Question Danny Franks - Kayda's brother

Since y'all have hijacked Mischief's thread, you can move your nefarious plotting here.

oh goody, the catboy comments can start flying.

not a shifter, permanently a catboy, an exemplar 4 and a water element power. ( cats and water )

A young boy runs into room followed by a horde of screaming animals known as girls who plow into him as he struggled valiently to leave.

Kayda! Screamed the boy as the girls began to smother him with their bodies. Slowly they found that he was transforming before their very eyes. Smaller and smaller he became where a small snout appeared followed by a set of large beady eyes.

On each side of his small black nose whiskers appeared as with a small set of teeth.

Overall his body had shrunken down proportionally as his body grew a thick set of brown fur as well as his hands and feet taking on the appearance of small claws.

Each of the girls gave a loud squeal as did he as they ran frightened by him. No longer was he the adorable boy they had been chasing after but a retched mouse. Scurring away from the girls he found himself frozen when he heard the sounds of an evil hiss. Looking around his small black eyes fell upon the approaching cat.

Running as fast as his little legs would let him scurry he found himself safe, or so he thought when he had maneuvered himself under on of the girls doors.

It was then he noticed that the girl was giving him an evil hiss of her own when she scooped him up and placed him inside a metal cage.

Now I got you my pretty. And I'll have your sister too, snarled Tansy.

and with Danny at families while mom and dad are at Whateley for the riddle of sappho arc there is the perfect opportunity to have him start manifesting to be on campus for the fall term.

Knowing her brother and with the history of their family with mutations [okay, only Kayda] he would end up an avatar as well with a Native American spirit of some sort. Probably something which causes him and his sister nothing but trouble as it is a trouble magnet. Need to look up Native American spirits.

Does the Wendigo myth go that far south? That would cause a lot of trouble.

I'm actually rather fond of this portrayal that was posted in the Mischief thread:

Danny wanted to cry. Mischief had started it, and it had all got out of hand so fast and now Mrs. Horton was on the way to call his mother, and Danny just knew his mum would then call Kayda and she'd tell her everything she saw and then he'd have to try and explain how he ended up naked on the common room floor with four girls laying all over him.

It just wasn't fair!

Sniffing Danny tried to remember how it had happened. It was all so inocent! Mischief had come over for some maths tutoring, and when she mentioned it at lunch Cover had got jealous, so that had meant it had turned into a tutoring session with both Mischief and the Three Little Witches.

Everyone had come over to Poe, and Danny had quickly taken them to a study room, and it'd had all been going fine, till Clover got bored and stroking him, making him purr. And then the ears had come out, and that got Mischief also stoking him, and then he'd started getting fur, and Clover had started cuddling him and ...

Danny was still in shock, he hadn't even known he could do that, transform fully into a mountain lion. The girls had squealed in delight! Catching him, and cuddling him and removing his school uniform form his now cat body, and their squeals had attracted others, until the whole of Wondercute in the room next door plotting for their next sim had found him too.

It wasn't until Kayda had walked in that the shock of seeing her had broken the embarisment and allowed him to transform back ... naked ... with all those girls clinging to him. And then Mrs. Hortan and come in!

Danny put his head down and cried, life was so unfair.

Going the shifter route with his powers influenced by his emotions would actually be kind of cool.

well he wouldn't be in Poe unless he comes out as gay or bi.
one of which would kill that little episode completely.

a were only, he wouldn't need whateley, the Mediwhala(sp?) tribe could easily teach him.


what puts him in whateley, and why in poe?

Dreamer wrote: Knowing her brother and with the history of their family with mutations [okay, only Kayda] he would end up an avatar as well with a Native American spirit of some sort. Probably something which causes him and his sister nothing but trouble as it is a trouble magnet. Need to look up Native American spirits.

The Thunderbird needs a new host.

Dawnfyre wrote: well he wouldn't be in Poe unless he comes out as gay or bi.
one of which would kill that little episode completely.

a were only, he wouldn't need whateley, the Mediwhala(sp?) tribe could easily teach him.


what puts him in whateley, and why in poe?

First, the Weres are NOT the same thing as mutant shifters, even if their abilities are similar. The Weres have a whole lot of other issues involved, not the least of which is their Blood Rage, which this character concept wouldn't have. And being a mutant would qualify him for Whateley, especially with his sister already attending there.

Second, I'm more interested in the character concept itself rather than the cottage. Change a few character names and a scene like this could just as easily take place in Melville as in Poe. That said, also mentioned in the Mischief thread was that he could be an avatar with a female spirit (cat spirit in this case), prompting his parents to request that he be put in Poe as a precaution, even if he doesn't end up a changeling.

There are lots of ways a concept like this could work.

Valentine wrote:

Dreamer wrote: Knowing her brother and with the history of their family with mutations [okay, only Kayda] he would end up an avatar as well with a Native American spirit of some sort. Probably something which causes him and his sister nothing but trouble as it is a trouble magnet. Need to look up Native American spirits.

The Thunderbird needs a new host.

Oh snap, I didn't even think of that...

That would be ALL KINDS of messy...not to mention making his and Kayda's relationship even MORE awkward than it already is...

Dang, I wouldn't have even thought that was possible...

Dawnfyre wrote: well he wouldn't be in Poe unless he comes out as gay or bi.
one of which would kill that little episode completely.

a were only, he wouldn't need whateley, the Mediwhala(sp?) tribe could easily teach him.


what puts him in whateley, and why in poe?

Covered in the earlier scene

Mum! I know she's a female spirit, but she swears she's not gonna turn me into a girl!"

"I know dear, but we all know what happened to Kayda when she got a female spirit, I really think it would be best if you are in Poe with your sister and the other girls who will know what your going through."

"But Mum! I'm not turning into a girl!"

"I hope so too dear, now in Poe you'll get to know all the secrets of the gay children, and the other transgendered ones too. It's very important that you do not reveal that to the rest of the school ..."

"Mum! I don't want to be in Poe with the gay boys, they'll hit on me!"

"You are turning into a very pretty girl dear, I'm sure you know how supportive your father and I will be about any boyfriend you have dear."

"Mum! I'm a boy! I'm staying a boy! I won't have any boyfriends!"

"Well, if you find a nice girl like Kayda did, we'll support you in that too dear."

Danny took a seat on the train glaring at Kayda as she sat down in the seat before him.

"Look Danny, I'm sorry, and it was the only shirt they had in your size!" Kayda apologised again.

"But it's pink! And it has this stupid cat thing on it ..."

"Hello Kitty." Kayda murmured, almost as red in embarrassment as her brother.

"Whatever, why couldn't we just have gotten my bag and a new shirt from that?" Danny demanded.

"Because we'd already handed it in, look I really am sorry I spilt the shake on you, but it was the only store on the platform selling shirts, and that was the only one that fit."

"How would you like to be turning up for your first day at school dressed in a pink shirt!" Danny demanded, red faced, scrunching down, then in horror he felt cats ears growing from his head. In embarrassment he pulled up his hoodie and pressed himself into the corner between his seat and the window.

"Ooh kitty! You must be on the way to Whateley too!" Danny tried to crouch further down in the seat, mortified as fur started covering his face, desperatly trying to hide from the voice.

Feeling a bump in his seat, he turned to see a girl sitting next to him, hand outstretched. "Hi!, I'm Mischief, I'm starting at Whateley today! Ooh, that looks so soft."

At the sound of muffled giggling Danny turned to face forward, unbelievably betrayed as Kayda broke down and laughed out loud to see her brother pressed deep into the corner of the seat, desperately trying to escape the attentions of a cute girl hell bent of cuddling and stoking him.

I hereby nominate Phoenix to become a canon writer for Danny and Hank.
All in favour?

Well he seems to be having a really good time with Danny, and he obviously did a great job with Hank, so I certainly wouldn't be opposed to it.

Sorry, but Danny is Kayda's brother and thus falls under the jurisdiction of elrod. If elrod wishes to allow Phoenix to write such a canon story working with elrod to do so, then it is okay. Otherwise we just have to accept this is all fan fic and whatever elrod has planned is official canon.

Quite right.


But it doesn't stop me having fun in FanFiction and working an ear worm into his brain and just making sure Elrod can't think any other thoughts about Danny but the ones I am writing!

Mwahaaha the power is mine!

"Oh! Now this is heavenly!" Danny started. Cautiously looking around, trying to see who it was that was speaking. "I'm so glad I listened to Wakan Tanka, this is just divine!" continued the voice.

"Hello?" Carefully Danny inquired, shocked to hear someone talking about Wakan Tanka, the Lakota Great Spirit his sister communed with.

"Hello yourself." The sultry voice replied back. Danny's eyes widened in disbelief as he finally 'heard' where the voice was coming from.

"You're in my head? How can you be in my head!" He demanded, more then a little desperately.

"Oh darling, you know how! After all, like your sister you are an Avatar, and with all the issues she's been having, there was no way that we could leave it up to chance who got you, so Wkan Tanka asked me to come and protect you, and I just couldn't resist."

"Like my sister? Avatar? I'm not going to turn into a girl am I?" Panicking Danny jumped up and desperately started looking all around.

"Oh, now why would I go and do a thing like that?" The sultry voice murmured. "After all, a girl has needs." Danny could all but hear sounds of lips being smacked in her voice. Confused, hyperventilating, desperately turning here and there, Danny almost welcomed the darkness as everything faded to black.

Okay, no more taste of power for you. You are getting drunk and trying to make poor Danny suffer because of it. And I still think it would be cute for him to meet the Three Little Witches and one of them develops a crush on him. The sheer amount of chaos and trouble you could hit Kayda with, without the usual angst, would be immense. Making Danny manifest while visiting and thus the girl saying they are destined to be together would be icing on the cake.

Dreamer wrote: Knowing her brother and with the history of their family with mutations [okay, only Kayda] he would end up an avatar as well with a Native American spirit of some sort. Probably something which causes him and his sister nothing but trouble as it is a trouble magnet. Need to look up Native American spirits.

Thunderbird may be looking for a new host

I should have kept reading the thread

*points Phoenix Spiritus to the new Micro-Scenes thread in the Workshop* Please, let the poor boy have a little dignity in this thread. I swear, after that last micro-scene of yours I almost saw him try to get up and run for the hills.

Dreamer wrote: *points Phoenix Spiritus to the new Micro-Scenes thread in the Workshop* Please, let the poor boy have a little dignity in this thread. I swear, after that last micro-scene of yours I almost saw him try to get up and run for the hills.

It's OK, lassos are cheep and effective.

after what happened to Kayda when he manifested, ANY hint of a gender flip and Danny would be likely to kill himself.

May I suggest either projective empath, or even a glamour.

Now there's a situation. A young boy with the avatar of a sexpot of a spirit who has been deprived for who knows how many eons.. What possible harm could that be.

I wrote this as a Micro-Scene a while back, so I figured it's worth throwing in the mix, (although, to be honest, the adorable cat-boy with a female cat-spirit IS intriguing me!)

Kayda's little brother manifests - as a Canotila (a North American woods elf known to the Native Americans) and is kidnapped by the Canotila band in the Black Hiills. They've had no male members of the band for a couple of centuries, so ......

The following are snippets of thoughts and conversations associated with the event:

Pete Franks (pumping fist, grinning, aside) - "Yes! That's m' boy!"

June Franks (frantic): "We have to rescue my baby!"

Pete Franks (to wife) - "We'll save him." (aside) "If he even wants to be saved!"

Kayda (pouting) - "Why couldn't THAT have happened to me?"

Debra (kisses Kayda passionately) - "That's why!"

Kayda (nearly swooning) - "Oh, yeah. Never mind!" (kisses Debra very passionately)

Little brother's best friend (grumbling) - "Lucky stiff!"

Brother(grinning broadly) - "Not after last night"

Pete Franks (to brother) - "You won't think it's so neat when you're changing dirty elf diapers!"

Brother (to Kayda) - "Hey, does that school of yours have any devisor Viagra?"

Are you going to post the second half?

Domoviye wrote: Are you going to post the second half?

The second half? That's all I had saved on my drive from the microscene I wrote. If there's more, the brain cell responsible for keeping track of it went AWOL.

(And I can't find my Vox/Ayla microscenes either )

elrodw wrote: I wrote this as a Micro-Scene a while back, so I figured it's worth throwing in the mix, (although, to be honest, the adorable cat-boy with a female cat-spirit IS intriguing me!)

Kayda's little brother manifests - as a Canotila (a North American woods elf known to the Native Americans) and is kidnapped by the Canotila band in the Black Hiills. They've had no male members of the band for a couple of centuries, so ......

The following are snippets of thoughts and conversations associated with the event:

Pete Franks (pumping fist, grinning, aside) - "Yes! That's m' boy!"

June Franks (frantic): "We have to rescue my baby!"

Pete Franks (to wife) - "We'll save him." (aside) "If he even wants to be saved!"

Kayda (pouting) - "Why couldn't THAT have happened to me?"

Debra (kisses Kayda passionately) - "That's why!"

Kayda (nearly swooning) - "Oh, yeah. Never mind!" (kisses Debra very passionately)

Little brother's best friend (grumbling) - "Lucky stiff!"

Brother(grinning broadly) - "Not after last night"

Pete Franks (to brother) - "You won't think it's so neat when you're changing dirty elf diapers!"

Brother (to Kayda) - "Hey, does that school of yours have any devisor Viagra?"

Brother (to mom) - "Mom I'll clean the sink once we get home. Whats morning sickness?"

"The Thunderspirit is looking for a host" messes with Kayda, her brother, and Hank. I like that twist of evil.

elrodw wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Are you going to post the second half?

The second half? That's all I had saved on my drive from the microscene I wrote. If there's more, the brain cell responsible for keeping track of it went AWOL.

(And I can't find my Vox/Ayla microscenes either )

You had a bit about how he'd gotten a lot of the female wood elves pregnant, including Kayda's old girlfriend. It was amusing.

I must admit to liking the kitty spirit.

Do you think that this is too cute?
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annachie wrote: Do you think that this is too cute?
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No. It is perfection.

annachie wrote: I must admit to liking the kitty spirit.

Do you think that this is too cute?
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OMG!!! BATCAT!!!!

I thought it was a little Kissy Kat?

Ib12us wrote:

annachie wrote: I must admit to liking the kitty spirit.

Do you think that this is too cute?
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OMG!!! BATCAT!!!!

You're making me feel old. I was born just after Kiss, and I know who they are.

Damn youngin's and their pop music.

Domoviye wrote:

Ib12us wrote:

annachie wrote: I must admit to liking the kitty spirit.

Do you think that this is too cute?
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OMG!!! BATCAT!!!!

You're making me feel old. I was born just after Kiss, and I know who they are.

Damn youngin's and their pop music.

ummm I was born before the British invasion by 4 years, younun

Than you should know better than to confuse that cat with a bat.
Damn senile old people always yelling at me to get off their yard.

Domoviye wrote: Than you should know better than to confuse that cat with a bat.
Damn senile old people always yelling at me to get off their yard.

LOL!

NeoMagus wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Than you should know better than to confuse that cat with a bat.
Damn senile old people always yelling at me to get off their yard.

LOL!

GET OFF MY LAWN YOU MEDDLESOME KIDS before I shoot you with my quantum phaser rifle. And your mangy mutt too.

Just so you all know - and can speculate further, I've decided what to do with Danny Franks. Some of what got tossed around here was simply too good to ignore, and it made me realize that I NEED to get him to Whateley (as opposed to turning into a Canotila and getting boinked half to death).

So - what will happen? I'm not gonna tell. Neo knows, but he's sworn to secrecy. But, yeah - he's going to be fun.

Get's a llama, and a shotgun.

"Be vewwy quiet. I'm hunting Neo's."

Domoviye wrote: Get's a llama, and a shotgun.

"Be vewwy quiet. I'm hunting Neo's."

But doc its neener neener season.

elrodw wrote: Just so you all know - and can speculate further, I've decided what to do with Danny Franks. Some of what got tossed around here was simply too good to ignore, and it made me realize that I NEED to get him to Whateley (as opposed to turning into a Canotila and getting boinked half to death).

So - what will happen? I'm not gonna tell. Neo knows, but he's sworn to secrecy. But, yeah - he's going to be fun.

Nooooo!!! Ear Worm fail! /sniff

/crawls off to throw self at the mercy of Jobe for better Ear Worms

Imagine this - he turns into kitty boy. Some of the cat-girls, including Paige (in shifted form) and Miyet get ferociously attracted to him, like cats in heat ..... Sorry - it's a mental image I couldn't resist. Miyet prowling around Poe, trying to get in, mewing piteously outside his window at all hours, all over poor Danny whenever he walks anywhere on campus.... And Wondercute getting very protective of THEIR cute little kitty! And Mischief, too. And one of the TLWs.

Meanwhile, Kayda is convinced he's going to change, his parents are convinced he's going to change, the powers folks are convinced he's going to change - only he's not changing but still gets tuck in Poe. And some of the boys in Boystown find him adorable as well......

Poor kid!

elrodw wrote: Imagine this - he turns into kitty boy. Some of the cat-girls, including Paige (in shifted form) and Miyet get ferociously attracted to him, like cats in heat ..... Sorry - it's a mental image I couldn't resist. Miyet prowling around Poe, trying to get in, mewing piteously outside his window at all hours, all over poor Danny whenever he walks anywhere on campus.... And Wondercute getting very protective of THEIR cute little kitty! And Mischief, too. And one of the TLWs.

Meanwhile, Kayda is convinced he's going to change, his parents are convinced he's going to change, the powers folks are convinced he's going to change - only he's not changing but still gets tuck in Poe. And some of the boys in Boystown find him adorable as well......

Poor kid!

Sounds like his code name should be "MissFire" for everyone being wrong.

So Tink has someone new to torment.

Not just Tink, but oh wait. We forgot to add Ribbon to the menu. Sure she'd been a man but she's a girl now and we know what that means. Revenge of the .. Oh never mind wrong story line there.

Tink, Ribbon (as a protector, yeah right), TLW, Mischief and a slumber party. Oh the sheer torture when he finally falls asleep to wake up in the morning all decked out (catch drift).

Oh the calamity, the horror, THE FUN as mischief introduces them to the head of security as they explore the campus as any young kids are wont when left to their own devices.

elrodw wrote: Imagine this - he turns into kitty boy. Some of the cat-girls, including Paige (in shifted form) and Miyet get ferociously attracted to him, like cats in heat ..... Sorry - it's a mental image I couldn't resist. Miyet prowling around Poe, trying to get in, mewing piteously outside his window at all hours, all over poor Danny whenever he walks anywhere on campus.... And Wondercute getting very protective of THEIR cute little kitty! And Mischief, too. And one of the TLWs.

Meanwhile, Kayda is convinced he's going to change, his parents are convinced he's going to change, the powers folks are convinced he's going to change - only he's not changing but still gets tuck in Poe. And some of the boys in Boystown find him adorable as well......

Poor kid!

and THAT is the type of shenanigans I was thinking when I originally posted a non gender changed catboy.

elrodw wrote: Just so you all know - and can speculate further, I've decided what to do with Danny Franks. Some of what got tossed around here was simply too good to ignore, and it made me realize that I NEED to get him to Whateley (as opposed to turning into a Canotila and getting boinked half to death).

elrodw wrote: Imagine this - he turns into kitty boy. Some of the cat-girls, including Paige (in shifted form) and Miyet get ferociously attracted to him, like cats in heat ..... Sorry - it's a mental image I couldn't resist. Miyet prowling around Poe, trying to get in, mewing piteously outside his window at all hours, all over poor Danny whenever he walks anywhere on campus.... And Wondercute getting very protective of THEIR cute little kitty! And Mischief, too. And one of the TLWs.

Meanwhile, Kayda is convinced he's going to change, his parents are convinced he's going to change, the powers folks are convinced he's going to change - only he's not changing but still gets tuck in Poe. And some of the boys in Boystown find him adorable as well......

Poor kid!

You know, I don't think you are saving him from the "Canotila and getting boinked half to death" ... I think you just found a way to massively increased the pool of ladies and intend to get a whole lot further then "half to death"!

Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

elrodw wrote: Just so you all know - and can speculate further, I've decided what to do with Danny Franks. Some of what got tossed around here was simply too good to ignore, and it made me realize that I NEED to get him to Whateley (as opposed to turning into a Canotila and getting boinked half to death).

elrodw wrote: Imagine this - he turns into kitty boy. Some of the cat-girls, including Paige (in shifted form) and Miyet get ferociously attracted to him, like cats in heat ..... Sorry - it's a mental image I couldn't resist. Miyet prowling around Poe, trying to get in, mewing piteously outside his window at all hours, all over poor Danny whenever he walks anywhere on campus.... And Wondercute getting very protective of THEIR cute little kitty! And Mischief, too. And one of the TLWs.

Meanwhile, Kayda is convinced he's going to change, his parents are convinced he's going to change, the powers folks are convinced he's going to change - only he's not changing but still gets tuck in Poe. And some of the boys in Boystown find him adorable as well......

Poor kid!

You know, I don't think you are saving him from the "Canotila and getting boinked half to death" ... I think you just found a way to massively increased the pool of ladies and intend to get a whole lot further then "half to death"!

Boys gonna have a harem before he even gets there making others jealous and putting him in cross hairs.

At least the part with one of the TLW having a crush on him is in there. And with more girls after him, he will need to not only ask his older sister for advice but her friends as well. This is going to put chaos not only into his and Kayda's lives, but could hit a good part of the campus with the antics involved. Now if he is a kittyboy because of being an avatar and having a cat spirit, you could amp up the chaos by making the cat spirit be a black cat which gives him uncontrolled luck control that makes "interesting" things happen to and around him.

we haven't even speculated on powers yet.

all we know for sure, he will have cute down so well all the girls on campus will be after him.
[ girls just love cuddling cats ]

a HUGE 'catfight' between the girls on campus over his time/attention similar to W,W,aA

My question is who's going to clean up all the fur? Before or after the cat fight.

those involved in the fight of course, part of their punishment for the fight

So, now I've got this image in my head of gigantic steam-powered lint-rollers canvassing the campus with freshmen fleeing before their wrath.

You have a weird mind.
Cool, but weird.

Kettlekorn wrote: So, now I've got this image in my head of gigantic steam-powered lint-rollers canvassing the campus with freshmen fleeing before their wrath.

Could be worse. A giant nuclear powered Vacuum that could suck up anything in its path. Leaving nothing but a stream of atoms in its wake.

Nah, some idiot in the 70s tried that, it is on the list of banned projects in the workshop for all time now. The cleanup after it got clogged took almost a week to finish, even with the students helping out.

elrodw wrote: Imagine this - he turns into kitty boy. Some of the cat-girls, including Paige (in shifted form) and Miyet get ferociously attracted to him, like cats in heat ..... Sorry - it's a mental image I couldn't resist. Miyet prowling around Poe, trying to get in, mewing piteously outside his window at all hours, all over poor Danny whenever he walks anywhere on campus.... And Wondercute getting very protective of THEIR cute little kitty! And Mischief, too. And one of the TLWs.

Meanwhile, Kayda is convinced he's going to change, his parents are convinced he's going to change, the powers folks are convinced he's going to change - only he's not changing but still gets tuck in Poe. And some of the boys in Boystown find him adorable as well......

Poor kid!

Well Feral will be happy.

elrodw wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Are you going to post the second half?

The second half? That's all I had saved on my drive from the microscene I wrote. If there's more, the brain cell responsible for keeping track of it went AWOL.

(And I can't find my Vox/Ayla microscenes either )

When did you post them? Maybe I have a copy?

Malady wrote:

elrodw wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Are you going to post the second half?

The second half? That's all I had saved on my drive from the microscene I wrote. If there's more, the brain cell responsible for keeping track of it went AWOL.

(And I can't find my Vox/Ayla microscenes either )

When did you post them? Maybe I have a copy?

I remember some more, but I thought someone else posted them. I'll do a quick search through the archive you sent me, and if there's more, I'll post it.

If he becomes an Avatar, he should get Cyote.

Would you believe that I've already written a bunch of Danny into the next Kayda story?

Would you believe that I'm writing a standalone Danny story?

Would you believe I have plans to write him into the summer Kayda story?

Would you believe that I've thought about writing him into a story?

Would you believe .... pardon me. I have to answer my shoe phone

Would I believe that you've been listening to too much Don Adams?

annachie wrote: Would I believe that you've been listening to too much Don Adams?

LOL!

elrodw wrote: Would you believe that I've already written a bunch of Danny into the next Kayda story?

Would you believe that I'm writing a standalone Danny story?

Would you believe I have plans to write him into the summer Kayda story?

Would you believe that I've thought about writing him into a story?

Would you believe .... pardon me. I have to answer my shoe phone

Would you believe that the chief imposed the cone of silence.

You missed it by thaaat! much.

That's the second best Get Smart reference I've ever seen.

jmhyp wrote: That's the second best Get Smart reference I've ever seen.

Oh Max!

Well, the cat's out of the bag

Don't you mean, "the kitty-boy is out of the bag"?

The question to which only I know the answer is how much does she change him? S

I'm a bit curious about whether you had planned this before we started speculating, or whether we inspired you to make him a catboy or girl.

Arcanist Lupus wrote: I'm a bit curious about whether you had planned this before we started speculating, or whether we inspired you to make him a catboy or girl.

Yes.

Actually, the speculation did help me refine what I'm going to do. So if y'all give me ideas, I might use them

I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Dreamer wrote: I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Um (does a pocket check) the last I knew, I'm not a her.

But yeah, like I said, I do watch for good ideas, or things from which I can take a germ of an idea. Now you'll just have to speculate how FAR I'll go with him

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote: I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Um (does a pocket check) the last I knew, I'm not a her.

But yeah, like I said, I do watch for good ideas, or things from which I can take a germ of an idea. Now you'll just have to speculate how FAR I'll go with him

Her?

how FAR I'll go with him

Well this is Whateley, all the way is kind of tradition. And especially so if Dannie gets her own story, seeing as Miyet only ever got a origin story before being religated to extra

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote: I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Um (does a pocket check) the last I knew, I'm not a her.

But yeah, like I said, I do watch for good ideas, or things from which I can take a germ of an idea. Now you'll just have to speculate how FAR I'll go with him

You can't blame this one on me Dreamer, Elrod. Not my fault. No no no.

Edit: I get enough baggage from Dom. I open them right after I put it through the X-ray machine.

Never in my life has this xkcd seemed more relevant.

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote: I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Um (does a pocket check) the last I knew, I'm not a her.

You get used to it. Believe me.
My next chapter of Tink is an F3 party, but the chapter after that, Danny is so going to meet Teri. Much to his misfortune.

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote: I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Um (does a pocket check) the last I knew, I'm not a her.

But yeah, like I said, I do watch for good ideas, or things from which I can take a germ of an idea. Now you'll just have to speculate how FAR I'll go with him

Oops, brain fart. I thought him and for some reason my hands typed her and I didn't notice.

Dreamer wrote:

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote: I believe all the speculating inspired her to do this to Danny. And it all started from me making a suggestion of having Danny visit Kayda at Whateley and one of the TLW getting a crush on him and the antics that would follow. Then everyone else decided to think of further ways to torture the poor boy and it snowballed from there. Great, now I have to keep an eye out for an angry Danny for helping start this mess.

Um (does a pocket check) the last I knew, I'm not a her.

But yeah, like I said, I do watch for good ideas, or things from which I can take a germ of an idea. Now you'll just have to speculate how FAR I'll go with him

Oops, brain fart. I thought him and for some reason my hands typed her and I didn't notice.

sure.

I bet you just want to have Elrod manifest and have the gender flip happen.

Well, it seems Billy Two Knives has forgotten a basic principal of training, you ONLY DESTROY MORALE by being negative 100% of the time.

He may be giving Kayda positive feedback, but he seems to have forgotten, SHE DOESN'T HEAR IT, if she gets negative feedback.

Dawnfyre wrote: Well, it seems Billy Two Knives has forgotten a basic principal of training, you ONLY DESTROY MORALE by being negative 100% of the time.

He may be giving Kayda positive feedback, but he seems to have forgotten, SHE DOESN'T HEAR IT, if she gets negative feedback.

Did you mean to post this is the story discussion?
whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/spec...uffalo-hidden-dragon

yup

been having issues with lag causing stuff to jump on me today. :/

so at some point Danny is going to need a lot of power very fast. Maybe his mom is in mortal danger. And. Channeling that much power that fast will trigger ireversible changes. His spirit will warn him but he'll do it anyway.

Thats my theory on how Danny will become Dannie anyway.

Actually, I don't think Danny will go full Dannie. He may become very graceful and possibly androgynous to the point of being mistaken for an athletic girl, however. Think ballet dancer. There are women who really go for that.

Sir Lee wrote: Actually, I don't think Danny will go full Dannie. He may become very graceful and possibly androgynous to the point of being mistaken for an athletic girl, however. Think ballet dancer. There are women who really go for that.

Or hair stylist.

What if his power is floral design? He could become the world's greatest florist!

Obviously that! Mountain lions are well known for their artistic abilities.

Is he going to start getting a taste for tuna sandwiches and sleeping in the sun?

Astrodragon wrote: Is he going to start getting a taste for tuna sandwiches and sleeping in the sun?

Wait a minute, isn't Mischief blonde?
Will there be love in the air?
Long walks in the woods, games being played, philosophical discussions as they ride down the side of Crystal Hall in a red wagon, journeys into space and time in a devised cardboard box. Ah, how romantic.

Domoviye wrote: Wait a minute, isn't Mischief blonde?
Will there be love in the air?
Long walks in the woods, games being played, philosophical discussions as they ride down the side of Crystal Hall in a red wagon, journeys into space and time in a devised cardboard box. Ah, how romantic.

Noooo! Don't give Elrod and Morpheus ideas, they might take them and run. Although a Calvin and Hobbes mutant pair would be fun to watch.

Actually, what I expect to see is Danny to stay male, but to have to put up with his spirit commenting whenever she spots a hot guy.

Dreamer wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Wait a minute, isn't Mischief blonde?
Will there be love in the air?
Long walks in the woods, games being played, philosophical discussions as they ride down the side of Crystal Hall in a red wagon, journeys into space and time in a devised cardboard box. Ah, how romantic.

Noooo! Don't give Elrod and Morpheus ideas, they might take them and run. Although a Calvin and Hobbes mutant pair would be fun to watch.

I already take ideas and run! Just ask Phoenix!

I have my plans for the young lad. They shall be great fun (but possibly not for him!) BWAH HAH HAH HAH

Dreamer wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Wait a minute, isn't Mischief blonde?
Will there be love in the air?
Long walks in the woods, games being played, philosophical discussions as they ride down the side of Crystal Hall in a red wagon, journeys into space and time in a devised cardboard box. Ah, how romantic.

Noooo! Don't give Elrod and Morpheus ideas, they might take them and run. Although a Calvin and Hobbes mutant pair would be fun to watch.

I was thinking of two best friends one called Shaggy with red hair, and another called Scooby who was a were-dog at one point, both of them energizers who needed lots of food. My beta reader nixed it.

Domoviye wrote: I was thinking of two best friends one called Shaggy with red hair, and another called Scooby who was a were-dog at one point, both of them energizers who needed lots of food. My beta reader nixed it.

Really? I wonder why he might have done that?

You just didn't want to see Shaggy and Scooby dressed up like Paris Hilton and Brittney Spears.

Domoviye wrote: You just didn't want to see Shaggy and Scooby dressed up like Paris Hilton and Brittney Spears.

And this is giving me ideas for torturing poor Danny how?

People put him in dog ears and make him dress up like Britney Spears.....
Ok I'm reaching here. I'll go sit in my corner.

elrodw wrote:

Domoviye wrote: You just didn't want to see Shaggy and Scooby dressed up like Paris Hilton and Brittney Spears.

And this is giving me ideas for torturing poor Danny how?

Domoviye wrote: You just didn't want to see Shaggy and Scooby dressed up like Paris Hilton and Brittney Spears.

Working in drag is not a stretch for Shaggy and Scooby. Fred has many times had them dress up to lure the ghost into one of his Schimmelhorn trap. (I would have approved of anything involving Scoob and Shag)

Sir Lee wrote: Actually, I don't think Danny will go full Dannie. He may become very graceful and possibly androgynous to the point of being mistaken for an athletic girl, however. Think ballet dancer. There are women who really go for that.

I'm with Sir Lee on this, I think that Wihanape is having way too much fun playing with Danny to actually change him and lose the amusement of his reactions when she muses about doing so. Go for the mental cruelty rather than for physical change as a change of pace.

Isodecan wrote:

Sir Lee wrote: Actually, I don't think Danny will go full Dannie. He may become very graceful and possibly androgynous to the point of being mistaken for an athletic girl, however. Think ballet dancer. There are women who really go for that.

I'm with Sir Lee on this, I think that Wihanape is having way too much fun playing with Danny to actually change him and lose the amusement of his reactions when she muses about doing so. Go for the mental cruelty rather than for physical change as a change of pace.

I think what we might end up with is Danny as ahifter, nah too many werekitties as it is.

Valentine wrote:

Isodecan wrote:

Sir Lee wrote: Actually, I don't think Danny will go full Dannie. He may become very graceful and possibly androgynous to the point of being mistaken for an athletic girl, however. Think ballet dancer. There are women who really go for that.

I'm with Sir Lee on this, I think that Wihanape is having way too much fun playing with Danny to actually change him and lose the amusement of his reactions when she muses about doing so. Go for the mental cruelty rather than for physical change as a change of pace.

I think what we might end up with is Danny as ahifter, nah too many werekitties as it is.

Yeah, but all the others don't have an author, let alone one who considers them their chewtoy

To understand the dynamic, think of Wihanape as Elrod's alter ego, and Danny as his favourite mouse, the one he goes and plays with when writing Kayda has blocked on him somehow, then he carefully goes and files all the fruits of that frustration fuelled chaos until the perfect opertunity arrives for him to reverently retrieve it and insert it into a story.

Domoviye wrote: Obviously that! Mountain lions are well known for their artistic abilities.

Heavens to Murgatroyd, but that's in theatre! More specifically, Shakespeare!
Exit, stage left!

Sir Lee, if Danny's spirit does a Snagglepuss impersonation I hold you responsible. Wait, Elrod has had Tatanka do Mr. T impression several time. I wouldn't put it past him to do this to Danny and his spirit.

Dreamer wrote: Sir Lee, if Danny's spirit does a Snagglepuss impersonation I hold you responsible. Wait, Elrod has had Tatanka do Mr. T impression several time. I wouldn't put it past him to do this to Danny and his spirit.

As I said, I'm not above borrowing ideas from the forum!

Isn't Snagglepus an Imp thing anyway.

annachie wrote: Isn't Snagglepus an Imp thing anyway.

Hmmmm ... Something tells me Imp and Wihanape will be very compatible personalities ... I wonder if Mischief will be attracted to Danny because of that?

After he starts dating Mischief, he'll fall under Im,ps influence and start doing cat impressions, just wait until we see his Sylvester the cat impression.

And then somebody spots the Pink Panther and goes looking for fur dye...

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote: Sir Lee, if Danny's spirit does a Snagglepuss impersonation I hold you responsible. Wait, Elrod has had Tatanka do Mr. T impression several time. I wouldn't put it past him to do this to Danny and his spirit.

As I said, I'm not above borrowing ideas from the forum!

So Elrodw, have you seen cats? So many potential literarly references to throw in ... after all never was there ever a cat so clever as Magical Mr. Mistoffelees .

elrodw wrote:

Dreamer wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Wait a minute, isn't Mischief blonde?
Will there be love in the air?
Long walks in the woods, games being played, philosophical discussions as they ride down the side of Crystal Hall in a red wagon, journeys into space and time in a devised cardboard box. Ah, how romantic.

Noooo! Don't give Elrod and Morpheus ideas, they might take them and run. Although a Calvin and Hobbes mutant pair would be fun to watch.

I already take ideas and run! Just ask Phoenix!

I have my plans for the young lad. They shall be great fun (but possibly not for him!) BWAH HAH HAH HAH

You know, if torturing Danny means that Kayda gets a respite, I'm all game for this plan.

Domoviye wrote: After he starts dating Mischief, he'll fall under Im,ps influence and start doing cat impressions, just wait until we see his Sylvester the cat impression.

I'm not sure HOW MANY girls get infatuated with kitty-boy. It could be a lot of fun. Might even have cat-fights (ba-dum-bum!) over kitty-boy

Have to work with Morpheus and Bek about which of their characters can have fun with Danny. If he stays Danny.

And just because I'm torturing Danny doesn't mean I'm done with Kayda

elrodw wrote: And just because I'm torturing Danny doesn't mean I'm done with Kayda

To be fair, I fully expected this answer.

elrodw wrote:

Domoviye wrote: After he starts dating Mischief, he'll fall under Im,ps influence and start doing cat impressions, just wait until we see his Sylvester the cat impression.

I'm not sure HOW MANY girls get infatuated with kitty-boy. It could be a lot of fun. Might even have cat-fights (ba-dum-bum!) over kitty-boy

Have to work with Morpheus and Bek about which of their characters can have fun with Danny. If he stays Danny.

And just because I'm torturing Danny doesn't mean I'm done with Kayda

Danny becoming Danni is torment for him.
Danny staying Danny and being teased about maybe being changed into Dannie is torment for Danny and Kayda.
( how come HE didn't get changed to a girl? I want to be a boy again too!!!!!! )

Maybe Danny stays Danny but when manifesting into his spirit changes to Danni which traumatizes him not wanting to change into his spirit.

but then his staying Danny doesn't torment his sister as much.

Dawnfyre wrote: but then his staying Danny doesn't torment his sister as much.

But then forced into staying as his spirit will.

Ib12us wrote:

Dawnfyre wrote: but then his staying Danny doesn't torment his sister as much.

But then forced into staying as his spirit will.

more torment for Kayda by Danny never appearing female.
more teasing fun for Danny's spirit / torment for Danny to NOT make him look female only threaten to.

Dawnfyre wrote: more torment for Kayda by Danny never appearing female.

I don't think Kayda would actually be tormented by this. Jealous, perhaps. But TORMENTED. No.

more teasing fun for Danny's spirit / torment for Danny to NOT make him look female only threaten to.

Actually I like the idea of the big, buff, basically baseline dude turning into a catgirl cougar.

And when I say cougar, I might mean a mountain lion cousin or I might mean a MILF who chases men young enough to be her son. (The chasing young men aspect might torment Danny A LOT).

you don't think it would really bother Kayda her own brother didn't get changed into a girl when she did?

that would drive her nuts.

Dawnfyre wrote: you don't think it would really bother Kayda her own brother didn't get changed into a girl when she did?

that would drive her nuts.

I don't think this is really the case. Sure, it might bug her for a little while if Danny seems to "get off easy" compared to her own manifestation, I don't see Kayda being quite that petty. I certainly can't imagine her wishing her brother went through everything she did, so while she might be a bit resentful at first I feel like she'd fairly quickly get to the point of being grateful if he doesn't have as hard a time of it. I certainly don't think him getting to stay a guy (if that's what happens) is something she'll hold against him.

And nowadays she's started to realize that being a girl isn't all that bad. Especially when Debra is around.

Arcanist Lupus wrote: And nowadays she's started to realize that being a girl isn't all that bad. Especially when Debra is around.

Yeah, she's getting more girly all the time. The penchant for hugs, cuddling with Debra, even initiating a kiss (albeit under the excuse of a birthday kiss) with Ros in the hot tub.

I don't think she's looking back AT ALL!!

Now I'm puzzling with something relating to Danny. Kayda and Adalie were joking about setting up Danny and Amelie (Addy's little sister) - who they have to rescue during the summer (according to Addy's premonition). And it MIGHT be a little dangerous still for Danny in his hometown. Should I take Danny along on the trip to France? It'd give me an excuse to tease him more, under the guise of keeping him safe from the muto-phobes in his home, and would let Kayda and Addy have fun teasing him about Amelie - like "you ought to be her girlfriend while you can - before you change more!" and stuff like that

Not sure. Oooh - and from a combat final story, it looks like Ayla is going along to France, and might have to take along someone who would ADORE a kitty-boy (you'll have to wait for the details there). So THAT could be more fun. The question in my mind is whether I want to focus on Kayda and Addy, or introduce Danny to the mix for some side hilarity.

What to do? What to do?

Have Danny go to France.
While there he's mistaken for someone important and chased. He has to dress in drag to escape. They get pictures.

He meets a catgirl who takes a BIG liking to him.

He tries to go to a red light district, wanting to lose his male virginity before becoming a girl.

He meets a mouse girl who freaks and gets the police chasing after him by claiming he's an evil mutant who wants to eat her.

I'd give you more but I have to get going.

Taking him to France could be interesting but might be even worse than him staying home since Adalie's hometown is even more mutophobic than his...

Ayla might appreciate him being along for a little more Male solidarity against all the girls...

Domoviye wrote: Have Danny go to France.
While there he's mistaken for someone important and chased. He has to dress in drag to escape. They get pictures.

He meets a catgirl who takes a BIG liking to him.

He tries to go to a red light district, wanting to lose his male virginity before becoming a girl.

He meets a mouse girl who freaks and gets the police chasing after him by claiming he's an evil mutant who wants to eat her.

I'd give you more but I have to get going.

You, sir, have a very interesting sense of humor! My hat is off to you for these VERY creative ideas!

Going to France, fun. Going to France with your big sister and her two BFFs, no so much fun.

Taking Kayda's ex-girlfriend would be much more fun, especially with Ayla along for the ride. Think of the shopping they could do. (Oh wait that is SheBeast and friends.)

elrodw wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Have Danny go to France.
While there he's mistaken for someone important and chased. He has to dress in drag to escape. They get pictures.

He meets a catgirl who takes a BIG liking to him.

He tries to go to a red light district, wanting to lose his male virginity before becoming a girl.

He meets a mouse girl who freaks and gets the police chasing after him by claiming he's an evil mutant who wants to eat her.

I'd give you more but I have to get going.

You, sir, have a very interesting sense of humor! My hat is off to you for these VERY creative ideas!

Many a virgin in the military has lost their virginity through the guise of just looking. But be that as it may they are also heavily regulated and tho they are frowned upon it is a business also.

As for Danny going on the venture of seeing France I would say yes but under the guise of wanting to keep an eye on him if he were to manifest. Or perhaps to see if there are those more familiar with spirits. Wanting to keep him safe and within arms reach if things are dangerous at home, hence the need to have him leave.

Perhaps Alya as another suggested in having another male along for company as with a way for Danny to meet others who's own change did not go well. Have how Danny reacts to the idea of changing from various peoples perspectives. This would also allow a way to gain more insight on Ayla and how he's adapting and his own worries and such.

Suggest the two go to a town, get lost in an unknown area and find that the girls are into things that are strange. Danny manifesting as he oogles the girls and needs to go in drag to escape.

But that could be a story in itself. The kitty that mewed the night away.

OK, lets pull out some movies, and general insanity.

-He's at the airport and he's paged, at least his name is. He goes to see what's going on, as does another person. The other person is killed, and Danny gets a wierd message from someone who doesn't give him a chance to talk.
He finds out he's been moved to first class, or maybe economy if he's already first class.
In Paris he's paged again and given a file and several documents.
Then intrigue, spying and stupidity occurs as people think he's a mutant spy and he has to stop something that he doesn't understand.

- As he's getting his bag in Paris, there's a commotion and he's knocked down. The person keeps going since he's being chased by the police/MCO/Criminals/spies.
Unbeknownst to Danny, he know has a jewel/magical tome/microfilm/SD card/devise.
He's being hunted by several parties and doesn't even know it.

-He buys a chocolate bar and gets a golden ticket to Billy Bonka's Chocolate Factory. When he and Kayda go to visit it, they're kidnapped and forced into slave labour to make a chocolate army to take over the world. (Oh wait this is for Tink.)

-The Burgermeister (a mad gadgeteer) see's Danny and thinks he'll be perfect for his soon to be opened Enchanted Valley, which features real live fantasy creatures. Danny's kidnapped by a telephone booth and taken to a submarine, where he meets elves and goblins who are busy preparing everything for the big day.

-Zombie Nazi's riding cloned dinosaurs attack!

Ib12us wrote: But that could be a story in itself. The kitty that mewed the night away.

He's manifested already.

Domoviye wrote:

Ib12us wrote: But that could be a story in itself. The kitty that mewed the night away.

He's manifested already.

Has he fully manifested or has he started to manifest? I thought he was still manifesting from the way things were going.

Manifesting is the act of the mutant gene coming out, so it comes right at the beginning.

Domoviye wrote: Manifesting is the act of the mutant gene coming out, so it comes right at the beginning.

So its my misunderstanding of what 'manifesting' is. As in where the gene itself makes an appearance and not the full manifestation of the individual themself.

Edit. I got it now. Valentine posted while writing. So a person can begin to manifest but not complete the transition until later. Gotit.

He's manifested, but he hasn't finished changing.

It could be fun to add Danny to the mix, especially if Amelee has an interesting manifestation.

It's a pity his names is Danny, not Tom.
He could have met a cute French female mouse-avatar called Jerri...

He doesn't have a code name or a nickname yet.
And make sure Jerri has a warp rating for hammer space.

Domoviye wrote: He doesn't have a code name or a nickname yet.
And make sure Jerri has a warp rating for hammer space.

Jerri...Speedster, Warp-4, Devisor-2?

I have a feeling that Danny is going to end up looking less feminine than Ayla, but also less masculine than Gotterdamerung.

OK, I have to throw the ice water bucket here...

Taking Danny to France might have been a lot of fun, story-wise... but it would also be REALLY STUPID on the part of his parents, and therefore hard to justify narrative-wise.
Danny has just manifested; he is changing; HOW MUCH he's going to change, or how fast, is still an unknown factor. Consider all the problems he would face if he no longer matched his passport photo while abroad...
Also, newly manifested mutant. Still unknown which powers he is going to get from his spirit. Recently-manifested mutants, as a class, tend to have control issues.
He doesn't have a MID yet. OK, he could get one before traveling. But he still hasn't been indoctrinated like the others on the essentials of when NOT to offer your MID unsolicited...

Really, what sort of parents would allow their child to be half a world away, in a country he only knows through bad Hollywood stereotypes, doesn't speak the language very well (if at all) at this critical juncture? If he wanted to spend the summer somewhere safer than at the farm, he could intern with the Sioux Falls League or something. He probably would like that, too, since he would be around Card Trick...

elrodw wrote: it looks like Ayla is going along to France, and might have to take along someone who would ADORE a kitty-boy

OMG, Ayla stuck ANYWHERE for days with Jade!!!!!!!! Hard to justify unless something big happens to Tennyo (MORE SPACE STORIES!!!!) but Ayla and Jade and in France, c'est incroyable.

jmhyp wrote:

elrodw wrote: it looks like Ayla is going along to France, and might have to take along someone who would ADORE a kitty-boy

OMG, Ayla stuck ANYWHERE for days with Jade!!!!!!!! Hard to justify unless something big happens to Tennyo (MORE SPACE STORIES!!!!) but Ayla and Jade and in France, c'est incroyable.

I thought I remembered reading in one of the stories, Jade had planned on spending part of the summer visiting/staying with various members of TK including with Ayla in LA. (Or it might have been part of a Fanfic, or I dreamed it.)

Sir Lee wrote: OK, I have to throw the ice water bucket here...

Taking Danny to France might have been a lot of fun, story-wise... but it would also be REALLY STUPID on the part of his parents, and therefore hard to justify narrative-wise.
Danny has just manifested; he is changing; HOW MUCH he's going to change, or how fast, is still an unknown factor. Consider all the problems he would face if he no longer matched his passport photo while abroad...
Also, newly manifested mutant. Still unknown which powers he is going to get from his spirit. Recently-manifested mutants, as a class, tend to have control issues.
He doesn't have a MID yet. OK, he could get one before traveling. But he still hasn't been indoctrinated like the others on the essentials of when NOT to offer your MID unsolicited...

Really, what sort of parents would allow their child to be half a world away, in a country he only knows through bad Hollywood stereotypes, doesn't speak the language very well (if at all) at this critical juncture? If he wanted to spend the summer somewhere safer than at the farm, he could intern with the Sioux Falls League or something. He probably would like that, too, since he would be around Card Trick...

But, but,. but It was Elrod that asked. So we supplied an unreasonable answer. I just wonder if Danny would want to learn to do the can can. And what parents would send their son halfway around the world. Culture. Any parent worth their grain of salt would want to send their kids abroad so they could have a nice quiet time when boys become girls and girls become engaged and so on and so forth. Its a plot device that can be found on page 132 of the stupid acts of incompetent reasons to justify a given plot. No real reason is needed and perhaps he'll manifest at the right moment thus saving the day and the fun in how he or she sneaks back into the U.S. with a new passport and so forth.

Hey its Danny! What could go wrong?

And I took the Ice Bucket challange and got a cold for my efforts.

Sir Lee, the flipside to that arguement is that Danny, an emerging avatar, is being sent off with Wakan Tanaka (Damn sp?), who could possibly know more about what is happening and can influence things quite dramatically.

If Danny did go I could see his mother going too, giving a way to withdraw Danny from the story as the real Kayda/Charge story heats up.

Honestly I'd rather see Dannie get her own story while big sisters out of the way overseas. Also it has to be something in the real world so that Kayda can't just walze in and solve things in the dream world.

I just realized something, Aquerna is going to have someone to tutor in the use of fighting claws.

Pity she's got a squirrel spirit and would be uncomfortable with cats, might be the only girl Danny could be around without issues.

Well, i suppose it depends on how cute he is ... I wonder how much cuteness it would take to overcome the predictor / prey dynamic, I mean, black widow spiders always seem to find someone to mate with ...

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Pity she's got a squirrel spirit and would be uncomfortable with cats, might be the only girl Danny could be around without issues.

Well, i suppose it depends on how cute he is ... I wonder how much cuteness it would take to overcome the predictor / prey dynamic, I mean, black widow spiders always seem to find someone to mate with ...

She got used to being around Tabby and working with Chat Bleu in class. I'm sure she could get used to working with Wondercute's newest victim recruit.

What if Danny falls asleep several years while changing and he's Elrod's REAL 2nd gen character...

Danny van Winkle?

DanZilla wrote: What if Danny falls asleep several years while changing and he's Elrod's REAL 2nd gen character...

Are there any spinning wheels in their home town?

Danny may not follow his big sister to France, but getting him a considerable distance away from home would probably be a good idea, since (a) he's got a Lakota spirit and (b) if he stayed behind, he'd be a big target for the various entities after Kayda (Unhcegila's already targeted Debra once).

Then when he eventually does get to Whateley, it's remotely possible Elrod will hijack Miyet (at least for inserts into Danny's tales - much like Chou [and Molly, with a brief cameo by Dorjee] with Kayda).

mittfh wrote: Danny may not follow his big sister to France, but getting him a considerable distance away from home would probably be a good idea, since (a) he's got a Lakota spirit and (b) if he stayed behind, he'd be a big target for the various entities after Kayda (Unhcegila's already targeted Debra once).

Then when he eventually does get to Whateley, it's remotely possible Elrod will hijack Miyet (at least for inserts into Danny's tales - much like Chou [and Molly, with a brief cameo by Dorjee] with Kayda).

Miyet, and Cyberkitty, and Tabby

elrodw wrote:

mittfh wrote: Danny may not follow his big sister to France, but getting him a considerable distance away from home would probably be a good idea, since (a) he's got a Lakota spirit and (b) if he stayed behind, he'd be a big target for the various entities after Kayda (Unhcegila's already targeted Debra once).

Then when he eventually does get to Whateley, it's remotely possible Elrod will hijack Miyet (at least for inserts into Danny's tales - much like Chou [and Molly, with a brief cameo by Dorjee] with Kayda).

Miyet, and Cyberkitty, and Tabby

No Eloise Donner in that mix?

annachie wrote: It could be fun to add Danny to the mix, especially if Amelee has an interesting manifestation.

2 words:

Puppy Girl

now, for some real ideas for Danny.

his physical changes are more akin to a gymnast in build, not beefcake, he gets fur, cat ears and eyes and a tail.

the fact his spirit is female only becomes apparent when she manifests to power/protect him in the same fashion Kodiak manifests with Wyatt and Grizzly with Loophole.

maybe once he arrives at Whateley the magic arts staff convince Mrs. Carson to allow expansion of his hallow, since they know what will happen and can be prepared for it to minimize the trauma on him.

This would make him even more adorable for Wondercute and the cat girls on campus. at least until the spirit manifests and it becomes obvious his spirit is a female spirit.

Valentine wrote: I just realized something, Aquerna is going to have someone to tutor in the use of fighting claws.

Elrod, please do this. It has a lot of potential...

Here's hoping that Danny gets proper cat claws that grow upwards out of the bone near the joint and then curve to point roughly forward, rather than the "pointy fingers" approach most people use when designing cat people. The main downside with real-style claws is that using tight pockets becomes harder, but typing and grasping things would both be way easier since the claws would be kept out of the way, and the biomechanics of using them in a fight are better too (easier to keep your fingers from bending back as you put force on your claws, which means you can swing harder with less chance of hurting your fingers).

Kettlekorn wrote: Here's hoping that Danny gets proper cat claws that grow upwards out of the bone near the joint and then curve to point roughly forward, rather than the "pointy fingers" approach most people use when designing cat people. The main downside with real-style claws is that using tight pockets becomes harder, but typing and grasping things would both be way easier since the claws would be kept out of the way, and the biomechanics of using them in a fight are better too (easier to keep your fingers from bending back as you put force on your claws, which means you can swing harder with less chance of hurting your fingers).

I'm currently working on a fanfic catgirl story, and yes she has proper retractable claws instead of pointy fingernails.

I know almost nothing about the topic, but my impression was that retractable claws don't work in normal human hands, because there's nowhere to put them. Are her hands going to be more pawlike? How do they work?

Arcanist Lupus wrote: I know almost nothing about the topic, but my impression was that retractable claws don't work in normal human hands, because there's nowhere to put them. Are her hands going to be more pawlike? How do they work?

Her feet are completly pawlike, and her fingers will be shorter and thick by human standards with the last segment of each finger being noticibly chunky. But still with a thumb and enough finger length to be able grasp things effectivly.

Arcanist Lupus wrote: I know almost nothing about the topic, but my impression was that retractable claws don't work in normal human hands, because there's nowhere to put them. Are her hands going to be more pawlike? How do they work?

Or of course you can always do it the way DragonsFyre does it, with magic.

i.e. cheating

A little WOG here to clarify.

In his normal human (kitty-boy) form, Danny will NOT have retractable claws, although there is a form Wihinape can project that DOES.

And there's a form Wihinape can manifest that is undeniably female.

Poor Danny

I really hope that wires on unfinished (and unpowered) electrical projects cause the same sort of reaction in Danny as string does for cats when there isn't an active threat...

elrodw wrote: A little WOG here to clarify.

In his normal human (kitty-boy) form, Danny will NOT have retractable claws, although there is a form Wihinape can project that DOES.

And there's a form Wihinape can manifest that is undeniably female.

Poor Danny

How is 'project' different from 'manifest', and what's the correct term for Shell-type manifesting, and Tanaka, independent-being style manifesting?

Malady wrote:

elrodw wrote: A little WOG here to clarify.

In his normal human (kitty-boy) form, Danny will NOT have retractable claws, although there is a form Wihinape can project that DOES.

And there's a form Wihinape can manifest that is undeniably female.

Poor Danny

How is 'project' different from 'manifest', and what's the correct term for Shell-type manifesting, and Tanaka, independent-being style manifesting?

I believe projection is less corporeal, in the physical plane that is, then manifesting, projection is an image, manifestation you can "feel", both shell-type and independent body manifesting are manifesting, the difference is a letter on the power ratings...

The use of the term "project" does make me curious though...

I wonder how he reacts to a laser pointer

Astrodragon wrote: I wonder how he reacts to a laser pointer

That I seriously hope he can restrain himself from, because laser pointers come as gun attachments, though having impulses on that early on, and Bardue learning of that weakness could be interesting