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5 years 11 months ago #1 by Yolandria
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  • Another great Gen 1 story to enjoy. Post in the comments below!

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    5 years 11 months ago #2 by XaltatunOfAcheron
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  • Nice story. I look forward to more from our fragile porcelain doll.
    5 years 11 months ago #3 by Malady
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  • Whoo! It's here / back!

    Fixx x Porcelain Romance is still great!

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    How to kill Killzone... Does his Zone have a time limit?

    How many blasts can he use in a row... Range of Teleports?

    He still needs to breathe... Burn the Zone?
    5 years 11 months ago #4 by mhalpern
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  • Malady wrote: Whoo! It's here / back!

    Fixx x Porcelain Romance is still great!

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    How to kill Killzone... Does his Zone have a time limit?

    How many blasts can he use in a row... Range of Teleports?

    He still needs to breathe... Burn the Zone?


    problem with that last one is if you need to breathe too. perhaps its best if you could keep him from escaping, and restrain him, unfortunately Collin is pretty short range...

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    5 years 11 months ago #5 by Dreamer
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    5 years 11 months ago #6 by Anne
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  • My main comment on this is going to be that when someone uploaded it, for some reason a lot of the spaces between sentences seems to have disappeared.
    While this is annoying, it certainly doesn't detract from Morpheus' finely crafted tale of just who and what Porcelain is. She is a changeling... Surprise anyone?
    But more to the point is that she is in hiding from a homicidal brother... Gulp!
    5 years 11 months ago #7 by Angeldude
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  • Gasp. It turns out Porcelain was secretly a Whateley Protagonist Changeling all along! And she apparently doesn't realize how much of her team would laugh at her being ashamed about it. Gwen and Dana are both Posies, so they probably know about each other, and the others from Poe would know about them. If she revealed that status, she would probably be more welcome with them.

    Widowmaker doesn’t have a daughter…

    Neither does Gizmatic, yet here we are.

    Guess she's not as clueless about Whateley as she seemed.

    Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
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    5 years 11 months ago #8 by null0trooper
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  • Dreamer wrote: She learned all that about the various members of the Bad Seeds by observing them, the Secret Squirrels could learn something about recon from Porcelain.


    They could even learn from Bugs Bunny.

    They're that dethpicable.

    Dreamer wrote: An intricate mask on her face, porcelain armor on her shoulders, forearms, and knees, she has full control over it and more. Porcelain blades on the tips of each tendril, dang, brutal.


    My kind of lady!

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    Whateley Academy, Wednesday late afternoon, Nov 28th, 2007

    The Bad Seeds going to their secret clubhouse, Fairy Girl bugging Jobe about making a Sidhe conversion formula, that girl is nuts! Porcelain already at the clubhouse waiting for them, guess her dad told her where it was.


    Or she let one of the other Seeds lead her to it. With her fine control of both her manifested porcelain and her tendrils, tumbler locks should be a breeze without breaking out the picks.

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    5 years 11 months ago #9 by mhalpern
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  • I wonder what holdouts she can hide between her shells, now that she lost the advantage of surprise...

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    5 years 11 months ago - 5 years 11 months ago #10 by null0trooper
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  • mhalpern wrote: I wonder what holdouts she can hide between her shells, now that she lost the advantage of surprise...


    I got the impression that the inner and outer shells were form-fitting, in which case: not much in terms of weight and volume. With MATD in play, I'm not sure one would want to store much that way.

    The inside face of the porcelain armor might be a wicked place to have some spell slips hidden. For example, a "force return" spell that activates when the paper is torn.




    I should add that, like others, I found the pacing of the story and the way the revelations built one on another to be excellent.

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    5 years 11 months ago #11 by Kettlekorn
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  • Porcelain seems pretty sure that Killzone is bound by his promise, but I wonder about the wording of that promise. In the event that he decides he'd rather spare her, he might be able to say something like "I vowed to kill my brother, not my sister." OTOH, that doesn't work if he said something like "I promise to kill you." In that case he'd just need to grow up and realize that it's not dishonorable to break a promise that nobody involved actually wants kept.

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    Malady wrote: He still needs to breathe... Burn the Zone?


    problem with that last one is if you need to breathe too. perhaps its best if you could keep him from escaping, and restrain him, unfortunately Collin is pretty short range...

    The need for breathing has been a solved problem for a pretty long while. The key is to make sure you possess the solution when you need it, while your opponent does not. But asphyxiation is a poor strategy in this case, since he could teleport out. Something along the lines of knockout gas would be more useful, but it needs to either be hard to detect or very quickly delivered.

    As for Collin's range, so? His name is Flytrap, not Flyswatter; mobility is nice but totally unnecessary. Hide him inside an illusion, set out some bait nearby, and lure in the fly.

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    5 years 11 months ago - 5 years 11 months ago #12 by Malady
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  • If it costs Killzone, energy to keep things in and out, could just keep trying to breach the wall until it fails?

    Had flooding the zone somehow, as a possibility...

    Ferrofluid fake Porcelain tentacles, to try and zap Killzone with a redirected bolt?

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    If the Porcelain Shards can grow independently, Porcelain could fake her attempting the same thing as this time, get a few cuts and shards in, and grow them to cut Killzone to ribbons or something.
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    5 years 11 months ago #13 by Hebblejebble
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  • It feels a little simplistic but killing Killzone should only require a distraction and a handgun.
    He doesn't seem to have notably enhanced durability, if someone points a gun at him he has to either teleport away or zap them.
    Both of these options require him to recognize that he's under attack before he gets hit.

    He was wearing body armor so you might need a higher than average caliber, but Whateley is the kind of place where that can be procured.
    5 years 11 months ago #14 by Kettlekorn
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  • Handguns don't defeat good body armor. That takes a rifle, and rifles are inconvenient to lug around 24-7. More convenient than dying, sure, but there's another problem: Killzone is spying on her. He'll see that she's lugging around a rifle, and he'll counter that by investing in a PFG. Since his lightning comes from the dome instead of his body, he can then sit there in his bubble-within-a-bubble and fry everyone at his leisure. To pull this off, she'd have to first get a bag of holding with sufficient capacity to hide a rifle, and she'd need to keep the existence of both the bag and the rifle a secret.

    Grenades are probably a better option. Easier to conceal and harder to defend against. Plus, if the grenade doesn't kill him outright, it's a lot more likely to leave him stunned for a bit than a gunshot, giving her the opportunity to finish the job.

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  • Depending on the exact oath that Killzone swore, it might be possible for Porcelain to survive without completely neutralizing her brother.

    All we know about Killzone's oath is that Porcelain says "he has sworn to end my life." End whose life? His brother's, or the person who used to be his brother?

    The exact wording of an oath can be critical. If Killzone swore to kill his brother, that person doesn't exist anymore, and if he can be brought to see that, then he doesn't have to do anything. If he swore to kill the person who used to be his brother, I don't see any way to wiggle out of that one.

    So, the exact oath that Killzone swore is important. It often is with oaths.
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  • Court wrote: Depending on the exact oath that Killzone swore, it might be possible for Porcelain to survive without completely neutralizing her brother.

    All we know about Killzone's oath is that Porcelain says "he has sworn to end my life." End whose life? His brother's, or the person who used to be his brother?

    The exact wording of an oath can be critical. If Killzone swore to kill his brother, that person doesn't exist anymore, and if he can be brought to see that, then he doesn't have to do anything. If he swore to kill the person who used to be his brother, I don't see any way to wiggle out of that one.

    So, the exact oath that Killzone swore is important. It often is with oaths.


    This isn't a magically enforced oath, this is an oath of honor, the exact wording isn't as important as the intent behind the wording, what he meant when he said it...

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    5 years 11 months ago #17 by Anne
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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Handguns don't defeat good body armor. That takes a rifle, and rifles are inconvenient to lug around 24-7. More convenient than dying, sure, but there's another problem: Killzone is spying on her. He'll see that she's lugging around a rifle, and he'll counter that by investing in a PFG. Since his lightning comes from the dome instead of his body, he can then sit there in his bubble-within-a-bubble and fry everyone at his leisure. To pull this off, she'd have to first get a bag of holding with sufficient capacity to hide a rifle, and she'd need to keep the existence of both the bag and the rifle a secret.

    Grenades are probably a better option. Easier to conceal and harder to defend against. Plus, if the grenade doesn't kill him outright, it's a lot more likely to leave him stunned for a bit than a gunshot, giving her the opportunity to finish the job.

    It seems to me that someone needs to introduce Porcelain to Moebus. She needs one of his utility belts that she fills with various hideouts. I think if she got one of the wider ones she should be able to fit a rifle in one of the pockets...
    However I do agree, that grenades are a good plan as well, especially given her ability to control her inner shell. The fact that she can form useful tentacles that she can use to deliver, even a short distance stand-off attack is a great force multiplier. I also think she needs to talk to She Beast about a private meeting room that is guaranteed to be bug free to meet with her friends, then she needs to explain what is happening, tell them that she doesn't expect them to help her, but warn them that any time they are with her when there might be a low expectation of drawing a crowd they may be under attack from her brother.
    I suspect that her friends will be, What?! You really expect us to abandon you?!
    5 years 11 months ago #18 by Hebblejebble
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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Handguns don't defeat good body armor.

    Given the description of his facial features I assume that his head wasn't armoured but assuming that this will remain true and that you can reliably hit that target probably isn't a good plan.

    Kettlekorn wrote: He'll see that she's lugging around a rifle, and he'll counter that by investing in a PFG. Since his lightning comes from the dome instead of his body, he can then sit there in his bubble-within-a-bubble and fry everyone at his leisure.

    Thinking over this some more I think the Porcelain's biggest advantage is this Killzone seems to want to kill her face-to-face. Even without a PFG, he could teleport to any nearby hidey hole and rain down lightning without giving away his position.
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  • I particularly love the voice this story is written in. Porce is cold, distant, detached. Insulated. Calculating. All part of her upbringing and now her paranoia about her brother appearing at some point. But she clearly isn't all those things underneath.

    The way she deliberately harasses back her roommate and manipulating public opinion about Starbrite. Her frequently-mentioned reciprocated interest concerning Fixx, that he can't see, but we get to know all about. Her casual respect for Aquerna. Enjoying being around Gwen and Dana and not realizing that she's already friends with them all, or at least trying to maintain a distance while also being happy to be near them.

    Then her brother shows up, Fixx defends her even though it is "her" problem, and all throughout that sequence, she's opening up more and more, finally ending with the kiss.

    The entire story is Porcelain breaking out of her shell and becoming the type of teenager she always wanted to be. Confident, passionate, and delighted at the life she now gets to live like she always wanted.
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  • Anne wrote:

    Kettlekorn wrote: Handguns don't defeat good body armor. That takes a rifle, and rifles are inconvenient to lug around 24-7. More convenient than dying, sure, but there's another problem: Killzone is spying on her. He'll see that she's lugging around a rifle, and he'll counter that by investing in a PFG. Since his lightning comes from the dome instead of his body, he can then sit there in his bubble-within-a-bubble and fry everyone at his leisure. To pull this off, she'd have to first get a bag of holding with sufficient capacity to hide a rifle, and she'd need to keep the existence of both the bag and the rifle a secret.

    Grenades are probably a better option. Easier to conceal and harder to defend against. Plus, if the grenade doesn't kill him outright, it's a lot more likely to leave him stunned for a bit than a gunshot, giving her the opportunity to finish the job.

    It seems to me that someone needs to introduce Porcelain to Moebus. She needs one of his utility belts that she fills with various hideouts. I think if she got one of the wider ones she should be able to fit a rifle in one of the pockets...
    However I do agree, that grenades are a good plan as well, especially given her ability to control her inner shell. The fact that she can form useful tentacles that she can use to deliver, even a short distance stand-off attack is a great force multiplier. I also think she needs to talk to She Beast about a private meeting room that is guaranteed to be bug free to meet with her friends, then she needs to explain what is happening, tell them that she doesn't expect them to help her, but warn them that any time they are with her when there might be a low expectation of drawing a crowd they may be under attack from her brother.
    I suspect that her friends will be, What?! You really expect us to abandon you?!


    Moebius bags have a small limitation, in that they cant hold magic items, IIRC. of course there are a few things to consider, porcelain IS one of the harder ceramics, I think its the strongest of the traditional ceramics, plus depending on her manifesting power, at least on initial creation, there is a good chance that she can make it stronger, we have seen her make blades out of it, even without her inner shell this can give her ranged attacks, unlimited throwing knives, and even without her mutation directly improving her strength, having to constantly break her outer shell will have built up muscle, throwing knives are significant because they will cut through soft armor designed to stop bullets, actually if she can control the hardness of her outer shell, there's a chance she can make the areas that lack joints bullet proof, she already can be more heat resistant and well insulated from electricity. Her main limitations are in offensive capability, from a defensive position (when attacked/focused on). Using her inner shell with tentacles sacrifices the defensive capabilities of the outer shell, next time she faces her brother, she wont have the luxury of being underestimated or having that ability secret, so she will be focused upon which could keep her from using them as easily. Grenades, spell slips, and smoke bombs seem to be the best bet, with some more specialized holdouts too. Smoke can reduce the drawbacks of losing her outer shell, bonus if its made of dust from her manifested material, so she can see through it, as a concept variant of the traditional ninja smoke which was a nasty concoction of various things depending on clan that would be thrown in the faces of enemies and usually make them sick after they escape.

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    5 years 11 months ago - 5 years 11 months ago #21 by Mister D
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  • Have Fixx use his Devisor skills to upgrade a wire to be able to channel more electricity than it normally can take.

    If she weaves a mesh web from the wire, in a spider web format, storable in a Moebius pouch, that could be held with non-conductive ceramic clips, and, used defensively to shield from the lightning bolts, and, used offensively to re-direct the lightning at any attackers.

    Add in a conductive wire with a stabby piece of metal, wrapped in her ceramic, to get past armour, and channel the energy to her foes.

    It would make a nice team-combination one-shot hold-out. :D


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    5 years 11 months ago #22 by mhalpern
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  • Mister D wrote: Have Fixx use his Devisor skills to upgrade a wire to be able to channel more electricity than it normally can take.

    If she weaves a mesh web from the wire, in a spider web format, storable in a Moebius pouch, that could be held with non-conductive ceramic clips, and, used defensively to shield from the lightning bolts, and, used offensively to re-direct the lightning at any attackers.

    Add in a conductive wire with a stabby piece of metal, wrapped in her ceramic, to get past armour, and channel the energy to her foes.

    It would make a nice team-combination one-shot hold-out. :D


    That's his warper ability, and it's temporary

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  • My physics is a little rusty but I'm pretty sure that you can't 'catch' lightning like that, particularly as wire can't really store electrical energy, just transport it.

    I'd also be cautious of plans that depend on the lightning behaving exactly like conventional electricity. An energizer's aimed lightning already ignores the 'path of least resistance' electricity would normally take. Unless you understand the mechanism he uses to do this expecting to redirect their attack as normal lightning seems risky. It might work, or his bolt could just superheat your wire and blow it apart.
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  • Hebblejebble wrote: My physics is a little rusty but I'm pretty sure that you can't 'catch' lightning like that, particularly as wire can't really store electrical energy, just transport it.

    I'd also be cautious of plans that depend on the lightning behaving exactly like conventional electricity. An energizer's aimed lightning already ignores the 'path of least resistance' electricity would normally take. Unless you understand the mechanism he uses to do this expecting to redirect their attack as normal lightning seems risky. It might work, or his bolt could just superheat your wire and blow it apart.


    A fun set of experiments for the Powers Lab practicals. :D


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  • BEHOLD! my laser-directed particle beam blaster! I can destroy ANYTHING! I can... wait. what. why are you moving that to the restricted lockup??? Hey THAT'S MINE!!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS! I'll SUE! I'LL CALL THE ASPCA!
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  • JG wrote: BEHOLD! my laser-directed particle beam blaster! I can destroy ANYTHING! I can... wait. what. why are you moving that to the restricted lockup??? Hey THAT'S MINE!!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS! I'll SUE! I'LL CALL THE ASPCA!


    This is why we can't have nice things. If he'd stuck with "photo-induced plasma flux director", we could have rule-lawyered it in under "optical sights" or "tools".


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  • I really enjoyed the way this story was written. Just enough background detail was included to allow an observant reader to keep up with the plot and the characters without requiring a full knowledge of Whateley Academy. In fact with a short one paragraph intro describing Whateley Academy as "Mutant High" in a comic book style universe, 'The Porcelain Mask', would be a great first story for a new reader.

    The ability that Porcelain [Isabelle] has to spin alternative truths while stating absolutely true facts is captivating and endearing. I only hope that Fixx won't find his heart has been played with by a stone cold trained assassin. Porcelain is wearing many masks.

    The problem of Killzone's promise allows for some great character development in future chapters. Personally, I'm hoping for a "I don't have a brother" resolution, but will follow where ever Morpheus chooses to take this tale.
    5 years 11 months ago #28 by Uncreative
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  • This was originally fan fiction, so it makes sense that it was written for a wider audience than most Whateley tales. I know I read this long before diving into the canon myself; Morpheus, Elrod, and Sleethr were my introduction to the universe through their fanfiction writings.

    It seems this story has been brought over with almost no changes whatsoever; just a little copy editing, a change to Fixx's power classification, and adding timestamps.
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  • This story starts the night after Shenanigans Too ends.

    Also, Gravmax really had put someone in the hospital a couple of days before.
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  • Who is Gravmax going to blame for attacking him?

    The person who attacked him was black, and could manifest tentacles. Who does Gravmax know that fits that description? Darqueheart!

    Of course, Darqueheart has horns, and his attacker didn't, but why let a detail like that interfere with a good theory.
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  • Maybe Grav thought it was Nacht. Though I don't think she'd bother

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  • How hard will it be for the Whateley administration to suspect that the big dome that briefly occupied the campus was formed by Killzone? Killzone is many things; subtle is not one of them. How many people in the world can form a force dome like that? Of that limited number, how many do so openly and flagrantly? Of that even more limited number, how many would be arrogant enough to invade Whateley?

    Of course, this being Whateley, the possibility of an internal source will ALWAYS be considered, but in this case, Killzone's M.O. is so distinctive that it seems like it is likely that he should be identified, at least as a suspect. And if he is definitely identified Bad Things(tm) will happen to him.
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  • Yeah, that was my impression - Security ought to be able to identify the culprit from his MO. Identifying who he was after might take a bit more.

    Will they? Only the Power of Plot knows!
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  • I really like this story, I was surprised to see Porcelain get her own story. The way this story was written, it's genius. I sure hope we get to see more of Porcelain, the possibilities are endless with her. I hope the Bad Seeds grow to accept and love her as one of their own, which she already is.

    I was thinking about possible allies that she could make to protect herself against her brother. She's a manifestor, and she's got MATD. I believe she'll get along great with Beltane. The possibilities for her powers are immense, she's a pretty versatile manifestor, she just needs more time to develop new and more techniques, with Beltane as a mentor she'll most definitely add many new little tricks to her arsenal. I look forward to seeing more of her!
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