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Question Mischief 3: The Remedy for Mischief

6 years 6 months ago #1 by Dreamer
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  • A story from Morpheus, with Mischief and Imp. So read, enjoy, and please comment.

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 6 months ago - 6 years 6 months ago #2 by Malady
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  • Shorter than expected, but packed full of information, so it more than makes up for it!

    Like, have we ever heard Vivian's name before now??

    Some new card games, and some new super villains!

    Plus a bit more Ship Tease between Mischief and Monkeywrench!

    And finally seeing Brandywine really warm up to Imp~!

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    The timeline's a bit weird... Imp 7 has: "Thursday afternoon, Nov 22nd, 2007", while this story is "Saturday evening, Nov 23rd, 2007"

    I'm quite sure those weekdays don't follow each other?

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    Mister Mayhem's hire's hires might target Brandywine again??
    Last Edit: 6 years 6 months ago by Malady.
    6 years 6 months ago #3 by Anne
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  • I agree with Malady, this is a short and fast read with lots of info. It looks like Brandywine has a nemesis, one that knows her 'street name' That could be very bad for Brandywine. Indeed she may be forced to retire from the business to someplace very sheltered like a certain school?
    More hints that Mischief may end up shipping with Monkeywrench, agreed.
    Good job Mischief having pockets full of holdouts. Yes aunt Brandywine, you do need to make your niece some holdouts, though she is doing quite well in acquiring some effective ones so far. Stink bombs can put a real stink on villains.
    More indications that yes Superhawk and Imp are in a serious relationship. Better news, Brandywine, who seems to be Superhawk's only family outside of Mischief is not as upset by this as might have been expected.
    I really had hoped to see a to be continued at the end of this, but hey we all know Mischief and company will appear in more stories.
    6 years 6 months ago #4 by mhalpern
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  • After reading it all I can say is aaawww... now for more in depth- ship tease, and Remedy really should know better, word gets out about her going after someone in their civilian identity especially as a hired job, they might hesitate to break her out of prison or do business with her,

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    6 years 6 months ago #5 by null0trooper
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  • Malady wrote: The timeline's a bit weird... Imp 7 has: "Thursday afternoon, Nov 22nd, 2007", while this story is "Saturday evening, Nov 23rd, 2007"

    I'm quite sure those weekdays don't follow each other?


    Saturday would be the 24th. Maybe the earlier drafts were using Friday?

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    6 years 6 months ago #6 by Dreamer
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  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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    6 years 6 months ago #7 by Valentine
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  • It's a good thing Mischief doesn't hang out with Generator or the rest of TK, the world couldn't handle it.

    Mischief saving Brandy from the bad guys is fun. Brandy bringing up the going after someone in civilian mode is a bit different, or she's learning.

    Remedy apparently studied at the Tolman school of when not to nullify powers.

    Tolman nodded briskly, "Good answer. You don't know enough yet. Is the scrawny kid levitating a piano over your head? If so, you may not want to neutralize his powers. If you are going to instigate the fight, you'd be wise to learn as much as you can ahead of time.


    I so wanted to see a scene where Brandy asks Melissa about her teammates, and gets Melissa's view. Then asks Imp and gets a much different view of the same kids. Imp does know four of them well, and Amy & Alyss probably at least through rumors. Oddly Sapphire may be the least distinct of the group.

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    6 years 6 months ago #8 by ebony841
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  • It's a good thing Mischief doesn't hang out with Generator or the rest of TK, the world couldn't handle it.


    I am also quite glad that Mischief is not into Wondercute. I can imagine the mayhem if Mischief is there, " As if Wondercute cannot generate more mayhem than Mister Mayhem" :P
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  • Anne wrote: Good job Mischief having pockets full of holdouts. Yes aunt Brandywine, you do need to make your niece some holdouts, though she is doing quite well in acquiring some effective ones so far. Stink bombs can put a real stink on villains.


    It also sounds like Imp has been teaching her the Supervillain's guide to reducing charges, as all of the hold-outs that she is carrying are street-legal.

    Yes, even the lock-picks. ( YMMV according to your legal jurisdiction.)

    Jadis and the Imp may have had a conversation about this at some point, though a vignette about that would be good...


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    6 years 6 months ago #10 by mhalpern
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  • Valentine wrote: It's a good thing Mischief doesn't hang out with Generator or the rest of TK, the world couldn't handle it.

    Mischief saving Brandy from the bad guys is fun. Brandy bringing up the going after someone in civilian mode is a bit different, or she's learning.

    Remedy apparently studied at the Tolman school of when not to nullify powers.

    Tolman nodded briskly, "Good answer. You don't know enough yet. Is the scrawny kid levitating a piano over your head? If so, you may not want to neutralize his powers. If you are going to instigate the fight, you'd be wise to learn as much as you can ahead of time.


    I so wanted to see a scene where Brandy asks Melissa about her teammates, and gets Melissa's view. Then asks Imp and gets a much different view of the same kids. Imp does know four of them well, and Amy & Alyss probably at least through rumors. Oddly Sapphire may be the least distinct of the group.

    Well Imp did get to see how R&R fight, combine that with what she's heard and outside of real age and relation to Lady Havoc she can figure out quite a bit about Ribbon, even if she didn't have access to her MID, she would figure she's a high level exemplar but emphasizes her manifesting ability

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    6 years 6 months ago #11 by null0trooper
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  • ebony841 wrote:

    It's a good thing Mischief doesn't hang out with Generator or the rest of TK, the world couldn't handle it.


    I am also quite glad that Mischief is not into Wondercute. I can imagine the mayhem if Mischief is there, " As if Wondercute cannot generate more mayhem than Mister Mayhem" :P


    In many respects Wondercute is similar to an RPG character that is built off a maxed-out set of themed disadvantages/flaws for a game-master who will bring every one of those flaws into play, and then pushing it 110%. When the character finally bites the dust, go looking for another way to make the GM cry. Lather. Rinse. Repeat.

    Where Mischief is pursuing the art of the prank, Generator may be pursuing the art of the mindscrew.

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    6 years 4 months ago - 6 years 4 months ago #12 by Malady
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  • For the wiki, is this happening Saturday, or Friday? The day of the week says Saturday, but Nov 23rd, 2007 is a Friday...

    Makes more sense for Friday, if this is happening basically immediately after Imp 7...

    TTYL.

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    I guess the rest of Thanksgiving Weekend was uneventful?

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    I wonder if all these Morpheus stories are setup for some big Hallows Ball event... But that's a week later...

    OH! Hidden Tunnel Battle, (Triangle + Remedy) vs. Nimbus and all evidence is hidden by the sewers! No one at the surface finds out!
    Last Edit: 6 years 4 months ago by Malady.
    6 years 3 months ago - 6 years 3 months ago #13 by Uncreative
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  • Malady wrote: For the wiki, is this happening Saturday, or Friday? The day of the week says Saturday, but Nov 23rd, 2007 is a Friday...

    Makes more sense for Friday, if this is happening basically immediately after Imp 7...

    TTYL.

    The one-week later posting of this story on BigCloset corrects the date of the events of this story to Saturday, November 24.
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    6 years 3 months ago #14 by Malady
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  • Thanks! If you want, you can add it to the wiki. I'm afk for a little while.
    5 years 9 months ago - 5 years 9 months ago #15 by reno
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  • I was rereading this story and saw this sentence:

    I’m bored,” Melissa abruptly said

    This brought back memories to the AD&D dragonlance world where the worst thing that could happen to you was being locked up in a room with a bored kender :evil:
    Last Edit: 5 years 9 months ago by reno.
    5 years 8 months ago #16 by null0trooper
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  • I'm one of those folks who wasn't playing AD&D in the Dragonlance days, although I've heard of kender as being high on DMs' auto-refuse lists for being munchkin bait. And bored munchkins are bad juju.

    Luckily, Morpheus' characterization for Melissa prevents "I'm bored" from translating into "Warning: Sociopathic stupidity approaching terminal levels in three... two... one..."

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