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Question The Quantum Suicides pt 1
- Yolandria
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- Malady
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Speers falling in love! So sweet!
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Wait, where was it said that all three of them are mutants? Or are they Origins, or at least not confirmed to have the full MGC?
We never really mentioned it, but your situation may be as volatile as Ches's or Marcus's. If the box did trigger their mutations, then the same might happen to you, and manifestation later in life is both rare and very dangerous.
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When Boggart arrived, I thought they were Myra's hobgoblins.
Whoops.
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So, a month until the presentation...
- Wasamon
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In Myra's case, it's definitely an Origin event that made her a mutant.
Also, in before anyone asks, but Pat's origin tale is separate from the rest. They end up together at the end of his story, "Keeping Cool" (coming soonish!), and the family dynamic gels in the as-yet-unwritten third episode of their collective story, pre-Whateley.
Check this out sometime!

- Malady
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*shrugs*
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Wasamon wrote: Also, in before anyone asks, but Pat's origin tale is separate from the rest. They end up together at the end of his story, "Keeping Cool" (coming soonish!), and the family dynamic gels in the as-yet-unwritten third episode of their collective story, pre-Whateley.
Thanks for the answer!
Hmm... "Barnes Family 3" has the month of August to happen, given the time between the presentation, and the start of Whateley Classes...
What will happen in a month? So many possibilities!
Also, yay! "Keeping Cool" is arriving, and gonna be finished!
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Bose-Einstein Condensate, for both Cool, and Quantum.
"Observer Effects", while quantum, and sorta related, don't fit both at once.
- null0trooper
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The Quantum Suicides wrote: --- Senate Committee Meeting, Wednesday, August 13th, 2014
--- Monday, June 23rd, 2014
...unless there's more time travel scheduled.
The Quantum Suicides wrote: "That was quick," said Speers. "He passed out so suddenly that his monitor sent me an alert. Was everything alright?"
"He was just worn out, I think. Lots of excitement today. I sat with him a bit and sang an old lullaby of mine. Worked like a charm. 'La-la-li-la-li-la-ho-ma...'" she hummed. "Heh, hadn't thought of it in years. I used to sing it to my host family's daughter, back in Chiba. Worked then, too." She had another bite of ice cream, suddenly pensive. "Wow, Rimi-chan's got to be like twenty-eight now. How time flies."
"What tune was that?" asked Ella.
"The opening theme to the Dragon Quest game series. Her brother and I made it up by taking the syllables in the game's sleep spell and jumbling them around. Tak-kun's thirty-six by now... wow, do I feel old..."
Worked like a charm, hm?

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- Angeldude
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Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
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- Wasamon
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null0trooper wrote: I think a couple of the date/time headers may be a bit off:
The Quantum Suicides wrote: --- Senate Committee Meeting, Wednesday, August 13th, 2014
--- Monday, June 23rd, 2014
...unless there's more time travel scheduled.
Goshdarnit, you'd think after sitting on these stories for four and a half years, I'd have caught all the dating errors...
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- Wasamon
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Angeldude wrote: NO CLONING THEOREM!
In all fairness:
1) Schrodinger Maxwell was pretty far off his meds, and
2) this is certainly not the sort of cloning that the physicists who developed that theorem had in mind
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- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
The Quantum Suicides, first half comments
Okay, why does that project name make me nervous?"I am here to present the findings and results of DARPA project LIFELINE.
Eusebius Feltch aka Schrodinger Maxwell, a great codename for a mad scientist.
Okay, now that is a scary area for a devisor to work in.All of his devises involved some strange interpretation of quantum physics, such as the tunneler he used to phase through bank walls. What interests us today is this."
*facepalms* Please say he didn't "invent" time travel, I thought that all but impossible for anyone but cosmic beings in the Whateley Universe.Figure 2a: a blueprint for a devise, looking like something a little more than a phone booth and a little less than a full TARDIS.
Doctor Who and someone who doesn't know how he is, love that Senator Larson brought him up.
Yikes, that is one harsh experiment to prove that theory. And SM thought to test this in reverse, very interesting."This thought experiment was conceived as a means of testing the many-worlds interpretation of quantum mechanics. Inside the box is a gun, along with a device which measures the spin value of a random proton every ten seconds. This value has a fifty-fifty chance of being one or the other. If the measured value is in one direction, then it signals the gun to fire. Thus, in half of all possible worlds, the subject shall live, and in half she shall die. The experiment may continue for as long as the subject has the nerve, with one half of her possible selves dying every ten seconds. Statistically, if the subject should survive two minutes of this, it would more or less prove the many worlds interpretation as viable, if only to that universe."
And the experiment just got more terrifying. Far from the weirdest devise the Committee has reviewed and since Dr. Speers is there it worked at least once, we know devises can do some weird stuff but this is nuts."The idea was the same: that in every instance of quick and sudden demise, under binary life/death circumstances, there would be a splitting of realities, a parting of ways between he who died and he who did not. Given the proper coordinates in time and space, the magic box would collect the quantum image of that survivor and make it real. In essence, a clone with all the memories and physical characteristics of the original."
An anti-mutant bigot on a committee like this, just...great. So Dr. Speers is codenamed Retrofit, cool. And SM died back in 2006, good that the devise has such limits. *facepalms* SM used the devise as a central part of his escape plans, he was nuts! And 3 successful test runs using a teenage boy, Chester Ferris, who committed suicide, oh boy."Hmph, trusting the word of a mutant." And right there was the reason why he'd not voted for Murtaugh -- the man was a rising star in the Rights of Man movement. Murtaugh had also been one of the first to use the refined metagene screenings to "prove" his baseline credentials with his constituency.
Chester killed himself by jumping off a water tower, all because of his Dad, bullies, and someone female. This is why I can't stand bullies.Friday, November 15th, 2013
And brought back to life as if no time has passed for Chester. Waking up in this place and wondering how I hope they didn't just treat him as an experiment. Marty Yunker stabbed him with a pencil causing a wound which still has a scab, that is some brutal bullying. And told by a woman Dr. Speers would be in shortly, poor Chester is having a weird day.Monday, June 20th, 2016
Seesh, if I say a doctor come in looking like Dr. Speers is I would want to change HMOs as well. Using a "tricorder" on Chester, scanning him and only making a "hmm" for a half-hour, I would have cracked sooner to demand what is going on than Chester did. Speers talking into a recording mike, no answers for Chester who realizes this isn't a hospital. At least Chester finally gets answers and learns he is in a DARPA-funded place, so not a prisoner of a supervillain.
Well, they are thorough. And guessing her from before he hit the ground was losing his mom, ouch. Remembers everything up until the moment before he hit the pavement, interesting."Chester William Ferris, son of Charles Walter Ferris (USMC, retired) and Silvia Ferris (deceased). Born May 9th, 1999, died November 15th, 2013. Freshman at Carter High School, Calumet City, Illinois. Even have your mid-term grades here," the man noted. "Passing English, failing algebra, borderline in biology. Some positive comments from your teachers."
Ack! Dr. Speers sounds like my brother, won't stop talking about something once he starts unless almost yelled at. And ouch, he was trying to explain to Chester about the machine which brought him back, I think even quantum physicists might get a headache trying to understand all that. 2 years and 5 months and Chester's dad never got his stuff out of the police evidence locker, that has to hurt. All his clothes and stuff set up like that, I would be creeped out.
And they haven't told his dad about Chester being alive again, way to complicate things even more, guys. *eyes bug out* It can have all those side-effects, yet they used it to bring someone back anyways. Are they nuts?!?"We're batting a thousand so far," said assistant #5. "The serial numbers on the bills are all the same, as are the dates on the coins. Aside from blood and other fluids, both sets of clothes have the same identifying marks. And so far all the books and notes have the exact same handwriting and graffiti."
Senator Ashkettle brings up an important, and scary, point of how this devise works.Senate Committee Meeting, Wednesday, August 13th, 2016
And Speers isn't sure how it does that, now I'm even more scared of this devise."How does the box account for the relative distances involved? If the, er, subject died thirty-one months ago, then his, ah, point of departure would now be on the other side of the solar system, almost two astronomical units." Ashkettle checked his equations again. "I mean, assuming that space-time coordinates means what I think it to mean, then the velocity from his fall should be the least of his problems. The velocity discrepancy just from the change of orbital location would be somewhere in the neighborhood of sixty kilometers per second. That sort of stress would vaporize damn near anything I can think of."
As close to pinpoint accuracy best for using this devise, I would hate to see what happens to subjects if they are off by too much."No." He was very firm with that single syllable. "I am a scientist, yes, and a technician. My MID has Gadgeteer on it, if that means anything to you, but not Devisor. I don't make the truly impossible; I merely work with the impossible things that other people have made. That is why DARPA hired me."
Please say they didn't decide to push the box's capabilities too much. Myra Paget, to die so young.The box requires a precision of within two meters for the location of the target, by latitude, longitude, and altitude. For the temporal co-ordinations, it has a window of approximately two minutes. Obviously, if we know the precise details of a death, the process would be simpler, but as the project was begun with the intent of reversing assassinations or retrieving key intelligence agents who were killed in action, we needed multiple trial runs to see how rigid the box's required parameters actually are.
And they pushed the box's capabilities, at the expense of someone who didn't have a say in participating in their experiments.It took us three attempts to retrieve her, and there were one or two unfortunate complications."
Okay, why was Myra Paget an intruder with a purpose at this party, just what was she up to back then? Johnathon Green brought here by a message from Myra, glad she didn't bring it up in front of Eliza. Oh no, don't tell me she tried to blackmail someone who is having an affair and was murdered? Says she is going to leave the area entirely, goes running from Johnathon, the boat lurches and she hits the railing, then something hits her in the back. Sounds like she was having an affair with Johnathon, got pregnant with his child [note how she kept one arm around her belly as she fought to keep her head above the water], and was going to leave but Johnathon didn't wish to risk it. So he used the lurching of the boat and her hitting the railing to knock her overboard. At least that is what it seems like to me.December 31st, 2000
Brought back to life, the water along with her, they have to get it out of her lungs, and she is bleeding, from going into labor from the sounds of it.Monday, June 23rd, 2016
Yikes, unconscious with a breathing apparatus over her mouth and nose. Chester notes she is awake and goes to get Dr. Speers. Ouch, to wake up and find out her baby died, was going to name her Melanie, now that is pain.Friday, June 24th, 2016
Calling Chester by Ches, someone has to keep Myra company. A Terry Pratchett novel making more sense than her own life right now, sounds about right.Saturday, June 25th, 2016
Chester knows just what to say, sensitive young man. Bwahaha, Chester testing her about being the big brother because he came out of the box three days before her and her response, too good."Well... we're in the same boat, y'know? Both 'out of time' and all that. No one knows we're here, so all we got's each other. So... I watch out for you, you watch out for me. Like family."
Just what is Ms. Wilkins? And I love how Myra got Chester to leave so she could get a shower, cruel, true, but still funny. Just how many other people live there without a choice like Chester and Myra do? At least Myra is regaining some of her strength, that is good to see. Dang, got me tearing up here. Myra lost all that and still went on, then to lose her little girl...
Straight of a Heinlein novel and Ms. Wilkins says it is par for the course, I would hate to be around Dr. Speers too long.
Interesting, a minder, wonder if some of the students at Whateley hire others to be theirs if they can afford it."I'm his minder. It's up to me to make sure that he doesn't get too sidetracked on personal projects, doesn't get too obsessed with main projects, remembers to eat regularly, that sort of thing. A lot of professional gadgeteers and devisors have someone like me lurking in the wings to keep them safe and sane. Granted, I've yet to see him him interested in anybody to the degree he devotes to his work. No woman or man could compete with that. It's all I can do to keep up with him at times."
Ella Wilkins, cute name. And being reminded everyone he brings out of that box is a professional guinea pig, eep. Not even able to go shopping for her own clothes, now that is torture! Peaceful, if tragic, circumstances and the next person brought will come from a worse incident, right now I pity the poor soul.
*facepalms* He delegated preparations for his subjects in the facility to Mr. Thurgood from DARPA, a man who didn't think the box would ever work and didn't prepare. And the little weasel used the funds for early retirement in Karedonia, dang it!August 13th, 2016, Senate Committee Hearing
Yet another danger of using this devise, good grief.For example, Ms. Paget proved to be carrying an H1N4 variant, and within three days half the lab was sick with the so-called 'quantum flu.'
Sgt. Garrett, altered time-stamps on videos made this attempt fail. Agent Wozniak, CIA mole in Dr. Diabolik's armed forces, executed by Dr. D himself for betrayal, yikes. Darn, he was a double-agent working for Dr. Diabolik all along and is still alive, the trial failed again. Laurence von Groenwald aka Mauer, I remember this guy, request withdrawn to attempt to bring him back, smart move. Unnamed operative for the XVQW, no one knows anything about the organization.
Division by zero! Ahhhhh! *runs off screaming*We even logged a new error message," he noted. "Division by zero, universe not found."
Marcus Billings, a kid who died at the age of 12 alongside his parents in the Fools Fight. And images from the Fools Fight which pinpoint his time of death as well. And he brought Marcus back, 25 years of change to adjust to, his parents gone, that poor boy.
Having to hide and remain moving in a warzone like that, a nightmare come to life. And he panicked, running for it as he needed air, dang. And to get a breath of fresh air only to look up and see a missile heading right towards him, horror comes in many forms and this reminds us of that.Monday, April 1st, 1991
Oh boy, waking up, thinking he is dead only to hear other people's voices, then finding out he is trapped inside something. From one horror to another. Sounds like claustrophobia. Asking what he recalls and Marcus blacks out, ouch.Thursday, June 30th, 2016
A shark's grin and eyes were painted on the head of the missile, that is just so wrong. Calming him so he can go back to sleep, hope the nightmares don't haunt him again. Poor kid has been through enough already.
Oh boy, I remember nights like that when I was younger, wishing to sleep but the nightmares keep waking you up over and over. Snoopy Dance to see if everything is working fine, now that is a unique way to check.Friday, July 1st, 2016
Myra brought food for Marcus and herself, but he has gone and hid. Hiding under the bed, oldest trick in the book. Granola with milk or yogurt and apples as well, now that sounds good. Introduce each other and Marcus finds out he is a guinea pig like her, oh boy.
Marcus keeps from panicking and eats at least, plus he is definitely on the edge of puberty with how he is checking out Myra. Oh good, Myra gets to explain it to Marcus, lucky. Bringing up Star Trek and how a transporter works, about the closest analogy to what the box does so far. And explaining the Mr. Scott episode of TNG to him, this will be fun. And now the two Rikers episode, even in these terms Marcus' head is going to be swimming by the end.
And now we get to the point of it all and Marcus wondering what happened to the other version of them. And Marcus losing strength like that and going down with Myra having to hold him, shock after shock for the poor kid.
Time with a psychologist and shown around the DARPA facility by Chester. Showers to clean up and then dinner.
So that is why Chester is taking it all so well. Myra really wanted to work with Marcus, helping them helps her and she definitely needs all the help she can get right now.I got a second life to live, and it's mine to control -- not the bullies', not my dad's, but mine. So yeah, you could say I'm taking it well. Better than Myra."
Fried some important bits from reaching back so far for Marcus, does that mean the machine will never function again? Bwahahaha, what Myra said to Dr. Speers to get him to shave, priceless. The problem with being in the future, loving all the cool stuff, but no way to go home again. Future shock, a good term for it.
Now that is a good one."Why don't they let dogs in the White House?" The question came out of left field, which was to say, out of Dr. Speers' mouth.
"Huh? What are you talking about?" he heard Ches, say, but the doc's violet eyes were on him. Was he supposed to know the answer to this? It sounded familiar.
"Because they'd chase the Quayle and pee on the Bush." Once Speers provided the punchline, he recognized the joke, and the tingling in his nose got fizzled out by a hiccupy giggle. That was not the sort of thing he'd expect the man to say.
Things which Marcus would recognize to interact with and all of them socialize more. Myra is good, to get Dr. Speers to listen to her like this.
Speers back in his quarters, and he makes my brother's room look clean and orderly, yikes. Pile of paper on a metal desk, a bedroom which looks like a wardrobe had exploded inside it, I pity whoever has to help him pick up this mess. "Toy warehouse", that is a workshop and I hope he has proper ventilation for it. Good with electronics, but not with people, common enough, at least he is trying.
No matter what for those with technical skills, making sense of electronics and machines will always be easier than making sense of human emotions. Shoot, even those in fields dealing with people have a hard time making sense of human emotions some of the time.Breakdowns in communication, in research, in understanding, in trust, in emotions -- those messy emotions! -- plagued his life now.
Gaining their trust, giving them these freedoms and Myra the responsibilities to latch onto is a good start. Give Myra the job which Thurgood ditched, I hope this works out as he thinks it will. Just what had he been making all this time?
Ah, worried about invading Myra and the boys' space, Dr. Speers needs to learn not to let his fears hold him back so much from interacting with others. Eating pizza with Ella there, I have to agree with Chester and Marcus, supreme pizza, the peppers I like, mushrooms and olives, ugh. Roam more freely in a day or two, good news! A health monitoring device with a panic button, so that is what he was working on.
Dick Tracy watches will never not be cool, imo."Of sorts. They also serve as vocal communicators, but only between each other."
"What's that mean?" asked Marcus.
"Dick Tracy watches," said Ches.
Added money from his own private accounts for them to use, but not saying so. Reintegration into society, someone in DARPA working on Myra and Marcus, but Chester has to contact his father, rats. And Chester doesn't wish to talk to his father, thinking he either gotten over him being dead or never needed to. Speers pushes the subject, bad movie.
*tries to find a sweater to warm up* Just how bad were things with his father before he died?"And I'm telling you right now," Ches said, suddenly out of his seat and in Speers' face. "I'm not talking with him. I'm not seeing him. Heck, I'm not even really his son, am I? You pulled me out of the box; that makes you more of a parent to me than he is. Sad thing is, you're still the better one, awful as you are at it. So don't call me Chester, and don't be calling that old idiot about anything, you hear?" The teenager stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind him, onto empty silence.
Marcus sent after Ches to distract him with something until Myra can come. Dr. Speers doesn't know how he blew it, Myra having to ask him why teens commit suicide and he doesn't have any idea why.
And Myra hits the nail on the head, Speers realizing how he blew it finally. And we see why you don't want to make Myra upset, yikes can she be scary."People commit suicide to escape," Myra said flatly. "Teens especially. They're caught up in something, or several somethings, that they don't think they can handle. The world is ganging up on them. They've lost all control, or at least they think so. When caught between the proverbial rock and a hard place, sometimes the final way out seems like the only way. Now ask yourself: if the bullies were Ches's rock, then what was the hard place? What else in his life might make him believe there was no way out, no safe place to find safety and comfort?"
Calling Dick Tracy, now there is something you can only hope to have a chance to use. Steampunk jewelry wasn't expecting the monitoring gadgets to look like that. Marcus is with Ches and Ella, and they have their own lo-cal ice cream maker, now that will cheer you up some. Eww, random numbers and Marcus got tuna ice cream. Chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream, Ches has good taste.
Japanese sweet potato, actually sounds good."Code number 7-9-3-2-1-7. It's... purple."
Myra was in Chiba for a month during the summer of 1990, staying with a host family. Played straight through Dragon Quest IV, impressive. Myra getting migraines at least once a day now when before she would have two or three episodes a year, why does this feel ominous to me? 240 at 14 and a half, eep.
I like Myra, good sense of humor."Good. Then let's eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we shall diet!"
Ches having to go through a battery of physical tests, no wonder he is in pain. Stiffy and achy at 9:30, rested 10 hours out of 18 since the exercise, ow.Sunday, July 3rd, 2016
Yikes, no wonder Ches doesn't want his father to be contacted or to talk to him.Mr. Charles Ferris had lost a bit of himself -- specifically his left leg -- during Desert Storm, and a larger bit of his heart when his wife died eight years ago. Stuck in a chair all day, he took out his frustrations on his only child, who he felt was wasting the luxury of free movement.
Forced to try sports and join teams, despite the bullies he would encounter on each of them, is it any wonder he didn't things would get better. Either something in bringing them back after so many years has complications or it somehow triggered latent metagene complex, at least it seems that way. Hiccups and Myra thinks it is the quantum flu, seems like the start of burnout to me.
Telling Myra to go with Marcus on the outing without him, despite them being a family now, just asking for books to read including some D&D stuff, always wanted to be his character. Why do I have a strange feeling we have met Marcus before, but he has changed so much we couldn't identify him from his description in this story?
And even invite Dr. Speers, Ches surprised he doesn't have his own campaign going already, heh. Falling asleep in that state, I hope Ches is going to be okay."I understand, buster. Hopefully I'll find some old sourcebooks. The three of us can do a campaign together this weekend. That sound good to you?"
Myra loving the sun on her skin, 11 days since she was brought back now.
Best way to hide a lab like this, in plain sight.In fact, it looked like a regular old office complex in the middle of a suburban industrial park. It could have been an insurance agency, a travel bureau, or the Ministry of Funny Walks, for all she could see. The small placard near the door identified it as the "Speers Institute," which she thought was a little gauche. Named it after himself? Really?
Speers painted it himself, didn't he? And modified inside with tech as well, definitely Speers' vehicle.The thing's paint job had to be custom, because there was no way any self-respecting car dealer, new or used, would let that eye-searing combination of neon orange and deep violet sit on the lot for even a day. The bright orange swirled and twisted through the darker shade like colored oil in water, and she could almost swear the patterns were moving.
*eyes bug out* He had to put a limiter to keep its top speed to 200 mph, dang."Nah. This is Doc Speers we're talking about. He gadgeteered himself an even better one. Had to put in a limiter to make sure she won't exceed the safe structural speed for a VW bus. Otherwise, we might be able to hit Mach 1 with this baby."
Okay, what is that song Marcus and Myra are singing?
Asked and answered, thank you. Carlos is 25 to 26 years old, Myra is good at guessing people's ages.'Beep Beep' by the Playmates, circa 1958."
Part of his graduate studies program, going for his PhD.Carlos Ramirez, age twenty-five, was clean cut and serious looking when on the job, and at first glance he seemed like a square peg in one of Speers' irregularly isohedral holes.
Interesting study, wonder what his findings will yield."Sociology. Difficulties and breakdowns in communication between high technologists and the common manager."
Last two doctors full on Diedrick's types, eep.
Nice to have more details on what Diedrick's Syndrome entails."Diedrick's Syndrome is a neurological disorder that a lot of superpowered types get, but especially the brainy ones. Symptoms include megalomania, paranoid dementia, delusions of grandeur, a tendency to monologue, and -- unfortunately -- being extremely good at whatever it is they do, which is often weaponized. The ones at the lighter end of the spectrum are generally lucid with occasional embarrassing episodes, but way too many Diedrick's types get lost in their own manias if they don't take their meds."
LONGSHOT sounds like a great idea, way to keep an eye on those who might instead become dangerous mad scientist supervillains and allow them to be productive.
At this point I wish a devisor would invent a "common sense" pill. Hehe, Marcus just couldn't resist the old "Are we there yet?" bit."He tried to bring back Schrodinger Maxwell, the inventor of the box, using coordinates from one of the guy's previous check-ins. Apparently you can't duplicate people like that. The box went into meltdown, and they had to evacuate a suburb of Milwaukee for a while. That was two years ago, and Doc Speers only got the thing up and running again last month."
Marcus thought the 'market' would be a mall, but it is very different, sounds like an open-air market. Oh crud, all those places blending together and smoke coming from the food court, Marcus is reminded of the place he died before and almost has a panic attack if not for Myra holding his hand.
That is a lot of old VHS tapes and DVDs.Every Marvel comic book movie from the last decade and a half, a ton of action movies and comedies, a couple of romances (at Myra's insistence) as well as the entire Audrey Hepburn collection, plus some oddball VHS tapes that Myra recognized and insisted upon. The Boris and Natasha Movie looked interesting, at least. He'd seen enough Rocky and Bullwinkle Show reruns to get the jokes there, for sure.
A treasure trove of comic book and video game prints, very nice haul. Oh god, getting caught up on 25 years worth of video games, fun but also could drive yourself crazy. Mega Man 3 the last game he got for his birthday the year before his death, now that brings back memories. A green Game Boy SP, all those games, he is going to have fun.
Now those are some great authors to choose from.Mercedes Lackey, Anne McCaffrey, Ursula K. LeGuin, Alys Rasmussen, Kate Elliott, Terry Pratchett -- Terry was a girl's name, right? A couple of authors, like Tanith Lee, C.J. Cherryh, or J.K. Rowling, he wasn't sure about, though the book covers sure looked interesting. And it was hard to miss her cry of delight when she uncovered a paperback titled Villains by Necessity. "Been out of print for ages," she explained to him later. Finally, she pulled a couple of old D&D books from the shelves and added them to her personal pile.
A new last name and Myra goes with Barnes, oh god, this is the Barnes' family origin! Chili dogs and cheese fries, man, I haven't had those in years. And Ella is the cook at the lab, she is a woman of many talents it seems. Oh crud, men in camo pants and with guns, never good. Defense of Humanity, Troop 32, great, a bunch of anti-mutant bigots who probably thinks any non-mutants killed by them are "acceptable losses" in their private war. And these idiots are scaring Marcus, just like the supervillain all those years ago.
They are worse than I thought. Myra trying to get them to stop, they have a permit to demonstrate for the next half hour, the second you show up armed for a demonstration like this the permit should be null and void. Plus not letting people leave is basically holding them hostage, a crime."We should all be scared, ma'am." The leader actually got down on one knee in front of Marcus and tried to give him a brotherly pat on the shoulder. "Your boy's a smart one. He sees the terror in this world."
Just who or what is Marcus seeing? A mutant who looks like a leprechaun, a manifestation of another mutant, or something else?It kind of looked like a leprechaun. It really looked like a leprechaun. It was, in fact, a leprechaun, just like the Lucky Charms mascot. About a foot tall, with bright orange hair and emerald green clothing, it darted around the feet of the assembled commando wannabes so lightly that they didn't seem to notice. It wasn't until they began a parade bit that they discovered their shoelaces were all tied together.
Oh, that is just too good. Evolution Rocks! and the guy's name is Boggart, guessing those are manifestations of his, impressive.It looked like the invasion of the Lilliputians, with an assist from the Lollipop Guild. The paramilitary morons had been all prepared for the ceremonial substitute for phallus-waving when a little green man knocked them down like a bunch of impotent dominos. Then all his buddies came from the woodwork out, piling onto the stricken dickheads and stripping their weapons of ammo. Then, as a final insult, the miniscule marauders formed a big circle around their victims and sang a series of limericks, each one more insulting to the men's collective manhood than the last.
And free to go now, so Myra grabs Marcus and dashes to the Volkswagon, blocked by a perverted gnome who learns not to tick off Myra, that glare of hers.
And just as I thought, a bunch of nuts who don't like things they can't control. And Myra's head is hurting her again, why do I have the feeling that glare of hers is part of her mutant powers activating?"Sort of a political extension and evolution of the old Humanity First movement. A coalition of the crazy, swinging from die-hard conservatives to far-left control freaks who don't like that just anyone could develop superpowers without oversight. They popped up after the current prez got elected and started supporting laws they didn't agree with. Like equal rights for mutants."
Speers bumps into Myra as he leaves and actually blushes and apologizes, there is hope for him yet! Ches and worse is relative, he transformed while they were gone.
And Myra is concerned that Ches might be seriously ill, so many things which might not have been taken account for. And Ches is transforming, if it was a snake it would have bit me! Ches is Chessa, he is becoming she and half-dragon, like Ches' character. Underneath that mass and dense skin Ches is undergoing a huge transformation, wonder how Ches will take it when it is finished.
*sighs* An energizer and just the beginning, wonder if it will be finished by the end of the first half of this story.Myra'd had the basic training allowed by the Missouri state board of education of sixteen years ago in regards to what to do if a student showed mutant powers in class. For the most part, it had consisted of "evacuate other students, call police, wait."
I wonder if there is fluid in there, helping shield Ches from some of the strain of the transformation.An image appeared on the monitor, but it was strangely dark. Myra could remember her own sonogram, not that long ago with Melanie. All that black meant there was a large space of relative emptiness, perhaps full of fluid.
Inside and still the general shape of a human, good news for everyone worried about Ches right now. An incubator sounds right for the transformation Ches is undergoing. Another look-over for Marcus and Myra, if anything could cause enough stress to manifest being brought back to life by that box certainly would.
Marcus had to go through 3 and half hours of testing, three layers of skin off his left arm, yow! Dr. Stapleton sounds like he enjoys doing these tests on subjects, despite him trying outwardly to be nice. Refusing tests and he drops the nice guy act, figures he is a jerk. Myra in an argument with biology dude as Marcus dubs him, the nurse has to get his meds, great, a Diedrick's Syndrome type. Just what Marcus doesn't need to deal with.
Past the first level on Mega Man on the Game Boy, knew Marcus would have fun. Finding out Ches is a mutant and wonders if they are. Oh boy, afraid those Defense of Humanity goons will come and take away Ches. You have captured PTSD perfectly, poor Marcus, now we know why Myra insisted he is in Poe to remain close to her. Myra is really good at calming kids, so glad we get to see all this.
Speers regrets bringing in Jacob, great, the bio-devisor going off his pills for days at a time, I've seen what can happen with just "normal" mental issues left improperly treated.
So Speers is a Whateley graduate, I'm guessing. A PFP for Marcus to make him feel safer, Speers, use your heart instead of your head for once."That was basic stuff in my freshman engineering class in high school, I'll have you know."
Guessing this is how they discover Marcus' mutant power."No." She shook her head. "Help him make one. He needs to trust in himself, and a defense he made with his own hands will be worth a lot more psychologically than one that's just given to him. I know, I know," she said, guessing his next objection, "he probably won't understand most of it. Show him the parts, help him put it together, and if you need to personally add a bit of your super-scientific hoo-doo to do it, that'll be okay. As long as he's directly involved. Is that workable?"
Blue eyes with little flecks of gold, guessing Myra has already manifested and just doesn't know what her power/powers are yet.
His power letting him analyze human feelings for once, whoa. Aww, upset when she didn't hug him, is Dr. Speers developing a crush on Myra? Ella teasing him that Myra reminds her of his mother, the annoying and good bits as well. I love how Ella is treating Speers right now, so like a mother or big sister.That section of his brain that normally worked best with machines clicked on, performing its powers of analysis for human feelings for once, and he could see that this was a problem which she could not deal with, which she didn't know how to begin dealing with.
Good book to settle down with, so I've heard. Read 2/3rds of the book in 3 hours, that is a 368-page book if hardback. They kept Melanie in a jar and Myra had to find it out from Jacob during his Diedrick's rant, that is the worst possible thing they could do without telling her. Ah, she is reading the paperback version.Terry Pratchett novel, Monstrous Regiment
I pity the student who tests Myra's limits, eep."Dr. Stapleton's already been escorted home," Ella informed her. "And no, we didn't let him near Melanie, so there's no need to saw off his ears with a rusty razor, puree them in a blender, then force-feed him the raw slurry via the Eustachian tubes. I read the transcript of the fight," she added. "Carlos took notes, very detailed ones. He seemed to approve of your creativity."
And Ella reveals they have a plot with a really nice marker already picked out for Melanie in a nearby children's cemetery, good, she deserves it. 4 hours, what are Derek and Marcus up to in the "toy closet"? Okay, didn't expect to find them playing a game of catch like this, interesting "gloves" and Speers isn't letting Marcus out of their match, insulting nicknames for each other even. That is a big change from before.
Hehehe, impatient and Myra catches the 'ball' right out of the air. An interesting thing for a ball, very interesting with Speers' explanation. A trampoline using force fields, now that is fun. Marcus made all of this on his own and doesn't realize it yet, now that is impressive.
A lullaby out of the theme for the Dragon Quest series, now that is great. Marcus manifesting all the mental trait associating with devisors and gadgeteers, cool.
Love the origin story more and more."This is a devise. The sum of its parts cannot account for the effects it produces, at least not enough to be in accordance with several sections of the laws of thermodynamics. It is solely the creation of Marcus, and while others may be able to duplicate the effect, no one will be able to copy its exact design or nature."
Great, now that I know where Papa Schimmelhorn comes from I want to look up the books. Nice details on the differences between gadgeteer trait and devisor trait."So gadgets are things ahead of their time, but devises are out of this world?"
"Precisely," said Speers. "Well put. Now, the gadgeteer trait was originally associated with the ESP family of abilities, despite the fact that it very rarely coexists with any other ESP trait, and many theorists still place it with or near intuition and precognition on that spectrum. My own ability, for example, is all about understanding how systems work together, and then getting them to work the way I need them to. Devising is more problematic. In truth, anyone with sufficient scientific knowledge on a subject and an intense will to succeed has the potential to create a devise. When a baseline human does it, it's called the Schimmelhorn effect."
"Schimmelhorn..." said Myra. "That sounds familiar... Oh!" She tapped her head, willing her memory to sort through more quickly. "Wasn't that the oddball inventor from the story, 'The Gnurrs Come from the Voodvork Out'?"
I'm loving the discussion on gadgeteers and devisors so much."Mutants with the devisor trait are a different matter. There are many theories as to how they break the laws of physics on a regular basis. Some class them in with the reality-warpers, while others make a case for a connection to the more mystical traits. The main fact here is that devisors create the impossible on a regular basis, and do it with stunning levels of object stability, while rigorously trained scientists and gadgeteers might only do so by accident, and with far less predictable results."
"So... the two types are coming from different directions, but use similar processes, and may occasionally make the same kinds of things?"
"Pretty much. A well-trained devisor may make reproducible gadgets, once the more problematic elements of the design are carefully pared away. Likewise, a gadgeteer may find that his newest invention harbors a literal miracle at its core, but the focus of each trait is still demonstrably different." Speers activated the force-ball and bounced it on the floor a few times before turning it off to continue. "When I watch another gadgeteer at work, it's like I'm seeing someone put together a large puzzle. The pieces may be scattered, but the way they fit is obvious. Watching a devisor, though... It's like seeing someone work with many disparate threads. I can see where they come from, and I can see where they end up, but in the middle there is an immense Gordian knot, and I simply cannot keep track of where it goes."
So Marcus isn't just a devisor from the sounds of it. Interesting about Speers first act of gadgetry, plus the trebuchet incident, who wouldn't want to build one of those at least once."Yes. With surprising ease, I might add. He may have some gadgeteering intuition, or more likely he's exhibiting some of the exemplar mental package, with enhancements to how his brain retains and organizes information. We'll need to test him more thoroughly to be sure."
Environment and boys being boys, plus Marcus wants to make a 'bubble lead' generator, uh oh.
Mega Man themed devises, Marcus is going to be dangerous if not monitored."It's an armament from Mega Man 2," she informed him. "I think it was supposed to be an acid bubble with high surface tension that could crush or bowl over enemies, but that force-ball of his looks a lot like a miniature version of it." She rubbed her temples. "Dear lord, this is going to be a mess."
'CAUTION: COFFEE OF DOOM', cute coffee mug. Hot milk, honey, and a light dusting of cinnamon powder, yum. Myra showing in her bathrobe after a shower, Speers is going to have a system error if that robe slips even a little.
Aww, his mom forced away from nerd culture by work, never heard fafiated term before."Research. I borrowed Marcus's Game Boy SP and his set of Mega Man games. Spent the last two hours playing through them and taking notes." Cup in hand, she sat down at his table and presented him with a notepad. "Best I figure, there are forty-five different Robot Masters in the old Game Boy series alone, but he'll only be familiar with the bosses taken from the first three NES games for now, which adds up to twenty-two. Not counting sufficiently similar abilities, that's fourteen more possible weapons for him to dream up. The last three aren't likely, though," she added as he scanned the list.
Ouch, both his parents caught in a bio-terror attack back in the mid-90s. And Derek made her a long hairclip, a more advanced version of the field monitors, hope it isn't needed. Patted him on the cheek and winked, Speers definitely has a crush on Myra with the grin he gets.
Marcus calling out and saying about seeing something cool. Myra, Derek, Ella, and Carlos all stuck at the lab over the holiday weekend.Monday, July 4th, 2016
Dummy decoys, just what is Marcus showing them? Aww, no lab coat in Marcus' size to complete his outfit. *eyes bug out* Marcus made that already, that is one impressive devise imo.now gathered in the wide alley between the lab and its storage facility. It was perhaps a hundred feet from one blocked end to the other, and various strange scorch marks on the walls gave testament to its occasional use as a testing range.
A small control panel in his belt and recall for the core devise, very nice. Carlos recording it all, Marcus using technobabble and making up half the words, heh. That 'bubble lead' is going to be a potent weapon, especially when he improves upon it later. Derek's control panel on his belt setting off an alarm, time for Ches to come out of his shell.
Ches wasn't sleeping, not dreaming, not awake either, interesting.
I wonder if that is just his brain supplying the illusion of light or something else. No negatives in this place, yet no positives, yikes. Breaking the shell of the world so he can have a life, literal but almost feels like a metaphor as well.In the absence of light, his brain supplied the illusion of it, turning the space dark red and orange at times, with strange threads of bright yellow criss-crossing like lightning in slow motion.
All those sensations hitting at once after isolation, eep. Like yoke from an egg, that is pretty much what it is. The machine setting off the alarm, Ches still doesn't realize what has happened. Everyone staring at Ches and Myra having to ask if it is Ches, yup, big change. Myra actually hugs Ches, despite that goop all over Ches. Marcus has bugged-out eyes, I'm guessing she is naked as well, oh boy.
Ella and Myra, Ches wrapped in a sheet, lead Ches to the showers and Ches tries to go to the men's side, but Myra decides to heck with tact. Yup, Ches has become Chessa. Ella had to tell Ches what happened, how the shell formed, and such. Hair like copper wire that might actually be metallic, a little shorter than Myra now.
And Ches has become her RPG character.Her skin was pale and surprisingly hairless, except for the shock of coppery brown-yellow hair and a pair of eyebrows like tongues of yellow flame.
He looked herself in the eyes, saw the slit pupils in emerald green, and lost it. Not because he couldn't accept it. Not because he refused to believe it. Because he knew that face, and he'd never thought he'd see it whole again.
Myra not concerned about the crying and shaking, then Ches darts out of the bathroom knocking Myra on her butt. Ah, went to her old room to look for her character sheet I bet.
Don't tell me, father didn't like his son roleplaying as a female character, oh brother. Na'chessa and based on the shape of the drawing, Chester's dad tore it up.Through the front, Myra could see an image, a hand-drawn picture of a girl in fantasy-novel armor, with copper-brown hair and green eyes.
Oh boy, Ches just sneezed lightning, didn't she. Ches staring at the scorch mark in wonder and realization, she has figured out how far her changes go.
Dragonblooded, Bronze dragon lineage. Crap is right, lightning breath, able to breath underwater, and a lot more physical changes that haven't finished yet in store for Ches. Can't wait for the 2nd half of the Barnes origin story."Ches, could I see that file for a moment?" She plucked it out of the girl's limp hands and pulled out the paper. It was a character sheet, Dungeons & Dragons. She recognized the basic format, though it looked like someone had made personal alterations to accommodate some homebrew elements. Both it and the drawing had been ripped to shreds at some point, then carefully taped back together. So much cellophane tape had been used that the pages were practically laminated. "Hmm. Name, Na'Chessa Rakia Faroving, Human Fighter..." She skimmed over the basic stat and feat information, looking for any clues. On the back, she found her answer. "Secret trait: secondary class, Dragonblooded. Bronze dragon lineage." While she'd never had the chance to play a 3.5 game, since it hadn't even existed when she checked out, and it could just as well have been something homebrew, she could take a stab at what that meant. If it worked the way she thought it did, and if Ches had somehow got him-- herself a mutation based on it, well then...
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And the experiment just got more terrifying. Far from the weirdest devise the Committee has reviewed and since Dr. Speers is there it worked at least once, we know devises can do some weird stuff but this is nuts."The idea was the same: that in every instance of quick and sudden demise, under binary life/death circumstances, there would be a splitting of realities, a parting of ways between he who died and he who did not. Given the proper coordinates in time and space, the magic box would collect the quantum image of that survivor and make it real. In essence, a clone with all the memories and physical characteristics of the original."
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And they haven't told his dad about Chester being alive again, way to complicate things even more, guys. *eyes bug out* It can have all those side-effects, yet they used it to bring someone back anyways. Are they nuts?!?"We're batting a thousand so far," said assistant #5. "The serial numbers on the bills are all the same, as are the dates on the coins. Aside from blood and other fluids, both sets of clothes have the same identifying marks. And so far all the books and notes have the exact same handwriting and graffiti."
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Dreamer wrote: As close to pinpoint accuracy best for using this devise, I would hate to see what happens to subjects if they are off by too much.
Something akin to watching sausage being made, I'd wager.
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Okay, why was Myra Paget an intruder with a purpose at this party, just what was she up to back then? Johnathon Green brought here by a message from Myra, glad she didn't bring it up in front of Eliza. Oh no, don't tell me she tried to blackmail someone who is having an affair and was murdered? Says she is going to leave the area entirely, goes running from Johnathon, the boat lurches and she hits the railing, then something hits her in the back. Sounds like she was having an affair with Johnathon, got pregnant with his child [note how she kept one arm around her belly as she fought to keep her head above the water], and was going to leave but Johnathon didn't wish to risk it. So he used the lurching of the boat and her hitting the railing to knock her overboard. At least that is what it seems like to me.December 31st, 2000
Given the height a railing needs to be to do its job, Myra running into the railing at full tilt, with an adult male right behind her, the double impact (intentional or not) was probably enough to cause the miscarriage.
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Division by zero! Ahhhhh! *runs off screaming*We even logged a new error message," he noted. "Division by zero, universe not found."
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joreymay wrote: Waitaminnit... wasn't this (or some version thereof) published some time ago?
Yes, this is a fanfic import.
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In other news, Marcus takes Dr. Speer's codename.
So what's Dr. Speer's new codename, and does Marcus have similar powers to Doc Speers, as they shared a codemame??
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Also, Ice Cream Machine appears!
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Dr. Speers' mother seems like a big looming mystery, Ella knows her, and seems like she was a teacher...
WMG: Myra meeting his parents in the future?
Then there's her parents... Wait, are they dead?
Yes, ""They got caught in a bio-terror attack back in the mid-90s. It was quick, at least.""
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OMG. Thank you for indulging my unintentionally selfish and rude request to have more background on the Barnes'
I was only about halfway through this segment when it all clicked.
The appearances of the Barnes'. Their family unit. Their closeness and support of each other. Why they so readily help others who struggle. Why they don't tolerate bullying. Why they are nurturing, patient, and kind. It all fit for me.
My best guess for why it all fell together at once? The consistency of each character in the stories. They're written as complete people, and once you get to know them better, it all strings together.
The bonus was the explanation of the Schimmelhorn effect in comparison to devisors. Now Kessel the rest of the Groenwalds, and Erica's lineage makes more sense too.
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Regarding the committee meeting framing this story, unless I misinterpreted it, Dr Speer wants the project to be terminated? I can only assume that there are concerns about the three for three record of origins/mutants resulting from this, which combined with the unavoidable trauma inherent in the subjects of the devise... Is dangerous in the best of circumstances.
Further on Dr Speers, he seems to have missed Myra already showing symptoms - those being the headaches and the gold flecks in her blue eyes - but he's rather infatuated, so it's understandable.
As to the codename, IIRC Whateley allows for temporary/legacy codenames which are valid no later than graduation wherein an unused name must be selected. Of course, it's generally a good idea to avoid doing so at all as the original owner likely wouldn't take kindly to such, unless they know each other.
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Katssun wrote: So I started reading this before it dawned on my who it was about.
OMG. Thank you for indulging my unintentionally selfish and rude request to have more background on the Barnes'
I was only about halfway through this segment when it all clicked.
The appearances of the Barnes'. Their family unit. Their closeness and support of each other. Why they so readily help others who struggle. Why they don't tolerate bullying. Why they are nurturing, patient, and kind. It all fit for me.
My best guess for why it all fell together at once? The consistency of each character in the stories. They're written as complete people, and once you get to know them better, it all strings together.
The bonus was the explanation of the Schimmelhorn effect in comparison to devisors. Now Kessel the rest of the Groenwalds, and Erica's lineage makes more sense too.
In reference to something Kristin said on the Dorms thread...
This. This is what vindication feels like

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mhalpern wrote: so is Ella one of THE Wilkins?
She wasn't intended to be, though that would possibly explain a few things.
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"He was just worn out, I think. Lots of excitement today. I sat with him a bit and sang an old lullaby of mine. Worked like a charm.
Did Myra accidently cast a sleep spell?
More generally I liked this story. My only gripe was Senate Committee scenes. the first one smelled like an info dump, so I skipped them. I have to note that the story remained quite inteligable without them.
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My take on this was no she is not a member of the Wilkins clan. All of the ones we have met outside of (possibly) Jobe's uncle who is the ambassador come of as self-centered gits to the max, I do not read any of that vibe in Ella whatsoever.Wasamon wrote:
mhalpern wrote: so is Ella one of THE Wilkins?
She wasn't intended to be, though that would possibly explain a few things.
Just my $0.02
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My take on this was no she is not a member of the Wilkins clan. All of the ones we have met outside of (possibly) Jobe's uncle who is the ambassador come of as self-centered gits to the max, I do not read any of that vibe in Ella whatsoever.Wasamon wrote:
mhalpern wrote: so is Ella one of THE Wilkins?
She wasn't intended to be, though that would possibly explain a few things.
Just my $0.02
Could be a separate branch... Still, it was my first thought...
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mhalpern wrote: Could be a separate branch... Still, it was my first thought...
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Statistically the 532nd most popular last name.
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Is this now canon, or should we assume that it's from the fan-fic version that wasn't rewritten? Frankly, it makes more sense than the current articles on Devisors and Gadgeteers.
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I love that she thinks to hit the pause button. These kids are in good hands.The Quantum Suicides, first half wrote: Myra caught the Game Boy as it fell from his fingers, hit the pause button, and set it down on the table.
Now I am become canon, infiltrator of works.The Quantum Suicides, first half wrote: Senator Ashkettle raised a hand. In front of him, his notepad was filled with scribbled equations.
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I'm not saying that my first thought on hearing her last name wasn't, 'When is Gizmatic, or Jobe going to be butting into this?' but I began to dismiss that as I saw her taking if not an interest, at least a solid supportive stance for the people pulled out of the quantum defibrillator....null0trooper wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Could be a separate branch... Still, it was my first thought...
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Now I am become canon, infiltrator of works.The Quantum Suicides, first half wrote: Senator Ashkettle raised a hand. In front of him, his notepad was filled with scribbled equations.
Haha, and thanks for the original critique of concept, back in... 2013? 2014?
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: I note that Dr. Speers gives a description of the Gadgeteer and Devisor (and Schimelhorn Engineer as well) that's a bit at variance with the descriptions we've seen in the past.
Is this now canon, or should we assume that it's from the fan-fic version that wasn't rewritten? Frankly, it makes more sense than the current articles on Devisors and Gadgeteers.
More like it's his personal view on the matter, remembering that he isn't a powers wonk but rather the one with the power, and a lot of his base information would've been gleaned between 1994 and 1998, when he was in Whateley. As with everything else, it's to be taken with a grain of salt, but it fits with the way he views the world.
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I'm not saying that my first thought on hearing her last name wasn't, 'When is Gizmatic, or Jobe going to be butting into this?' but I began to dismiss that as I saw her taking if not an interest, at least a solid supportive stance for the people pulled out of the quantum defibrillator....null0trooper wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Could be a separate branch... Still, it was my first thought...
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There are 68,309 people in the U.S. with the last name Wilkins.
Statistically the 532nd most popular last name.
Having the ability to demonstrate baseline empathy around normal humans does radically reduce the likelihood

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I suppose it's to be expected, since the original draft had the dates set at summer 2007, then got switched over to 2014 after the initial Gen2 announcement, and then switched to 2016 after the revised announcement...
Just should've paid better attention on my last check through. *sigh*
At least "Keeping Cool" only got switched from 2014 to 2016 halfway through the first draft, so I'm definitely sure the dates are all correct with that one.
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Or the episode where Riker meets a transporter clone of himself.CrazyMinh wrote: You misreferenced the TNG episode “Relics”. It’s Geordi who pulls Scotty out of the jury-rigged stasis tube, not O’Brian. Miles isn’t part of the away mission in that episode. In fact, a better analogy would be the first season episode “the neutral zone” which involves people cryogenically frozen after they died being brought back to life.
You could have also referenced GantZ, but I guess manga may be too obscure. Oh, or this great Aussie TV show called Glitch. Or another TV show called Parallelax that was on ABC when I was in High School. Or Minority report. Or even that episode of Doctor Who where they bring back Clara...oh shit that was in late 2016, and I’m not sure we’ve got to that point in WU history yet.
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I don't remember what Myra's powers are from the other stories (in fact, I read this real late at night and didn't twig at all it was about the Barnes siblings), but I built my own epileptic tree regarding those:
I assumed that Myra is a projective empath, and has manifested quite early after being brought back, but nobody noticed it. Due to her personality, she tends to project comforting feelings for the people around her, which explains why everybody likes her. And... it also influences Speers into having more normal feelings at all.
Re Ella Wilkins... she might or might not be related to Jobe. But, if you decide she is, well, I would suggest having her being the estranged daughter of Gladys. That would give her a background in healthcare and experience with the gadg/dev obsessive mindset. As for her lacking the typically egocentric mindset of the Wilkins, well, she could have taken after her father. Who never married Gladys (maybe Gizmatic killed the guy for "despoiling" his "kid sister?"), so that explains her having her mother's maiden surname.
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Or the episode where Riker meets a transporter clone of himself.CrazyMinh wrote: You misreferenced the TNG episode “Relics”. It’s Geordi who pulls Scotty out of the jury-rigged stasis tube, not O’Brian. Miles isn’t part of the away mission in that episode. In fact, a better analogy would be the first season episode “the neutral zone” which involves people cryogenically frozen after they died being brought back to life.
You could have also referenced GantZ, but I guess manga may be too obscure. Oh, or this great Aussie TV show called Glitch. Or another TV show called Parallelax that was on ABC when I was in High School. Or Minority report. Or even that episode of Doctor Who where they bring back Clara...oh shit that was in late 2016, and I’m not sure we’ve got to that point in WU history yet.
Well, first keep in mind that at this point, Myra's been a citizen of the 21st century for all of a week, which is nowhere near enough time to catch up on every sci-fi show she's missed. Dr. Who was still in the middle of its great hiatus when she checked out. Also, she'd want to keep it within the area of stuff that Marcus could probably identify from the early 90s.
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Sir Lee wrote: They do reference the "Two Rikers" episode.
I don't remember what Myra's powers are from the other stories (in fact, I read this real late at night and didn't twig at all it was about the Barnes siblings), but I built my own epileptic tree regarding those:
I assumed that Myra is a projective empath, and has manifested quite early after being brought back, but nobody noticed it. Due to her personality, she tends to project comforting feelings for the people around her, which explains why everybody likes her. And... it also influences Speers into having more normal feelings at all.
Re Ella Wilkins... she might or might not be related to Jobe. But, if you decide she is, well, I would suggest having her being the estranged daughter of Gladys. That would give her a background in healthcare and experience with the gadg/dev obsessive mindset. As for her lacking the typically egocentric mindset of the Wilkins, well, she could have taken after her father. Who never married Gladys (maybe Gizmatic killed the guy for "despoiling" his "kid sister?"), so that explains her having her mother's maiden surname.
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Myra's powers:
So yeah, her primary mutation is a WIZ trait, though she's got some oddities going on when it comes to learning new spells... which should've been mentioned in the not-yet-written third Barnes story.
Her empathic ability is entirely perceptive in nature. It didn't take projection to get Speers to react to things. It's more that she falls into a really weird spot in his life, technically work-related but not a colleague, and not really willing to act as either. He doesn't know how to react to her, and can't simply ignore her the way he usually does people who confuse him, so he ends up opening a lot more to her than he'd expected.
She, on the other hand, can read him like a book without even realizing, and draws him out just by being herself.
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Malady wrote: Is the name of Myra's whatever, "Johnathan Green", with two "a"-s, or is the story correct with its uncommon "Johnathon Green", with two "o"-s?
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Wasamon wrote: Myra's powers:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Her empathic ability is entirely perceptive in nature.
I think you mean "Receptive"?
Or is she not even receiving emotions from others, but just passively receiving information? Which would be Esper, since she's not acquiring a direct emotional feed from people...
This isn't just esoterica, 'cause she spent Marcus's first night, calming him down from his nightmares... An Empath would be feeling the fear too, while an Esper, wouldn't? Unless she hadn't expressed powers at that point...
Also, having powers mean she already manifested? So no big mutation scene for her?
Thanks for the response on my Name question!
Gonna hold out on giving him a Wiki Article until Monday night, since I think the second half should have more to add, unless the "He pushed her off the boat", implication, stays unanalysed and stuff.
Also, he seems high society, and stuff... And is also still alive... He's like the only person connected to anyone who came back, who'd likely be so??
I guess he was the one who reported her death, as well... SUSPICIOUS...
Lololol if he's got a 16 yr old daughter at Whateley, or something.
There's also the "Mothers are changed by their child's DNA", bit of new science, so she might've mutated if she hadn't died... WMG. Not like we'd know.
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Codes are deterministic, so how many have they figured out, by Dorms 4.6? ... But, why bother... If you've got a favorite flavor, why experiment, and it's a waste of good milk if it goes bad?
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As for the ice cream machine, the one Speers has is the prototype, while the one at the Crystal Hall (Dorms 3) is a refined model with about a few magnitudes fewer possibilities. In the case of a total bungle, the ice cream can be recycled back into the machine, because hey, it doesn't need to follow normal concepts of input/output. Also, I'd imagine that a lot of the codebook was filled in through games of Russian ice cream roulette.
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Wasamon wrote: I wouldn't worry about adding Johnathon just yet. He gets pretty much no extra mention for the foreseeable future.
Also, next QS update is the 28th, from what I can see on the queue. Expect something from someone else tomorrow
As for the ice cream machine, the one Speers has is the prototype, while the one at the Crystal Hall (Dorms 3) is a refined model with about a few magnitudes fewer possibilities. In the case of a total bungle, the ice cream can be recycled back into the machine, because hey, it doesn't need to follow normal concepts of input/output. Also, I'd imagine that a lot of the codebook was filled in through games of Russian ice cream roulette.
Okay, making the page, so we have one less Wanted Page on the Wiki.
Thanks for the info!
Wait, so Speers made that Ice Cream Machine? It's a Gadget? Not a Devise? Or he just knows how to improve it?
I thought that the Ice Cream Machine was something LONGSHOT installed, or something installed by a previous owner of the location, or Speers repaired, not made. ... But Speers has no Focus, so he could make anything?
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Isn't he mentioned somewhere in Dorms Whichever? I'm not sure where, but QS is not the first time we've heard his name.Malady wrote: Wait, so Speers made that Ice Cream Machine? It's a Gadget? Not a Devise? Or he just knows how to improve it?
I thought that the Ice Cream Machine was something LONGSHOT installed, or something installed by a previous owner of the location, or Speers repaired, not made. ... But Speers has no Focus, so he could make anything?
I believe he works there, somewhere. Was it part of the rapid staff refills?
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Isn't he mentioned somewhere in Dorms Whichever? I'm not sure where, but QS is not the first time we've heard his name.Malady wrote: Wait, so Speers made that Ice Cream Machine? It's a Gadget? Not a Devise? Or he just knows how to improve it?
I thought that the Ice Cream Machine was something LONGSHOT installed, or something installed by a previous owner of the location, or Speers repaired, not made. ... But Speers has no Focus, so he could make anything?
I believe he works there, somewhere. Was it part of the rapid staff refills?
Yes, Dorms 4.4, as "Ms. Barnes's boyfriend, Dr. Speers". I'm presuming that he is living with her, and the rest of her / their family, in a house in The Village, but nothing's been confirmed on that front.
We also don't know if he's working for Whateley? I'd assume so, though.
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It was a rare sight which crossed the quad, though few students would realize. Three students, two teachers, one oddball sorta-family unit. The Barneses had arrived to picnic -- as soon as they found a good spot. Chessa had the old quilt, a mish-mash patchwork of fabric swatches and clothing rags sewn expertly together by someone's granny years ago. Her little brother Marcus was carrying a portable generator that he'd been working on.
The reason for the generator was carted along beside them by their big sister's boyfriend. Chessa had known Dr. Derek Speers for a reasonable amount of time -- since the first day of the rest of her life, in fact -- and there was no denying that Myra Barnes had been a good influence on the man. It actually looked like he used a comb and hair gel instead of cable cutters and grease, for one.
In the cart was a devise, a prototype model of the one in the Crystal Hall that students knew simply as the Machine. Pour milk in one end, choose a number combination, and out came ice cream. What kind of ice cream, that was left for the user to discover. The cafeteria's Machine had a two-digit code system, allowing one hundred options from 00 to 99, which made it easier to ensure that everything was edible, if not always recognizable.
The prototype's keypad allowed for six-digit combinations. Chessa didn't know if there actually were one million flavors of ice cream on the planet, and no one else could say for sure either. In between the cracks of possibility, there lurked things like Ghost Pepper Honey Surprise, Prickly Pear Puree, and Phlegm. Affixed to the front of the devise was a big red button labeled DO YOU FEEL LUCKY?
And is confirmed as a teacher in Dorms 3... Sigh... I feel inattentive... More for the former, than the latter.
"Oh! Well, there's this problem that Dr. Speers set me this week..." The blue devisor rattled off a verbal paragraph of technical terms, only a few of which Erica actually understood. She nodded appreciatively, though, and posed questions whenever an opening showed itself.
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"And turn in the notes for a grade in Dr. Speers's lab class," Laura added.
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Myra has a room in Poe, just like Pat, Marcus, and Chessa. I believe Derek's residence is still unstated.Malady wrote: Yes, Dorms 4.4, as "Ms. Barnes's boyfriend, Dr. Speers". I'm presuming that he is living with her, and the rest of her / their family, in a house in The Village, but nothing's been confirmed on that front.
Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 3) wrote: "And like, four Poesies too," Chessa added. "Big sis keeps a room in Poe," she explained. "For Marcus's sake, since he's still a bit messed up."
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Sir Lee wrote: They do reference the "Two Rikers" episode.
I don't remember what Myra's powers are from the other stories (in fact, I read this real late at night and didn't twig at all it was about the Barnes siblings), but I built my own epileptic tree regarding those:
I assumed that Myra is a projective empath, and has manifested quite early after being brought back, but nobody noticed it. Due to her personality, she tends to project comforting feelings for the people around her, which explains why everybody likes her. And... it also influences Speers into having more normal feelings at all.
Re Ella Wilkins... she might or might not be related to Jobe. But, if you decide she is, well, I would suggest having her being the estranged daughter of Gladys. That would give her a background in healthcare and experience with the gadg/dev obsessive mindset. As for her lacking the typically egocentric mindset of the Wilkins, well, she could have taken after her father. Who never married Gladys (maybe Gizmatic killed the guy for "despoiling" his "kid sister?"), so that explains her having her mother's maiden surname.
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Myra's powers:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]In Dorms 3 (first time she makes a major appearance), she K.O.'s a rampaging Wilder with a sleep spell.
So yeah, her primary mutation is a WIZ trait, though she's got some oddities going on when it comes to learning new spells... which should've been mentioned in the not-yet-written third Barnes story.
Her empathic ability is entirely perceptive in nature. It didn't take projection to get Speers to react to things. It's more that she falls into a really weird spot in his life, technically work-related but not a colleague, and not really willing to act as either. He doesn't know how to react to her, and can't simply ignore her the way he usually does people who confuse him, so he ends up opening a lot more to her than he'd expected.
She, on the other hand, can read him like a book without even realizing, and draws him out just by being herself.
Make that 5
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Another time-slip:
"Agent Sevcik, interview with Ms. Myra Barnes, July eighth, two thousand fourteen. Five forty pee-em," she enunciated clearly. "Okay, this is the standard interview required for an emergent mutant, as per various acts of congress. Would you like me to state the particulars, or shall we get down to it?"
Under --Derek--, ~3/5 of the way in, this paragraph:
He wasn't sure when he'd begun to think of Marcus less as a test subject and more as a student. As strange as it sounded, he was a role model for the boy, as close a thing to a big brother as Marcus now had. Derek was an only child, and he'd never quite gotten how a larger family dynamic might feel, but on the drive in he'd had a twinge, an inkling of what it was like. Somehow, some way, Derek Speers had gotten himself a little brother to watch over. Well, in a manner of speaking. Similarly, it was hard not to view Chessa as a little sister. Myra... was complicated, for many reasons. He hadn't yet sorted out all his feelings there.[/query]
appears twice.
So instead of swinging high like it expected, she swung low, a golfer's drive, down and then up again, right into the crotch of the beast. She could feel a crunch, and heard the high-pitched howl of pain
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That half had a massive change of tone. OK. Right. GS mate.
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...I'm actually floored right now, and that doesn't happen often.
Ok, actual review time <cracks knuckles>
The bad
The pacing was slightly off, Chessa was kinda OOC for the second half, and was maybe too hyperactive to be believable; the characters mastered their powers a bit too quickly; I really didn't expect Boggart to be evil; no foreshadowing for that. Chessa also a bit too enthusiastic, not really any trauma which really is the human response, also her lines are a bit cringey and OOT. Other than that, not really anything else.
The good
Characters got a bit more fleshed out, mainly Myra; interesting to see that Speers is a classic gadgeteer when it comes to making a car (Q would be very proud); Nice to see Ella as more than a caretaker, although she's not quite a Ripley; seems like all the Barnes are game inspired (Marcus = Megaman; Myra = Dragon Quest; Chessa = DnD) which was a amusing nod; Honest to god did not know there was such a thing as light-based sneezing, going to have to look that one up;
The Interesting:
- Dragon-blooded Sorcerers (the only thing I could find after searching fruitlessly through the tattered 2e through 4e manuals that I had thankfully stored in my old apartment's basement prior to the fire) are a 3.5e homebrew class, and are not official. The closest there is is to 'Dragonblooded' is the Bahamut Cult Dragonborn from 3.5e, featured in Races of the Dragon, a official splatbook. They were also known as 'Dragonborn' then, prior to the official debut of the race in the 4th edition of the game. 5e also has dragonborn, although they're more reptilian, as with the 4e dragonborn.
In any case, Chessa probably played a 3.5e RotD Dragonborn, although that's stretching things a bit. Interestingly, they are humans turned into Dragonborn via crawling inside a giant egg and staying in there for quite a while. That's the thing that lead me to believe that Wassamon is referring to this type of dragon humanoid, with a mistake relating to name.
- I also did a quick search for D&D edition dates, and it initially boggled me (pardon the pun) that Chessa and her original gaming group were playing 3.5 in the era of 4e. Then, I remembered the rampant discontent for 4th Edition, what with the incessant need for Hasbro to make WotC sell fucking minis to play the game right, the ridiculous amount of cheese that the edition introduced, and my god this is dredging up bad memories. It took AGES just to set up a bloody encounter, and you needed to trawl through thirty odd fucking splatbooks to find one damm rule, and my god I'm glad I decided that I'd try 5th Edition. SOOOOO much simpler than messing around with bloody 4e. 3.5e wasn't THAT much better though, and 3e itself was rife with issues. Admittedly, 3.5 was kinda before my time, and I've only played a few games out of interest.
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CrazyMinh wrote: The pacing was slightly off, Chessa was kinda OOC for the second half, and was maybe too hyperactive to be believable; the characters mastered their powers a bit too quickly; I really didn't expect Boggart to be evil; no foreshadowing for that. Chessa also a bit too enthusiastic, not really any trauma which really is the human response, also her lines are a bit cringey and OOT. Other than that, not really anything else.
Chessa is OOC in her own origin story? As to her hyperactivity being unbelievable, I'd recommend getting to know more people with ADHD. Her powers are largely point-and-blast. No sign of improbable aiming skills or fine control in this story. Pro-tip: Not every human has the same personality, nor will they adopt the same coping mechanisms as you. Also, teenage RPG geeks can say some "cringey" things at times.
Marcus is a devisor and just did what devisors do, with more adult supervision than most devisors get.
Myra had years of taking in frameworks for using magic (In a universe with magic, those spells could have had a basis in reality), this is just the first time she gets to use it. The first spell goes off with no control.
CrazyMinh wrote: Dragon-blooded Sorcerers (the only thing I could find after searching fruitlessly through the tattered 2e through 4e manuals that I had thankfully stored in my old apartment's basement prior to the fire) are a 3.5e homebrew class, and are not official. The closest there is is to 'Dragonblooded' is the Bahamut Cult Dragonborn from 3.5e, featured in Races of the Dragon, a official splatbook. They were also known as 'Dragonborn' then, prior to the official debut of the race in the 4th edition of the game. 5e also has dragonborn, although they're more reptilian, as with the 4e dragonborn.
Unlike "The Book of Nine Swords" and "The Book of Vile Darkness", the d20 System Reference Documents are usually acceptable to GMs familiar with DnD 3.5 and Pathfinder. There's draconic and half-dragon templates in canon 3.5, along with dragonfire adepts who get dragon-touched at Level 1.
Or you could open page 75 of the Pathfinder Core Rulebook for draconic bloodline sorcerors.
Or you could build your own dragon-thing using the Advanced Races Guide.
CrazyMinh wrote: Admittedly, 3.5 was kinda before my time, and I've only played a few games out of interest.
Many people who liked 3.5 and didn't want to wait until 4 died the death it deserved moved over to Pathfinder, which was intended to be largely compatible with 3.5 rules.
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null0trooper wrote: As to her hyperactivity being unbelievable, I'd recommend getting to know more people with ADHD.
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...I've never mentioned that I'm ADHD, have I?
My point still stands, as you are not the only person with ADHD. Not everyone will have the same symptoms affecting their life exactly as yours do you. I have even known people who make Chessa look sedate, without either ADD or Bipolar Disorder.
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null0trooper wrote: Many people who liked 3.5 and didn't want to wait until 4 died the death it deserved moved over to Pathfinder, which was intended to be largely compatible with 3.5 rules.
Eugh. Pathfinder. I tried playing a few games...
...No offence or disrespect to anyone who likes it- you are allowed to like it if you want, it's your preference- but I always found it to be a poor imitation of D&D. I mean, sure. It has its own tone and flavour among literally thousands of RPG games. Sure, it's technically a "fix-fic" of the messy 3.5e. And sure, it is pretty fun to play once you get into it.
My main gripe with it is that the game uses core mechanics that I'm not used to. I really only got into tabletop gaming seriously around 2009, when I was just out of high school. Before then, I'd been playing Warhammer 40k for some time, I'd tried out Warhammer Fantasy as well, and I'd also begun playing a few collectible card games. RPG's were a late thing for me, and I've spend nearly nine years now playing them. Actually, technically it's closer to ten years, if you count the D&D game I played halfway through year twelve off-and-on, with our small group only managing four sessions in the space of five months.
I started with 4th edition, hated it, and my group almost unilaterally agreed. So, we switched to playing Shadowrun for a while; before moving over to playing Vampire: The Masquerade, some of the W40k RPG's, and eventually moving to D&D 5e, where we've had a long streak of campaigns ever since it came out back around 2012.
the Tl;dr? I never really experienced that era of game design trends, and I really only caught the tail end of it with 4e. Game design moves on, even with long-runners like D&D. I've noticed that there's been a recent trend towards simplicity and more accessible rules, especially with long-timers like D&D and W40k. 5th Edition D&D has a lot of stripped-down features compared to the leviathan of murdered rainforests that was your average 4e game; and 8th edition W40k removed a whole bunch of fun features, which I
In any case, I agree that pathfinder is a good game. It's just not my cup of tea.
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CrazyMinh wrote:
null0trooper wrote: As to her hyperactivity being unbelievable, I'd recommend getting to know more people with ADHD.
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...I've never mentioned that I'm ADHD, have I?
My point still stands, as you are not the only person with ADHD. Not everyone will have the same symptoms affecting their life exactly as yours do you. I have even known people who make Chessa look sedate, without either ADD or Bipolar Disorder.
...wow, you're the second person to say that to me in a matter of months. Christ, I need to pull myself together....
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The Quantum Suicides, second half comments
Marcus excited about Ches being made to repeat the sneeze cannon trick over and over, good to get control early on. An extra lump behind Ches' nasal arch, cool. Can't believe Deep Space 9 got brought up, guessing Ches has more changes to go through still. 4, nope on the 5th bowl of ice cream, Ches finding out the kind of appetite an energizer has now.Monday, July 4th, 2016
Good to see Ches has a sense of humor about the whole thing, hope it isn't just covering up for turmoil inside though. *eyes bug out* Just how flexible is Ches now?"What, you mean like having boobs?" He nodded. "Well, it's not like I didn't have boobs before, too," she joked. "At least these are functional and, um, what's the word... aesthetically pleasing?" The girl stretched the collar of her borrowed t-shirt and examined herself. "Not to mention smaller. I really was a lardass."
An enlightened outlook on everything, though it might seem small compared to coming back from suicide. And the origin of Na'Chessa, sounds like an interesting campaign to play in, too bad Ches' dad had to ruin it by ripping up the character sheet. 2 days later Ches killed himself, the last straw, dang.
I like Myra's idea, hehe. Though you have to wonder what the boys at Whateley would think if they heard it."Why not a girl?" she countered. "Na'Chessa was elegant, graceful, attractive, and she had a sixty-foot ranged electric line attack. What's not to love? I'd wanted to try playing as a girl for a long time, and a game about secrets seemed like a good place to start. Now, what's up with you and Doc Speers?"
"Marcus wants to be Mega Man," Myra teased.
"Sounds good to me. How about you, big sis? What do you want to be?"
"Supreme Empress of the land of buff, bronzed underwear models," she said with a wink. "Ain't gonna happen, though. I'll settle for being myself. I've gotten me this far, after all."
Derek Speers calling in his whole staff for the evening's work, he goes all out. Ms. Andreas, Carlos, a sociologist, good staff. And Carlos did a doctor-to-layman synopsis, give this man a huge bonus! And Carlos seeings what is going on between Derek and Myra, yet Derek doesn't get what he is hinting at. Noticing the solitude and caring about it, Dr. Speers has definitely been influenced by Myra, Marcus, and Ches a lot more than he realizes yet.
Mango ice cream, yum. Myra has that right, all news is weird news for this bunch right now.
Pink with purple polka-dots, Myra has a silly sense of humor, plus far from the strangest appearance we've seen."We have confirmation of an active metagene complex and the presence of Exemplar and Energizer traits with ninety-nine percent certainty. Analysis of the past two weeks of data would suggest that what happened was actually the culmination of a long-running series of small changes, but we still cannot say for sure if it started before or after checking out."
Now that is very interesting."We found a series of new organs in Ches's body. One behind the nose, two on the hips, two embedded within the hands. Scans suggest they are all part of a bio-electric generator system."
"So I could shoot lightning from my hands?"
"That seems possible, yes."
Now I'm curious just how far Chessa's abilities will differ from her expectations in the future."Buster, a character sheet's just an approximation for a person, and a ruleset's no replacement for real life," Myra advised. "Expect your abilities to differ from your expectations sometimes, kay?"
*blinks in confusion* Still genetically male, wasn't expecting that.
Okay, the insides going to take time to catch up to the outside, that makes sense with all we've read in other stories."His body went through a period of physical regression, then redeveloped without the presence of gonads, those having, er, not accompanied the rest of him inside. The results are similar to the genetic defect known as androgen insensitivity, which can cause a genetic male to appear female on the outside. However," he added. "A review of the genetic testing revealed that at least one in every ten samples taken from... her today is currently genetically female, and according to the research--" which had been done very quickly this evening. Who knew gender-switching mutations were a relatively common phenomenon?-- "...this is normal in instances of slow gender change due to metagenetic influence. So in short, externally you are female, Ches, but your insides have yet to completely catch up. It may take a year, or even several years, before your female parts are fully developed."
Na'Chessa Rakia Barnes, cool name.
Could be worse, she could have chosen a dragon-type which breathes acid.Everyone was diving for cover at the first 'ah,' but the blast of electricity was blocked by Ches's -- Na'Chessa's own hand, stretched in front of her open mouth. The crackling lines wreathed her fingers, circling them several times before settling into the limb and disappearing.
"And that, boys and girls," Myra commented dryly, "is why you should always cover your mouth when you sneeze."
Oh boy, where will Chessa sleep? And what if she sneezes in her sleep? Myra going to sleep on the couch and giving Chessa her bed, great big sister. Pink fluffy bunnies pajamas, at least they are cheap and easy to replace if accidentally wrecked.
Ah, the brain, the one part of the changes most tend to overlook.What, you want to jump into womanhood boobs first?" she teased.
"All or nothing," the girl replied. Fully pajama'd up, she bounced into bed. "This is me now, and I gotta be me."
No, no getting a self-help guru interested, some would listen and take their life thinking it would lead to enlightenment."Done enough crying," the girl said. "I cried when my old man destroyed my dream-self, cried when I decided to end it all, cried when the doc brought me back, and cried when I realized I hadn't lost Na'Chessa after all. That's enough for a long time. Help me figure out how to act and what to be, and I'll handle the rest."
Clothes shopping next week, Chessa might just want a break after a day of that.
Okay, now I pity anyone who tries to hurt anyone Myra calls family.The girl's new skin was cool and sleek, much like her hair, but with a soft warmth underlying it all. If she looked closely, she could just barely make out the first traces of fine scales. She stayed a while longer, sitting there with her new little sister. Chessa had a hard life ahead of her, but she'd have a big sister by her side to help her through, Myra promised.
Too many times, she'd lost her chance at a family. Like hell she was going to let anyone mess this up.
Senate Committee Hearing, Wednesday, August 10th, 2016
Senator Murtaugh seems to like it when mutants change and are called monsters, showing someone like Chessa going through changes and the step-by-step process and he doesn't believe it, good grief."And we're seriously supposed to believe this?" Senator Murtaugh was demanding as Speers flipped the slideshow through figures 10a to 10e, highlighting the progress of changes in one Chester Ferris, now Na'Chessa Barnes. "It's preposterous! People don't just, just change like that!"
"How would you expect them to change, then?" Senator Larson asked. "Your constituents love the monster line when it comes to mutants, so you obviously should recognize that change happens. How's this any different?"
That's the part he is hung up on, talk about narrow-minded."The BIT is believed to be modeled off of the person's conceptual ideal of strength, grace, speed, what have you. The details, and thus the extremity of the effect, vary greatly from person to person. Most often, this means they become improved versions of themselves." The third slide showed that basic figure, now muscled up and striking a silly pose. Perhaps he shouldn't have allowed Marcus to design this section, but it was such a basic concept of metabiology that he felt insulted about having to explain it at all.
"But changing from a boy to a girl?" Murtaugh seemed a little hung up on that point.
Now I want a drawing of Na'Chessa's happy, smiley face. Marcus might have started manifested before his original death as well, hhm."If the person's ideal happens to be female, then yes, it's fully possible. A statistically significant number of Exemplars have BIT gender dysphoria, which leads to a transition, slow or quick, between the sexes, in addition to other applicable traits. In this case, Na'Chessa's BIT was fully informed by her old D&D character, who was female and not quite human."
He switched back to the main slideshow, which now featured Na'Chessa's happy, smiley face. There was no denying that the teenager was perky and energetic, and he wanted to impress that positive image upon the senators. Not even Murtaugh could put a bad word in while she was on screen. It was too bad he couldn't keep her up there for the entire meeting.
Guessing that means they confirm Myra has manifested as well."Yes. As we say in the labs, 'Once is an accident, twice is a coincidence, but three times is cause for radical reconceptualization of the hypothesis.' Let us say," he concluded with a sigh, "that the next few days were quite alarming indeed."
Myra at the commissary, watching the clock ticking down and able to hear the second hand move in the silence. The fifth book in 12 hours, okay, guessing that Myra has Exemplar mental package as well at least. Ouch, I've had headaches like that but never longer than 6 hours, poor Myra. Irish coffee, hope that helps her, takes dark chocolate to deal with mine. Ella making waffles, now that is something worth waking up for.Wednesday, July 6th, 2016
Good grief, is his coffee stronger than the stuff made for the devisors down in the workshop at Whateley?The gadgeteer made a beeline for his personal coffee maker, the one with more levers and buttons than a command panel on the Death Star. She'd tasted its brew, once. You could destroy Alderaan with that stuff.
Aww, lack of appetite due to a headache, at least she hasn't gotten to the level it triggers throwing up from exposure to lights and anything above a whisper.
Dressed up to go somewhere, but where?She was wearing a black skirt and jacket with a white blouse. The silver-circuit half moon clip was in her hair, and a white carnation was pinned to her lapel. Chessa was wearing a similar outfit, cobbled together from bits of Ella's wardrobe, then pinned to accommodate her figure. As for Ella herself, she had a formal black dress with a veil.
Marcus was uncomfortable in Derek's borrowed formal wear. The pants legs were rolled up so he would't trip over them, and the shirt puffed out in weird places. Lastly, the doctor didn't seem to have any neckties that weren't handpicked by a colorblind Picasso enthusiast. Someone would be getting a decent necktie for his birthday, she decided.
Marcus and Chessa not going to leave Myra's side today, oh boy, this sounds like a stressful trip.
Oh, going to see where Melanie is buried, yeah, that would bring a lot of stress. I honestly could not go into such a cemetery, all that pain, the loss of ones so young. Myra going there to see where Melanie is buried speaks much for her strength, imo.Dandelion Hill Cemetery was one of the saddest possible places on the face of the earth: a burial ground dedicated to children and the unborn.
The loss of her child, breaking down and crying like this was the least I expected from Myra, even the strongest individuals can show vulnerability.
Okay, I got goosebumps from reading this, you can almost feel the magic yourself.Somewhere in the back of her mind, a word echoed, half-remembered from some unknown space. Its reverberation shook her physically, moving in time with the pounding of her fists upon the ground, catching within every fallen tear. Her coughing sobs stuck in her throat as the word gathered itself together, and she vomited the syllables in one retching moan.
ASTOLON.
The word had a presence, a mass without substance that drew those blinding spots and wavering lines to it, knotting them together to form the most wondrous patterns. She could feel the tears lifting from her cheeks, see them pooling upon the granite square, shining bright silver as they coated the flowers and plaque alike in liquid light.
Whoa, the world of dreams is incredible, the way Wasamon describes what Myra is perceiving I won't even try to explain. Read it for yourself.
Now, this is how you do magic, mysterious and amazing to witness, a wonder to behold.Control was an illusion, but it was an illusion that the colors possessed for as long as she allowed it. After uncountable eras in their embrace, she was strong enough to realize. Then the colors came at her beck and call, answering to names she herself could not hear, but twisting in upon themselves, creating little knots of iridescence at her whim.
"Stop!" she commanded, and they did.
Then she woke up.
Hhm, wondering if the lines and spots she is seeing are how she sees magic and essence. Asleep on the couch with Marcus and Chessa taking up opposite ends of the sofa, how sweet. Marcus playing his Game Boy, Chessa reading a fantasy novel. Forced to cough by a stray particle of dust, darn, she could have faked being asleep for a few more minutes.Her headache was gone, but it and the dream had left familiar afterimages on her retinas, lines and spots that danced around the solid reality of the room.
Just a little less than 2 and a half days, yikes! That is a long time to sleep.Friday, July 8th, 2016 5:30 PM
Myra was in burnout, take turns icing her down all day Wednesday, that is very bad. Stapleton, hope Myra never has to see him again."And I'd describe your condition as more catatonic than unconscious. You responded to some stimuli, and we got you to sip water every few hours."
Get a recording of that tirade to Whateley and play it for all male students, none of them would misbehave in her class or risk upsetting her ever."I thought as much. And he would have no desire to, how did you put it? Have his gonads mulched off with a rototiller? That tirade of yours is already a legend amongst the staff in both labs."
"I meant every word of it," she declared. "Even the ones that should be mutually exclusive or anatomically impossible."
Ah, so the spots and lines are how Myra perceives magic.With her was someone new, a tall woman about Myra's age, with straight black hair and a hawkish nose. She was dressed in a conservative business suit, but with a colorful pin on the lapel -- a five pointed star in cardinal hues. The spots and lines, never far now from Myra's vision, seemed to dance around the woman as she approached.
"Ah, yes," said Derek. "This is Ms. Janceena Sevcik, a friend of mine who happened to be in Chicago this weekend. She's with the Department of Paranormal Affairs."
Interesting to see a standard interview."Agent Sevcik, interview with Ms. Myra Barnes, July eighth, two thousand sixteen. Five forty pee-em," she enunciated clearly. "Okay, this is the standard interview required for an emergent mutant, as per various acts of congress. Would you like me to state the particulars, or shall we get down to it?"
An interview with someone her own age, guess Ms. Sevcik hasn't been informed as to Myra's full nature. Ah, so she does know and is cleared to meet them.
A monument to Melanie, now there is granting her own wish.The granite marker had not been damaged -- far from it, in fact. It had been transfigured. The bouquet of flowers, now a dozen shades of silver, rose up from a base as bright as polished mithril from the coffers of the Lonely Mountain. Every flower, every leaf was limned with a metallic gleam, down to the individual petals on the roses.
She tied it to a small ley line, that is nuts!"My colleagues spent most of Wednesday figuring that out," said Ms. Sevcik. "As best they can figure, you created a psychokinetic force field around the flowers, the marker, and your daughter's casket, which is why they all look silver now. Even crazier is that you somehow tied it to a small ley line that runs under the cemetery."
She tapped into a small ley line without meaning to, I'm surprised her burnout wasn't far worse."Yes. Holy sites tend to attract them, and few places are more sacred than burial grounds. That's pretty much universal." The agent took back the photo. "In this case, the PK field is leaching directly off of the line, so those flowers are going to be there for a very, very long time. I'm willing to bet that the line contributed to your breakthrough, and that it put you into burnout right after. You were charged far past capacity."
Always love a good Harry Potter reference."Some big, burly guy is about to come through the door and say, 'Yer a wizard'?"
"Only if your name is Harry Potter," chuckled the woman. "Instead, you have me, and I can now confirm your manifestation as a magically active mutant. And maybe a few other things, but those can wait for later. Ready for the next question?"
More details on magic is always a welcome read."Magical traditions," the woman, the magician explained. "Most magic-users -- and WIZ-type mutants, especially -- either build up or inherit a mental framework to support and direct their power. Certain rituals, special symbology, words of power from dead languages, things like that. My own magic draws upon the Wiccan tradition, but I know people who take inspiration from the Kabbalah, alchemy, various Christian rites, or even the visual shorthand of legerdemain. So, where does 'astolon' fit in?"
Astolon and she appeared to turn into a statue for five minutes, 32 seconds, interesting. Aww, reading all those things from Derek towards her and Myra thinks she is reading too much into a situation. An empath of some stripe, thought so.
"I'm just saying, whatever impressions you might get from him, especially what he won't say himself? It's probably right on the money. As it is, I'm marking you as a potential empath, pending further comprehensive testing which I am not prepared to administer at this time."
The KaClang spell, so perfect. Bwahaha, so as long as the words have meaning to the person casting the spell that is all that matters is what this seems to suggest. Learned Japanese by playing that game thanks to her dad, now that is a unique way to learn a language. Now that is true love for a game, to memorize all the spell names."An ultimate defense," she said. "Complete security, but at the cost of free action. From my point of view, I was only in there for a split second. As for the word itself... Could I have a piece of paper?" Myra nodded as the DPA agent lent her notebook and a pen. On the first blank page, she carefully wrote the syllables アストロン. "A-su-to-ro-n. Romanized as either 'astron' or 'astolon.' I prefer the latter because it has nothing to do with stars."
"But what is it? That looks like Japanese to me."
"That's because it is Japanese. Or katakana, at least. The word itself has no meaning out of context, and that context is Dragon Quest. That's a video game series, by the way."
"What." It took no empathy at all to hear the disbelief in that voice. It made her grin, and then laugh out loud as the woman's confusion grew.
"Magic words don't actually need to mean anything, now do they? Like you said, they provide a mental framework, but I provide the magic. And for me, 'astolon' will always be the ultimate defense spell from Dragon Quest IV."
'Overcharged' is a new danger for Wiz-mutants to worry about which we have learned of. Ella and Allison emptied the back of their closets to give Chessa a wardrobe, nice. Cute outfit and so glad Chessa feels good about her appearance. Chessa actually refused to go shopping without Myra, aww. Janny for Jancenna, good nickname. Chessa's MID is ready, they do quick work.
Energizer 4, Exemplar 3, PSI 1, very interesting with that last bit."Yeah, that was fun." It was hard to describe how exhilarating it felt to let loose with blast after blast of lightning. She was pretty much immune to electrocution now, because those weird organs of hers sorta sucked up the excess juice, but that just meant she could feel every little pulse of voltage as it swept across her skin. It tickled in a way that made her knees jiggle from the memory alone. Maybe this was what the grown-ups meant when they said something was 'better than sex'? She'd have to try sometime, in order to compare, but that could wait for a much, much later time.
Possible mental exemplar trait, with how fast she can read and her memory I would say more than possible. All the good dragon names and electric-themed names taken, so that is how after brainstorming with Marcus they came up with Maidenclaw, codename gives away some but not all of her nature. And now we know how Marcus got Dr. Speers old codename. Myra has fireballs, ice missiles, and vacuum blasts in her spells known already, dang."Well, I'd imagine that dragonblooded get access to basic sorcerer abilities every few levels or so, if only to match the lore about draconic ancestry in D&D, and a lot of those could translate into psychic abilities, I suppose. Detect poison, daze... flare and light might fall under energizer for you... the message spell is pretty similar to telepathy, and there are three in there which are practically the same as telekinesis... What?" Myra asked, noticing the look on the agent's face.
"Your memory. Do you always recall things so well?"
Specialized drones to train against, plus he is going to re-invent the Search Snake, oh boy. MELA for the fireball spell, HYAD for the ice missiles spell which is impressive, and IO which left the drone hit by the ice missiles a scorch mark in the cement, yikes. Or in American Dragon Quest terms, Frizz, Crack, and Bang spells. BAGIMA, not that spell! Better known as Swoosh spell to American players of the DQ series. That spell is just plain brutal, those poor drones never stood a chance.
Stronger than the Bagima spell, meep. At least Marcus likes the challenges of creating stronger drones for her to train against."Close to thirty, if I do have an analog to everything on that list I wrote. Some are simple variations, though, either stronger or weaker."
Ms. Sevcik wishes to see one last trick of Myra's to see how it works.
Xaki or zaki in on some sites, better known as the Whack spell, instant death if the opponent doesn't resist it, can see why she is scared of it.She'd needed to explain each and every word on her list to the agent, telling her what effects it had -- or which she thought it might have -- as well as any reasons why she couldn't use it now. Quite a few spells, the ones connected to the high-level word variants, simply required too much power. Calling them to mind induced a visceral nausea inside her. There were two that were essentially kamikaze attacks, and she had no desire to put herself in bed with a coma, again. One of the shortest words, 'xaki', just plain scared her with its vague promise of destruction wrought. All those spells got marked in red.
MAHOTRA, Drain Magic, did she used this on Ms. Sevcik to recharge her own essence or can she used it on environmental magic, or does it work differently than the game spell? Moonbrook, very nice codename and gives nothing away about her powers unless you understand what it references.
Like I said earlier, pity those foolish enough to mess with her family.The Princess of Moonbrooke had been her favorite character when her dad had first introduced Dragon Warrior II to her in high school, and she could only hope to do justice to that memory. If anyone out there was foolish enough to mess with her family, well...
Myra tutored Speers on how to be personable, let's see if it helped. Speak with Senator Larson over some further matters over coffee, and I like Larson more and more, not giving Murtaugh ammunition is a good thing. And Speers shocks Larson by saying he is in favor of shutting the project down, thought that is what this was about.Wednesday, August 10th, 2016, post-meeting
The risk of being brought back only to die due to lethal burnout, I wouldn't want to risk it. Hope Speers has convinced Larson to vote to shut down the project."As are the risks," Speers countered. "Not to mention the machine's own limitations. Our ability to save the very people LIFELINE was intended for is heavily restricted, and the energy requirements make it unfeasible for general rescue. Then there is the mental, emotional, and physical cost..." He had a brief flashback to that moment three weeks before, when he'd pulled a limp and drowned Myra Paget from the box with his own two hands. Much as he'd fought it, his enthusiasm for LIFELINE had begun its slow, inexorable death there.
Marcus thinking the whole world is crazy, well, he isn't exactly wrong.Saturday, July 9th, 2016
But that sounds like a cute outfit for Chessa to wear. Poor Marcus, reacting to his new 2nd big sister like that and blushing. Glad Myra is the voice of reason, someone has to be in this family.Namely, his former big brother was standing right beside him in a pink poodle skirt and white blouse combination straight out of the Fifties, and looking good in it. This was not something that happened in a sane world.
Oh boy, going shopping with a new girl who actually wants to shop and try on clothes, this is going to take them hours. VW microbus that can change its paint job that easily, bet he never has to pay for a new paint job. Marcus calling shotgun while the girls chat about clothes and fashion in the back, plus Marcus and Derek each get $100 bucks to buy all the junk they can fit in the back trunk, yikes. Drone fights, heh.
Aww, Chessa has butterflies in her stomach, guess it has hit her now what she is about to do.
When Chessa goes about something, she dives in head first. Hehehe, already planning on keeping the poodle skirt. Treating the clothes like they give stat bonuses and in some cases, penalties, still a gamer at heart. Aww, no vanity specs because of the ridge of her nose.Today was her midterm exam in girliness and fashion, and she was determined to get an A.
Uh oh, why are there so few people around them? Don't tell me someone noted Chessa's appearance and those H1! affiliate guys are going to attack them. Some people just not liking her because of her appearance, ugh.
Derek excited to go parts shopping because of Marcus, his protégé. Thinking of himself as a role model and big brother to Marcus, Derek sure has changed since Ches first was brought back to life. Chessa as his little sister and with Myra it's complicated for many reasons, just admit you love her already! Interesting things to build drones of for Derek and Marcus.
Boy, what you can find at a market is amazing.The glass cases before him now, those held a broken treasure trove of knick-knacks. They were all devises -- or at least, sections of devises -- made from exotic alloys or amalgams and tempered in forces which he could only guess at.
Now there is a cold-themed name I've never seen used before now. Shit, that missile, why did this guy have to pull out that missile casing in front of Marcus."I got that at a meet up in Saskatchewan," the owner explained. The man was in his sixties, hair completely white where it stuck out from under his cap. "Fellow calling himself the Permafroster had a short-lived career up there robbin' banks, but managed to blow himself up the first time a hero group tried to stop him."
At least Derek got a good deal with the devise part. No wonder Derek bought that, still active when the devisor who built it is dead, that is very dangerous. Ooo, use it to make an ice weapon for Marcus, very nice. It is great to see Derek being a mentor and big brother to Marcus, it is something both of them need.
Myra had been worried about Chessa, but the new girl has taken to clothes shopping like a shark to water, clear the way! Jancenna pointing out her sort-of-empathic sense, so Myra finds it very easy to use now.
Now that is an interesting way to read others, very different than the receptive empathy we've seen with others.There were no lights or auras to figure out, no synesthetic crossover between the senses. Nor did she feel anyone's emotions as indistinguishable from her own, which had always struck her as a confusing way to go about it whenever empaths appeared in her old fantasy novels. Her method was one simple step beyond noticing, for lack of a better description. When she was paying attention to a person, she noticed the little tics and mannerisms, the whole gestalt of body language passing through her awareness and coming out as a reasonably accurate understanding of what that person was feeling. Sometimes that understanding ran counter to everything that the person was saying, but it still seemed accurate.
Great, not too many people happy about Chessa, judgemental fools. Good thing Ella has two weapons on her, some of them are hostile, hope it isn't some of those creeps from the other day.
Whoa, a way to keep track of her own magic, now that is something that should be taught to every Wiz-mutant.She closed her eyes and let herself fall backwards into her own mind. Janceena had taught her this trick before the agent had returned to her home office. It had been surprisingly simple to build up a little space within her head to serve as a sort of interface with her own magic, and already Myra had gotten into the habit of checking it every few hours to see how her levels of magical energy were doing. Janceena had called it essence, but she couldn't resist thinking of it as MP. Old habits died hard, after all. It wasn't like there was a hard numerical value to assign to magical amounts, though she'd taken to using the basic fireball spell as a base unit of measurement. One casting of ASTOLON equaled three fireballs, while that vacuum blast spell took about six times that.
And broken out of checking on her magic by Boggart, and confirms that some of the Defenders of the Rights of Man are there, just what we don't need today. Okay, I want to know where Chessa found a Japanese summer yukata. Calculation from Boggart, I don't like that, he better not be plotting to bring Chessa into his group.
These Defense of Humanity Troop 32 idiots again, they act like they are the authorities and can do what they want when mutants are involved. And the same idiot leader with them.
Bet those don't count unless the mutant in question has committed a crime first, not preemptively trying to arrest them just for being a mutant."We are here to pursue our duty as citizens and defend ourselves and our families from the mutant threat, first by exercising our right to perform a citizen's arrest, or if necessary to stand our ground in the face of imminent danger. Because of this, we advise that all bystanders quickly and calmly remove themselves from the premises!"
Crud, the meat smoker, noise-smoke-scream, and Marcus keeps himself from panicking, close one. The crazy man just took Chessa, Boggart! I almost pity these idiots right now for messing with this family, almost.
Green smoke sounds like tear gas from how Myra is reacting to it and cussing up a storm.
Myra was out for less than 5 minutes, quick recovery, very quick. So this is how Myra starts using a baseball bat, Boggart is going to pay for taking Chessa."That man hit us with the Cuckoo Channel's Knock-Out #6. Grey market devisor gas," she explained. "I had the inoculations from DARPA, but even so it made me terribly dizzy for a moment."
Marcus working on a devise as Derek drives, using the Permafroster's devise no less, pressure sure makes for strange field tests. Darn, the DoH men spreading out and harder to track. 6 Search Snake drones to search the aisles with, six of those built in 2 days, dang. Yikes, Dr. Speers activating the minibus's weapons array and is furious, these DoH creeps better flee now.
The Ice Wave from Mega Man 8, this is going to be brutal when Marcus uses it on these DoH bozos. 2, maybe 3 shots, that is pretty good for a kit-bashed creation in the field.Like the Dork had told him during that first, awkward explanation of his new powers, a little bit of theory could be a dangerous thing. The more he understood the underlying principles, the more he could make, but also the more he was bound by them, making it harder to break the rules. Give him just enough of the facts, however, and he could make wonderful, unstable miracles...
Fear someone with anxiety who finds a proper target to take their fears-made-reality out on.There was the Ice Wave, hanging from his shoulder by a bungee cord.
There was the Mega Buster mk. 1, really an air-pressure popgun with exploding ping-pong balls.
There was the Bubble Lead, currently clipped to his belt.
Chessa overcome by the green gas and not noticing the manhandling, having to remember things piecemeal, including the DoH leader's announcement and Boggart's little guys grabbing her as the gas grenade went off. *snickers* Thinking she has been kidnapped by the Seven Dwarves, priceless.
Okay, that is strange.They had the exact same look as the Disney characters, except that they were all green: dark, verdant clothes, pale lime skin, but orange beards and hair.
Boggart saying he kidnapped her to keep her safe, arrogant fool! Her family is there for that and you assume much by kidnapping her.
It has gone from kidnapping to keep her safe to full abduction now once you knocked her out when she protested, Boggart."I'll help you by telling you exactly where you went wrong!" she shouted. "Instead of offering assistance like a gentleman, you up and cart me off! Myra would've just said no before, but now she'll rip off your nutsack and force it down your throat till you choke to death, see if she doesn't!" Chessa fixed a green-eyed glare on Mr. Some-Dude. "And I'll be there to watch."
Boggart tsked. "A pity. I'd much rather have a willing maiden to rescue, but if needs be...."
Chessa opened her mouth to protest the 'maiden' comment, but the man cut her of with a blast of sweet green oblivion in spray can form. She barely felt the hands of the Seven Dwarfs as she landed backwards upon them.
Marcus outside the microbus, internal force field generators a part of it, nice. These DoH idiots think they know where the mutant they are looking for is, arrogance abounds.
You know "Bowling Over Bigots" would have a lot of people lining up to play.Derek could see the man's mouth move to form the word 'grenade,' but before he could find his voice the devise's force field had activated, ballooning to a four meter diameter and projecting three thousand newtons of force -- or three hundred kilograms of mass.

Six shorts from the Mega Buster, wonder if any of those DoH guys are still conscious. Yup, some of them fired back, good thing the microbus has those force fields. Top-mounted gattling guns with rubber bullets, that is going to smart.
The Ice Wave combined with that, *in Mortal Kombat voice* Brutality!Derek hadn't known what to expect with this one. His own knowledge of the Mega Man game series was limited to what Marcus had told him, and there hadn't been time for a detailed explanation. What it looked like was a tiny plug of ice, more cylinder than icicle, shooting headlong at the space where the enemy was soon to arrive. In the cylinder's wake, a flash of cryogenic gas coated everything with a thick layer of ice. It wouldn't last long, but he knew it wouldn't have to.
In the first second, the ground turned slick with ice.
By the third second, the first pair of boots met an unseasonably chill reception.
By the sixth second, the next five pairs had joined it.
After ten seconds, all the militia men were on the ground, and the ice had melted to slush. Derek pressed the last button on the weapons array, and from the undercarriage a thin wire lashed out, connecting the growing pool of water to the microbus's terribly efficient electrical power source.
Less than 10 minutes since this whole mess started and Myra trying to track Chessa by the little compass rose on Ella's smartphone. Boggart trying to break into the warehouse when they catch up to him, he is going to regret ever taking Chessa.
Ugh, this type of delusional savior."Do you really believe she is safe with you? The mutant-hunters are coming; they always come. The names and affiliations may change, but the reality never will. There will always be those who hate your sister for what she is. With us, she will be free."
Boggart and his group are worse than I thought. HYAD spell without speaking, ice-pick lobotomy. And Boggart thinks she is just an ice manifestor, fool jumps to conclusions without all the facts."We are the ones who have heard the future's call," Boggart declared. "We are the ones who realize it shall always be us against them. Not by our choice, but by theirs will there be conflict. There will be betrayal, murder, and war, the human race that was versus the human race that will exist for ages to come. For we have seen the destiny of the world, and it is worth the bloodshed, worth the pain we endure to hasten its arrival. We are the Advent, the dawn of the new dominion of man!"
He wants to use females are breeders in this war the Advent has planned, that is just sick and wrong. And telling Myra she doesn't have a choice, he needs to die now. Out of his knockout gas, good. Ectoplasm manifestor and he turns them all into one large being in the form of the wolfman, Boggart is overconfident in his own powers and underestimates others.
Instant death spell, placed on her baseball bat, the Slugger of Sins, this is epic."XAKI."
The word was a shining piece of darkness, so black that it hurt the eyes, and in its train followed a million little threads forming the rainbow of the night. Intellectually, she knew that 'negative energy' was an oxymoron, the sort of thing reserved for role-playing games and cheap fantasy fiction, but so what? That was her life now, and she had the Slugger of Sinners in her hands.
And the ectoplasmic construct is toast, Boggart takes a long time to gather that much ectoplasm from his response. Only to get tasered by Ella, this fool doesn't know when to back down from a superior force.
Wonder who will catch up to Boggart before the spell wears off, the police or the DoH idiots. Chessa in hand and time to get while the getting is good.This was the first time she'd used this spell while in a condition to appreciate its effects, and she watched with interest. It began with a silver fingerprint shining between his eyes, with threads of silver spiraling away from the loops and whorls. In turn, those threads spawned fractal patterns as delicate as snowflakes. They were beautiful in the brief instant they existed before merging into one homogeneous layer of silver. And then she was looking at a statue. Myra rapped on Boggart's forehead, nodding happily at the dull -thunk- that resulted.
All those sensations and noises without detail, Chessa is going to be confused until she is told what happened. KIALIQ aka the Tingle spell, basically what Myra says it is, removes paralysis, very handy spell to have. Ouch, half the cars Chessa can see with bullet holes, Derek still holding down the DoH guys still standing but can't move them back further. Okay, why did Myra have Chessa stick her head out like that, where did the bright light that hit her face come from?
Aimed Chessa's lightning sneeze at the mutant-hunting idiots, then uses the distraction of the attack to get them into the microbus.
So she reacts to bright light by sneezing, sunglasses are a very good idea. Darn, the poodle skirt and all the clothes left behind as they flee the area."True, but your accidental blasts are more powerful than your regular ones," Ella reminded her. "And I figured this was an excellent time to test you for the photic sneeze reflex. Remind me to buy you a good pair of sunglasses sometime soon, Chessa."
Bwahaha, classic."Girls..." she heard Marcus mutter from the front seat. Myra whacked him for her, like a big sister should.
Wednesday, August 10th, 2016
An hour avoiding a group of psychos who think they are the law. *sigh* At least they got Chessa's clothes, and Marcus' camera drones back, plus checked in the sellers who got gassed. And yay! Boggart caught by the police and has several priors on record."...and after that, we spent a rather tense hour driving randomly through suburbs, listening in on the police bands, and changing the Volkswagen's color twice along the way," Speers concluded as the senator listened on, wide-eyed. "Ella went back the following day to check on the sellers who got gassed by the Adventist, and collected both Chessa's clothes and the boy's camera drones at the same time. The Adventist -- Boggart, that is -- came out of that stasis lock just as the actual police arrived, and unsurprisingly he had several priors on his record. He's currently in the special containment section of the Illinois state penitentiary, awaiting trial."
Larson upset, thinking the Adventists are involved, thankfully just one rogue mutant.
Do I want to know who their prophet was?They've got their claws into the Evolution Rocks crowd, and I know for a fact that group has partisans in the intelligence agencies. Word may already have filtered down to them that the project exists, with or without details. As long as LIFELINE goes forward, it's only a matter of time until its specifics, both positive and negative, become more widely known. I shudder to think what the Adventists could do with it."
That would be a nightmare scenario, killing people just to bring them back so they manifest as mutants, the thought is scary."If the Adventists feel desperate enough, then at least some of them might not see anything wrong with mass executions, as long as they knew that they'd be 'saving' the victims shortly after. I admit," he said. "I didn't even consider this possibility until after I'd wondered if LIFELINE would be better shut down, but it really does make things more urgent. Give Murtaugh a good fight, maybe even wring a concession or two out of him, but please, senator. Please let him win in the end. I've already removed the vital elements from the box, for storage or destruction, and my assistant is filing paperwork with DARPA to relocate my lab out of state to start a new project."
Ouch, now Chessa's turn to go to the Holy Cross Cemetery and see where her original self is buried.Wednesday, July 13th, 2016
CHESTER WALTER FERRIS -- 5.9.1999 - 11.15.2013. Mom was buried right beside her -- him -- and the space on the far side was reserved for Dad.
Now that is the most unique eulogy I've ever heard."We are gathered here to witness the passing of Chester Ferris from one life to the next. I stand here today upon my own grave to declare that my former state of being has collapsed, to give way to a new one. I declare myself dead, a suicide by quantum mechanism, and my old life is dead with me. I declare myself not dead, like the hypothetical cat, the waveform of my existence going one way instead of the other. I am now, and forever shall be, Na'Chessa Rakia Barnes. Rest in peace, me."
Aww, Dr. Speers is going to miss them when they leave. Have to leave the area because of the DoH creeps, Dr. Speers has their itinerary and they will call him regularly, a road trip to a new home. Janceena's expecting them sometime next week, going down to Houston for Marcus' big goodbye.
Whoa, didn't expect Myra to do that. Bwahaha, Myra calling Derek adorkable, too cute. Chessa saying a mental goodbye to Chicago, Marcus has the VW's new games system up and Marvel vs. Capcom III, nice choice.And then big sis surprised everyone -- maybe even herself. Grabbing a handful of necktie, she pulled Dr. Speers' face down to her level and planted one right on the lips. Five, ten, fifteen... Chessa counted the seconds until the two of them came up for air. Marcus simply stared in shock. At about a minute's count, Myra released the Doc, and he slumped against the convertible like his knees weren't working right.
The perfect way to end this chapter of their lives.Yeah, she decided as she clobbered Marcus in the first round. Family was what you made of it and who you made it with, and she had definitely made the right decision, declaring the three of them siblings out of the box. Life could be funny, and it would be tough. But with all of them together, it certainly was worth living. There'd be no looking back for this dragon-girl.
So much happened in this story, it is hard to narrow it down to any few things. I just loved watching the journey of how the Barnes family came into being, how Myra and Dr. Speer's relationship grew with time and everything along the way. This story was the perfect way to show the tale of how they became a family and I can't wait to read more of their future adventures and life together. Thank you, Wasamon, for this tale which shows family is what you make of it and who you make it with.
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Here's what went into Chessa's character:
1- several articles on changes in personality and perspective with (the few fortunate) survivors of Golden Gate bridge suicide attempts.
2- a very strong dissatisfaction with his former body, with strong negative associations with his father
3- the liberating self-realization that everything that was making the old him miserable is now completely gone from his life, including the body
4- the urge to do a complete reinvention of her new self, fueled by a sudden happiness with her physical state and assisted by the clarity gained from literally throwing her life away in suicide and then sort-of not dying.
5- she overdoes things a lot at first, before settling down by the time the Whateley school year actually begins.
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Incidentally, my first RPG ever was in 2014 and it was straight-up 1970s AD&D, though that had nothing to do with money. On the other hand, money was the reason my family's only console was a used NES until we finally got a PlayStation in 2000. Though we did get a reasonable computer in '96, so we weren't totally behind the times.
Nice.The Quantum Suicides, second half wrote: she had definitely made the right decision, declaring the three of them siblings out of the box.
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Missing a capital on the beginning of a sentence.The other militiamen were rushing back, alerted by the sounds of gunfire. the tracking program plotted out their most likely course on both his phone and Marcus's tablet,
Repeated "fired"a machine-gun-looking thing that fired fired a few rounds
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"Ah, yes," said Derek. "This is Ms. Janceena Sevcik, a friend of mine who happened to be in Chicago this weekend. She's with the Department of Paranormal Affairs."
She was also in Pat's story too? ISTR it was unusual to see the DPA in action at the time the story came out.
ASTOLON.
The word had a presence, a mass without substance that drew those blinding spots and wavering lines to it, knotting them together to form the most wondrous patterns. She could feel the tears lifting from her cheeks, see them pooling upon the granite square, shining bright silver as they coated the flowers and plaque alike in liquid light.
Even though the source is anime, this style of magic reminded me of Jack Frost of the Invisibles.
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Sir Lee wrote: Couple more typos:
Missing a capital on the beginning of a sentence.The other militiamen were rushing back, alerted by the sounds of gunfire. the tracking program plotted out their most likely course on both his phone and Marcus's tablet,
Repeated "fired"a machine-gun-looking thing that fired fired a few rounds
Thanks, fixed.
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Why yes, yes I did.
Chessa has the cleanest break of all of them, including Speers. Speers has the guilt of his own success, knowing he's responsible for them, torn and confused by his interest in Myra while also not wanting to step in, until Marcus drags him in. Marcus needs him, Myra needs him. Marcus and Myra both have obvious trauma. Marcus may eventually get over it, maybe, but Myra is always going to have Melanie.
The impression I get was that Myra is suppressing her grief and moving forward with the others as her purpose, while Marcus is slowly, slowly actually overcoming his trauma.
I'm honestly the most worried about Myra. Her strength seems unlimited, but there's this undertone that it won't always be.
Chessa's reaction and behavior is perfectly normal, given her circumstances. She gets to start over because she wanted to. She has the shortest gap in time, nobody is looking for her, she wants to break all ties, and got into fights over it, and she has a new family that she loves and loves her back. What's a little GSD to get in the way of newfound happiness? Her old body was a source of a number of her frustrations.
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So, assuming the unproven hypothesis that Ches was an undiagnosed transwoman, added to other body issues she had, finding herself in a copy of Na'Chessa's body would be just the opposite of traumatic.
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I wonder what happened on his birthday, if anything, since he's got a whole sorta-family to celebrate with.
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And he's called "Dr. Speers the younger", so his father was a Doctor too? Huh.
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WMG: The Box works like a Ressurection Spell, but doesn't need to capture the soul at the moment of death, and rebuilds the body... somehow.
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