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Question Tea and Tears
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Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Yolandria
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Tea and Tears comments
Makes you just wish you could cure her somehow.For all his things meant nothing because he could not save that which was most precious to him. He laid his head on his desk and wept.
At Whateley in Melville Cottage, a package arrived for Jadis earlier, now that is a secure suitcase. Misty shows up to their dorm room and is curious about the briefcase, so am I. Solon-5! A gift, she is giving this to Tansy for her grandmother, please let it not have the side-effects of Solon-4. Yikes! When Misty gets that look in her eyes it is scary.
If that were true, a lot more mutants with issues would be high-level Exemplars.Jadis couldn't help but wonder if Tansy's nearly unearthly beauty was the compensation the universe was offering her for the massive, steaming dump it had taken on her life.
And the thought of forgetting what love feels like, terrifying.Her shame at the complete slut she had become to use boys into getting what she had wanted, allowing her father to manipulate her into using her powers for him and the isolation and psychological abuse he had practiced on her, turning her into a weapon for his own ends.
Interesting way of looking at it.It wasn't just unfair, it was downright inhumane that someone could be so beautiful. Helen would weep with envy.
Only a true friend can see you for who you truly are.Yet, encased in this living statue, this goddess descended among mortal men was a science fiction and comic book nerd whose tastes in fiction were as unrefined as they were broad and accepting. That Aphrodite would also house a good and decent girl who had merely lost her way when she had been cursed with this beauty, who had missed her friendship with Jadis for who Jadis was, not what she could accomplish or who her father was.
Earl Grey, hot. Heh, sorry, that line from Picard is drilled into my mind.
So that was the letter which upset Daniel.“Grandpa called Mom today,” she said softly. “They weren't accepted into the Solon-4 Trial. She...she's worried he'll do something reckless.”
And Jadis is a great friend, but still concerned they use it the right way and not self-administer.“This,” Jadis told her, “is Solon-5. My Dad tells me it has all of the reparative powers of 4, that the official agencies are only just starting to admit to, as well as a few other of his favorite properties. There's a complete set of directions and warnings for their doctor as well as dosage instructions.”
And then talking about World Without End, I love these two being friends again.“I will put it in Dr Anderson's hands myself,” Tansy promised. She stood, crossed the short space and swept Jadis up into a hug. Jadis felt a flood of emotions radiating off her friend, love, gratefulness, friendship that brought a smile to her face as she returned the hug.
And Misty showing up to their dorm room on Friday, exhausted from the week.
Whoa, for Jadis to even find one of those is working some major connections.The holy grail of Unicorn plushies, the large size, limited edition plush of “Lady Amalthea” from The Last Unicorn. Misty clutched her treasure to her cheek and realized she had the best room mate ever!
A short but very sweet short with a lot of emotional moments I loved. From feeling the pain of Daniel at losing his wife to Alzheimer's like this and a letter shattering what he believed was his one hope, to Jadis giving Tansy the Solon-5 and all the emotions between these two united friends. Even Misty's excited at getting the rarest of Unicorn plushies in existence was fun to see. Can't wait and see how the treatments go, plus Tansy and Jadis's reformed friendship continue.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Malady
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Also thought it would be Bladedancer-related... What with the other "Tea and [X]" stories?
I thought she died at the beginning... "We are sorry to inform you" and all.
Oooh! Solon has a chemical formula!
"World Without End" from "Pillars of The Earth"? ... Dunno anything about it.
Woah. Jadis... Is that just appreciation of another's girl's greatness? Well... You aren't gonna hook up with Ayla, so that's sorta confirms the "not lesbian"?? ... But that LesYay is STRONG...
That ending! So much heartwarming!
And Misty is so accepting, too?
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Repercussions of Solon-5. ... Totally putting my bets on "She's the carrier of the MGC in the family" and "She's gonna mutate."
Oh, and that it is indeed an Alzheimer's Cure.
- RoseBlack
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Also I never thought grandmother died. They would not inform someone of that in a text esp not someone that well off.
It's nice to see Tansy having friends again fits with character growth we have seen for her. Also I would like enough solon 5 for a regimine myself please.
I would like to see more of Jadis really over all. She is a interesting character.
- Katssun
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I've contended, and there's plenty of evidence going back to her introduction chapters, that Misty is far less of a ditz than she comes off. She's almost as calculating as Jadis, which is why they fit so well together.Malady wrote: And Misty is so accepting, too?
She just doesn't show it.
But Jadis' feelings about Tansy were the real highlight of this chapter. Understanding all the crap Tansy has come through to be back in a place where they can be friends again. They've both been through a lot of pain, but now exist as a little refuge for each other. Like when they were both in middle school.
Can't wait to see how this plays out years later.
- Echo
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This short IMO also fits well with Dr Dad's likely views on Alzheimers with respects to his SMIILE goals. He would likely see it as some sort of abomination.
Now having Ember light some sort of Thanksgiving bonfire while in Boston, that could provide some opportunity for comedy.
- Mister D
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RoseBlack wrote: No Jadis had dibs in the Tea.... titles before blade dancer was even a thing. Because of tea with the devils daughter.
Also I never thought grandmother died. They would not inform someone of that in a text esp not someone that well off.
It's nice to see Tansy having friends again fits with character growth we have seen for her. Also I would like enough solon 5 for a regimine myself please.
I would like to see more of Jadis really over all. She is a interesting character.
Have a look for "Tea With The Black Dragon".

It's am interesting look at both Tao-ism, and a murder-mystery, with a background of magical-entities-being-real.
The being-informed-by-text was probably the knock-back from the Solon 4 trials.
Measure Twice
- E. E. Nalley
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As to Boston, well, it wouldn't be a Whateley story without SOME hi-jinks, now would it? Of course, we still have to get through Halloween first...

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- RoseBlack
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- E. E. Nalley
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RoseBlack wrote: What I was saying is from my understanding tea with the devils daughter was written before blade dancer was even a concept.
No, Chou was mentioned in Afternoon Tea with The Devil's Daughter.
Afternoon Tea With The Devil's Daughter wrote: She (Jadis) gave me a big smirk. “Are you trying to tell me you got a good roommate somehow? Who’s this paragon of wholesomeness you landed, and how did you find her?”
I smiled, “I’m rooming with Bladedancer.”
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- RoseBlack
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- Sir Lee
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And I don't think of Misty as "smart hiding under a ditzy façade," I think of her as "intuitive." Like, not so much for logical-mathematical intelligence, but really high on the interpersonal intelligence, so she's good about realizing things about other people.
- Katssun
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Totally agree here, and this is sort of what I was going for. Unless Misty is a secret plant of some SINISTER organization!Sir Lee wrote: And I don't think of Misty as "smart hiding under a ditzy façade," I think of her as "intuitive." Like, not so much for logical-mathematical intelligence, but really high on the interpersonal intelligence, so she's good about realizing things about other people.
My impression is that Misty is the product of the Very Small Town clique system. How does a girl find a safe place when there is already a queen bee? Play the fool. She knows where to put herself in the hierarchy so she comes of as nonthreatening and isn't bothered. My suspicion is that's how she acted at whatever tiny school she went to before she manifested.
There's moments where she drops the act. The first foray into Boston when she immediately assesses the situation when Jads starts barking orders. When she's first hanging out with Wondercute, asking some particularly out-of-character pointed questions. All the King's Horses.
How did she immediately find a place with Jadis? She plays
I also wouldn't be surprised if a couple of interviews with Misty allowed Carson, Hartford, Michiko, and the Melville houseparents to hatch the plan to solve the "Jadis Roommate Issue."
- Katssun
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Misty is confirmed to be an exemplar with the full mental package in this story, not totally sure that's been brought up before.
If Misty has Exemplar brain, and perfect recall, doesn't that mean when she starts going on a Confusion Blather tear (that Jadis likes to take advantage of), doesn't that mean Misty is doing it 100% on purpose? She shouldn't have any issues remembering the order of events, but her Confusion Blather technique has her jumping back and forth on sequence of events and sidebars every time.
- null0trooper
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Katssun wrote: If Misty has Exemplar brain, and perfect recall, doesn't that mean when she starts going on a Confusion Blather tear (that Jadis likes to take advantage of), doesn't that mean Misty is doing it 100% on purpose? She shouldn't have any issues remembering the order of events, but her Confusion Blather technique has her jumping back and forth on sequence of events and sidebars every time.
It's also possible that her cognitive function stack favors intuition and feeling over sensing and thinking. Being a teenager, she might not have a great amount of experience translating how she understands or remembers things into the linear, concrete narrative that the majority understands easily. That doesn't mean that she isn't smart enough to take advantage of the confusion

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- Anne
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In other words, being an exemplar doesn't necessarily make one more logical.
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- Mister D
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Anne wrote: I believe that a lot of people think that the 'Exemplar' trait somehow turns a person into a computer. This is not so. If a person has a disorganized thinking pattern before acquiring the 'exemplar' trait, they probably don't gain a lot of organization when they gain the trait. They may well remember everything, but be unable to place it on a time-line for example. Or they may be able to recall an entire field of data but not organize it in such a way as to create a sensible picture to themselves or others if they try to present the field of data.
In other words, being an exemplar doesn't necessarily make one more logical.
I wonder how Whateley Academy works with this sort of situation.
One of Coursera's most popular course is "Learning How To Learn", and i could see it being feasible that Whateley Academy would have some form of teaching this, as well as organisational techniques, like the Renaissance Memory Palace, or the more modern Structural Analysis paging structures, that would allow Exemplars to improve the mental equivalent of muscle memory.
It's something that i have used successfully as a work-around for my ADHD, so i could easily see it being used as an adjunct for helping Exemplars deal with Galahad's, or Deidrick's Syndromes.
(Though in the case of Deidrick's Syndrome, it could just mean that the person undergoing a Deidrick's fit just becomes more functionally effective during an episode...

Measure Twice
- Katssun
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Whateley staff and upperclassmen also know how to trap exemplars. Gen 2 brought up how easy it is to trick an exemplar by teaching them a less than ideal path the first time during the driving tests.
So my expectation is that the Academy curricula relies far less on memorizing facts, and more on analysis. That way it is fair to both the exemplars and non-exemplars.
I want to see some of the test questions from Imp's Art History class (which are typically all memorization).
- Hardric
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'That we can't launch an orbital strike on your son-in-law, for causes of budget restrictions. Death squadrons will be sent as a consolation prize.'Nothing mattered except for the phone held listlessly in his hand and a text message that began 'We are sorry to inform you...'
They are refusing people for experimental treatments? Man, situation is dire.He was losing all that truly meant anything to him, the sweet, beautiful partner he had been blessed with so long ago to a stranger that was stealing her body and had no idea who or where she was.
While the integrity is to be saluted, think harder, Misty. You have a one-time-of-ever opportunity there...The blond shrugged and walked back to her bed. “Hey, it's not any of my business what you put into your body. So long as I am not wrapped up in things, I don't really care. Now, if you want to turn this place into a pharmacy, that's a whole different kettle of fish...”
At least your father... Oh right, the implants and the devil...Her shame at the complete slut she had become to use boys into getting what she had wanted, allowing her father to manipulate her into using her powers for him and the isolation and psychological abuse he had practiced on her, turning her into a weapon for his own ends.
One line to justify the Bad Seeds' existence... And highlight how harassing them for no reason but prejudice is... Nope, no delicate way, it's just plain shitty.Jadis shuddered at the thought of being so completely alone that she could forget what love felt like.
I can see thepain and the compassion, but I get a slight impression of 'too much' from the descriptions of Tansy's beauty....Jadis' reflexions
Pffft, people. You buy a few dozens of kilo of C4, and they're all worried about nothing...“Grandpa called Mom today,” she said softly. “They weren't accepted into the Solon-4 Trial. She...she's worried he'll do something reckless.”
*Thinks about what Alzheimer does* And I can bet many people wouldn't give a duck about them.She smiled and handed the briefcase to her friend. “Tansy, there are risks, and the DVD talks about all of them for their doctor to go over with them.”
Dawwwwww.Tansy couldn't keep in a giggle as she wiped the tears from her eyes and the two girls settled into their favorite past time.
Just wait for Friendship is Magic's release... And for Best Pony/Human: Sunset Shimmer.She ripped open the wrapping paper in an orgy of expectation until her eyes glistened and her breath caught in her throat as, in her hands, she held the rarest of the rare. The holy grail of Unicorn plushies, the large size, limited edition plush of “Lady Amalthea” from The Last Unicorn. Misty clutched her treasure to her cheek and realized she had the best room mate ever!
A nice little pause in a sea of mystic threats, conspiracies, and authorial sadism.
- Valentine
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Anne wrote: I believe that a lot of people think that the 'Exemplar' trait somehow turns a person into a computer. This is not so. If a person has a disorganized thinking pattern before acquiring the 'exemplar' trait, they probably don't gain a lot of organization when they gain the trait. They may well remember everything, but be unable to place it on a time-line for example. Or they may be able to recall an entire field of data but not organize it in such a way as to create a sensible picture to themselves or others if they try to present the field of data.
In other words, being an exemplar doesn't necessarily make one more logical.
Bubble from Ayla's English Lit class was an Exemplar. There are lots of Exemplars that do not get the "mental package."
Don't Drick and Drive.
- RoseBlack
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