghold throws down a challenge that the Capes will beat up anybody gay bashing.”
What he said, seconded so hard.Are you upset somebody is taking issue with the amount of homophobia on this campus? Because I'm missing the problem here, Adam.
Thanks duck somebody is calling Irondork out, and providing good advice. And the fact it's coming from a guy who naturally is a loner, not so prim and proper in the past, is telling a lot... Wait a minute, he was doing all that during Pussycat while he had stopped being Security auxiliary? When did that shift in leadership actually happened?“Adam, this is your problem if you make it your problem,” Wyatt told him sagely. “You're not a member of the faculty and student discipline isn't in any way one of the duties of the Alpha Male. If the Capes want to throw down over something, that's between them, whoever they throw down with, and security. Admin will hand out the punishments, not you. Your job is to set an example and have enough stuff going on that kids are too busy to mix it up with each other. You get all the issues, and none of the power. You make this your business, I promise you, you will have a miserable year.”
Ironknife sat back, a confused look on his face. “What? I just ignore...?” Wyatt sighed heavily and leaned forward.
“Look, Adam, you've been a security helper for so long you're thinking like you work for security. You don't, brother. The Capes beating up the gay bashers aren't your problem. So don't give yourself an ulcer over it. You want to do something? Pick a side and set about making it the cool side of the issue. If I were in your place, honestly, I'd do everything I could to make homophobia the most lame, has been, so last century thing on campus. No one would be caught dead without a gay buddy. I'd get the most out, Sayyid maybe if he wasn't head of the Capes. Last year? Banned Aides. I would have picked Banned Aides to plan the hip party of the year. Cause everybody knows Gay guys have the coolest parties, right? Make Gay Bashing unhip, nobody goes gay bashing and the Capes aren't fighting anybody. Get it? Go plan the Halloween Party, that is your problem.”
... I dunno. Reference to the Last Jedi is funny, but for a story happening in 2007, it feels a bit forced to have this sentence here.“Amazing,” chuckled Tansy as she shook her head. “Everything in that sentence was wrong.”
Gasp! There is a life after Whateley after all. I thought it was a lie to make sure they left the school... Nice to see the characters not disappearing after graduation...“I got an email from Poise at Dartmouth,” Tansy added, rubbing his chest in encouragement. “She said she's identified two other mutants who were attending and she's bringing them up to speed.”
And that would be better if that sort of thing wasn't the main pretext for it tough.“Sometimes, I guess it gets a little overwhelming. I have to face this thing, this threat to the entire planet...”
Ha for the aetheric bastards not seeing everything coming, reminds them they're not all the jazz they're always bragging about... Fine, the scene between them feels nice too, okay?From the Astral Realm, Grizzly lay in Kodiaks strong arms and watched their hosts cavort. She wore her Amazon human form and smiled as her off and on mate kissed her neck. “We didn't see this coming, did we?”
“You're a bad influence on her,” Kodiak replied from his ministrations. Grizzly exclaimed her outrage, but Kodiak was not deterred. The Ancient Physician was determined to complete the treatment he had in mind.
Yuck, just yuck. Danny, it may not have been her original body, but you should consider a really serious clean-up of everything. You don't know the sort of duck she could have, or if Mythos is that tainting... Yes, I prefer dubious humour to some really worst implications there. Besides, with the time she also spent with the Don, you just don't know she caught which could hold over a mere body-snatch...The body she had stolen was a virgin no longer and while Danny Franks was no Casanova, he had been vigorous and genuinely concerned about her experience.
You never was able to think further than your fingerrtips, WitBitch. That's why even when an oracle told you 'account for every fucking detail or face total failure', you discounted Generator over a mere number in a classment, forgetting eveything she had done, and look where you are now... I really want her face to face with Skybolt and Cavalier once Carson is done with her about intel. Morality be damned, this kill is theirs.Still, he hadn't been as clumsy as she had thought a boy losing his virginity would be, or as emotionally fixated, but that would come with time.
Keep up on that little trip, WitBitch. I'll be waiting for the crash with camera, pop-corn, fresh drinks, a transat and a parasol.It figured she had to do everything herself.
Always nice to have more dreams and aspirations. And if he's still there when you join, regards to Ritter (what? Paladin is the same in German, and I had to think about another name to show the break from the Mutant Mafia and to appease all the demographics beyond Humanity First like he seems so fond of. I'm only taking his reasoning to its extreme (il)logical conclusion. I'm diplomatic, I didn't dig for other references reserved to the Goodkinds' Neo-Panzer SS).As she lay back against him as he sat against the tree that had shaded them from the setting sun and kept things a bit discreet, she took a sip of the sparkling grape juice he had brought in place of wine he was too young to buy and congratulated herself on her incredible luck. She had thought she would never want anything as badly as she had wanted to be in the Empire City Guard, and while it was still something she was determined to accomplish, she found that it didn't eat at her the way it used to.
The way just about any time she spent away from a certain red headed young man did eat at her.
Shouldn't that be 'what's your mother like'? Bad cliches say you have to worry about the wife's father (your father), and the husband's mother. And she seems someone quite likeable. The father too, and you're not a target for 'shotgun warning'... Oh right, the changeling thing. And an eldritch abomination of a Mythos sorcerer wants you very dead.But, nothing was ever perfect nor lasted forever and as she had become accommodated to, a thought began to nag at the back of her mind. “Steve, wha...what are your parents like?” She felt him shrug almost by reflex and for a long moment she thought he wouldn't answer.
On the bright side, it means the change is nearing completion (speaking of slow-changing changelings, I wonder how long it will take for Stacy?).“My dad gets angry,” she replied, trying to help him feel at ease. “And you know I can be bitchy sometimes. Doctor Tenant says I should start menstruating next year, and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't afraid of it a little.”
Yeah, shouldn't be big problems here... How will the Ironic Overpower rise up to that challenge? Beyond the obvious attempts by Nimbus.He told me once, and I'll never forget it, 'Never let the Sun set on your Wrath.'”
She looked up into his face to see him lay his head back against the tree and stare off into the night sky. “But, they're good people, Marty. I'm sure they'll like you. And I hope that you'll like them.”
She smiled and laid her head back on his chest. “I'm sure I will.”
Nice little breather also setting up the next hits who are so coming in a close future, showing character development, plot progression... The multiple references to characters who have been more in the background in recent times certainly doesn't hurt. Now the question is... How and how hard exactly will all that sweetness come crashing down all around us?
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E. E. Nalley wrote: It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.
And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?
I dunno, I mean, can you imagine being that age? I'd expect that after that much life you'd feel, well, thin and stretched, like too little butter on too much toast...

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You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”
Not unless Semiramis Vesmarran changed her name. I heard she's got an eye on "Nesmith" for a potential surname.
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By using precog powers unique to readers, namely reading stories having already reached that point, I can see many, many disappointments in the future of the most enthusiastics gamblers. Unless Morpehus made a point of avoiding the action for the sake of No Spoil.Conversations began to speculate over what would happen for Halloween this year, with wide eyed freshman being regaled of the battle that had taken place the year previously.
JG does have some Outcast Corner action paused for Parents Day, but with Original Evil ready to erupt it might be helpful to have some of the other characters' physical and mental places marked on the stage. Conversely, if the Rejects are scheduled to pull some major jerkassery with Danny, that's less likely to involve Absinthe (former target) and more likely to involve Eldritch.
So, not so much of a No Spoil as Not Appearing In Those Scenes. For an example of the latter, I have a WhatIF story that's obviously set on Parents Day and introduces an Ojibwe shaman. That doesn't make it logical for her to get involved in a fight with the Shaman-Killer. If anything, she would have been informed by of the potential threat by her totem and asked (by Whateley Admin, Whateley Security, some spirits, and maybe even passers-by) to please reign in her son's enthusiasm.
Hardric wrote: *Record Scratch needle* Wait, that pile of shit was a senior? And he was about to hit on what looked like a frosh girl when WitBitch mind-whammed him?
Think about it. Girls and women compare notes. A freshman girl is his best chance to meet someone on-campus who might not have been warned about him yet.
One very small point in his favor is that exemplar girls tend to grow up real big real fast.
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Literally what he said. And Hartford's.“Thank you, Fredrick, that's very generous of you.”
“My pleasure.”
We can't be letting the kids have all the fun!
IIRC, Paramount and Dr. Diabolik are two of the donors with whom Elizabeth enjoys having a conversation.
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Wait, the Betas are litterally the Alphas now?“That's your problem now,” Wyatt returned affably as he entered the car and pressed the button for the top tier. “And welcome to it.”
No, but their team leader is, by default, on the Alpha Council and Ironknife did start the year at the intersection of Senior and Acceptable, outside the union of "Not Me!" and "Hell no".
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... Incredible, my respect for Irondork is actually sinking even lower.“You haven't heard? Dump Truck saw Franks shape shift into a girl and made a huge stink over it. I figured Danny would laugh it off, I mean, what shifter hasn't walked the other side of the street, am I right?”
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What he said, seconded so hard.Are you upset somebody is taking issue with the amount of homophobia on this campus? Because I'm missing the problem here, Adam.
Not that Cody's been very active on that front in his first three and a half years, but that's the downside of "live and let live" (and having been in a subordinate position to some Scary Bitches)
If I were in your place, honestly, I'd do everything I could to make homophobia the most lame, has been, so last century thing on campus.
Unlike many of his peers, it looks like he learned what Freya was willing to demonstrate.
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I was thinking about other girls having curfews problems for staying too long in Poe, something Sahar must definitely have done at least some times. Disadvantage of quoting a whole paragraph.null0trooper wrote:
You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”
Not unless Semiramis Vesmarran changed her name. I heard she's got an eye on "Nesmith" for a potential surname.
I know that's Ironknife. Yeah, Stormdork would have been better. And that attitude about shifters is another thing he needs to change about him, like, yesterday, and another thing to deal with in general... Heck, except Mindbird, how many Betas with more than three lines have ever been cast in a positive light.This is Stormwolf, not Iron Star
but I can't recall him ever not being shown as a (Lawful Stupid, ESTJ) judgemental prick. Exemplar-7 means he can survive continuing to be one. On the other hand, it's been mentioned that shifters are widely seen as furry deviants, thus somehow deserving of abuse.
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Valentine wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: It is under Hundred Year Oak that Tansy has her moment of clarity and begins her long road of recovery. Rumor has it the tree was planted by Noah himself, and that the tree is actually 111 years old, but that doesn't roll off the tongue as well.
And what's wrong with Eleventy-one?
I dunno, I mean, can you imagine being that age? I'd expect that after that much life you'd feel, well, thin and stretched, like too little butter on too much toast...
I bet it had a great birthday party.
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Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
I don't have anything to back this up, but what if the tree in question was previously used as the hiding place for a certain talisman that Nimbus used to influence his catspaw in The Riddle of Sapho?
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You mean, like... wild random crazy shot in the dark there... Sahar, by chance?The brunette raised a hand and shook her head. “Don't worry, I'm not here to bust you. You aren't the first girl that needed reminding there's a curfew. I called over to Shannon Pruitt my fellow fixer in Dickinson, who assures me Tansy Walcutt was in her room at lights out.”
No, this would be Shannon "Glamorous" Pruitt, one of the cottage fixers.
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Malady wrote: The Hundred Year Oak, is new? Well, it's old, but naming it is new?
I don't have anything to back this up, but what if the tree in question was previously used as the hiding place for a certain talisman that Nimbus used to influence his catspaw in The Riddle of Sapho?

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Hmm... So, when is The Witch gonna have some sorta confrontation with Tansy, as she's sorta Danny's protector? Or did she leave that role?
... Random thought, Peeper's special sight is gonna go wonky and reveal the Mythos on campus or something. ... Is he gonna find Sara's paper??
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Speaking of redemption... TWFKAH thinks that she's going to turn Danny, but she doesn't yet realize that Tansy was just foreshadowing. Banned Aids was good, but he ain't got nothin' on Emotional Support Kitty.
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So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.
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Ametros wrote: On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.
So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.
I don't see her taking a GSD case either. Or a minority.
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Ametros wrote: On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.
So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.
Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...

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Helps hide her speech patterns and Miki is probably an exemplar, meaning by hijacking her body she gets her mental capabilities, minor GSD would be a fine indication of a BITAmetros wrote: On the subject of TWFKAH... I'd think that she would avoid the likes of Miki and Amelie, purely on the basis that maintaining even a partial language/social barrier (accents and fluency, mainly) would be additional effort with the potential to trip her up. Even if magic could cover those bases, in itself it would also be a factor to potentially blow her cover.
So I doubt it's either of them - Amelie especially due to Adalie's presence.
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E. E. Nalley wrote: Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...
That detail didn't escape my grasp, but her multilingual fluency is one of the factors why I think she likely isn't Miki with her not-entirely-fluent English.
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From previous chapters, we know Wondercute has tried to recruit her, and she skips around. So what full time female would Wondercute recruit, that isn't part of Wondercute..Ametros wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...
That detail didn't escape my grasp, but her multilingual fluency is one of the factors why I think she likely isn't Miki with her not-entirely-fluent English.
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That's a good point. No matter how fluent, it's far harder for a non-native speaker to replicate a different accent convincingly than for a native.Ametros wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: Keep in mind, the Witch was a Greek National, so multiple languages are not a new thing to her. Not that that has anything to do with anything...
That detail didn't escape my grasp, but her multilingual fluency is one of the factors why I think she likely isn't Miki with her not-entirely-fluent English.
I mean, Kallista would probably be able to replicate a Japanese accent in her native Greek. But to replicate a Japanese accent in English, without mixing her own Greek accent in it? MUCH harder for anybody who's not a Siren.
Even in writing it's hard. I'm rather fluent in (written) English if I may say so myself, and I have seen so many Funektic Aksents over the years that I can usually recognize a few of them... but writing say, a Russian accent? That's an entirely different matter.
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Sir Lee wrote: Even in writing it's hard. I'm rather fluent in (written) English if I may say so myself, and I have seen so many Funektic Aksents over the years that I can usually recognize a few of them... but writing say, a Russian accent? That's an entirely different matter.
Actually, Sir Lee, if you had not told me you weren't a native speaker, I would never have guessed it from your writing. I am embarrassed to admit you write English better than plenty of Americans I know.
As far as writing a Russian accent? Hmm, I would say more 'w's, in odd places. Like Newclear Wessels, of Star Trek fame. A couple of cliche expressions, like bozhe moi and a sprinkling of expletives from Russian Dash Cam videos. Just watch a few dozen and the curse words will pop out. Stuff like Blyad' (The F Bomb), der'mo, the number 2 pile and so on.
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Also, makes sure to throw in a nichevo or two, because no one does fatalistic resignation like the Russians.</stereotype>
Wait, where we going with this, again? I think I lost track of the actual topic. Anyway, I agree that the Witch probably would want to avoid having to deal with imitating a Japanese accent when actually speaking in a language other than Greek. Unless she has a spell for than, I guess.
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E. E. Nalley wrote: As far as writing a Russian accent? Hmm, I would say more 'w's, in odd places. Like Newclear Wessels, of Star Trek fame. A couple of cliche expressions, like bozhe moi and a sprinkling of expletives from Russian Dash Cam videos. Just watch a few dozen and the curse words will pop out. Stuff like Blyad' (The F Bomb), der'mo, the number 2 pile and so on.
"b" being the third letter in the alphabet, a Russian speaker should not have any problem pronouncing an English "v" unless they have a speak impediment. "w" is more problematic letter, leading to "whiskey" being loaned into Russian as "виски".
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The Crystal Hall staff are already great cooks, we know that from Ayla and the teachers. They would know how to cook a proper steak.
Why would Wyatt ruin a perfectly good cut of beef!
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