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Question As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
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- Malady
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Title makes me wary, feels all prophecy-ish...
But it might just be the length and unconventional topic.
Morgana 1st Person POV is pretty cool!
The wards in Erica and Cally's room seem primed to go wrong, at some point.
How much do the magic staff know about Thulia's demon-ness and stuff? Morgana's magic trouble isn't because of that?
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted part 1 comments
No idea how the unexpected events of their teammates is going to affect them, oh boy. Laura, Bianca, and Morgana, none of them had suspected Cally and Erica were changelings. Morgana brings up a good point, what is to keep Jack from digging into the rest of the team's social history and outing them as well? Hehe, I would like to see Jack trying to chase Morgana's fake history and getting infuriated the further he dug.Sunday 2nd October, evening, Poe Cottage, Bianca and Morgana's room.
Ooo, didn't know about the nasty traps. Kurenai checks all their backgrounds, shoot, I would ask her to check all the changelings at Whateley just to be on the safe side. Who else might Jack have stumbled upon while digging into Cally's history?"The fake background and stuff was built for AEGIS by GCHQ, in case any of the cult who kidnapped me found out about me and tried to trace down it. Apparently it leads to some very nasty traps."
Michelle Brown finding Hikaru, her former RA, outside her new dorm room in Poe. Hhm, still has times reserved in Melville facilities in her name, nice to know Michelle is still welcome at Melville, she needs that right now. If someone isn't nice to Michelle I pity them, having to deal with Mrs. Horton, the Poe RAs and Hikaru. *sigh* Just because they are looking out for Tia, Hikaru and other changelings don't mean the Poesies wish them transferred to the dorm. I wonder where Hikaru will go with this petition.Sunday 2nd October, Evening, Poe Cottage
Morgana having morning cheerfulness once again, hehehe. Chessa doesn't think it's nature, Bianca has no idea how long it will last, and Morgana is singing in Welsh, annoying Laura that she is singing well. I like seeing Morgana happy, I hope it lasts a while longer at least.Monday 3rd October, 7.15am, Poe Showers
Some of the girls still giving Cally grief, a lot of them supportive with some good, some bad, better than I expected with the fallout. Bianca at least gets them thinking about security, with how some students will react it is a good idea. And warding by Bianca and Morgana, they deserve to feel safe in their own room.Monday 3rd October, breakfast, Crystal Hall
*facepalms* Laura, Morgana would have spoken up if she wanted to sing in a band. Putting a friend who is shy about something on the spot, good grief. And Morgana states she is shy, don't push it with her or it might cause an issue. Just the idea of going in front of people likely to make Morgana go dragon, yikes.
Magic theory class now, Bianca and Morgana early and talking about the situation with Cally and Erica's room. So Morgana is going to do the wards by herself, wonder what could happen. Smokey sleeping on the table gives Morgana an idea how Cally and Erica can know when their wards have been breached, I wonder what.
Lunchtime at the Crystal Hall, Laura, Bianca, and Morgana getting odd glances from a number of students, uh oh. Hermione calling Cally a sexual pervert, ugh, that girl needs a hard lesson and soon. Nice comeback by Morgana, got Hermione so flustered she couldn't think up a good one herself.
Great..., sounds like everyone in MMM is being harshed due to Cally being outed. Laura at least lightens the mood and gets Cally distracted, that bunny incident will never leave Morgana alone. Bwahaha, love the back and forth between Laura and Morgana.
Great, she doesn't need the new Wondercute after her as well, Morgana just can't catch a break.Laura huffed. "I do not blow up stuff, I...er...ballistically disassemble things!"
Morgana has to talk to Grimes, oh boy. Morgana having to recap the whole tale to Grimes, yet she has no idea who caused the shock she felt. Darn, Grimes thinks someone caused it but with no witnesses...Monday, 4pm after magic class.
So the exercises to help Morgana improve her control of her fire connection hasn't been working, I wonder if she needs different exercises.
So her essence control exercises are going well, good to hear."Hmm. Well, Morgana, I'm happy to see that your essence exercise is going well; indeed you have made considerable progress during the month. Now take a minute, and then I want you to do the exercise we gave you for more smoothly integrating and controlling your fire essence."
Sounds like some external force is interfering in her control over the fire essence, but what?I could feel the energy, but it was as if something was interfering with it inside me, not allowing me to control it but instead sending it running through me in spastic little jerks. I just kept doing my exercise, assuming that this effect was me not controlling it properly.
At least we know something odd is going on now."Yes, I see. There is definitely something odd going on here. You start off well, then something seems to be twisting the energy, and from then on the exercise isn't doing anything useful."
What if the case isn't a what, but a who?"I think we need to look into this more carefully, Morgana. The exercise should have led to improvements, you are doing it correctly. I know your particular situation is fairly unusual, and we don't have much experience in your particular type of issues. So I am going to try and evaluate your specific problems more deeply, so we can pin down what exactly is the cause. Then we can work out a system that will lead to improvement for you." She gave me a serious look before continuing. "In the meantime, please try and avoid casting magic in public if possible; if this loss of control happens again it might not be a bunny."
Morgana being so happy, she is having time with Thulia more, could this be the source of her worsening control?She hadn't wanted to worry Morgana, but what she'd see had made her much less optimistic than she'd been before they started. Worryingly, Morgana's control had worsened, despite practicing as she'd been told, and she couldn't work out why. What she needed was more information, and possibly different types of information.
6 PM now, at Laura's lab, Morgana having to stop to let her heart-rate come down, PTSD can take a lifetime to recover from, months and you will still react to reminders of it easily. Earplugs color-coded for each ear they go in and a magnet to pull them out easily, Laura does good work.
Boy, Laura adds all the bells and whistles when she makes something."OK, as we agreed they will filter out the sort of odd frequencies sirens use, as well as having a level filter for very loud noises. But then I thought, you really need to wear them all the time, because you won't have time to put them in if someone attacks you. Now that isn't an issue for hearing people, but you can't use earbuds at the same time, so I added bluetooth to them. So you can listen to music and stuff on them. Since I was doing that, I added some software so you can set them to an encrypted channel if you want to."
Oh man, I would pay good money for earplugs like these. *winces as Laura says one of the phrases you should never say* 140 decibels, ouch. Over 90 db a bit of distortion and at max only a painful hum, shoot, I want a pair of my own even more now. Now I can't wait for Chained Melody to pull something again, hehe.
Mrs. Horton trying to get the new headmaster to see reason about Tia being put back in Poe.Tuesday morning, Mr. Mazarin's Office
And it is about Tia's health, according to Mazarin the health of more than one student.“The computer records! The old hard files in my possession, not the new ones since... the incident, those show Miss Del Bosque assigned to Poe! Where her friends are, and where we are!”
Okay, why am I nervous when Mazarin smiles?“Never mind, I should not have gone into depth there. I'll tell you what, Mrs. Horton – I'll make a deal with you. Next week, I will schedule a hearing. You bring your arguments, bring your rules and precedent... and if you sway me then, I'll sign the transfer papers myself. But Melville cottage will have the chance to argue their case. Is that acceptable to you?”
Lunchtime, outside the Crystal Hall, Gravedigger checking out his hair in a mirror. Amadeus is a ghost which he can see, please let it not be a famous one. Gravedigger can control ghosts, that is just so wrong.
Oh crud, I don't like the way he is thinking about Cally. And thinking Morgana is a demoness and lying about it, really don't like Gravedigger right now.The sight of her brought a scowl to his face. The boy-that-had-been had been turned into a beautiful girl, almost as it were by accident, and then she went and hid that from everyone as if she were ashamed of being a girl!
With what he thought about Cally and this, I fear he might try a bodyswap spell on Morgana now.He thought more on that as he finished his food. Now a demon had powers he'd be happy to trade well, anything for. If she was actually a demoness.
Now after Calculus class with Timothy King watching Morgana and perving out on her, ugh. I didn't like him when he made the bet involving Morgana, he is just digging himself in deeper now. Ugh, and he is one of those who think Cally is a sex-shifting pervert. Calling Inkblood for a background check on Morgana, Timothy just screwed up big time. And he is a senior from the sounds of it, so would get in trouble for anything which happens with a girl under 16.
What is Ms. Grimes up to with bringing up the runes from weeks ago?Wednesday 5th October, Magic Lab
Ah, makes senses, no two individuals would be alike in how they deal with magic. Oh boy, a way of casting which Bianca can't do, spoken magic doesn't work for her or on her."For those of you who were paying attention earlier in the term, you will remember I told you there are many different ways of casting spells, and that we would be teaching you some simple cantrips like these. Today I'm going to show you one of the alternate ways of casting, and over the next few weeks we will be learning some others. Now I don't expect all of you to be equally good with all of the methods, but later on you will settle on a number of techniques that work best for you, and this is the start of identifying them."
Well, we know there are laws pertaining to magic, was wondering about magical spell cards and how it works with the law myself, nice to have an answer. That last suggestion complicates things for Bianca though.If you carry them around, and are involved in any sort of action off the campus that involves the authorities, they will examine and take note of what you have on you.
Now while there are variations depending on the local laws, magical spells fall into three main groups. Purely defensive spells, such as a shield, are considered permissible. Second are spells which are not purely defensive to your person, but are non-damaging and non-lethal, such as a snare spell. These are usually acceptable, although if the authorities are in a mind to prosecute you, they can use them against you. Third is spells which really only have an offensive use - it's quite tricky to persuade the police you are carrying a defensive fireball, and having such a slip on you could if they wished be construed as carrying a concealed weapon."
Morgana doing better than Bianca or AJ, interesting.
Poor Bianca, not able to follow the pattern in her mind as easily, guess it might be another limitation of the nature of her inheritance.Of course, what I hadn't told them was that I had an advantage at casting a spell by 'drawing' it in the air. As with my drawing spell diagrams, I could see, faintly, a purple line of the magic I was using to prepare the spell. Only part of it, it faded very quickly, so I couldn't see the complete pattern, but it was a great help.
White Snake coming over to chat with Bianca and Morgana, he wants to know stuff about Hikaru, wants to get to know her better, oh bother, the boy has a crush. In Poe yet interested in Hikaru, so no messing with him. Ask Tia and Laura about Hikaru, wonder how that is going to go.
Dickinson cottage now at 5 pm, Morgana going to check up on Cally and Erica, only to be blocked by a frowning girl who asks why she is there. At least Morgana keeps her cool and explains who she is, Mrs. Plimsol informed as Milena takes Morgana up to Cally and Erica's room.
Secret team stuff, good to see Milena doesn't dig any further.
Erica teasing Morgana, Cally teasing Erica about it, bwahaha. Ifor, a cute red plushie dragon, linked to the wards so his eyes glow green when they are broken, nice. 6 spell slips to ward the room and hiding them as much as possible, nice spread with only one visible on the wall."Enter freely and of your own will."
Very interesting."Well, yes and no. It's easiest to ward an area that has a topological correspondence to the spell. So Bianca's single slip creates a sphere. Since your room is a rectangle, one on each wall works well. I could have used four, that defines a triangular space, but it would have left gaps. Or I could have just put one in the middle, but it wouldn't be as powerful."
That was quick, impressive.
Repower on each new moon and full moon, nice, certainly feels magical.I shook my head at Erica. "Well, not physical ones, or anyone coming in would break it. But it should stop magic or powers from seeing or hearing what you're up to in here." I held up my hand before the obvious question. "And yes, you can hear people knock on the door." I grinned briefly. "We made that mistake the first time Bianca put wards on our room, not anymore."
Wizard of Oz reference, nice.I rolled my eyes at her. "What, you'd prefer if there was smoke and lightning and lots of fire? In your bedroom?" I raised my arms up in an ominous and perfectly useless gesture. "Pay no attention to the dragon behind the curtain..."
Evening at Poe cottage, Morgana going to the library to research some stuff and do homework. Back at Poe and text from Mrs. Horton, a package delivered, wonder what it is. A box with orange and purple stripes, unreadable return address, I wonder... Federal Hexpress, I think she got a package from Thulia, this is going to be good.
A sheaf of notes came with it, is it a new way to contact Thulia?It was beautiful, a shallow bowl about a foot across. It seemed to be made of obsidian, with complicated gold-inlaid runes running all around the outside.
Modified scrying bowl, interesting."Well - yeah, I can read them, but it's like maths - just because I can read the symbols doesn't mean I always know what it does right away, you know? And these are pretty complicated."
I wonder if Thulia will have answers for why Morgana is having trouble controlling her fire essence while in dragon form. iBowl, bwahaha. Midnight there time best for contacting Thulia, figures.I grinned at her sarcastic tone. "Well, the idea is its part of a matched pair, they are entangled at a quantum level, apparently. The wards around Whateley mean you can't do the usual scrying or communication through them without setting off all sorts of alarms. By using a matched set, and only using them for communicating, they'll only use a trickle of power and can slip under the radar, as it were."
Bianca hit by a piece of exploding robot at lunchtime, she has healed from it but why do I have the feeling it wasn't an accident. Kunzite and Kyanite, I wonder what the Whateley store doesn't have stocked. Mercury/Gold amalgam paint, whoa, they have stuff like that, a shopping spree in this store could bankrupt even a rich kid. Dang, low on money now for the rest of the month, poor Morgana.Thursday 6th October, late afternoon.
Good that she found their lab empty, though I doubt Ms. Grimes won't find out about this somehow.
Talk about expensive mistakes, if they happen. Nice cloth and frame, geometry equipment early in the term, guess drawing those things for magic requires precision. Interesting read of all the steps and detail required to prepare, love learning how much goes into magical rituals.I had done some reading up first, in particular on how to prepare to do this sort of thing, and if I got anything wrong, I'd just have to buy more supplies and try again.
In London, England, Nephandus meeting with the Major, giving a go on the operation, oh boy. Evac on Tuesday night and extraction, I knew Nephandus would be bad news once he grows up. I'm trying to recall what the operation is about, guessing it is about 'reacquiring' Morgana.
An appointment with Caitlin Bardue, don't tell me she knows what Morgana is up to already. One of the teacher's magic lab rooms, hmm.Friday 7th October, after classes
Caitlin's magic lab room obviously. So Grimes called in Caitlin to help with Morgana weird issues with her fire powers, goodie. Oh boy, having Morgana strip naked for testing her fire, we know why Caitlin was brought in.I looked around with a fair amount of suspicion as I did as instructed. This lab looked nothing like ours. It did have some of the same sort of circles and inscriptions, but it was also half full of metalworking stuff, including what looked like a full sized forge. Which was different.
The separate secondary eddy, could that be coming from Thulia? And it gets stronger the more times Morgana tries, yikes.The girl nodded, first doing a basic light cantrip, then a more complicated darkness one. She could see the whirlpool of the girls essence pool responding to her, but it looked pretty normal. A few more eddies and disturbances that usual, but she hadn't been training long, and there didn't seem to be anything really out of the ordinary. Caitlin nodded, gesturing to her to change. Morgana shifted into her 'dragon' form, and started through the exercises again. This time, there was a considerable difference.
Caitlin had already seen the swirl of essence grow stronger, as the girl drew down more fire energy, taking it into herself. That looked fine, and given the details Grimes had sent her on the kid's powers, working as expected. However she noted with a frown that as she did, there was something - she would almost have called it a separate secondary eddy - that strengthened as fire energy flowed into the girl. This time, when she tried to cast a simple spell, the effects were more interesting. Her light spell grew, turning the red of a fire, as it pulled in a lot more energy than it should have done. What was most interesting to Caitlin was that the disruption seemed to have far more to do with that secondary eddy than anything else.
No use worrying Morgana until they know more, I guess. Ouch, Morgana is going to be a lab rat for a while to figure all of this out."There were definitely some inconsistencies, Morgana. I'm not sure what they mean yet, I need to make some notes and consult with Grimes. There is something odd going on, but don't worry, we'll sort it out and get you working properly. Now run along and please stay clear of the bunnies!"
Poe Cottage, just before midnight now. Bianca asleep and Morgana casting a protective circle around herself, interesting secondary purpose.
Figures a few drops of blood are needed. Now that is an awesome spell for communication.This was different from the written magic I'd been practicing for class - instead of drawing a glyph and putting energy in to activate a spell, usually immediately, this was slowly and careful energising a complex set of pre-prepared spells. I had to do each one carefully and in a particular order.
I don't even want to think of how much the charges for calling from another dimension would be. Morgana telling Thulia about Whateley and the kind of things that had gone one since she arrived, that should take a while. Asleep at 2 am and a happy dragon, she is going to be even more happy in the mornings now, isn't she?She nodded. "True, but it's a real pain trying to get a decent connection from here to you. Do you any idea how hard it is to get your phone people to handle an interdimensional account? And these bowls have another advantage - they can't be overheard."
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Malady wrote: Hmm... Not very plot heavy? Feels very setup, more questions than answers... Gives a lot to speculate on...
Title makes me wary, feels all prophecy-ish...
But it might just be the length and unconventional topic.
Morgana 1st Person POV is pretty cool!
The wards in Erica and Cally's room seem primed to go wrong, at some point.
How much do the magic staff know about Thulia's demon-ness and stuff? Morgana's magic trouble isn't because of that?
It is a bit more setup-ish (is that a word?) than I usually do, as its Part 1 of a 4 part story. So lots more to be revealed.
To come : Drama, action, angst, and a lot more about...mmm, you'll have to read it and see!
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Astrodragon
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Malady wrote:
How much do the magic staff know about Thulia's demon-ness and stuff? Morgana's magic trouble isn't because of that?
They have Morgana's account of what hapenned to her, and the report from AEGIS, but while they have an idea about what Thulia is, its a fair amount of speculation and inference. They dont have much in the way of facts, and short of summoning her and interrogating her...
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Thulia is very computational and mathematical with her magic, and even if Morgana is impressed upon by Thulia, it doesn't feel like Morgana will follow that trend in the more frantic castings traditions of Whateley. Bianca has the same problem, as brought up during the magic class segment. "Methodical" and somatic casting don't really mix too well. Morgana's pretty good with careful and slow rituals, like Thulia uses. I like how much detail is put in to explain the level of care she put in setting up the bowl.
By the way...
Is this a...rotary scrying bowl?This was different from the written magic I'd been practicing for class - instead of drawing a glyph and putting energy in to activate a spell, usually immediately, this was slowly and careful energising a complex set of pre-prepared spells. I had to do each on carefully and in a particular order.
I'm really very curious about the source of the eddy in Morgana's magic. Is it the connection with Thulia? Could it be her regular essence and fire essences causing some sort of destructive wave interference (Caitlin's perspective)? It gets stronger when she pulls fire energy in...but Caitlin doesn't think it has to do with how Morgana draws essence...

Grimes teasing her about the bunny felt really mean. But I guess it was meant in good fun. Petshop, more annoying to Grimes than the TLW? Grimes is a good teacher, and she did notice how distressed Morgana was about it and ran her through an exercise to calm her down, make her understand that she's not completely lacking in control. And it worked! Morgana got out of the funk she's been in since she exploded the rabbit.
Singing at the beginning, and apparently quite well. The earplug meant to stop lower-grade sonic attacks but more importantly Chained Melody's magic. The interference eddy of her fire magic. Grimes lesson on alternate types of casting.
Does this all add up to Morgana learning her fire essence needs to be cast in lyrical chant, just as Chained Melody does?

There was one part of the story that completely, totally, utterly, for all eternity, utterly totally completely broke suspension of disbelief. Forever.
"Wow, it's really lovely, isn't it! What does it do?"
I blinked at her. "You can't read the runes?"
"Well - yeah, I can read them, but it's like maths - just because I can read the symbols doesn't mean I always know what it does right away, you know? And these are pretty complicated."

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Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
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I promise it will all be explained during this story. I'm not so cruel as to tease you with it any longer than that.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Katssun wrote: Hmm. I like how much detail is put in to explain the level of care she put in setting up the bowl.
It's a good way to show that it even mages have to put in the work and allocate resources to get all the nice toys.
Katssun wrote: Does this all add up to Morgana learning her fire essence needs to be cast in lyrical chant, just as Chained Melody does?
Or, it could be an artifact of the control mechanism meant to be used on the cult's living generator/planar tap project and someone else has to speak/chant to pull the power through her. It could also act as a "poison pill" in case the subject tries to use that power for itself: just enough control allowed for self-upkeep and a glimmer of hope, but not enough to challenge its keepers without immediate punishment (pain, incinerated bunnies or bystanders, etc.)
Katssun wrote: There was one part of the story that completely, totally, utterly, for all eternity, utterly totally completely broke suspension of disbelief. Forever.
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Bianca said "maths."![]()
Her roommie does pronounce "math" with that Engish lisp. Maybe it's contagious?
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Isn't Tia in Melville because Hikaru is in Melville? Tia is publicly outed to the world, so it really doesn't matter which cottage she's in, and putting her in Poe might risk the secret, though her current level of anxiety and medical condition would still justify it. Actually, her medical condition might be a good reason to keep her out of Poe, now that I think about it.Dreamer wrote:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Mrs. Horton trying to get the new headmaster to see reason about Tia being put back in Poe.Tuesday morning, Mr. Mazarin's Office
And it is about Tia's health, according to Mazarin the health of more than one student.“The computer records! The old hard files in my possession, not the new ones since... the incident, those show Miss Del Bosque assigned to Poe! Where her friends are, and where we are!”
Okay, why am I nervous when Mazarin smiles?“Never mind, I should not have gone into depth there. I'll tell you what, Mrs. Horton – I'll make a deal with you. Next week, I will schedule a hearing. You bring your arguments, bring your rules and precedent... and if you sway me then, I'll sign the transfer papers myself. But Melville cottage will have the chance to argue their case. Is that acceptable to you?”
So anyway, I might be completely off base, but isn't Mazarin hinting that Mrs. Horton that he's violating the policy to put Changelings in Poe
Hikaru is royalty (more or less?), and her changeling status is a Imperial House secret. Revealing it would be a major political and social blow to Japan, especially since she's also Amaterasu's avatar.
Hikaru needs Tia as support. That's why Tia is there. Even if it takes a long time for Hikaru to confide more in Tia.
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Katssun wrote:
Isn't Tia in Melville because Hikaru is in Melville? Tia is publicly outed to the world, so it really doesn't matter which cottage she's in, and putting her in Poe might risk the secret, though her current level of anxiety and medical condition would still justify it. Actually, her medical condition might be a good reason to keep her out of Poe, now that I think about it.Dreamer wrote:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Mrs. Horton trying to get the new headmaster to see reason about Tia being put back in Poe.Tuesday morning, Mr. Mazarin's Office
And it is about Tia's health, according to Mazarin the health of more than one student.“The computer records! The old hard files in my possession, not the new ones since... the incident, those show Miss Del Bosque assigned to Poe! Where her friends are, and where we are!”
Okay, why am I nervous when Mazarin smiles?“Never mind, I should not have gone into depth there. I'll tell you what, Mrs. Horton – I'll make a deal with you. Next week, I will schedule a hearing. You bring your arguments, bring your rules and precedent... and if you sway me then, I'll sign the transfer papers myself. But Melville cottage will have the chance to argue their case. Is that acceptable to you?”
So anyway, I might be completely off base, but isn't Mazarin hinting that Mrs. Horton that he's violating the policy to put Changelings in Poe
Hikaru is royalty (more or less?), and her changeling status is a Imperial House secret. Revealing it would be a major political and social blow to Japan, especially since she's also Amaterasu's avatar.
Hikaru needs Tia as support. That's why Tia is there. Even if it takes a long time for Hikaru to confide more in Tia.
Anything specific about Tia, you really need to ask Nagrij.
But given that Tia is on meds, undergoing councelling, and generally a nutso bunny, moving her to Poe for mental issues would be perfectly reasonable - after all, it is the crazy cottage.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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- Malady
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Kettlekorn wrote: I don't see the section of the story you're discussing. It jumps from Monday evening with the earplugs to Tuesday at lunch, with no mention of Mazarin. Has there been an accidental deletion during editing?
Not exactly, an accidental deletion, post-posting...
Tuesday morning, Mr. Mazarin's Office
Alright, so I've read the files – what seems to be the problem, Mrs. Horton?” The tall, dignified gentleman asked politely.
“I'm not having any of that, Mr. Mazarin. You know very well what the problem is.”
“State it for the record?” Mazarin replied, pointing at the microphone placed in plain sight on the desk.
“Lucretia Del Bosque. She should be in Poe cottage.
“Her records clearly state an assignment to Melville cottage.”
“The computer records! The old hard files in my possession, not the new ones since... the incident, those show Miss Del Bosque assigned to Poe! Where her friends are, and where we are!”
“An upraised voice isn't needed for the recording, Mrs. Horton,” Mazarin chided gently.
“...Perhaps.”
“Lucretia Del Bosque is a unique form of student; one with powerful backers in the form of a rich former student and a somewhat powerful and influential celebrity. The notations on the old file you bring up state both requested Miss Del Bosque be placed in Melville, for various reasons.”
Mrs. Hortons mouth tightened. “Yes, I read those. But comments made by those not in the know shouldn't be considered; we are discussing a student's mental health here.”
“The health of more than one student.” Mazarin stated.
“Pardon?”
“Never mind, I should not have gone into depth there. I'll tell you what, Mrs. Horton – I'll make a deal with you. Next week, I will schedule a hearing. You bring your arguments, bring your rules and precedent... and if you sway me then, I'll sign the transfer papers myself. But Melville cottage will have the chance to argue their case. Is that acceptable to you?”
Mrs. Horton was silent for a moment. “Just what are you planning?” She finally asked.
Mr. Mazarin smiled.
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In possibly related things... Where does Calibrate room?
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- Astrodragon
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Its "Ar Hyd y Nos" - English: All Through the Night
All the stars' twinkles say
All through the night
"This is the way to the realm of glory,"
All through the night.
Other light is darkness
To show true beauty
The Heavenly family in peace
All through the night.
O, how cheerful smiles the star,
All through the night
To light its earthly sister
All through the night.
Old age is night when affliction comes
But to beautify man in his late days
We'll put our weak light together
All through the night.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Astrodragon
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Dreamer wrote:
Morgana being so happy, she is having time with Thulia more, could this be the source of her worsening control?
Morgana having her power screwed up because she's happy?
No, it's not that.
I might be evil, but I'm not THAT evil!
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- elrodw
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Astrodragon wrote:
Dreamer wrote:
Morgana being so happy, she is having time with Thulia more, could this be the source of her worsening control?
Morgana having her power screwed up because she's happy?
No, it's not that.
I might be evil, but I'm not THAT evil!
I don't know about that - you keep claiming in our authors chats that since my angst got all used up by flooding, rebuild, and knee surgery (and pain), you're going to take over as King of Angst. Under those conditions, yes you would do that.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Astrodragon
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elrodw wrote:
Astrodragon wrote:
Dreamer wrote:
Morgana being so happy, she is having time with Thulia more, could this be the source of her worsening control?
Morgana having her power screwed up because she's happy?
No, it's not that.
I might be evil, but I'm not THAT evil!
I don't know about that - you keep claiming in our authors chats that since my angst got all used up by flooding, rebuild, and knee surgery (and pain), you're going to take over as King of Angst. Under those conditions, yes you would do that.
I didn't say I wouldn't be evil to her in a different way!
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Malady
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Astrodragon wrote:
elrodw wrote:
Astrodragon wrote:
Dreamer wrote:
Morgana being so happy, she is having time with Thulia more, could this be the source of her worsening control?
Morgana having her power screwed up because she's happy?
No, it's not that.
I might be evil, but I'm not THAT evil!
I don't know about that - you keep claiming in our authors chats that since my angst got all used up by flooding, rebuild, and knee surgery (and pain), you're going to take over as King of Angst. Under those conditions, yes you would do that.
I didn't say I wouldn't be evil to her in a different way!
So, you said her magic isn't screwed up 'cause she's happy...
You never rejected the idea that Thulia connections are causing it... Hmm...
- Sir Lee
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...when Morgana is doing her magical prepping, she pricks her finger with her athame and lets 3 drops of.... WATER... fall onto the bowl. Shouldn't it be "blood"?
A few scattered typos...
After Calculus class, there's this: "I haven’t started t o get serious yet."
At one point, Morgana muses she would be "flat groke"
"So, what are we going to do about setting some wards up in Erica and Calls room?" -> should be "Cally's"
"The feel fine, but I can’t tell any difference" -> Should be "They"
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It looks liek he reloaded a version without some typo corrections, yes, its blood not water
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- DanZilla
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Astrodragon wrote: I'm sorry, Dan had some issues.
It looks like he reloaded a version without some typo corrections, yes, its blood not water
Yep, it was my goof... I thought I had the most recent copy in my files (mistakenly) and replaced the file online... as it turned out it was missing those two sections and some typo corrections. it'll be fixed-up shortly.
***Fixed***
- Astrodragon
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Malady
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www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/43991/kubla-khan
Next line, being:
"By woman wailing for her demon-lover!"
Intriguing!
How much of the story is a poem reference, and how much should I be looking for ghosts, I wonder... Ghosts... Penny Dreadful? Hmm... *shrug*
- Astrodragon
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Malady
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We still dunno why, right?
Also, since Matsu is all girl-collect-y, might adding Lapin in, might 'cause problems 'cause she's the Bunny Girl type, and would trigger Matsu, or something? She'd be the medical reason to keep Lapin far away?
- Astrodragon
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Of course, that doesn't have any effect on the rumours..

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Kristin Darken
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Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- Malady
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And ninja'd! Ha!
Now, only if Mrs. Horton gave info to the Magic Teachers...
That rescue mission stuff... I wonder how that'll connect to the Whateley plot...
Also, customizing away irritating bits of human physical physiology... I bet she can only get preggers when she wants to?? Maybe some marriage spell or something, *shrugs*
Devises, being crazy-tech, worries about Reality / Luck Warpy effects... Oof.
Hmm... AJ's got a crush, who we dunno... Could be lying about not being in the same class as his crush... But a Spy Kids candidate... I think we've seen them all, but I'm not sure who is who...
Reinforce and Toison stuff... Those rumors about their love life is new...
ask fey > ask Fey
been nice [overspaced]
- null0trooper
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Malady wrote: Hmm... AJ's got a crush, who we dunno... Could be lying about not being in the same class as his crush... But a Spy Kids candidate... I think we've seen them all, but I'm not sure who is who...
Isn't it cute when the pet humans fall in love?
Malady wrote: Reinforce and Toison stuff... Those rumors about their love life is new...
IIRC, the assumptions usually made about shifter sexuality would challenge DeviantArt to keep up with.
Mr. Mazarin smiled, showing impeccable teeth. “I'm afraid that person is no longer with us... or indeed, with any academic institution, for the rest of their lives.”
Once again, we see that Lawful Evil gets things Done.
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Morgana chatting with Adam as they wait for Toison to join them, Morgana wishing to pick her brain about stuff, hhm.Sunday 9th October, 10am, outside Crystal Hall
If only more people were as enlightened as Adam on such matters. And then he shows he is a bit naive on such matters, being honest about such things isn't always safe nor would it have ensured it was a lot less of a problem if she had been honest from the start about her changeling status."No, not really, but there are some that would have." He scowled down at the table. "Why does it matter so much what sex someone was, if it's now different?"
Heh, figures Adam and Dawn are getting up to things didn't know they went that far though. Dawn a healer and mage, forgot she was a healer. And nothing is ever simple when it comes to magic and healing, it seems. Dr. Tennant teaching them healing stuff, wonder how advanced they get.
Now 11 pm at Poe Cottage in Morgana and Bianca's room. Bianca meeting Thulia, this will be interesting. And the old saying applies, "It isn't paranoia if they are actually out to get you." Trust, but confirm that what you told will actually work, smart move, Morgana. Hehe, love how Bianca teases about how enamored with Thulia Morgana is, but doesn't say if Morgana talks in her sleep or not.
Good to see Morgana realizes Bianca doesn't have a reason to offer Thulia the same trust she does, some would take it as an insult to their beloved. Bianca and Thulia seeing and hearing each other for the first time, adorable. Oh crud, nice chat going and Mrs. Horton shows up and just unlocks the door to come in. We need to have a talk, not what you want to hear. The secret is out, how Mrs. Horton is reasonable.
That much is obvious just from reading the stories and how she has handled other Wiz-type students in the past, especially Nikki. Yay! And Mrs. Horton shows her wisdom once again, letting Morgana keep the bowl to use.Mrs. Horton had surprised me - I knew she was a mage after that spell she'd cast on everyone when we arrived at the cottage, but her sharp and incisive questions showed that she was a mage of considerable experience and skill.
And very reasonable conditions as well. The muttered comment, hehe, a nice callout to Sara. And Morgana doesn't think someone would do that, even at Whateley, boy is she in for surprises in the future."First, that you don't try and contact your, mm, friend without using the bowl. Second, that you keep using a personal protective charm. The ones you are wearing will stop you being controlled, and in any case I don't think that would be easy with the minimal power the bowl uses anyway. And third, you have classes and I don't want you staying up late every night talking. I want you to limit your talks to three days a week, a maximum of one hour." She gave Bianca a smile. "And that will mean less chance of you disturbing your roommate as well."
Caitlin there and discussing a problem student, of course, it is about Morgana and how she interacts with fire energy and her own essence. Caitlin didn't recognize it, but it is something serious, guess Morgana is a mystery to solve still. Medical test with Ophelia, Fey check her out to see if Sidhe magic can discover anything new, and Kayda to check for Class X stuff, I hope it isn't the last one.Monday 10th October, morning, Elyzia Grimes' Office
At Mazarin's Office before lunch, Mrs. Horton is maneuvering towards it past all the students with most from Melville Cottage there. Tiff Lock, and Hikarua side by side with Tia, freshmen RA glaring at Mrs. Horton, good grief. Miss Bellamy there as well, this is starting to look like Mazarin set Mrs. Horton up to fail, imo. A petition, yup, a setup.
Ugh, don't have all the facts and they are overreacting. And Tia says she needs the help and support but doesn't need to be in Poe to get it, *sigh*“A petition to keep Melville students in Melville cottage, and to refuse all further efforts by any other cottage to take a student assigned to Melville unless the student is willing to leave.”
Tia sure has a mature attitude about all this, she has changed since we first met her.Miss Del Bosque took a breath, straightened up even more, and continued. “And those problems you mentioned earlier? They are well known by the student body at this point. My insanity is already known and public; any problems that come about as a result of that are ones I don't want to leave to others, and any students who come to me because of those problems, students who may not have spoken up before, well, I can do a lot of good for them, right where I'm at. I thought you deserved to hear it from me, in person: Headmaster, Mrs. Horton, I'd like to stay in Melville.”
And Mr. Mazarin says he accepts the petition and Tia can stay in Melville. Tiff Lock saying they won, she needs to learn not to gloat.
Always suspected that about Tia. Sure that Mazarin is talking about the Amazons, that is attention no one needs. And someone took money from Tia's sponsors to place her in Melville, all to see her groomed as a leader and face in the public eye, good grief. After what she has been through they were planning out her future without her say.“I suspected,” was his prompt reply. “I had taken the liberty of checking into the situation and individuals involved a bit, and I must say that if charisma were a superpower young Tia would be another Champion. She has a way about her that draws a person in.”
Good indeed, money has too much influence as it is.“Who took the money to change the paperwork?” Mr. Mazarin qualified. Mrs. Horton nodded.
Mr. Mazarin smiled, showing impeccable teeth. “I'm afraid that person is no longer with us... or indeed, with any academic institution, for the rest of their lives.”
Late evening in Morgana and Bianca's room and Bianca comes trudging back in at 9pm from setting up stuff in her new lab. Shelves and stuff to hold things, and is going to tell Morgana where it is, always good to have a trusted friend know about a place you might be. A chair to read and relax in private, that would be very nice.
Hehehe, I love how these two interact."Hey, no problem. Although you could carry it yourself if you worked out more."
That got me a pillow in the face. OK, I probably deserved that.
Medical exams, no one likes them no matter how nice the doctor is. An hour in a medical gown, ack! No eating before the exam, now that is torture for someone with her appetite. Pee sample, I would rather get blood drawn. And a large blood sample as well, medical science may help us but man is it a pain at times. 10 minutes for scans, I've been there, always so hard to stay still the whole time.Tuesday 11th October, 8am, Doyle Medical Centre.
Magical scans by Dr. Tennant, very interesting how she does them, plus why all the focus on her head and abdomen? Areas of the most interest due to what is going on with Morgana, hhm. How to get Morgana to blush bright crimson, ask if she is a virgin. And the other questions, Morgana learning the types of things girls have to talk to their doctors about already.
Ophelia Tennant talking to Elyzia Grimes, medically Morgana seems normal, that is good news.
Whoa, that is a big detail about her horns. Just how do they affect her magic in each form?"Oh, just interesting. I think. I couldn't spot anything at all in the brain scans that would indicate any anomalous behaviour. I did spot some magical oddities, that seem to correspond to her horns, which were fascinating. It seems her horns have a definite tie in to her power in some way, they aren't just ornamental. Remember when we did her power testing, there was a difference in the essence flows in her different forms? At the time I thought it was just the form shift, but it looks like there's more to it than that."
*eyes bug out* Morgana reproductive system stable in a non-menstrual state, seems to be a normal condition for her. Don't tell any of the other girls on campus! No hymen or even a vestigial structure, just what is going on with Morgana? So Thulia might have designed Morgana's body to not have those inconvenient things, very interesting.
Boy, figuring out what is up with Morgana's magic seems like a full-time project right now."I'm afraid I simply have no idea. Whatever is going on, it doesn't seem to have a physical connection. Magically... well, she'd a pretty unique case, and yes, I agree with Caitlin, there is something there that doesn't look right, but whatever it is it's so tightly bound I have no idea what's causing it. I was actually hoping she was pregnant; it would have been a much simpler explanation. The only thing I can think of is a better scan, maybe that would show us what's going on. Do you think we can get Fey to do one for us? Maybe Sidhe magic will show something I missed."
Two helicopters flying around, so updated only their exteriors are the same and don't attract attention in this part of the world. Mercenaries who don't wish to be spotted, uh oh. Bobby Cholrane, Jimmy, and Sergeant Kolchin, all checking their gear as the close in on their target zone. They have me worried for some reason.Tuesday 11th October, 0200 (local time), somewhere over Turkmenistan
Whoa, stealth systems like that on their helicopters. Closing in on a target base and they have a troop carrier, this feels like an invasion or covert strike which could trigger diplomatic issues. 'Officially non-existent' base, this just gets worse and worse. Major Smith examining the base through a surveillance scope, a satellite uplink antenna seems to be their only means of communication.
Okay, these mercenaries are seeming more and more like monsters. And knowing their targets are asleep, ugh.No witnesses, no survivors, and no report of what had happened here; at least until the extraction team was safely hidden in another country.
A sniper to take out the one watchman before he can sound the alarm, the lead team kills the other man on the security team. Sweeping out like this, how long have these mercenaries been in the business?
Bobby outside the kitchen and knows there are two hostiles inside, both disoriented by flash-bangs and shot dead. Headshots to make sure they are dead. Seems all hostiles have been taken out, they are there to rescue two hostages, okay, so the mercenaries might not be the bad guys in all this. Jump-up terrorists, who hired the mercenaries to deal with them and rescue the hostages?
4 downstairs and two could be their targets, have to be careful not to kill the hostages. Stunner projectile for tazer load after hitting with flash-bangs, nice way to take them alive. Kolchin interrogating one of the men, the other cuffed by Bobby, these guys are good. Hostages identified, the men willing to crawl to get out of there if needed. And the last two terrorists are executed. And have to deal with the recordings there before they leave, just what did they put these two men through?
Dang, burned and blow up all the buildings, EMP mine to ensure the recordings are toast as well. Sleeping pills for the hostages so they know little about who rescued them, just who are these guys? Keeping the hostages drugged to deliver two sick men on airlift, the Major will do all the paperwork. What does who hired them need these two men for?
All this for the operation Nephandus planned and Major Smith is reporting in. All this for a client in London which hired Nephandus, I hope those two ex-hostages are going to be okay.Wednesday 12th October, 10am (local time), Baku
All this to keep their identities and Nephandus' identity secret, is this how they have remained alive and in business so long, erase all evidence of their involvement each time?"As promised, the down payment for mission expenses is in your companies account in Karedonia. Details are here. The rest will be paid once we have the men safely in London. There are also details of what to do with the equipment, I expect it to be out of here in a few days. Apart from the men accompanying our two new guests, the rest of your team will fly back on various commercial flights over the next few days. Any questions?"
Now at Whateley in Magic Theory class in the morning, as Morgana and Bianca sit down AJ ask if they can help him with something. Advice about a girl,ooo. Aww, he wants to get to know the girl without seeming like a stalker, AJ is so cute. Uh oh, the girl is interested in joining the Spy Kids, poor AJ. Huh, what is in the large box Ms. Grimes if fiddling with?
Smokey dive-bombing things near the quad, attacking something which they can't see which is invisible.
Those poor invisible rabbits better learn to hide better. And Smokey knows what he's been playing with, silly dragon.Bianca snickered. Yeah, she'd made the connection already. "He's hunting bunny wabbits!"
Covering a different topic for a week or two, puts down a pendant, something that looks like a classic magic wand, and a mirror on her desk, this is going to be interesting.
White Snake gives the perfect answer, can see why AJ has a crush on her."These are example of some of the tools we will be looking at during the year. While just about anything can be made into a magic item, and tasked to pretty much any purpose, they tend to fall into a number of functional groupings. For example, this pendant" - she held up a remarkably mundane silvery-looking piece of jewellery - "is a common form for a protective spell. Would someone like to explain why this is a common form for holding such a spell?"
Tools can come in any form you wish, wonder what other forms magic items have been made in. How to make and use a wand, interesting. Defensive items taught how to make in Spring Term, and answered why already."While there are conventions for the form items take, these are only conventions - you can create a tool in any form you wish - but the classic forms are normally the most practical and easiest to use. While I could, for example, make an earring to cast lightning bolts, it would be more difficult to aim than, say, a wand."
Whoa, the difference between wands and defensive items seems a lot now."There's a good reason for this. In order to make them effective and efficient, they tend to be more complex, take longer to make, and normally require more expensive materials. Since making them now would involve a lot of failure and waste, we won't cover them until you have more training and experience. Wands are relatively quick and easy, and as they are often used in specialised tasks, all mages tend to have a collection of them for various uses."
Blank wands with a premade hole in both ends, to hold crystals, very interesting. And they don't have to be the same type of crystal, learning a lot about magic this story.
Now I'm curious how many different wands Ms. Grimes has herself."No, Toison, they don't. In fact, as you learn more about wands, especially specialised ones, you will find the type of crystal will differ, and indeed more than two can be incorporated. However as we will be starting off with a general design, one intended to store some essence and help you in directing your spell more easily and efficiently, we will use a plain quartz crystal in both places. You can get these later from the store, take your blank and make sure you get ones that fit. Don't forget glue as well. Any more questions?"
6pm at the private magic workshop, Morgana has worked out her wand already.
A fake wand with fake magic symbols burned in, just what does Morgana need that for? Rats, we have to learn about it when it happens, sounds like a prank with how Bianca reacts to being told though."Oh yes, very much a fake." I held up the half-finished wand "I picked this up in the store at lunchtime, I wanted to get it done as soon as possible. Just have to finish etching it, then give it a dye job and paint the symbols so it looks cool."
And more testing for Morgana with two new people.Thursday 13th October, evening, Crystal Hall
At least she has a good sense of humor about him. Ah, Kayda did the testing for Class X stuff and Morgana is completely clean, good."Yeah, two new people this time. Any more of this and I'll grow a white fur coat and whiskers to look like a proper lab rat!"
And Fey isn't staff but is connected to the school, aww, thought she would be a teacher.
Heh, lucky these girls weren't here with Fey when she was a student, too distracted to get anything done. Aww, Fey still can't quite suppress her glamour. And we don't know what Fey learned about Morgana, wonder if it is important."Yeah." I thought about how to describe the woman called Fey without trying to make it sound too much like a soft porn movie. That wasn't easy. "Her name was Fey, and she was Sidhe. Apparently Grimes had asked her to check me out in case Sidhe magic would spot something the usual tests hadn't. She was...well, hot."
Vic called out again and thinks it because Tolman thinks he needs the practice. Tidestriker and Mouse, at least it is no powers for the first round, Vic might have a chance. A couple minutes for Mouse to take him down with an arm-lock, ouch. Powers allowed now and Mouse standing back, hitting a target who can shrink is tough, but Vic's control over the water ball has her trapped. Growing only makes things worse for Mouse, and he gets her into an arm-lock, nice moves by Vic.Friday 14th October, BMA
And Vic has another tactic ready, launching a water ball and splitting it in two, then using one to cover his target's mouth and nose, brutal tactic but effective. Mouse gives him a dirty look after Vic wins, she needs to learn in BMA you have to think on your feet.
Oh crud, Morgana up against Crysis again and pulls out a holdout, so that is what the fake wand was for. No powers and Morgana takes him down in a minute or so, another arm-lock, more painful than needed just to get Crysis mad and losing his temper. Fake wand out of sleeve pocket and into her hand, aiming her wand and making gestures at Crysis, and the idiot yanks the wand out of her hand. And he used his TK to deliberately break it, lucky that isn't a real wand or he would be in trouble I think.
A spell to create a blinding flash of light, always handy in a fight. And kicked out of the fighting circle, nice job, Morgana. Tolman calls the bout, Morgana wins as Crysis is too injured to continue, but no serious injuries, yay! And a lot of people grinning, not just her friends, Crysis might just learn when you hurt others you are going to get hurt back.
Tolman knows it was a fake wand due to how Morgana acted, oh well. A few other possibilities, I wonder what Tolman has in mind. Well, you didn't break anything so Tolman lets you off with a warning to restrain yourself.
Laura made a prototype PFG, her first one, wonder how powerful it is. Morgana, Bianca, Erica, Tia, Bailey, and Vic all coming along to witness the event at The Ranges. Magic shields once Morgana gets the bugs worked out, wonder how long that will be. Range 7 with Caitlin, show how it works and make sure Laura doesn't blow herself up, how do you do that with a PFG?Saturday 15th October, afternoon, The Ranges
Very interesting set-up.The left side of the rather large room contained a pretty impressive control console, with what looked like arrangements for shields of some sort between it and the rest of the test area. There was also a bright red line between it and what looked like a number of sets of tracks crossing the floor.
Now those are some strong safety measures right there already."Good. Now the room knows you are here, and will track you until you leave. If anyone tries something supremely stupid like trying to wander into a fire zone, across that red line, it will shut the weapons down. The system will only work if you stay behind the console and its shields."
And different dummy types based up if you are an exemplar or brick or regular physical wise, impressive. Transparent barriers between them and the testing area and a force field for when the test starts, this has to be the safest testing area I've read of."Now, this range is a bit different from the others, in that it's here to test defensive items rather than the weapon itself. So we have a set of different weapons - kinetic as well as energy based, and they can be calibrated either to a specific performance, or to mimic a lot of the typical weapons you could run into such as those used by police or military. Now first, we need to set up a target to mount the PFG on."
Erica, no teasing Laura about being blue, she might just get some special paint to dye you blue and it not come off for a week. Good against low-energy kinetic impact so far, some of the heavier shots close to penetrating the field, that is still pretty strong. Replace the battery pack before testing an energy weapon, wonder if she can make a better battery pack for it. Handled a shot from a lightning gun, but then having Morgana use her flame breath on it, oh boy.
Handles it for a while, the flames turning more yellow as the field grew and taking a lot of power. Laura, you shouldn't have said she could put in more juice. Something takes control of Morgana's flame once more as it turned more white and a touch blue, overloading the field. Morgana can't stop her own flames from coming out and it is hurting her, whoever or whatever is causing this needs to be discovered soon. Clothes are toast, metal flooring starting to metal and Morgana screams and collapses, this is the worst ever.
Having to watch Morgana in that state until she lost consciousness, and the flames go out so Caitlin can reach her now that the force field is down. Burnout, no! Call to Doyle and she might flare up again as if Morgana didn't have enough troubles. Morgana's skin cold and clammy, this is very bad, I think we might have to let Thulia into Whateley to help Morgana.
When they linked her to the Fire Plane did she somehow have a tag-along, an elemental that is trapped and connected to Morgana who is forcing the flames to grow out of control to feed on them? Could that be what the odd eddy is?When the girl had flared up, she'd seen something - the same odd eddy she'd noticed when she'd tested her, but more powerful and seeming to feed on the fire and take it over. That worried her.
At least Caitlin told Laura she didn't think it was her PFG that triggered the burnout, something else is seriously wrong. Bianca going to wait at Doyle so she can be the first to know when news about Morgana comes. And Caitlin blaming herself now, thinking if she had been more alert than Morgana wouldn't have burned out like that. *sigh* All the testing and still no idea what the odd eddy is, I hope they discover it soon for Morgana's sake.
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Hmm... Essence is storable in blood...
Fake wands mixed with real wands would be useful, if wands were easier to make...
More specialized wands, due to their focus, are easier to make if the right materials are at hand?
So, Morgana or Bianca could make blood-powered wands and fake wands to use as holdouts, or something?
Bianca, 'cause she has the Translation Spell to be able to quickly discern her fakes from her reals.
Not sure if Morgana can do anything to make fake and reals easily differentiable to herself...
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EDIT: Or, hire Twitch to make technological fake wands, in trade for genuine magical materials or prank wands or something.
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So, how will the magi-medical staff learn about how easy it is to contact Thulia? Morgana just letting it slip? Ms. Horton, somehow supplying the info? Some other way?
Or, will they try summoning Thulia themselves, maybe somehow without involving Morgana, and Thulia would go... "You just wanted to talk? You could've used that bowl".
Likely, if they plan to summon Thulia, they use Morgana, who just volunteers the bowl.
... Or Thulia learns about Morgana's medical emergency, and arranges transport to Whateley somehow.
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Dreamer wrote: White Snake gives the perfect answer, can see why AJ has a crush on her.
White Snake's first name is James. He's a Melvillain, but there's no accounting for wealth, or something.
Dreamer wrote: Whoa, the difference between wands and defensive items seems a lot now.
In Western systems, wands and staves tend to be symbolic of fire (just as knives and swords are symbolic of air). Maybe not the best choice for passive defense magics, but where there's a Will there's a Way.
Dreamer wrote: Oh crud, Morgana up against Crysis again and pulls out a holdout, so that is what the fake wand was for. No powers and Morgana takes him down in a minute or so, another arm-lock, more painful than needed just to get Crysis mad and losing his temper. Fake wand out of sleeve pocket and into her hand, aiming her wand and making gestures at Crysis, and the idiot yanks the wand out of her hand. And he used his TK to deliberately break it, lucky that isn't a real wand or he would be in trouble I think.
There's probably a story or two there. You wouldn't want your wand to explode in your hands after you've sat on it. Or, in your child's mouth once they master crawling, putting things in mouth, and chewing.
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mhalpern wrote: With how Wands work, it's possible to make a functional Myrtenaster (Weiss's weapon)..
I had no idea what this was. Apparently its a Multi Action Dust Rapier
Presumably licenced from Dyson...
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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In RWBY dust is basically materia from final fantasy, with Weiss you have a character who's semblance (special abilities) are around glyphs, and her sword helps her summon the glyphs...
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The Nephandus side of things has also been super interesting from a presentation perspective. In the earliest stories, it was presented as if he will be going after Morgana, assuming he could find her, or even learn that the cult project was the creation of Morgana as a battery. Then recently, it felt more like he would be going after Thulia in her new location, in order to lure or bait Morgana out of hiding. Now...we have no idea who he just extracted or what faction the hostages represent. We don't know how much he knows or how far along the trail he is at this point!
Tia, natural leader and social influencer? Makes sense, but from the perspective of her non-Melville friends, she just looks like a complete paranoid basketcase on the very brink of a mental breakdown.
As for Morgana, she was very carefully designed by Thulia. But maybe, just maybe, did Thulia goof and make Morgana a little too connected to the fire plane? Is something else coming through that connection, or trying to? Morgana's description of the sensation right before the burnout seemed like a major, major hint.
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The two men they rescued are the last known survivors from the cult of the Red Ba'al's island staff.
Just how much they know about what was going on remains to be seen, but they do have one rather important bit of intel - they aren't searching for plans, or a machine, they are looking for a girl...
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However, after a fair bit of setting the plot out (aka as teasing by some of you!), you will learn what's been going on with Morgana in the next part of the story. There have been a number of suppositions, a few reasonably close, a lot not, but no-ones nailed it yet

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So is it too much to hope that Neph is doing this to repay a solid to either Jadis (whom would be up trading it with Whateley) or Caitlin (whom is owed a solid for his continued life after he tried to bind her)?Astrodragon wrote: On who and what those mercenaries are after - it was said a few episodes ago, actually.
The two men they rescued are the last known survivors from the cult of the Red Ba'al's island staff.
Just how much they know about what was going on remains to be seen, but they do have one rather important bit of intel - they aren't searching for plans, or a machine, they are looking for a girl...
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So is it too much to hope that Neph is doing this to repay a solid to either Jadis (whom would be up trading it with Whateley) or Caitlin (whom is owed a solid for his continued life after he tried to bind her)?Astrodragon wrote: On who and what those mercenaries are after - it was said a few episodes ago, actually.
The two men they rescued are the last known survivors from the cult of the Red Ba'al's island staff.
Just how much they know about what was going on remains to be seen, but they do have one rather important bit of intel - they aren't searching for plans, or a machine, they are looking for a girl...
I'm afraid it is too much to hope for, Neph is doing this for filthy lucre.
Of course, things may get more interesting for him when they tell him what the next target is...

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Astrodragon wrote: I'm afraid it is too much to hope for, Neph is doing this for filthy lucre.
"Nephandus, old boy, we've established what you are. This is just haggling over the hourly fees."
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To be fair, he has such a great track record securing extra-dimensional sources of power housed within girls.Astrodragon wrote: Of course, things may get more interesting for him when they tell him what the next target is...

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So from Morgana's pov its a shame they weren't accidentally killed during the rescue!
Nowadays one of the things Nephandus (and his father) are doing is acting as brokers and facilitators. Sort of like Jadis but with more guns and demons involved..


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I wasn't sure that the cult was behind this 'rescue' or not. If so, BRRRR!!!Astrodragon wrote: The hostages are wanted by the cult that kidnapped Morgana in the first place.
So from Morgana's pov its a shame they weren't accidentally killed during the rescue!
Nowadays one of the things Nephandus (and his father) are doing is acting as brokers and facilitators. Sort of like Jadis but with more guns and demons involved..![]()
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I wonder if this is a case of an imperfect narrator, or if Fey's position with the school is more interesting than the average staff member.
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You don't have to be a member of staff to be in a deparment, or vice-versa. although most are. For example, we have Caitlin.
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Astrodragon wrote: You don't have to be a member of staff to be in a deparment, or vice-versa. although most are. For example, we have Caitlin.
OK, that answers a question I had. Fey's relationship to the Magic Department is subject to Quantum Weirdness - it depends on the observer.
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Maybe a bonsai one?
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Astrodragon wrote: Well, a world tree is a bit big to cultivate.
Maybe a bonsai one?
I can picture Ito Sensei having the patience and careful planning for that.
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Astrodragon wrote: Well, a world tree is a bit big to cultivate.
Maybe a bonsai one?
I can picture Ito Sensei having the patience and careful planning for that.
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Ms. Grimes, Dr. Bellows, and Bella brought in to discuss the issues Morgana has with her powers, and need to eliminate a psychological issue. I don't think what Caitlin sensed was psychological. Nothing from the tests by Fey or Kayda, Bellows doesn't think it is a mental issue, good man. And Bellows expected the opposite of what they've found out about Morgana, curiouser and curiouser.Saturday 15th October, afternoon, Mystic Arts staff meeting room.
At least he admits leaning on her powers is a temporary crutch, wonder what he will come up with for a long-term solution for Morgana and her PTSD. [quote=While she had a fair idea that some of the things Morgana had been getting up to would interest Elyzia, she didn't think it was anything affecting the topic, and Morgana already seemed to have enough problems without Elyzia getting on her case about trafficking with demons. In any case, from what she'd seen, and heard about, it had made Morgana considerably happier.[/quote] And this is why I like Mrs. Horton so much. And both Ophelia and Ms. Grimes got a notice about Morgana and called into Doyle. I hope she recovers well.
Late afternoon now and at Doyle.
How bad? All the testing to see why she has a problem and Morgana has a burn-out, could some outside force be trying to keep the source of her issues secret even if it could kill her?"I've done a full post-burnout exam on her. At the moment she seems stable, I gave her a sedative and she's sleeping. That's the good part. The bad part is, it was a burnout, and not a good one."
Morgana awake in the hospital bed, not sure what happened to her yet. *eyes bug out at what she remembers* Finding out she had a bad burnout but came out of it OK, now discussing things with Ophelia and Ms. Grimes there, her day went from great to cruddy.
More details on burnouts and the different types, interesting."Right. Well, we normally put a burnout into one of two categories, based on what we think caused them. That helps us estimate what the implications of it are."
Ouch, so that is what causes lethal burnouts before a mutant even finishes manifesting, brutal."Now, the first type is caused due to a manifestation not being complete. Most of them happen during or very close after manifestation and are often fatal. The probability of having one reduces as your power stabilises, and while they aren't unknown later on, the occurrence is far less common. Now I don't think yours falls into that group. As far as all our earlier testing shows, your manifestation is complete and stable, in fact, it was before you even arrived here."
*eyes bug out* So can never be fully safe from the chance of a burnout, dang."While we don't have a full understanding of them, they seem to be caused by your power interacting with something - normally an external event of some sort - and that stress causing it to go out of control, or change, overload, or, to be honest, do a number of weird things we can't predict."
*blinks in confusion* If it wasn't something external and Morgana stable, then what the heck is going on? Something internal or something else, I still think what Caitlin saw was something from the plane of fire.
Rest overnight and see how she feels in the morning, guess at this point anything else would risk Morgana's health. A group together with Morgana there to go over everything, sometimes you just need a fresh set of eyes to look over something and find a detail you missed.
Oh good, Bianca brought her some clothes, those hospital gowns suck. Connect hospital gowns with Bad Things, I understand the feeling. Dr. Bellows taking her over the magic department, shoot, no way to get answers out of him. Ms. Grimes, Dr. Tennant, Dr. Bellows, Mrs. Horton, Caitlin, and Fey, eep, way to make the teen worried due to the size of the crowd.Sunday 16th October, 10 am, Magic Department meeting room
I knew it! Dang, no cleans of Morgana before whatever it is was put inside her."Morgana, we have managed to confirm that there is definitely something inside you, that seems to be connected to your magic and is probably the cause of your problems. Fey and I suspect it's something that was done to you, but there is a major issue with identifying it. Whatever is causing it, its connection is so intertwined with you that we can't separate it out."
There are a set of clean scans, where, how?I tried to make sense of all that. "Uh, so what you want to do, it's sorta like subtracting part of a digital photo to see what's left?"
Fey nodded. "That's a pretty fair analogy. The problem is that whatever it is, it's too closely interwoven with your power and your magic for us to identify it, but if we could subtract a clean scan of you, it would give us a much better chance at identifying it.
I should have known, a scientist like Thulia wouldn't take thorough records before and after to note what has changed."Ma'am, before and after I manifested, Thulia did a complete set of scans of all sorts on me. Physical, Magical, and probably all sorts of things I don't know about. I'm not an expert, obviously, and I couldn't understand her methods, but judging by the tools she was using, they were more complicated that the ones you used on me, so I guess they'd have given at least as detailed a result? Couldn't you use those?"
The looks between Grimes and Fey, hehe, if only Morgana knew Fey's history.
Hehehe, this is why Mrs. Horton is my favorite house parent, she knows when to trust her charges and their secrets."Ma'am? Uh... I do know how to contact Thulia. In fact, I've been in contact with her since I was rescued." Well, that provided the level of consternation I'd been expecting. Grimes just looked at me, then turned to face Mrs. Horton, who was just sitting there with a half-smile. She examined the older woman for a moment, then gave a resigned sigh. "OK, Bella, just what haven't you told me this time?"
Aww, I wish I could have read the conversation between Ms. Grimes and Mrs. Horton, that would have been fun.
Bwahaha, Bianca almost blushing thinking she is in trouble due to Morgana chatting with Thulia, silly girl. A lockbox in one of the cupboards, nice hiding spot.
I don't Poe is the only cottage full of gossip about one thing or another, though it might have the highest of them. And thinking about getting the whole story out of Morgana, with thumbnails if need be, Bianca, you silly goof."Now I need to ask you a favour, Bianca. Please don't talk about any of this until Morgana returns, it's all rather complicated and this place is enough of a hotbed of speculation without adding to it, don't you think?" She knew she'd got it right when the girl looked offended at the idea she'd talk, before she smiled once more. "Now I'll leave you to your book."
Darn, going to have to chat with Ms. Grimes about the bowl and stuff a lot more later. Things to make it easier for them all to see and hear Thulia, interesting. Now that is a mage's workroom. Ooo, that mirror sounds cool. And able to see Thulia in the mirror, now that is a great modification. *eyes go wide with wonder* Whoa, a real magic mirror.
Uh oh, girlfriend is upset at Morgana for not being kept in the loop.She frowned, giving me a surprisingly piercing look that reminded me of Grimes for a moment before her eyes flicked around the other spectators. "Perhaps you should introduce me to your friends, and then tell me exactly what's been going on."
And not something even Thulia detected in her testing, this is more serious than expected. Has to examine Morgana in her workroom, this will...interesting to see. Grimes really doesn't trust demons or anything demon-like, despite Thulia assuring her Morgana would be safe with her."You were right to contact me, from what you've said there is something very wrong. I tested Morgana in considerable depth before I was forced to leave her, and there was nothing in my results to indicate this sort of problem. While I expected her to take some time to integrate and learn to use her power, that should have gone smoothly, and the exercises you described should indeed have helped that process. From what you've shown me, I agree with you that the only logical explanation is that there is something affecting Morgana that shouldn't be present."
Now that make her cry happy tears. Bwahaha, actually made Thulia blush, so cute. And Caitlin is coming along, all good now."The thing is, if Thulia wanted to harm or control me, she could, She has my true name, blood, and other samples, and unless I spend the rest of my life locked in a warded room, she can get at me. That isn't a life, and rather than do that, I trust her not to abuse me." I took a deep breath before continuing, this was going to be hard."But the main reason is her. When I was captured, I was held prisoner, tortured mentally and physically. I was treated by the cult and their minions like an animal - no, worse, as an object." I looked over at Thulia and smiled. "The only one who treated me like a person, who was kind to me, was Thulia. So yes, I trust her now, with my life."
At the Crystal Hall at lunchtime, Tanya concerned Morgana is still a no-show.
Bianca has gotten great at understating things when needed. Hikaru is so Blaise about people having burnouts. *sigh* Even though she was told her PFG didn't cause the burnout Laura still thinks it might have. Renewing the wards for Erica and Cally, hope nothing weird happens there, enough going on already.She didn't mention the fact that she'd been pretty certain Morgana was keeping quiet about something, and that 'a bit stressed' was rather like suggesting that the Atlantic Ocean was a trifle damp.
Afternoon and back at the Magic Department, having to go down a few levels to open a portal to Thulia's place.
Now there is a magic corridor, love seeing things like this. And the room to open the portal in, this is how you make things feel truly magical, the sense of awe and wonder of it.I was beginning to realise that while the Magic department didn't spread out as far over the subterranean part of the campus as the Devisors did, they seemed to compensate by going deep. The weirdest thing was the final stretch of the corridor which lead to a rather formidable, and obviously locked, door. The whole space felt odd, and things like the angles of the walls and ceiling seemed to fit an Esher drawing rather than a simple corridor.
Now, this is the set-up of professionals, impressive.While Grimes had been adding more symbols in some of the bare spots, Mrs. Horton had quietly explained what it was; this was one of the portals they used regularly, and while a lot of the spellcraft was permanent, the part related to the destination and a few other things weren't, and that was what Grimes was completing right now.
Blood on seven spots to open the portal but keep it anonymous for Thulia, plus powering it up afterward, never can be too cautious. A dark purple crystal wand used by Grimes, wonder what it is made of.
Well, you are warping space to open this portal, bound to cause something like this. Thulia coming through the portal in that robe, Morgana is lucky she didn't get a classic anime nosebleed.What wasn't an illusion was the way the centre was not only glowing but seemed to be moving backward, even though nothing was actually moving.
Yeah, I would be Caitlin in this situation, barely holding back laughing."Ah, my apologies. Mistress Grimes, then?" Her innocent-sounding statement was followed by a quite obvious *snerk* from Caitlin before Grimes gave her companion a withering look. Not that that discommoded Caitlin in the slightest.
And Thulia knows that Caitlin is an Artificer, never expected to see one on Earth as she thought they all vanished from there, interesting. Aww, poor Thulia, no time to admire an Artificer due to the work needing to be done.
And portal to Thulia's workroom and welcome back from Bruce, been a long time since we saw him. And naked for the scans, at least Morgana is comfortable with everyone there. Well, that didn't take long it seems, wonder what comparing the previous scans with the new ones will show. Oh boy, Thulia hiding her feelings from Morgana, I would worry as well. An hour or two to get results, so go back through the portal and wait. Aww, back to Whateley without even a hug from Thulia.
And she lied, it would only take a few minutes. A parasite, a psychofágos, a hellspawned soul eater, this is the worst case possible.
Okay, the cult needs to be hunted down and exterminated post-haste. Oh crap, a bomb when it goes off and sounds like it could take out Whateley even. Ooo, bringing in her Grandmother for this, it is even worse than the worst case possible."A powerful one, I don't know how she's still alive. Those bastards must have put it in her after I left."
Tanau wearing that dress, don't bring her to Whateley or you might have a riot of horny teens on your hands.
Crud, just how can they remove it without harming Morgana or setting it off?Tanau's raised her eyebrows. "And she's still alive? I think you'd better tell me all you know, a psychofágos is not something to meddle with casually, especially if it has had time to establish itself in its victim."
Tanau gazing at Thulia and Thulia blushing again, she can't help blushing when thinking about her beloved.
Morgana has strength and willpower in spades to the point I think they are unnoted powers for her sometimes. A day to prepare and need Morgana's teachers as well, oh boy. Thulia's enthusiasm won't be misplaced, Morgana will survive this, she is too stubborn not to."Oh yes, it's possible. It's not easy by any means, and it will need all her strength and willpower, as well as all the help you can give her, but it can be done."
And now the hard part, telling Morgana what was done to her by the cult.
And now we understand why Thulia and Tanau are shocked Morgana is still alive. *eyes bug out* This entity is a seriously nasty piece of work, the morons in the cult thinking to use it to control her were seriously arrogant."Let me explain. A psychofágos is commonly termed a soul-eater, it's a nasty little piece of hellspawn, and its purpose is to drain power from its victim - hence the name - until they die. I assume they put it in Morgana in case they couldn't control her. It would have been fairly quiescent at first - until Morgana was freed, she was using very little magic, which is its preferential source of sustenance - but once she started to draw significantly on the Fire Plane energy, it would have siphoned off more and more of it."
A couple of weeks before it kills, that soon, dang it. 5 to 7 days before incurable damage is inflicted, yikes. 30 kilotons of energy unleashed, good lord. It would take out Whateley and the surrounding area for miles at least.
Caitlin can't design and make something in 5 days, that analogy is scary. Darn, Fey can't design a spell in time either. That speech by Thulia, I got goosebumps.
Oh boy, does this mean Morgana is going to get to meet Tanau?Thulia gave her a steely look. "As I said, I'm not an expert in hellspawn. I prefer to leave them to rot where they belong. However my grandmother is far more familiar with them, and she informs me a separation can be done. Of course" her expression was ruthless as she continued, "it will involve the destruction of the psychofágos, but that hardly worries me. Good riddance to it."
Yay! I was hoping she would ask for visitation rights with Morgana as payment. Mutually acceptable conditions for her visits wonder what those will be."Morgana, Thulia is bound by certain constraints on what she can do on this plane. I assume she cannot do a service, no matter how well-intentioned, without asking for payment."
Aww, I wanted to hear the arguing too.Judging by the different expressions I could see on the staff, I really wished I could hear the arguments, it looked like they would be well worth kibitzing. Which was probably why they wanted me outside, of course. So Thulia and I got up and went out to the small lobby outside the conference room.
Aww, Morgana worried they won't agree on acceptable terms.
Hehe, she would have fit in at Whateley well. Ah, guess they are worried about something like Sara's Pack happening again. 1 day every 2 weeks, aww, why not 1 day a week?"Screw the rules. There are always loopholes. And if there aren't, I'll make some."
She gestured at Caitlin, who was sitting there with a shit-eating grin on her face. "Our Artificer has agreed to fashion a pendant that will restrict you to the abilities of your human body so long as you are at the school.[/quote] Oh boy, with some of the students at Whateley I hope she has superhuman strength in her human body.Second, we do have a problem with the use of demonic abilities at the school." She held up a hand as Thulia looked at her and raised one delicate flame-coloured eyebrow. "I'm using demon here as a generic term." Thulia's half-smile was her only response.
All very reasonable conditions, though I wish the visitations were more often.Thirdly, we insist that you only enter and leave via a specific summoning circle or portal here. So we can monitor your presence. We will amend it so you can only leave the circle while wearing the limiting pendant.
Fourth, while you are visiting, we need a way of making sure you are not too disruptive. With normal visitors, they are constrained in their actions by the fact their children are here. In your case that isn't the case, so we will ask you to swear, while on the school grounds, to follow the same rules that Morgana does as one of our students. While we cannot enforce these off the grounds, we would ask you to at least consider keeping them in order to protect Morgana and the other students we have here.
Finally, while I understand you have some familiarity with Earth, we would like to keep a closer eye on you at first. So initially, we will insist on a chaperone, for everyone's safety. Caitlin has agreed to do that role" - Grimes speech was interrupted for a second by a quite rude snort from said Caitlin - "but if things prove satisfactory, that condition will be withdrawn."
And that isn't including those in Hawthorne due to power control issues. A link to the Fire Plane, any student who messes with her will learn quickly not to play with fire. Only Morgana summoning her and with a member of staff there, a good safety precaution for Thulia.Once per two weeks is less that I had hoped, but as Morgana does I too have studies and duties. So I can live with that. As to restricting my abilities", she gave Grimes a measuring look "this amulet will allow me the use of my physical powers, yes? After all, many of the students here are quite dangerous."
Back at Thulia's workroom, Tanau worried that Thulia is risking her life to do this, but knows how stubborn her granddaughter is. Thulia's values of safe, eep. Asking Bruce to pull Thulia out if she is at risk, oh boy. Bruce would need sanctuary with Tanau if he did that, *sigh* I want to gut the cult members for causing this mess.
Back at Doyle and Morgana has to stay overnight, worried she could have another burnout without warning and wish to be prepared in case. I understand their reasoning, better safe than sorry. Good point, better bored in the hospital than the alternative. Ceri came to see Morgana, was wondering when the big sister would show up again. And Ms. Grimes told Ceri about everything that is happening, oh boy.
Talking about home and everything Morgana has missed, great that Morgana gets to chat with her sister again. Cornering the big sister about her new boyfriend, classic little sister behavior.
AEGIS in London, one of the techs looking after the computer systems and databases, nice way to meet. Whoa, a part-time job at AEGIS in London, nice job. Chatting for over two hours and only notices after Dr. Tennant knocks and says it is time for Morgana's medication, time flies when you have fun, especially with family you love. Medication to put her to sleep, those are some potent pills.I pretended to look astonished. "Gee, did you finally build a mind-control widget then?"
She responded in an adult manner befitting a big sister, she gave me the finger. I just grinned. "So how did you meet him, you haven't really told me much about him?"
"Well, ironically, it was due to you."
Flying Blue Squirrel pub in the Village, Vanessa called to meet Ms. Grimes who is drinking gin, uh oh. Ah, taking over for Ms. Grimes' classes tomorrow and Tuesday, good friend. This mess all because of some power-hungry fools playing with powers beyond them.
Yikes, I know those kinds of nightmares all too well, poor Morgana. Opening a new portal, no use of essence for Morgana, please let everything go well. Yikes, Morgana that wound up seems like on the verge of a panic attack imo. How Thulia defines dangerous, a wise move not asking Morgana, wise move.Monday 17th October, afternoon, Magic Department
Hate being at the mercy of events, hopefully soon Morgana can take control of her life again. Closing the portal behind them so nothing will bleed through, in worst case scenario. Please let this all work out.
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Except for the collateral damage it would be nice if they could detonate the parasite in their midst!mhalpern wrote: hmm can they deliver the remains of that parasite to the surviving members of the cult?
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Angeldude wrote: I finally get around to reading part 2 and then part 3 goes up later that same day.
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mhalpern wrote: Hmm I just realized, there's a big freaking loophole in the rules they set, possibly intentionally placed there. "The rules Morgana follows" so what about rules she doesn't follow?
Ah, no, there isn't that particular loophole.
Saying 'the rules Morgana is supposed to follow' would have been quite insulting to Morgana. Note that while she bent them a fair bit with her alfresco demon-summoning stuff, she was very careful to check she wasn't actually breaking any.
So basically Thulia is agreeing to follow the school rules as set out for the students.
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mhalpern wrote: Hmm I just realized, there's a big freaking loophole in the rules they set, possibly intentionally placed there. "The rules Morgana follows" so what about rules she doesn't follow?
Ah, no, there isn't that particular loophole.
Saying 'the rules Morgana is supposed to follow' would have been quite insulting to Morgana. Note that while she bent them a fair bit with her alfresco demon-summoning stuff, she was very careful to check she wasn't actually breaking any.
So basically Thulia is agreeing to follow the school rules as set out for the students.
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Astrodragon wrote: So basically Thulia is agreeing to follow the school rules as set out for the students.
What could possibly go wrong with that implied intent?
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Astrodragon wrote: I do get the impression that some (many?) people are thinking that having a demonic, sexy girlfriend visiting her at Whately will be a good, fun thing for Morgana.
Really?
Technically demonic, as she's native to a different plane, correct? So there might be some cultural differences to overcome (like age of consent) And their enemies list might end up more than the sum of their separate lists of enemies... Water signs/elementals can really hold a grudge or ten.
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Cultural differences..as yes, there will be more on them another time.
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As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted wrote: Ophelia shrugged as she stood up. "Honestly, I don't know. First thing is to get her stable and see what we can find out, then we can take it from there. Elyzia, I assume you got the same notification?"
Grimes nodded. "Yes, she's on my magical watch list. I'll join you in Doyle shortly."
Magical watch list? What's that about?
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As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted wrote: Ophelia shrugged as she stood up. "Honestly, I don't know. First thing is to get her stable and see what we can find out, then we can take it from there. Elyzia, I assume you got the same notification?"
Grimes nodded. "Yes, she's on my magical watch list. I'll join you in Doyle shortly."
Magical watch list? What's that about?
Basically its students who have , or might have, medical/body issues related to magic.
So if something happens to them, Grimes knows about it
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Astrodragon wrote: There are a number of gotchas, some of them subtle, in the conditions Thulia has agreed to accept.
I'm not going to try and find all the hypothetical loopholes in Thulia's conditions, the writing here is so good that, when reading, I'd rather enjoy the moment than try to find out if I was right but there were two things that leapt out to me:
1. Thulia agreed to have her powers limited by the Caitlin's pendant, i.e. Anything the pendant doesn't block is implicitly allowed (at least by that condition).
2. Unless I'm seriously underestimating Thulia's knowledge base she probably doesn't know the full set of student rules she's agreed to follow. What happends if she encounters a rule that she doesn't know about?
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Astrodragon wrote: There are a number of gotchas, some of them subtle, in the conditions Thulia has agreed to accept.
I'm not going to try and find all the hypothetical loopholes in Thulia's conditions, the writing here is so good that, when reading, I'd rather enjoy the moment than try to find out if I was right but there were two things that leapt out to me:
1. Thulia agreed to have her powers limited by the Caitlin's pendant, i.e. Anything the pendant doesn't block is implicitly allowed (at least by that condition).
2. Unless I'm seriously underestimating Thulia's knowledge base she probably doesn't know the full set of student rules she's agreed to follow. What happends if she encounters a rule that she doesn't know about?
The main issue for Grimes and the pendant is limiting powers she possesses as a extradimensional entity. Grimes doesn't actually know what, if any, they are, but the problem is that people at the school have little or no defence against them. So blocking is playing it safe. As Thulia pointed out, she'll still have Morgana's power set, but that sort of thing Whateley is geared up to handle.
Your very likely correct on Thulia's knowledge of the school rules, but then how many students actually know them? A few, like the fixers and the bookies probably do, the rest don't really bother. As per the contract, she has to obey them, whether or not she knows about them.
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But she isn't super-powerful. and isnt intended to be.
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Besides if you want someone to negotiate a contract you're better off meeting Jadis Frost's price. She's less likely to insert a dagger in the paperwork that she can use to stab you in the back than most others, (at least if you meet her price) might be!!Astrodragon wrote: Thulia's power as such isn't significantly higher than Morgana's, but she has it under control, plus a lot of training in magic and the applications of her fire. So she can do more with it.
But she isn't super-powerful. and isnt intended to be.
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Astrodragon wrote: I do get the impression that some (many?) people are thinking that having a demonic, sexy girlfriend visiting her at Whately will be a good, fun thing for Morgana.
Really?
Very attached, territorial, demonic ethical/moral compass? Won't be a problem!
Thulia's degree of control is very high though. She does fancy things with her magical computers that maybe Caitlin can do by instinct alone, but without any of the authoritative conclusions that Thulia reaches. Like identifying the parasite. Caitlin saw it, knew it was off, but had no idea what it was. Thulia figured it out almost immediately, baseline comparison or no.
Morgana has a very finely tuned magical sense, even if it is monochromatic, and I know we've discussed it before in another thread, but with Morgana's levels of sensitivity, presumably based off Thulia's own, and Thulia's level of control...how limited is Thulia really? Could she do Sara levels of magical genetic manipulation? Or perhaps limited to just analysis?
The story made it clear that Thulia was putting on a bit of a show for the magic department. Emphasizing some things and downplaying others. How much of that was also going on from the Whateley staff in Thulia's direction?
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Astrodragon wrote: I do get the impression that some (many?) people are thinking that having a demonic, sexy girlfriend visiting her at Whately will be a good, fun thing for Morgana.
Really?
Very attached, territorial, demonic ethical/moral compass? Won't be a problem!
Thulia's degree of control is very high though. She does fancy things with her magical computers that maybe Caitlin can do by instinct alone, but without any of the authoritative conclusions that Thulia reaches. Like identifying the parasite. Caitlin saw it, knew it was off, but had no idea what it was. Thulia figured it out almost immediately, baseline comparison or no.
Morgana has a very finely tuned magical sense, even if it is monochromatic, and I know we've discussed it before in another thread, but with Morgana's levels of sensitivity, presumably based off Thulia's own, and Thulia's level of control...how limited is Thulia really? Could she do Sara levels of magical genetic manipulation? Or perhaps limited to just analysis?
The story made it clear that Thulia was putting on a bit of a show for the magic department. Emphasizing some things and downplaying others. How much of that was also going on from the Whateley staff in Thulia's direction?
Caitlin can actually do stuff Thulia can't do, or at least do easily. Thulia's techniques offer efficiency, particularly in some areas, but a lot of it isn't new - just easier.
Think of it (very roughly) as Thulia being a scientists, Caitlin a practical hand-on engineer.
No, Thulia can't do a lot of Sarah's stuff, because she isn't a GOO (even if only a baby one!). Analysis, sure, except for BITS - there are things with them only a GOO can do,
As to the Magic department putting on a face for Thulia - why yes, to a certain extent.No-one wants to show all their cards face-up, after all.
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Katssun wrote: The story made it clear that Thulia was putting on a bit of a show for the magic department. Emphasizing some things and downplaying others. How much of that was also going on from the Whateley staff in Thulia's direction?
Ms. Grimes, a student of Raven, let others to come to their own incorrect assumptions? Perish the thought!
Astrodragon wrote: As to the Magic department putting on a face for Thulia - why yes, to a certain extent.No-one wants to show all their cards face-up, after all.
Especially if one of those is Fey's dance card.
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"I can only estimate it, but my initial calculations would make it about 30 kilotons in human terms." - Thulia
"Well that's a relief" - Fey (quietly)
Everyone people turns to look at Fey questioningly. Some start considering what/who she's referring to and get nervous.
She has seen numbers nearly 150 thousand times higher.
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Or not really sure when it will happen - thats a major r eason they moved so fast, the longer they leave things the greater the chance of an exploding dragon
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Yes but Fey lived next door to Billy Wilson. AKA Tennyo, AKA The STAR STALKER. If Billy had lost cohesion.... estimates were the entire Eastern seaboard at a minimum, possibly enough to convert the Earth to a second asteroid belt...Astrodragon wrote: Well, it's not a relief if you're standing next to it!
Or not really sure when it will happen - thats a major r eason they moved so fast, the longer they leave things the greater the chance of an exploding dragon
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Yes but Fey lived next door to Billy Wilson. AKA Tennyo, AKA The STAR STALKER. If Billy had lost cohesion.... estimates were the entire Eastern seaboard at a minimum, possibly enough to convert the Earth to a second asteroid belt...Astrodragon wrote: Well, it's not a relief if you're standing next to it!
Or not really sure when it will happen - thats a major r eason they moved so fast, the longer they leave things the greater the chance of an exploding dragon
Don't forget that Fey, herself, is a source of a potential magical explosion of that magnitude, should anything go wrong.
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In any case, from Morgana's pov it doesn't really matter how much she explodes, just that she does

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Astrodragon wrote: I am slightly surprised at the lack of comments and supposition on Thulia's grandmother. I guess you weren't interested in her with two hot teens to be worrying about
I noted that but wasn't inclined to comment. The description suggests she's a succubus or something like that. The description of Thulia's formal robes suggests something similar. Of course, it may simply be that, as some kind of feminine fire spirit, that's how "hot stuff" manifests on the physical plane. Of course, if Thulia has the same effect on males that her grandmother does, there will be some interesting times as she wanders around Whateley. I wonder if she had anything to do with Adore (from Gen 1).
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As to the rest...hmm, actually we haven't seen Thulia interacting with any males, except the cult, and that doesn't really count.
You'll have to wait and see what happens when she does, I guess

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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Before I forget: I also noticed that the agreement doesn't seem to include a clause allowing Bruce to come with.
You're quite correct, Bruce isn't included. He'll be staying at home, keeping an eye on things and drinking beer.
Anyway, he'd only be a bad influence on the kids.
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Astrodragon wrote: You're quite correct, Bruce isn't included. He'll be staying at home, keeping an eye on things and drinking beer.
Anyway, he'd only be a bad influence on the kids.
Smart guy. Of course, if it were Gen1, the kids might be a bad influence on him.
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Astrodragon wrote: Well, we have tried to tome things down a bit from G1.
In any case, from Morgana's pov it doesn't really matter how much she explodes, just that she does
VERY understandable. Kimba went a bit too DBZ. It's fine if that's what you like, but balanced it ain't.
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null0trooper wrote: Re: Tanau, I figure she's got an interesting and lively past that easily predates Gen1. Considering fire by itself likes to go all in damn the torpedoes! style, no demands, no regrets, "lively" could be an understatement.
Someone's got to scandalize the young'uns!
Astrodragon wrote: You're quite correct, Bruce isn't included. He'll be staying at home, keeping an eye on things and drinking beer.
Anyway, he'd only be a bad influence on the kids.
Smart guy. Of course, if it were Gen1, the kids might be a bad influence on him.
Oh yes, Tanau WAY predates Gen1
Interesting? I hope so

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How to describe her love life / history thing? "She has been in love.", could cut it?
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MM, you could just say she has an interesting and complicated past

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I was so worried, about whether Morgana would actually make it out intact, or if there's some super-mega-twist that would happen like being thrown into an alternate universe or something for reals.
That final Scenario before the big battle! A classic Scenario, but really effective! And I guess it was limited by the need for an Essential Flaw?
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Date <redacted>, Time <redacted>, Location <redacted with extreme prejudice>
Interesting... Redaction means that the info is known to someone, and that it exists... I wonder what that info is...
Maybe those places were real alternate universes or something...
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Morgana not being fully healed... And it taking several weeks for full restoration... Bad... Too many things can happen in weeks. And that link, where power can be drawn. And Halloween happening in a few weeks, where the Veils are weak...
How long will it take Thulia to get back to full strength, hmm?
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Ask her no questions, she'll tell you no lies.
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Okay, how did they change the workroom that quickly, I bet the workshop kids at Whateley would pay to know. At least Caitlin is concerned about how Thulia has planned all this out, I sure am. Bruce is being a little too calm and casual about all this imo. An escape valve for the energy in case this goes wrong, please let it not be needed.Monday 17th October, somewhere other than Earth
Thulia doesn't know what to say, okay, now everyone should be worried. Wait, what? How will Thulia not be with Morgana physically, do the circles block her from helping Morgana? A deeper connection with Morgana, just what is Thulia planning here? No time for a blood-bond, yikes.
What Thulia says next, way to make Morgana blush."The simplest way is to give you what is commonly - and misleadingly - termed a demon mark. It... well, to put it in a simple way, it makes you my servant, and so I can provide you with power." Caitlin had half risen to her feet, obviously getting ready to interject, as she looked me full in the eyes. "But I don't want to give you one."
Why do I have the feeling this is considered a very serious step in a relationship in the supernatural world."What I want is to exchange a link with you. We would both carry a mark of that bond, but it would be a bonding of equals, not a master-servant one."
Not marriage or even an engagement, aww rats. Equate to a promise ring, do it!
Woohoo! They are so cute together."Thulia, I would be happy to exchange such a promise with you, if you will accept it." Then I leaned forward, whispering and hoping our two kibitzers wouldn't hear. "And not just because of any help it might allow you to give me."
Thulia standing gracefully, if Morgana did that I think more than a few boys and girls would have their eyes on her. Get naked for the ritual, Thulia actually blushes, priceless. Hehe, Morgana getting a good look at Thulia, normal teen. Interesting tattoos which Thulia has. With how Thulia is acting towards Morgana I very highly doubt she could lie to her right now.
I wonder which memory Caitlin recalled there. That conversation between Caitlin and Bruce, too perfect. And of course, you cheat when dealing with a true demon if they don't play fair, that should be common sense for anyone dealing with the supernatural."Yeah. But sometimes you just have to trust someone."
I wasn't sure what the look on her face meant, I'd obviously triggered some sort of memory or something. She finally patted me on the shoulder. "Go on then. But don't say afterward I didn't warn you."
Spell written on parchment, now that is old school and awesome. Impressive athame Thulia has, very curious what the glistening black material is. A long, thin chain which seems to be made of gold, is that orichalcum? An inch across mark on the shoulder-blade even uncovered only a few who notice something that size. Cut in the palm and then metal rubbing into it, ouch!
Well, that is a very interesting way to mark someone, thought it would involve more blood or pain though. Hehe, trying to look over your shoulder to see something on it, I've tried that myself. Identical mark, knew Thulia wouldn't lie to Morgana. And a nice bit of healing by Thulia, glad it got Morgana interested in learning healing magic, MMM needs a healer.
Metal bracers for each wrist, why didn't Thulia explain what they are for? Obsidian surface for the floor, very nice.
When they said this demon would fight dirty they weren't kidding, that is some nasty business. And mixing thought, reality, and illusion, yikes, Morgana is in for a very tough fight."Now, I have to allow both you and the essence of the psychofágos to leave you. It's necessary to have you fight it, it's the only way to be completely rid of it, and if you were to do that actually in your body you wouldn't survive. Once you are both outside of your body, the demon may attempt to fight immediately, or it may attempt to trick or trap you with various visions or illusions. I can't say what, so you need to remember what the final outcome needs to be, which is you fighting - and beating - the psychofágos. Is that all clear?"
Thulia might need a sword, once more I can hope it is a case of having it and not needing it. Whoa, now that is a bastard sword to be intimidated by. You really know how to describe an impressive magical ritual being performed, the visual effects, the sensations which Morgana is experiencing. Astral projection and man is Morgana's cord different and cool from the usual astral thread depicted in stories.
*eyes bug out* That description is like something from my childhood nightmares.Beneath me I could see, apparently extruding itself from my body, a thick mass of writhing tentacles, glowing a crepuscular greenish colour.
Whoa, Thulia just went up several levels of badass in my eyes, pulling the psychofágos from Morgana's body like that as it struggles.
I want a sword like that!Well, she had an answer for that too. Chanting in a voice that resembled the crackling of flames rather than the human tones Morgana was more familiar with, her free hand gestured, and her sword lept into her grasp. The golden runes etched into the dark surface were a study in brilliance, and the edges of the sword itself lit the room as they burned star bright. With another tearing snarl, she slashed it forward and through those stubbornly resistant tentacles, severing them as the creature howled in protest and shot up towards the ceiling.
Is this landscape part of what exists beyond the portal Morgana and the demon got sucked through or is the psychofágos already messing with Morgana? Morgana feeling cold, uh oh.
This is either some very freaky place Morgana has been sent or illusions mixed with reality to lure her to the psychofágos. When you can't trust your own senses, trust your instincts.No, it looked more like a narrow pyramid, or maybe a fat obelisk, I couldn't be certain. Still, nothing else suggested itself, so I shrugged unhappily and started to head for it. Maybe I'd find people there. Or even a fire, that would be good too.
No moon in this place with only the stars to see by, Morgana's vision must be very impressive. What the heck is that creature!?! Is it the psychofágos in disguise or some other threat in this place? Back to a large rock, good start, plus she seems to have her sense of humor intact with her thoughts about BMA. Very nice opening attack by Morgana, it isn't until you are in a dangerous fight you appreciate all the training the teachers give you.
Wounds it again and gets pinned against the rock, this fight turned quickly. Tears into it over and over again, but finally it bites Morgana, that is one brutal bite to leave her shoulder half-numb. Whoa, the old flame down the throat trick to kill it, Morgana is scary when backed into a corner.
Bulletproof yet the bite of this creature caused her to bleed a little, that puts it into perspective. 3 more appear and drive her towards the pyramid, why do I find that highly suspicious? No openings or doors guess it might not be a trap otherwise you would want to lure her inside into more confined spaces. Ice-covered sides and having to use her claws to climb it, okay, back thinking this is a trap.
Safe from the creatures on top of the structure.
Part of a summoning ritual, one for evocation, who could have built this.It was only about 50 feet across, flat and covered in a sheen of ice crystals that sparkled like gems in the starlight. Under other circumstances, I'd have thought it a rather attractive look. But there was something half-visible under the frost in the centre, so I walked carefully over to it, before kneeling and brushing the frigid crystals away. Well, that wasn't what I'd expected - I'd half hoped for a door of some sort.
Starting to lose sensation and might freeze, this really is a hellscape. Casting in dragon form, please let this work okay for once. Oh crud, the lines and symbols glowing without her doing anything. The creatures, the cold, this structure, all seem like a trap Morgana was driven in to by the psychofágos.
I hate being right sometimes, so that is the psychofágos' name. All this just to test her, this creep needs to be taken down hard.sQjU5qVccFLd 'looked' at its victim as she stood in the circle. While it would have been useful if she had succumbed to its first testing, it was only a simple one, testing her fortitude.
Morgana in a summoning triangle.
Well, she took some ranks in overdramatic introductions. More of the psychofágos toying with her, torturing her now, foolish. Treating her like a demon, trying to make her think she is a demon, so now trying to break her psychologically. I've heard some bad wording for demonic contracts but this one seems very bad, too many loopholes. A collar to seal the agreement, that seems very bad for Morgana." Spawn of the outer darkness, bow to the Blood Witch, Mistress of Demons!"
The wound on her shoulder has healed, Morgana, remember what Thulia told you the psychofágos would do to get at you!
Eww! At least Morgana has a robe now, even if it might not be real.That sort of interest wasn't just for a demon, was it? Oh hell no, she was old, she must have been over twice my age, no way did I want THAT sort of interest from a near-wrinkly like her!
A production of telling Morgana what she is acquiring, oh brother, we have a ham. The Seal of Akkaba, current guardian of it Dr. Miracle, this is starting to sound like something out of a comic book. =-P
Traveling in a couple of vans, who does a robbery of a magical target like this? The psychofágos is showing little creativity outside its specialty. Wards took down like that, low security for a magical artifact, come on Morgana, see through this already. Half moon in the sky, few lights on in the mansion, Morgana not told the time. *facepalms* This group makes the Secret Squirrels look like elite operatives. Warded windows yet the Blood Witch didn't see the magic, so many little details adding up to something big.
Man-sized stone statues in the corner, yet nothing unusual to Morgana's sight. If they don't start moving at one point I will be shocked. Getting Morgana to open a hidden safe, why didn't she just hire a mutant with superstrength for this job, another hole in all this. Tough safe, but nothing a safecracker couldn't get through.
Dr. Miracle shows up and of course a fight breaks out. The Blood Witch the only one who gives him any trouble, so of course she orders Morgana to kill him.
Oh crud, has Morgana thinking she is actually a demon, this is very bad. And Dr. Miracle animates the statues, Morgana tossing one into another yet this barely slows them down.Oh great, tell him exactly what I am, why don't you?
Dr. Miracle being overwhelmed by the Blood Witch, while Morgana having trouble dealing with the statues as they hit hard. Nice slicing them up though, starting to worry Morgana won't snap out of the psychofágos' tricks without Thulia intervening soon. Dr. Miracle bound and gagged, Blood Witch not worried about anyone else showing up, good grief.
The Seal of Akkaba in hand, minions escaping through the window, and Blood Witch set the place on fire to kill Dr. Miracle, please let Morgana see how wrong this all is. Morgana carries him outside and Blood Witch orders her to kill Dr. Miracle, this is a line she won't cross.
Overplayed your hand, never try to force someone to kill. Morgana free of the collar and of course Blood Witch runs away in fear of her. Oh good grief, the authorities arrive right after the real villain flees and threaten Morgana, too convenient to me.She screamed at me, spittle flying from her lips. "Do as I say, foul creature! I want him dead, to show people I am not to be trifled with!" Then she raised her staff, and my neck felt on fire as that damn collar fed what felt like bottled lightning through me. I screamed and fell to my knees, still watching her.
No reading her rights, given orange clothing, and questioned, Morgana, it should be obvious this isn't real! Cuffed and chained to a steel table in a room, *hits head on table* 4 guys in suits like that with dark glasses, hi-tech toys like around the Whateley labs, plus pointing their weapons at her. They claimed to be from the MCO, I really wish all foreign students are shown what the American MCO is really like within the first week at Whateley. Trying to say she doesn't exist, now trying to break her and make her believe she is a demon again.
A magic circle activated by a crystal, I don't think the MCO can do that. Morgana, remember what Thulia told you! And using Abraxus who is dead, starting to think the psychofágos can only draw things from Morgana's memory and imagination to use against her."I'm not interested in your explanation. Your appearance and lack of ID make it obvious, and while our normal remit is to take care of dangerous mutants, we do have training as to what to do in a case like yours."
Is this all part of the psychofágos and the mission it was given by the cult? Using her worst fear, someone who tormented her and she saw killed, brought back to life to finish what he started. Morgana needs help now! Going for her throat with a knife, and I think the psychofágos just made its last mistake. Darn, he doesn't use it on her and has her taken away, come on, something has to happen before it is too late. Cursed cuffs like before, her worst nightmare coming to life, seeing Morgana like this hurts.
Tortured by shock batons once more, darn it! Ceri, Bianca, and Tanay cuffed, chained, naked, and gagged next to the creeps. No! Cutting her sister, then Tanya, and now Bianca, how he talks about her regeneration makes my skin crawl. Forcing Morgana to watch, ugh. Binding oaths to serve him or he kills her friends slowly, Thulia, act already!
Using Tanya and Bianca at least makes Morgana realize her time at Whateley wasn't a dream, big mistake on the psychofágos' part.
And the big chink in his plan is revealed, not knowing his target's history. And the flames of Morgana are unleashed once more! Breaking the illusion apart like pixels in a video game, nice imagery.Then frowned - something about it was odd. I examined every inch of it, as carefully as possible. No, it was the same cell I'd been held in months ago. It took me a while before I suddenly realised what was odd. It wasn't just a cell, it was the cell - the one I'd been held in. But that was impossible. Manx had shown me pictures of how the base had looked after the AEGIS strike force had finished with it - she said seeing it destroyed would give me closure - and this cell had been smashed into rubble.
The psychofágos going to put her through another trial, stubborn cuss.
Oh no, not this gag. This proves how uncreative the psychofágos is, using the old 'make them think all they experienced was in their mind and they're crazy' bit. Making him think he is still Rob, IV drip to sedate him when he freaks out, Dr. Smithson, I wonder if Rob/Morgana ever watched that episode of Buffy. Ah, trying to make him think it was all a coma dream.Bedlam Hospice for the Psychologically Disturbed, time unknown
And I guessed wrong again, trying to make him think the robbers used psychotropic gas and 'Rob' had a particularly bad reaction and hallucinations. Manipulating him into believing his true memories are false, now I want to see the psychofágos tortured someone before being destroyed. Betting those nightmares are his real memories trying to break through the lie.
No mirrors in the bathroom because some patients can get violent, nice excuse to hide the truth. Dr. Bellows, this seems like a big mistake, using someone from Whateley to try and convince her her time at Whateley never happened. Change his appearance, figures.
Arrgh! It's starting to work, except 'Rob' wants them to be real, good, keep fighting.
This, to me, seems like a very bad move by the psychofágos, since mutants would be known even outside Whateley due to various incidents around the world. 'Rob's' own sister being a mutant for one thing."It seems like you have some interesting issues - well, we all do - but you seem to have integrated yours into your coma memories. For example, this idea of mutant superheroes is straight out of some popular entertainment, as is the idea of a school for them. As for turning into a girl, well, you're a teenager." He raised a hand as I sat up, cutting off what I was going to say. "It doesn't mean you are gay, or transgendered. Just that at some point you've wondered what it would be like to be the opposite sex, and this has been made up as part of your fantasy memories."
In this place for what seems like days, trying to make 'him' think they are fake. Thulia, it is now or never! Of course the internet of this place would confirm everything they told 'Rob' is true, *sigh* At least 'Rob' still wants that other life to be real, still hope.
It seems 'Rob' is inside his own mind now, at least to me, the cavern the place where his true self has been imprisoned. And yup, her Morgana self bound by mithril chains melded into glassy pillars. Trying to call out to 'Rob' but muted, this is the worst kind of torture. Frustration and fear, for 'Rob', how can Morgana overcome this?
Waking up and 'Rob' realizes it wasn't like the other 'dreams' since waking up here, yet not how yet. Her eyes, making 'Rob' realize since waking here 'he' hasn't been able to look in a mirror and see. Yes! The pad turned off used as a mirror, that was a fatal mistake by the psychofágos. And once more Morgana breaks free from the trap, good to see.
Great, the psychofágos is going to destroy and consume her now and be done with it. Using an entity without patience for the job is a very bad idea.
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I'm guessing this is what was really beyond that portal. Chaotic place, isn't it?The landscape was weird, it seemed to consist of a flat plane with outcroppings of what looked like large crystals in various colours scattered around, in fact, what I was lying on was hard crystal as well. The oddest thing was the sky itself, a twisting and formless mass of coruscating shades of red and blue that made me feel queasy after a minute of watching it.
A bolt of forked lightning, I think even at Whateley that would get more than a double-take. The writhing mass of tentacles once more, bile-yellow tentacles, yuck. Sadistic pleasure at Morgana getting ready to face it in combat, this is the most twisted entity I've ever seen. Darn it! It can manipulate the energy and crystals of this place, forming a 5' tall fantasy imp to attack with, at least this seems easier than its psychological warfare. Scream and leap, like a crazed berserker. Darn it! The psychofágos can repair all damage to its creations here.
A war of attrition as Morgana keeps getting cut and bleeds some from each. Grabs the sucker from behind and channels fire into her hands until the heat and her strength destroy the crystal imp. Go Morgana! Charging the psychofágos with fire-charged hands, ignoring the energy blasts from it, pulled in by its tentacles and trying to overwhelm it with her fire, this doesn't look good.
So, don't try to brute force it."Ah, little human, You still haven't realised, have you? I lived in you, I know your power, that power runs through me. It doesn't matter how much of it you use - use all your power, I will always have that and more of mine, you can never win!"
Oops, wrong on my part again. Tapping into the demon mark for more power, the fire becoming blue-white, dang. *eyes bug out* Morgana's arms and hands starting to burn, that is a lot of power to do that. The psychofágos destroyed, Morgana's arms burned and she doesn't even wish to look at her hands, how bad is it? At least it is over now, so now Morgana can heal and recover.
Morgana in that bad of shape physically, Thulia telling her not to try and speak, just let her take care of her for now.
*winces* I knew it would be bad, but dang. Healing spells and pushing Morgana into sleep, I guess with such a demon involved they were expecting bad injuries.She winced inside as she saw the lines burnt into her arms and the charred and bleeding hands.
Caitlin is very protective of the students under her care, so the healing had better work.Bruce shrugged. "We weren't sure just how bad, but yes. We already knew she was damaged by the psychofágos before she started, and the ritual was always going to cause more due to the effort involved. She was channelling too much energy through already-damaged parts of her. But it was the only way to drive the psychofágos out of her safely."
Bruce actually having to get Thulia to stop her work healing Morgana as she has tapped herself out.
Dang, sounds like she was putting her own energy which keeps her alive into healing Morgana. Morgana's natural healing will finish the job, good, because we just saw the surface damage. What it did to her internally I don't even want to think about.The once-flaming strands were now a pale ash-grey, and she looked at them for a moment before nodding.
Okay, confirmation by Thulia that the psychofágos is completely gone from Morgana, hooray! Caitlin really wants to get back to Whateley with Morgana, guess you can't get over the image of corrupting demons you grew up with.
Copy of Morgana's data for the people back at Whateley wonder if this will give them any new insights on her. Ceridwen on her feet once she sees Morgana unconscious, good big sister. Morgana took to Doyle by Caitlin with Ceri going along to keep an eye on her sister, Grimes having a chat with Thulia, why do I think it will be about more than what she did to save Morgana's life?
Mrs. Horton can tell how much all this took out of Thulia, exchange of information and Thulia wishes to stay with Morgana until she wakes up, awww. I think Mrs. Horton knows what Morgana means to Thulia, she is a romantic at heart from what I've seen.
Ceri excited Morgana is awake but keeps her quiet as she shows that Thulia is asleep in another chair, so sweet. Knowing you are going to live after being given basically a death sentence, man, Morgana is going to need a lot more counseling for a while.Monday 17th October, evening, Doyle Medical Centre.
Morgana has already figured out Ms. Grimes. Morgana in that much pain yet pulls Thulia into a hug, daw, so sweet. And that kiss, Ceri is a good big sister to leave them alone. Aww, kiss goodbye as Thulia is keeping her promise and showing Grimes she can be trusted, at least she can come back to visit.I smiled. "Yeah. Grimes is like that, she's only fierce when she has a reason, I think."
Dr. Tennant smiling at Morgana, the first time in Doyle where she wasn't in very bad shape when she arrived.
Bwahaha, Thulia just loves to tease her girlfriend.Thulia made a small gesture to the Doctor - I assumed some sort of ritual thing, it wasn't magic. "Thank you, Doctor. I'm sure you will manage everything." She gave me a quick glance before finishing off. "Better you than, me, she was a terrible patient when I was looking after her!"
"HEY! I was not....!"
A wonderful story from start to finish. From the fallout with Jack and his thugs plan outing Cally, Morgana being so cheerful in the morning and the reason why, the warding of Cally and Erica's dorm room needed due to the fallout, the increasing issues with Morgana's essence control. How Mrs. Horton tried to get Tia back into Poe and how this leads to the hearing before Mazarin. So many things happened over this story, but finding out about how the cult put the psychofágos into Morgana as a means to control her or failing that kill her. I hope the remains of that cult are hunted down soon.
This last part hurt to watch Morgana go through all that, the psychofágos putting her through these trials to try and break her over and over again. I just wished I could reach out and tell Morgana what was going on each time she was placed in a new trial. But when she finally took that demon down it was so satisfying, to see Morgana with the aid of Thulia overcome this threat so completely. And that last part with Thulia was so sweet, anyone who questions Thulia's love for Morgana is blinded by prejudice after all this. I can't wait to read more of Morgana's continuing adventures alongside her friends and see more of Thulia as well.
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Malady wrote: Whooo!
I was so worried, about whether Morgana would actually make it out intact, or if there's some super-mega-twist that would happen like being thrown into an alternate universe or something for reals.
That final Scenario before the big battle! A classic Scenario, but really effective! And I guess it was limited by the need for an Essential Flaw?
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Interesting... Redaction means that the info is known to someone, and that it exists... I wonder what that info is...
Maybe those places were real alternate universes or something...
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Morgana not being fully healed... And it taking several weeks for full restoration... Bad... Too many things can happen in weeks. And that link, where power can be drawn. And Halloween happening in a few weeks, where the Veils are weak...
How long will it take Thulia to get back to full strength, hmm?
Not long, she'll be fine in the morning. Its to do with how integrated her (and Morgana's) body is with her magic, I'll probably say more on this in the next story or so
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mhalpern wrote: Actually Morgans not being immediately back to full strength may be a blessing in disguise, until now she has basically been wearing a weight that has been getting heavier and heavier over time, and now it's gone, she doesn't know her strength and will over power things. This counts towards her physical strength as well given that she is like an energizer but powered by magic. Kinda like Ribbon's problem with strength after manifesting, if she didn't realize she had it and thought she was already used to her powers, but with magic on top ..
Well she isn't really going to get more powerful, but what she will do it get more flexibility. While she will have to relearn casting spells in her Dragonform, now they wont go crazy. It will let her carry on developing her abilities, for a while this has been blocked by the parasites presence.
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I wasn't thinking more power per say, necessarily, just a lot more ease in accessing it. Which early on will make her intuition on how hard to push things cause mishaps.Astrodragon wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Actually Morgans not being immediately back to full strength may be a blessing in disguise, until now she has basically been wearing a weight that has been getting heavier and heavier over time, and now it's gone, she doesn't know her strength and will over power things. This counts towards her physical strength as well given that she is like an energizer but powered by magic. Kinda like Ribbon's problem with strength after manifesting, if she didn't realize she had it and thought she was already used to her powers, but with magic on top ..
Well she isn't really going to get more powerful, but what she will do it get more flexibility. While she will have to relearn casting spells in her Dragonform, now they wont go crazy. It will let her carry on developing her abilities, for a while this has been blocked by the parasites presence.
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mhalpern wrote:
I wasn't thinking more power per say, necessarily, just a lot more ease in accessing it. Which early on will make her intuition on how hard to push things cause mishaps.Astrodragon wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Actually Morgans not being immediately back to full strength may be a blessing in disguise, until now she has basically been wearing a weight that has been getting heavier and heavier over time, and now it's gone, she doesn't know her strength and will over power things. This counts towards her physical strength as well given that she is like an energizer but powered by magic. Kinda like Ribbon's problem with strength after manifesting, if she didn't realize she had it and thought she was already used to her powers, but with magic on top ..
Well she isn't really going to get more powerful, but what she will do it get more flexibility. While she will have to relearn casting spells in her Dragonform, now they wont go crazy. It will let her carry on developing her abilities, for a while this has been blocked by the parasites presence.
From now on exploding bunnies will be deliberate!
Yes, there will be issues. Some good, some bad, and at least one... interesting

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But Morgana is magic colorblind. Or at least was.
Was the blue flame she channeled in the [unspecified] realm...I don't really know where I'm going with this question. I guess what I'm trying to ask is that has Morgana's sensitivity changed, was it blocked previously, or will she start picking up some of Thulia's different applications during "study sessions" when she visits?
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Katssun wrote: Thulia's flame magic changes color based on the effects she's using, as seen from the perspective of Caitlin and Bruce.
But Morgana is magic colorblind. Or at least was.
Was the blue flame she channeled in the [unspecified] realm...I don't really know where I'm going with this question. I guess what I'm trying to ask is that has Morgana's sensitivity changed, was it blocked previously, or will she start picking up some of Thulia's different applications during "study sessions" when she visits?
Morgana is still colour-blind as concerns magic. So while types of magic are traditionally associated with colours, she can't tell.
However the coloured flame effects are visible to her, as they are a physical thing.
The blue flame was just that with the xtra power her flame was burning really hot.
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(1) Yes, that chain is orichalcum. It's horribly expensive stuff, which is why Thulia only has it on loan (among other reasons)
(2) Thulia's bracers

(3) With no artificial light to ruin it, and no cloud, a humans night vision is surprisingly good. Morgana's is better, so seeing stuff by starlight is pretty easy.
(4) Is the parasite uncreative? Well, it's hellspawn, and while its old and cunning, it's not that smart. There is also the issue of how creative hellspawn can be as well.
(5) The 'make them think they were crazy' trope is, when done well, horribly effective. It may be a trope, but that doesn't mean it doesn't work. And when you can't prove its fake...
(6) Oh, you'll see more of the cult soon.
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I too picked up on the wording of "the flaw" as opposed to "a flaw", and immediately thought of the Essential Flaw rule. Whether that's incidental or not doesn't really matter though, right?
I have concerns for Morgana's wellbeing, as multiple antagonistic groups are all readying to make moves during her recovery window, IIRC.
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And yes, there are a few people who will look to take advantage of her until shes fully recovered.
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Or was I too subtle about it?
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Astrodragon wrote: A few points for Dreamer.
(1) Yes, that chain is orichalcum. It's horribly expensive stuff, which is why Thulia only has it on loan (among other reasons)
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If she can manipulate orichalcum, that rules out quite a few demonic origins for Thulia e.a.
So what could she be when she is closely tied to the (elemental?) plane of fire, has horns and wings but does not seem to be associated with demons of humanity's lore. (and in fact, when she was observing justice being meted out (rather than the vengeance she first wanted) her thoughts suggested that while she could visit the infernal part of the divine/infernal spectrum, it was not something she and her grandmother were directly related nor practially involved with.
So likely nothing mythos related (or the orichalcum would have been a much bigger problem for her), nothing directly demonic as humanity's major religions understand that, and Jinns are kind of unlikely too .
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Erianaiel wrote:
Astrodragon wrote: A few points for Dreamer.
(1) Yes, that chain is orichalcum. It's horribly expensive stuff, which is why Thulia only has it on loan (among other reasons)
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If she can manipulate orichalcum, that rules out quite a few demonic origins for Thulia e.a.
So what could she be when she is closely tied to the (elemental?) plane of fire, has horns and wings but does not seem to be associated with demons of humanity's lore. (and in fact, when she was observing justice being meted out (rather than the vengeance she first wanted) her thoughts suggested that while she could visit the infernal part of the divine/infernal spectrum, it was not something she and her grandmother were directly related nor practially involved with.
So likely nothing mythos related (or the orichalcum would have been a much bigger problem for her), nothing directly demonic as humanity's major religions understand that, and Jinns are kind of unlikely too .
Thulia is definitely not hellspawn, as was shown in the origin story. I'll give you a freebie, she's not class X/GOO either.
Exactly what she is, I don't want to reveal just yet (I'll just let you worry about it!)
The only time we've seen orichalcum, we learned that being killed by an orichalcum weapon would have been deadly to Sarah (a GOO), although it wasn't clear if it would have been permanently fatal or (more likely) destroyed her form on this plane.
But even if it was as deadly to Thulia, there is a big difference between getting your head lopped off by something and just touching it. After all, there are quite a few materials which are deadly to humans but can be handled safely, or with proper precautions.
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Erianaiel wrote: So what could she be when she is closely tied to the (elemental?) plane of fire, has horns and wings but does not seem to be associated with demons of humanity's lore. (and in fact, when she was observing justice being meted out (rather than the vengeance she first wanted) her thoughts suggested that while she could visit the infernal part of the divine/infernal spectrum, it was not something she and her grandmother were directly related nor practially involved with.
There's no reason (aside from story context or WoG) precluding her from being a jinn or some other race native to a plane that's metaphysically tied to fire as an element. This isn't D&D, so jinn (or any other sentient race) don't have to all have the same stats, alignments, goals, etc.
Astrodragon wrote: Thulia is definitely not hellspawn, as was shown in the origin story. I'll give you a freebie, she's not class X/GOO either.
Exactly what she is, I don't want to reveal just yet (I'll just let you worry about it!)
She's a girl, and girls just wanna have fun!
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null0trooper wrote:
Erianaiel wrote: So what could she be when she is closely tied to the (elemental?) plane of fire, has horns and wings but does not seem to be associated with demons of humanity's lore. (and in fact, when she was observing justice being meted out (rather than the vengeance she first wanted) her thoughts suggested that while she could visit the infernal part of the divine/infernal spectrum, it was not something she and her grandmother were directly related nor practially involved with.
There's no reason (aside from story context or WoG) precluding her from being a jinn or some other race native to a plane that's metaphysically tied to fire as an element. This isn't D&D, so jinn (or any other sentient race) don't have to all have the same stats, alignments, goals, etc.
Astrodragon wrote: Thulia is definitely not hellspawn, as was shown in the origin story. I'll give you a freebie, she's not class X/GOO either.
Exactly what she is, I don't want to reveal just yet (I'll just let you worry about it!)
She's a girl, and girls just wanna have fun!
She's a girl, and girls just wanna have fun with their girlfriend
There, fify!

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Astrodragon wrote:
Erianaiel wrote:
Astrodragon wrote: A few points for Dreamer.
(1) Yes, that chain is orichalcum. It's horribly expensive stuff, which is why Thulia only has it on loan (among other reasons)
(
If she can manipulate orichalcum, that rules out quite a few demonic origins for Thulia e.a.
So what could she be when she is closely tied to the (elemental?) plane of fire, has horns and wings but does not seem to be associated with demons of humanity's lore. (and in fact, when she was observing justice being meted out (rather than the vengeance she first wanted) her thoughts suggested that while she could visit the infernal part of the divine/infernal spectrum, it was not something she and her grandmother were directly related nor practially involved with.
So likely nothing mythos related (or the orichalcum would have been a much bigger problem for her), nothing directly demonic as humanity's major religions understand that, and Jinns are kind of unlikely too .
Thulia is definitely not hellspawn, as was shown in the origin story. I'll give you a freebie, she's not class X/GOO either.
Exactly what she is, I don't want to reveal just yet (I'll just let you worry about it!)
The only time we've seen orichalcum, we learned that being killed by an orichalcum weapon would have been deadly to Sarah (a GOO), although it wasn't clear if it would have been permanently fatal or (more likely) destroyed her form on this plane.
But even if it was as deadly to Thulia, there is a big difference between getting your head lopped off by something and just touching it. After all, there are quite a few materials which are deadly to humans but can be handled safely, or with proper precautions.
Well I seem to remember she is considered a demon as a denizen of another plane of existence that doesn't have good PR... Wait is Morgana's dragon form based off of Thulia too? She designed her humanoid body, so that would mean that her natural form is... Thulia's a dragon...
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Well, you could try offering her coffee to see.
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Astrodragon wrote:
Erianaiel wrote:
Astrodragon wrote: A few points for Dreamer.
(1) Yes, that chain is orichalcum. It's horribly expensive stuff, which is why Thulia only has it on loan (among other reasons)
(
If she can manipulate orichalcum, that rules out quite a few demonic origins for Thulia e.a.
So what could she be when she is closely tied to the (elemental?) plane of fire, has horns and wings but does not seem to be associated with demons of humanity's lore. (and in fact, when she was observing justice being meted out (rather than the vengeance she first wanted) her thoughts suggested that while she could visit the infernal part of the divine/infernal spectrum, it was not something she and her grandmother were directly related nor practially involved with.
So likely nothing mythos related (or the orichalcum would have been a much bigger problem for her), nothing directly demonic as humanity's major religions understand that, and Jinns are kind of unlikely too .
Thulia is definitely not hellspawn, as was shown in the origin story. I'll give you a freebie, she's not class X/GOO either.
Exactly what she is, I don't want to reveal just yet (I'll just let you worry about it!)
I am not asking for confirmation or spoilers or anything. But speculating about things is half the fun on the discussion threads here

The only time we've seen orichalcum, we learned that being killed by an orichalcum weapon would have been deadly to Sarah (a GOO), although it wasn't clear if it would have been permanently fatal or (more likely) destroyed her form on this plane.
But even if it was as deadly to Thulia, there is a big difference between getting your head lopped off by something and just touching it. After all, there are quite a few materials which are deadly to humans but can be handled safely, or with proper precautions.
Fair enough.
But we don't make jewelry out those highly poisonous substances either (or at least, not anymore after we understood just how poisonous they were

Still, I tried to be subtle when I wrote that the orichalcum necklace ruled out some demonic natures for Thulia (or more accurately, I was covering my shapely behind

And the good thing is that I still have no idea what Thulia, and by extension Morgana, is
Just whittling away some of the less likely possibilities based on the little hints and clues that are strewn through the stories

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As to Thulia... I think there are actually enough snippets to work out what she is, but yes, they are scattered, and some might not be what you think there are

Things will be revealed clearly in time, as Morgana's infestation was.
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