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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Laura and the Fan Club part 1 comments
Natsuo and Kei Otsuka, along with the twin girls Emiko and Fuchiko, back home after a long day of travel part of it being a flight. How can those two have so much energy after a flight, I was 13 last I was on a plane and it exhausted me. An unexpected break from fall school term, a trip to New York, no wonder they are so full of energy.Friday, September 9, 2016 - evening
Otsuka home, Shizuoka, Japan
Boy, how school has changed, nothing to do until back at school. They always gave us enough to keep busy over a school break. 'Gadget Girl Heroes' sight, don't tell me they saw the incident in New York with members of MMM. Wishing to be gadgeteers and dreaming of what they would make, cute. Wait, don't tell me they are going to manifest and end up at Whateley? Laura is going to have her hands full soon if that happens. Dang, a car like that would sell for a lot, but be very popular. Ah, so a lot of Japanese kids wish to be gadgeteers, interesting.
Wednesday, September 14, 2016 - evening
Dickinson Cottage, Whateley Academy[/color] Kiyoko Onishi and Sumika Miura talking about a viral video, Sumika's roommate is Vera Sato, how can she study with earbuds in, I could never concentrate. Oh boy, they are starting to put the pieces together about who is in the videos. Of course, the class roster photo gallery would rat Taka out. Shoot, and now Laura has been figured out as well, image-editing program making identity impossible to hide. Ack, no! Sumika, don't go online and tell people their identities!
Emiko and Fumiko now know who Taka and Laura are, d'oh! TV station sending a crew to interview them about the heroes...oh boy.Friday, September 16, 2016 - afternoon
Otsuka home, Shizuoka, JapanOkay, liking them more now.She knew the girls would relish the opportunity to politely correct a reporter; they were both very bright. They were also both very determined and a bit outspoken and not in the slightest deferential - just like their mother.
Hideo Taniguchi complaining to Takeo someone beat them to the market again. Ouch, company hurting because they can't afford a good research and development department. Competing with the bigger companies when they can pay the gadgeteers better, the markets must be more brutal. Hanako-chan, Takeo's grand-daughter, talking about the Gadget Girl Heroes site, if he only paid more attention. Hideo's 12-year-old daughter to the rescue who knows about the site and what they have been talking about. Listening to youth can find new avenues for business nowadays.Saturday, September 17, 2016 - late evening
Taniguchi Family Home, Osaka, Japan
Aw, Laura has to study tonight because she is helping out Mrs. Barton tomorrow night. Ack! Morgana likes devisor coffee.Tuesday, September 20, 2016 - After Dinner
Near Crystal Hall, Whateley AcademySeems the guys in the workshop tunnels haven't changed much over the years."I do not, and you know it!" Laura huffed. "You don't need me there, anyway. Just go down there, wiggle your butt a few times while winking and smiling coyly, and you'll have the guys getting you all the sludge you can drink."
"I think I might just do that," Morgana countered.
Yikes, close one, don't just pop up suddenly like that Eurydice. Especially on a person whose group have been attacked on more than one occasion. I don't like how she slips her arm around Laura's, this creep needs to be taught boundaries. Riled by Laura's words about Brita, says she doesn't own her, nor does Brita belong to her, oh brother.Val is playing a very dangerous game there.Gossip around the halls of Poe, which Laura and the other freshmen had heard and which made Laura very nervous, was that Brita was extremely possessive and fixated on Val, and Val was a tease to her which kept Brita angry and on edge.
Darn it!I had hoped they could prove what she did and reverse it. And Laura considers that flirting, that is very aggressive and almost pushy by Val imo. At least Val slipped up here, revealing she knows far more than a non-Poesie should about the dorm and its residents. The way Val says that almost sounds like Brita will keep attacking Morgana unless Val says to stop and is suggesting she needs some incentive to do so. Glad Laura sees it for what it is, though I hope she doesn't go for the offer.No-one knew how Val did it, but it was rumored that she used some form of psychic persuasion, which had gotten the attention of the psychic arts faculty, but there was never any conclusive evidence.
In the Crystal Hall now with Brita, late to a meeting with Val due to an elevator being out of order near the Amazon's clubhouse, good. Thinks Val left to her own dorm room in Dickinson Cottage, has to give a weekly status report to Mrs. Horton as she is one of Poe's RAs...ahhhh! Ugh, her attitude about changelings. Oh crap! She spotted Laura talking with Val, this is extremely bad. Only the security cameras keeping her back from attacking Laura knew this girl was psycho but good grief, one of the changelings can't even talk to someone she likes without her nearly losing it.
This should either say Wednesday or still be Sept 20. Koichi Taniguchi called into his father's home office to have a chat. Ugh, Hideo just became a creep to me, judging his own son like this on things he doesn't have, areas he isn't interested in, and the type of power he manifested as a mutant which he had no control over.Tuesday, September 21, 2016 - Late Evening
Taniguchi home, Osaka, Japan
Now that is an awesome power for an artist to have. *sigh* Hideo is going to regret this later in life, not trying to connect to his son.Koichi was a projective esper, able to send out his thoughts and feelings, especially when he was working on a painting or sculpture. More peculiar, and of great confusion to the Japanese authorities on mutants, was that his projected feelings seemed to bind onto whatever art object the boy was making. His art was more than seen and touched; it was felt emotionally with the same intensity and feelings the boy had had when he created it.
Ugh, know your place ticks me off whenever I hear or read it, as if the person has no choice in the path their life goes. Oh god, Hideo is thinking of using his own son like that. Sending Koichi to Whateley Academy just so he can seduce Laura and convince her to work for his father's company, that is wrong on so many levels.Koichi was a Japanese boy raised in a traditional Japanese family. He knew his place.
Bwahaha, Hideo hears about Whateley and doesn't think it is a school for mutants. And now suggesting Laura would make Koichi a good wife, right now I want to hit Hideo with a giant mallet. And forcing Koichi to do this against his own will, this man is a horrible father only thinking about his company instead of what is good for his son. An interview with the Imp to be admitted to Whateley, nice way to bribe the artist.The only shame on the family is your father putting you up to this, Koichi. Masumi gives good advice, I like her a lot more than her husband."What if the Americajin girl doesn't like you? What if she doesn't want to be your girlfriend - or wife?" She smiled at her son. "Your father cannot make Laura-chan like you or marry you. You cannot do that, either."
"But ... if I fail, father will be disappointed," Koichi protested, wincing as he spoke. He didn't want to disappoint his father or bring shame on the family.
Laura getting a lot of emails and thinks it is spam, the Gadget Girl Heroes site somehow found out her email and shared it with her fans who are all sending a ton of emails, oh boy. Ah, sent to her Whateley email account and it is from Japan didn't know dot jp is Japan. Hikaru translating for her and Laura finds out she is getting fan mail, a boy who thinks she is cute and wishes to meet her someday, good grief.Wednesday, September 21, 2016 - Dinnertime
Crystal Hall, Whateley Academy
*facepalms* A woman trying to set Laura up with her son and thinks Taka is her boyfriend, this is going to give her a migraine before it is over at this rate. 4 mothers in total trying to set Laura up with their sons, this is out of control. And the picture the Japanese tourists wanted of them. 19 sites with that image on it from Japan, eep. Man, Kurenai is good to get all those details about the Otsuka family and likely chain of events.
And a video of the interview with Emiko and Fumiko, Laura doesn't want a fan club, poor kid. Plus dozens of boys wanting her to come to Japan for dates or marriage, talk about aggressive.I should have known this was coming and that picture would come back to haunt them.By some herculean feat, Tanya managed to keep a straight face. "I told you so."
Late evening and Brita is stalking someone else moving through the woods, trying to set up an ambush for the other person, this girl needs a serious reality check. Hhm, what can this other person be pulling from the tree? She plans to attack Laura this close to the Village so the security cameras won't catch it, psycho needs to be locked up.Woods between Campus and The Village, Whateley Academy
*eyes bug out* Who has caught Brita so thoroughly she can't even scream? Released from whatever power held her in place, two figures in black with black masks, ah, these two again. Told Laura is off-limits to her Brita starts to charge for attack only to be stopped before she can take a single step.
Brita stepped in it deep this time, those who don't care about the Neutrality of Whateley are either very foolish or very powerful."Okay. You deserve to know what you're up against," the girl said, sounding very confident in herself. "The girl is very, very important to some ... interests ... off-campus."
The tall boy nodded. "Very rich and very powerful interests."
"The people who are interested in her have a very long reach. Anyone who tries to bring harm to her will be stopped - at any cost."
Okay, now I'm concerned about the different factions that share their common interest. And the guy of the two shows they can and will use lethal force, Brita had best behave when it comes to Laura."Most of the different factions who would enforce a violation of Neutrality share our common interest. They'll overlook a little think like a violation of Neutrality if it furthers all our interests." Brita could practically hear the smug smile. "We're here. We are among you. You have no idea who or how many of us there are. We will protect the girl, and if you get in the way, you are disposable."
And so instead of just leaving Laura alone, she is going to keep digging deeper. Brita's stubbornness is going to be the end of her at this rate.It had been years since she'd been unable to intimidate others and bully her way to getting what she wanted, years since anyone had made her cow before them. But these two unknown people had done just that, and so easily and with not a hint of hesitancy. Though none had ever targeted her, she had seen psychopaths, she recognized killers, and she'd just met two of them. They'd strike her down without a second thought if they wanted to, and they'd proven that they could strike from anywhere at any time.
Brita came to the conclusion that she had to find out who that 'interest' was, who had threatened her, and why that damned blue fake girl was so damned important.
Thursday, September 22, 2016 - Morning
Several Miles West-Northwest of Downtown Kansas City, KansasRonald Lincoln has had a rough life but falling in with Evolution Rocks because of Collin Reineke, yikes. The Directorate, why does that name concern me?Only a couple in inches shorter than his boss, Collin Reineke, he was even more intimidating in appearance. A mutant with a significant case of GSD, Ronald looked like he was a living gargoyle sans wings, with deep steel-blue skin covering his muscular body from head to toe, four demonic fangs protruding from both upper and lower jaws, and pure white eyes.
Oh crud, this is very bad, both that this group exists and if they are right about the 'final solution' against mutants.Collin Reineke, former Navy SEAL who'd been discharged for mental health reasons after his mutant wife was 'accidentally killed' by the MCO and H1, headed the group that was preparing for what he and others feared would be a new 'final solution' against mutants, carried out by the MCO and their stooges in Humanity First.
Almost forgot about Hugo Butler and the Financier, stupid memory of mine. And of course, the Mayor as they call her, with Laura as one of her 'test subjects' for forcing the meta-gene complex to activate from all that we have learned so far. A base for four-thousand people for a long-term siege, yup, this is very bad.
We haven't met the Financer yet, only heard her mentioned. Please let her not be Ayla."This is set up for an 'inspection' by The Financier next week," Lincoln practically spat with disgust. "It looks like a group shelter, and nothing more." The Financier and Butler were very demanding that they account for all expenditures, and that nothing 'off the books' be done.
"Don't underestimate her," Reineke shot back. "She may be very young, but she's no dummy. Since she joined the team, the Finance Commission has tripled its gains. I think she could do Butler's job better than he could. No doubt when she comes to visit, she'll be inspecting and estimating your expenditures to see that they're in line with what she's provided."
Geeze, this base is made to be a fortress.It's worse than I thought, they have Whateley tech. 10 powered armor suits per site and they have ones in LA, New York, and more. They are building an army and have multiple bases all outfitted for prolonged sieges, this is bad no matter which side you are on."Hard light hologram. Courtesy of Whateley."
This sounds like they don't care about civilian casualties. Okay, they have planned this out very well, I pray it doesn't come to this war they are building for. Ah, they need to get arms and ammo smuggled in still, I hope someone stops this before it is too late."There are two tunnels into the facility, both in heavily-trafficked commercial buildings, both of which are rigged with explosions and two-hundred-ton deadfalls like in the pyramids. If they aren't invited, no-one is getting in easily."
Let's do the math, 15 large facilities, 27 medium facilities, and an unknown number of smaller facilities they plan to build, yikes. Wheal, a Welsh mutant they'd hired, just how expensive is he?Now that is a powerful power for tunneling. If only he went into construction work instead, think of all the tunnels through mountains and such that could be made more easily."The man is a gift. He can drive a five-meter diameter tunnel forty or forty-five meters in a day. The big challenge is getting enough TKs to clean the rubble behind him." The Wheal was a mutant who could project energy balls - up to twenty at a time - one and a half to two meters into solid rock. When he let go of his control, the energy balls expanded - silently - shattering the rock as if it had been blasted with dynamite.
Afternoon now and Laura is getting teased by Steve Gevorgian about that site, now that is just mean. They put up THAT picture on the wall behind her workbench, Marlene Fisher teasing her about Taka being her boyfriend, this is way out of hand. Trying to work while ignoring barbs and jokes at her expense, at least it works and they leave Laura alone after a while.Tech Tunnel Beneath Kane Hall, Whateley Academy
I wonder what Laura feels as being off, could one of those spying on her be there now and Laura can sense it to a degree? No power going to the personal field generator, did someone mess with her project?Those two messing with her project, I wouldn't put anything past them, petty creeps. Deliberate sabotage, who would go to the trouble of cutting something that small so it would be hard to detect?A quick glance over her shoulder saw Photech and Weaponeer, who had adjoining benches, both jerking their heads.
And theft as well, she needs a private lab with security on it. Show the lab supervisor the damaged circuit and tell about the missing components, with the tech kids would video of the lab show anything? Some of them know how to disrupt or alter such footage without getting caught.Dismayingly, but not unexpectedly, a component for her enhanced neural neutralizer was gone, as was a field modulator for the PFG she was working on. Inwardly she fumed; outwardly, she gave no sign of just how angry she was.
Mori Yumiko there to talk to Hideo about his inquiries of the Department of Paranormal Studies. No tea or refreshment for Mori, Koichi is an Empath-3, interesting. Only through his art his powers manifest, very interesting form of projective empathy.Friday, September 23, 2016 - Mid-Afternoon
Office of Taniguchi Industries, Osaka Japan
Sounds like ragers are either rare in Japan or none have ever been triggered causing an incident."Yes. But this fact is not generally known. As you probably know, the American attitude toward mutants is not generally favorable. Even their superheroes are viewed with suspicion."
"I am aware of that," Hideo agreed.
"If Japan had experienced the Fools Fight, or the rager incidents that America has dealt with, our attitudes might be different as well."Darn, sounds like you have to be very wealthy or from the royal line to get in those programs for mutants. A government stipend to attend Whateley, that is one great thing they do. And she wants him to get some of the gadgeteer students interested in moving to Japan. An interesting start to this story, wonder how things will go for Laura and for poor Koichi, can't wait to read more in the future."Japan has a school for mutants?" It was Hideo's turn to show some emotion - in his case, surprise.
"Yes, several in fact with strong programs to teach those blessed. However, none of the ones that accept those gifted are suited for those who come from... a certain standing," Yumiko replied.
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What I think is going on is that the Institute is an organization outside of the Government because it's headed by two members of the Imperial Family, while DOPS is a government department that reports, through appropriate layers of intermediaries, to the Prime Minister.
It's time to get this bureaucratic thicket normalized.
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Dreamer wrote: We haven't met the Financer yet, only heard her mentioned. Please let her not be Ayla.
I'm almost hoping it is Ayla actually. I can imaging him doing this just so that he can leverage his position to curtail or redirect the Directorate without giving the media a "Radical Mutant Terrorist Cell" story.
Dreamer wrote: Darn, sounds like you have to be very wealthy or from the royal line to get in those programs for mutants.
I feel that it might be the opposite. The Yama Dojo, and any similar programs, are more interested in people who disappear into the crowd rather than stand as the heads of business.
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On a far brighter note, I'm looking forward to seeing how Laura protects her bench.
I also wonder if Brita facing this evil cabal will actually be a benefit to the M3. Brita seems more angry that she got overwhelmingly defeated. She was up to some petty BS harassing Laura, and got humiliated instead. At first I thought she was angry that one of the "false girls" is getting some protection, but then I wondered if Brita might be substantially more offended by what she finds out. Brita is a character I love to hate, but I can't help but wonder if The Directorate made the wrong enemy that evening.
I'm confused about one thing though. Is it "The Directorate", "Vanguard", or are they both parts of the secret organization within Evolution Rocks?
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Hebblejebble wrote:
Dreamer wrote: We haven't met the Financer yet, only heard her mentioned. Please let her not be Ayla.
I'm almost hoping it is Ayla actually. I can imaging him doing this just so that he can leverage his position to curtail or redirect the Directorate without giving the media a "Radical Mutant Terrorist Cell" story.
We didn't get the Financier's name when they did appear in "Laura and the Village", but not all of the Gen1 Golden Kids can be ruled out this early.
Hebblejebble wrote:
Dreamer wrote: Darn, sounds like you have to be very wealthy or from the royal line to get in those programs for mutants.
I feel that it might be the opposite. The Yama Dojo, and any similar programs, are more interested in people who disappear into the crowd rather than stand as the heads of business.
This. The scions of wealth and power have certain expectations imposed upon them to be fulfilled by the educational institutions they attend. It's not sufficient that the school offer the best programs, but that the institution itself be above reproach among those of a certain class.
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DOPS is run by the Imperial family because of the spiritual and religious aspects involved. (Remember who exactly is the chief 'priest' or 'priestess' of Ise, more or less the 'Vatican' of Shino [or close enough for this consideration.]) It also helped in the 1947 constitution, there were so *few* known yokai and metahumans involved, magic itself had a religious connotation, and the issue of the wards, it was felt that IHA could handle the job, since the keys were Imperial property, as well as the duty of the Imperial family to provide the person in charge of Ise. (They get around the "Emperor has no power" clause, by it *never* being run *officially* by the Emperor. His youngest son is the official head, Kako is his 'deputy'). As mutants and more Yokai came out of the woodwork, DOPS already had a 'structure' in place, and generally just kept the job. Mostly because *it worked*, and Yomi supported it (and the majority of the grads, as well, which a *lot* work for the various agencies involved who may or may not have wanted a grab).
DOPS in essence handles *all* direct and immediate paranormal issues. Metahuman or yokai, magic regulation, etc. When it crosses into other areas (Justice, MEXT, Foreign Affairs, METI are the big ones), DOPS 'coordinates' (generally makes sure the metahuman/yokai persons fit into the system, while letting those Ministries or Agencies set the general rules, only pushing stuff that has to be *specific* towards paranormal affairs. If it's found use as a 'off the books' FA or other such office, that can be officially 'swept' under the rug, who knows?) with the appros agency.
Nulltrooper is *dead on* about Education for 'wealthy/high social status'. RTS4 *spelt it out*
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It is hard to come up with a set of actions more likely to cause a genocidal war against mutants.. If people thought the Fools Fight was bad, if that power armor goes operational, this will be a hundred times worse.
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Court wrote: The more I think about The Directorate, the worse it looks. The division we are looking at is run by someone who wants vengeance, is too large to be kept secret,is strong enough to present a credible threat, and is nowhere near strong enough to actually win. This is an impending catastrophe, and I don't see what will stop it
It is hard to come up with a set of actions more likely to cause a genocidal war against mutants.. If people thought the Fools Fight was bad, if that power armor goes operational, this will be a hundred times worse.
You're not alone: see Hilde Stauffer's rant in Kansas part 3.
In any case, the Directorate article needs to be updated, since Vanguard is the public face, per ElrodW. It includes a lot of PR stuff, including buying politicians, etc. The Directorate also includes Hilde Stauffer's genetic work. Reineke and Lincoln's thing is only one part of it. With the Financier (who may or may not be Ayla Goodkind) coming for an inspection, there is an interesting time ahead.
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Katssun wrote:
On a far brighter note, I'm looking forward to seeing how Laura protects her bench.
I'm confused about one thing though. Is it "The Directorate", "Vanguard", or are they both parts of the secret organization within Evolution Rocks?
As far as Laura's bench goes, look at what happens the next day (the 23rd) in "Like a Candle in the Wind". Apparently the issue blows over. Especially see what Marlene and Steve do.
The Directorate is the parent secret organization, Vanguard is its public face, per WOG from ElrodW. The Directorate includes a number of secret projects while Vanguard does public relations stuff like buying politicians.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:
Court wrote: The more I think about The Directorate, the worse it looks. The division we are looking at is run by someone who wants vengeance, is too large to be kept secret,is strong enough to present a credible threat, and is nowhere near strong enough to actually win. This is an impending catastrophe, and I don't see what will stop it
It is hard to come up with a set of actions more likely to cause a genocidal war against mutants.. If people thought the Fools Fight was bad, if that power armor goes operational, this will be a hundred times worse.
You're not alone: see Hilde Stauffer's rant in Kansas part 3.
In any case, the Directorate article needs to be updated, since Vanguard is the public face, per ElrodW. It includes a lot of PR stuff, including buying politicians, etc. The Directorate also includes Hilde Stauffer's genetic work. Reineke and Lincoln's thing is only one part of it. With the Financier (who may or may not be Ayla Goodkind) coming for an inspection, there is an interesting time ahead.
It occurs to me that it would be better if Ayla is the supervillain known as Financier.
The Directorates project helps siphon off the short-term thinkers, and the violently stupid, in a similar manner to Lady Astarte's view of the function of The Syndicate, but he would also take a long look at their current plans, and say, "No. This isn't militarily viable. We need to prepare more," and have the clout to make his opinion stick.
It also just occurred to me, that Ayla would be more inclined to use "business as a long-term weapon", which may be part of where the Japanese attitude to Gadgeteers in Gen2 has evolved from.
Consider that Generator has a MID that describes her as a Devisor. She is half-Japanese, and she has an inventive approach towards creating mayhem in a manner that inspires other Devisors/Gadgeteers to find solutions to seemingly intractable problems.
"It must be possible. Generator's done it."
"I want to make one of those...

Add in Ayla's business acumen, his rapport with the Lab-crew, and his determination to act in the long-term interests of every business he creates, and the Japanese govt. would see this as a profitable, long-term "good thing to do".
There could be a set of interesting vignette's covering the internal arguments between the ultra-nationalist xenophobes, and the trade/business-focused internationalists.
Bit like what's happening in international politics right now...

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What if Financier actually agrees with Vanguard's approach, if not the specific evils within the Directorate? Not peace and coexistence, but a proactive and mostly-legal offense. What better way to curtail the most evil aspects, than by holding the reigns for their end of the funding?Mister D wrote: It occurs to me that it would be better if Ayla is the supervillain known as Financier.
The Directorates project helps siphon off the short-term thinkers, and the violently stupid, in a similar manner to Lady Astarte's view of the function of The Syndicate, but he would also take a long look at their current plans, and say, "No. This isn't militarily viable. We need to prepare more," and have the clout to make his opinion stick.
Also, who is to say that if Financier is Ayla, that the last few years haven't been particularly cruel, and change his outlook to be more calculating, and less empathetic? Kayda and the entire Sioux Fall League gave up hero work after encountering a true degree of horror in all of it. Falcon and Tabby Cat have both stopped as well, and teach at Whateley (Assistant Headmaster and gym teacher respectively). As far as we've seen, Fey is a student-teacher instead of something more influential. Sidewinder is run by...someone, and they really hate the KoP and other mutant haters, and go out to destroy them financially.
Fullerton and a few other events completely changed the political and power influence landscape for Gen 2. A few of the characters are bound to have been affected by the fallout of the big events of the interim too. Some for the better, some for far worse.
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Katssun wrote: Also, who is to say that if Financier is Ayla, that the last few years haven't been particularly cruel, and change his outlook to be more calculating, and less empathetic?
That might fit in with one of Bladedancer's visions of a possible future:
Dreamquest of the Underage Taoist wrote: There was an image of her, with Destiny’s Wave thrust through Toni’s chest. There was another one, with Fey’s head lying next to her fallen body, her hand still clutching Malachim’s Feather. An arrogant, expensively-dressed Ayla was stepping out of a limo when Chou appeared, ruthlessly dispatching her bodyguards and then cutting the density changer in half as she was trying to go light for all the good it did her. All her friends in Team Kimba lay dead at her feet, including Tennyo, sliced in half in the ruins of a city that could be New York. Jade was clutching the upper half of her onee-san and was weeping as Chou stalked slowly towards her through the smoking rubble. The Japanese girl didn’t even look up as the sword fell.
There's no guarantee that that was a near-term outcome.
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- Kettlekorn
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Anyway, Financier is obviously Bruce Goodkind.
- mhalpern
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Of course we have no clue who the Financier is other than that they appear female, for all we know it is yet another Alias for Hartford. The only real reason we think its Ayla is because it is implied by the name that they are good with money, but that could be just about any exemplar who studied finance.Katssun wrote: @Xaltatun: Thanks for thinking of and replying to my question in this thread, but I was the one to ask elrod on the discord!
What if Financier actually agrees with Vanguard's approach, if not the specific evils within the Directorate? Not peace and coexistence, but a proactive and mostly-legal offense. What better way to curtail the most evil aspects, than by holding the reigns for their end of the funding?Mister D wrote: It occurs to me that it would be better if Ayla is the supervillain known as Financier.
The Directorates project helps siphon off the short-term thinkers, and the violently stupid, in a similar manner to Lady Astarte's view of the function of The Syndicate, but he would also take a long look at their current plans, and say, "No. This isn't militarily viable. We need to prepare more," and have the clout to make his opinion stick.
Also, who is to say that if Financier is Ayla, that the last few years haven't been particularly cruel, and change his outlook to be more calculating, and less empathetic? Kayda and the entire Sioux Fall League gave up hero work after encountering a true degree of horror in all of it. Falcon and Tabby Cat have both stopped as well, and teach at Whateley (Assistant Headmaster and gym teacher respectively). As far as we've seen, Fey is a student-teacher instead of something more influential. Sidewinder is run by...someone, and they really hate the KoP and other mutant haters, and go out to destroy them financially.
Fullerton and a few other events completely changed the political and power influence landscape for Gen 2. A few of the characters are bound to have been affected by the fallout of the big events of the interim too. Some for the better, some for far worse.
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That may be true for mundane ways of cutting Tennyo, but Destiny's Wave works at a higher level. One way to look at it would be that mundane attacks only momentarily disrupt the 3D projection of Tennyo's n-dimensional real being, while Destiny's Wave would directly damage that n-dimensional being.Kettlekorn wrote: Fake news. As the Tiger Guard learned, cutting Tennyo in half doesn't slow her down at all; if anything, it encourages her.
Hmmm... actually, let's consider another Goodkind. What if Financier is David?Anyway, Financier is obviously Bruce Goodkind.
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Katssun wrote: @Xaltatun: Thanks for thinking of and replying to my question in this thread, but I was the one to ask elrod on the discord!
I'm not on Discord. I have no idea who says what to whom on Discord. If I'm going to put it in the Wiki, it has to be something on the forums.
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Mister D wrote: It occurs to me that it would be better if Ayla is the supervillain known as Financier.
The Directorates project helps siphon off the short-term thinkers, and the violently stupid, in a similar manner to Lady Astarte's view of the function of The Syndicate, but he would also take a long look at their current plans, and say, "No. This isn't militarily viable. We need to prepare more," and have the clout to make his opinion stick.
What if Financier actually agrees with Vanguard's approach, if not the specific evils within the Directorate? Not peace and coexistence, but a proactive and mostly-legal offense. What better way to curtail the most evil aspects, than by holding the reigns for their end of the funding?
I don't think we know what Financier thinks at this point. We shall see when the stories get written and posted.
Katssun wrote: Also, who is to say that if Financier is Ayla, that the last few years haven't been particularly cruel, and change his outlook to be more calculating, and less empathetic? Kayda and the entire Sioux Fall League gave up hero work after encountering a true degree of horror in all of it. Falcon and Tabby Cat have both stopped as well, and teach at Whateley (Assistant Headmaster and gym teacher respectively). As far as we've seen, Fey is a student-teacher instead of something more influential. Sidewinder is run by...someone, and they really hate the KoP and other mutant haters, and go out to destroy them financially.
We haven't seen anything of Ayla since the last Lancer stories in Gen 1. The climactic Gen 1 fight is still in the future; we know most of Team Kimba and most of the Outcasts survived it, but that's all we know. Given what's been specified in the few mentions of Financier, I'd be surprised if she isn't Ayla.
Fey shows up occasionally, but as far as I can tell, she's an outside consultant. What else she's doing isn't specified. She doesn't seem to have a regular class schedule she teaches.
If the person being coyly unspecified in Sidewinder isn't Diamondback, I'll be very, very surprised.
Katssun wrote: Fullerton and a few other events completely changed the political and power influence landscape for Gen 2. A few of the characters are bound to have been affected by the fallout of the big events of the interim too. Some for the better, some for far worse.
So far, there's only one comment in a canon store I know of that says what happened at Fullerton. If I write a page for the Fullerton Incident, that'll be included.
Well, yes.
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Kettlekorn wrote: Fake news. As the Tiger Guard learned, cutting Tennyo in half doesn't slow her down at all; if anything, it encourages her.
Anyway, Financier is obviously Bruce Goodkind.
Snort.
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Sir Lee wrote:
That may be true for mundane ways of cutting Tennyo, but Destiny's Wave works at a higher level. One way to look at it would be that mundane attacks only momentarily disrupt the 3D projection of Tennyo's n-dimensional real being, while Destiny's Wave would directly damage that n-dimensional being.Kettlekorn wrote: Fake news. As the Tiger Guard learned, cutting Tennyo in half doesn't slow her down at all; if anything, it encourages her.
We know that two and probably three of Team Kimba survived: Toni is Master Chandler, and Fey has appeared in a number of stories. Financier is probably Alya. I'd expect that Tennyo and Jade took off for some other part of the universe and are no longer around. That leaves Lancer.
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Hmmm... actually, let's consider another Goodkind. What if Financier is David?Anyway, Financier is obviously Bruce Goodkind.
David clearly has cross-hairs on his back, so I wouldn't be at all surprised to find him around somewhere. However, what little we know about him is that his interests were more in the human resources and similar areas of the Goodkind empire. Possibly marketing and advertising.
David's Wiki entry redirects to the Goodkind family page, and doesn't include that interesting tidbit.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: I'd expect that Tennyo and Jade took off for some other part of the universe and are no longer around.
Possibly, but I expect Jade to still be on Earth, given that we have JinnTech...
But maybe Jade started that, then moved off planet or something.
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Must has chocolate! It is universal currency off planet Earth as any Galactic explorer knows right well!Kettlekorn wrote: Her strength has increased manyfold since she first manifested, and it's only been a little over a year. Perhaps by Gen 2 she can overcharge Jinn to the point that she lasts for months, so that Jade only needs to swing by Earth periodically to recharge her and restock on chocolate.
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If it is not a bad idea, then perhaps it is a sign that the apocalypse is upon us?Hebblejebble wrote: After discovering how to make her projections last indefinitely Jade loads a spacecraft with plush supplies and sets off to make Hello Kitty a galactic sensation (or does this belong in the 'Bad Ideas' thread)
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Fatigued by a long day of travel, even with attempts at sleeping onboard the JAL flight, Natsuo and Kei Otsuka staggered into their small home, dragging their roll-on luggage. Behind them, their twin girls Emiko and Fuchiko, both fifteen, seemed to have absorbed energy from their parents, as they were bubbly and excited.
Sure they don't have the mutant trait for that?
"Okay," Emiko replied. "That boy - he was kind of cute!" she added.
"But he has a girlfriend!" Fumiko shot back.
1) Sexuality of the girl says no. Jury's still out for the boy.
2)... How does Japan feel about changelings, including FtM ones (I swear, if it ever comes out like that)?
"So does father!" Fumiko laughed. They referred, of course, not to simply girls who had an interest in tech, but to those girls who were gadgeteer and devisor mutants. "And if you were, I would be too!"
Debatable. Also, Fury Twins say that twins with powers aren't always best thing... But I guess your parents aren't a Super-Nazi bitch.
"I'd make an automated bed-maker!" Fumiko said. "That'd save a little time every morning."
"Yeah, mother really wants our rooms clean. Why not an automated clothes-folder and hanger?"
The lack of such a thing yet in a world of gadgeteers bodes ill for its feasability.
"Why not a flying car?"
Euuuuuh...
Fumiko shook her head. "Can you imagine how many wrecks there would be over Tokyo every day?"
"Then there'd be a market for force fields to protect the buildings," Emiko countered. "And if it could keep out rain and snow ...."
That. No flying coffins for me, even with forcefields. I'd take forcefiels on vehicles and for pedestrians though.
"It's crazy!" Sumika replied, shaking her head. "Some heroes are a new sensation in Japan! One is a Japanese boy, and the other I think is an American gadgeteer girl. They were part of a team that fought and defeated a big-time villain."
"Really? What's an American gadgeteer doing in Japan?"
Internet. Distance loses meaning quickly.
"From that silly Mutant Mayhem Machine team. The ones who ...." Kiyoko's eyes widened. "The ones who fought a villain on the way here - just a few days ago!"
Slow to the uptake, uh? Besides, it was a C-Zone one. Optimistically.
"The pictures look the same girl. Laura was in New York, and she and her friends were in a fight - and the dates match. More than fifty percent match on facial recognition." She looked at the other girl. "It has to be her."
Sumika stared some more, then she smiled. "My sister is going to be SO jealous that I'm going to school with the gadgeteer girl and the Japanese hero!" She turned to her laptop and began to type furiously.
Okay fame is nice and all, but if two high school girls can do that (WHateley ones, granted)...
"Mostly about the heroes we saw," Emiko corrected her twin. "Many of the girls were talking about the boy!"
"Mitsuo did a facial recognition search," Fumiko interjected insistently, "and found out his name is Taka Ono! He was sent to America to school!"
"A Japanese girl who's going to the same American school posted more information and a couple of pictures of the girl," Emiko added with a grin. "She's a real gadgeteer, and her name is Laura!"
That. Bigger attention incoming.
Hideo Taniguchi took another sip of shochu, then set the cup back on the table. "They beat us to the market again, Takeo," he said somberly, his mood enhanced a slight bit by the amount of shochu he and his friend had consumed. Hideo was the majority shareholder of Taniguchi Industries, a small conglomerate company which had been started by his great-great grandfather many years ago making bicycles and simple motorcycles. Now, the company made a wide range of goods, but it seemed to be cursed to be out-innovated by the bigger top-tier companies which had the budget for a good research and development department, a luxury that Taniguchi Industries lacked.
And that transition isn't filling me with confidence.
"It would be good if we could recruit some gadgeteers," Hideo mused between sips of shochu. "Abe-sama has been generous to companies who bring in new talent."
Yup, no confidence at all.
"I think Tadeo-san is speaking of Gadget Girl Heroes website and fan group," the young girl said meekly. "There is much discussion about teen-age heroes fighting a villain in New York. One was a Japanese boy, and the other was an Americajin gadgeteer girl. It is a big Internet sensation right now."
Hideo's ears perked up. "Come and sit, Sakura-chan." He refilled Tadeo's shochu cup and then his own. "Please tell us more about this Gadget Girl Heroes fad."
Duck.
"Hmmmph! I bet you only offered so you can get more devisor coffee!" Laura laughed. Seeing the reaction on Morgana's face, Laura grinned. "I knew it! The only reason you come down there is for that vile black tar!"
Laura, you're an elrod character and are cute and all, but these were the words of a filthy heretic ignorant of the finer things in life. And I suggest you repent very quickly.
"And you just waltz in the lab, bat your eyes and smile, and let the guys trip over themselves bringing you coffee, too!" Laura added gleefully.
"It works, doesn't it?" Morgana shot back, grinning. "As if you don't use a bit of feminine wiles to get a little help in the labs, too!"
"I do not, and you know it!" Laura huffed. "You don't need me there, anyway. Just go down there, wiggle your butt a few times while winking and smiling coyly, and you'll have the guys getting you all the sludge you can drink."
And you don't enjoy the show yourself when she's around, right?
"I'm going to warn Bianca that you're dosing up on caffeine. I'm sure she'll want to take appropriate precautions so you don't keep her up all night. Again!"
Lies and slander. Morgana wouldn't cheat on Thulia like that. Survival instinct, you know?
Startled, Laura spun and almost automatically reached to her belt area, grabbing a small object that resembled nothing so much as a Star Trek hand phaser. She recognized the source of the interruption even as she fingered the activating buttons.
"Hey, it's just me!" Valentina - Eurydice - blurted, surprised by Laura's defensive reaction. "I didn't realize I warranted a hostile response!"
You're a sicko-lesbian very eagerly and happily mind-raping girls into your fucktoys and additional grunts for the Attack Bitches, Screeching Siren. If anything, any reaction leaving anything to bury out of your wretched corpse is too little.
The blue girl winced. "Um, you don't," she said meekly. "Sorry. It's just ...." She lowered her gadget. "Some ..., people ... haven't exactly been friendly to my team," she offered an explanation.
She isn't one to you either, Laura. Just ask Calliope how Nefertiti switched gears to that degenerate.
"Yeah," Laura said, somewhat apprehensive about Val's presence but allowing the upperclassman girl to steer her toward the walkway to Poe. "Your ... girlfriend ... Brita really doesn't like some of my friends," she added. "And I get the feeling she doesn't like me much, either."
I am surprised Stale Farce hasn't screamed out loud about the changelings situation to the whole camus. She neither showed the restraint, the subtlety and the smarts to not do so, and only very barely the animal cunning to know better.
"Oh? That's not how it looks to ... to some people," Laura replied hesitantly. Gossip around the halls of Poe, which Laura and the other freshmen had heard and which made Laura very nervous, was that Brita was extremely possessive and fixated on Val, and Val was a tease to her which kept Brita angry and on edge. Some said that Val always sought a new challenge, and she was very successfully persuading girls to the sisterhood, the boy-hating lesbian club. According to stories, she'd converted several girls, some of whom even dumped long-term boyfriends. No-one knew how Val did it, but it was rumored that she used some form of psychic persuasion, which had gotten the attention of the psychic arts faculty, but there was never any conclusive evidence. Everyone who wasn't part of the Amazons considered Brita and Val to be trouble. And getting on Brita's bad side could be very unhealthy, as Laura's friends already knew.
That's a nice 0.76 version of the Wicked Bitch of the Great North, and then Assholo's scam you've got here, Screeching Siren. I'll deeply enjoy seeing it crash and burn.
And hope that brainwashing isn't doing any lasting damage to the victims.
Laura goggled, her jaw hanging open at the blatant way Val seemed to be flirting, even bluntly stating that she was a lesbian. "I don't ... don't know what ... what you're suggesting," she stammered, flabbergasted at Val's very forward comments. Of course, Val was right - Laura did prefer girls, as witnessed by her own girlfriend Antonia, but that wasn't common knowledge. In fact, everyone in Poe strove to keep it a secret, because the world was still very prejudiced against gay and lesbian people. And changelings like her? It was far, far too dangerous for anyone to know the truth. And yet Valentina seemed to know more than a non-Poesie should, far more than Laura had told anyone outside of the safe haven of Poe.
Again, Stale Farce. Does she even remotely look like someone able to keep any sort of secret? And don't talk me about the wards, people should know better than to take this sort of security for granted. Or more likely I guess, Mind-rapist unable to keep it in her mental pants.
(And am I that badly out of touch with reality? I thought at least some progress had been made on that front by the late 2010s.)
"I've seen how you react when boys are interested in you. And I've seen how you look at some of the prettier girls. I can tell that you're curious," Val crooned. "Let me give you one more thing to think about. I know that Brita was behind the assault on your teammate - the red-headed girl. She won't stop on her own; she'll keep on until she hurts your friend pretty badly. Unless I stop her." She smiled knowingly, then turned and walked back toward Schuster, her hips swaying seductively in a blatant sexual display.
Behind Val, Laura goggled at the seductress' words, feeling like she'd been gut-punched. It was a not-so-veiled threat and bribe all in one. The thought of going along with Eurydice to spare Morgana felt cheap, dirty. And yet, there was something nagging in her mind, some sense of safety and security, that made her wonder.
Abort, the bitch is sinking her mind-hooks in! Treat everything she says as bullshit! Nowhere near perfect, but a start.
Brita Baumann felt like screaming as she pushed noisily through the exit doors, her eyes already scanning for Valentina who was supposed to be waiting for her on the fixers' patio. Brita was late, and the reason was part of the source of her anger. She'd been sparring in the Amazon's clubhouse, and after a quick shower, she discovered to her annoyance that the closest elevator to the clubhouse, which served the lower levels of the tunnels, was out of service. That meant a longer, more circuitous route to the surface, and to make matters worse, she seemed to have hit 'rush hour' for the devisors and gadgeteers rushing to the cafeteria for dinner.
If only your dirty little hole in the mud was legal, maybe it wouldn't be so bad... With the next one, once this one is properly condemned by you and your Attack Bitches.
To add to her frustration, Valentina wasn't waiting for her. Among other things, the two girls were going to work on homework, with some relaxation. While Brita could have 'relaxed' with one of the other girls, like Muliebris, she really wanted Val to be her steady. A quick glance at her watch confirmed that she was almost ten minutes late, which meant that Val had probably given up and gone to her own room in Dickinson Cottage.
You know, I thought I couldn't be surprised at how low she could sink, but she manages it. Points for rampant hypocrisy on fidelty.
Though she hated the time it took to do the reporting properly, Brita was diligent in her duties. The lives of her charges depended on it. As long as she didn't have to deal with any of the 'false girls'.
That bias alone makes her shit for that duty. People in her position are supposed to look up for everyone, all preferences be damned. Is that bint so well-entrenched here, better candidates so few/lacking, or Horton that clueless?
If not for the omnipresent security cameras, Brita's first instinct would have been to give in to her rage, to charge in and demonstrate why her codename was StahlFaust - the Steel Fist - especially since Val was so brazenly coming on to a falsches Mädchen. But that would lead to a huge scene with Val later and another visit to security - and she'd probably lose er privileged RA position.
Please, it's Whatley. The only reaction triggered would be having the guards fetch popcorn while you do that, try it.
The third strike came because of a trait Koichi had inherited. He had only recently shown himself to have an active meta-gene complex, a mutant. This wouldn't have been a bad thing if his talent hadn't been one of those psychic powers, the intrusive mental gifts that were feared by Japanese people as being unnaturally intrusive into their private little shells. Of all the mutant traits to have, psychic and esper powers practically made the person an outcast. And his son had that type of power.
Joy, more hypocrisy... Although not the sort culturally unexpected in Japan.
Koichi was a projective esper, able to send out his thoughts and feelings, especially when he was working on a painting or sculpture. More peculiar, and of great confusion to the Japanese authorities on mutants, was that his projected feelings seemed to bind onto whatever art object the boy was making. His art was more than seen and touched; it was felt emotionally with the same intensity and feelings the boy had had when he created it.
Pretty sure there are no lack of artists willing to kill for a talent like that.
All in all, the boy's interests and powers were of no use to Hideo and his worries about his company, unlike those of his sister Sakura, who seemed naturally gifted and highly interested in things technical. It was therefore no wonder that daughter related more to father, and son related more to mother.
Two words, Mr. So Smart: Public Relationships.
Hideo clicked on a menu, and selected an option, then another page came up. "This girl is an Americajin gadgeteer girl. According to the site, she is a hero in a battle against a supervillain."
"Interesting," Koichi said carefully. He wasn't sure where his father was going with the conversation.
"She is cute, no? For an Americajin, I mean." Hideo had a smile that Koichi associated with his father closing a good business deal.
Oh non. Yes, I know what's going on, I already read the story, but leaves me the denial, it is one of the only things left.
"How does this concern me?" Koichi's curiosity had been piqued.
"Such a cute girl would make a good wife for some lucky boy, wouldn't she?"
The boy's eyes threatened to bulge from their sockets. "A ... wife? Are you suggesting ... that I ...?"
That webcomic, Rain, says it better than I ever could: 'Dude, she's a lesbian'.
"As an artist, you may have heard of a mutant called the Imp?" Hideo seemingly changed the subject abruptly.
The boy perked up again. "The Imp? She is a very well-known art instructor, at least in the art schools. It is said that she was once an art thief, but no-one has proven that."
Oh, and here is the carrot. And now everything is better, alright and okay./s
"The girl is Americajin. They do not have the same customs. Arranged marriages and strict obedience of parents is not their standard."
That, and there is the whole sexuality thingie.
"But ... if I fail, father will be disappointed," Koichi protested, wincing as he spoke. He didn't want to disappoint his father or bring shame on the family.
Japan or not, the ducktard isn't worth it.
"All of a sudden I started getting a ton of spam!" Laura complained. She fiddled with her phone, swiping and deleting messages. "And there are so damned many of them!"
Are you sure you're a Gadgeteer/Devisor, Laura? I'd think decent firewalls would have been amongst the first things to create.
"Offers for resort vacations if you listen to their sales pitch for time-shares?" Bailey added.
"Breast enhancement products?" Tia tossed in.
1) Diablolik is officially fed-up with his timeshare lair with Baron Blitzen.
2) Just the newest untested Exemplar created drug released. Nothing to see.
"Not great English, and lots of Chinese characters," Laura said. She fiddled with the phone a bit. "See? Lots of Chinese characters, and this says something about Gadget Girls." She held it out for Hikaru to see.
Someone is about to get a reaming about identification of ideograms...
"What?" Laura's jaw nearly hit the table. "What's going on?"
42. Nah wait, Internet.
"After we fought Squidley?" Bianca leaned over and craned her neck to look. "I bet it's from those Japanese tourists who wanted your picture."
And now you know why everyone dread Japanese tourists and their photo-taking mania.
"I anticipated your request and I've already transfered the image from the phone," Kurenai said semi-smugly. "So far, I have located nineteen sites from the JP domain which feature this picture. Shall I list them?"
Meh, you're an AI, and Hikaru gave you the time to do it while reading more mails.
Laura sat, stunned and shaking her head. "This is the worst thing that's happened to me since we got here!" she said.
Nah, the worst one is that a mind rapist wants you as her newest fuck-toy. Priorities, lady.
As her teammates tried and failed to suppress mirth ranging from giggles to outright laughter, Laura face-palmed. "Go ahead, say it," she muttered to Tanya.
By some herculean feat, Tanya managed to keep a straight face. "I told you so."
Outstanding demosntration of friendship. Keep it in mind for the day she is the one slipping up.
Brita stood beneath a tree, only feet from the wide walkway, waiting with eager anticipation. She'd teach Laura Samuels to not get involved with one of her girlfriends! And it would be a total mystery - this close to The Village, the teacher's residence area, there were no security cameras, since this was a restricted area, off-limits to students. Closer to The Village, magic warding provided an alarm if anyone unauthorized tried to disturb the peace of The Village, and closer to campus, security cameras covered the main walkway. But here? Here was a perfect spot.
That's what they want you morons to believe... Right?
It took her a few seconds to shake off the effect of whatever had captured her so she could clumsily pull herself back to her feet. When she did, she goggled at two figures, also dressed in black, faces hidden by black masks, who stood before her, having approached completely silently.
... Okay, I was about to ask you making everyone a favor and offing the bint, but now I realize the bigotry is somehow restraining a little the mind rapist, so... Just beat her up badly?
"She is off limits to you," the deep voice echoed again.
"What's it to you?" Brita snarled. "Why are you interfering in ....?"
"We're keeping you from interfering," the second voice, obviously a girl's voice, stated. "The girl is off limits to you or anyone else who wants to bring her to harm."
Someone isn't getting a step-daughter either... Please, I have been a (relatively) nice person, give the early Christmas gift and off her.
"She is off limits to you," the deep voice echoed again.
"What's it to you?" Brita snarled. "Why are you interfering in ....?"
"We're keeping you from interfering," the second voice, obviously a girl's voice, stated. "The girl is off limits to you or anyone else who wants to bring her to harm."
I am sure Assholo, the Wicked Bitch of the Great North, and Witbitch were all as smug at some point before they all crashed and burnt.
"Most of the different factions who would enforce a violation of Neutrality share our common interest. They'll overlook a little think like a violation of Neutrality if it furthers all our interests." Brita could practically hear the smug smile. "We're here. We are among you. You have no idea who or how many of us there are. We will protect the girl, and if you get in the way, you are disposable."
Euh people? some bitch is getting the hots about mind raping Laura into a fuck-toy. I am sure it is an important info for you.
As she began to walk hesitantly back toward campus, Brita realized to her horror that she was trembling. It had been years since she'd been unable to intimidate others and bully her way to getting what she wanted, years since anyone had made her cow before them. But these two unknown people had done just that, and so easily and with not a hint of hesitancy. Though none had ever targeted her, she had seen psychopaths, she recognized killers, and she'd just met two of them. They'd strike her down without a second thought if they wanted to, and they'd proven that they could strike from anywhere at any time.
Wonder if that's how the people I mentioned above felt when their own world crashed in fornt of their eyes...
Brita came to the conclusion that she had to find out who that 'interest' was, who had threatened her, and why that damned blue fake girl was so damned important.
At the very least you're like them, unable to quit. Hey, Spooky People, the bitch wants another round! Please oblige her.
Collin Reineke, former Navy SEAL who'd been discharged for mental health reasons after his mutant wife was 'accidentally killed' by the MCO and H1, headed the group that was preparing for what he and others feared would be a new 'final solution' against mutants, carried out by the MCO and their stooges in Humanity First. Reineke knew that it had been no accident, and he couldn't cope with being unable to even the score to avenge his wife. Evolution Rocks, though a public and vocal advocate for mutant rights, was too pacifist for Reineke, but it was the only game in town. He figured that their approach, preferring talks and diplomacy even in the face of murderous riots stirred up by H1 and the MCO against mutants, was a waste of time and a path to extermination. If the goal was diplomacy, Arnold Rogers, head of Evolution Rocks, was well-suited for the job. Reineke, though, wanted vengeance, so when The Directorate inquired, he threw himself into the more radical hidden group within Ev Rocks.
Read X-Men, people, that shit never works for your side. Also, Nikki, you have a cockroaches infestation back home, you might want to do some clean-up.
"The best use of his money," Reineke shot back. "Better than pouring it down the drain trying to buy politicians!"
That sort of maneuvers gave the Goodkinds Hammond, you know? You could give it a fairer shot.
"For a long-term siege, it'll handle three and a half to four thousand. Short-term, we could probably handle six thousand, but it'd be cozy."
And nowhere near enough for your breed of brainfarts.
"This is set up for an 'inspection' by The Financier next week," Lincoln practically spat with disgust. "It looks like a group shelter, and nothing more." The Financier and Butler were very demanding that they account for all expenditures, and that nothing 'off the books' be done.
"Don't underestimate her," Reineke shot back. "She may be very young, but she's no dummy. Since she joined the team, the Finance Commission has tripled its gains. I think she could do Butler's job better than he could. No doubt when she comes to visit, she'll be inspecting and estimating your expenditures to see that they're in line with what she's provided."
Eh. You bozos are in nowhere near big enough of a league to pull a fast one on Trevor.
The pair went into another section. Reineke would have gasped at the array before him, but he knew Ronald Lincoln too well for that. "How many powered armor suits?"
"We're going to try to allocate at least ten per site. LA, New York, and such will get more - up to thirty if we can afford them. According to the designer, they're better than anything H1 or the MCO has."
I am writing this after being reminded of that earlier mention of youur group, so two big counterpoints to your logic:
1) Inspiration from Nazis, automatical out. And I don't even need to throw at you the colossal foutoir their war economy system was.
2) They lost, fucktard. Copying losers only give you losers' tools.
"You've thought of everything, it seems." Collin nodded his approval.
Magic words said, something will go wrong... Like a density Warper with a nose for rotten fishes. And don't get him started on food.
Looking down to avoid the gazes of all the other gadgeteers and devisors in the lab, Laura went to her bench, stopping and gawking at a picture stuck on the wall behind her workbench, a picture of her and Kenshin taken by the tourists and posted on the Japanese website. Behind her, she heard snickering and giggles from the girls. She spun, anger writ large on her face, to stare down the girls who were laughing.
Every single one of them boiling in Jealousy at the idea your odds with Taka are far better, despite being lesbian.
Something seemed a little 'off' to Laura, although she couldn't put her finger on what had triggered her unease. She looked around the lab, but everyone was attending to their work. Thinking she was just being paranoid, she shrugged off the feeling and began to set up her equipment and parts.
Never in Whateley. Better to build nice detections thingies.
After a sigh, she got out some test equipment and began to probe the small circuit. It had worked flawlessly the day before, but now it didn't, and that bothered her. She'd never had reliability issues on her gadgets. A quick glance over her shoulder saw Photech and Weaponeer, who had adjoining benches, both jerking their heads. What little she could see of the boys' expressions looked like smug smiles, hinting that maybe they knew something about the inexplicable failure of her project.
Sigh... At least they aren't Belardo.
Whoever it was, Laura had no direct evidence. She decided to work late, until the lab supervisor chased them all out for dinner, and by lagging to be the last one to leave, she could show him the damaged circuit and tell him about the missing components. Perhaps there was video of the lab that could identify the culprits.
Hey, Spooky People! Make yourself useful, please!
Hideo nodded. "I know his ability with ... emotions ... worries people," he admitted, his eyes lowered. "I do not wish him to worry others unnecessarily, as he tries to master what the kami gave him..."
Dude, I am still replacing the bullshit-o-meters Wile E Coyote made explode last thing. Cut that shit.
"If Japan had experienced the Fools Fight, or the rager incidents that America has dealt with, our attitudes might be different as well."
Egg/chicken situation here.
"Japan has a school for mutants?" It was Hideo's turn to show some emotion - in his case, surprise.
"Yes, several in fact with strong programs to teach those blessed. However, none of the ones that accept those gifted are suited for those who come from... a certain standing," Yumiko replied.
Yeah, I don't think Yama Dojo was built for artists.
"He will be accepted." The woman slid the folder onto Hideo's desk. "Perhaps while you are there you will have an opportunity to meet some of the American gadgeteer students. Abe-san has made it a priority to recruit and welcome any gadgeteer mutants that would come to Japan, and in your line of business, you could provide challenging and rewarding employment opportunities to some gadgeteers."
It took a supreme effort, but Hideo managed to keep his expression neutral. Either the woman was accurately speculating based on history of what the bureau did or she was reading his mind.
That could be ignored. He had the blessing of the Japanese government for the trip and schooling for Koichi. And for recruiting any gadgeteers he could. They didn't know that he'd set his sights on a particular Gadget Girl Hero.
Welp, good luck with that, Monsieur Gogo. I guess even 10 years after G1, busting would-be recruiters is still one of the lead sports on the campus.
On another point, I genuinely hope Financier is Ayla/Trevor, and playing that game here by following the logic of 'Best way to control an idiot is by controlling the purse strings'. Cynism pushing towards pro-active political action is a thing, cynism and stupidity leading you to try 'Race War' (how many times did it work in X-Men exactly?)... And to think the other Kimboids would let their friend go down that road without blinking an eye... Yeah, pass.
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So how does one become "a famous art teacher", particularly a famous high school art teacher? Somehow I don't see
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Court wrote: There is one thing in this story I have a problem with: the description of the Imp as a "famous art teacher". I may be displaying ignorance, but I am unaware of any people that could be described as "famous art teachers".
It's not impossible to become a famous art teacher , but it's also important to remember that Art isn't limited to painting.
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As for educational series, Imp's more of a Mark Kistler than a Bob Ross, but yeah, I could see her doing something like that.
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Kettlekorn wrote: As for educational series, Imp's more of a Mark Kistler than a Bob Ross, but yeah, I could see her doing something like that.
Could you imagine how much fun a PBS or YouTube series featuring Imp and Sister Wendy could be?
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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She was a forger of some renown in the criminal circuits.
I'd imagine she'd get pretty famous to the art community as someone who knows a tremendous deal of techniques and has applied them very effectively.
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Sir Lee wrote: And that suggests that Karma's name is Susan Chambers.
Well, we already knew that with the FullNameUltimatum or whatever from "The Trouble with Karma"?
We just haven't added it to the Wiki... I should do that...
Oh, right, Karma needs to redirect to her Family page...
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Sir Lee wrote: Current concept of art restoration does not center around replicating the original artist's technique to "fill in the gaps", but preserving what is left and undoing misguided past restorations that may be covering up parts of the original work.
You were refering to?
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(hopefully the link still works)
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
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Annoying that my quotes didn't save...
Financier = Ayla probability rising, but, is girl? Is Alumni, has experience with Gadgs...
But, financial knowledge isn't Ayla only, etc.
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Imp's understudy, is who?
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Malady wrote: Well, Laura tempts fate a lot, the series.
Annoying that my quotes didn't save...
Financier = Ayla probability rising, but, is girl? Is Alumni, has experience with Gadgs...
But, financial knowledge isn't Ayla only, etc.
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Imp's understudy, is who?
It's Alya. Can't be anyone else from the clues we've been given.
Mischief.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:
Malady wrote: Well, Laura tempts fate a lot, the series.
Annoying that my quotes didn't save...
Financier = Ayla probability rising, but, is girl? Is Alumni, has experience with Gadgs...
But, financial knowledge isn't Ayla only, etc.
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Imp's understudy, is who?
It's Alya. Can't be anyone else from the clues we've been given.
Mischief.
Betting Mischief, yes. Anything confirming? I just missed a lot??
I guess she'd call no one else, her understudy. Also confirms she's alive, and well, Superhawk being alive is a guarantee, what with Imp telling him about Karma's antics.
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Amazons not going with Kristen's flow makes me think they're not mindcontrolled peeps, else they'd be a lot more complacent??
Or, the olders are the controllers and everyone else is their pawns who they're letting have some amount of free will.
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Still dunno who Subject 2 is?
Lots of people to ship Laura with.
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A school assembly, wonder what this is about. Geoffrey Mazarin and Robert Turner, oh boy, this is serious. An important briefing missed and one violation of a vital policy, please let this be about Exquisite and her crew and not something involving Laura.Friday, September 23, 2016 - After Lunch
Schuster Hall, Whateley Academy
Ah, the principle of Neutrality and the reasons it exists. Yikes, we know due to what happened with Bladedancer and those idiots of the Black Madonna, but how bad were the retaliations for other incidents to trigger such reactions in students? That slide-show must be the kind of thing that would make even the most crazed student think at least 3 times about breaking Whateley Neutrality.
Dinner time at the Crystal Hall and Laura getting laughed at, ouch, all because of a simple mistake. And the teasing is going to get more annoying, argh! Onishi Kiyoko and Miura Sumika show up to apologize about posting information to the Gadget Girl Heroes site about Laura. Crud, seems those girls posting her image online without Laura's permission probably broke some laws in Japan.
Oh darn it."Which algorithms must have assumed, since photos were taken in a public space, others in the photos did give permission, and caption and text describe you as a hero," Hikaru explained, "which is by definition a public figure."
Oh good, Laura accepts the apology. Now if only they could reverse some of the damage. *facepalms* I can't believe Sumika asked that after the mess they got Laura in.
Late afternoon at the Amazon Clubhouse, Brita's mood swings so much when it comes to Valentina, kissing her and asking if she will see her at dinner. Paulina, Melissa, and Irina, seniors, coming over to talk to Brita about her temper, uh oh.
And of course Brita tries to defend herself by calling them 'so-called girls', ugh. Ooo, goodie. Either knock off the attacks on the Poe girls or get expelled from the Amazons."We're concerned that if you keep it up, our club is going to be associated with your temper and attacks, since you were elected president. And if that happens, another incident or two could cause the administration to pull our charter."
Laura cleaning for the Bartons, to the point Vanessa has to block the vacuum to get her attention and get the girl to take a break. There is such a thing as too much work ethic. Laura working on a lift seat in a car for Vanessa, that girl loves that family. Almost done with a scale-model prototype, nice.Saturday, September 24, 2016 - Afternoon
Barton's Apartment, The Village, Whateley Academy
Dang, now I wish I had a history teacher like Mr. Barton, bringing history to life is a rare skill. Those 2 guys need a hard lesson not to deliberately try and hurt someone in Martial Arts class.
After what happened to her family it is going to take a lot to chip down that wall, give her time."And we're still trying to figure out Hikaru, because she's ...." Laura wrinkled her nose. "It's hard to say. Sometimes, I get the feeling that she isn't really interested in being with our group. And sometimes, it seems like she's afraid to let anyone get close to her. Like she's built a wall around her inner self."
Hehe, Vanessa knows just how to tease without going over the line. Doesn't want to be a hero or celebrity, the universe doesn't always let you choose your own path in life. Ah, doesn't want to get famous because she thinks it will make her an asshole like her father became.
Listen to the voice of experience. And gossip at Whateley travels faster than light speed, someone else will be the source of it in a few days.Vanessa patted Laura's arm to reassure her. "Jake and I were celebrities when we were heroes," she said calmly. "We didn't let that change us. John didn't let it change him. Deb didn't let it change her." She waited until Laura made eye contact with her. "It won't change you if you don't let it. You just have to keep yourself grounded."
Black Hole has a very interesting look, wonder what he and the girl with him are looking for in the woods with a devise to sense something. Oh crud, a blind spot in the sensor array so they can communicate outside Whateley without being detected. And it is those two agents, nice to have a name for one and description for both now.Woods behind Laird Hall, Whateley Academy
Silverplate, oh brother, guessing it is the not-so-good doctor who experimented on Laura and a boy who also goes to Whateley now without them knowing. Subject 2 just blends, doesn't cause trouble and seems to be well-liked in his cottage, hmm, wonder who that might be. And discussing Laura now, including her job in the village for the Bartons, and Val flirting with her.
Welp, nice knowing you, Val. Now the situation with Brita, figures Val's flirts more with Laura when Brita is around, twisted girl."You know what you have to do with this distraction," the woman's voice came through sternly. "I can't take any chances of my subject being injured through stupidity of others."
*eyes bug out* She wants them to recruit Brita to have muscle, this is very bad. And sounds like through Brita get to the Amazons as 'useful idiots', if only Nef's brainwashing could be reversed before all this goes down. Oh, just going to discourage Val, darn, thought she could take a more permanent solution. After what Val has done I have no sympathy for her. And they have a contact in the Secret Squirrels to investigate who is sabotaging Laura's projects. At least some good will come out of this.
Laura leaving her lab and having to deal with Kosuke Nakano, a freshman boy from Japan who is infatuated with her. Just what she doesn't need. Five zaibatus interested in Kosuke, just what area does his specialization as a gadgeteer cover? Ugh, trying to push her into moving to Japan for a job and that he is interested in here, this kid is far from subtle.Sunday, September 25, 2016 - Near Dinnertime
Tech Tunnel Beneath Kane Hall, Whateley Academy
She's not wrong about that last part, I could see an animated series based on Laura's life in Japan being hit over there.Hints about the issue that the boy was skirting around, Laura shook her head. "I can't leave my mom and my little sister. And moving to Japan? I don' understand any of the culture. I'd be a fish out of water!" She gave a half-hearted chuckle. "And I bet that if I signed up with a company, someone would contract a reality show about a blue gaijin in Japan! No thanks."
You are beautiful angel, Laura doesn't realize just how attractive she is I think.Kosuke gulped at Laura's revelation. "Families like to have gadget inventor. It is prestige. It shows importance." He looked down, wincing shyly. "And I read that some boys say 'anata wa utsukushī tenshi desu'."
The boy says something many girls would love to hear and Laura has to tease him, seesh.
Have to watch out for those, easy to fall in.The boy nearly fell over with relief. "Is that what Americans call no-win?"
"Yeah. A verbal trap. Another way is to say 'damned if you do, damned if you don't."
*eyes bug out* Dang, I thought the house cleaning and babysitting just for the Bartons and Codys were enough, also cleaning and laundry for Hikaru and Tia. Laura, you may not like housework but you sure do a lot of it. Blah, I still can't understand how Morgana can stand that devisor coffee.Seeing his expression of extreme curiosity, Laura continued. "I help Hikaru and Tia keep their rooms clean and do their laundry, and I babysit for teachers' kids in The Village."
Evening and Brita is sneaking around, trying to avoid a potential ambush. All this to figure all that out and get the Amazons to help her, but lie about stalking Laura, this girl is going to get caught in her web of lies sooner or later. A silent alarm to alert all the Amazons to her location, not as confident as before, are we.Behind Laird Hall, Whateley Academy
All too easy to manipulate Brita, especially after that film with Helen Goodkind. And Brita doesn't want to fight to defend men, even mutant men, oh brother. Vanguard, cover for the Directorate, now Brita knows about them.
Brita is interested, this won't end well, for who though it's too early to tell.She slowly came to the conclusion that this game had far more potential for using the skills she and the Amazons built, for the good of mutants everywhere, and that the downside of chasing Val - a pursuit that had so far proven fruitless - seemed paltry in comparison.
Hideo Taniguchi and Koichi at Whateley for the meeting with the Headmaster. Mazarin and Mr. Turner show up, bowed to and bowing in return.Monday, September 26, 2016 - Morning
Schuster Hall, Whateley Academy
I hope Koichi wasn't coached to say that."Teachers tell me I have potential as artist. This is good, because I like art. I want to be artist and learn how to use my gift to help my art," Koichi said plainly.
Imp admired by artists in Japan, Mr. Turner is right, she is going to be insufferable for at least a month after hearing this. D'oh! Of course, Hideo wants to talk to Laura and Taka. Leave them alone with Hideo and Koichi, why does this feel like a bad idea to me.
Security not telling why Laura is to be taken to administration, bad form, always provide such information so the students don't panic thinking they are in trouble when they aren't. Lead by the secretary to the conference room, Hideo smiling like that comes across a little creepy knowing his plans for his son and Laura. Great, Koichi finds Laura attractive, things just got more complicated.
Laura being direct, that is almost an understatement, almost. Taking charge once he is the only adult in the room, hope he doesn't go too far. At least he admits to Taka why he wanted his son to meet both of them.
I lost track of how many times she's said that so far."I don't want to be a famous Gadget Girl Hero!" she protested.
Laura, that is one of those expressions you just don't say, it's tempting fate."Why not? It's not like a picture or two will make things worse than they already are."
Now lunch at the Crystal Hall.
Now I wonder about how mutants with GSD are treated in Japan. And the biggest shock, finding out how the cafeteria at Whateley works.Following Taka and Laura, Koichi's eyes were wide in surprise at the number of mutants with GSD who were queued up to get lunch, talking with other kids as if it was normal for a living, walking stone to be joking and laughing with another resembling a human lizard and a third who looked like a young Greek god.
Okay, that is something we didn't know about the Crystal Hall. A place to make your own custom pizza and a devisor pizza oven to cook it in a minute, awesome. Morgana and Tanya joking about not being average or normal, bwahaha. Joking about Whateley being an insane asylum, with some of the students and even staff there you would have a hard time telling the difference sometimes.
Trying to figure out how Morgana and Bianca put up with being roommates, heh. Sometimes I think Bailey's able to find lost things is the most useful. Man, Laura is on a roll with teasing all of them in front of the potential new kid. Ouch, poor Callie, I hope her shoulder is okay.
hehehe, they know each other too well."And we already did the 'we're not average or normal' line," Bianca interjected as Erica wound up to say something similar.
"You're no fun!" Erica frowned.
Aww, poor Koichi has to hope Hikaru shows up so she can explain his power in English.
He sketched that fast, is that part of his power too or due to years of practice?Glancing at the waterfall and then at Laura, he quickly sketched a scene, his imagination putting Laura, in a flowing kimono, standing at the railing of a Japanese-style bridge which spanned a koi pond, with the waterfall in the background falling onto rocks and flowing into the pond. Around the pond, Koichi sketched bamboo shoots and flowers, filling in the sketch as his pencil danced across the page.
That is one potent ability."I feel the sketch!" she declared in astonishment. "I feel like I'm a visitor learning to love the waterfall and pond. I feel the peace and tranquility of the scene. I feel the satisfied curiosity of ...well, of me ...." She shook her head slightly. "It's ... it's unreal! Like I'm looking at myself and feeling how I would be starting to love ... Japan? ... in real life."
And the effect of his power is potentially permanent, whoa. Introducing him to Imp, this will be fun to watch. And his father thinks he is kureji, strange, he will definitely fit in with MMM.
Afternoon and Bailey is worried about missing class, heh. I love that sign hanging above the door. And the nameplate on the door, classic Imp.Schuster Hall, Whateley Academy
Don't tell me she got a cat or dog and named it Acme just for that joke. And the cat and mouse outlines painted on the lower edge of the door, too perfect. I wonder how many see all those locks, etc. and don't notice the note about just turning the doorknob.The door had what appeared to be a doggie door in the lower panel with a sign above it reading "Acme Deliveries Only."
Oh god, the Addams Family reference, just how many different references are at the entrance to her office? Figures, all those 'decorations' were made by Mischief for Imp.On the door jamb was a doorbell button, too, which had several Post-it-notes around it warning "Please do NOT press this button!" - likely from other teachers. Below it was an engraved panel stating "Please Stand on the X When Pressing Button. Not a Trap! Honest!" The group looked down and noticed a large white "X" which had appeared on the floor, with a barely-visible square around it, like the outline of a large trap-door in the floor. Almost as one, the kids jumped back from the square.
Laura couldn't resist and she pressed the button. A loud two-pitched foghorn sounded, followed by a booming, deep voice emanating from near the top of the door asking, "You rang?"
Koichi telling Imp how she is a well-known art teacher in Japan and she doesn't believe him at first.
Being a mother hasn't changed Imp a bit, if anything I think she has gotten zanier. And of course Imp wants to teach you, Koichi, an artist with your power seems like a once-in-an-age event."Finally," Imp said triumphantly, "all my bribes to the judges and art critics has paid off! Bwah, hah, hah!"
Laura left alone with Koichi and his father to show them around the tunnels now, talk about uncomfortable. Asking if Laura has an interest area, Mr. Taniguchi needs to learn subtlety. Specialty markets, no wonder his business is having trouble. An invention to subdue with non-lethal force used by doctors to help patients with seizures, interesting.Tunnels Beneath Kane Hall, Whateley Academy
Interested in talking to the other gadgeteers, just how close to bankruptcy is his company?
Oh boy, please let this not escalate beyond his wanting to show Mr. Taniguchi about his latest project. And the ranting just gets worse, while Steve Gevorgian pulls out a strange-looking gun. Don't do it!Berghold Stuttley, a devisor with persistent Diedrick's Syndrome
Good lord, this guy shouldn't be allowed to make anything without close monitoring by security.Steve's lowest-powered weapon could out-power a military-grade taser, making it potentially dangerous to the target, to say nothing of the fact that the energy discharge wasn't exactly a straight-line beam, so anyone nearby could potentially receive the paralyzing jolt.
Kosuke stalls Steve long enough for Laura to use her neural neutralizer on Berghold, good.
Okay, why someone isn't stealing parts from this guy to keep his projects from being completed is beyond me."My NLI Mark 3 would have done just as good a job," Gevorgian grumbled angrily, yanking his arm clear of Kosuke's hands.
"Your Non-Lethal Interdictor, Mark Zero," Michelle Brown started sarcastically, "is about as target selective as a hand grenade!"
"And the aim is about as accurate as a blunderbuss!" her brother interrupted his conversation to toss in another jab.
I wondered how it worked, very interesting."It causes resonance with the inter-neural chemicals, causing a temporary polarizing alignment and impeding neural impulses," Laura explained.
Oh my god, with just some minor adjustments that could be used to treat seizures, very impressive."There are very subtle differences between the autonomic nerves and the voluntary nerves. The beam is very narrowly tuned to affect only the voluntary nerves."
I hope Laura does, a non-lethal means of taking down anyone having a Diedrick's episode would prevent a lot of trouble.<This happens all the time,> Kosuke chuckled. <He will not be in trouble. They will take him to the medical center to check, but he should be back in a half hour or so.> He glanced at Laura, and Koichi could read in his expression that he was interested in Laura. <Laura's neural neutralizer is very effective, and the instructors want her to make some for the lab staff in case someone has a Diedrick's event.>
Coffee vampire, priceless.Laura glanced up from her animated technical conversation with Mr. Taniguchi, and groaned. "Someone hide the coffeepot! The coffee vampire is here to rob you guys again!" In response to Laura's comment, Morgana replied diplomatically and maturely - she stuck her tongue out at the blue gadgeteer.
Well, enjoying your work, being relaxed, and having friends you can joke around with can help creativity. Aww, Koichi having to woo Laura due to his father instructions and being attracted to Morgana, both unattainable."Yeah, that's it ... wiggle your butt, throw out your boobs, give the boys a cheap thrill, and then drink all their coffee!" Laura chuckled, shaking her head. Beside her, Mr. Taniguchi was taking in the exchange with disbelief. The group in the labs was so informal, so jovial, that he wondered how they could accomplish the things that gadgeteers were well-known for.
Koichi is going to Whateley and his father is having him start now, having his mother send his stuff and he brought plenty of clothes and can buy what else he needs. Seesh, any faster and it would be obvious you are dumping your kid on them. And Mr. Turner just thinks he is better prepared than most parents, sigh.Schuster Hall, Whateley Academy
And Koichi doesn't wish to be in Melville, the social cottage, good for him. And his father agrees with his assessment of why not to be placed in Melville. Emerson, at least he will have some good company there. At least Mr. Taniguchi is polite, I give him that. Invites her to come to Japan and see his company, I wonder if lingering effects of Koichi's sketching are influencing Laura still.
Sakura excited for an email from Koichi.Tuesday, September 27, 2016 - Very Early Morning (Other side of Int'l Date Line)
Taniguchi Family Home, Osaka, Japan
What are the odds of Sakura manifesting as a gadgeteer within the next year or 2? And the picture with Imp as well, nice. Father home in 3 days, business meetings while in America. No Sakura, don't do that, Laura has enough attention as it is without adding more information to the Gadget Girl Heroes site.Sakura turned back and opened the e-mail app. "He's going to attend Whateley Academy," she replied. "He's already met Laura-chan," she paused and scrolled on the mail. "Look! He's got a picture with her!" Sakura moved so her mother could see the picture. "Do you suppose father-san took the picture?"
"Probably," her mother answered.
"And ... a group picture of gadgeteers that share a lab with Laura-chan!" She looked longingly at the image. "I wish I could go to Whateley!" she complained. "It sounds so cool!"
More Japanese students swarming poor Laura as she comes to the Crystal Hall for dinner, inviting her to have dinner with them.Monday, September 26, 2016 - Dinner
Crystal Hall, Whateley Academy
Sure, that is the only reason why. She wasn't interested in Japan before, yet after holding that sketch Koichi made she suddenly is. I hope it is just from hanging out with Hikaru and not something more. Figures they have a clubhouse with Japanse decor and Japanese-style dining, though I would like to visit myself. Dining with them periodically, oh boy.One of the other girls spoke up. "You help newest student from Japan. We want to show appreciation."
Skin that changes color and still no idea of what triggers it, interesting but must be a pain to deal with. Day-glo hot pink, that would be a nightmare. Melissa Wang aka Flicka and a member of Vanguard, given the day's code phrase by the girl on the other end of the line. The Financier given her information by a friend of Silverplate, still curious who Financier is.Thursday, September 29, 2007 - Late Afternoon
Behind Crystal Hall, Whateley Academy
I hope she means help Laura to get the neural neutralizer licensed. I understand wanting to work against what the Home Guard is planning, but the Financer can't be Ayla, he would never steal someone's invention and claim it as his own.
If Laura retains the rights to the patent for her invention, okay."So. If we can license the rights to build it, we would be supplying purely defensive weapons, and that would undercut the Home Guard's rational for acquiring weapons that could be used in an uprising. I have good rationale to limit their funding to preclude them gaining offensive weapons."
Crud, Financier is Ayla from the sound of things, just what happened to him to want to use such underhanded means now?The woman chuckled. "I'm an alumna of Whateley, and I dealt with some gadgeteers and their technology licensing. The school licenses things that were invented at the school. But the girl arrived at Whateley with a working device, which means that she didn't invent it here, so the school has no legal justification for getting involved ."
An interesting story from start to finish. I loved seeing the effect social media can have if you aren't careful about who you let take your picture, poor Laura having to learn the consequences of such, and Onishi Kiyoko and Miura Sumika posting Laura's information on the Gadget Girl Heroes site all because of one missed briefing to the students about a vital policy. Now we have Koichi going to Whateley, his father trying everything to save his company including using his own son for a scheme involving Laura, and all these Japanese students interested in getting to know Laura better and introduce her to their culture.
Brita being stopped by the agents of Vanguard from attacking Laura, then that twist about her being recruited by them, never thought that would happen. She seems too unpredictable for such an organization to trust for long. The funniest part was Imp's office and why she put all those 'decorations' which Melissa made her years ago, plus her reaction to finding out she is famous in Japan. I just hope all the clues about Financier being Ayla are wrong, I would hate to know what would lead him down this path. Glad to see another piece by you again, elrod, can't wait for another on any of your characters.
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Mazarin comes across as being committed to the Neutrality Accords.
We've only seen the public snapshots at the moment though.
The odds of Ayla being Financier are increasing. One method of controlling the militants is to finance/control their purse-strings, so i can see that it would be a method that Ayla would use to mitigate their extremism.
Nice touch towards using the "Defensive Weapons Only" as a way of reducing the odds of bad developments when they get busted...

Would Financier be only one of Ayla's persona's when working in the field?
What could the others be?
We'll need more background before we can do anything but speculate.

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I wonder how many people could cope with the Financier being Vanessa Jackson, David Goodkind, Macrobiotic, another character pulled from elsewhere in the huge Gen1 cast, or even a new character?
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Financier is obviously George Soros who manifested and turned changeling...

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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null0trooper wrote: The earlier Ayla stories set him up for what could be a painfully short life.
I wonder how many people could cope with the Financier being Vanessa Jackson, David Goodkind, Macrobiotic, another character pulled from elsewhere in the huge Gen1 cast, or even a new character?
Let's take a look at that.
We've already seen Vanessa Jackson. She was in the MCO holding tank with Charger. Famous singer, not an option.
David Goodkind has been described as being more interested in the personnel side of things than the financial side.
Macrobiotic? A bio-devisor suddenly turning into a financial genius?
The other two options? Why be coy about who it is?
Seriously, The only times I've seen the authors being coy about a character is to build up the tension to a big reveal. Unless the Financier turns out to be someone like Nimbus in drag, I can't see it.
It's far more likely that nobody knows what Diane Castle had in mind, and she might come back and take over the Alya stories again. (Hope, hope). That's a good reason for keeping the options open.
As far as the case for it being Alya goes, consider the situation with her "SO" just having given birth. How did she get pregnant in the first place? There are a number of options, but Alya, being Alya, is the most obvious one. It doesn't require anything like a sperm donor, rape, being pregnant when the two of them got together, etc.
There's also, by the way, the infodump about how the Knights of Purity got eliminated. Someone mysterious helped Sidewinder Holdings (Diamondback) with setting it up. Someone who could very well be Alya.
The whole "what happened to Team Kimba" is kind of mysterious. We've seen two of the core members: Fey and Chaka, and there are good reasons why we might not see three of them even if they survived whatever happened (Tennyo, Jade and Hank). That leaves Alya.
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I think you misinterpreted what the Financier meant when she said "license it". The way I understand the term, it means "get a license from the patent holder so we can manufacture it." Nothing nefarious there - it's simple and standard business practice.
The real issue is whether Laura has a patent to license. If she doesn't, that's something Financier can help with. That's what the comment about whether they have to go through Whateley is about.
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Astrodragon wrote: Well, and a Bond one
This is Imp (and Melissa) we are talking about, which is more likely, a Bond reference or a reference to a spoof on Bond? The only reason it has fur is because furless cats are ugly.
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Astrodragon wrote: It was really a shame Imp couldn't fit the volcano into her study...
A couple of hard-light projectors in the walls perhaps.
Or possibly one of the faux-window-systems as shown on the first Resident Evil movie. Add in a couple of small enchantments to make them register as magically active to mage-sight...

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I also find it a bit worrying that Laura is even considering the offers from Hideo Taniguchi. He's super, super aggressive about recruitment and we know how desperate he is, but it is really creepy when you think about it. I know there's plenty of situations where kids are offered jobs as they approach graduation, but that's college and the very end of high school. Laura is a Freshman, and barely in her first month of school. Hideo comes off like a skeezy talent agent. He was practically interrogating Laura about her other inventions because her preference for weapons doesn't align with the market his company is in.
He also treats his son like garbage. Koichi at least seems to have a much more positive relationship with his sister and mother.
That contrast is why I came out of this story actually feeling quite worried for Stahlfaust. Brita got reprimanded by her fellow Amazons for some of her recent behavior, which she deserved. But then she's getting recruited by the cruelest and least ethical arm of The Directorate?! Brita is a bitch, but she seems to have her reasons for becoming who she is today. Even so, nobody deserves getting involved with the doctor.
Morgana cruising into the labs, shimming her hips around as a distraction, then drinking all the coffee leaving none for the techies?
Sounds like Morgana is...playing with fire.

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Katssun wrote: I think we should hope that Financier is Ayla. Otherwise, Laura is very likely about to be taken advantage of by another arm of The Directorate. In an arena that she really has little hope of dealing with should their licensing deal be a poor one for Laura, financially or politically. There's a lot of in-fighting between The Directorate factions, and Laura is at the center of most of it.
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That contrast is why I came out of this story actually feeling quite worried for Stahlfaust. Brita got reprimanded by her fellow Amazons for some of her recent behavior, which she deserved. But then she's getting recruited by the cruelest and least ethical arm of The Directorate?! Brita is a bitch, but she seems to have her reasons for becoming who she is today. Even so, nobody deserves getting involved with the doctor.
Good observations. Laura seems to be rather easily influenced by certain kinds of people.
I doubt that Brita is going to be working directly for Hilde. I think Hilde is acting more as a recruiting agent and local control. The actual assignment is more likely going to be with the Directorate's security apparatus as muscle, or maybe the Home Guard.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:
Katssun wrote: I think we should hope that Financier is Ayla. Otherwise, Laura is very likely about to be taken advantage of by another arm of The Directorate. In an arena that she really has little hope of dealing with should their licensing deal be a poor one for Laura, financially or politically. There's a lot of in-fighting between The Directorate factions, and Laura is at the center of most of it.
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That contrast is why I came out of this story actually feeling quite worried for Stahlfaust. Brita got reprimanded by her fellow Amazons for some of her recent behavior, which she deserved. But then she's getting recruited by the cruelest and least ethical arm of The Directorate?! Brita is a bitch, but she seems to have her reasons for becoming who she is today. Even so, nobody deserves getting involved with the doctor.
Good observations. Laura seems to be rather easily influenced by certain kinds of people.
I doubt that Brita is going to be working directly for Hilde. I think Hilde is acting more as a recruiting agent and local control. The actual assignment is more likely going to be with the Directorate's security apparatus as muscle, or maybe the Home Guard.
Is it Ayla? Not going to say. But it would be a good tactic to control the cash flow and politicians, and controlling what the Home Guard can access is a huge control on their insurgency thinking. Is Laura mixed up in the Home Guard? No. Is the Money Faction looking at her? Not specifically, but her invention would be useful to them. Is she mixed up with Silverplate/Stauffer? Not directly.
And Brita? Is she being offered a real job, or merely a task to keep her out of the way and thinking that she's more important than she really is?
How about Hideo? He wants to get talent for his company. Desperation? You can read that in if you want. Or he's a little frustrated about the rate of growth he can attain without gadgeteers. Was he being creepy? Or was he intrigued with Laura's inventions and basically interviewing her about what they could be used for? By US standards, Hideo might be seen as an asshole. Or not, depending on your viewpoint. Inviting Laura? Politeness after she took time from her schedule to show them around? Interest in her talent? Lots of reasons it could be.
My take (and I'm the author, so my take counts) - we've seen him in one (1) story, and everything that motivates him has not been revealed. Only bit parts. Is he an asshole? Nope. But he's Japanese, not American. Judging him by western standards is a mistake.
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Judging him by any standard, his action towards his son have been reprehensible.elrodw wrote: My take (and I'm the author, so my take counts) - we've seen him in one (1) story, and everything that motivates him has not been revealed. Only bit parts. Is he an asshole? Nope. But he's Japanese, not American. Judging him by western standards is a mistake.
He all but considers his son useless, but harbors some hope for his daughter. Even when he starts to have second thoughts that working on Koichi's gifts would be worth it, he shifts back to thinking Koichi is only useful in as much as a daughter is only useful for business or political marriages. Just with a son instead.All in all, the boy's interests and powers were of no use to Hideo and his worries about his company, unlike those of his sister Sakura, who seemed naturally gifted and highly interested in things technical. It was therefore no wonder that daughter related more to father, and son related more to mother.
Although, as Hideo mulled things over in his mind, maybe there was some potential in his son. Artists were valued in Japan, and if his power made people feel his art more intensely, then .... He put the thought aside. He had his company to run first and foremost.
Koichi was a Japanese boy raised in a traditional Japanese family. He knew his place.
Enrolling him in Whateley will help his art, but part 2 made it clear that Koichi's primary purpose is for recruiting, and Laura specifically. Hideo's behavior in Part 2 was less about his son, who was clearly an afterthought, and far more focused on Laura and any others he might have a chance to catch a glimpse of while on the tour.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Let's take a look at that.
We've already seen Vanessa Jackson. She was in the MCO holding tank with Charger. Famous singer, not an option.
Famous singer IS an option, as Mr. Butler's personal assistant recognized her on sight. It may be hard to believe, but performers and athletes can have significant business acumen. Also, Ayla did spend time teaching her as much about economics as he could before they broke up and we knew from the start that she was driven to succeed.
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: David Goodkind has been described as being more interested in the personnel side of things than the financial side.
He still has a Goodkind upbringing, and ten years to consider what options are left him if Nimbus succeeds.
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Macrobiotic? A bio-devisor suddenly turning into a financial genius?
If she lives long enough to follow her mother and grandmother's footsteps, she will be a CEO of her own company. "Bio-devisor" is her mutant power, not the sum total of her capabilities.
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: The other two options? Why be coy about who it is?
It's rather difficult to be "coy" in either case, since I couldn't know in advance who that new character is beyond being called "Financier". However, one of the premises of Gen2 was supposed to be that the stories would not all be tied tightly to Gen1 continuity.
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elrodw wrote: And Brita? Is she being offered a real job, or merely a task to keep her out of the way and thinking that she's more important than she really is?
She seems to be a loose cannon at this point, not unusual for a teenager. If she's merely useless, or somewhat trainable, they're set.
One of my favorite loose cannons in SciFi:
17 y.o. Miles Naismith Vorkosigan was shipped off to his mom's homeworld after failing his physical for military service. Even his mother once observed that no sane government would trust him with so much as a pocket knife.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Let's take a look at that.
We've already seen Vanessa Jackson. She was in the MCO holding tank with Charger. Famous singer, not an option.
Famous singer IS an option, as Mr. Butler's personal assistant recognized her on sight. It may be hard to believe, but performers and athletes can have significant business acumen. Also, Ayla did spend time teaching her as much about economics as he could before they broke up and we knew from the start that she was driven to succeed.
I suppose a misunderstanding was inevitable, since I used four words where a dozen or more seem to be necessary: "She is a famous singer, which is a full-time occupation. A simultanious career as Financier is not an option."
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Let me spell this out again.
Japan trains mutants. High school in Japan is not free at all. How do you think a lot of families in Japan afford the schools (which while not Whateley cost, are still well up there in terms of cost)?
Answer: Corporations pay. Both indirectly (financing the schools themselves), to help lower costs, as well as direct scholarships. Ie, recruitment. Corps don't give scholarships for free, after all...
So, Hideo both wants to marry his son (and remember, Japan is *still* a culture where family first, self second.) to Laura, and failing that... Well! Recruiting her to work for him, is almost as good, no, and well, he could afford to pay Whateley after all for her.
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Is he perfect? No, but one could make the case that he's trying. Even before the possibility of sending Koichi to Whateley to snag a gadgeteer wife came to the table, he was not forcing the boy into a business or engineering track. He had hopes, true, and he was disappointed that the reality didn't match his hopes, but he didn't seem to punishing Koichi for that.
He has concerns about the long-term viability of the family business -- the business that keep the family in comfort. He found a way for Koichi to help with the business and still pursue his dreams.
Yes, he tasked Koichi with wooing and marrying Laura. But note the context of the conversation: at that point, Hideo did not know the exact nature of Whateley. He knew there was one gadgeteer girl at the school, so he tasked Koichi into aiming for her. He would probably be just as happy if Koichi brought back any other gadgeteer girlfriend -- or even a boyfriend (Koichi's sexuality hasn't been explored very much yet, he could be gay -- although, as a meta comment, I dislike the stereotype of someone associated with "non-manly" pursuits being gay.)
He's not the perfect father, but he's hardly a villain.
I note also that Koichi could get some serious attaboy points if he just convinced one upperclassman gadgeteer into working for his family's business after graduation -- not as as tight a tie as marriage (but then, with divorce so common, is marriage much of a tie nowadays?) but bringing the timetable forward for as much as three years.
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Sir Lee wrote: I think people are too quick to crucify Hideo for not being the perfect idealized understanding liberal dad.
Is he perfect? No, but one could make the case that he's trying. Even before the possibility of sending Koichi to Whateley to snag a gadgeteer wife came to the table, he was not forcing the boy into a business or engineering track. He had hopes, true, and he was disappointed that the reality didn't match his hopes, but he didn't seem to punishing Koichi for that.
He's not the perfect father, but he's hardly a villain.
From knowing a few people from very traditional Japanese famiies, Hideo is actually fairly progressive in his approach.
I note also that Koichi could get some serious attaboy points if he just convinced one upperclassman gadgeteer into working for his family's business after graduation -- not as as tight a tie as marriage (but then, with divorce so common, is marriage much of a tie nowadays?) but bringing the timetable forward for as much as three years.
This would probably be more useful for his company, as he would be able to get a foot in the door with students who are more likely to be looking for work directly, rather than having to wait.
The Japanese government would also be supportive in this approach, as they would get people who can start work instantly, rather than waiting 3-4 years.
Possibly Koichi could end up joining Pan-Asia, and getting sponsorship deals via this route. The students would have a better idea of their value to the companies concerned, so would charge commensurately more, but they'd be contributing from day one.
This could also turn into the Japanese government being another recruiter haunting the grounds of Whateley, which would also give some material for entertaining vignettes.

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How would Bianca's friend Tinker/Janine be treated if she was born into that culture? Her specialty doesn't make marketable products. She might be good for optimization, eventually, but would that be recognized? Or would she be treated the same way that the two punks treated her in the Quad in The Writing on the Wall?
From what's been presented in this and other stories, at least thus far, I'm not sure.
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Katssun wrote: I am not a big fan of WU Japan behavior where corporate meets cultural overall, at least what we have been shown. Their behavior towards mutants in general reeks of 1920s and 1930s zaibatsu behavior. In fact, I don't see much of a difference between that slice of Japan and the Iron Dragon. Those who can't be absorbed into businesses (tech track) are sent to shadow schools used for less scrupulous activities. This story reiterates that the psychic arts mutants are shunned because it is presumed to be intrusive.
How would Bianca's friend Tinker/Janine be treated if she was born into that culture? Her specialty doesn't make marketable products. She might be good for optimization, eventually, but would that be recognized? Or would she be treated the same way that the two punks treated her in the Quad in The Writing on the Wall?
From what's been presented in this and other stories, at least thus far, I'm not sure.
My feeling is that Janine would be recognized as a gadgeteer who makes what is essentially performance art. The ability to make Rube Goldberg devices / domino chains / etc is a tribute to both mechanical ability and artistic talent. Note that it was said in LatFC that Koichi could become a well-recognized artist in Japan. Artists are valued.
As to mutants, I'll let Mage answer that, but it should be evident that far from being denigrated, Japan doesn't discriminate against mutants and is far more tolerant than the Whateley Universe US (and several other countries). As to devisors and gadgeteers, you really have to think of Sergei Korolyev or Werner von Braun (in the 60s) to get an idea of how a good engineer / gadgeteer can be somewhat of a 'rock star' to a large part of the nation. If either Mage or I gave that impression, that was a miss on our part. They aren't merely property of a zaibatsu to be used and exploited.
I'm trying to understand why you're so negative on Japan. We're trying to show how different it is, and with regard to mutants, how much more friendly than the US.
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I'm not trying to be negative, I'm really not. I just haven't gotten the same impression of what you and Mage are saying compared to what's been published so far. Or maybe it is all just my read of the stories. You're both saying it, but I don't feel like it's been shown as clearly in the published stories as both of your responses in the forums would indicate.elrodw wrote: I'm trying to understand why you're so negative on Japan. We're trying to show how different it is, and with regard to mutants, how much more friendly than the US.
The royal family has been shown to be very pro-mutant, but Islands in The Sun still had an undertone of Japan doing their best to rise in power to meet the threat of Iron Dragon. Stuff that the Fujihara's are up to. Not in a bad way, but in an "Oh, we ought to hurry," way. Yama Dojo also still exists. Are they not a government DeVille Academy-esque school for Japanese mutants?
I don't think I've gotten a lot of the 'Japanese gadgeteers and devisors are rockstars.' I've gotten, 'a gadgeteer or devisor will get a job for life.' Which, if I remember right, is a bit standard in the Japanese office world. But that also makes me think of karōshi, or working someone to death. Which gadgeteers and devisors are very good at doing all on their own.
I could be tainting your concepts with my own forced perspective of the real world.
But I do feel like Hideo is completely ignoring his own son.
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Katssun wrote: The royal family has been shown to be very pro-mutant, but Islands in The Sun still had an undertone of Japan doing their best to rise in power to meet the threat of Iron Dragon. Stuff that the Fujihara's are up to. Not in a bad way, but in an "Oh, we ought to hurry," way. Yama Dojo also still exists. Are they not a government DeVille Academy-esque school for Japanese mutants?
I think that Yama Dojo's and DeVille Academy's answer to that would be "Hell no." Both function as Vocational/Technical schools, but the similarities end there. For one thing, the Japanese Government, and by extension the Yama Dojo, has a duty to the Japanese people. DeVille Academy only owes what it's paid for and happily charges all that the market will bear.
The Yama Dojo's job has been explained as educating and training Japanese mutants to be productive members of Japanese society. If they can't place their students in civilian jobs or academia, the government would logically be expected to make a place for them. The culture shock for mutant kids faced with entirely different social and legal expectations shouldn't be expected to be trivial. Complaining that their government is involved in helping them navigate that transition is almost as myopic as complaining that the US Government supports the U.S. Merchant Marine Academy.
Because of the age that mutants manifest, they also have to balance youthful
Katssun wrote: I don't think I've gotten a lot of the 'Japanese gadgeteers and devisors are rockstars.' I've gotten, 'a gadgeteer or devisor will get a job for life.' Which, if I remember right, is a bit standard in the Japanese office world. But that also makes me think of karōshi, or working someone to death. Which gadgeteers and devisors are very good at doing all on their own.
I'd recommend spending some time learning about how Japan views its master artisans, which is what gadgeteers and (especially) devisors are. Would some companies abuse such national resources, given an opportunity? Of course. The more Western they are, the more they can be expected to fixate on quarterly cash flows over long-term health.
What makes you think that the Yama Dojo, given its position, would not put an effort into teaching their neurodiverse techies something about work/life balance - and how their favorite manga is presenting a horrible example?
It's my understanding that the authors are trying to depict Japan and Asia as having their own cultures, instead of forcing them to be nothing more than colorful foreign-language dubs of North American culture. They are also trying to give their characters unique personalities, not just edgy combinations of identity labels. That should result in characters that don't fit you perfectly when you project yourself into their point of view.
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The "low status recruiting" sounds like how and why Deville trains guttersnipes, finding invisibles, and making them good, hidden, criminals?
Maybe that's just phrasing?
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Malady wrote: Have we seen Yama Dojo grads? Or any Yama Dojo ppl not being shadowy sneaky sneaks?
The Imperial Palace guide who escorts Jiro Fujihara and Shinzuo Abe to a meeting with IOPS and the Celestial Empress' Voice is a Yama graduate.
At Konohanasakuya Island, a team of the Yama Dojo's high school equivalent are on-hand masquerading as tourists.
Karou Saito (Team leader. has at least taken Introduction to magic),
Sakuya Kasai (healer, worked on healing Hikaru after an "oops", and is Tetsuko Kasai's younger sister),
Miyako Yamada (wizard),
Suzume Moto (nekomata avatar, nicknamed "Nyan-chan")
Kotone Yamauchi
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="Islands in the Sun"]“Nyaa. Slow the Americajin are.” Suzume snickered, but in a more serious tone, went on. “It’s what I remember one paper saying. ‘The war could have been avoided, if the government had asked if America was playing by Japan’s rules in diplomacy’. Maybe we should tell Whateley’s students?” She looked curious.
Karou shook his head. “No. The rules are that until Whateley pranks us back, we can’t tell the premier generalist school for supernaturals that we respect them, and consider them a sister school, Suzume-chan.” Pausing, and smiling crookedly, he added. “I do think I have an idea this year to try.”
Apparently, Whateley Academy at this point is considered "inarguably the best non-Japanese school for magic." A good reason for the Sidhe Queen to continue her studies there, no?
Malady wrote: The "low status recruiting" sounds like how and why Deville trains guttersnipes, finding invisibles, and making them good, hidden, criminals?
Would you expect the Japanese to trust guttersnipes with the health of the Voice of the Celestial Empress?
Rises The Sun wrote: Abe was aware still that the Dojo did not teach those of the the upper class, by and large, because the Dojo’s graduates went on to serve Japan in less glamorous roles. Those of the highest classes had much given to them, but they also had much responsibility, including finding their own teachers, and tutors, to more properly put them on the path of service to Japan their rank required. He had thought Abe had forgotten that.
The Dojo of Shadows does not have the publicly-visible prestige that would suit a Goodkind, a Windsor, or a Myoujin.
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Although we are sort of talking difference between Oxford and MIT here, so frankly either one would work for a good education
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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You realize a Yama graduate *teaches* at Whateley?
Yama's *purpose* is to train *the backbone* of Japanese society, Good people doing good things, not noticed. As for how the Japanese view mutants: Gadgetters and Devs as I believe we've *tried* to show are viewed as master artists of technology. Hikaru's accorded the same position and respect as a Pope or Princess.
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Yes. And the DOPS has been shown to be drastically more pro-mutant than most equivalents, aside from maybe Australia?MageOhki wrote: As for how the Japanese view mutants: Gadgetters and Devs as I believe we've *tried* to show are viewed as master artists of technology. Hikaru's accorded the same position and respect as a Pope or Princess.
But I'm not really sure how the general population feels about PK supers, energizers, exemplars or GSD cases. You both stated through Koichi that the Japanese are more wary about espers and empaths, but is it some degree of distancing, shunning, or is it no worse than someone might be concerning a particularly prying older neighbor trying to hook up a woman with their single grandson?
Thank you for the responses, they've been very helpful at re-grounding me.
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And also where those new ppl have their YD history given in-story.
Tetsuko Kasai is therefore an implied Yama grad, given that her sister goes there.
The Guide is nameless?
EDIT: And I still can't edit, since it's still lagging. Not sure if I should just be more patient or what.
OH... The Coup still hasn't been counted yet. M3 gonna respond? When it's gonna happen? Questions, questions.
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And yeah, I'd put "Hiding as Tourists" as "sneaky sneak", but we have non-SS examples, so OK.
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Katssun wrote: But I'm not really sure how the general population feels about PK supers, energizers, exemplars or GSD cases.
In "Islands in the Sun", Megumi Fujihara is an exemplar (and gadgeteer), and her brother married one. Abe suspects Jiro might be a low-level exemplar himself. Megumi marrying an American required some familial convincing...
It might come down to how much the mutant looks Japanese, though those who look like yōkai might be considered the wrong kind of Japanese.
Igirisu-san is a bit eccentric. Truth in Television?
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As for the American gov't: Bluntly? There are elements (a lot of them, though the military is the most obvious, Treasury, Commerce, FBI, CIA, NSA.. I could go on, Forest Service!) that are strongly pro mutant. Elrodw touched on why they're being... well, quiet in the US. Remember, America (as the DOPS rep pointed out) has had several very bad events vis a vis powers/mutants.Katssun wrote:
Yes. And the DOPS has been shown to be drastically more pro-mutant than most equivalents, aside from maybe Australia?MageOhki wrote: As for how the Japanese view mutants: Gadgetters and Devs as I believe we've *tried* to show are viewed as master artists of technology. Hikaru's accorded the same position and respect as a Pope or Princess.
Japan started this process as mutants became more and more 'visible' (though a lot of the 'mutants' in Japan are yomi or hanayou... even with a MGC, they really shouldn't be classified as mutants as such, and Hikaru falls into this group. And yes, the yomi desended and yomi themselves made great strides in using DOPS to fully merge with Japanese soceity)But I'm not really sure how the general population feels about PK supers, energizers, exemplars or GSD cases. You both stated through Koichi that the Japanese are more wary about espers and empaths, but is it some degree of distancing, shunning, or is it no worse than someone might be concerning a particularly prying older neighbor trying to hook up a woman with their single grandson?
Thank you for the responses, they've been very helpful at re-grounding me.
One thing to understand: In Japan, the nail that sticks out gets hammered.
This leads to this:
As the spread of powers became obvious during the 70's and 80's, Japan took steps to find niches for powers in the culture/workforce. DOPS (which predated in some forms the last shougante!) took steps as they could math, and had some precog/divination, and used it. The fact that gag/devs were a *major* enhancement of economic power didn't hurt, as well as a cultural/religious background that predisposed Japanese to being at least leaning 'not be afraid' of such.
(Somewhat similar to what they did in RL, with 'variant' acceptable behaviors/looks, just quicker, the range of 'not sticking out')
Specifics (and remember, regional and age/mindset variants differ, but this is the *general* view, with one major exception: the Ryukyus. They are the only area to have active and high membership H1 type organizations. Hokkaido used to to some extent, but that was also due to the Ainu, and that's ramped down)
GSD cases: More accepting than Americans, but it varies by region and GSD case (If you're a neko or kitsune mini, for example...) Even here, there's still room to work, and a lot get by by acting or doing this or that type work showing off their GSD, even if 'scary', to those who'd pay to see. As noted above, Japan is used to the concept of non human sentience, due to cultural factors and deliberate work, so, GSD is better off.
Exemplars: By and large, they're usually decently treated, and most end up as idols, models, or in business where their brains are put to work. As well as highly sought after by the SDF and gov't.
Energizers, depends on powers, but by and large, they're not usually at any serious risk.
PK in general is fine as well, no matter what it is. It's cheaper to pay Lancer (and faster!) to lift tons up on a skyscraper, for example than to hire a crane, neh?.
All of the above usually find work and well paying work.
The areas where Japan really has issues with powers (and this isn't *mutants*, this is *all* sources of powers).
Avatars: Generally it'd depend on the spirit, and how the spirit is *viewed*, as well as 'personal' variants. Sayuka from Yomi has a bakaneko which isn't viewed well at all by more conservative/tradtional people, and as such is a ward of the state. Hikaru otoh, has the premier avatar 'spirit' to Japanese, and as such...
Mages: This isn't so much dislike/distrust, as a issue in training them. Again, see Islands of the Sun.
Japanese mages by and large follow the traditional path of kotodama, onmyōdo, et al. This is an apprentice system, at that, while Western style mages are *rare*, and by and large are also (outside Yomi, and they have a small program, which is not much more than apprenticeship. This falls into the 'who's viewing it, group' and how the mage is doing his or her own thing. If a mage is acting as a shrine priest (or shrine maiden), no problems, but as they get out of that area... older/more conservative people will be.. uneasy.
Now for the two that give the *most* headaches to their possessers:
Shifter: Shapeshifting, nuff said. While this isn't as bad as below... it still brings issues, so a shifter (Adam, for example) has to walk a line, mind you, and there's some distrust to an openly known shifter. They're still not too badly off, live action production companies do pay very well.
Psi (Empaths, Telepaths): This is the area where Japan recoils in a LOT of distrust/horror. Koichi is an exception here, simply because the *way* his projective empaty works. And that's only once it becomes known, before that? Iie...
However, Artists are *respected* in Japan, and Koichi's power syngerizes insanely nicely with it. (And Artists get a hell of a lot more leeway)
The reason for the recoil should be obvious. Receptive empaths, projective empaths telepaths all violate the 'inner walls' of Japanese culture. Japan (for what should be mostly OBVIOUS reasons) cannot have privacy on a physical level, by and large, and personal space is insanely small by any standard a western mind would have. But they're very much into mental privacy and respecting such. Gov't, otoh... well, PSA and DOPS wants as many telepaths as possible, duh.
Again, as Hikaru's stories, and Koichi's situation points out, "Why are there a lot of Japanese at Whateley?" (After all, they're pro mutant, the corps PAY for schooling, and *good* schooling, that in RtS, even Carson generally admitted was good enough, and Yomi)
1: Some are issei/nisei+ (If this is an trend or just an statistical aberration, we're not saying)
2: Some are psis.
3: Now, ah, Japanese culture. Not only would it be excessively costly for a ladder/elite (ie, for the rich) school for powers to be founded, or powers training in say, the Peer's School (Hikaru mentioned this in RtS) DOPS flat out started a process when Whateley came to their attention of internationalizing their 'upper class' metahumans.
Whateley is used by DOPS and Japan *as* where the Rich kids (or those of high, high status.) go to learn about their powers.
Two reasons: It *is* overall the best. And it gets the kids in question thinking *far* more 'internatonal' than the average Japanese does.
(Side note, it also helps, or was an objective at least, to recruit MORE paranormals to Japan. Make no mistake Japan as a deliberate policy at the highest level of government being somewhat *ruthless here.* While not *openly* declaring themselves a safe haven for mutants, or like, they will not turn any away that want to come to Japan, and assimilate. Gag and Devs? They're met at the tarmac with job offers... *smiles*)
Japan while not in the militarization mindset of pre WW2, made the choice at a high level to *embrace* mutants/powers as the survival of their nation and culture.
And so, there is some elements that a scan would ring the bells of pre WW2 behavior.
Hope this helps.
Additional thought. Again, I touch on this in Island, and hint at it above: This also depends on the paranormal in question. If they behave within the niches, see above! If not... Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllll. The nail...
- Mister D
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MageOhki wrote: If not... Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllll. The nail...
This!
I personally know Japanese nationals who said that when they went back home to live, they had to "cut off parts of themselves" in order to fit in.
The "internal privacy" part fits as well, where they are still the-people-they-were-when-i-met-them, but only online.
I know a few others who left and didn't go back.
However!
This goes for almost every culture. Japan is a more blatant example to westerners, but only because most of us here, are not from Japan.
Here in the UK, there's a different flavour of wyrdness, different social codes, and, different flavours of acceptable/un-acceptable behaviours.
The bird flying overhead says to two fish below, "How's the water?"
The fish look at each other and say, "What's water?"
Measure Twice
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MageOhki wrote: As for the American gov't: Bluntly? There are elements (a lot of them, though the military is the most obvious, Treasury, Commerce, FBI, CIA, NSA.. I could go on, Forest Service!) that are strongly pro mutant. ..
I would expect NASA in that list with special regards to gadgeteers (over devisors, repeatability is key to the scientific method)
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- MageOhki
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mhalpern: You can safely assume they hire gags whenever they can get away with it, just like the Air Force...
- joreymay
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A mutant (even with GSD) who was the "right kind" of Japanese before manifesting would still likely be so after manifesting as far as learning style is concerned.
UK (/Commonwealth) and US schools are much better at addressing heterogenous student populations, but not as efficient at imparting specific knowledge and skills to those populations as the Japanese schools are at imparting them to their homogenous students.
- MageOhki
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Let me say this: As bicoastal and someone who's done both systems...
It's not quite that. I'll point out that Japanese ('spc issei and nisei) tend to do *very* well in American schools.
(So do other 'asian' for almost the same reasons.)
I recommend you ponder *why*
As for 'diversity and like... depends on the school, really. Some in Japan are very good, some aren't, but that's in a lot of ways due to how the system is designed, in some aspects.
I'm not going to discuss American school systems, since that'll quickly go political.
Japanese systems have flaws (some glaring, in fact, and obvious to those who study), and to be honest, it's also a bit beyond the discussion realm here.
- joreymay
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MageOhki wrote: Joreymay?
Let me say this: As bicoastal and someone who's done both systems...
My sourse may be a bit out of date, and a little less personal. Some time ago, my Aunt (an educator turned Buddhist priest) spent a few decades running a Zen Center in Tokyo. At one point, "the cousins" (my kids and her grandchildren) expressed an interest in spending a year there going to school. Being who she was, she researched the issue, including discussions with a number of educators and administrators there as well as reviewing relevant literature. The summary comes from what she told us. In particular, what the educators told her while discouraging the idea. This was in the 1990s, so things are likely to be a bit different by now.
It's not quite that. I'll point out that Japanese ('spc issei and nisei) tend to do *very* well in American schools.
As one would expect from my description. The more relevant issue is how gaigin children do in the Japanese schools. And the last I heard, it is still not all that good. It is also relevant to note that they don't (on average) do quite as well on the international standardized tests as their peers in the Japanese schools - particularly in math and science. Again, consistent with my description.
(So do other 'asian' for almost the same reasons.)
I recommend you ponder *why*
According to the literature, the most prominent factors are highly engaged parents and subcultures which value schoolwork. Again, consistent.
- MageOhki
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joreymay wrote:
MageOhki wrote: Joreymay?
Let me say this: As bicoastal and someone who's done both systems...
My sourse may be a bit out of date, and a little less personal. Some time ago, my Aunt (an educator turned Buddhist priest) spent a few decades running a Zen Center in Tokyo. At one point, "the cousins" (my kids and her grandchildren) expressed an interest in spending a year there going to school. Being who she was, she researched the issue, including discussions with a number of educators and administrators there as well as reviewing relevant literature. The summary comes from what she told us. In particular, what the educators told her while discouraging the idea. This was in the 1990s, so things are likely to be a bit different by now.
It's not quite that. I'll point out that Japanese ('spc issei and nisei) tend to do *very* well in American schools.
As one would expect from my description. The more relevant issue is how gaigin children do in the Japanese schools. And the last I heard, it is still not all that good. It is also relevant to note that they don't (on average) do quite as well on the international standardized tests as their peers in the Japanese schools - particularly in math and science. Again, consistent with my description.
(So do other 'asian' for almost the same reasons.)
I recommend you ponder *why*
According to the literature, the most prominent factors are highly engaged parents and subcultures which value schoolwork. Again, consistent.
As for gaijins or even haifu, (I qualify as the latter) at least in the 80's? Yes, *if* you join up post 3rd or 4th grade, there's issues.
As for gaijin doing worse in Japanese systems... I dunno, I aced the Todai's exam...
While I know some, who didn't do all that well, I also know that their *parents* weren't as invovled, as a Japanese parent would be. I also know Japanese kids who didn't do well, and their parents didn't care.
*shrugs* Statistics *suggest*. They're not absolute. To get an accurate picture, you'd have to run *several* studies at once, and compare.