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Question Dorms of our Lives!!!
- Yolandria
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- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Dorms of Our Lives comments
That is a lot of staggering for students showing up at Dickinson. Boy, a game I've never heard and probably more referenced amongst themselves. Kareela, two other RAs include Panoptikon and Paint Oracle, interesting codenames. Can't tell if that is actual paint or some form of GSD which Paint Oracle has. All that is normal, Whateley gets you used to weird as part of the everyday in short order.
Hannah Sammish is the brunette freshman, talks about her and Nana rooming on the other end of the floor. And dang, Hannah has a potent ability to detect those things about Erica. And Nana is the red-head, upset at Hannah doing that. But Cally doesn't mind, just a sense for things, still interesting ability. Psionic or empathic and musical, Hannah's ability may not precise details but great for information gathering.
Detects powers and nothing else, kidnapped 7 times last spring, yikes. And Nana is an avatar with a ladybug spirit, interesting. Natalie Bosch, Nana for nickname, Ladybird for codename. Mille Bornes, simulated car race using cards, interesting game. Kareela doesn't take short jokes well, only one who can make them, stuck at 119 cm. Isn't that shorter than 4 feet, no wonder she has an attitude. And she is a PDP who has the main power active unless she uses another power, ouch. And fun game with a lot of twist and turns that can happen with the turn of a card.
Shifted between all those relatives, Cally has had it rough. What Big Change did she go through, thinking she wouldn't be rooming with another girl, finding Erica cute, almost sounds like she is a changeling and kept it secret on her Whateley entry forms. The morning exercise routine, that is going to be annoying to wake up to. Early morning jog for exercise, wish I had the energy to do that. Taka not her type, more clues. Being an empath hard, sensing people's emotions all the time would probably feel like a drain to deal with. Okay, why isn't Cally in Poe, I wonder.
Humming to help block out background emotions, wonder if that is unique to her or could work for other receptive empaths. Cally afraid of society pushing back because their group took a table on one of the upper levels, poor kid. And the scheme to register as a training team as freshmen just to get a better table unfolds once more. And poor Cally not wanting to be a part of a combat training team, dragged along by the others.
Bwahaha, Erica saying Cally should think like a bard, do what bards do, including hitting things with her lute. At least Erica helped to calm her down and process the idea. Mutant Mayhem Machine, bwahahaha, Cally definitely needs to pay attention to what is said around the table.
All those freshmen showing up, and Milena has a favor to ask Erica and Cally, uh oh. Reese trying to warn them off of doing favors for Milena, help 4 junior-high kids with their luggage, doesn't sound too hard. Blonde named Michelle Jarrowitz, brunette named Jessica Ryans but says to call her Jessie. Therese Vitesse, Addy's little sister at Whateley, are any of those girls not mutants at this point. And Natalie MacAuliffe.
Michelle is Tek Witch, Jessica is Acolyte, Therese is Magique, and Natalie somehow doesn't have a codename yet. Guy with armadillo-like plates upon his head nearly got ran over by a rhinoceros-looking black kid because he fell asleep in the middle of the walkway near Twain Cottage. Sixteen junior high kids, yikes. And Erica is good with kids, helping cheer up Natalie by showing her she isn't alone in learning her new strength.
All those things in Tek Witch's steamer trunk, like a small car in size from the sounds of it. Figures out she is a devisor by what she has in her trunk. Anti-gravity projectors that dangerous, daddy made a good call. Natalie back first, finding the benefits of her new strength already. Refurbish the trunk into a bed, that would actually be a good use for Twitch's trunk.
Essemmelle, a stress release to levitate things around her with TK when upset. Kareela almost got trampled on purpose, like to smack the jerks who did that. Oh boy, Cally wishes to take the matter into her own hands and is scary when ticked off. Okay, that is a weird form of empathy, but I can see many uses for it. Poor girl messed with because of her size, at least she has friends to help.
Past with bullies I'm guessing, plus sensing it when others are frightened, ouch. And mess with one, mess with the family, thinking of her friends at Whateley as family, she is going to draw more trouble to herself. An Emerson boy nearly ran her over, Cally not going to start anything, saying she won't need to do more than talk, uh oh. Her ability can do that for them, she is like a bard brought to life.
Being nice to the other 3 boys and ignoring the 'idiot', racking his nerves like that using his friends, priceless. Embarrassing them for an excuse to leave, Cally hadn't thought that through and without Erica would have been in trouble. Talking to boys has her that rattled, poor kid.
Macarthur Price aka 'the idiot', and he is a creep with that kind of thinking about girls. He shoved Kareela aside without thought just to go after other girls, ugh. He deserved to be called an idiot, treating another human like that. Thinking he can seduce and sleep with Cally, sick at the thought of such a creep even touching her.
Kareela has a true dwarf due to her mutation stopping her from growing, it sounds like, but HGH keep her growing. Her mom is 16E and she might get that big as well, dang. And she has been binding them down, that quickly with the fittings, that machine is a wonder. Breasts bigger than Erica's and still growing, *eyes bug out* Caused Cally to get a nose-bleed, hehe. And anyone who mistakes her for a little girl in that bra is blind or stupid. Nooo! Never let Penny into this store, she could bankrupt her new grandparents if given the chance.
Essemmelle [which is her codename, this or Karneela?] introduced to the junior high kids, I have a feeling she would be a bad influence on them. Francesco is Cally's twin, sent on different paths by mutation, sounding more and more like she is a changeling. Poor Cally getting hit by all those emotions due to missing staff and what could have happened to them.
Teasing by Laura over Cally suggesting the Sci-fi club to her. Only talk like that could lead to alien boob jokes, Commonwealth group, Britain not part of Europe, Tanya and Jimmy interested in the Future Superheroes of America, hope they haven't gotten worse with their overzealous members over the years. Hearing about Wondercute, then Cally thinking Venus Inc. [at least it sounds like them] is dedicated to fashionistas and beauty queens.
Futaba-Kun Change in Italian, one of those animes/mangas I need to get a hold of. Milena and Vanessa, RAs of Dickinson, talking about rivalry between them at Whitman in the past, asking them to keep things civil between the two cottages. No eye on Vanessa's right side of her face, just a uniform blank space, dang. GSD that is slow to develop and easy to disguise, never seen that before. Mrs. Selkirk is still the same, good to see another old face.
Milena got out Mrs. Selkirk's good graces, wonder what she did to do that. Elspeth Plimsoll but insist they call her Ms. Plimsoll, don't think I'm going to like her. Doesn't care for children and don't treat them as children, not particularly trusting either, yeah, known I don't like her. Erica hoping they are pulling the freshmen girls' collective chain with campus gossip, rumors and legends. Heh, the sewers are that bad in some places.
A lot of the girls aren't morning people from the sound of it. The way Cally is checking out the other girls, more and more curious as to why she is there instead of Poe. And poor girl on her own as Erica is taken off to powers testing, sounds like she almost stepped on Teri. Waiting for her brother and the bus is 20 minutes late, typical. Guy with thorns sticking out of his face, called Zeke by presumably his little sister.
Victoria Stone, one of Cally's new friends over the summer, shows up on the bus. Devisor and has a cousin, Diana Davies, in campus infirmary due to an incident involving a devise, her cousin is lucky to have not been disfigured or killed. Boy, from the way Cally is thinking about her brother Fra, they don't have the best of relationships. Plus he has an ego and likes showing off, let's hope that he improves with time.
Teasing between siblings and seems like Fra likes to slack off, oh boy. Vicky in Whitman and Fra in Emerson, and Erica shows up while they are on the way. Oh boy, Erica shocks herself by calling Fra hot, poor girl doesn't know how much she has changed and scares herself sometimes. Ouch, poor Cally upset at hearing that.
Erica needs to learn to censor herself better. Upper weight limit for dead lifting still increasing, just how strong will she get. Overloaded her shield, ouch, at least she learned it now and not when faced with lethal weapons. Who is the girl in orange barreling through others and the big guy who stopped her. Gouyasse, the guy, not going to apologize despite his friend saying to.
Oh great, the girl in orange is Ratel, from what I recall one of the Amazons, and itching for a fight. An Ultra-Violent, at least Gouyasse has enough presence of mind to back down and leave. Lucky to avoid a fight with the likes of her. And I can figure out what Ratel's shirt meant, yikes, no wonder Fra or any guy would go pale.
Playing card games with Erica on a bench, cute. Oh crud, Vic and Tanya on the way to Crystal Hall and Ratel intercepts them. The incident where Tanya agreed to a fight but thought it would be later and organized, not a brawl in quad. And agreeing to not let Tanya forget this for a long time, friends can be so cruel sometimes.

Never starting stuff but finishing it, Erica's family are the right kind of crazy. Meeting Nick and finding out where he is from.
Still so funny to read.Taka asked, "Excuse me, what big like horse?"
Revealing Nick and AJ were the ones involved in the Central Park mess, Cally liking that Nick is into playing the guitar. About to go back to the Ratel fight, only for a grumpy Tanya and Vic to show up. Upset at security for keeping them for 20 minutes, telling them they can't fight in the quad, sigh. A week's detention in Whitman, ouch. Cally worried about run-ins with security, they have gotten overzealous and not actually helping too much from what we've seen.
Erica feeling awkward because of what she said about Fra, strange, scary and embarrassing at the same time, oh boy. Talking to Penny about the matter and she seems to already know what it is about, weird. Penny has vintage Playgirl magazines, dang, and ask if Erica regrets not taking one with her to school still. Never date your friend's brother, plus apologize to Cally and stop it before it stews too long, good advice.
All that to figure out why the concoction did what it did to Erica, that is a project and a half. And used a version of the serum on Penny and it worked, dang. And she might have a danger sense, good thing to have with New Reich scum having her as one of their targets. Cally shows up and uses the excuse that it is dinner time for them to end the call. Aww, poor Erica afraid of losing Cally as a dear friend over this.
Her brother is that obnoxious, ouch. And the two of them laughing, such a perfect end to that little issue.I know you, and I know my brother, and so I realize that even if you were to date, you would most likely maim him before too long.
Ouch, all that testing for them, no wonder Tia, Hikaru, and Morgana has in a bad mood. And Venus Inc. coming to try and recruit Taka, getting Cally thinking about soap operas. So that is how the story got its name, Cally calling it 'Dorms of Our Lives' after 'Days of Our Lives'. Jamie messing with Tia, another reason she is wreck. And yeah, Cally is right, don't mess with family.
Tempers short early in the morning due to not enough showers for everyone and the crowding, eh, could be worse. Essemmelle coming out and the girl taunts her about falling in, not smart. And the other girl is a tough girl with blue streaks in her hair and eyes of the same shade, keeps taunting Essemmelle about her height and gets called a bitch, that is going to follow her for a while.
Upset another girl named Amy, blue streaked hair and blue eyes girl is Mairead, her unfortunate roommate is Tricia. Nana and Hannah doing fine, Hannah excited about all the people with different powers, a girl on Erica's side codenamed Mouse who can shrink, interesting. Got a kid from Hawthorne to demonstrate his power, produces napalm-like substance from his sweat glands, ouch. In Doyle getting treated for burns, I have a feeling this is going to be a trend with Hannah around. Awww, Erica wishing she was into girls because Cally is like a dream girl, friendly, attractive, and into games and comics.
Cally meeting a new girl at their table, though wishing to get to know Bailey more, cute. Nana having the carnivore special, due hosting the spirit of an obligate carnivore. She wanted to go vegan and can only eat a piece of broccoli before she starts getting sick, dang. Catherine aka Zapper is the girl we didn't know, Erica and Hannah showing up with Vicky. Nana doesn't wish to be a hero, her dad is Thermoclast up in Augusta and she says he is just a big dork.
Tanya says her mom was a hero, only to be asked where it got her, that is cold. She didn't know, at least that is sorted out, still painful subject for Tanya. Cally trying to talk with Jimmy, going to a dorm mixer between Whitman and Twain, Emerson and Dickinson are doing one too. And yeah, a full school mixer might end up with the school being wrecked.
Wondering where they put it all, would love to have that. A girl with light feathers on her head which Tanya calls Whirly, cute codename. Tanya revealing she looks like her mom and feels like she is on a course to replace her, ouch, feeling like you don't have your own destiny anymore. It is good she has Erica to talk to, help her to realize her mom would be happy no matter what she does. Heh, hearing all that from Erica, even if the path is chosen for you you can make it your own. Eat the entire buffet line, I don't think even Tennyo has ever done that.
Cally having to deal with powers testing again, her brother Claudio put her through them as part of his postdoctoral studies on powers, no wonder she is tried of them already. And having to deal with an excited Hannah wondering how everyone's powers work.
Hehehe, someone people don't know when to be quiet for even a moment.The question now was, would she get to the labs with her ears intact?
Don't recognize this researcher, at least Cally gets out of the full physical exam. Body hasn't changed radically with her mutation, so my guesses about changeling earlier were off. Wait, next part says that Claudio buried details of her physical alterations due to her mutation, so still possibly a changeling. Ouch, no danger sense and a hurdle that suddenly shoots up just as she runs over it.
Hannah is there, codenamed Assay, good codename with her power. Testing her mutation by having her work in the labs and scan the other students, clever plus works as a job for her. That is a peculiar device they had Assay hook herself up to. Telempathic in nature, ah, the device feeds what Assay detects to a monitor for the researchers. Italian lullaby, synchronize her emotions with those represented in the song, doesn't sound easy. Put Assay to leap by the third time she sang it, subtle and impressive. Oh boy, all those songs, Cally is going to want a break from singing for a while after this.
Erica trying to get the others interested in tabletop gaming, sneaky. Oh boy, Erica alone and sees Fra, thinking he looks good today and moving towards him without conscious thought. He needs a special class for English and is upset about it, slacked up for 3 months and complains now, he sounds like a hot mess. Seeing Taka with all those girls, hearing how he handles with less skill in English than Fra encourages the boy.
Poor girl doesn't have a chance. And they are just walking along, he leads her to a less crowded place and kisses her without warning, ugh, guy is an idiot to pull that. Fra doesn't even care that Erica freaked out and ran, starting to hate this guy.The treacherous part of her head had temporarily won the war with her panic center, with weaponized hormones streaking like rockets across her subconscious before exploding somewhere deep and squicky inside her.
And Hannah isn't even upset about the emotions she was made to endure as part of Cally's testing. Hot blonde in pink top and mini-skirt, poor Cally need to embrace what she is. And the girl is excited about her Tartucci bag, oh brother. Nina Blake, avatar host and her spirit made her excited about the bag. Bewitched, cute codename, poor kid feels like she is possessed some days. Can't believe Cally flirted with Nina like that, even gave her her number under the pretense of talking about bags.
Erica hiding under the bedding like that and pretending the world doesn't exist, she is taking Fra kissing her very hard. Afraid of apologizing Cally again about this, part of her brain tempting her in ways she hates, talk about being betrayed by a part of you. Milena teleports in, having heard Erica crying.
Freaking out over telling Cally or not, Milena telling her she needs a boyfriend, and reminded about the dorm mixer, which Fra will be at. At least Milena can keep at eye on them, make sure Erica is never alone with him, and boot him if he makes a move, good RA. And tempting her with setting up blind dates, *groans*"It's high school," said Milena. "Everything here is stupid, everything is really nothing, and yet it's still the most tragic and important thing to ever happen to anyone ever. So, spill it."
Ouch, sensing that from Erica, and Cally isn't even in person with her. Only on her first tray, it is a crisis! Psychic backwash like that of so many emotions and stress, feeling drain just being near them, hope she has a good psychic teacher to help her learn how to shield better. Ah, wanting to attract other girls attention and wishing Nia would be there even though she is in Poe. No room for wallflowers, darn. Essemmelle shows up to save Erica from going to see Fra with Cally. Short list of mental exercises to turn down the reception on her empathy, love to know those exercises myself. Alcohol in the punch, wonder who did that, is 'Shine in Emerson?
Essemmelle told by Milena enough to know to keep her company, good. Girl, maybe a sophomore, speaking in French with two Emerson boys and punch flowing up from the bowl into her cup. Thinks they are members of the European Promotional League and goes to meet them. Gouyasse and another guy, Adrienne le Floc'h aka Fleuve Noire. Fortenbras, born Gregory Bertram Frederick Crumbley the Third, Viscount Stratford de Redcliff, no wonder he was reluctant to give out his full name and title at first, that is a mouthful and then some. Emile Duval of Wallonia aka Gouyasse. All three are shocked upon hearing Erica's codename of Eisenmädel, Adrienne saying her friend Kristen is a big fan of a German graphic novel series. This isn't good, leader of the Amazons is Kristen if I remember correctly.
Fra stuck in the middle of a crowd of boys too shy to cross over and talk to the girls. Cally remembers this situation, she is a changeling! Fra sounds like a Casanova, dating girls and never sticking with one for long. All those guys acting as Fra's friend just to get close to Cally, oh brother. Macarthur Price, for what he thought earlier, seems to be all bluster and no action. Fra perking up at the mention of Erica, he has seduced her friends before, another strike against him.
Macarthur is scum, just wishes to seduce and use Cally, not caring for her and thinking she is a slut by the way gabs with the boys. Trying to get to her through Fra by learning things about Cally, makes me want to smack him hard.
Erica not knowing what to do, she hasn't had long to adjust to her changes, do not go with Operation Snowflake, it will get you in trouble here. Janine and Annie, talking about her Rube Goldberg inventions. One girl calling another a bitch, oh boy, drama. A projectile thankfully stopped by her PK field, Mairead is one of those involved, other girl using metal ball bearings as projectiles.
Reese shows up, an RA who leaves streaks of neon rainbows in her wake as she runs, and Mairead says Mags started it, on her case all afternoon. Mag-Lev calls Mairead Multi-Monkey, bluish PK constructs for hands, handy.

Seeing Mairead crying like that, finally Essemmelle gets that it has gone too far. Poor girl to get others to console her, hope it doesn't stick though or Mairead might get sent to therapy for a problem she doesn't have. Scowling, surly midget, never get on their bad side, always good to make friends with those types.
Finding the music a raucous mess, having perfect pitch and ear for music has it own problems. Not as if she was dancing with other girls if she only happened to be next to them, lol. Dance challenge between her and another girl from her floor, nice. Nefertiti Copeland, mom really into Egyptian stuff. Muse of Dance, Terpsichore, yeah, best to go with an easier name. And warned about the punch being spike, Nefertiti has pretty good regen so isn't worried.
A perv wanting to dance with Cally or Nefertiti, called Jake but insist his name is Rutherford, Cally tries to brush him off and he gets ticked. Grabbing Cally like that, he isn't polite or a gentleman in any way, shape or form. He used a mental power on her! Fra and the idiot are there to help, Jake is messing with Cally's mind so bad she can't even talk to respond. Fra has a PK field, Nefertiti trying to yell at her, and another guy shows up who knows Rutherford, he promised Delarose he would start off this year clean.
He knows how the creep's power works, entire dorm sentenced to an entire week of lectures on informed consent, et cetera because of Jake. Contact High, either Rutherford's codename or nickname. Scared him off by threating to warn everyone about being with Rutherford. That disoriented after being released, Rutherford needs a warning label! Gideon Crawford is the one who helped with the threat. Having to be taken back to her room, poor Cally had the night ruin, aww.
Macarthur, thinking that is how a real man does it, oh boy, he has a lot of learn. Thinking he made friends with Fra and was seen as a white knight by Cally, yet going out to scan the crowd for other likely ladies to approach. *hits head on desk* I know we just met him, but he needs to learn you don't play girls to get what you want either.
Combination of spiked punch and Contact High, no wonder Cally is in such bad shape. Essemmelle tagging Rutherford, hope it is something good that sticks and warns girls away from him. Have the talk with Cally about Fra in the morning, hope nothing else happens in the meanwhile. An email to Penny about the events of the day, nice to have someone to chat with so openly.
Whitman-Twain mixer had a handful of fights and a single explosion, that is slow for them. Kirsten Bischofsheim, a message her phone received. New kids for European Promotional League, thinking foreign kids need to stick together in American countryside. Wondering how Erica got the codename Eisenmädel, Kirstein has every book based on the originals adventures, bleached and dyed her hair to match Eisenmädel hair color until her parents stopped her. After an incident with a street gang and steamroller they forced a codename on her, Wahnsinning meaning crazy or reckless, ouch. So obsessed she has having intel dug up on Erica by a hacker, very bad. Okay, Kirsten isn't who I thought, but still just as bad to be on the radar of.
Interesting story so far, feels like Part 1 though. Curious if it is part 1 or it will be continued in another story.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Katssun
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What delicious teen drama you two have cooked up!
You get a stalker! And you get a stalker! Everyone gets a stalker!
There's just so much to unpack. Erica love drama, Calliope love drama, both evidently lying on their applications...Calliope not as helpless as she comes off in the other segments, and a temper paired with it. Lots of little lies from this pair.
Vic remembered Sterling! Makes us question how many Tanya appearances at meals and between classes have been...just Tanya.

I know we've seen some of them before here and there, but I loved the menagerie of new side characters, that first felt like they came in a flood of just name after name, but the more prominent ones filled out (bonus pun for Essemmelle fitting!) over the course of this story to become good additions. I've always liked the supporting cast of Gen 2, because it feels very natural the way that Mutant Mayhem Machine branches out into other social circles, drifts in and out of their little group, and breaks up into smaller groups when moving the stories forward.
I thought it would be Greta that would be the angriest about Eisenmädel title, but Kirsten is way, way creepier. The Euro League kids are way too aware of how obsessed she is with Erica's grandmother. I wonder if some of that will be defused from creepy stalker to clingy fangirl trying to meet Erica's grandmother, once she knows why Erica is the only one allowed to have it.
I don't want to dig too deeply into the love drama, triangle, square, dodecahedron whatever in this post, but let's just say for now that you two had me hanging on every scene, the two girls noticing each other's reactions when the perspectives switched, with Calliope being more attuned to Erica's denials, despite being more socially awkward compared to Erica's (enforced?) openness to finding someone.
Still leaves a question hanging, since Calliope has already sworn a vendetta. What dorm is Jamie Howe in?
- Malady
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I need a refresher on Erica's sexuality. I forget if Cally has a chance or not.
... I am sorta disturbed by how Jacques marries a girl whose first name matches his sister's.
Still haven't gotten Cally's origin... Getting a GenderBender while her twin didn't. External forces at work, or just gene fluke??
- Katssun
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Cally has absolutely no chance with Erica, and should be asking Laura to send some girls her way, though she's already met Bewitched (Nina/Noah plus Glee), so she's making some inroads there already.Malady wrote: I need a refresher on Erica's sexuality. I forget if Cally has a chance or not.
The serum made Erica super straight. She lost all interest in women immediately, shown in the scene where she saw Green Cross' poster in the base and knew that she should have felt something, but didn't, same considering the time she spent with Penny and the other girls. She found herself admiring men shortly thereafter.
It's revealed here that Penny and she even tested it, and nope. No attraction to girls whatsoever.
- mhalpern
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Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- NeoMagus
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mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"
Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.
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- Schol-R-LEA
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I had remembered that when I was thinking up my micro scene for Raul Tenant as a boy , and specifically considered adding it (since I had him living near Winnipeg most of the year, which would be the right area as I understand it), but it really was such a short scene that it just didn't come up. Also, I got the impression that it was sort of a lower-class, tough guy sort of thing, mainly (sort of along the lines of the old Brooklyn 'youse'), at least from Byrne's comments, and I had Raul's father being a politician who had just been elected to Parliament; I figured they had money, and he'd probably gone to private schools where proper diction would have been drilled into him.
Of course, she could have picked it up from someone who was originally from that area, though that would be like picking up a Texas accent from a neighbor despite living in Seattle. Is Hannah the sort to do it it on purpose, just to poke fun at Americans who expect it? Or am I just wrong about it being a regional thing?
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- mhalpern
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NeoMagus wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"
Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.
Oops point stands
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- Astrodragon
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Schol-R-LEA wrote: One small thing, which I may be wrong about anyway: Assay uses the "eh?" verbal tic at times, but it was mentioned that she is from the Maritimes. If memory serves (going waaaay back to the fan mail page for the first several issues of Alpha Flight), that's mainly a thing with people in Manitoba and Alberta. I recall that John Byrne specifically mentioning that, because some of the fans were wondering why, out of all his major characters, only Wolverine and Puck seemed to use it (and only infrequently at that). He did mention that it was common where he grew up, so he could at least say that it was authentic rather than just a stereotype created by SCTV.
I had remembered that when I was thinking up my micro scene for Raul Tenant as a boy , and specifically considered adding it (since I had him living near Winnipeg most of the year, which would be the right area as I understand it), but it really was such a short scene that it just didn't come up. Also, I got the impression that it was sort of a lower-class, tough guy sort of thing, mainly (sort of along the lines of the old Brooklyn 'youse'), at least from Byrne's comments, and I had Raul's father being a politician who had just been elected to Parliament; I figured they had money, and he'd probably gone to private schools where proper diction would have been drilled into him.
Of course, she could have picked it up from someone who was originally from that area, though that would be like picking up a Texas accent from a neighbor despite living in Seattle. Is Hannah the sort to do it it on purpose, just to poke fun at Americans who expect it? Or am I just wrong about it being a regional thing?
I've heard it in Toronto.
My (Canadian) wife insists they do it in the Maritimes, but then the Maritimes are a sort of standing joke to Torontonians...
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Schol-R-LEA
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- Katssun
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My guess is that Kirsten is just going to stalk and challenge her for who deserves the name more, while digging through the fake backstory Erica's family has created, and that dynamic shifts when she eventually learns Erica is the descendant.NeoMagus wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"
Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.
She's a crazy obsessed fangirl, the German authorities even forced a codename on her, but we don't know if she's a sadist like confirmed with Greta. She struck me more as a German version of Mega-Girl, who acts like Wondercute about a specific hero, then pushed another order of magnitude. Earnest, but dangerously obsessive, mostly to herself.
Meanwhile, Stahlfaust is annoyed by it, because she obviously wanted it too at some point. But Kirsten's information gets spread out over time.
When that information eventually lets Stahlfaust learn that Erica used to be Eric (because she and Cally aren't covered by Horton's Poe spelling, or at least presumably more than a slip of the tongue), Stahlfaust will then proceed to try and kill Erica over corrupting the title/codename.
This assumes she hasn't already been expelled over her feud with Morgana.
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Katssun wrote:
My guess is that Kirsten is just going to stalk and challenge her for who deserves the name more, while digging through the fake backstory Erica's family has created, and that dynamic shifts when she eventually learns Erica is the descendant.NeoMagus wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"
Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.
She's a crazy obsessed fangirl, the German authorities even forced a codename on her, but we don't know if she's a sadist like confirmed with Greta. She struck me more as a German version of Mega-Girl, who acts like Wondercute about a specific hero, then pushed another order of magnitude. Earnest, but dangerously obsessive, mostly to herself.
Meanwhile, Stahlfaust is annoyed by it, because she obviously wanted it too at some point. But Kirsten's information gets spread out over time.
When that information eventually lets Stahlfaust learn that Erica used to be Eric (because she and Cally aren't covered by Horton's Poe spelling, or at least presumably more than a slip of the tongue), Stahlfaust will then proceed to try and kill Erica over corrupting the title/codename.
This assumes she hasn't already been expelled over her feud with Morgana.
I like that theory except all Horton's magic on Poe students does is keep the subject of Poe being the LGBT cottage from coming up as a conversation tangent, you can't accidentally reveal the secret and I am sure it doesn't survive less than friendly forms of interrogation,
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Katssun wrote:
My guess is that Kirsten is just going to stalk and challenge her for who deserves the name more, while digging through the fake backstory Erica's family has created, and that dynamic shifts when she eventually learns Erica is the descendant.NeoMagus wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"
Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.
She's a crazy obsessed fangirl, the German authorities even forced a codename on her, but we don't know if she's a sadist like confirmed with Greta. She struck me more as a German version of Mega-Girl, who acts like Wondercute about a specific hero, then pushed another order of magnitude. Earnest, but dangerously obsessive, mostly to herself.
Meanwhile, Stahlfaust is annoyed by it, because she obviously wanted it too at some point. But Kirsten's information gets spread out over time.
When that information eventually lets Stahlfaust learn that Erica used to be Eric (because she and Cally aren't covered by Horton's Poe spelling, or at least presumably more than a slip of the tongue), Stahlfaust will then proceed to try and kill Erica over corrupting the title/codename.
This assumes she hasn't already been expelled over her feud with Morgana.
Curious, Katssun, just where are you reading that Stahlfaust is at all interested in the Eisenmadel codename?
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I wasn't able to post my thoughts earlier but...
what's my dad doing in this story‽
A little background: My dad's name is Claudio, same as one of Cally's relatives. That said, he's only half Italian; my grandmother is herself German, so it's kind of cool how half my family heritage is represented here. Now if only we had a Scandinavian student or 2. (specifically Sweden and Finland.)
I'm very thankful that people don't ask about it much, because it's complicated; all my grandparents are from different countries. Funny how I have a completely Italian name though, and speak 0 Italian, or any of my grandparents' languages.
I wonder if I would be eligible for the Euro-promotion League? Or the Commonwealth club? (because Canada, eh!) Or both!
Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
All ideas free to use. You can probably make better use of them than me.
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Erica hasn't reacted similarly to anyone else and appears rather fixated.
Probably just me.
Edit: as another canadian hailing from the west coast I can confirm that the concious use of 'eh' is mainly for playing to stereotypes. That being said a good description I was given of the unconcious usage (that has been given to me) is "if an American would say 'huh' at the end of a sentence a Canadian would say 'eh.'"
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Malady wrote: Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?
I want to see what would happen if she read Erica. Non-mutant with no powers other than faux-exemplar. Or Chou, Chou would be interesting. Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.
If she does this in story I missed it.
My dreams take me to far off lands and times of distant past and future. They tell what has been done, what will happen and who I am. They show me things beyond the machinations of any man. Tell me, what are dreams to you?
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Whether it is only applicable to Augmented (e.g., ones who have been deliberately biologically altered in some way, such as through genetic engineering, or gee, a devise built by a pissed-off girlfriend - hey, Tia, wanna step over here for a moment?) or if she can sense baseline mages and Ki masters, Imbued, Enhanced (i.e., Cyborgs and human-centered Nano-Swarms - probably not, though Hive might be willing to help test part of that), Schimmelhorn engineers (as opposed to those altered by them... like, say, Erica), the odd Batson Factor, those subject to an Exaltation (a good one to test if the opportunity arises, as it might answer some questions about the relationship between Vril/Ki/Prana/Orgone and Essence - maybe), Dynahosts, Possessed, or any of the other Empowered types, or for that matter Fae (well, most modern Fae are Fae-mutants anyway, so...), Werefolk and other Courts era creatures, Artificers (uh, if she can tell that they are different from mutants, that's... a problem), Genii Locorem such as The Grove, Spirit Manifestations (like the Calibans, though presumably only when actually affecting the physical realm), Haunting Manifestations (Jimmy T. has mentioned their being some poltergeisten around campus, at least at that time), Undead, Dragons, empowered extraterrestrials (hi Mr West!), Ascended (I'm looking at you, Sun, and the Eight Taoist Immortals too), Mythos beings, etc., (damn, that's a long list, and I probably missed a few) are questions that are hard to answer.
If she has any sense at all, she'd better start asking them before someone blindsides her about them...
Oh, well, if she doesn't, maybe someone in powers testing will.
You know, before it becomes plot-relevant.
Yeah, I don't buy that either. No way it will get figured out before the fan shits the hit. (Wait, did I say that right? Anyway, Really Really Long List.)
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- Schol-R-LEA
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Jarjaross wrote:
Malady wrote: Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?
I want to see what would happen if she read Erica. Non-mutant with no powers other than faux-exemplar. Or Chou, Chou would be interesting. Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.
If she does this in story I missed it.
Actually, it was one of the first things she did in the story, though I can see why it wasn't clear on a quick read, because it came at the end of her introducing herself. I had to double back to pick it up myself, because the next few paragraphs weren't clear since I missed it.
Dorms of Our Lives wrote: "Hi, I'm Hannah Sammish!" the brunette said suddenly, taking Erica's hand and pumping it vigorously. "Me and Nana here are rooming on the other end of the floor, but there's no one else over there right now but Josephine — that's our RA, yanno, Paint Oracle over there? — so we're just hanging out with the cool kids, eh? So what do you do? Oh, don't tell me just yet." Before Erica could get a word in edgewise, the girl draped her free hand dramatically over her eyes and started humming tunelessly. "Hmmm.... Exemplar, some sort of PK, but, um... huh, that feels odd." Brown eyes opened to stare at Erica quisically. "There's something odd about your powers. I've met lots of bricks with a bit of PK on top, but your flavor's slightly off."
It is interesting not only because she could tell Eisenmadel's powers, but also that something was different, but she couldn't say how - meaning she probably hadn't tried reading a non-mutant before.
As I said earlier, that's going to definitely have an impact on things, especially if she ends up taking any Ranges courses.
Also, I noticed something I think some of My Fellow 'Merkins might have missed, but I have a feeling its an intentional bit of misdirection, so spoilers:
Some of the older folk here may know this, as there was some confusion about this in the sixties because a lot of people assumed that Lady Bird Johnston got her nickname from that - turns out, she didn't, and it's actually two different nicknames given to her by different people at different times in her life that got put together by the press so that her initials matched her husband's, but it did bring the subject to people's attention. Before my time, but it still came up enough that I'd run across mention of it in when growing up, so it is possible others around my age did too.
I'm not sure if Wasamon and Souffle Girl were deliberately using this to mislead some readers about Ladybird's avatar spirit or not, but I'm guessing some might be.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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"I will help you be worthy of your codename!"

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And wouldn't the House parents be keeping an eye on him about this?
Measure Twice
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Schol-R-LEA wrote:
Jarjaross wrote:
Malady wrote: Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?
I want to see what would happen if she read Erica. Non-mutant with no powers other than faux-exemplar. Or Chou, Chou would be interesting. Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.
If she does this in story I missed it.
Actually, it was one of the first things she did in the story, though I can see why it wasn't clear on a quick read, because it came at the end of her introducing herself. I had to double back to pick it up myself, because the next few paragraphs weren't clear since I missed it.
Dorms of Our Lives wrote: "Hi, I'm Hannah Sammish!" the brunette said suddenly, taking Erica's hand and pumping it vigorously. "Me and Nana here are rooming on the other end of the floor, but there's no one else over there right now but Josephine — that's our RA, yanno, Paint Oracle over there? — so we're just hanging out with the cool kids, eh? So what do you do? Oh, don't tell me just yet." Before Erica could get a word in edgewise, the girl draped her free hand dramatically over her eyes and started humming tunelessly. "Hmmm.... Exemplar, some sort of PK, but, um... huh, that feels odd." Brown eyes opened to stare at Erica quisically. "There's something odd about your powers. I've met lots of bricks with a bit of PK on top, but your flavor's slightly off."
It is interesting not only because she could tell Eisenmadel's powers, but also that something was different, but she couldn't say how - meaning she probably hadn't tried reading a non-mutant before.
As I said earlier, that's going to definitely have an impact on things, especially if she ends up taking any Ranges courses.
Also, I noticed something I think some of My Fellow 'Merkins might have missed, but I have a feeling its an intentional bit of misdirection, so spoilers:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]A ladybird isn't a bird, but a beetle. It's what is called a ladybug here. My understanding is that some time around the Victorian era in the UK, any use of 'bug' in a word was considered a bit to risque, so 'ladybird' became a euphemism and replaced the older name.
Some of the older folk here may know this, as there was some confusion about this in the sixties because a lot of people assumed that Lady Bird Johnston got her nickname from that - turns out, she didn't, and it's actually two different nicknames given to her by different people at different times in her life that got put together by the press so that her initials matched her husband's, but it did bring the subject to people's attention. Before my time, but it still came up enough that I'd run across mention of it in when growing up, so it is possible others around my age did too.
I'm not sure if Wasamon and Souffle Girl were deliberately using this to mislead some readers about Ladybird's avatar spirit or not, but I'm guessing some might be.
It could have been Souflle without thinking about it.
I didn't even realise you guys didn't call them ladybirds.
Mind, for such pretty little bugs they are actually miniature carniverous tanks...

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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I wonder if they've tested her for magic aptitude yet? I'm guessing the curses aren't part of her PDP package, assuming that's even correct. I wonder... if we assume Western Court, then given her size, Brownie, Hob, Bwca (Knocker; though for any of those three, I would expect some sort of manifestor or faux-devisor ability, given their association with things like housekeeping, cobbling, mining, and smithing), Pooka (how is she around horses?), Faer Derrig (does she wear red a lot? Mind you, like the Pooka, they aren't always said to be diminuative), Leprechaun (I don't think she'd take kindly to that, ouch), or Clurichaun could all fit, among other things.
Clurichaun would be really, really problematic, though testing for it might be amusing.
Probably not a Pooka, as this group would be missing a beat if any of those showed up and didn't end up in Poe (they tend to be both bisexual and either androgynous or outright sex shifters, and the latter doesn't seem the case with her). Also, most variants of Robin Goodfellow, AKA Puck - the archetypal Pooka - describe him/her as short, but not as short as the others I've mentioned, so probably not.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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I believe the bindings that were causing the itching were whatever she was using to squish her boobs. The "bra" she later tries on is made of plastic and causes no reaction.Schol-R-LEA wrote: I also wonder if anyone noticed
and whether that's significant or a red herring. Especially in light of her home country's propensities for certain manifestations.Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Essemmelle's reaction to the synthetics in the bra
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]While it mostly seems geared towards the Earthen Court, it sounds like there are a fair number of Fair Folk in Australia, too, given how often Koala seems to run into them there - I get the impression that she gets that at home even more than at Whateley. OTOH, I also noticed that they didn't describe Kareela much other than her size, so... given her name, is she possibly of Aboriginal Australian (hmmn, need to be careful there, I don't know how touchy that term is) descent, and the authors have been deliberately avoiding mentioning it? I looked the name up, and it seems odd to name someone after a city, though not unheard of - especially with a name that has a meaning in the original local language.
I wonder if they've tested her for magic aptitude yet? I'm guessing the curses aren't part of her PDP package, assuming that's even correct. I wonder... if we assume Western Court, then given her size, Brownie, Hob, Bwca (Knocker; though for any of those three, I would expect some sort of manifestor or faux-devisor ability, given their association with things like housekeeping, cobbling, mining, and smithing), Pooka (how is she around horses?), Faer Derrig (does she wear red a lot? Mind you, like the Pooka, they aren't always said to be diminuative), Leprechaun (I don't think she'd take kindly to that, ouch), or Clurichaun could all fit, among other things.
Clurichaun would be really, really problematic, though testing for it might be amusing.
Probably not a Pooka, as this group would be missing a beat if any of those showed up and didn't end up in Poe (they tend to be both bisexual and either androgynous or outright sex shifters, and the latter doesn't seem the case with her). Also, most variants of Robin Goodfellow, AKA Puck - the archetypal Pooka - describe him/her as short, but not as short as the others I've mentioned, so probably not.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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That said, this story has left me with some concerns (personal, not critique):
Firstly, Erica's inner turmoil. That has to be a rough thing to adapt to, especially now things are settling down for her at Whateley and she now has the time for introspection, apparently.
Secondly, Essemmelle terrifies me. Or rather, her power does, combined with rather impulsive tendencies with little thought for the ramifications. She can give people supremely bad days, as it seemed to be for Multi-Task (who I'm inclined to not call a bad sort, judging by the aftermath of that hustle), and that has the potential for some serious repercussions.
Thirdly, Macarthur Price - or rather "Idiot", as he's likely to be known as from now on, due to my previous concern. Aside from Essemmelle's "curse" on him, he's just a sleazy jerk, albeit currently not as bad as Contact High, as demonstrated. I feel bad for Calliope's future, having to deal with him more.
I'm loving all the G2 work thus far. Please continue as you are.

Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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I thought of that too, but actually I think that it's more likely that Erica is the source of the effect. I've seen things that claim that people can subconsciously identify people who would be good partners genetically. If such a thing is true (and possibly even if it isn't), I'd expect that Erica's package of evolutionary enhancement would strengthen those instincts. That would also explain why her change caused a full 180 on the attraction meter.Jarjaross wrote: Anyone else getting a glamour vibe from Fra?
Erica hasn't reacted similarly to anyone else and appears rather fixated.
Probably just me.
Like Ametros, Essemmelle's power scares the bejeebers out of me for it's potential for misuse. I also have questions about it. Does it work better with adjectives or with nouns (eg labeling someone as "Mighty" vs. "Warrior")? How complex can the concepts that she uses be? (Would "Entrepreneur/Entrepreneurial" be possible?) Is the bearer of the jinx affected by it as well, or are any mental effects on them purely spillover from the collective regard of the community? Is Kareela affected by her own jinxes? Finally, what is Kareela's main power, the one that is always on but she finds uncomfortable?
I feel like there are a lot of entertaining shenanigans that could happen with Kareela's power, but most of them have the potential to rapidly grow out of hand in horrible ways.
The Mutant Mayhem Machine's supergroup (by which I mean 3M + friends (like Bunny and Riptide were to TK)) is rapidly growing into a small army.
Somebody needs to call Sheim. They need their Bisch back. (To be fair, we haven't really seen any indication that she's anything other than a fixated overzealous cape wannabee. But the joke was too
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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She seems very aware of how dangerous it can get, which is why she prevents its use with her TK when she starts getting annoyed and stressed. She's also smart enough to know exactly what words can be used to patch things up once things go too far and hit that critical mass point.
Still, I also see the potential for good with it. A boy or a girl lacking confidence or getting left out? She can brand them as "friendly" or "good listener" and get others to engage them. Something as simple as that.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: Finally, what is Kareela's main power, the one that is always on but she finds uncomfortable?
One day that shall be revealed, and then the collective groan of understanding will shake the forums, hehe. Suffice to say that if you like short jokes as much as Kareela, then it will all make sense.
Also, to answer a different question about our favorite midget: while she's definitely hobbit-sized, she isn't connected to the Sidhe in any way.
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Wasamon wrote:
Arcanist Lupus wrote: Finally, what is Kareela's main power, the one that is always on but she finds uncomfortable?
One day that shall be revealed, and then the collective groan of understanding will shake the forums, hehe. Suffice to say that if you like short jokes as much as Kareela, then it will all make sense.
Also, to answer a different question about our favorite midget: while she's definitely hobbit-sized, she isn't connected to the Sidhe in any way.
Calling it now, Size warper, makes her shorter and other parts bigger
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So, Erica's called an EX, but has none of the needed genes... If she doesn't actually have a BIT, then what is presumably-Assay detecting?
I guess Syndromes, instead of Traits?
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All she needs to say is "The original was my grandmother. I only inherited the name recently as a legacy. My family were also killed by the inherited enemies."
This would put a stop to the questions, by anyone who thinks about things, and would leave enough hooks for the "interested enquirers" to trigger the traps that have been laid for them to find, when they start searching.
You think that Opa and Oma aren't that paranoid?
There's a reason that they survived for so long....

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Katssun wrote: I agree about Essemmelle's power, but it is more the temperament of the person with it, and the chip on her shoulder.
She seems very aware of how dangerous it can get, which is why she prevents its use with her TK when she starts getting annoyed and stressed. She's also smart enough to know exactly what words can be used to patch things up once things go too far and hit that critical mass point.
Still, I also see the potential for good with it. A boy or a girl lacking confidence or getting left out? She can brand them as "friendly" or "good listener" and get others to engage them. Something as simple as that.
Because using Psychic powers on someone in a "beneficial" way without their permission is a good thing. Forcing someone to do something they don't want to do is not a good thing, what if said person has an anxiety driven rager trigger and the anxiety is driven by having lots of strangers gathering around?
Don't Drick and Drive.
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The part that surprised me is the vendicative side of Cally, she might end up getting nicknamed 'V'.
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Mister D wrote: You think that Opa and Oma aren't that paranoid?
"It's not paranoia if they really are out to get you"
Besides, Opa and Oma are just reasonably cautious. It's Uncle Adolf who's paranoid.

"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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Jarjaross wrote: Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.
Timeless ?
On the matter at hand, it was interesting. I am glad that you have addressed the fact that Kareela's power is another form of bullying in a way, (I wonder how it would fit into the Whateley Canon of Psychic Ethics).
We didn't know much about Calliope so it's nice to know more. Erica and Cally have an interesting relationship dynamic.
Thank you both for this story.
(and now I want another Tia story even more because I really want to see the scene about Jamie from her PoV ... )
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It is possible he didn't, as there are real-world conditions that leave a person stuck looking like they are around that age (though they tend not to live past their twenties in some of those cases), which are problematic but no insurmountable. Surely others with similar conditions such as Jade and Alyss seem to have left, though I am guessing that Alyss will be back to work with the researchers as a grad student either at WA or ARC at some point given her desire to help cure Deidrick's Syndrome. There have been some references to Generator going into business (the 'Jinntech' phones), and if she is still with Thuban, then she probably isn't having too hard a time of it in that regard - though we don't know just what has happened, so she may have cured her form lock.
More digressions, sorry.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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null0trooper wrote: I think Jamie Howe (" Down the Rabbit Hole, Pt. 2 ") also has Diedrick's Syndrome, though that may not be her only problem.
Right. How did I forget about her?
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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Or maybe it was just a dream.
edit: Yep (The writing on the wall) :
Giggles stared at Tia for a moment and began to giggle. But instead of just giving a quick giggle and being done with it, she continued giggling, growing more manic in the process. I took a step back and gave her a worried look.
“Are you all right?” I asked Giggles, who was still giggling.
“It’s her Diedricks,” Janine explained as she put her hand on Giggles’ arm and gave her a worried look.
“Diedricks?” Tia blurted out, going pale and taking a step back.
Janine nodded. “She goes into uncontrollable giggle fits…”
Giggles nodded agreement, though she was still giggling and looking mortified at the same time. Tears were beginning to form in her eyes and she was starting to turn away from everyone. If I was giggling uncontrollably like that, I probably wouldn’t want everyone to stare at me either.
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null0trooper wrote: I think Jamie Howe (" Down the Rabbit Hole, Pt. 2 ") also has Diedrick's Syndrome, though that may not be her only problem.
That may be the mildest of her problems.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Wasamon wrote: There's a fine line between active Diedrick's and simply being a narcissistic jackass. I'm still not sure which one Gouyasse is, but the fact that he's named himself (or rather, I named him) after a particular Belgian beer is probably not a good sign, eh?
Not sure about the pronunciation of Gouyasse, but most teenage American boys is going to tease the heck out of him, starting by calling him "Goo Ass" and working into homophobic slurs from there.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Valentine wrote: Not sure about the pronunciation of Gouyasse, but most teenage American boys is going to tease the heck out of him, starting by calling him "Goo Ass" and working into homophobic slurs from there.
And they would learn VERY quickly that Gouyasse is NOT a good person to mess with like that...
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NeoMagus wrote:
Valentine wrote: Not sure about the pronunciation of Gouyasse, but most teenage American boys is going to tease the heck out of him, starting by calling him "Goo Ass" and working into homophobic slurs from there.
And they would learn VERY quickly that Gouyasse is NOT a good person to mess with like that...
And when did that stop Bloodwolf or Buster or Aries or any of the "asshats?"
Don't Drick and Drive.
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But for here it's "Fecked if I know". Past tense. Or "Stuffed" if you're being polite.

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Good characters, some very unique powers and a good school drama. I especially liked how Erica points out the girl at the dance was really hurting and didn't deserve to suffer like that. It shows her empathy that didn't get a chance to show in her other stories.
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I'm guessing Father Ted was incredibly popular over there.
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It's probably just a crush. Those can be kind of sudden and arbitrary, especially the first ones. This probably is not Erica's first crush, of course, but it's her first crush on a boy, so in many ways it's like starting all over from the beginning. She's back in that confusing state of vague denial where she's just starting to notice that those people she's always considered at least a little yucky maybe aren't so yucky after all. F-Man looked particularly attractive to her at a moment when her guard was down, so she accidentally voiced her real feelings. She can still maintain her denial around other guys, but she can't successfully lie to herself about the F-Man anymore, because she knows what she said and that it was true. There isn't really anything special about him; it's only the fact that she had that slip of the tongue with him that makes him stick out. And since she's suppressing her feelings about men in general, it turns into a fixation on the F-man.Arcanist Lupus wrote:
I thought of that too, but actually I think that it's more likely that Erica is the source of the effect. I've seen things that claim that people can subconsciously identify people who would be good partners genetically. If such a thing is true (and possibly even if it isn't), I'd expect that Erica's package of evolutionary enhancement would strengthen those instincts. That would also explain why her change caused a full 180 on the attraction meter.Jarjaross wrote: Anyone else getting a glamour vibe from Fra?
Erica hasn't reacted similarly to anyone else and appears rather fixated.
Probably just me.
Milena's got the right idea, I think.
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Wasamon wrote: There's a fine line between active Diedrick's and simply being a narcissistic jackass. I'm still not sure which one Gouyasse is, but the fact that he's named himself (or rather, I named him) after a particular Belgian beer is probably not a good sign, eh?
After the beer, hmmn? I know that the name means 'Goliath' in the Walloon dialect of French (a fact I ran across when I first looked up the beer a couple years ago, so I may be misremembering) so I assumed it referred to a size warping power. If he named himself for the beer, that could lead to some amusing things. For that matter, just the fact that he shares the name with a beer would do the trick, really.
Ah, OK, I looked it up and apparently 'Gouyasse' is the local pronunciation of 'Goliath'. This is definitely going to make for some interesting things, depending on whether he spells it like the Biblical giant, or like the brewery's name. Since we've only seen it spoken, so if the spelling is different it could lead to some amusing confusion. OTOH, if he spells it like the brewery... oh, my.
I am waiting to see where you take that, Wasamon.
EDIT[: Oh, right, Gouyasse himself mentions Goliath, so that's probably what he has in mind; it was Fortinbras who quipped about the beer. I am guessing that the beer was what you had in mind yourself, though.
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Tether would also qualify if it was generalized to characters the character created.
I suddenly want to see someone throw Jam in his face. Ideally raspberry.He's doing this thing like radar. Yanno? The sweeps, the bleeps, and the creeps?
Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
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Dorms of Our Lives Part 2 comments
Eurydice planning on messing with Erica, that girl is sickening and breaking the Whateley Psychic Code of Ethics probably. And Brita talking about Erica and Cally being friends with the changeling girls, a threat to the purity of the sisterhood, if she knew, yikes. Eurydice knows but with the way she is talking, it seems Brita might have revealed the Poe secret at least in part to Kammie as well.
When administration finds out Brita is keeping such an ability secret, sharing Poe secrets with non-Poesies, that is the tip of the iceberg of trouble building for her. Brita's mindset of lesbians vs. everyone else comes across as a barely contained psychopath to me, someone who would kill those who she hates if she could get away with it. The Amazons are starting to come across as a huge building threat that needs dealing with soon before they go too far, imo.
Cally having to deal with all those emotions pushing on her mental shields, ouch. Stress from last night, all the emotions around her, and missing out on cinnamon roll, glad she was able to get one, felt like she was on the brink of breaking from the weight of everything. Kareela, nice to see her again. Magique, Natalie, Acolyte, and Tek Witch, run, it is the new incarnation of the TLW.

Talk from Kareela Greer aka Essemmelle about a party last night, something happening with a guy, ah, the incident with the creep trying his power on Cally. Darcy aka Clobberizer, interesting codename. Marcus and Scheherazade aka Scher for short. Firefly aka Linette as Darcy's roommate in Whitman, Scher having a room to herself in Melville. Breakdance and Heartfinder, Meatball and Hyperactive, definitely junior high codenames. Though curious about Heartfinder.
Breakdance, poor girl sounds like she is stressed out or are her reactions due to her powers. Heartbreaker's eyes are very interesting, her eyes and powers seem connected. Laurent and Jean-Marie, wonder who their sister is Erica is supposed to have met. Hypergolic, very interesting codename and enigmatic comment about why he has plastic gloves over his hands, almost sounds like he is some kind of touch-based transmuter. Marcus's codename is Retrofit, cool codename. And another girl codenamed Time Bomb, don't even want to guess what she can do.
Hehe, love Kareela's attitude about making friends. And Meatball, that boy needs a good verbal lashing for doing that to girls, guessing their bra sizes and asking if he is right right to their face. Love how Cally confuses him with non-American bra size, wonder how long he will be scratching his head about that one. And nice Shakespeare reference by Erica.
Breakfast with friends, Erica and Cally arrive to an already full table of M3. Wonder which clubs Jimmy and Tanya are talking about, what has Bianca and Laura down, and Morgana smoldering, yikes. Poe mixer, there was a mess thanks to Brita and Contact High, it is a wonder that guy hasn't been arrested for sexual assault already. Ouch, Ratel dancing with those poor guys, that would make them gun-shy on dating for a while. Scheduled school assembly, mandatory, rats.
Kirsten Bischofsheim obsessed with Eisenmadel, even her friend Arni couldn't dig up anything, now that is some epic-level security. Great, she has noticed M3's table and is ticked Erica is with them, thinking it is a special privilege to be on an upper level. This girl has serious anger issues involving Eisenmadel, not caring she could have caused an accident and killed someone by throwing her mug like that. Ugh, thinking all she did gives her the right to the codename, to prove she is worthy, and thinks Erica cheated to get it. She is digging herself a very deep hole.
Erica afraid to talk to her roommate about an illicit first kiss, aww. Milena showing up and hopefully the fair warning is enough to keep Erica away from the Amazons. And she knows all the real stuff and rumors about them, really good for Erica and Cally to know. And yup, sounds like Eurydice uses her powers to warp straight girls into lesbians.
Oh boy, Cally is interested in the training for self-protection the Amazons can offer, not good. And daw, poor Erica thinking she would fit in with the Amazons, not be surprised by who she likes. If they knew she was a changeling, they would turn on her so fast I'd be afraid for her life. Aww, poor Tia being reminded of what she can't eat anymore. Ouch, lost taste for pineapple and teriyaki sauce because of one food experiment, Erica had to endure a lot over the summer. Heh, never had a bison burger myself and each time it is mentioned I want to.
Erica and Cally at the P&P Roleplaying club table, codename of Gazebo and he actually did what they think to his little brother, attacked by a Gazebo in an RPG, classic. Whoa, girl's BIT came from her fighter, dragonblooded, exotic beauty imo. Chessa Barnes aka Maidenclaw, loving the codenames. Hehe, new friend and Erica and Penny got Ruby and Matt together, nice.
Marcus aka Retrofit is Cheesa little brother, and Pat her official twin brother, they sorta adopted each other, okay, I want to read the story of their origin and how they came together. Big sister working on campus and all of them in Poe, dang, really, really want to read the story of their summer.
Fra with the Whateley Sports Club, nice students who can't be part of teams otherwise having a place at Whateley. Gardening Club, wonder if members volunteer to help maintain the school grounds. Nana Bosch and Hannah Sammish, poor Hannah being kept from going rushing to meet people with new powers, aww.
Cally having to not be obvious ogling girls, darn, with the new Venus Inc. girls that is rough. And it making her think she would fit in with the Amazons even more, not having to hide her inner self, this is very bad. Euro-Promotional League and Therese Vitesse there, yay, that makes 3 girls from the Vitesse family. Ah, the twin's big sister is Adrienne. Kirsten, jealous girl of Erica having the codename she wants, just what we don't need.
Pins for the girls, Italy's flag is interesting color combination and description. Gregory Crumbley taking Cally behind the booth to meet everyone else, Jeanette and Alvery are there, wonder who "She" is they are arguing about. Nice chat with Jeanette, Irish singing, plus singing from her dreams like nothing you've ever heard, whoa. Alvery seeming to indicate it is something for Sidhe only, at least with the signals she is giving.
Boy, that is a lot of Germans at Whateley. SturmMeister, poor Erica straight and finding him hot. Talk about Germany's stance on vigilantism, yikes that is strict, not even good Samaritan laws. Mme. Prudhomme wishes StrumMeister to be there if Erica has any questions, dang she is thorough. Oh boy, trying to avoid Fra and runs into a mountain, another guy she can't help but check out, her mind betrays her too easily. Andrzej, 4th year, oh boy. Great, I'm curious what this guy meant as well.
Kirsten giving imaginary demerits to Erica over every conceivable fault, good grief. Inkblood is Andrzej's codename, villain's son and Kirsten is a bigot towards relatives of villain relatives, ugh. Great, she knows Abendritter is Erica's last name and going to have Arni dig into that, this girl is psycho stalker obsessed.
Cally sensing the psychic equivalent of Europe within a hundred square feet of grass, interesting. Interesting, never heard of Eurovision contest until now, nice conversation for Cally. Laura showing up, telling about Emile and Dalton, the Unladen Swallows and everyone is putting them down, but Cally wishes to hear them for herself. And get there right as Nick is tuning his electric guitar.
And they don't believe their story about meeting Vanessa Jackson and jammed a bit. Saying Nick can't do Hendrix, never assume you know someone's skill level. Plays that good and still one of the adults says he heard Hendrix live and he could sing as well. Hehehe, teacher tossing her pink bra at Nick, got swept up by his rendition of Purple Haze. Dang, making me wish I could actually hear Cally sing this with the band backing her up.
Dang, everyone responding, not a dry eye, poor Cally, just makes you wish you could help her someone how. Hehe, still funny seeing Cally and the others get Laura to be their techie. Nefertiti Copeland giving her a friendly flying tackle, she has a great mix of friends. Oh boy, hip bump, poor Cally and her inner self might push her into joining something very bad.
Macarthur Price, guy comes across as a creep, friends with Fra but after Cally. The more I read of his thoughts about her, the sicker I get. Oh brother, he feels the emotions behind Cally's singing but is arrogant enough to think she is singing for him.
Erica back and wanting another bison burger, Tanya already digging in, everyone there but Morgana isn't around. Oh boy, going off to see Brita, no one wanting to explain why Brita had a big confrontation with Morgana at the dorm party and Erica thinking she will never find out why. And hearing about the note from another girl to go see Brita sets off Erica's danger sense, in a sense, knowing they need to stop a problem.
Oh boy, Cally coming back and everyone but Vic has gone to find Morgana, so she wanders off and Brita finds her. Brita lying about why she got into a fight with Morgana, typical. Even Alvery is friends with Brita, just great. And of course Brita brings up that story knowing it is about Cally, manipulative b. Great, lured in by Brita's "understanding and compassionate nature".
Erica and the others going into the woods to search for Morgana, what did Erica run into and dang, that sonic weapon Fake Stahlfaust was using is brutal. All of them coming to Morgana's aid while Laura calls security, if I remember correctly. Never make Bianca mad, plus this girl saying she isn't a real girl is showing how arrogant she is, underestimating her opponent. At least security drones showed up before Laura's bluff could be called.
Kammie Ovellette really is foolish for doing this and thinking she would get away with it. Trying to blame it on Morgana, calling her a tranny in her head, ugh, glad this girl didn't get off light.
Oh boy, recapping the fight to Cally and she doesn't believe it was Brita, this is going to cause problems between her and Erica at this rate. Great, Cally is believing the lies of Brita over her friend, this is very bad. And now Cally is upset over what happened and confused, poor kid, it gets worse before it gets better at this rate.
Ouch, Cally avoiding Erica and it is hurting her. At this rate it is going to end up in a fight between friends, I hope I'm wrong.
Poor Cally, she forgets where she is, that faking someone's appearance and voice isn't out of the question. And she has the beginnings of an anxiety attack at the thought of arguing, to go against everyone and say it wasn't Stahlfaust who attacked Morgana, she is worse off with stress and anxiety than I am in some ways. Changing the subject matter and talking about Nick that way, one way to cope with it, but not for long.
Talk with Vickie, nice burger cafe. Vickie Stone, what a minute, is that a reference to Victor Stone aka Cyborg of DC Comics. Thank you, Vickie, for pointing out the obvious things of Whateley and saying Cally and Erica need to make up sooner rather than later..
And Milena shows up to talk to Erica, current leader in the cottage drama-llama races, hehe, love how she put that. Oooo, detention listings and not hard to get if you know how, very interesting. There's a kid in Hawthorne who sweats napalm now, yikes. And at least now Erica knows who really attacked Morgana and can inform the others, plus make up with Cally.
Sister Secret, love Milena's codename. And she goes to confront Kammie about what happen and even knows a secret that Dennon doesn't know...yet, scaring Kammie's roommate out like that, loving her more by the minute. Ooo, talking to Milena like that, Kammie has some guts. I pity her and Brita if they mess without any of the Poesie freshmen again, have a feeling Milena could ruin them without lifting a finger.
Made up and then Erica reveals the kiss between her and Fra, oh boy. *eyes bug out* Cally is very protective of her friends, Fra better lay low for a while. *eyes bug out even more* Okay, that is a nice and twisted way to kill someone, hiding the cyanide in the icing behind almond paste. And Essemmelle under orders to hex Fra if he tried anything funny at the mixer, that guy is going to be in a world of pain if he ever hurts any of the girls in their cottage. Random Italian and German insults, way to make her think you are crazy.
Powers Theory, more interaction with other students, hope Cally can block their emotions better with her mind shield. Darn, entire M3 crew there and first thing teacher does is break them up, Cally needs friends around her. Assay aka Hannah Sammish if I remember correctly, is the teacher's assistant, groan. Groundpounder, interesting look.
Bailey aka Backtrack, Heartfinder, and Pat aka Hat Trick, not a bad group for Cally to be in. So Pat is an empath, Cally is of course and empath and siren, Bailey George is a psychometrist, and demonstrates his power and it is very impressive. And tales of how they each dealt with their form of empath and power, Cally taking months to get her shields right, Bailey having to wear gloves and what he saw with his powers, ewww from the sounds of it.
And Pat's power is interesting to say the least, all that data coming at him, focus for more detail, potent ability with training but no ability to shield, yikes. Bailey trying to tell that Zapper is just a friend, hehe, at least the others agree not to tell what they learn.
And seeing Assay in her Powers Lab Independent Study, fun. Oh boy, flavour of Erica's Exemplar is off to her, she might out her accidentally about not being a mutant. Invictus aka Tanya's PK field is harmonizing on itself, wonder what that means for her. DragonsFyre aka Morgana has an aura that feels like it is more real than her, why do I have a bad feeling about that. Glyph aka Bianca almost glowing when she does something magical, why do I have the feeling that is bigger than Assay or the teacher suspects.
Arbolita makes her think she is a tree, strange. Tidestriker having redundant powers, weird how she describes it, wonder what is going on with him. How she describes Hat Trick's power functioning, very unusual. Have a feeling if she had been in Gen 1 she would have some strange things to say about more than a few students then. That last line though, so ominous, never pondering why someone wants to chat with her about others powers.
7' high doors and Nick still has to duck some to enter a room or building, if that doesn't make you realize how big he is nothing will.
Charger, good codename and love the receptionist teasing him. Richard Bergamot, great, he is a fanboy is Dr. DNA's work and even ask if Nick was originally human."Rules are rules, young man," the receptionist replied with a bit of a grin at his attitude. Nick shrugged.
750 lbs. maximum lift, 4 and half horsepower, dang. Interesting how they calculate horsepower as well. Rate as Exemplar 3 for strength and speed if human, impressive. Energizer 2, bio-electricity specialization. And Nick has found out how brutal Powers Testing can be.
Claudio studies science, wonder what their older brother is up to. Aww, getting to call Nefertiti by Neff, cute. Nina Blake, with the fashions on show at Whateley and especially by Venus Inc, poor girl is going to exhaust herself. Vickie in the biology class with them as well, guess she is trying to expand her talents. Ah, counselor wouldn't let her change it, oldest story in the book. Nina and Neff not too upbeat about Survival, wonder if Imp is still subbing for the class sometimes. Boy, everyone is expanding their group of friends quickly, nice to see.
Macarthur Price once more, perving on Cally and whistling at her. To the point Groundpounder says he doesn't have a chance. Mac's arrogance is going to get him hurt at this rate or arrested for sexual assault if he goes too far.
A chat with Penny about the experience of enhancement and how the brain functions afterwards, Erica not thinking it has affected her mental workings, bwahahaha. A German class with the seniors, including SturmMeister, oh boy. Dang, Kirsten tries to punk her but Erica is fluent in German and schools her. Nice teacher, Kirsten needs to keep her big mouth shut though. Karl Auer, 'There are idiots who are teacher.' I like him, he's silly. And Erica has realized Kirsten is targeting her.
A music class but not the regular one, huh. Only in the class by appointment, Emile, Cally, Kieran, and Tobias, nice start, wonder what music they can make together. Boy, Toby has a lot of instruments he plays, not wonder he is late. Nick getting an invite for next semester, nice. Mr. August seems like a nice guy, one of those teachers who loves to help his students learn and grow.
Only now does Erica realize the folly of trying to take on 8 classes a day to get them out of the way sooner. In History class with Jimmy, nice. Mr. DuChamp, someone was going to make an insult, *sighs* Teacher who will provide trigger warnings for students if needed, no idea what some of these students have gone through. And yet Mr. Darby has to be an ass about the whole thing. Considering the school they go to, I would be worried about having a teacher's attention in that way, those brothers are going to learn things the hard way.
And a spider in the slide show to make his point, scaring the Darby brothers, I like Mr. DuChamp, tough love. PTSD, poor Billy Boudreaux. Half the class raised their hand, including Jimmy. Traumatic triggers and yikes, lucky no one got hurt, footage from the Fools Fight triggered someone.
Cally and Erica back to their morning routine of running, with Natalie Macauliffe, junior high exemplar, along. Physique, nice codename, simple and to the point. A girl in a headscarf zooming out of Whitman, wonder who. Chessa and Pat show up, Pat banged up already that early in the morning, seesh. Combat survival course, yikes, sounds brutal compared to normal survival class.
Darn, that fun moment ruined by the Amazon jogging team watching them, not good."Hey, I got an 18 in Dexterity, and I plan to enjoy it!" The gamer girl fumed a bit, nose twitching. Then, with a tremulous snirk, she led the others with a loud bray of laughter.
Helping first-time students with German, sounds fun, best time I had in late elementary was tutoring 1st graders. Kirsten messing with her in another way, only having the absolute newbs sent to Erica, just has to be Kirsten messing with her. Oh crud, Saumer, someone who knew Eric, there at Whateley. Ouch, so frazzled by seeing Saumer she didn't pay attention in World History, she is freaking out.
Great, calls Uncle Adolf for help about the situation, tell him Hiram Saumer is there and Adolf just says to hello to him, good grief. At least he gave her some advice to calm her down enough to think on the matter, he is right, only way Hiram can know she was Eric is to tell him directly or someone else to out her somehow.
Nick and AJ heading towards the Back Quad, AJ thinking NIck will get rejected when he tries out for the band, hah. White Stripes for his audition, nice choice. After the horror that is Jericho's outfits, nothing less will faze me.
Lisa Jenkins in the crowd, 'CNR' off the album Alpocalypse. Interesting song from the first lyrics, never heard it myself before. Now that is a fun song and Nick rocked out to it.
Cally trying to calm herself before her audition, poor girl underestimates her epic singing ability. Little imps of her psyche, would like to bop them all on the head. Neff, Nina, and Vicky there for support, and Erica missed Nick's performance, darn. Weird Al song, should have known. Nick helping in her audition, she is going to blow everyone away.
Kieran Mason on the saxophone and Tobias is a Sidhe, didn't wish to assume just because he has pointed ears. Oooo, is the anime theme song it reminds Cally of from Cowboy Bebop, that one has great saxophone that are higher notes performed fast.
*awestruck* Singing that song, a ballad for her, just pulls at the heartstrings. Dang, had me tearing up a bit, reminds me of myself a little, letting fears and insecurities control me too much. Love Cally as a character even more now.
Pat having piano lessons on Wednesdays, and consulting a magic 8 ball on whether to trust Erica with how his powers work, at least some of them, curiouser and curiouser. His power guiding him so whatever his does looks cool, but only when other people are around to watch. Ouch, thinking he is a fraud because of his power. Double ouch, combat androids to determine if he retains anything from Martial Arts class and can barely play Chopsticks on the piano when alone. Can see why he thinks he is a fraud and his power is frustrating. Poor guy, hope things get better for Pat and he can learn things without the need for his power.
Brita storming through the Crystal Hall in a mood, upset about Erica and Cally, thinking they are perfect if it weren't for their friends who are changelings. Scowling at Hat Trick and Pat, if the school knew how much she has dug into the private information of other students she and anyone else involved would probably be facing expulsion at best.
Okay, she needs to go, now!Soon, others would burn.
Kirsten having all that info dug up on Erica, this is going to backfire on her and possibly the school at this rate, if Erica's unpleasant relatives find out where she is. Great, they are digging up information on her family now, little creeps. Stupid graphic novel collection, that kind of information shouldn't be that readily available. Great, what would she do with that information, spread false rumors of Erica being related to Baron Dammerung, wouldn't put it past her.
Oh great, Kristen wishes to have a word with Erica, blackmail probably. Great, Erica thinks Kirsten knows about her having been Eric, not her ancestry. Yikes, escape, takedown and then run, all because she thinks Kirsten knows something she doesn't.
And Kirsten is arrogant, believing she knows Erica's true secret, overconfident fool. And she thinks Erica realizes she demanded she give up her codename, assuming things left and right this girl. And no, the codename would not be open for you to use, the original owner would never allow that to happen.
Great, Erica only 100 yards from Kirsten at the base of a maple tree, sobbing. Poor girl, thinking she has lost what she sought to protect, all thanks to a girl obsessed with her grandmother's codename and what it represents. A two-headed Boston terrier, oh boy, one guess whose pet this is. And I was wrong, a normal looking boy except for the bright pink eyes.
Okay, saying he is the dog's boy, confused now. Cherry strudel, Daniel Diggens aka Donut can make food or at least pastries at will, nice power. Whoa, guys in the lab don't know how his power works yet. Okay, that is a long name, understand why he just calls the dog Cookie. Boy, with a yarn like that Daniel could be a storyteller. Hehehe, hugged him and kiss on the cheek, because she chickened out of kissing him on the lips at the last moment. Erica's hormones don't fight fair. A date Sunday with Daniel and Cookie, so glad she met these two, she needs a nice boy in her life and the boost in confidence the encounter has given her.
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More seriously, I do hope it comes out because I don't like one bit the idea the Attack Bitches could got their hooks on Calliope and Erica and begin whatever mind-raping they've got in store for their new 'recruits' so they become like them, or worst, decide to take revenge on the 'deceitful False-Mädchen' if they iscover the truth after Calliope get enrolled for instance, and I don't like the way Stahlfaust sees Pat. And seeing the humble pie force-fed to Kristen would be most sweet. And I'm genuinely curious about the moment all girls of
*WMG, but not so Wild Mass in my opinion, from my part. Back in G1, the Wicked Bitch of the Great North decided she wanted to invade Whateley and build up an army to do so, and she was betting on a .ten year timetable... Well, it will be ten years soon, and she could potentially advance her timetable a little now Carson and so many heavy-hitters from the staff are out. And an excellent move during an invasion is always subverting some people inside to your side... And the Attack Bitches won't be the first psycho-lesbians she twists around her little finger. Note that I think it will happen, not that it already happened (Although the already may be a possibility). I can only wish to the Attack Bitches they get the Don Assholo/Stupido treatment.
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Also, I'm interested that the Brit from the Beret Mafia wears the cross of St. George rather than the Union Jack. Did the Scottish independence vote go the other way in the WU?
("England", technically, does not exist as a country. It's a nation. The country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But let's not go there, it can get confusing.)
And I'm getting a bit worried about Calliope's chances with the Amazons. Her wish for acceptance, if granted by them, might do bad things for her stance of pacifism. But she is prime material for their recruitment mindset.... The gender-bending not-withstanding that is.
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As opposed to Morgana, who was also a boy turned into a girl by her mutation? Careful, StahlFaust . If you continue to have contradictory opinions like this I might start thinking that you're a crazy person, despite the reasonable and well-thought out positions you take.And then... Pat Barnes. She'd read her girls' reports and immediately checked the school records. A boy turned female by mutation, she could almost accept as an unfortunate twist of fate. Almost. A person such as Pat... no. There were no words for such treachery.
I do find the implication that joining the Amazons is brain-melting to be interesting. I wonder if the effect is conscious, or a power that StahlFaust (or one of the others) is unaware of? If it is conscious, my guess is that it isn't actually StahlFaust causing it - that it's one of the other girls, controlling the group from behind the scenes.
Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.
And Donut and Cookie are hilarious. I look forward to seeing more of them.
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: I do find the implication that joining the Amazons is brain-melting to be interesting. I wonder if the effect is conscious, or a power that StahlFaust (or one of the others) is unaware of? If it is conscious, my guess is that it isn't actually StahlFaust causing it - that it's one of the other girls, controlling the group from behind the scenes.
Put my money on totally conscious, and done by Eurydice. The way Kammie made 'second date' jokes about that one and her powers gives me the creeps.
Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.
Who is he, and can we have lins to these fanfics? Right now, I was thinking he's a FtM changeling, but for some reason I'm also thinking he could be a more 'classical' FtM transgender. Both of the answers would explain why Attack Bitch Alpha want him dead.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.
Even though it's good to see Chessa and her brother, Pat was also one of my favorites.
Arcanist Lupus wrote: And Donut and Cookie are hilarious. I look forward to seeing more of them.
Cookie's name was just the right mix of appalling and adorable.
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Kaitha39 wrote: Also, I'm interested that the Brit from the Beret Mafia wears the cross of St. George rather than the Union Jack. Did the Scottish independence vote go the other way in the WU?
("England", technically, does not exist as a country. It's a nation. The country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But let's not go there, it can get confusing.)
What's so confusing about it?
State: 1, Montevideo Theory> a permanent population, a defined territory, a government, and a capacity to enter into relations with other States.
State: 2, Constituitive Theory a country exist if it is recognized as sovereign by other countries. Thus, if other countries recognize a country as independent, it is, even if the country does not have control of its territory or a permanent population.
Nation: a group of people who share the same culture, language, institutions, religion, and history—usually a group of people larger than a tribe or community. (the Kurds for example, they are a nation, but do not have a state)
Country: Typically synonymous with State. A self-governing political entity.
Nation-State: a nation possessing an independent state of their own.
When I was in Scotland people were quick to identify as English, Scottish, Irish, etc. Much like Southerners in the USA often identify themselves as Southerners or by their state instead of merely identifying as "Americans" even when abroad. Several of us redneck types were quick to educate the English on the fact that we were not yanks/yankees and that we despised those loathsome critters from up North. The Scots understood our position on the matter rather well.
The Saint George pin makes perfect sense to me, just like a Scot wearing a Saint Andrews Cross or a Thistle. Or perhaps an Irishman wearing a Shamrock. I would not be all that surprised if in some parts of Ireland some folks still lean more toward the provincial flags or maybe even the old Harp flag. After all, many Irishmen identify themselves by province or county affiliation.
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MM2ss wrote:
Kaitha39 wrote: Also, I'm interested that the Brit from the Beret Mafia wears the cross of St. George rather than the Union Jack. Did the Scottish independence vote go the other way in the WU?
("England", technically, does not exist as a country. It's a nation. The country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But let's not go there, it can get confusing.)
What's so confusing about it?
State: 1, Montevideo Theory> a permanent population, a defined territory, a government, and a capacity to enter into relations with other States.
State: 2, Constituitive Theory a country exist if it is recognized as sovereign by other countries. Thus, if other countries recognize a country as independent, it is, even if the country does not have control of its territory or a permanent population.
Nation: a group of people who share the same culture, language, institutions, religion, and history—usually a group of people larger than a tribe or community. (the Kurds for example, they are a nation, but do not have a state)
Country: Typically synonymous with State. A self-governing political entity.
Nation-State: a nation possessing an independent state of their own.
When I was in Scotland people were quick to identify as English, Scottish, Irish, etc. Much like Southerners in the USA often identify themselves as Southerners or by their state instead of merely identifying as "Americans" even when abroad. Several of us redneck types were quick to educate the English on the fact that we were not yanks/yankees and that we despised those loathsome critters from up North. The Scots understood our position on the matter rather well.
The Saint George pin makes perfect sense to me, just like a Scot wearing a Saint Andrews Cross or a Thistle. Or perhaps an Irishman wearing a Shamrock. I would not be all that surprised if in some parts of Ireland some folks still lean more toward the provincial flags or maybe even the old Harp flag. After all, many Irishmen identify themselves by province or county affiliation.
And you also get people from older regions within the UK who identify as Cornish, Gwynnedd, Pictish, Celtoi, for some small examples.
Some of the St.George's Cross-wearers are more into their English nationalism, heading into the National Front-territory, ie. UK flavour of right-wing fascism.
This is usually expressed as prejudice against anyone who is not White, Anglo-Saxon, Protestant, as well as a large dash of aggression against people from other parts of the British Empire claiming their rights, as was originally laid out ion the treaty's that led to them becoming part of the Empire.
This is also part of the de-humanisation process that is used against people that you are stealing energy from. "They deserve it because they are uncivilised/they are barbarians/they have no souls/etc."
You get this in almost all cultures/empires that used some form of slavery.
I can't find it with a quick google, but i'll keep looking, but there was an excellent article about this topic, that looked at why Rome didn't get the industrial revolution, due to the way that they approached slavery.
It doesn't get much mention in the history books, but the British Empire nearly went the same way...
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I am not all that up to speed on what is going on in the UK at the present (other than the Brexit thing, but even there I don't know much in terms of details). In the US a similar situation arises with the various "Confederate flags". The racists, KKK, and other fringe type groups have made it almost a form of social suicide to display any of them (or at least the better known flags). Yet many folks did or still do fly them for other reasons that are much more honorable and acceptable. Still, they end up getting painted with the broad brush thanks to the nuts. I have gotten to the point that I only fly three flags on a regular basis now (US, Navy and Alabama). I still fly others at certain times (Scottish, UK, Imperial German, the old French flag (pre tri-colour), those of some of the old German states (Prussia and Württemberg) and even a few of the less well known Confederate flags.
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That's what I tell my militant friends, after all...
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- MM2ss
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I think the best I ever heard was, "If vibrators could mow grass I wouldn't need you" (not directed at me, thankfully, as that is pretty damn cold-hearted)
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ahem. Anyway, regarding flags... I really don't have much use for the things. No, not even during the World Cup. Being raised during a military dictatorship that took the whole "national symbols" thing way too seriously sorta fueled my cynicism. But still, I'm curious: which old French flag? There's a number of possible ones, but AFAIK none of them was actually the "French flag." -- there were naval ensigns, standards of the royal family and such...
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Hardric wrote: At this point I'm so hoping for reveals, like the fact Oma Abendritter is actually Eisenmädel the First,
That was already revealed. It was straight out stated in her previous stories that Oma was the original Eisenmadel and was giving her the name as a legacy.
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The cross of St. George is only really used by two groups in the UK, or at least the towns of Ipswich, Chelmsford, Southampton, Canterbury, and Grimsby, which are the places I've personally lived:
1) Sports venues where the nations are playing each other, so the need to distinguish between English, Welsh, Scottish and (Northern) Irish is actually apparent.
2) By racist groups doing protest marches against multiculturalism.
There is also a bit of an issue, which rankles many of the older English people, that there are certain things that the Scottish, Welsh, and Irish are permitted to do, but the English aren't really seen as able to do. Prime example, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland all have their own political assemblies, but Westminster (the one in England) is for all of the UK, and there isn't one for England itself. It leads many of the older generations to ask "Are we one country or not?"
Needless to say, the point is that most English people would wear a Union Jack to represent their country, not the Cross.
Also? My original meaning of "It gets confusing" is defining the terms of: Britain, Great Britain, (they're different) and the United Kingdom.
(Well, I mean, CGP Grey did a video, but meh)
@ Konzill,
I think Hardric was meaning they couldn't wait for in-story reveals to other characters. We know who Oma is, but Kirstin doesn't. Hardric wants to see what happens when she finds out.
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konzill wrote:
Hardric wrote: At this point I'm so hoping for reveals, like the fact Oma Abendritter is actually Eisenmädel the First,
That was already revealed. It was straight out stated in her previous stories that Oma was the original Eisenmadel and was giving her the name as a legacy.
I was thinking about Kirsten discovering the truth.
'Hahahaha, this descendant from Baron Dämmerung will give me the Eisenmädel title, Generic Minion."
"Euh, Kirsten. I have two bad news. First, Abendritter the son pretty much gave his father's legacy the middle finger and was fighting Themaagenten too."
"I don't care about that. Only the Eisenmädel title is important."
"That's the other one. I'm pretty sure the grandmother is Eisenmädel the first. Here, check this"
"..."
"Euh, Doyle, Wahnsinnig just had a stroke, she needs help."
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Don't Drick and Drive.
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What do we know about Kammie's powers again? I can't remember. But yeah, that scene was way creepy.Hardric wrote:
Arcanist Lupus wrote: I do find the implication that joining the Amazons is brain-melting to be interesting. I wonder if the effect is conscious, or a power that StahlFaust (or one of the others) is unaware of? If it is conscious, my guess is that it isn't actually StahlFaust causing it - that it's one of the other girls, controlling the group from behind the scenes.
Put my money on totally conscious, and done by Eurydice. The way Kammie made 'second date' jokes about that one and her powers gives me the creeps.
Pat is from Wasamon's fic "Keeping Cool". The original was lost in the Great Site Migration, but I believe that a few people still have copies around. I forget who, though.Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.
Who is he, and can we have lins to these fanfics? Right now, I was thinking he's a FtM changeling, but for some reason I'm also thinking he could be a more 'classical' FtM transgender. Both of the answers would explain why Attack Bitch Alpha want him dead.
As for Pat's exact situation...
The way that scene was worded sounded very ominous... but Bergamot shows up in the next scene doing power testing for Nick, so it would not be unreasonable to assume that he is collecting the information for the school itself. That doesn't mean that he actually is, though.Valentine wrote: On a bit different part of the story, just whom is Mr. Bergamot collecting all the testing data for?
I'm actually far more interested in a different part of the scene.
So is it Bergamot or Hannah that is missing a soul?Bells were warning of the impending second period, and only one soul was left in the classroom. Hannah Sammish, also sometimes maybe occasionally known as Assay when she wanted to sound professional, was busy tidying up. She didn't need to go anywhere.
"Read, Miss Assay?" Mr. Bergamot asked. He pulled up a chair and set out a binder on the table.
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: What do we know about Kammie's powers again? I can't remember. But yeah, that scene was way creepy.
Nothing in the former G2 stories I could check, but the way she talks, she clearly has some psi factor, and empathy from Calliope was the only reason she didn't used it full force here, 'second dates' be damned (Duck, I need a story where these bitches bit the dust hard. Their fighting ring discovered and them being forced of demolishing it and patching up the 'secret entrance' to it themselves?).
Pat is from Wasamon's fic "Keeping Cool". The original was lost in the Great Site Migration, but I believe that a few people still have copies around. I forget who, though.
As for Pat's exact situation...
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Your second guess is right... sort of. Pat is a FtM transgender MtF changeling. He was male physically and mentally, transformed physically into a girl, but presents as and considers himself to be a boy.
A shame for the story. As for the spoiler... Duck, the Attack Bitches really need the Don Assholo/Stupido treatment before it's too late.
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As much as I dislike Stahlfaust, she really called it in one there. She's just wrong about the why. A pseudo-demon, more or less a witch, and as far as we know, a test subject.Morgana and her two friends, the tricolore of the heresy
I loved that Erica's first date will be with someone actually nice, and not a subject of her imposed heterosexual lust. It was nice seeing Donut outside of the remedial class he has with Taka, spreading the love of baked goods.
I'm definitely not sure what to make of Calliope and the Amazons. She's looking for a sympathetic ear, especially since she's a closeted lesbian, but she couldn't possibly have found a worse mentor in those girls. Part 1 revealed that Calliope has a serious temper about injustices, and if the Amazons start worming their way in it could be very bad for M3's overall peace. Much worse than Jimmy and Tanya finding out about Bianca's background. They're both pretty cautious about joining, especially after hearing all the rumors, but Calliope's insecurities about her sexuality are something that I expect Eurydice to fully exploit.
Argh! If she's only talk to her friends or teachers! They'd move her to Poe, and she'd find all the support she needed and more!
The miscommunication between Kirsten and Erica is just too funny. Kirsten's power set is pretty scary to be honest, and her codename makes perfect sense now. Still not sure how the steamroller came into play though. I'm still imagining the scenario where she finds out the truth, and harasses Erica endlessly until she takes her home to meet Erica's grandmother, with her entire collection of graphic novels. That, or Kirsten and Erica work together to smash Green Cross, and Kirsten finally gets her dream of being a hero. She's likable, she's just getting carried away about her favorite topic. Like Beret Mafia warned Erica about her.
Is the last line of Assay's POV meant to be ominous? It sounded ominous!
I'm a little confused about Alvery's appearance. In the previous mentions of her stalking Taka, she has medium brown hair. Or is this not the same one from IDTWIKA? Or is her hair turning aflame the reason the other students don't mess with her or Venus Inc.?
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Assay is too much the perfect Sensor Character to seem human. Betting she's labmade or something.
... Gen2 is missing Cyborg / Nanotech characters. Betting she's one.
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OMG. Gazebo! ... Now I need to check that in Wasamon's other stories too! ... ... I'll just ROFL if that's secretly a Pizza Parlor Princesses ref!
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Lol if any of the Amazons are secretly Freya, after a rejuv or something.
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So, anyone think Vanessa Jackson's still operating under the name Vox?
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Cookie and Donut! Nice!
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The Witch Quartet... Wait... They're sorta TLW 2.0, but more Team Awesome 'cause they aren't in Wondercute?
But, they're their own group. ... Unless they get tutoring from a former member of one of those groups...
... No... TLW + Mischief isn't TLW anymore, it's the Cutettes? So, this new group of 4 girls is Cutettes 2.0?
Wait... The TLW are running around Gen2 with Adamant wands!
Wait... That Dr. Diabolik Best Lift / AG Tech is Dynamorph-based... Is Gen2 Anti-Grav also mass-produced Dynamorph stuff? Or pure tech, no sentient forces inside?
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konzill wrote: I lost it when I got to the D&D club member named Gazebo. And the question I most want answered is who will have to face the Gazebo alone come Combat finals time?
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Come on it's obviously going to be Zephyr.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Malady: MageOhki was actually the one to come up with Gazebo; I just got to use him first. No real connection to the story you're thinking of, but thanks for remembering

SirLee: let me know if there are any specific characters you'd like help with in the wiki and I'll see what I can reasonably get away with mentioning.
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... What is Gazebo's power, exactly??
... Wait... Might the Amazons be actively suppressing other lesbians, so that they're only only ones frosh lezies can turn to?
So, Security ''knows'' that it's that girl who was hiding under a holo, as Stahlfaust?? ... Although, it's not an offense to use holos, I think? But it does warrant investigation?
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in which they must chop down the biggest tree in the forest with a herring?Sir Lee wrote: What I would like to see is Gazebo in a Combat Final... against a shrubbery.
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I'm sure The Grove will just love watching that.Rose Bunny wrote:
in which they must chop down the biggest tree in the forest with a herring?Sir Lee wrote: What I would like to see is Gazebo in a Combat Final
... against a shrubbery.
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Sir Lee wrote: So... many... new... characters... I don't know even where to begin with the wikifying... F1! F1!
ahem. Anyway, regarding flags... I really don't have much use for the things. No, not even during the World Cup. Being raised during a military dictatorship that took the whole "national symbols" thing way too seriously sorta fueled my cynicism. But still, I'm curious: which old French flag? There's a number of possible ones, but AFAIK none of them was actually the "French flag." -- there were naval ensigns, standards of the royal family and such...
The second flag of the Kingdom of France, blue with three gold fleur-de-lis. Or to get all technical..."Azure three fleur-de-lis Or".
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Yes. Morgana's story has the adults' POV on the situation, if you want to refresh on that.Malady wrote: So, Security ''knows'' that it's that girl who was hiding under a holo, as Stahlfaust??
I find it hilarious how even the man-haters are obsessed with penis.Dorms of our Lives (part 2) wrote: Erica von Abendritter and Fiorella Persico, Eisenmädel and Calliope, as fine a pair of Amazon candidates as they might find this year, already burned by contact with the toxic phallic threat.
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Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...


I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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andThe Bard wrote: "The Lady doth protest too much, methinks"
Irina Dunn (not Gloria Steinen, as is usually thought) wrote: "A woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle."
The point being that, if the Amazons simply didn't feel sexually attracted to males, penises wouldn't be important to them -- in fact, they would be pretty much irrelevant. This level of obsessions suggests some hidden level of emotion -- either a repressed attraction/fascination (possible if some of their members have been brainwashed into "the Sisterhood", as has been suggested) or some form of trauma (rape survivors?).
Consider, for a mirrored view along the sexual preference range, this:
often used as support to the tongue-in cheek Haggard's Law :Bob Schooley wrote: "Racists never imagine what it's like to be like the person they hate, homophobes imagine it in graphic detail for hour upon hour."
The likelihood of a person harboring secret desires to engage in sexual and/or romantic activities with members of the same sex is directly proportional to the frequency and volume of said person's vocalized objections to homosexuality.
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Astrodragon wrote:
Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...![]()
Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!
Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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Astrodragon wrote:
Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...
Does it have anything to do with being barbed with justice ?
elrodw wrote: Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!
I hope you're talking about whatever Colossus of the X-Men has going on, because articulated joints and rivets just aren't my cup of tea.
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I got those vibes too, but I also wouldn't be surprised if they were simply playing along in order to fit into the group.Sir Lee wrote: if some of their members have been brainwashed into "the Sisterhood", as has been suggested
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Astrodragon wrote:
Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...![]()
Is she going to order the thing Strega bought Envy, or is she going to order a Prickles 2.0?
I always thought it was Morgana being catty. Stall Force. Like stall speed.elrodw wrote: Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!
Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.
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Sir Lee wrote: Two quotes come to mind...
andThe Bard wrote: "The Lady doth protest too much, methinks"
Irina Dunn (not Gloria Steinen, as is usually thought) wrote: "A woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle."
The point being that, if the Amazons simply didn't feel sexually attracted to males, penises wouldn't be important to them -- in fact, they would be pretty much irrelevant. This level of obsessions suggests some hidden level of emotion -- either a repressed attraction/fascination (possible if some of their members have been brainwashed into "the Sisterhood", as has been suggested) or some form of trauma (rape survivors?).
Consider, for a mirrored view along the sexual preference range, this:often used as support to the tongue-in cheek Haggard's Law :Bob Schooley wrote: "Racists never imagine what it's like to be like the person they hate, homophobes imagine it in graphic detail for hour upon hour."
The likelihood of a person harboring secret desires to engage in sexual and/or romantic activities with members of the same sex is directly proportional to the frequency and volume of said person's vocalized objections to homosexuality.
Great quotes, and nice insight. Also consider the possibility that StahlFaust might be using metonymy here, i.e. taking her idea of the male establishment / patriarchy and using its most visibly useless (to her) appendage as a symbol of the whole stupidly useless endeavor. Also, the fact that phallocracy has actually made it into dictionaries might suggest that she's also drawing on older militant memes here as well.
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elrodw wrote:
Astrodragon wrote:
Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...![]()
Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!
Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.
OK, we need at least one scene where Morgana misnames Brita to her face, and then gets facially introduced to the steel fist.
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I normally would assume metonymy, yes. But in this case, the particular usage seemed a bit too... emotionally charged. In my personal experience, when I see militant feminists using this particular figure of speech, it's more in an attempt to dehumanize the male gender, in a dismissive way -- we are not people, we are "things". You don't fear "things" or treat them as enemy, you discard them. That's not the vibe I got from the Amazons -- they treat the Penis as the Enemy (capitals added by me). Thus my other comments.Wasamon wrote: Also consider the possibility that StahlFaust might be using metonymy here, i.e. taking her idea of the male establishment / patriarchy and using its most visibly useless (to her) appendage as a symbol of the whole stupidly useless endeavor. Also, the fact that phallocracy has actually made it into dictionaries might suggest that she's also drawing on older militant memes here as well.
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elrodw wrote:
Astrodragon wrote:
Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...![]()
Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!
Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.
Stale Fist?
Oh, Stale Farce!
... Tinfoil Farce?
(If the Attack Bitches ever get dissolved, the nicknames are ready.)
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Hardric wrote: Stale Fist?
You do not want to know the mental image that brings to mind. Eew.
"Seriously, Brita, get some hand sanitizer or something. I'm not gonna even shake hands until you clean up."
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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And unless I'm very much mistaken... I'm of the mind that Dreamer is correct with that tune being the opening for Cowboy Bebop. I thought the very same thing myself.
Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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That's also my assumption. But I'm biased, since Tank! is one of my favorite songs, second only to Guns & Roses by Paradise Lunch.Ametros wrote: And unless I'm very much mistaken... I'm of the mind that Dreamer is correct with that tune being the opening for Cowboy Bebop. I thought the very same thing myself.
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Also, completely forgot to mention that Kieron's code name is in fact Bebop.
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Wasamon wrote: Y'know, I really should have read up more on St. George's Cross before I included that detail... The direction I was coming from was that many (or even most) of the UK kids currently at Whateley in this Gen seem to be associated more with the Commonwealth club over the Berets, while Gregory's much more culturally connected to his friends and cousins on the continent (as seen in the flashback from "Meanwhile at Castle Groenwald"). I even went with putting his coat of arms on the flag board instead of the Union Jack to underline the disagreement a bit more. Probably should have stuck that on him as well instead of the St. George... oh well, live and learn.
Ish...
The Union Jack was used by English nationalists ( and the UK's right-wing) right up until the Scottish, and the Welsh started getting their regional assembly's.
That was when the English nationalists started to use the St.George's Cross, rather than the Union Jack.
There was also a Nazi regiment known as the Legion of St.George, that consisted of people from the Britain who supported the Nazi's against the Soviets, in a similar way to the Vichy government in France.
They were tried for treason after the fighting stopped.
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First of all, it's nice to see how good a reception my character had and I thank you all for this. Life drew me away from this site over the past two years and my muse hasn't been kind to me so I don't know if you're going to see more stories with my name on them or not, time will tell. In the meantime Cally, Nina, Vicky and the others live on in Wasamon's work while I help him as a consultant of a sort.
(Seriously, look at my baby girls all grown up and canon, awww so cute!)
Anyway, I'll try and clear up what I can without giving you spoilers.
First, a bit on how Cally was born. She came from my third Whateleyverse fanfic and the first one I wrote trying to stick as close to canon as possible. As someone might know, I'm MtF transgender, I didn't admit to it until I was in my twenties and I only recently completed my transition – in fact, me going through surgery was part of the reason I've been this busy these last two years, but I digress. The point is, while all our characters are us in some way, Cally is closer to the real me than any other. She was born from the question: what if something happened that caused me to accept I was T* when I was a teen?
So yes, the first not-so-much-of-a-spoiler is that Cally is indeed a changeling. Boy Cally is a lot like me at her age, then I let her evolve spontaneously into something else. I think she'll end up as the kind of person I'd be if I was much more creative and much less sciency; academically speaking I'm much closer to her brother Claudio – I work in the field of biomedical research.
Otherverse is correct in saying Cally is from Liguria. I'm from Genova (you Americans would say “Genoa”) and Calliope comes from there too. In her origin story I used real places as scenery, and someone who knows the city would spot them unless I did a much poorer job than I think. By the way, Otherverse, bello vedere un altro italiano qua! it's nice to see another Italian here!
Going on to Cally's origin story. It was lost in the site crash, and I never put it back up because it was supposed to be adapted for canon quickly. It's been sitting in my hard drive for ages but it has some problems.
Cally appeared originally in two fanfics, Due su Due and Summertime Blues. The former is her origin story proper and it's 99% ready for publishing IMHO. The problem is the latter: it was a crossover with Wasamon's Eisenmadel and it involved the events Cally, Vicky and Erica mention several times in Dorms of Our Lives. I think it's needed to explain how the three of them know each other, but it' unfortunately filled with stuff that simply can't get into canon. It's also very short, so my project was to drop it as an indipendent story and turn it into the ending of Due su Due, hence the delay in publishing the origin story itself. There's an origin story for Nina Blake too, I never started adapting it for canon so it's still available as a fanfic out there somewhere, in the wide wide web. Read it if you like but don't be disappointed if canon Nina turns out to be completely different later.
Finally, a list of random facts and trivia about Cally that come to mind:
1) I realized most of you wouldn't know the pronunciation for Cally's last name. Persico is an old word for “Persian”, so it's pronounced like that, with an accent on the “e”. Incidentally, in Italian, “persico” also means “perch”.
2) I once had a kitten named after a muse. She died after only a dozen days from adopting her, because of a severe encephalithis. When I had to give Cally a codename I somehow thought about that kitten.
3) No, Cally isn't named after the character from the book Middlesex. I found it extremely amusing when I found out there's a famous LGBTI book out there with a character named Calliope.
4) The common theme for Cally's stories is music, so the three Persico siblings were named after famous Italian singers and songwriters from when their parents were young: Claudio Baglioni, Fiorella Mannoia, and you can choose between Francesco De Gregori and Francesco Guccini for the third – I won't tell

5) In keeping with the music/muse/bard theme, all of Cally's POV stories were originally supposed to be named after songs and have the songs lyrics somewhere in the story.
6) Some people argued that Cally acts much more mature than her age, around sixteen or seventeen. It's been a flaw on my part, I admit it. Still, Cally should have been born in 2002. The concept of a high schooler having been born in the third millennium still breaks my mind every time, sorry!
7) Cally was born ten minutes before Francesco. She technically is the older sibling.
8 ) When I wrote the characters for these stories, I thought it would have been fun to model supporting characters after my friends. The only one of them who made it into canon is Victoria Stone, modeled after one of my best friends.
8a) Apparently I never told her about Vicky. She found out about her yesterday and she was quite amused
8b) I never read a DC comic in my entire life. Vicky was named like that just because I liked the sound of it.
9) Diane Davies was the name of an old RPG character of mine. I played her in Vampires:the Masquerade, under the nickname “Red”. The other players never learned her birth name.
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Three things:
1) Calliope's arc has really been special thus far.
2) Cookie is underrated.
3) Any story that includes "Everything is awesome" deserves at least 9/10.

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I am very pleased to see several hurdy-gurdy players posting videos on YT lately, as they are quite amazing instruments. Seriously. In the right hands a wheel fiddle kicks ass, especially when paired with bagpipes. I hope you like a lot of reverb. For my own part, I am hoping that some day we'll see a either Patty Gurdy or Giulhem Desq in concert together with both 2Cellos and Celtica Pipes Rock. Though that might too much all at once...
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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But that left the overeducated dolt sitting in the chair before him. "Yes, Mr. Bergamot?" he inquired wearily.
Well, I laughed.
Now I wonder when we'll meet Mr. Vetiver.
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That being said, thank you for the videos - the music is amazing!
I don't want to go too much O/T, but the sound does remind me a bit of the dudouk.
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Without spoiling too many of the reveals and hints, this is one of those story parts that calls for a second read to pick up on what I missed on the first read-through.
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Rushing to breakfast for their table on the 2nd floor, M3, wonder when they will find there is a price to making a training team as freshmen. Erica introducing Cally to Donut, forgot he had a puppy named Cookie, good to have an excuse to exercise. Cinnamon rolls from Miz Debbie's recipe, darn you, now I want one. Erica asked him out, cute. And we know why Cally isn't interested.
Erica has butterflies in her stomach and is excited about the date, now there is a shift. And Oma was right about loving being a girl, heheh. Aww, Bianca left quickly, Morgana eating more than Erica, and Laura sketching out some random idea on a napkin, wonder what it is. Ah, Donut only give pastries to people who need a pick-me-up. Revealing she has a date, just how good are those cinnamon rolls.
Yikes, Tanya in a foul mood thanks to roommate issues, whacky floor hijinks, and shakedowns of the freshman girls for 'favors', good grief. A redhead named Scarlyt whose not right up there, that alone would have me upset. Laura reminded she volunteered to help with Cally's band, oh boy.
And from Donut aka Daniel Diggins perspective now. Should have a teacher there to help enforce the 1 per customer rule, coming back for 2nds, 4ths and 5ths is just wrong. That job plus that roommate, poor Daniel. Peter Foley aka Humorless, that personality and temperament with a bright red nose, pale skin with a peachy outline around his mouth, and lime green hair that sticks out that way, yikes.
Good thing Daniel knows his favorite pastry and has it ready to calm him down. English class stuff calms his nerve, weren't kidding about Peter being serious. Doc Talltale made Cookie.
A Cerberus, now there is a dog no sane student will mess with.At the shoulder, the devisor's former guard dog stood almost four feet tall and about as broad, with legs that were short only in proportion to the rest of its body. One stubby tail wagged happily while two round heads with mashed in noses and Boston Terrier markings had huge grins. "Warf," they barked in stereo, tongues lolling.
And smart enough to understand what Daniel says and concerned for his health, whoa.
Corporal Jack Ames to train Cookie alongside Daniel, worked K9 training in the past, Whateley gets all kinds for security. And Simms tricked him into it, not telling him the kind of dog Cookie is, heh. No gender and understands every word said, careful about speaking any threats to Daniel within earshot of his dog.The big open field would've been perfect for a baseball diamond, if Whateley did anything so normal. Instead, it looked like a bunch of students were playing catch... about a hundred feet up in the air.
Theater buried under Whateley and connected to the tunnels, very interesting.
Okay, there has to be a story behind that band name. Ow, ow, ow. The thought of those types of 'musical performances' hurt my mind's ears.At the moment, its only use seemed to be to serve as home to Mr. August's advanced music program and its corollary, the band known as the Unladen Swallows. She had yet to hear an explanation for that name that made sense.
Emile's keyboard, please say that is a devisor design. Able to make shadowy copies of himself and plays a quartet with himself, now that is awesome. Dalton on the drums, Kieron tuning his saxophone, Nick playing his electric guitar. Now this is a band I would like to listen to.
Ngaire aka Electradyne is impressive. Aww, Electradyne has a crush on Kieron, cute. Electradyna seems annoyed Laura didn't show up, plus the comment about devisors Cally makes. Good they are all making new friends with some of the same interests.The girl was tall and thin, with long black hair that flowed limply over her shoulders and face. She was dressed for a funeral, almost – all in dark tones to match her hair, but with a low-cut top and a slit up the side. Neither feature did much to reveal anything on her. But then she brought up her instrument, a violin assimilated by a car stereo with a sort of typewriter keyboard and a crank on one end. With a flick of her wrist, she began.
At the first electric note, a ripple of bright yellow raced across her dress and hair. More followed, turning her into a visual expression of chords and measures. Limp tresses gained a life of their own, fanning out and moving in a non-existent breeze as they scintillated.
Erica in the languages lab, feeling guilty about having fun without her friends, and finishing her homework before her date on Sunday. She is too hard on herself sometimes. Kirsten shows up and calls her a Pretender in German, this girl has serious issues. Harassing her and saying she is on to her, calling her Von Abendritter, ugh. At least Erica is starting to realize Kristen knowing about Eric is less likely.
Calling up Uncle Adolf to check out Kristen for her, a dossier within a week, whoa, he does quick work. One big gift to make up for eighteen years for her cousin, and need a gadgeteer or devisor for some of the parts needed for the gift, now I'm curious what he is having made.
Back with Cally and dinner at the Crystal Hall, at least the emotional atmosphere is better. Nefertiti Copeland, Victoria Stone [nice devise], Nina Blake, Laura and her roommate Bailey, nice to get friends together. Holo-suits and something like Jem, Vickie watches some classic cartoons.
Nope, that is about the gist of the show. Cally spots her brother Fra chatting up a girl while staring at her chest, only for Fra to get slapped once again, priceless."Jem and the Holograms! Yanno? Old cartoon about a pop star who used devises to keep her identity secret and fight crime!"
"I'm not sure you're remembering that right," Laura said. Beside her, Bailey tittered.
Seesh, with the way Reverend Barkus preached it is no wonder Daniel doesn't miss going to church. Daniel doesn't know how he got a date already either, I like it when nice guys are chosen over bad boys. Looks out to see Cookie playing with a golden-haired figure, Daniel nervous over his first date so much Lenape figures it out. AKA Darius who has toxic skin and has to wear gloves, eep. He is right though, if a girl ask you out no reason to be nervous.
Both dressed normally and Daniel is still so nervous, hope he gets over it soon. Picnic and Cookie wants to play catch, nice simple first date. Back area of the quad and meat pies, yum.
At least they got him out of there quietly, plus a friend of his mother's to stay with, so that is who Miz Debbie is."Kay, 'kay," he said. "Um... folks moved us up to this small town in Idaho when I was little. More of a commune, actually. I didn't know the word till a few months ago, but it fits, I figger. The Revered... well, he didn't take kindly to, ah, our sort of people, so when my eyes turned pink, my mom and pop helped me get out quietly. They still live there." His smile had quickly turned upside down at that. Cookie padded over to nuzzle his ear.
Erica we know never knew her mom and was raised by her former Nazi-hunting secret agent grandparents. It's complicated, after what happened that is putting it simply.
Was wondering what the limits of his power was. Apple fritters, yum. Quadruple puppy eyes, never let Jade meet Cookie, the cuteness overload will cause a rift to open. Now that was the perfect first date.He gave it a thought. "Prolly, but thing is, I can't produce parts. All or nothin'. And the bigger it is, or the more all at once, the quicker I hit a wall. Little stuff's more easy than a whole cake."
Whirlibird aka Monica Lawrence, poor girl hiding in bushes to cry. Ouch, jealous of the exemplar girls due to her GSD, feathery down in place of hair. Oh boy, she is watching Erica and Daniel's date and it is upsetting her. Liked Daniel because he was nice to her, double ouch. And can hover, shoot, was hoping she had full flight. Runs back into Whitman and right into Anaïs Carrasco.
Thick, frondlike greenery hung over a happily sun-browned face.
Dragged into the dorm lobby for an emotional emergency, Shisa concerned while sitting in Dawn's lap. Wonder who that last girl is, feel like I should recall her name or codename. Crying it out, the girls in Whitman look out for each other, glad to see that. Ophidian upset because a 'pretty' got Daniel instead of one of the Whitman girls, good grief. Oh crud, they are going to believe what Kristen says about Erica before talking to her,t his is bad.
Cally listening to MP3s sent by Mr. August from suggestions of everyone in the band, interesting how she notes her reactions and the emotions in each song. Oh great, Fra shows up. Wants to talk with her downstairs and fast, getting glared at by Ms. Plimsoll, heheh.
All this because he is bombing out with the girls, *facepalms*"It is..." He ran a hand through his exemplar-perfect coif. "It is this school!" he finally blurted out in Italian. "This school is crazy and strange and nothing seems to go right. I... I cannot communicate properly and no one ever listens, and, and..."
Ugh, content himself with only looking, Fra is only going to piss girls off if he continues this way. And the attempted seduction of Erica has come up.
Hehe, liking Cally more and more. Makes some friends with boys before he even tries with girls again, good, give the girls a break from him. Bwahaha, what Ms. Plimsoll said to Fra on his way out, too good."Of course she did! Girls share that sort of detail, and as I am included in that number now I must gossip and gab with them. It has been... an experience," she admitted, "but a good one. You should try it."
And now Monday morning with Francesco Persico aka Fra. Worst subject is English, should have studied more before coming to America like your sister did. English Language Learners class and thinks he is a dunce because he is in it, everyone learns different things more easily. Wonder who the tiny child girl is, girl with plantlike hair as well. Only Emerson kid in the class, oh well.
Human rhinoceros, forgot his name, talking to Daniel and trying to find out about is date. Peter calling him a goodie-goodie even though he gave all the details of their date, guess he thinks more happened, oh brother. Nice Daniel is able to share donuts with the entire class. Fra needs to learn it isn't all about looks, some girls like guys who are nice and polite. Kenshin still being chased by girls, wonder when one will finally snag him. And Fra is jealous of Kenshin, yes there is justice in this world, especially when it is teaching you a lesson long overdue.
Erica in 2nd period Earth Sciences class, few other students in the class. Powers Theory counts as a science credit, nice. Chessa Barnes and Marcus behind her, goodie, friends in the class.
Yeah, very reasonable to have him change classes at that point."You wanna tell her?" The only response from Marcus was rude and nonverbal. "Ha, fine. Little bro's got... let's call 'em issues with explosives and missiles and a lot of other stuff. And he gets panicky over it at odd times. So, when the first slideshow of the semester was about a mutant terrorist attack..."
Chat about PTSD by the teacher to Erica and the rest of the class, certain history classes not until cleared by his shrink, poor Marcus.
Dang, wish I could have had a science teacher like her. Oh god, giving Marcus ideas about explosive power, this is bad. RPG campaign going in October, sounds like fun.Mrs. Carmichael was the sort to get of on tangents – and occasionally rants – about the various aspects of science, and her teacher's bag held a surprisingly large amount of materials for experiments to demonstrate.
Back with Cally, lunch in the Crystal Hall. Erica chatting with Chessa over a sheet of paper, ooo, character sheet. Pat balancing a fork on his index finger and making suggestions.
"Me? Nah." The young man shook his head. "Me and dice get along a little too well. I'd be rolling high every time unless everyone turned around and trusted me not to cheat when they weren't looking." He swiped a handful of colorful dice from his sister's collection, shook them in his cupped hands, and then released them with a flourish. They bounced and rolled, coming to a stop with the numbers 18, 19, or 20 showing on every single one. "Succeeding on a Hail Mary roll is about as cool as it gets," Pat said, as if that explained everything. "And if it looks cool, I can manage it."
Brita aka Stahlfaust saying she wishes to talk to Erica and Cally about Euro-Promotional League business, yeah, right. Oh, it really is about a meeting on Friday.
*tries to strangle Brita with my mind* Bigotted towards changelings, not seeing them as true females, ugh. Dares to call them a perversion of nature, arrgggh!You may bring guests if you like, but..." StahlFaust pursed her lips in distaste. "I would be careful of who and what you allow to be close to you."
Makes me sick how she calls it defending her younger sisters from the evils of the world. Pat thinks it is about him, female-to-male transgender with body of a girl, but identifies as a male. Cally not seeing how Pat acts or carries himself as fake, heh. Dang, Pat is good at passing for a boy physically, able to change all that in 30 seconds to prove female physically is impressive.
That power is very impressive. And the Amazons sound even more nuts than before with how Pat describes them. Cally, you are going to have to trust your friends with your secret sooner or later. And just admit it already, you became a girl but are still attracted to them."It's mostly a matter of observation bias," Pat explained. "People see what they expect to see, and my powers can play on that. I tell them I'm a boy, dress appropriately, and their ideas of what a boy should be reflect back on me. Your brains needed about half a minute to shrug off the impression of a male me, and that was enough time to pop my corset, pin up my hair, and spray on an emergency face." He – yes, Calliope demanded that her brain try to use the right pronoun! – placed a funny gadget on the table. It looked like a combination plastic mask and asthma spray inhaler. "A toy that Marcus made. Nothing fancy, but if I need a bit of make-up in a hurry, it suffices."
Now with Patrick Dulles aka Pat, Physical Education just as surreal as the rest of Whateley. Ah, Pat is a male-to-female changeling who still identifies as male, interesting. Practice sessions against robots for martial arts, able to 'do' with having to 'learn' as long as he has an audience, would be frustrating trying to learn otherwise. Perfect practice dummy for the advanced martial arts class, ouch. Ooo, palm strike to Stahlfaust's nose, nice.
Not sure if he is really in control, scary thought. Pat, don't taunt the psycho, it never ends well. Kenshin curious why Stahlfaust hates Pat, considers him a traitor to all women, *sigh* Able to duplicate other languages as well, whoa.
Brita needs serious counseling already.It was harder to conceal his build and breasts during gym class, so he largely didn't try. He kept a simple binding and bodice armor under his training gi, so his front wouldn't jiggle around, and used the girl showers with everyone else. No one but Brita really seemed to care, once he'd had a chance to explain his situation.
Kenshin trying to hit Hat Trick, now this will be interesting. Dang, that close for Kenshin to take him out in one strike. Whoa, Kenshin tagged in 32 seconds, I knew his skill with swords was impressive but that is incredible. Ah, has to rely on his empathy in a fight, no wonder Kenshin was able to hit him. Still, nice to have lasted even that long before being hit.
Erica shaken by the lunchtime encounter, wonder if what Pat does would have been an option for her, at least she realizes quick it was never an option.
Ouch, never dwell on the might-have-beens, it just hurts more.Unlike most of her fellow students, Erica could trace her changes to a single moment, when Eric had chosen to take a chance on what he thought was a super-strength serum, and set into motion a cascading series of side effects that had resulted in... her. The tests had been uncomfortably thorough, showing that even brain structure and chemistry had altered in subtle ways. Erica was a perfectly healthy, normal, heterosexual girl... who could bend iron bars with her bare hands. That practically counted as normal around here.
Tuesday morning from Cookie's perspective, this will be fun. Okay, based on his thoughts he has the mindset of a young child, still smarter than a normal dog. Erica shows up to run with Daniel and Cookie, even has Physique with her. Cookie is a friendly dog. Alternate between which head rest, interesting. An obstacle course for Daniel and Cookie.
Aww, he can smell sadness in others and helped cheer up Monica. Good Cookie.Bird-girl walks by. Sad girl. Smell on her sadness.
Cute puppy eyes. Bird-girl smell less sad.
Good job. Good pup.
Cally in the open space, the piazza in front of Melville Cottage.Ooo, major crossroads for the campus and setting up, guess the band is giving a concert. All the band is there and Kieron playing a long number on his sax. *eyes bug out* Whoa, now there is a song with interesting lyrics, wish I could hear Cally singing it. Tia and Hikaru with a good chunk of their floor, most of Dickinson's freshmen floor, the junior high kids, Essemmelle with glowsticks, Fra hanging out with some boys, and Erica sitting with Daniel. Now that is a good crowd for their first gig.
Epic song, what is its name and who played it? And her personal girl squad cheering her own. Aww, still too afraid to tell her friends about who she once was, thinking she will lose their friendship if she does.
Erica saying it was cool, Daniel agreeing, not big on music in the commune, oh brother. To be deprived of music, so sad. Cally going into another interesting song while Erica holds Daniel's hand and sounds like they kiss. Interesting lyrics to end this part on.
Back to Fra, not getting the music because he doesn't get English that well. Another handprint on his face, Fra, you just won't learn. Friends with Macarthur, not sure why he got slapped this time. Oh, learned interesting American idioms and colloquialisms to appear more suave, that was a mistake, sounds like they are pranking their new 'friend'. Fio is right, friends are important. But chose them better.
Back to Monica aka Whirlibird. Absurdly low body weight and weak PK to climb trees fast, likes roosting on a low branch. Are her powers due to GSD or is she an avatar with Spirit Mismatch Disorder? Watching the show from a distance due to being Electradyne's friend, freaks out when she sees Erica and Daniel kissing. Aww, falling out of the air like that, Cookie trying to comfort her. Cookie is really good at cheering others up.
Erica and Daniel show up and Monica unable to flee before they spot her, Erica knows she is one of Tanya's friends from Whitman and wonders if people have been harassing her. Erica wants to walk her back to Whitman, Monica doesn't want that but gives in, girl needs to learn to say no, stand up for herself. Erica hugging and encouraging Monica.
At least you realize she is genuinely nice instead of being paranoid about it like some would.Why oh why did that girl have to be so nice?
Kristen covering the desk for her friends, actually helping out a freshman with math homework. Seeing Monica arrive with Erica causes her temper to flare as she snaps her pencil, having the urge to punch someone in the face. And the girl she is helping with math, Rachel Altus, oh boy, this is bad. She is going to manipulate Rachel into fighting Erica, using a freshman in that manner, you are looking at severe punishment at this rate Kristen.
Erica alone in the dorm room and getting ready for bed, checks her mail and got two files from Uncle Adolf, that was quick. Calls up Penny who is exhausted from the extra-curriculars, Margit exercising her danger sense and has gotten creative, yikes. Details on how she met Daniel, their first date, 2nd date and 1st kiss.
Ah, the infamous teenage girl scream of excitement.Yes... Well, tried, like I said. Missed the first time. Um, didn't miss tonight." Erica winced as Penny's raucous shouts of jubilation briefly overloaded her earphones. "...ow. You don't have to be that loud..."
Hehe, insisting it is her 1st kiss even though it is her 3rd, Penny knows how to get to Erica. Bwahaha, Penny thinking she has to give Erica the Talk, priceless. Aww, doesn't know how to deal with dating Daniel and what to do next on their dates. Penny is right, 14 is too young to be angsting at this level.
Penny is good at giving advice."Enjoy life, go out on another date, and then let your head decide. Not your heart, because it doesn't know what's good for it. Certainly not your glands, either, because those know what's good for them, and it ain't always good for you. Your brain's the thinky bit, so think! If you think it's going somewhere, then maybe it is. And if you think it's not, then you're probably right."
Cally singing happy songs to herself doing all those things, whoa, guess she is still riding a high from the concert.
A round of applause from her fellow Dickinsonians. No longer blushing from compliments about her face or figure, good. Hehe, having to fight not to stare at her friend Neff, poor Cally. Bwahaha, talking about Cally needing to brush on her moves while in the showers. Mairead doesn't seem like a morning person, so grumpy."Will you cut that out?" shouted a girl from one stall over. A long arm of bluish PK energy reached over the partition to wave a finger at her. "Some of us are allergic to chipper this early in the morning!"
"It ain't gonna kill ya, Mairead!" yelled another girl from the opposite side.
Erica finds the team table almost fully populated for breakfast, now that is rare. Bianca and Tanya still not talking, Erica not knowing the reason why, oh boy. Kenshin and Hikaru writing something with a marker pen, all this due to asking why Hikaru has her particular choice of breakfast every day.
With Bianca as the judge, only at Whateley could this happen."...and the next thing we know, it's a competition to see who can write the most elegant versions of each fish's name in traditional Japanese characters. The really complicated ones, not the ones like letters," Laura explained with a twitch of an eyebrow. "There was even a break to argue which version of the symbol for octopus was correct."
Stuff available on sushi and Erica calls out Crawdad, oh brother. Bailey wishes to learn calligraphy from Hikaru, Hikaru even going along with the request. Whoa, she drew the symbol for love after only seeing it once, that is impressive. Aww, no Laura to work on Penny's gift. A problem Dr. Speers sent Laura this week, sounds interesting.
Cally once more, fond of her study group in Power Theory where her and Heartfinder work to keep things calm and peaceful. Heartfinder using Pat Barnes to measure how well she is doing, and seems to be flirting with him, oh boy.
Wonder if teaching Erica that will work.Bailey was currently trying to teach her the basics of psychometry, the reading of emotional imprints left behind on common items.
Pair off with someone else from a different group, uh oh. It is worse than I thought, paired up with Meatball. She would get stuck with the little perv.
I see many painful lessons in Byron's future.The sharpest thing in her bag at that moment was a fresh pencil. It was now pointing straight at Bryon's nose. "Either we do the assignment or you get sent to Doyle," she promised.
Interesting."Sometimes," she said. "The lyrics help set the tone in my head more than anything, but some styles tend to focus on specific emotions as their main theme. Lullabies calm people down. Heavy metal gets them excited or angry. That sort of thing."
Byron Von Deen, 4'9", 120 lbs., healing.
He is embarrassed by that."I, um, increase the healing speed of just about anyone for just about anything by a few levels of regen, as long as I'm... uh..."
She waited impatiently, tapping her pencil on the desk.
"Um, as long as I'm holding their hand," the boy finally admitted.
Man, he has bought into that junk society feeds males. Almost cordial conversation with Byron, will wonders never cease. Uh oh, why does Mr. Bergamot wish to see Erica, hope it is nothing bad.Bryon shook his head. "You're a chick. You wouldn't understand. Us guys gotta at least try and look tough and manly, but holding hands ain't either of those. What are other guys gonna think? What are girls gonna think if they see me holding hands with another guy?"
Erica left alone with Mr. Bergamot and Hannah Sammish, acting TA. Great, false information because she registered as a mutant yet bloodwork shows otherwise. Asking for proof of security clearance, hopefully the new Headmaster knows the truth about her and can cover for her. Drags her to in front of Dr. Mazarin, great. Whoa, that is completely different from how Mrs. Carson kept the office.
Great, she is going to have to tell them everything at this rate. Crud, Mazarin knows who Uncle Adolf is and even his old codename of Taginbert.
Was wondering when Erica would have to tell someone in the administration the truth."Then please, tell what you can right now, before Mr. Bergamot dies of an apoplectic stroke." The Headmaster pulled a chair out for her to sit upon. The teacher had to fend for himself, once his face stopped making stunned fish impressions.
Okay, that train of thought of Mr. Bergamot's is sickening. And Dr. Mazarin ends it with that as long as he gets info from Uncle Adolf, I'm liking him more now."Well then, to start, he and my grandfather were two of forty children created by the experiments of the World War II era theme villain, Baron Dämmerung, to be his next generation of empowered übermenschen. They were the only successes, being naturally healthier, stronger, and smarter than most baselines."
"Five percent success rate..." Mr. Bergamot muttered as he took notes. "Not terribly bad for that day and age..."
Guessing this was arranged by Carson and Hartford before the incident.What was that all about? she had to wonder again. Like the Headmaster had said, her set of changes, the official ones at least, mapped so well to the standard mutant traits that they'd been advised by the school's own admissions office to leave it at that. She hoped calmer and more experienced heads could help her figure this out.
Dr. Mazarin's perspective now. Okay, really sickened by Bergamot now.
I hope he is fired soon, before he does something that harms the students or school."But-but! The things she could tell us! The things we could learn by examining her more thoroughly. Why, we could..."
And Dr. Mazarin keeps being better and better. Apologize to Erica and not make things personal in the future, Bergamont learned the hard way. Elspeth in Dickinson asked to keep a closer eye on Erica, interesting turn of events."Mr. Bergamot," he said, stopping the man with a simple gesture. "As I have read your file – your complete file – I have some idea of what you have in mind here, and while the previous administration was willing to either overlook or accommodate your personal... quirks, believing your strengths as a teacher and researcher outweighed them, I have yet to reach the same conclusions. You are not helping your case," he added drily.
Back with Cally in Dickinson. Just what are they working on that requires they each draw a different piece of it and human as well. Nina Blake, Bailey, Vickie Stone, Tia, and Laura as well. Trying to design Cally a cool outfit for her next performance, heh. Neff helping out as well. Brought Tia in for outside opinion.
Stark raving nuts, something built around a calculation of pi based on actual pie, *groan*Bergholdt Stuttley, a.k.a. Stark.
Tia and Nina laughing at that, at least it cheered up Tia about her ex. Devises work based on how the devisor thinks it should work, but when other devisors think it is a stretch... Ah, so the portable image cloak uses a lot of processing power to keep up with the wearer, need superprocessors they can't afford right now.
Can do it if Cally stands still and Neff still talking abut her shaking that booty, way to make her blush. Along with at least Laura as well. Notes for a grade in Dr. Speers lab class, so helping a friend and project for a grade. Now that is a brilliant idea Tia came up with, so simply the others overlooked it.
Now we see what Mr. Bergamont is up to. School back-site for rating teachers and the teachers know about it, heh. Sees himself as a good man, good teacher, good scientist. And having to deal with Ms. Howe, Tia's psycho ex.
And she has only gotten worse since we last saw her, oh boy."I wasn't stalking her! Really! It's just that there are only so many routes between the buildings and our schedules keep aligning in completely coincidental ways that I can totally prove if you give me some graphing paper and about ten minutes." Jamie Howe had that glazed, slightly unfocused look in her eyes that he'd come to associate with mid- to high-functioning Diedrick's cases. There was no doubt that she believed every lie to make it through her teeth, because they suited her current view of reality.
Oh crud, I suspect he is going to try and manipulate Ms. Howe into going after Erica for 'testing'.He treated her with his warmest grin. Her expression remained frosted. "Only that they align neatly with lines of research which I have been entertaining for the better part of a decade. You must admit, the creation or duplication of mutant traits is the hot topic these days."
Okay, she didn't get herself sent to Whateley and Bergamont seems to be playing her, has me curious who got her sent there now."Your doing?"
"I can neither confirm nor deny..." He could very well lie, though.
And you just signed your own death warrant, Bergamont."I can neither confirm nor deny..." He could very well lie, though. "Ms. Howe, I am a dedicated researcher, but I am also an instructor. It meets both my interests to enable yours, or even to supply information pertinent to your field of research. For instance..." Mr. Bergamot passed her a page with a list of names upon it. "Here are students whom my personal research has led me to suspect did not come by their powers naturally. Your, ah, friend is naturally at the top of that list."
Erica and Nightingale, plus other students which he suspect came by their powers the same way Tia did.
I hope Dr. Mazarin finds out about this little stunt Bergamont pulled and throws him to the wolves."Whatever you will. My interests, as I've said, lie in research and education. I will not stand in the way of yours, though I would love to hear about whatever you may discover."
The corners of her mouth almost lifted. "Finally, someone who gets it."
Yes, he thought as she vacated the office with an urgency born of disturbed inspiration, of the three facets of his life, being a good man was surely the hardest, as well as the first to be abandoned when needs be. But the results would justify it in the end.
Friday September 23rd now and back with Erica. World History with Mr. DuChamp and Jimmy ask what she is up to. Euro event and Daniel has a movie night, Taka might check out the movie. Cally's band having another show, and Dr. Mazarin was right about her skipping 1st period with Mr. Bergamont.
Eighth period German class with Jimmy walking with Erica, only to encounter Ms. Howe taking a crazy survey as an excuse to bash Tia once more. Pictures of Tia and her old male self, great. Talking about certain things coming to light unless they keep their distance from Tia, she needs to be in a psych hospital. Erica knows who Jamie is, Bergamont needs to pay for using a mentally unstable student like this.
Cally once more, Nick playing his guitar while Cally sees the girls scream and shout if he even looks their way.
Dolled up like that and interested in meeting a fashion-conscious young American lady, oh boy. At least Erica is going with her to the Euro-Promotional League meeting, good to have friends to watch her back.Life would be so much simpler if she could just...
Great, Brita there with fellow Amazons of European origin, this could be trouble. Leslie from Glasgow, who looks like she might be part werewolf. Oh great, she is upset at Erica for dating Daniel, like the girls of Whitman have some automatic claim to all boys from Twain. Leslie could have been a friend if she had given them a chance. Boy, she really got to Cally, wonder if she will be in a better mood later.
Erica going off to socialize on her own, why do I have a very bad feeling about Erica and Cally not being together constantly at this thing. Greeting senior German boy SturmMeister, at least he is friendly enough. Friedrich aka Thunderous, only using one of the school's legacy names while he is there, curious. Hhm, training program for empowered noncombatants in Germany couldn't accommodate his particular needs. In Hawthorne because an adaptation of his power causes him to snore very loudly, heh. Nearly shook his family's home to pieces early on, that is a powerful snore.
Ouch, that is bad. Sophomore Adrienne Le Floc'h at a table with her brothers, the junior high twins.And the best part?" said Friedrich. "The part that these Americans think is oh-so-funny? My surname is Schnöring."
And of course Kristen shows up right then. And Kristen is as dense as ever, thinking she knows the truth and trying to intimidate Erica with talk of would-be heroes around them.Towards the punch bowl, the Belgian Gouyasse stood chatting with Gregory of Britain and Calliope's brother Fra.
Blackmailing and threatening a fellow student, Kristen is getting herself in serious trouble with this stunt. Twisting facts around to try and make Erica look bad, even though Baron Dämmerung was disowned by his family. Leslie blaming Erica for the crimes of Baron Dämmerung, good grief. This is bullying by a twisted, obsessed girl who has twisted others to aid her.
Now with Daniel, a faculty mandate for movie night on Fridays in Twain, seems a bit much. Whoa, a fair number of the boys on his floor in Ms. Barnes's Language Learners course, thought that was mainly English. Boy, when American English is your native language sometimes you forgot how complex it really can be. The Princess Bride, they are in for a treat. Saumer the one with spikey black hair and rabbit ears, the Mongolian Arsi Khan.
Good sized group for movie night.From the English Learners class, there was John with his armadillo plate armor, Franklin with his rhino stub, and then the Japanese kid Kenshin with his roommate Jimmy along. A couple of neighbors from down the hall, the musical Tobias and his roommate Victor, stopped by as well. Even the big horse-guy, Nick, was chatting with his roommate and a couple of other kids about his new vlog, whatever that meant.
Sam from Poe, has a monkey tail and snuck in to watch the movie, along with Tobias and Victor. Man, the guy at the Twain desk isn't that observant. Aww, Daniel reminded of when his mom read him bedtime stories. Pete cheering for the giant Fezzik and what he says about large women, hehe. Kenshin cheering for the sword fight even though he knows it isn't a real one.
Oh boy, Erica calling Daniel, upset and by Cookie's house. Detailing everything that happened, even who her great-grandfather is. All this because of a girl jealous Erica has the codename she wanted.
Just when you don't think Daniel can be a better guy he says that. Aww, not sure she is ready for romance right now with everything else going on."Yer sweet and carin', and ya worry too much what others think, which makes ya about like everyone else, really. Nothin' bad at all."
Friends and a shoulder to cry on when she needs it, if some other girl doesn't snatch up Daniel soon they are all fools or too afraid to take a chance. Erica is feeling better now and Cookie gets Daniel to go on a run to forget about things. Hope they get back together in the future."I figger..." he said finally. "I figger I don't know what I'm ready for either. Love and romance are 'bout the sorta thing you see in the movies, but dunno what they're like for real. But a friend..." He nodded. "Friends are good."
Cally trying to explain what happened to the RA about Erica when Erica shows up. RA Milena Tarkisian, finding out who caused the trouble and is shocked.
Obsession can drive people crazy."All last year. Saw it for myself. The Eurofroshes that year were, like, a complete mess. That French girl with the water powers? Afraid to swim. The Belgian kid? Burgeoning alcoholic. Still is. His Lordship Gregory Crumbley... Okay, so he was, like, okay, but then that French devisor they used to hang with completely balanced out the sanity levels, in a bad way. Kirsten was the only thing that, like, held them together."
Arrest history as well, vigilante who got arrested a few times, 'steamroller incident', what did she do, if mentioned in a previous story my brain has forgotten it. Good to have more than one than one individual able to check their sources, already like Milena. At least the older German boys stood up for Erica, said the past is in the past and to leave it there, even if Kristen used a cheapshot against them in return.
Dang, Cally wishing Erica had kissed her and was interested in girls, Erica wishing she was interested in girls as well."Certamente! Didn't your family practically adopt me this summer? I know who you are and where you come from, better than any on this campus. And," she sniffed, "it is not like most family trees are without proper manure at their base."
Ah, I forgot Milena's codename was Sister Secret. A restricted corridor in Dickinson, interesting. Elspeth Plimsoll, a private apartment that sized and barely anything to fill it with, what a waste. Heh, tasked by the headmaster with keeping an eye on certain students, so Erica isn't the only one being watched. Don't tell me the club she is thinking of inviting Erica into if things get too bad is the Masterminds.
Ouch, Erica is in bad shape to get up at the same time as most of the rest of the dorm for once. 10 am by the time her and Cally got to the Crystal Hall for breakfast. An extra cinnamon roll from Daniel, she needs as much cheering up as possible. Natalie McMaster, one of the four junior high girls in Dickinson, calls out to Erica.
Ah, she had to hear from the twins about what happened at the EPL meeting.Barely twelve years old, she stood almost as tall as Erica and was more visibly muscular. Only her face was still obviously young, though at the moment it was filled with worry.
Laurent and Jean-Marie le Floc'h, redheaded brothers to Adrienne, Essemmelle, Linette [who needs to learn to listen to both sides first before rushing to a judgement], Acolyte, Marcus, Twitch, and Darcy, sure are a lot of junior high kids. Awww, Cally seems more upset about Erica and Daniel having broken up than Erica does, romantic. And Monica rushes out once she realizes Daniel isn't seeing anyone, hope she doesn't get her heart broken.
Monica has a heart beat like that.
So she can fly some, just needs to learn how to control it better. Paired up with Tanya for Flight Class, wonder how this will go."I am the very model of a modern flightless funny girl..." she sang under her breath, giggling through the lyrics she and her aunt had made up together. Halfway to her dorm, she realized that the words were inaccurate. Her feet had literally not touched the ground since she'd quit the cafeteria, and this flash of insight sent her tumbling.
Aww, Monica too shy to talk to Daniel, Tanya suggesting the old note with yes or no boxes, it could work. And the note sounds more embarrassing than talking to him directly, ho boy. Huh, thinking happy thoughts does seem to be the focus she needs to fly, who'd thunk.
She needs help in the confidence department."Thanks. I... you... um... wanna-go-on-a-date-sometime-please-oh-no-this-is-so-embarrassing-bye!" She tried to take off, to get airborne again, but her acute sense of self-awareness clipped her metaphorical wings before she got more than a foot. Instead she landed face first in the turf.
Cookie licking her ears and making her snort with laughter, that pup is better at social skills than most teens.
A friends-date, good, that is a start and Monica is able to feel like a normal girl."I just wanna be normal!" She fell back on her bottom and felt the tears flow. "I wanna be a regular girl and not some freak that no one will even look at, and, and..." She stopped as a cream donut was presented to her. "Thanks..."
Oh boy, poor Cookie able to smell others emotions and picks up a girl who is always angry, not bad or good, huh. Licked her in the face and she is still angry, oh well. At least Daniel and Cookie are okay.
I knew I remembered Rachel Altus, Ratel, serious temper issues. She wants people afraid of her and stepping out of her path.
Gah! Any guy who sees that shirt and doesn't run is nuts or has no idea what that expression means in English.At five-foot-two, with frizzy brown curls and a pair of glasses held together by duct tape and gumption, she didn't look like too much of a danger. A person with savvy would look closer, see the feral gleam in her eyes or the obvious armband with the letters UV emblazoned upon it. At the very least, they would see her t-shirt and get the message.
An avatar with the spirit of a honey badger, no wonder she is angry all the time.Rachel, avatar of a wayward spirit she knew as Honey-Boo-Boo the honey badger.
And picking a fight with Erica just because some Whitman girls are upset, mainly thanks to Kristen, *facepalms* A planned fight in second subbasement, training hall three, why does that location sound familiar.Rule #1: State intent, as openly or as baldly as possible. Rachel marched right up to the girl, stopping her in her tracks. "We are going to fight," she declared.
30 minutes to get to Dickinson, change into her combat suit, and get to the training hall, great. Cally, Nana, and Hannah tagging along, the more witnesses the better. Picked up Tanya who warns her about Ratel, very nice combat suit. Even special gloves, nice. Ratel in her regular clothes, girl is driven crazy with anger by her spirit from the seem of it. Dang, brutal and quick combat style, she seems to be all offense. Even tried to bite her, brutal if it had pierced the armor.
Leg hook chokehold, brutal, Ratel has a well deserved reputation. One solid punch and Erica knocks Ratel back, oh crap! That only encouraged her. PK field saved her face from brutal attack, those silvery claws could do some real damage. Shredding part of her own t-shirt to try and break free, Ratel is extreme. Slams her face repeatedly into the mat and then sits on her, Erica finished that fight quickly.
And she didn't know Erica and Daniel had broken up, heh.
At least Erica knows that happens to the best of them, so no hard feelings between her and Rachel."Well, huh." Rachel had stopped struggling, so Erica let her up. "Guess I might've overreacted a bit."
Well that is another question answered, how they keep the cost down for those mats with how rough the kids can get."Don't you worry. These mats are some kind of special memory foam. Just push their stuffing back in and they'll fix themselves in a few hours. What, you didn't think they'd have something like this, here of all places?" The girl snorted.
Hey, its the desert counter at Whateley, not sure I could resist that suggestion myself."Well, I'm starving," Rachel declared. "Who wants to go raid the cafeteria dessert counter?"
"Ooh! Ooh!" Hannah's voice could be heard over the speakers. The thunk of her roommate's open palm across the back of her head was almost as loud and clear. "Sorry, Nana..."
Cally of course went with them to the Crystal Hall, open at all hours though the selection may vary, nice. Laura's theory about how the cafeteria works included quantum waveforms, hehehe. 100 different flavors and big red "SURPRISE ME" button, sure, tempt those who like taking a chance.
Ooo, I would like to try the pineapple flavor ice cream myself. Tanya got cotton candy, wonder how many students gadgeteers and devisors want to study that machine to make their own for after they graduate.She'd won the contest of rock-paper-scissors to see who had first choice, and her random number had come up 35. This got her a bowl of almond fudge ripple. Erica's number, 91, delivered English toffee crunch. The two of them headed upstairs to the M3 table while the others got their randomly designated flavors.
"Huh, pineapple," Nana commented as she sat with them. Erica made a face at that, so she continued. "Yeah, I know it's not for everyone, but at least my inner carnivore still considers dairy and some fruit to be edible. What did you get, Sammish?"
"Dunno, but it looks tasty, eh!" Hannah's ice cream was a light purple with chunks of dark violet fruit and thick lines of syrup in the same color. "The Machine said jamun, but no idea what that means."
"Javanese plum, from southeast Asia originally." Hikaru walked past with an economy of motion, not wasting a single step as she slipped into her habitual seat at the table. "Are we having a party?" she inquired.
Everything in there sounds good, except the potato chips. Why would you do that to ice cream?That girl was now bounding up the stairs, taking them two or three at a time while balancing a tray on one hand. An ice-cream bowl and spoon rattled upon it... or at least that's what everyone but Tanya assumed. Ratel had procured for herself a large porcelain salad bowl, as wide as a normal dinner plate, and the monstrosity piled up within it was not so much a sundae as it was a month of sundaes. There was fruit, there was syrup, there were brownies and cookies and... potato chips? An alphabet's worth of ice cream flavors was slowly melting together into a gloppy brown mess, topped with a crown of cherries.
And Hikaru already knows Ratel by reputation. Good grief, watching her eat...it's like Tennyo when she is starving. And avoided the subject about Daniel and Erica dating in front of Tanya, nice Whitman girls, way to be united. All about the boy troubles this week, and is it headache inducing sometimes.
Rats.Then I am in good company." Hikaru sighed. "There's a well-bred idiot, a scion of one of the old Japanese feudal clans whose family sent him here solely to woo me, and he's getting insufferable about it."
"Would you like it if I did something about him?" Ratel said, anticipation plastered on her smile like another layer of ice cream.
"Oh, how I wish, but no. That would feel too good, I'm afraid. And even with him gone, I'd still have... well, a certain somebody or three would still be urging me to expand my social options in various embarrassing ways."
Starting to agree with Nana, Hannah blabs too much sometimes. The imperial bureaucracy back home, figures they are pressuring her. And Nana shows common sense! Not bopping Ratel for saying something rude is a self-preservation instinct.Hannah had been focused on her jamun ice cream, but she paused long enough to chime in. "Are you talking about your spirit? So it's independent enough to hold conversations? That's pretty rare. I mean, I know Nana's ladybug agglomeration barely counts as sentient, and I'm willing to bet that Ratel's, er, ratel isn't much of a talker either, eh?"
Grape ice cream, must have! The car still hasn't arrived, forget the date it does arrive, that is too long for even a custom order though. Nana annoyed at Hikaru her trouble is over a custom new car when she missed out getting a used clunker when she was sent to Whateley. *eyes bug out* All those vacation times and she has things planned for her already, no wonder Hikaru is annoyed and wants a way off campus now.
Finally someone understand Hikaru's troubles. Cally giving Hikaru the perfect idea, wonder what Tia's time in Japan with Hikaru is going to be like. And Ratel finished all that and wants seconds, her spirit must give her an insane metabolism.Calliope noted Hikaru's distate, and couldn't help but ask. "Pomp and circumstance?" She received a nod from Hikaru. The Italian girl fully understood the Japanese princess's distaste. "You are not an entertainer, nor do you crave the spotlight, but you are forced into it anyways."
Back with Francesco once more. Looking for advice from older and wiser students, he's in a clubhouse hidden in the tunnels that run beneath Twain Cottage. He has been avoiding the tunnels, but that is a major part of the fun at Whateley, so many places to explore down there. Emerson junior High Gear pulling out beer from the fridge, great. Gouyasse and Macarthur as well. Gouyasse's father going to send him some beer from their brewery back home, packages are inspected if they haven't gotten lax about that since Gen 1.
Outstanding Dudes Club, bwahahaha, they are idiots. Ugh, talking about girls that way, talking to the new guys there like that. Pete is there as well, oh boy. Talk of scoring with 'choice females' on campus including Venus Inc., any female who found out about this place would have news to every other female on campus so fast it isn't funny and required warning to all freshman girls about them each year. Ugh, talking about Kenshin like that. Gouyasse thinks Kenshin is a beta male who will never assert himself, I want to see this creep beaten by Kenshin in a fight now.
I don't like the sounds of that, almost sounds like part of their plan is drugging the girls. Fra, you are an even bigger idiot than I thought for joining this group.High Gear added, "because he's playing the game by their rules. Well, gentlemen, the Outstanding Dudes Society is here to help you learn how to bend the rules, to turn the tables on those females and make them realize what alphas you really are. How does that sound?"
Erica back on her morning routine with Cally and Natalie for company. Whoa, the girl from Whitman with the headscarf is a speedster. Adrienne le Floc'h not acknowledging Erica, that seems wrong. Aww, going to see Herr Auer about dropping German class due to Kristen. Telling him about her unfortunately family relation, what Kristen is doing.
Insulting a teacher to his face, now that is nuts."Not to mention she takes everything so seriously. Why, last year she called me a clown to my face because of my love of puns." He picked up a framed motto from his desk. "So of course I had this made to tweak her nose about it."
Perfect response to have a framed motto on his desk. Ah, letting her do reading by herself for the next week or two, I love reasonable teachers like him. Power Theory with some people who might hate her now for what Kristen revealed, great.Was macht ein Clown im Büro? Faxen. It took a few confused blinks before that one could sink through, and then she groaned. What was the clown doing in the office? Faxing / Pranks. "I think you and my grandfather would get along atrociously well."
Assay now, feeling like she is walking on air, she must really love the classes and her work-study program. No wonder she is up, Power Theory is fun for her. Aww, blaming herself for how things went for Bergmont, Hannah should know he would have gotten suspicious on his own sooner or later. Figures she took notes on how Erica's PK reacted to Ratel's, girl loves analyzing powers. Hannah is a little naive about how a teacher can get around the rules of the school if they are determined enough, particularly using students. Oh good, Hannah showing common sense in not completely trusting Mr. Bergemont.
Cally at lunch. Eating light to make up for the ice cream, aww. Nina Blake and Darcy, who is the dark-haired girl? Breakthrough, oh boy. Junior high kids have more a grace period before they are stuck with the codename, Darcy on her 5th one already. Cally and Nina going to class together, talking about fashion and then boys. Asking what type of boy Cally likes, awkward.
Now I ship Cally and Nina, if only they knew about each other."Yes, if there was a boy as nice and considerate as you, I might consider," she admitted. "Though I doubt it would end well. Um, are you alright?"
Nina's face had turned an odd color, if only for a brief moment. "Ah, just something I ate, I think. Food's so good, it's normal to eat too much, right?"
Tobias, Tuesday September 27th. Interesting in music and instruments, but not the fame, smart boy. Tira teasing him mentally about loving to feel needed, hhm. Victor Rivera is his roommate, no musical talent himself.
Tira seems to be some spirit or supernatural entity, curious. The lady is in the back of his mind, another person with a spirit in their head.Quiet is relative when no words, no notes of mine may sully the tranquility of the breeze, came the reply. And no, I would not in any case. If left to your own devices, you would not go any place. It was trouble enough simply to get you in this school!
Ah, so Tira is a ghost living in his head, first one of those I think we've seen. Tira is a leannen-sidhe, just what kind of mess did Tobias get himself into. Tirandael nic Mirthriel, why do I feel like I should be scared reading her full name? Teasing Vic about Tanya being his girlfriend. The more I read of Electradyne's instrument and its appearance, the more confused I get. Interesting song Electradyne sang. *groan* Tira has noted Kieron is more interested in the other boys from Poe and says Tobias should ask him out, he must have a strong will not to shout at her to shut up after that.
Cally up next, thinking Electradyne's was a terrible act to follow, thinking she can't match that. Kind of wish Cally would act on the lyrics of this song a little. And that holo projection for her outfit, whoa. Yes, listen to the lyrics. Electradyne upset that Cally upstaged her, that girl has issues. Uh oh, forgetting what Electradyne said to her could cause trouble in the future if Electradyne seeks revenge for this minor slight.
Wednesday with Erica now. In the foreign language lab, working and then relaxing by reading Andreas Eschbach's Die Haarteppichknüpfer. Aww, please say that wasn't Dawn who turned around and left when she saw Erica at the desk. Saumer, Erica knew him when she was Eric. Hiram Saumer aka Playback, says her voice taste familiar, oh boy. Mr. Auer is an...unusual teacher to teach them an expression without saying what it means. Useful for apologizing in Germany, huh.
Great, he has a crush on Kristen. Keeping him distant so he won't recognize her, probably smart with what Kristen has been saying about her. Having to fight back the urge to run up and hug Daniel, aww. Taking Cookie for a walk so Daniel and Monica can have some private time together, hehe. Can't believe he went to get the bat, ball and glove from his house in front of Twain to play catch.
Good, no knocking the ball into the Grove. Uprooted a bush to fetch it the second time, determined pup. Oh boy, still doing Operation Snowflake to try and fit in, she needs a better way. Sounds like hormones are driving her a little crazy with what they want her to do, which she isn't ready for yet. Good to have Cookie to talk to.
Monica now, so nervous about just asking Daniel what subjects interests him to read. No book but the Bible, that Reverend was nuts. At least he is getting to read now and find what interests him. Asking what Monica would recommend, The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, now that brings back memories. Tales from back home, flyin' deer of Alder Gulch. Funny how such tall tales can start.
And she is right, Daniel seems to the biggest gentleman of any guy ever at Whateley."Only that life was so darn strange that she couldn't see herself when she looked in the mirror sometimes." The boy shrugged. "Guess we all lost somethin' or other on the way here, and it's nice when the days seem like they used to be." Now he looked at her. "That what you meant?"
Cally learning how to follow choreography, give her a break, not every singer can dance. Neff teaching her how to dance, interesting. Cally both in heaven and hell while looking at Neff do all that, poor girl. Gah, if Neff isn't doing that on purpose she is really good at torture, look but don't touch. Whoa, her empathy allows her to sense that about Neff as she dances. *eyes bug out comically huge* They kissed!
Erica cheered up by her little chat with Cookie, he is a good listener. 1 ton! Okay, I knew Cookie was big but good grief. Cally happy and even had dreams that made her happier, hehe.
Good, plus Darcy and Linette thinking Erica is okay again."Trying to put the negative stuff behind us," she told the junior high girl. "It's only the start of the year, and we've already had so much crap hit the fan. Better not to dwell on it."
Now Kenshin's turn. Arrive early to English Learners class so you can have snacks before the bell, with Daniel in that class I would be at least 10 minutes early if I was in it. Mr. Barnes late to class by 30 seconds due to bringing in a new student. Daniel Fontenot, with that description no way to mix the two Daniels up. Wilder from Thibodaux, Louisiana, now that is deep in Louisiana.
A seat next to Pete, hope he doesn't think Wilder is teasing him when it is just his accent. No equivalent of a or the in Japanese, no wonder it is so hard for Kenshin. Pete's temper is causing trouble, upset about giving up elbow room to Wilder, *sigh* Ms. Barnes is fast, up that close so quickly and stopping an argument before it could escalate. Oh crud, saying Pete looks like a clown, Wilder shouldn't have done that.
Erica showing up for 4th period English, Rachel bugging her each day about when their next match will boy. *groan* Complaining about security not wanting her to start something, of course they don't!
*tosses a yellow flag down* You have invoked fate, that is a 10 yard penalty.Frizzy brown hair shook negatively. "Nope. Start a fight, get in trouble. I mean, I guess if someone else's fight happens to fall in my lap, maybe, but..."
Wilder smashed through the newly expanded entrance of the classroom by Pete. And now we know why he goes by Wilder, larger, hairier, and toothier, yikes. Wilder slashing up Pete while Pete tries to fight him off, Kenshin told to get everyone else away from there. Eyow! Now we know how brutal Ratel's bite is, took out a chunk of Wilder's ear.
Pete is torn up and needs a healer fast, Cally dragging Meatball in to heal Pete. Pete steadied that quickly, Meatball has some strong healing it seems. Wait, that young woman with the staff is Myra Barnes, Ms. Barnes, magic I think with the staff she used on Wilder. Uh oh, Rachel thinks Wilder is cute in his human form too, just what we don't need, those two hooking up.
And of course Officer Canterbury automatically accuses Rachel of starting the fight. Multi-rager incident, so Pete and WIlder are ragers, eep. *facepalms* Oh course Rachel wants to hook up with a guy she can fight with who she finds cute.
We know an exact rule of the school dress code now, nice.Officer Canterbury stepped in. "Rachel, unless you want to be in violation of Article 3, item 6 of the school dress code, to whit flagrant displays of wardrobe malfunction, you will go back to your dorm immediately and change into your next spare uniform. Failure to do so will constitute ignoring of a direct order by Security, which in itself is a violation of your current probationary status, and will result in your combat restrictions to be extended indefinitely. Do you understand?"
Back with Daniel and it is Friday, recalling what happened in class the other day. At least Pete is able to see how stupid that club is.
He may be a rager with no sense of humor but Pete has more common sense than all the guys who are in that stupid club.Pete almost chuckled at that. "Yeah, thought so. Stupid, pointless, meaningless. Just a buncha guys cryin' about how they can't get girlfriends or braggin' how they hooked up with some girl. And me?" He snorted. "They think I couldn't figger it out on my own, cuz I was dumb, but all their 'big plans' to help me were really about me creeping girls out so that the other guys would look better. Hell... er, sorry," he said at Daniel's disappointed glance. "Heck, you've had more datin' success this year than most of 'em. Figger I'll be askin' you for advice from now on."
Macarthur Price perspective now.
Is it wrong I want to tip off Stahlfaust and the Amazons as to their clubhouse's location and what they discuss there?This meeting of the Outstanding Dudes Society was coming along pretty well. Already he was picking up some good pointers from the upperclassmen, stuff that he'd have to try out sometime soon. Maybe on one of those Whitman girls. He didn't really like them fuzzy or scaly, but High Gear assured him that half the dorm was desperate for attention, and that made them easy to catch.
Eww, still after Cally, that won't end well for you. Those sleeze are just using Fra to get at Cally, *seeing red* Gouyasse, calling yourself or any of those guys 'real men' is an insult to real men who know how to respect women. Got him drunk just to pump him for information on Cally, I hope these guys get sent to Doyle for this stunt. Manipulating Fra, sucking up to him, *record skips* And Fra let slip the truth about Cally, this is very bad. If they try to hurt Cally over this they are dead meat.
Ooo, almost missed the music credits at the end, nice.
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Tasting with your ears is an 'oddity'. Sweet summer child, so ignorant about how crazy Wateley is.Whateley Academy campus on a weekend morning had a sort of energy to it that was as unmistakable as it was difficult to define. Fiorella Persico, Calliope to most and Cally to her friends, could practically taste it. The fact that this gustatory response was somehow being processed via her ears was just one more thing to add to the list of oddities which was her life.
Wait for your first simulation, and collective fac-off with the Attack Bitches. Then you cn laugh at how silly and naive that sentence was.Her friends had handily abused the system in order to snag a table on the second floor in the name of their training team, the "Mutant Mayhem Machine." She still had trouble believing they'd actually gotten away with it.
It will be coming up. Sooner than you think. Rules of Drama are merciless.Plenty, Calliope thought but did not say. Or rather, plenty of things contained in one single element that automatically placed the boy outside her sphere of preferences. She was not ready for that conversation yet, however!
Put like this, it's a big deal. But... Still only first one.She had a date! That was the only detail of any importance right now. She had a date, and more importantly she'd chosen to ask him out. It was done on the spur of the moment, but unlike any other instance when her body's overdeveloped instinct for romance kicked in, it really was her decision. Just for that, she cherished the thought.
And we want to know all of it."You don't know the half of it. Hell, I don't know the half of it." The lavender girl attacked her pancake tower with knife, fork, and vengeful gusto. "But if you run into a redhead named Scarlyt, I'd suggest running the other way. That girl's just not right up there."
Egoist. let the cinnamon rolls flow.Yeah, he could simply magic up more, which he did as necessary, but he needed to pace himself.
Euh people, I ge the idea of believing the codename is meta, but after the third schmuck sent to the hosto, I'd be asking myself questions."The usual. Some dick-eating jerkwad makin' fun of my face." Peter Foley's chosen code name was Humorless, which Daniel figgered ought to be more than enough warning that Pete couldn't take a joke. So far, lots of people had proved they didn't have the good sense the Lord gave a possum.
Even if the appearance gives him no mercy, sweet Philemon.Peter Foley was the angriest, most serious kid he'd ever met. Unfortunately, his mutation had left him with a bright red nose, pale skin with a peachy outline around his mouth, and lime green hair that stuck out in two huge tufts. Just from the face, he looked exactly like a clown should. Then you had to zoom out a bit to notice that the kid had the muscles of a grizzly bear, and probably a bear's sense of humor to go with it.
Still not better than Sparky. Or Mouse. Or Koromaru.No one could say what'd been going through old Doc Talltale's brain – not even the doc himself – when he'd made Cookie, but the results barked for themself. At the shoulder, the devisor's former guard dog stood almost four feet tall and about as broad, with legs that were short only in proportion to the rest of its body. One stubby tail wagged happily while two round heads with mashed in noses and Boston Terrier markings had huge grins. "Warf," they barked in stereo, tongues lolling.
...What the fuck is this dog able to do?"Um..." the man said. "Is this..." He checked his paper. "Doctor's Precious Badass Nihilistic Killer with–"
"Just Cookie is fine," Daniel said, on top of pup's barks.
Make a list and write them, we could help, if you were fourth-wall aware. At worst we'd get a good laugh.At the moment, its only use seemed to be to serve as home to Mr. August's advanced music program and its corollary, the band known as the Unladen Swallows. She had yet to hear an explanation for that name that made sense.
Art wangsters. Bury their memory.While the band seemed to be some sort of tradition in the department, its popularity had run into the ground the year before. The two upperclassmen, Dalton and Emile, blamed it on the old guard and their leader, all of whom graduated last semester. Apparently there'd been the sentiment that any sort of conformity to rational taste was a sign of selling out, and the band had famously done performances like belching a capella, avant-garde lack-of-music, and a one-man show based on arrhythmic cowbell virtuoso improv. Her ears hurt at the simple thought.
Hey, iI know it's self-centered, but how poor schmucks with only two legs, arms, hands and no tentacles are supposed to handle that sweet stuff? *See the duplication* Oh come on, really?There were knobs and buttons, levers and pedals, and she could not see how it could be played without the use of three hands, four feet, and perhaps some tentacles.
Show-off. Awesome show-off. And beware, sparkling is losing value real quick nowadays.At the first electric note, a ripple of bright yellow raced across her dress and hair. More followed, turning her into a visual expression of chords and measures. Limp tresses gained a life of their own, fanning out and moving in a non-existent breeze as they scintillated.
You can't have that stroke soon enough, Wahnsinnig (it's already an insult, why waste effort on that bint to use something else?)."Ami-Mädchen." The word sounded like a cute nickname, but the nuance behind it was anything but. American, the other girl was saying. Pretender, fake. "What are you doing here?"
Get the conversation to go on codenames. In public. You want witnesses that her heart failed on her all by itself.Kirsten claimed to know something, some piece of information which she felt sufficiently disgraced Erica that... well, she wasn't sure just what the German girl had wanted, to be honest. The pounding of her own heart in her ears had made it impossible to hear much of last night's speech. Even the knee-jerk reaction, that Kirsten somehow knew about Eric, seemed so less likely by the light of day.
I expect this file t be detailed enough to include favorite meals, and this codename thingie. Please do not disappoint, Uncle Adolf (Man must be really salty for nazoids to be beaten because of someone with that name)."Kirsten Bischofsheim. German. Er... maybe the Rhineland or one of the other western states, from her accent. Age... at least a year older, so fifteen or sixteen. I never caught her codename."
"Excellent deduction! I will mail you a list of items. Please get back to me as soon as you can with some estimates on price."
Especially when you get to enjoy Whateley perks.
One paranoid check later: Not an Attack Bitch as far we know. Hope is allowed."Whew, nice view from up here," said Nefertiti Copeland, Neff to her friends, as she stared over the nearest railing. The dark-skinned beauty had arrived from her weekend dance class still dressed in leggings and a jacket over her leotard. Curly hair was done up in a bun behind her head.Adolf's laugh warmed up his voice considerably.
I had doubts when he dare try the 'beautiful eyes' compliment."Well, perhaps... Ah." Calliope had a pretty good view of the first floor herself, and right now she could see her brother chatting up a girl with dark brown hair and a pair of boobs that should not have been architecturally possibly to keep aloft without bra straps showing across her bared shoulders. Fra obviously had trouble keeping his eyes off this example of the most common superpower at Whateley, much to the girl's annoyance. Calliope could almost hear the slap through the cafeteria din.
"What's the matter?" asked Bailey.
"Niente," she said. "Only my brother being an idiot."
You're already in the 10% smarter people with that sentence. Or at least more common sense."Good. I figger fakin' it won't get me nowhere anyhow."
Typo is giving a scumbag far too much credit. Also, what the fuck is wrong with small-towns preachers in this 'verse? And small towns, by the way... Oh right, many old racists (at least according to what I can see back home. And several towns of this 'verse)."Kay, 'kay," he said. "Um... folks moved us up to this small town in Idaho when I was little. More of a commune, actually. I didn't know the word till a few months ago, but it fits, I figger. The Revered... well, he didn't take kindly to, ah, our sort of people, so when my eyes turned pink, my mom and pop helped me get out quietly. They still live there." His smile had quickly turned upside down at that. Cookie padded over to nuzzle his ear.
... Just wait until you discover your mother is with them. Fun times coming for all people."And my distant cousins are actual Nazi villains still, unfortunately." She made a disgusted grimace. "They, ah, tried to force a reconciliation last summer, get us to join them. Or kill us all if we refused. It's complicated."
I'm not liking where this is going, especially the flashbacks...But watching the date in action had really hammered the spike in her heart. That blonde girl had looked so happy, so carefree with, with... him.
*Headdesk* Fuck's sake, that's Thunderbird mess all over again. Okay, this time the girls have more of a justification for not moving on, but... You need to learn a secret: Asking. The. Guy. Out. First. Does. Not. Make. Slut. Out. Of. You. Especially when you see the 'alternatives' planned like thhe Parade Of Mock Boyfriends. Just ask, for fuck's sake. And bust the balls of the one not getting the secret aforementionned.By the end, she'd attracted a few more girls over to hear her sobby mess, and if anything they were angrier about it than she could ever see herself getting, though for different reasons. "It ain't fair," griped her roommate, a snaky young woman who normally didn't have more than two words for her a day. "Yinz know it's always the truth," Ophidian said. "Not all of us are as lucky as Dawn's been so far. Damn near none of us have. Those pretties get almost all the nice guys. And all the bad boys. And half the girls too, these days." She spat, and specks of varnish fizzled off the arm of the nearest chair. "So who's the hussy who's got yinz worked up?"
I can alrady guess who that bint is behind that '''sheep's clothing'''. Random wild crazy question, Wahnsinnig, do you have medical antecedents in your family hinting at cardiac failures?"Oh. That girl." Another voice broke in, and everyone turned to look at the sophomore who'd just walked by. Her words stung with their distaste. "Let me tell you about Erica von Abendritter...."
*Wincing* I guess... One key hint: Stop staring at the boobs."It is..." He ran a hand through his exemplar-perfect coif. "It is this school!" he finally blurted out in Italian. "This school is crazy and strange and nothing seems to go right. I... I cannot communicate properly and no one ever listens, and, and..."
I think I wasted both a wince and a hint there on a loser. At least try to prove me wrong."Only that once! And you try not looking when some lovely thing is on display like that! It is a miracle, a feast for the senses this school, but I am forced to content myself with merely looking!"
Okay, that one was just unprofessional, and frankly cruel. Especially the translation. Someone, fire her.As her brother sullenly exited the cottage lobby, Ms. Plimsoll looked up from her paperback novel long enough to say, "Tieni la voce più bassa la prossima volta. Non abbiamo bisogno di conoscere tutti i dettagli della tua vita amorosa" in the decent Italian of someone who had paid attention in school. Then, for the benefit of every girl within earshot, she translated: "We do not need to know all the details of your love life." Fra's ears burned and his feet hastened after that.
As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.
See the first sentence to get why.Another Twain boy, the one who looked like a circus clown but was in no mood to be told so, snorted. "It's no use askin' him. He's as goody-goody as they get."
"But he's the only one of us getting dates!" rhino boy groaned. Fra's ears perked at that.
Repeatition of former statement.How had Daniel, soft and hardly handsome when compared to practically any exemplar male on campus, scored a real date before anyone else?
... I'm not doing this a third time. If you don't get it when the clue is savaging your skull, nothing will do the trick."Non c'è giustizia," he muttered as he slumped into his chair and faced the day. There was no justice.
I'd like this kid... If he hadn't just used his arsenal to savage an history class."You wanna tell her?" The only response from Marcus was rude and nonverbal. "Ha, fine. Little bro's got... let's call 'em issues with explosives and missiles and a lot of other stuff. And he gets panicky over it at odd times. So, when the first slideshow of the semester was about a mutant terrorist attack..."
May Gygax, Arneson, Old Man Henderson, and Boxcar Joe The Magic Hobo watch over you all."I should come up with someone, too," Erica said. She'd run a game for a while over the summer with her cousin, but the character she'd used then was... had been Eric's. It'd felt weird, to say the least. "Maybe go for one of the weirder classes this time. Shake it up a bit."
Does it work when he needs low numbers too?"Me? Nah." The young man shook his head. "Me and dice get along a little too well. I'd be rolling high every time unless everyone turned around and trusted me not to cheat when they weren't looking." He swiped a handful of colorful dice from his sister's collection, shook them in his cupped hands, and then released them with a flourish. They bounced and rolled, coming to a stop with the numbers 18, 19, or 20 showing on every single one. "Succeeding on a Hail Mary roll is about as cool as it gets," Pat said, as if that explained everything. "And if it looks cool, I can manage it."
Man, the standards of the group are really slacking, if they can't do better than Demented Stale Farces...She dared look up, seeing the chin of one Brita Baumann, a.k.a. StahlFaust of the Amazons, working its way up and down in the rhythm of a woman holding back a deluge of words. "Might I have a word with Erica and Calliope?" she asked the faux-twins. "In private? It is the business of the Euro-Promotional League."
... On the plus side, we just heard any chances a girl of Mutant Mayhem Machine could join the Attack Bitches die in a quite gruesome way."Only that there are some who are not what they claim to be, or were born different from what they pretend to be now. They may say they are simply making themselves right, as the inside so the outside, but it is a perversion of nature." StahlFaust's words were directed mainly towards Erica, without even a glance towards Calliope, and yet they shook the Italian girl like an earthquake.
Doooo it. You'll have a pleasant surprise.Calliope wanted to say, wanted to give voice to her fears and suspicions, but to do so would be to expose herself. Silence made her sick to her stomach, but the words might make her vomit.
Like you said, Pat is a ''' VIle Deserter of the Great And Glorious Matriarchy to the Vile Patriarchy''' for the Attack Bitches (Might be giving a purple interpretation the description)."I'm a female-to-male transgender," Pat said bluntly. "Anatomically, I'm a girl but I refuse to identify as one. The school allowed me to register openly under some legalese version of 'It's complicated' at the spot where you would usually tick male or female, so I am officially a male on the books, but I still have to use the girls facilities to change and shower. Stupid body-literalists," he grumbled.
Sinfest Sisterhood, to sum... Except the authors aren't on the side of the glitterbags this time. Watching them crash and burn will be fun.Pat waved a hand in delicate dismissal. "Please. That one's brain got broken long ago, and not by me. Even for an Amazon, she's a bit... intense," he said. "It's like they've all internalized this big dogma of a gender war so deeply that the entire concept of gender has become stuck on a dualistic antagonism with no room for any gradation between them."
It has to help not seeing people one-up you right and left.Pat's two Phys. Ed. classes were perfect examples. In the first, early every morning, he had practice sessions against robots, with Sensei Tolman critiquing his performance remotely. In that class of one, he was both the best student and oh so definitely the worst as well. The point was to learn, but that wasn't going to be easy.
I see sadism is alive and well in Whateley combat teaching... Yeah, I know it's a superficial reducing judgement to make.The only reason Pat was in the advanced martial arts class this year was because Sensei thought he'd make the perfect practice dummy. He'd survived so far.
I take it back, yours is an awesome position, made to break the Attack Bitches where it hurts the most.Drawing without thought upon strings of impressions arriving from the teacher, the classmates, and his opponent herself, he was able to glide an arm down along the inside curve of that blow, slamming the palm of his hand into StahlFaust's nose.
Cut him some slack, e's honoring the Tao Of Dresden on a sicko who deserves it, and I guess he knows the risks. And consider them irrelevant against the chance of causing her to be punt from the gates of the scool."Sorry, Sheriff Steely-Fists," Pat teased as he stepped off the mat. "But you'll just have to get your man another day." That got a muted chuckle from the rest of the class, who were all well aware of the Amazon's personal philosophy.
"You, you Geschlechtsverräter!"
"Save the language lesson for another day. And Hat Trick," Sensei Tolman said with a finger wagged in Pat's direction. "Stop trying to get her goat. Now, let's discuss what StahlFaust could've done to get a hit on him."
Valuable lesson to both, and extra salt in Stale Farce's wounds. Everyone mattering wins."A point!" called out Sensei. "Clocked at thirty-two seconds. Good job, Kenshin."
Yeah, given the mental changes involved, there lied a way of pilles glass.Had that... could that have been an option for her? she wondered. Losing Eric had been hard enough, cling though she did to the things he used to like. Staring at her reflection in the window during fifth-period algebra, she sadly concluded that it wouldn't have worked.
... I got nothing, this critter is playing in Mouse's weight category. Mouse is still better though. And Koromaru. And Sparky. You will al be spared when cats finally cast dogs out for good.Cookie
Taking a deep breath and ignoring the crowd, Calliope began:
Dreamless dorm, ticking clock,
I walk away, from the soundless room,
Windless night, moonlight melts
My ghostly shadow to the lukewarm gloom,
Nightly dance, of bleeding swords
Reminds me that, I still live...
I will burn my dread!
I once ran away from the god of fear
And he chained me to my despair!
Burn my dread!
I'll break the chain and run,
Till I see the sunlight again.
I'll lift my face, and run to the sunlight...
*Begins to sing along*
Never ever stops to write Whateley stories, people, I love you (why, yes I might be a tiny bitty fan of Persona. What did it give away?).
This man has most excellent taste, and Calliope is doing the job of conveying the song's feelings perfectly (played the game, heard it the remix, including the one from the movie. Strangely, the wiki gives me different lyrics than the ones used).The song was new to her, something that Kieron's dad had imported on CD years ago, but it had a lively current to it, a rebellious flow that pushed a soul to stand up to, well, anything. Without real context, Calliope could not say what the lyrics were referencing, so she let her heart pick the moods, and what she projected to the audience was courage, hope, and a sense of purpose.
You're joining best authors for me.The god of fear... again, she had no context, but she could feel that divinely infernal presence, that shadowy presence upon her heart nearly every day. Looking up again as she sang, the faces of her personal girl squad could be seen cheering her on.
Appropriate awe. Work the enthusiasm for next time."Wow, that was cool."
Hell yeah!Now I face out! I hold out!
I reach out to the truth of my life,
Seeking to seize, on the whole moment, yeah...
Yep too, Japanese rappging in English are a bit hard to follow. Still so worth it.In fierce competition with Nick's wailing chords, Cally's voice belted out a long sequence of words that were almost rap, then finished with a series of reprises and refrains syncopated with the heavy beat of Dalton's drumsticks.
Philistine! At least you got the mood. And, really, at a concert? Are you trying to collect rakes to the face (we call these failures 'rateaux' in French. Feels appropriate there)?He didn't really get this music. The words came fast and ferocious, twisting the vowels in that idiotic way that English did until his ears, trained in a more sensibly phonetic tongue, couldn't decipher what his own sister was singing. The words simply sped through the air like bullets of emotion, and that part at least he understood. Fear, courage, hope, all in that first song. The second was more filled with hope at its most victorious.
It didn't make the handprint on his face sting any less, but his mood was buoyed.
Abort now. That fuckhead isn't worth it, and best you realize it before you see him using you as a springboard to get your sister."Awful timing, F-dude," said the young man standing next to him. Fra wasn't sure how he and Macarthur had become friends, though it had definitely happened at the dorm mixer. Mac was a stereotype of the American exemplar: tall and lean, square jawed with a permanent hint of stubble, and wavy brown hair that never needed combing to look good. Once he grew into it all, at least.
You forgot a key step: Choose your frends fucking right.Fio was right: friends were important to have. He needed to listen to them better.
...Friends don't grill you about concerts like this. You might reconsider your friendship with the girl.No, no, no! she thought. "...okay," she squeaked out. Cookie was looking at her with one set of doggy eyebrows raised, but the dog couldn't say anything. Probably. Monica was almost as mute on the way to her dorm, letting the other two fill the space with words. She could almost be thankful for their descriptions of the short concert, because Electra would surely quiz her on it later.
...So, you aren't a bitch, so it has chances of not being a complete trainwreck? ... Leave me with my optimism.Why oh why did that girl have to be so nice?
... I smell conflict. And fear a future Attack Bitch in being."Ja. Ahem, yes..." She shook her head. "I will be, at least. Only, I need to get over the sudden urge to punch someone in the face."
The girl, a plain young thing with frizzy brown hair and strangely intense eyes behind her taped-up glasses, nodded sagely. "I know how that is. The administration's barred me from issuing fight challenges on weekdays for now, but man is it hard to hold it in when you really wanna clock somebody..."
Using pasties. And you bint wonder why you coudln't get the Eisenmädel's codename... Wahnsinnig."Well, Rachel, what would you do if..." The conversation continued for another ten minutes, and the girl proved to be quite creative in describing how she'd beat up various people on and off campus. It was likely all bluster, but little Rachel seemed as earnest as anyone could be when it came to brawling. Carefully, casually, and with great circumspection, Kirsten brought the conversation back around to von Abendritter...
People like you should be giving seminaries to the kids of this school.Penny didn't laugh, or even chuckle under her breath this time. "Look, cuz. You're all of fourteen, even if it's easy to forget that sometimes, and this is some senior-level dating angst building up here. You would not believe some of the crap that goes on at my oh-so-mundane high school over here, and half of it happens because some kid's got so desperate over dating that others can take advantage. Don't be like that. At your age – and I say this from the lofty heights of almost-eighteen – you don't worry about if it's going anywhere."
"So, what should I..."
"Enjoy life, go out on another date, and then let your head decide. Not your heart, because it doesn't know what's good for it. Certainly not your glands, either, because those know what's good for them, and it ain't always good for you. Your brain's the thinky bit, so think! If you think it's going somewhere, then maybe it is. And if you think it's not, then you're probably right."
*'Whispering'*I think you might have your first date here soon...Neff winked. "No need to worry about that. You got a complete package going on, girl! Voice, looks, style – just need to work on your moves. Shake those hips a bit more on stage, put 'em to good use!"
*Headdesk* Just talk, dammit! Take care of your fucking problems instead of letting them fester!Bianca and Tanya were still not talking to each other – though that seemed more on the lavender girl than the pale girl from Chicago. They sat at opposite ends of the table, with Bianca's gaze sometimes turning to bridge the distance. Tanya's lightly purpled eyes never seemed to be looking back. Erica still had not heard the exact reasons for this, as no one really seemed to want to say.
... First step, I guess. Now do it with the problems."That," Laura continued, "led to a convoluted lecture of the cultural significance of the fish..."
*Remembers Hikaru's backstory* Yours is a special brand of hypocrisy."Witness the perfidy of Americans who think they can improve on perfection," Hikaru said, the sarcasm strong in her voice. After a pause, she repeated herself in Japanese. Her would-be bodyguard shook his head in disbelief.
... I see toilets and sewers in your future."So hey," the boy called Meatball began. "I googled Italian sizes after that last time, and a 2B is the equivalent to a 34B, so I got it right after all." His chubby cheeks beamed happily, as if this was some great accomplishment.
Asking that one loud tells me enough for a two words report: Darwin. Award."Height?"
"Eh... 154 cm."
"Weight?"
"No," she said flatly.
"Okay, okay... so no asking your measurements?"
Buuuurn. Of course good pop and J-pop aren't concerned."What about pop music? Like, the current Top 40?"
"Vapid and dimwitted," Calliope stated with an irritable face. "Now it's your turn. Name?"
Not so fun, eh?"Height?"
"Four foot nine."
"Weight?" She screwed her face into a smirk at his reaction.
"Um... one hundred twenty pounds." He shifted his chair, which did nothing to hide how solid (she was being charitable) his belly was.
You're shitting me? That's part of the poweer. And a awesome one, to boot. All RPG players of any kind knows it, nothing is better than a healer! A good one, at least.Bryon shook his head. "You're a chick. You wouldn't understand. Us guys gotta at least try and look tough and manly, but holding hands ain't either of those. What are other guys gonna think? What are girls gonna think if they see me holding hands with another guy?"
Duck, guess that had to happen."On your school application, it clearly states that you are a mutant, and yet I have here..." Sheets of paper knocked against the tabletop as he tapped them into an orderly stack. "Bloodwork results which show that not only are you not an active mutant, but that you lack any of the identified gene complexes associated with mutant powers of any sort. So, why did you present false data, and what are you?"
With all due respect, moron, in that school, odds are the first sentence is serious. At least often enough to always check."It's okay," Erica told her. To Mr. Bergamot she said, "I'm sorry, sir, but I'm not certain how much I can divulge. Do you have some proof of security clearance?"
"What?" Now it was the teacher's turn to look confused. "Fine. Be that way. We shall take this to the top. Come along." He waved Erica to follow him as he headed to the door.
...Tentative yay for you, sir."Are powers derived from an apparent non-normative combination of genetic and epigenetic traits," concluded the Headmaster. "And, triggered or not by outside forces, they seem to conform to the same basic form of known mutations. You may leave now, Ms. von Abendritter," he said. "If you hurry, you should be able to make it to your third-period class. Contact your uncle and inform him of the situation. I await his call with interest."
Yeah, that dude isn't Quintain for me either."Mr. Bergamot," he said, stopping the man with a simple gesture. "As I have read your file – your complete file – I have some idea of what you have in mind here, and while the previous administration was willing to either overlook or accommodate your personal... quirks, believing your strengths as a teacher and researcher outweighed them, I have yet to reach the same conclusions. You are not helping your case," he added drily.
...Fishy. Also, the power of Ctrl+F tells me it's the woman fond of translating private conversations. Classy choice.With a heavy sigh, he dialed a campus directory code on his office phone. "Hello, Dierdre? Ah yes, my apologies. Elspeth. How is Dickinson treating you? Oh? Well I would not have asked you to take the position if I thought you could not handle it. But as it happens..." he continued. "I would like it if you could keep a special eye on one of your wards...."
Random wild crazy question... If more Persona is coming, what character will she cosplay as?"We've gotta design Cally a cool outfit for her performance next week,"
And while she's not doing herself any favor by behaving this way, unfortunately nothing will ever to the bint truly at fault...Tia gritted her teeth, ears wilting. "I've... got a stalker. Total Diedricks case, and about one degree away from full-on mad scientist. Um, no offense," she said to the devisors in the room.
I call bullshit, that name has to be taken. Several times. With Lawsuits lying around."Bergholdt Stuttley, a.k.a. Stark. He thinks it's an Iron Man reference, but really it's because he's stark raving nuts. His latest masterpiece is built around a calculation of pi based on actual pie."
Never forget the important stuff."Now or never," Vickie said. "I mean, we'd hit this issue soon enough, and it's not ever going to get easier. Might as well tackle it now and get it over with."
"And turn in the notes for a grade in Dr. Speers's lab class," Laura added.
"Yeah, of course."
I'm nursing heavy doubts Carson ever okayed that fucktard.Good man, good teacher, good scientist. At best, he could manage two out of three in any given situation.
And the student sitting in his office right now was hardly smiling.
Heavy as in "Almighty Gygax, that fucker shouldn't be allowed within 100 meters of a kid (okay, yankees, 300 feet).""And I am sure you were not," he said, fibbing atrociously. "In point of fact, I wanted to speak with you about your long-term research goals."
Broken record, but... What the fucking fuck is that thing doing rotting at Whateley? Quality of the teaching and research has to take a backseat somewhere. I mean, they didn't let Jobe do everything he wanted either!"I can neither confirm nor deny..." He could very well lie, though. "Ms. Howe, I am a dedicated researcher, but I am also an instructor. It meets both my interests to enable yours, or even to supply information pertinent to your field of research. For instance..." Mr. Bergamot passed her a page with a list of names upon it. "Here are students whom my personal research has led me to suspect did not come by their powers naturally. Your, ah, friend is naturally at the top of that list."
You don't say. It means people would be justified to feed you to a wood-chipper to take you out?Yes, he thought as she vacated the office with an urgency born of disturbed inspiration, of the three facets of his life, being a good man was surely the hardest, as well as the first to be abandoned when needs be. But the results would justify it in the end.
After being thoroughly fucked with a rusted chainsaw.The smile on the girl's face was too broad to look natural, and her eyes had the look of frosted glass lit from behind. "Nothing too much. Just one question, in fact. How do you feel about sharing a campus with a no-good, lying, cheating, amoral freak of nature who couldn't keep it in his pants so he got what was coming to him. Her," she corrected, punctuating with a pronoun.
Less problems would happen if they got in their heads than making first step does not instantly turn them into sluts. And like I said, break the balls of the morons accepting because of that too. Also, trying it is an important step in 'stoping to give a fuck about how my body is perveived by others and myself'. It's yur life, dammit, never let random losers you'll never see again dictate it for you."Well and good for yer, but a right number of girls back in Whitman are mickle upset with yer over that. Liken it to stealin' him from under their noses."
Dude, She's Lesbian. And you're a bitch."Still single, huh? Don't worry; you'll find some nice guy to steal away from a poor unpretty girl eventually."
... I think you can sue someone for circumstances like this. And makes loads of money."And the best part?" said Friedrich. "The part that these Americans think is oh-so-funny? My surname is Schnöring."
And you still don't get why you're Wahnsinnig. Erica, when she has that stroke? Fucking finish her.The older girl snorted. "Hmph. I would have thought you would be more circumspect, von Abendritter. There are would-be heroes around. I would have thought," she repeated with voice raised, "that our little conversation of last week had left a lasting impression in that golden head of yours. Gold is the softest of metals, after all." Not far behind her, a group of Whitman girls tittered nervously.
... Sort of good news? a more good one: You have ground to pummel her to oblivion if she survives the stroke... We need Wahnsinnig crushed in a Combat Final by Erica, as soon as possible! (Now that's unreasnoable use. The bint deserves it anyway)."My name?" A cold burst of panic hit her guts, and she was acutely aware of all the watching eyes now. This was the secret which the sophomore had boasted of? Not Eric at all?
Fuck this shit. *Fantasizes about bashing Wahnsinnig's head against the hardest wall Whateley can offer until I'm falling asleep... In about 6 hours I think* Illusory, and not healthy way of thinking at the end, I know, but imagining it is therapeutic."Just leave, von Abendritter," came Kirsten's harsh consonants. "You are not wanted here."
Dang, and he was classy enough for taking this road... You're losing great boyfriend material there. On plus side you gain a friend of equivalent quality."I figger..." he said finally. "I figger I don't know what I'm ready for either. Love and romance are 'bout the sorta thing you see in the movies, but dunno what they're like for real. But a friend..." He nodded. "Friends are good."
Man, the stupid bint must have bust her ass to not look worst than that bunch of misfits... And all of them blow Kismet away. Except Wahnsinnig, of course, they're in the same garbage bin."All last year. Saw it for myself. The Eurofroshes that year were, like, a complete mess. That French girl with the water powers? Afraid to swim. The Belgian kid? Burgeoning alcoholic. Still is. His Lordship Gregory Crumbley... Okay, so he was, like, okay, but then that French devisor they used to hang with completely balanced out the sanity levels, in a bad way. Kirsten was the only thing that, like, held them together."
Someone is about to face the other end of a bitch campaign. Just tells me when you bring out the vats of acid... Yes, I'm deluding myself here.Milena laughed at that. "Could be. Mind sending me a copy of that file? I can use it as a starting point for my own checks."
Fuck Nazi '''science'''.That did not stop her from wishing Erica were interested in girls, all night long.
Nor, though she didn't realize, did it stop her roommate from wishing the exact same thing.
Cue a Wiki spell to remember the girl is a Bad Seed... Dunno if it would work, there is Bianca's blooper (just fire Gideon out of a cannon, dammit), Erica's family thoroughly fucked the Nazi legacy with a chainsaw, and she's closer to hero than the cliche Bad Seed... Double membership?"Report to me if you find anything troubling,' said Ms. Plimsoll. "And... one last question. Were you intending on inviting Ms. von Abendritter to join that club of yours?"
Milena couldn't say she was surprised by the question, even if it hadn't been expected. "I considered it, ma'am. If it gets too bad, Erica's going to need emotional support from people who understand. I'm not sure if the others will see it that way, however."
Thanks fuck someone see Wahnsinnig for the pile of shit she's. Also kudo to the Dickinson ones. Heh, one '''pretty''' wanting to see beyond appearances. Suck it, Whitbitches."She does seem nicer than that other girl," added Marcus from the far end, where he and Twitch had been sketching out schematics in between bites of cereal.
They're supposed to be fourteen. Seriously, it's impossible to be friends with opposite sex, fucking has to happen? You're still closer to kids than something else, for Butcher's sake!"I never said we weren't still friends. And that's the kinda thing he does when he sees someone having a bad day. I mean, he's given you extra before, too."
Nods politely, pretends to follow that, hit abort when she's out of sight, and get her some serious help. Tanya is awfully unprepared for Real Life (we're sure she isn't a changeling too?).The lavender girl twirled in place, rising several inches off the ground. "Well, how about going old-school? Write him a note with two little boxes labeled Yes and No, and have him tick one?"
"Do people actually do that?"
Tanya shrugged. "If after-school specials have taught me anything, then sure. It's worth a try, at least. Something like, 'Hey, my name's Tanya'..."
I take it back."That sounds awful embarrassing..."
"As bad as talking to him straight?"
"Worse, actually."
"Well then, just ask him directly.
You're getting second chance here Monica. Don't you fucking wasste it."It doesn't have to be serious!" she squeaked. "Um, I... I just wanted to... Never mind..." She turned to run off again, only to bump into Cookie. Those puppy-dog eyes were irresistible. "I just wanna be normal!" She fell back on her bottom and felt the tears flow. "I wanna be a regular girl and not some freak that no one will even look at, and, and..." She stopped as a cream donut was presented to her. "Thanks..."
"Not a worry," Daniel assured her. "Well, like I said, I ain't lookin' for a date-date right now, but a friends-date, just bein' social and all... we could try that. How's, um, Tuesday sound?"
I think we need to know who that girl is.Cookie 2
Conflict is coming back. And Wahnsinnig was once again completely wrong, this girl feels like someone with teeth too.One of the best things about this school was that people learned fast. That hadn't been true at her old school in Terre Haute, even though it was supposed to be a school for smart kids. A lot of her old classmates had been too smart, but not savvy at all. That had caused problems by the end.
But here? Here, folks were savvy, and fast. After just two weeks, anyone who saw Rachel Altus coming quickly stepped out of the way.
She might also be better than I thought... once she get better training at target selection... Why am I getting Bedside Rug vibes?There were a lot of things that could be said about Rachel, avatar of a wayward spirit she knew as Honey-Boo-Boo the honey badger. Most had been said to her face exactly once. Of the few that had survived to be repeated, the frontrunner was 'loyal'. Loyal to friends, loyal to family.
By now, the Whitman Cottage girls counted as both, and somebody had been picking on them.
Good start."Got it," Erica said, tugging at her glove straps. The combat suit hadn't seen much use, for all that it was also her registered outfit for school activities. It was the best that her uncle's contacts and grandfather's know-how could assemble, with fabric material that was heat-, cold-, shock-, tear-, puncture-, and bullet-resistant. Her power actually rendered that last one moot, but memories of how power-testing had shown that her force-field trick could be overloaded made her glad for it anyway. The suit had a plethora of pockets for tools and holdouts she had yet to acquire. That was on her To Do list for the year.
As for the gloves... Her friends in Kansas had had a friend south of the border in Oklahoma who'd owed a favor. She couldn't explain how they worked, but anyone punched with those things was going to feel it.
Kodiak 2.0 vibes strengthening.Rachel went flying, smacking into the far wall of the chamber with a dull thud, almost a full yard off the ground.
Oh scheisse. Just how tough was Rachel, anyway? Erica's worries ramped up as the girl slid limply down the wall and to the floor.
Then she got up.
"Yanno, that was a pretty good hit," Ratel said as she dusted herself off.
Totally Kodiak 2.0."Sure. Get some exercise, beat up a bully or two, maybe even break a sweat. It's all good."
My mmother would totally try to see if this machine does passion/geranium sorbet. It better would too (personally, I prefer black chocolate sorbet and raspebrry sorbet).Calliope would not try to guess how it worked. Laura had tried to explain her personal theories, and it had almost put the Italian off her ice cream completely. Words like quantum waveform collapse had no business in a discussion about sweets. All that she needed to know was that if she entered any two-digit code into the Machine's front display and pulled the handle, ice cream happened. A little booklet hanging to the side listed all one hundred possibilities, starting with 00 for plain vanilla, but many students prefered to hit the big digital button that said "Surprise Me." Some even did it more than once.
At least they will be free of oil as a fuel soon..."I had not realized," Hikaru said drily, "that the US had perfected engines that ran on pure sucrose."
Refringshly direct. Since you seems talented for that, suggest they try asking out first.Ratel belched. "Half the freshmen in my dorm are pissed because blondie here asked the nicest guy on campus out before they had a chance to."
Your family did get slaughtered after. It ain't paranoia if they're really out to get you."I have ordered a car via my cousin, who said she put the order through to Nissan." Hikaru rolled her eyes. "But every time I try to get an answer out of her when it would be delivered, she evades. It does not help that Amazon is putting on a show of Japanese supercars, I admit." The Japanese girl paused. "Though I understand why there's a bit of delay, the motor pool likely is modifying to place armor inserts in the car. But it shouldn't take this long."
'older and wiser students'... How can you fail so much at that, Fran?His host, a junior from Emerson who called himself High Gear, was demonstrating just how well stocked it was by pulling out a case of beer and handing out cans to his guests.
For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?Fra was inclined to agree with Gouyasse there. Italian beer was nothing worth talking about, which was why he and his friends had stuck with Stella Artois, a product of Belgium. When it came to arguments over beer, he was on the side of anyone whose country had more branded breweries than there were days in the year to sample them.
Cut that crap out, loser. Your name has been voted to be 'Pit Of Braindead Losers Never Getting A Girlfriend Ever' by all the other students on the campus, remember?Welcome all to the first meeting this year of the Outstanding Dudes Society!
And that would explain why. All of you, go fuck a mixer."...made average because the kids at this school set the bar too fucking high." I know it seems incredible now, but it is perfectly possible for any guy to score with the choice females on this campus – yes, even those impossible beauties of Venus Inc."
Let's make a bet for shits and giggles. All of you, losers badly needing a brain transplantation, against Kenshi. For some reason, i don't think the odds will be what you think.Gouyasse belched lightly. "That's nothing. It is the safety in numbers, hiding behind a safe, compliant beta male who will not assert himself."
Fuck's sake, abort Fra, these guys are the worst pack of losers I ever saw in all my highschooler/student life. Bet if you asked you'd discover none of these shitbags ever had a date.Fra joined in the chorus of hurrahs, though he didn't quite understand everything that was said, then or later. Even in plain English, he could tell that a lot of the words bandied about were special terms or slang, which he already knew from experience was the most difficult part of the language. As the beer continued to pour and the spirit of the room lightened, he stopped caring so much about the exact meanings and focused on what he could get out of the experience.
You're a cool teacher, sir."Glad to hear it. Now, as to the class... No, I will not let you drop it, even though Kirsten is being awful at the moment. However, I think that for the next week or two, you can handle the reading by yourself. Instead of the usual classes, you can manage the tutoring station in the language lab, and for the days when Kirsten is on duty there, we will arrange something with either Wilhelm or myself. Basically, we will invert your current schedule for the class."
Lego Movie reference could be a thing, but I can bullshit here. Nobody like Mondays. Unless eldritch abomination out for gorging itself on human suffering.Another awesome week and a marvelous Monday, too! Hannah Sammish wished sometimes that he could walk on air like some of her classmates, but she could settle for just the feeling. Life was just awesome. Everything was awesome.
It's all the loser's fault, sweetie. And you really know nothing about nice teacher. Quintain, dunno where, and how you are, but necromancy could be envisgaed with how much that guy sucks.The world felt a little less awesome. The freshman hadn't come on Friday, and Mr. Bergamot hadn't commented on that absence, but Hannah couldn't help but feel a teeny-tiny tad responsible for it. Things hadn't gone too well on Thursday, obviously, but she hadn't had the guts to ask Erica about it directly, even when she'd had the chance.
...Actually logic, leading to ask the question again: How in the name of fuck did Carson ever approve keeping that fuckhead around?"Who, Mr. B? Sure. I mean, he must've passed some wowzer background checks to work here, and promised this and that and swore an oath on a Bible or Necronomicon or something, so even if he used to be like, some hero or villain or alien brain in a jar, he'd still need to abide by school rules, and I'm sure that doing naughty awful stuff to students is a no-no."
I mean even Pixie Girl finds him fishy.Just to be careful though, she decided to delay her report by a few more days.
Who is that aetheric bastard? The fact he remains hidden here only spells bad news for me.Admit it, Sedrynnor; you love to feel needed.
Good boy. be a better one, and find a way of fixing this aetheric bastard infestation problem. Even edside Rug pays the rent, and I doubt this one does.Undoubtedly it would, but he'd rather have it on his terms. The music came first, and it was on himself to determine what that meant.
Fuck. Abort everything, you schedule now only consists of two items: 1)Finding Fey. 2) Fix that infestation problem for yesterday!the disembodied leannen-sidhe
Nice song. But isn't Persona... Still, I'll have to search for ore soongs of that group.The sound of her instrument cycled through the bridge of the song, wrapping the notes into a slowly turning spiral of positive thoughts borne from sadness. There were extra levers on her instrument, pulled or pressed to distort the chords until they wailed along with the words that followed.
Vanity detector 1 epxploded, fairly sure she's a vainglorious bitch.As the last notes rang into echoes, she took a bow. And then a more melodramatic second and third.
Love this song. And another singer to check out... (and fitting for a changeling)Truer words about the high school experience, she had never heard. Even before she took it to a personal level – and oh, how she could not go back to the way she'd been – wasn't that what school was about? Figuring out who you were and trying to become more of that?
Knew it. This bitch will be problem (the fuck is it than sparkilng go with vanity so often? I blame Meyer).Electradyne was right there at the edge, eyes sharp and hard. "Just had to upstage me, didn't you?" the girl growled. Gathering up the hem of her dress, she stormed away.
Patience. Revenge against Wahnsinnig will come.Not many students had come asking for help, despite Herr Auer's invitation to come ask her. At least one, a young lady with frizzy blonde curls that hung down from her head like a fleece had turned fluffy tail and walked briskly in the other direction at the sight of Erica behind the greeting desk. Bad gossip traveled fast and stayed long.
Taking bets for how long before that reveal happen people! Place your bets, people!"Huh. It's just that your voice tastes familiar, but I know I've never heard you say anything... Um, sorry, that sounds stupendously weird."
'Ecxuse me, I speak English like a swine'... Pretty sure it makes him Best ProfTeacher Ever."Tut mir leid, aber mein Englisch is under aller Sau."
She had to keep her expression carefully neutral there. "Did Herr Auer... explain what that meant?"
"Just that it was useful for apologizing if we're in Germany, and that by the time we can decipher it for ourselves, we probably won't need to use it."
Worthy to be spared by the cats indeed. You also need a trainer of high class. Mouse will be perfect.Cookie nuzzled her cheek with one warm nose, wiping off tears as they dripped. She hugged the other head's neck fiercely, whispering every little worry and fear that she'd suffered haunting her for far too long. She even talked about Eric, things that she hadn't mentioned to anyone in months, and the pup simply nodded along and gave puppy-kisses as needed.
Filthy lies, there is no age for fantasy... Okay, that's a flthy lie too. But truer than the one above."Um... how about The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe? I really liked that one when I was younger, but I think it's supposed to be a 7th-grade reading level book."
Dawww."You're welcome, Monica."
"We should do this again sometime," she said. "Maybe when you're a bit more widely read, so we've got something in common to talk about."
"And maybe you'll find yourself a better guy by then," he said with a wink.
She tittered. "Not likely. You're setting the bar for gentlemanliness pretty high. Um... some of the other girls in Whitman might like a friendly ear sometime. If you don't mind?"
"Never any trouble," he said.
Neff, Calliope is playing blind. Think you need to strip."Huh. This ain't working right. You're nothing but nerves right now! We need to loosen you up." Neff hopped over to the CD player, bending forward enough to give Calliope an eye-opening view of her butt.
It had to be coincidence... She repeated that over and over in her head.
Works well too.Neff grabbed her by the hand, twirling her around until she was giddy, and then somehow the distance between them was gone. The track wound down, and in the brief span before the next song began, it was only the two of them, standing chest to chest and flush with the excitment of the dance.
Calliope could never be too sure who kissed whom first, only that it felt so right in that moment.
...And you taunted the Ironic Overpower. Expect shitstorm soon, sorry."Trying to put the negative stuff behind us," she told the junior high girl. "It's only the start of the year, and we've already had so much crap hit the fan. Better not to dwell on it."
Someone who has the advantage of the alphabet over you should take iinspiration from your attitude, Kenshin. And not just in class, now I think about it.But in this class and in his language lab sections, Kenshin felt he might actually be able to master the art of the word. Eventually. As with many things, it was easier thought than said.
Pete's eyes, normally a bit yellowed and bloodshot, nearly popped out of his face from the force of his scowl. "What. Did. You. Call. Me?"
Making your wishes coming true too, Rachel? Use this ower wisely... Wish for a battle with the Attack Bitches!Frizzy brown hair shook negatively. "Nope. Start a fight, get in trouble. I mean, I guess if someone else's fight happens to fall in my lap, maybe, but..."
Up ahead along the busy hallway, the wall next to a door burst in an explosion of plaster dust and wood chips. A body was flung through it at the same time, tumbling through the passing-period crowd and landing on the floor with a thud. Erica didn't recognize the kid, but she did know the face of Daniel's roommate Pete as he loomed through the newly expanded entrance.
"You were saying... huh." Erica didn't have a chance to finish the thought. Rachel bounded over to the fallen kid, saying "Hey! Tag me in! Nod! Anything!"
...Alright, alright, you won back some pity. And yeah, this kid will never be confused with Donut."Lemme at 'im..." he mumbled incoherently. His shirt was ripped open, and unfortunately so was part of his abdomen.
Yup, Kodiak 2.0 all the way. With a side order of MurphyRachel was watching with curious eyes as the beast reverted to human form, minus any clothing save for a pair of underpants that must have been custom-made by a materials devisor. "Aw, he's cute in this form, too."
Pete almost chuckled at that. "Yeah, thought so. Stupid, pointless, meaningless. Just a buncha guys cryin' about how they can't get girlfriends or braggin' how they hooked up with some girl. And me?" He snorted. "They think I couldn't figger it out on my own, cuz I was dumb, but all their 'big plans' to help me were really about me creeping girls out so that the other guys would look better. Hell... er, sorry," he said at Daniel's disappointed glance. "Heck, you've had more datin' success this year than most of 'em. Figger I'll be askin' you for advice from now on."
I'm sorry for ever associating you with the Pit, dude. I'm sure you'll do better tha all these losers in the ends... Yes, Fra included.
Baby steps, he walked away from the Pit, after all."And, er, if you could put in a good word for me..."
Daniel sighed. "I can do that much, sure."
Speaking of thins I hoped never seeing again... What's the worst, MacArthur's hypocrisy with a modicum of decency, or the naked and frank scumbaggery of Gouyasse?"Bros before hoes, like the Americans say?" Gouyasse snorted. "It is silly sentiment, and hypocritical. You both want the same thing, and yet he also wants to protect his little sister from real men like us. It is a farce, yes?" He nodded to the couch, where the F-dude was on his third beer. "Now is your chance. I have been watching, and he holds his beer pretty well when it's that cheap American piss-water, but tonight he's into my special reserve. De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV. Thirty-nine percent by volume, but doesn't taste like it. He won't realize how drunk he really is for a few more minutes, so get in there now."
*Record Needle Scratch* No. Nononononononono..."No... Fio is special."
FUCK! Calliope will be outed before next week, probably after refusing a date under pain of revelation of secret, spiteful harming after beat-up, or just because these fuckers wanted to. And don't think Neff will be taking this well. Not bad per se, but that's still a nasty dirty bomb. The only silver lining is that she'll see the Attack Bitches' true face... As a fucking Prime Target. (Rant following, click if you're unnterested)."Back home, I was the, the, the cool one, the, the, the alpha, like High Gear ways it, and no one looked at Fio much. Just another be-be-beta, could never get a date, and now he is a girl and everyone loves him? Her! Stupid pronouns..."
*Drags Frack for some violent headbashing along with Wahnsinnig* You stupid, irresponsible sick little FUCKTARD! No matter how stormy it is with my brothers, I'd trust any of them for never revealing this sort of thing, or not ending so wasted they'd spill it like that, especially by the age of fucking fourteen! Spiked beer my soy sauce roasted chicken ass, you chose staying with these fuckheads, when a toddler could figure out what they're worth. No. Fucking. Mercy. On. You. Down in the Acid, with Wahnsinnig and the Attack Bitches. After more beating up.
Welp, that was certainly an emotional one. I hope we can see the next part soon, many things need resolution here, please. Including a stroke and a humiliation for Wahnsinnig, and Frak getting his a major part of his skeleton fractured.
Also, important points...
Persona fans here! Woohoo! If you want more lyrics, check the series' Wiki , although like I said for some strange reasons small differences can be seen. Also, G2 is happening during Fall 2016, meaning Persona 5 is out in Japan... If you write another story with songs, and especially ones lambasting thhe Attack Bitches... Yours is the most sacred duty of using Life Will Change ! Heck more songs in the stories look good anyways.
Also... Any chance of a spin-off for Rachel 'Ratel' 'Kodiak 2.0, flavor Murphy'?
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Dreamer wrote: Cally able to practically taste the energy around Whateley Academy on the weekend, interesting.
I've seen it done with empathy in other places, and it usually works. The brain needs to map those extra senses to something, and it's good to pick those things that call up memories similar to the input.
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A Cerberus, now there is a dog no sane student will mess with.At the shoulder, the devisor's former guard dog stood almost four feet tall and about as broad, with legs that were short only in proportion to the rest of its body. One stubby tail wagged happily while two round heads with mashed in noses and Boston Terrier markings had huge grins. "Warf," they barked in stereo, tongues lolling.
WA has an aptitude for enrolling students who aren't particularly sane.
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Okay, there has to be a story behind that band name.At the moment, its only use seemed to be to serve as home to Mr. August's advanced music program and its corollary, the band known as the Unladen Swallows. She had yet to hear an explanation for that name that made sense.
I wouldn't be surprised if their first outing involved banging two halves of a coconut together.
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At least they got him out of there quietly, plus a friend of his mother's to stay with, so that is who Miz Debbie is."Kay, 'kay," he said. "Um... folks moved us up to this small town in Idaho when I was little. More of a commune, actually. I didn't know the word till a few months ago, but it fits, I figger. The Revered... well, he didn't take kindly to, ah, our sort of people, so when my eyes turned pink, my mom and pop helped me get out quietly. They still live there." His smile had quickly turned upside down at that. Cookie padded over to nuzzle his ear.
His mom knew her when she was little.
I wouldn't put good odds on Daniel's parents having escaped punishment.
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Officer Canterbury stepped in. "Rachel, unless you want to be in violation of Article 3, item 6 of the school dress code, to whit flagrant displays of wardrobe malfunction, you will go back to your dorm immediately and change into your next spare uniform.
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Mr. Bergamot seems like quite the threat to me. Even Hannah recognized that he is dangerously interested in Erica. Like he and a certain evil scientist currently in the Midwest could get along very, very well. Is he a Vanguard sympathizer that doesn't know they exist...yet? Mazarin seemed to indicate there was something specific in his file.
Poor Cally though. To be outed by her brother being foolish and hanging out with jerks who want to exploit him. I have to appreciate Pete for figuring it out quickly, and knowing that those types are never anyone he should be spending time with.
Not looking forward to the egotistical musical rivalry though! Cally forgot about it the moment she was given the first warning that she had encroached on a diva's feelings!
If I had any constructive criticism to give, it was that I couldn't remember some of the details of the side characters. Was Neff a Poesie? I don't remember her being one, since she was at the mixer in the earlier parts. A refresher line might have been helpful for her and a few of Erica's new friends as well. Not all of them are quite as prominent as Essemmelle or Ham Sandwich.
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...What the fuck isn't this dog able to do?"Um..." the man said. "Is this..." He checked his paper. "Doctor's Precious Badass Nihilistic Killer with–"
"Just Cookie is fine," Daniel said, on top of pup's barks.
FIFY, HTH.
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As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.
I don't know if it holds true to the same extent for Italy, but some European school systems place a high priority on English language instruction.
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You're shitting me? That's part of the poweer. And a awesome one, to boot. All RPG players of any kind knows it, nothing is better than a healer! A good one, at least.Bryon shook his head. "You're a chick. You wouldn't understand. Us guys gotta at least try and look tough and manly, but holding hands ain't either of those. What are other guys gonna think? What are girls gonna think if they see me holding hands with another guy?"
Not many classes are worse than playing a healer. Nearly every decision or move one makes is second-guessed by half the party. For example, one jerk was even obnoxious enough to tell me how I was going to level up my 6th-level cleric and how useful my channeling ability would be (for him): I talked it over with the GM then made it clear to the rest of the group that I was now double-classing to sorceror.
That said, while there are some nutjobs who'd consider holding their hand while they are unconscious to be equivalent to rape, most people would be completely cool with it because medical emergencies should trump feelings.
Hardric wrote: For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?
Nope. Don't confuse the drinking age (e.g., there is no minimum drinking age in Belgium, France, or Italy) with the minimum age for purchase. For lower proof beverages , that is 16 for Austria, Belgium, Cyprus, Denmark, Germany, Gibraltar, Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Malta, Serbia and Switzerland.
Unless they confused proof with %ABV, the authors are using a genetically altered strain of yeast for their "De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV" to weasel that much alcohol (double what you can get from champagne yeast) into a beverage without distillation. Perfectly acheivable in the WU. No one's going to mistake that for a porter or a doppelbock though.
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Hardric wrote:
As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.
I don't know if it holds true to the same extent for Italy, but some European school systems place a high priority on English language instruction.
Hardric wrote: For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?
Nope. Don't confuse the drinking age (e.g., there is no minimum drinking age in Belgium, France, or Italy) with the minimum age for purchase. For lower proof beverages , that is 16 for Austria, Belgium, Cyprus, Denmark, Germany, Gibraltar, Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Malta, Serbia and Switzerland.
Unless they confused proof with %ABV, the authors are using a genetically altered strain of yeast for their "De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV" to weasel that much alcohol (double what you can get from champagne yeast) into a beverage without distillation. Perfectly acheivable in the WU. No one's going to mistake that for a porter or a doppelbock though.
It's made worse three-fold actually. His sister is very fluent in English so he's losing to her, it shows that he can barely speak English, and it is also shown to be a remedial class for native speakers/readers.
My first guess would have been freeze distillation, actually. It's quite common in craft beers seeking to achieve spirits-level concentration. Samuel Adams Utopias have been 24% ABV since 2002, and are higher more recently, nearly 30% in 2012, and that is without freeze distillation.
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1) Electra's instrument was originally described as just "a violin mated to a car radio", but then three days later a Patty Hurdy video popped up on my Youtube feed and I suddenly had to go rewrite a few descriptive sections...
2) Cookie's design incorporated a specific sort of empathy, with the intent of keeping its two heads in sync without direct neural connections. This had the side-effect of giving pup an extra sense to help understand all these humans.
3) De Struisse Breweries of Belgium does in fact have a Black Damnation series of beers, and they are in fact incredibly hard, though null is right that it took a bit more than simple fermentation to get it that high. It was the first result when I googled "World's Strongest Beers" and it just happened to be Belgian, so...
struise.com/bieren-beers/black-damnation-serie/
3.5) Whateley's package screening for certain commodities has historically been pretty lax, for one reason (superior sneaky tech) or another (bribes). In Gouyausse's case, he's got an actual beer allowance for reasons that will probably be mentioned later on.
4) The Machine's ice cream results were taken from a list of 100 Ice Cream Flavors from around the world, rolled with 2d10 to choose randomly for each character, just because.
5) Life is not going to be kind to Cally from hereon out.
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null0trooper wrote:
Hardric wrote:
As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.
I don't know if it holds true to the same extent for Italy, but some European school systems place a high priority on English language instruction.
Hardric wrote: For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?
Nope. Don't confuse the drinking age (e.g., there is no minimum drinking age in Belgium, France, or Italy) with the minimum age for purchase. For lower proof beverages , that is 16 for Austria, Belgium, Cyprus, Denmark, Germany, Gibraltar, Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Malta, Serbia and Switzerland.
Unless they confused proof with %ABV, the authors are using a genetically altered strain of yeast for their "De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV" to weasel that much alcohol (double what you can get from champagne yeast) into a beverage without distillation. Perfectly acheivable in the WU. No one's going to mistake that for a porter or a doppelbock though.
1) Oops, Italian system does begin to teach English in grade school, with an examen at the end of middle school...
Let myself influenced by my French experience. Theoretically, we begin to study one foreign language in primary school, but the teaching actually gets serious in middle school (wonder how 'serious' the lessons are in primary Italian school), with two languages, one selected first year, and another in third year (we have middle school four years). I had chosen German as primary language, and English secondary... And we moved to another town at the moment of last year of middle school (same age as first year of high school in the States, so same age as Frak here), and the school I went after that only offered teaching In German and English as bilingual, as in the two from the start, and first day I had I English there, test on irregular verbs and their times, when we hadn't seen all of them back in my old school (yeah, problems there). You can bet I felt like an idiot for a while in English, and not really abetting Frak's whining here.
2) Them getting the beer inside Whateley isn't the problem for me, getting through Security is unfortunately a sport back there. The problem is... Well, I could have jumped to conclusions while reading, with Frak trying to inflate himself in front of the losers rotting in the Pit, but it gave me the impression he knew enough about beer to have a vague idea of their qualiity, and 'know' the Italian beers aren't supposed to be worth much to have drunnk alcohol before... And while consumption of alcohol in Italy is indeed a private matter, and another blooper for me, he would be fourteen at the very best, and perhaps even less, to have drunk alcohol there, and that idea is frankly giving me the creeps, whatever you say about the minimum age...
I dare think that parents and people aren't exactly warm an fuzzy at the idea of middle schoolers, who are still pretty much kids, drinking. Personal experience could taint this again, but back in middle school in France, where we have a mix of 18 to buy it and ''private discreetion'' about alcohol consumption too (and theoretically direct surveillance if under 16, and a crime if you gets a minor drunk), you didn't see the average student getting their hands on alcohol like this.
Wasamon wrote: 4) The Machine's ice cream results were taken from a list of 100 Ice Cream Flavors from around the world, rolled with 2d10 to choose randomly for each character, just because.
5) Life is not going to be kind to Cally from here on out.
4) Put Passion-geranium in it, and my mother will try to get it.
5) Figures... Please tell us than any future part won't end in total Bleak Pit for her. It's always disheartning at some levels to wait next part when characters are at the bottom, even when foreshadowing softens the blow... And tell us Frak will get proper retribution for how much of a fuck-up he is.
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Nice phrasing.Dorms of Our Lives, Season 3 wrote: But in this class and in his language lab sections, Kenshin felt he might actually be able to master the art of the word. Eventually. As with many things, it was easier thought than said.
Smart man, this Mr. Foley. You're not going to find him living in a van down by the river.Dorms of Our Lives, Season 3 wrote: "Heck, you've had more datin' success this year than most of 'em. Figger I'll be askin' you for advice from now on."
That was Bergamot the Powers Theory teacher, not Headmaster Mazarin.mhalpern wrote: Well the headmaster better pray Caitlin doesn't learn that he is indirectly but intentionally putting students in danger via Jamie Howe, or his life expectancy will shrink drastically
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'Ecxuse me, I speak English like a swine'... Pretty sure it makes him Best ProfTeacher Ever."Tut mir leid, aber mein Englisch is under aller Sau."
She had to keep her expression carefully neutral there. "Did Herr Auer... explain what that meant?"
"Just that it was useful for apologizing if we're in Germany, and that by the time we can decipher it for ourselves, we probably won't need to use it."
Possibly better than you know; while I know next to nothing of German (I am tempted to quote Twain's quip that he'd sooner decline two beers than one German adjective - oops, I guess I just did - but I don't even know enough to dislike the tongue) , I am guessing from Erica's reaction that the sentence is rather more obscene. I am pretty sure that the visual metaphor underlying the idiom 'under all sows' is anatomical in nature. With the (pardon the pun) dependent clause "nastier than a..." being implicit in the original, but possibly necessary as part of a more fluent translation, I expect.
I'm just surprised that it is 'Sau' and not /me checks English-German Dictionary for the word for 'boar' and crosses fingers 'Eber' - though either way, what's hanging there is probably not considered particularly delightful. Perhaps it is more metaphorical, though, and implies that you 'speak like a suckling piglet' (i.e., an infant using baby-talk).
I may be wrong, however. If your translation is more accurate, then I would add: whether it is meant to describe one's grasp of English, or express disdain for Anglophones in general, is a matter of interpretation, I suppose. What little I know of German grammar inclines me to think the former, but if so, I would have expected the word to be 'Deutsche' rather than 'Englisch' (i.e., he's teaching them to apologize for their crappy German).
On the gripping hand, if Auer really is trying to trick his students into saying (in effect), "Sorry for fucking up your beautiful language, I'm just another English-speaking dumbass", then more power to him.
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Schol-R-LEA wrote: On the gripping hand, if Auer really is trying to trick his students into saying (in effect), "Sorry for fucking up your beautiful language, I'm just another English-speaking dumbass", then more power to him.
I think that depending on your dialect and how badly you butcher the second phrase, it can get frosty.
I'm sorry, my English is lower than a whore.
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(This being the version of the opening from the period Queen were most active, and also when my Mom was watching the show.)
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Wasamon wrote: 3.5) Whateley's package screening for certain commodities has historically been pretty lax, for one reason (superior sneaky tech) or another (bribes). In Gouyausse's case, he's got an actual beer allowance for reasons that will probably be mentioned later on.
Oh, lovely, I'm guessing he has an intoxication-based power, and one closer to Blotto than to Captain Trips. And he's already acting like a party-school frat boy, complete with roofies and a smug certainty that he'll never get caught.
(For those fortunate enough not to have seen it, Blotto was a character from Delta House, an extremely cheesy and mercifully short-lived television spin-off of Animal House in 1979. Trust me, you didn't miss anything; since it had to pass the ABC's Standards and Practices folks, the humor of the original was nerfed into oblivion, and it lacked the drama aspect which was so crucial to the success of the TV version of M*A*S*H so the humor was all that could have carried it. It ended up watered down repeats of the gags from the original, paired with plotlines that would have been too weaksauce for a mid-1980s kids series on Nickelodeon. As for Blotto, he was the stand-in for the absent John Belushi, who had better things to do, so Blotto was given as Bluto's younger brother, whose sole interest trait was... becoming superhumanly strong when drunk. Uh huh... the series, all 13 episodes, is on YT if you care, but I wouldn't bother.)
Worse, Gouyasse has fallen in with the sort of 'scoring' club which has surfaced in at least one US high school (though shows like Law and Order would make you think they were in every school in the US - even the nursery schools). And they are co-opting the whole 4chan /b/ "Beta Uprising" language and turning it on its head, making it even more obnoxious in the process! Stay classy, guys. One imagines that his 'friends' do everything to keep on his good side to ensure some of the beer keeps flowing their way, while calling him something like "Gooey Ass" behind his back.
(The video below covers the "Lakewood Spur Posse" incident from 1993 that seems to be the root of that particular moral panic. The story is #9 in the video, and if it doesn't go to it immediately, it begins at 7:46.)
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1. Why are people (both characters and readers) behaving like pineapple ice cream is some sort of weird thing, like chocolate-frosted chicken or whatever? It's a fruit, you can make juice of it, you can make ice cream of it. I mean it, I think I haven't ever entered an ice cream place that didn't offer pineapple.
2. Cookie is not a Cerberus, he's an Orthrus. Cerberus had three heads.
3. It figures that Whateley would have its own version of the "manosphere" chat rooms, complete with all the toxic misogynist jargon. The part that actually creeped me most was their attitude to Whitman girls ("they are desperate, therefore should be easy pickings"). Kudos to Pete for seeing through the bullshit, a boo for Fra for not realizing that those creeps, particularly his "friend," are eager to use and discard his sister.
I actually don't blame Fra that much for slipping Cally's secret. I mean, he was drunk. I only blame him for being there in the first place.
Now, possible consequences for Cally... I see two possible ones:
a) Her secret gets out. Very bad on the short run, getting put straight in every campus bigot's crosshairs, beginning with Brita... and Cally does not have much in the way of defensive powers. If she survives the first bashing,it might not so bad in the long run -- the other changelings, including roomie Erica, might open to her and that eventually leads to this unlikely group of mostly M2F changelings realizing they are all in the same boat.
b) Her secret does not get out. That's actually the worst scenario in my mind: if the
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I don't think pineapple ice cream is weird, just I've never been able to find it where I live and wish to try it.Sir Lee wrote: Took me a while to find time to read this one... not much to say that hasn't already been said, but:
1. Why are people (both characters and readers) behaving like pineapple ice cream is some sort of weird thing, like chocolate-frosted chicken or whatever? It's a fruit, you can make juice of it, you can make ice cream of it. I mean it, I think I haven't ever entered an ice cream place that didn't offer pineapple.
2. Cookie is not a Cerberus, he's an Orthrus. Cerberus had three heads.
And I did not know that was the term for a two-headed dog, thank you for that interesting piece of information.
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Sir Lee wrote: Took me a while to find time to read this one... not much to say that hasn't already been said, but:
2. Cookie is not a Cerberus, he's an Orthrus. Cerberus had three heads.
3. It figures that Whateley would have its own version of the "manosphere" chat rooms, complete with all the toxic misogynist jargon. The part that actually creeped me most was their attitude to Whitman girls ("they are desperate, therefore should be easy pickings"). Kudos to Pete for seeing through the bullshit, a boo for Fra for not realizing that those creeps, particularly his "friend," are eager to use and discard his sister.
I actually don't blame Fra that much for slipping Cally's secret. I mean, he was drunk. I only blame him for being there in the first place.
Now, possible consequences for Cally... I see two possible ones:
a) Her secret gets out. Very bad on the short run, getting put straight in every campus bigot's crosshairs, beginning with Brita... and Cally does not have much in the way of defensive powers. If she survives the first bashing,it might not so bad in the long run -- the other changelings, including roomie Erica, might open to her and that eventually leads to this unlikely group of mostly M2F changelings realizing they are all in the same boat.
b) Her secret does not get out. That's actually the worst scenario in my mind: if theOutstandingCreepyDudesAssholes Club members keep quiet, it's because they see a way to exploit this info for their gain. I expect blackmail, possibly attempting to extort sex from Cally. Her best possible defense would be to come out as a changeling, nullifying their hold... but she seems so scared of coming out as anything but a normal, heterosexual girl, that I find her unlikely to go that route.
2) Funny thing, ealry Cerberus only had one head. It's only later in Antiquity than the three heads model took root.
3) I blame him. So. Fucking. Hard. First for rotting for more than one session inside the Pit, thus showing level of intelligence earning him the well-deserved scorn of Darwin Award winners. Second, for getting wasted. Spiked or not, he chose to drink the booze, to drink lots of it, and the only difference was probably he only wanted to get wasted more slowly. And no matter how seemingly lax consumption could seem in Italy (or France), a middle schooler, or a kid freshly out of it, should have no fucking business around alcohol, let alone enough to claim familiarity with it (I is it was empty boasting). And with a bunch of unknown people, to boot (it can't be long enough for any friendship to form), especially when you have secrets to keep. Leading me to third, the almost total abscence of goading to get to the bomb. Bamboozled or not, the fact he let out with that as a fucking reflex isn't telling many nice things about that little shitbag, and making me wonder when, most certainly not if, he would have told it sober. Maybe he can crawl back from the rock bottom where he's processing his booze, but for me it will be a very hard sell for me.
a) ...Seeing somthing like:
"...Just wait a second. You're telling me I'm the only girl of the group not being... A changeling, you said you're called?"
"Why, yes Tanya."
"... How being closer to theoretic 'normal' is making even more of an outcast?"
Would make it worth it. And it didn't lead to lots of pain to MHM girls, Stale Farce's face too.
b) Yuck. The only silver lining I could see here is if the Pit's maggots decide they're "too alpha" to have sex with a changeling (yeah, they won't be that polite), and use the blackmail to set up dates... Meaning Cally will get some time to come clean to her friends, and prepare the counter attack for when said dates crash and burn, the maggots decide "let's fuck the fag after all" (the way they see Whitman, bleugh...)... And prepare for when they throw option 3) a) to the campus when that last brainfart crash and burn.
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But Fra's membership in this club? I'm pretty sure he's just not good enough at English to pick up on the fact that these guys view women as opponents to be bested, not partners to build relationships with. Note that Callie has been treating him as a nuisance, not a predator, and she knows him far better than we do. He also seems to understand that the issue lies with himself, not with women. He's recognized that there is some kind of cultural difference between American women and Italian women that he doesn't understand, which is resulting in him offending them instead of charming them. He's trying to figure out what he's doing wrong so that he can improve himself and stop offending people. He's a good person, but his lack of life experience and his poor grasp of English have resulted in him seeking help from the wrong people. Drama ensues.
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Hardric wrote: a) ...Seeing somthing like:
"...Just wait a second. You're telling me I'm the only girl of the group not being... A changeling, you said you're called?"
"Why, yes Tanya."
"... How being closer to theoretic 'normal' is making even more of an outcast?"
Would make it worth it. And it didn't lead to lots of pain to MHM girls, Stale Farce's face too.
Minor point: we don't know that much about Tanya's origin, other than she somehow became a copy of her mother's and was sorta raised by her mother's teammates. I don't think it was ever unambiguously stated that she was born a girl, or that she was already a girl before becoming her mother's clone. I know, we have already seen a case of "boy becomes her mother's clone" in Knockoff; but "it has been done before" is not by itself negative proof. So, it could very well turn out that she's not the exception after all.
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Sir Lee wrote:
Hardric wrote: a) ...Seeing somthing like:
"...Just wait a second. You're telling me I'm the only girl of the group not being... A changeling, you said you're called?"
"Why, yes Tanya."
"... How being closer to theoretic 'normal' is making even more of an outcast?"
Would make it worth it. And it didn't lead to lots of pain to MHM girls, Stale Farce's face too.
Minor point: we don't know that much about Tanya's origin, other than she somehow became a copy of her mother's and was sorta raised by her mother's teammates. I don't think it was ever unambiguously stated that she was born a girl, or that she was already a girl before becoming her mother's clone. I know, we have already seen a case of "boy becomes her mother's clone" in Knockoff; but "it has been done before" is not by itself negative proof. So, it could very well turn out that she's not the exception after all.
... Dang, I'd swear I had found somewhere a confirmation Tanya wasn't a changeling, but I can't find it again, if it ever existed... Leading me back to the theory 'they're all changelings'... Yup, including Kenshi.
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Sir Lee wrote: So, it could very well turn out that she's not the exception after all.
Well, you see, one of the other pup's in Cookie's litter had a little . . . accident. But, technically, that wouldn't make Tanya a changeling.
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So naturally, I struggled to recall who many of the characters were. I'll second the mention that a few refreshers on characters would have been useful.
I was somewhat surprised that some "arcs" were introduced and approximately finished within just this part - like Whirlibird getting her date (of sorts) with Donut. There's quite a lot of long-ranging consequences packed into it, too. Erica's now in a similar boat to Bianca, Fiorella's about to have a rather rough time and the threats of Jamie and Bergamot are looming. It was good to see more of Mazarin as Headmaster - he's still a mystery, but I'm beginning to trust he'll act in his role appropriately and with professionalism.
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Other things to mention:
It was said a few times, I think, but Cally and Fra did not attend the same high school in Genoa. Cally was at a school for arts and sciences, while Fra was attending a vocational school but spending more time on his football moves than his shop skills. When the mutations hit, his new good looks made him popular with the "wrong crowd" of his school, which is where he got most of his experience with everything. It's also why he spent so little time preparing for America; he was riding high as a big fish in a little pond. And then he got dunked
As a side note, he has enough regen that he's never actually gotten drunk before, and never had anything strong enough to affect him. The morning after will not be kind. And also for the record, he isn't aware of the true nature of the ODS or what those duds are really capable of, though it'll be apparent soon enough.
None of that excuses any of what he did, but it's nice to have context.
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The Outstanding Dudes Society, these bunch of asses, and Art being dense enough to join them. Crud, Gouyasse figures out that Art was telling the truth while drunk, this is major league bad. High Gear is going to be in serious trouble for digging into a fellow student's background like this.While in the broadest sense Whateley Academy's campus rested upon a dense bedrock of New Hampshire granite, the reality was that much of the school's infrastructure was built upon, under, or around other parts of itself in a loopy, organic, and chaotic hodgepodge of architectural fiat that defeated all attempts to fully map its depths. Sometimes it seemed that there were enough small apartment-styled hideyholes to equal one of the academy's actual dormitories.
And Jack at least sounds reasonable, at least for this bunch. And High Gear hacked someone's privacy settings to access private photos on Facebook, that is highly illegal."Someone scrubbed it," said Jack. "It's what I would've done in her place. Who wants something like that out in the open? Fuck, it'd be understandable for a lot of other mutants, even."
Okay, they are on the road to expulsion level stunt at this rate. And the morons think her roommate doesn't know. Art actually going with trailing Jimmy or is there another Macarthur in the group. Shawn standing up to Jack about his name, take what I said about Jack back, total creep and bully. And they are the ones gay-bashing Kenshin over jealousy, pathetic."Okay, so we're all in agreement here?" A chorus of grunts answered High Gear's vague question. "Right. She's a trap, and traps need springing."
"Practically doing a favor to all dudes on campus," Jack said. "Taking one for the team and all."
Cookie keeping watch and a water-smell boy is sneaking out late, detects all that from his body-scent and feeling-scent, I would love to know who designed Cookie.
Vic Rivera, that many freshmen coming in with stories from their shell-shocked look, but he doesn't pry. A summons to meet, directions to a room and Masterminds, Vic could be getting in over his head very soon. Opening the lock like that, whoa, Vic has very fine control over water. Ugh, it's Jack, and he is known as an asshole around Twain as well. Vic doing the smart thing and just going to walk on, not even consider joining the Masterminds if they have Jack in them.
Oo, bad move there, Jack. Bet if the current Headmaster heard you trying to use him to influence someone in this way he is would be ticked off. Assault with a weapon and messing with Vic when he isn't directly conscious, expulsion worthy offenses right there."Whoa, whoa, whoa! Wait a minute!" Jack interposed himself between Vic and the door. "You don't just say no to an invite from the Masterminds, especially not now that we've got a Headmaster from the Syndicate in charge."
Saturday now and with Erica, not sleeping later than 6 am thanks to the inner workings of her brain, wish I had that benefit. A message under the door for Erica, if from the moron crew they are even dumber than I thought. Ink on the card counting down to something, just great. Natalie Macauliffe aka Physique, a face of a pre-teen and a body like that, pity the idiots who don't look at her face. Ms. Plimsoll on Cerberus duties this morning, heh.
Nice early morning run and even get to see Cookie outside of Twain, Ms. Barnes pushing the students in the class Natalie is in pretty hard, I can believe that easily. Kenshin that good at practicing his katas with his sword wish I could watch myself. Erica, don't tell Natalie about Kenshin being single, poor girl is dealing with enough right now. And Natalie goes to chat with Kareela, her friend who showed up to watch Kenshin.
Essemmelle's perspective now. Kareela Greer, a PDP, and that short when just a month away from turning 14.
If Kenshin keeps this up he is going to have a good chunk of the girls at school crushing on him, I fear what will happen when one of them finally gets up the nerve to ask him out and how the others will react. And Kareela just projected that Taka is awesome to him, this could be bad.Last Thursday when a fight had broken out after class, Taka over there with the sword had swept up her and Anais with the fern-hair, carrying them to safety. A single thoughtless act of chivalry, but feck if it didn't make a girl feel special.
Cally recovering thanks to the shower after morning exercise routine and teased by Erica about being a drama queen, her response is perfect. Laura and Bailey sitting on either side of Hikaru. And Laura's face got turned into a meme by tourists from Osaka they ran into in New York, oh boy. 5 memes at least and still convinced Kenshin is her boyfriend, oh brother. Her nickname is Aokko, but not sure which kanji symbol is best for it, *sigh* 3 different symbols, at least Laura picked which one to go with based on their descriptions from Hikaru. Trying to have a say in her own memes, Laura is going to be disappointed. And now Laura has to learn Japanese, not a bad thing imo.
Vic awake and in his own bed, no idea how he got there and didn't get back till 1 am, not good. And he doesn't remember his meeting with Jack now, great. At least Tobias reminds him about his promise to meet Tanya. Using his powers to shower from a water fountain, definitely a Whateley moment for Saumer and anyone else who saw that. Only Tia not at MMM's table for breakfast, wonder why. Erica talking to Jimmy, spotting Laura showing Cally design sketches and he moves towards them but not of his own free-will. That a**hole Jack programmed him somehow!
At least he was tripped up and Tanya there to help him up, hope they figure out what Jack did to Vic soon. A new girl in special orientation the last couple days, I wonder who. Sera Eir Magnusdottir a.k.a. Einherjar, why do I have a bad feeling about her? Forget if Vic has stated his codename was Tidestriker before now or not. Picnic this afternoon and Vic still has it bad for Tanya.
Tanya's POV now, showing Sera around. An accent that trends more towards her father's side, plus wants a costume like the sagas of yore, interesting.
Gah, no! Poor girl who be embarrassed by those. Star Sentry, a sophomore in the Cape Squad, interesting. Chillout needs to learn to have fun and be a kid while you still can. Megaton, Star Sentry's boyfriend, wants a word with Tanya, hope it isn't anything bad."Or at least like valkyries in the video games of right now?" Tanya suggested. She giggled at the face Sera made.
Talking to Tanya, called by her codename of Invictus, about the stories she must have heard by now. Yikes, a member of the Capes expelled after a disagreement went too far out of hand, how far the Capes have fallen.
And Megaton just proved himself to be a judgemental ass, I wouldn't want to be on the Cape Squad with him. Good to see Tanya realizing Megaton is wrong, stick with your true friends.He paused to consider his words. "As a Cape, you have to be careful about how you socialize. There will be those who will attempt to worm their way into your confidence, only to betray you at the most opportune moment. That's just the way this hero business is."
"Um, thanks. But what...?" Tanya let the question trail.
"I'm just saying, be careful about how you choose your friends," said Megaton. He looked up, and by following his gaze Tanya could notice Morgana and Bianca coming down the stairs, still gabbing about that mystery project of theirs. "And," the young man added, "reconsider the friends you already have. Not all will be deserving of your trust."
Shawn Barker, poor kid fell in with the ODS creeps because he adrift in strange social waters and they seemed to welcome him.
Shawn needs to make a true friend who will give him that push to leave these idiots behind.Okay, so he wasn't too happy about this. The Japanese kid hadn't done anything wrong in his opinion, though the others griped about how the foreign kid who couldn't really speak English had gotten all the hot girls already. This Kenshin fella had just done better than they had.
Figures, keep them in line with threats and bullying. Kenshin pulled all that off while Shawn was watching, I would be too impressed to want to try anything against such a person ever. If only Shawn could become Kenshin's friend and turn around this path he is on.Shawn, on the other hand... He now had to deal with the likes of High Gear and Jack-in-the-Box, who'd made it clear what would happen to young men who didn't support the ODS agenda after signing on.
Erica's POV once more. Having to get to the ground floor of the Crystal Hall to see faces that are friendly and familiar, yikes. Cheesa Barnes, with her brothers Pat and Marcus, but who is the older girl with them who Erica has never seen before. So this is the mysterious Moonbrook, the fourth member of the Barnes family, interesting appearance. So it is Ms. Barnes, the English teacher, disguised with a pair of glasses and only Mr. Diggens has caught on besides Erica, good disguise skills.
Poor Morgana and that poor invisible bunny.Ms. Barnes laughed at that. "Oh, I know I'm not playing in your league, Pat, but it does feel good to walk around incognito at times. Plus," she added, "I may be auditing a class soon, and that's easier to do if I'm not immediately identifiable as a responsible adult. They're going to be doing a special seminar series for those with... quirky magic abilities in the near future, and I probably need it almost as much as the poor girl who incited it."
Chessa wanting to work on new game characters, now there is a true TTRPG fan. Meatball sizing up Ms. Barnes bra size, if he knew who he was doing that to he would probably rabbit right out of there. Meatball will not figure it out until she tells him, the kid seems that dense when it comes to women. And their kind of RPG games sound fun, just bring their source books and put them together.
Now onto Nina Blake, as well as Noah, letting his female side out for breakfast.
Poor Noah.Last July, he'd discovered there was an open spot in his soul, a pocket of ethereal space perfect for housing something that was neither corporeal nor human. And like most avatars, he'd discovered this the hard way: a spirit had found his space and decided to set up shop.
That was Glee, a happy-go-lucky entity who claimed she'd been born of "confluxion of girlyish enthusiasmia" following the finale of a particularly popular girls TV program. The experts at Whateley openly doubted this was truly possible, or grammatically accurate, but no one could really tell him what Glee was––
I'm me, silly!
Other than annoying at times. Guesses ranged from amnesiac ghost to genius locii, from aggregate emotional imprint to a fragment of some ancient goddess of youth and happiness. Nobody could say anything for certain except that in this state she was still incomplete, formative, and thus any attempt to separate her from her avatar host would end badly for everyone involved.
It is worse than I thought, please don't let the new Wondercute girls spot her.the spirit required the emotional vibes of girlish happiness to thrive, and she often failed to consider her host's reactions when she "helped" him into such a state where such vibes were provided.
Kara O'Keggan a.k.a. Nightingale
And the tradition of non-mutants at Whateley continues, yay! Poor Darcy having to put up with Glee making Noah act like this as Nina. Another junior high student, Beverly Taylor a.k.a. Time Bomb staring at Nina like that, guess she hasn't seen some of the stranger things at Whateley yet.Not a mutant herself, she'd inherited a magic trinket from her aunt, which effectively made her the next best thing.
They could create a support group. Bev yelling for her sister Betsy to come over, Elizabeth aka Velvet aka Betsy. And her BIT made her look like a young Elizabeth Taylor, dang. And she is a devisor, all those clues from the style of dress, etc.Of all the denizens of Poe Cottage, Nina in either form got along with Bev and Pat Barnes the best. The three of them had the shared misfortune of being transformed against their will, and very little interest in accepting the facts of the matter in their personal lives.
Bev using Nina for revenge, the 'accident' which resulted in her becoming a girl thanks to Betsy, she is going to milk that for a long time. Noah back in control and eating, Betsy coming back for her bag, Michelle showing up and inviting herself to the table. How she brushes up against Noah's bare shoulder like that, yikes, warning, warning, danger Will Robinson, danger. Matsu and she is talking about not seeing Betsy in the showers, predatory lesbian who should be in Poe and reigned in.
Using the 'honor of Melville' like that to manipulate poor Betsy, I'm scared for her now with this girl around. Noah leaving like that, I wish someone had spoken up for Betsy. Michelle taunting Kara like that, can't stand girls like that.
Cally's POV once more. Learning self-control about when to sing since she is a projective empath, good. Nefertiti Copeland shows up and they hug, talking about practice and so cute how she ask Neff, Cally still so shy with her girlfriend. 3 people watching them for a distance, each with a different set of mixed emotions, oh boy.
Tanya's POV again. Tanya loving the fun and creativity of Costuming 101 despite it being early in the morning, definitely a morning person. Morgana and Bianca talking about their project, while Tanya has to squash Megaton's words from her mind. Sera sitting in the next chair over, sharing so many classes on the schedule, is it just because of Tanya's basic knowledge of Sera's language and country or could something else be going on?
Sterling effectively invisible to everyone, poor girl, I hope she gets the help she needs to learn how to control her powers and to recover from her traumas over time. Darn, been a while since we saw her, almost forgot she was Tanya's roommate myself. Oh crud, couldn't even get breakfast, forgotten about, this is bad. At least Tanya has that cinnamon roll and insists Sterling goes to breakfast with her. I hope she gets better control of that psi ability, seeing anyone ignored is painful.
Vic POV time. Memory loss and lost time, Jack is in serious trouble when this gets revealed. And misses his art class because of it, this beyond sucks. And Jack is so screwed, because now Vic knows he was brainwashed and programed by him.
True friends can forgive a lot, just tell them.And what would they say if they knew the whole story? his traitorous, doubtful brain shouted back. About the tanker job, or the offer you couldn't refuse, or Ollie...
Whoa, did I forget something because I don't recall why Tia would be so chipper and full of energy and happy like that from her usual self.
Getting creeped out a little, what is up with Tia? Even Hikaru is confused by Tia's behavior. And what the what, he is programed so he can't even tell anyone else about what is going on, this is beyond bad. We need a telepath to help fix this and fast."Hiya!" Tia called his way, unaware of any general policies he might have. "How're you doing this bright, beautiful, splendiferous Saturday morn?" She blew a kiss and giggled.
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Dreamer wrote: A new girl in special orientation the last couple days, I wonder who. Sera Eir Magnusdottir a.k.a. Einherjar, why do I have a bad feeling about her?
Let's see. "Sera" and "Eir" are far and away more common in Norway than Iceland.
"Sera" is the short form of either Severina (m. Severin or Severus) or Seraphia (m. Seraph)
"Eir" is the name of a Valkyrie in the Þulur, but one of the Ásynja in other sources.
... and the Einherjar (yes, plural) were Odin's pick of the battle-felled litter of warriors. Dump stats tended to be WIS and INT.
Dreamer wrote: Whoa, did I forget something because I don't recall why Tia would be so chipper and full of energy and happy like that from her usual self.
Doesn't Melville also have Hydroflux's more relaxing technologies?
Shawn, on the other hand... He now had to deal with the likes of High Gear and Jack-in-the-Box, who'd made it clear what would happen to young men who didn't support the ODS agenda after signing on. He only hoped this would blow over soon.
Quite ODS indeed.
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FSH and they want Tanya to abandon MMM? Haven't they ever heard that you ought to be careful not to accuse the children of their father's sins. Sure you can watch carefully to see that the person is not just shining you on... But really you can if you try break the habit of prejudice.
Jack-ass... and just what has he done to Vic!? This if discovered should be a short trip to a place where learns to say: I love your p***s to his new best friend and roommate...
All in all, waiting for the other shoe to drop on Callie...
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Like what Anne pointed out. The FSHA openly having a fight with the Masterminds and Bad Seeds last year. They seem to be returning to their roots as prejudiced "heroes," more in the vein of Imp's typical foes and Lamplighter, than the shift we saw in Gen 1 that started with Gloriana and Pendragon and is currently playing out as a hard line against the bigoted.
What does this imply for Gen 2?! If the FSHA is returning to a more black-and-white view of things instead of the nuanced one they had started to get at Glor's insistence, it starts to creep into territory of why the Bad Seeds and the Order of the Worn Wrench were created in the first place. Only we know that the Seeds already alienated Bianca because of the arrogance of a single member, and the Mastermind's leader is a total "Asshole" who is now tormenting Vic for information for the ODS. Where exactly does this leave MMM? In the middle of conflicts they're being dragged into?
My impression is that this maelstrom of high school drama and violence headed their way will drive them closer together, despite their differences of opinion and newly growing separate social circles and subdivisions.
Outing Callie is another strange scenario, because she's not a Poesie. The administration can't move her there without drawing more attention. So this looming doom brings back to some references that were pre-Gen 1, where the support base for changelings just wasn't really there because there were so few. Will the existing bubble class of changelings, including our POV characters in Gen 2 risk outing themselves to support Callie? Will some of them shy away from helping her out of fear of ending up in her shoes? When the secret is already out, therefore keeping Stahlfaust's geas-erosion ability a secret, when will the Amazons come into play once they finally have a confirmed changeling where they don't have to worry about the administration's interference?
Is Tia going crazy from anxiety?
How could Hikaru do that to the other four girls? Subjecting them to 4chan?!
Teacher/class evaluations are performed like Secret Shoppers? Very interesting. I wonder if this was a legacy idea from Carson, or something new that Mazarin thought up, due to his more business-like nature.
I like that Vic was almost starting to break through the Psi/Devisor hijacking by using his water meditation and visualization techniques. Is this an offshoot or potential ability development of his hydrokinesis? He's still new at this psi game stuff, but I was definitely getting the impression that he might learn a few things from Tanya, and maybe even start seeing Sterling. Someone remembered her before. Was it Vic, or was it Jimmy?
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The words 'careful' and 'take care' and 'are you sure this is a good idea?' don't really form part of her vocabulary...

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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MageOhki wrote: Hikaru *warned* them. Best bit, is *pay attention* to her *exact* words,
You mean, the fact that she referred to it by its official name (Yotsuba Channel) rather than the rather more infamous (in English, at any rate) URL? I am sure Laura has heard of 4Chan, but she probably hasn't connected the name Yotsuba Channel to it (as image boards in generally never took off in the US; things like Imgur, Snapchat, and Pintrest aren't quite the same, and rather different from each other for that matter), so I am guessing that Hikaru is playing a prank on her by withholding the more common name.
Or maybe it's Kurenai playing a prank on both of them - I get the impression that Okami has herself not noticed the URL or otherwise made the connection, assuming Kurenai even showed her the actual website rather than simply extracting the image macros. I doubt that Daniel Moate was one to pay much attention to things like image boards, and since her transformation Hikaru has too many had other things to do (though I expect she'd have gotten a warning by IHA not to post there herself, at the very least). It is very possible that even if Hikaru once knew the official name of 4chan, she could have lost those memories during one of her burnouts.
MageOhki wrote: and *who* set up the account....
Yeah, so very likely, Kurenai is the prankster. I hope she didn't 'forget' to give Laura the password...
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Somehow, I don't think the "account" is configured where and how Hikaru may assume it is.
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Take that for what you will.
Example of one:
twitter.com/meruru20020306
As for press in Japan? Hikaru is *off limits* outside *IHA* approved *directly* moments. Period, dot. That is *tradtion* and even if it's not, might as well *be* law. (Downside, Hikaru *is* expected to make a few appearances) (See how the *other* princesses in RL are treated)
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Thanks for the reminder that imperials are treated with far more respect than even royals in other countries, without(?) specific criminal penalties like in some other nations.MageOhki wrote: As for press in Japan? Hikaru is *off limits* outside *IHA* approved *directly* moments. Period, dot. That is *tradtion* and even if it's not, might as well *be* law. (Downside, Hikaru *is* expected to make a few appearances) (See how the *other* princesses in RL are treated)
But does that include fans and otaku, posting on their own social media accounts?
Hikaru has reacted negatively toward being called a pop star by Tia and others. Is the comparison to an idol by regular citizens the paparazzi problem she's referring to? Or is she saying paparazzi when she means "spies" from other countries?
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Hikaru's reactiving negatively for the simple reason is: In a *lot* of ways, she *feels like one*, since she's put on 'display' as much as the other princesses were/are at her age. Not to mention she did more apperances, 'spc with religious overtones (blessing buildings, for example, is something she's done, once or twice), plus of course, she's *only* known *active* Japanese avatar/paladin of one of the o-kami, at this time. Which gives her more 'exposure'.
Add into that, that for the last oh, 20 years *before* manifesting, she was *very very private*...
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Dreamer wrote: Whoa, did I forget something because I don't recall why Tia would be so chipper and full of energy and happy like that from her usual self.
Tia has medication to keep her nymphomania in check and without it she has been shown to be very... carefree.
Dreamer wrote: Even Hikaru is confused by Tia's behavior.
I saw Hikaru being more concerned rather than confused, and if she's aware of Tia's condition she has good reason for that concern.
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He (Jackass) probably won't get what he deserves, which is a roommate named Bubba who hasn't seen the outside of the walls for more than ten years....mhalpern wrote: well the bastard who was controlling Vic is now dead, or will wish he was,
Still hoping someone in the administration will find the ODS and crush them like the pathetic cockroaches they are!
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Anne wrote: Still hoping someone in the administration will find the ODS and crush them like the pathetic cockroaches they are!
I'm not sure they can, right now... What rules have they broken?
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Maybe not enough by itself to get Jackass a suit of steel bar camouflage but given that it is a repeat of a past offense even if the victim is different it would be a good idea if the administration came down on him like a ton of bricks!
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Sadly, it looks like the baked goods that Donut delivers will end up at the picnic with added "flavor" ingredients.
I wonder if Derek could save himself some time by changing his monicker to Degaton?
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He certainly is a piece of work so far as I can tell. He never stopped to ask if maybe Vic might be being attacked by someone, or if the 'drugs' he assumed were something that Vic was doing voluntarily... No he just made and ass of U and me and someone ought to pin the tail on him very firmly to remind him that he is being asinine.
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Well, that is interesting, didn't know that about Laura's skin being layered in such a way. At least he is smart enough not to mess with Bianca, will give him that.The blue girl, Cerulea, gave the biometric algorithms fits. There was something about how the colors in her skin were layered that made it difficult for the photo analysers to tell where her bone structure even was.
And back to being a bigotted moron once more. Hehehe, love what happened when he tried to dig too deep into Erica's background, any further and he would have been toast. And they spied on Cally and her new girlfriend, they are playing with lava at this point.She was a trap, but too open about it to trap anyone. They could deal with her another time if they wanted to, but anyone pursuing her openly would get branded a tranny-chaser, and who wanted that?
Eurydice.
I can't wait till the Amazons' world comes crashing down and their illegally larger than approved expansion they hide is found by the administration. And they've done more renovations, they are underground and could cause a cave-in or worse doing unapproved expansions like this. StahlFaust and Muliebris, and Eurydice has brought them news about Cally, just great. And it sounds like it is about Cally and her girlfriend, not good for the Amazons to know.Back home in Venezuela, such things were signs of wealth and the power to hold on to that wealth.
And if her sisters had anything, it was the power to get and hold what they wanted.
Nightingale, half an hour since Nina or Noah left to find her/his Italian crush, no news isn't good news around this school. Powers of the Nightingale Cameo, interesting. Aww, poor Noah crying behind a bush. Ouch, saw Cally and her girlfriend together, that stings.
And Noah is becoming more and more female the more time Glee is out feeding, the hits just keep on coming for this poor kid."The researchers are calling it progressive feminization," he said. "Glee floods my system with girly hormones when she's feeding, and all that's still in the bloodstream when I switch back, only I can't ever switch back long enough for the testosterone to kick in. No, no, don't worry..." he said, not to Kara. "I know you have to feed reg'larly, and I agreed to it and all. I went and fucked myself over here, and, and..."
Donut, half past 10 for his shift in the Crystal Hall pastry counter to end, dang.
A strong Southern accent and drags him to where she wants him to do, poor Daniel can't catch a break today. Jenifer aka Scarlyt and on the third level with the upperclassmen tables, Karel Lorencz aka Bohemian Lion, wonder what they want from him.Tall and athletic, with bright red hair that shaded to salmon pink at the tips, and eyes the color of blood; a scowl seemed her natural expression.
Help with a picnic event that afternoon, well that is reasonable. And Scarlyt says it is good, 5 dozen cookies, 2 cakes for $400, now Daniel knows how to sell his power well.
Whirlibird, nice track suit her aunt made for her, good to have padding when you are delicate. Going to check up on Daniel and sees him dragged upstairs by Scarlyt, forgot about the something wrong with Scarlyt she was told about, please don't tell me she is an Amazon.
Oh crud, they better not just take the goods and try to bully him into leaving without payment or worse. Nice to see Monica looking out for Daniel."That group, they like to prey on people, make them feel awful, just for fun. Some of the Whitman girls hang out with them, d-do things for them, but only because they're scared not to."
Tanya, accents, and piping for her costume done in chartreuse, now that will be a visually interesting costume. Sterling likes the look and unfortunately, only Tanya is aware of her right now, Sera Eir Magnusdottir not aware of Sterling until Tanya helps her to focus and tone down her power some, hope she keeps improving her control over that power. 5 minutes later for it to happen again, ouch.
Tia enjoying some lemonade, listening to music while reading a book on her phone, only to have it ruined when StahlFaust shows up to harass her. Even calling her Mister Del Bosque, then to say Tia is breathing air meant for those better than her, thank about arrogance on the extreme end of the spectrum. And another of the Amazons shows up, cowards can't even face someone like Tia one on one.
Threats to put her in Doyle as they did to her friend, taunting her by saying she will give her a 10-second headstart to run for Melville.
Yes! SF goes to punch her but stops, leaving and saying she will see her around, I hate bullies. And Tia recorded that whole encounter, hopefully, it will be worth something when dealing with SF later."You may kick my ass. You may even kill me. But you won't do it while I'm running from you."
StahlFaust leaving and Muliebris confused why she didn't harm Tia and just walked away.
Intimidation Field, I was wondering why so many were intimidated by SF with such seeming ease. Leave her alone so her enemies can destroy her and just enjoy the show, sickening. Wonder who the newest Amazon is."So, Muliebris, she knew my name, my reputation, and she has no powers to fall back on. She took your intimidation field head on, and refused to run. There is some real steel in that one. And after all, this was simply a test. Del Bosque's profile is too high for us to actually touch; I merely wanted to see if I could stand being in the same school."
Assay & Ladybird, Hannah being such a morning person, I can sympathize with Nana about dealing with her.
Okay, that is much more detail about her spirit, how does an aggregate spirit like that happen?aggregate spirit of a million-zillion ladybird beetles.
I like her, she's silly."Ya got me." Hannah went stock-straight, walking stiffly with her elbows crooked. "I. Was. Made. In. A. Lab. I. Need. Sweets. For. Power. So...ur...ce..." She stopped in her tracks, head and arms dangling.
Hannah able to sense someone which she can't sense except through her power.
So Hannah can sense Sterling through her power being active. Good thing she keeps a journal of cool power-related stuff, maybe they can become Sterling's friend and learn to resist her power."That's the power at work," Hannah declared confidently. "I can see it working, sort of an omnidirectional psionic vibe that's blotting out whoever it is with a big 'NOT HERE.' Pretty cool, eh?"
Shawn Barker, in costume class as a guest and sees Kenshin strip down to his waist, seeing the kind of abs even an adult athlete would be envious of.
Great costume. Shadowing Kenshin for those creeps, he really should just tell the headmaster about the group and what they do so he can leave it.Kenshin had immediately re-clothed, materializing some sort of Japanese kimono-jacket thing out of thin air, deep blue with aqua trim, and a symbol on the back: three arrows crossing within a circle. "My family crest," the Japanese kid explained, like it was completely normal to have something like that.
Eugene Lee aka Liu Yingjie aka Yoroshiku, trying to challenge Kenshin so he can be the servant of the Maiden of Heaven, this guy is an idiot. Nu Shu trying to get Kowloon to talk to Eugene and get him on meds already, easier said than done from what we've seen already. Officer Canterbury going to be a referee just so they will stop obstructing traffic, things have changed.
Kenshin summoning armor, Eugene making his PK field look like fancy armor, good grief. And Kenshin taking down Eugene in the span of the blink of an eye, I knew Kenshin was good but dang."Under Section 2, paragraph four of the Whateley dueling code," Officer Canterbury announced, "with the supervision of a qualified combat referee and with the provisions of no fouls, no maiming, and no collateral damage to school or to bystanders, it is time to start! Gentlemen, prepare yourselves!"
Erica reviewing personal projects, first a card slipped under her door that morning, why was it reading 9:30 now, lower than before, mysterious. And doing a countdown no less in printed microdots, who could do this at Whateley? LAN Ulster calling her, been a while since we have seen him, part of the reformed Wichita Warriors now, nice. Warning her about those tripping the flags on the fake online profiles set up by him for Erica, and now Erica knows that someone is looking into her.
Megaton aka Derek Richardson, up-and-coming lieutenant of the Future Super Heroes of America, this bigot.
Ugh, that kind of mindset I can't understand. And thinking Invictus would need some watching because of her friends, he needs to be taught a harsh lesson.As he liked to tell his detractors, progress slowed was progress steadied. Pushing forward too hard caused problems, while holding back protected against them.
And prejudiced towards Vic because of where Lifeward, Megaton's own mother, tends to pick up her 'charity cases', now I really don't like Megaton."Look," said Derek, his temper burning short. "I don't know you. I don't know how you know that woman. But I do know where she tends to pick up her charity cases, and that doesn't say much for you. Understand?"
Almost punched Vic over saying Lifeward is Megaton's mother, this boy has serious issues.
He is deluded if he thinks he is on the side of good and right by saying that to Vic, that is the attitude of a budding supervillain. Just because he appears to be a friend of Jack-in-the-Box, Derek automatically judges him as a lost cause. He is just a thug in a costume."Now remember this," he growled at the kid. "I'm on the side of good and right. You're some punk that that bleeding heart thought more important than her own family. And yanno what? I don't care what she thinks. She pulled you out of the gutter and as far as I'm concerned you should be thrown back in. Do not cause trouble and do not cross me. Understood?"
Francesco Persico, nice description of his hangover, wonder how much he will freak out once he knows what he revealed about his sister. His roommate Duster nowhere in sight, and Fra swearing to use his second chance at Whateley to shape up, little late there.
Ditch them completely and I will think you have learned from your mistake. And he doesn't remember what he said about Cally, great.And... perhaps no more meetings with the Outstanding Dudes Society, either. Not for a while, at least. He hoped his friend Mac would understand.
Back with Vic, 3 gaps in his memory between last night and during this morning, I can't wait for the creep who did this to be caught. And Lenape knows he is being forcibly-can't tell about what is wrong, at least someone else knows now and might be able to help break Jack-in-the-Box's hold on Vic. At least talking to him got Vic thinking about more potential options.
Back with Sterling, and still sitting on the steps of the cottage, Cookie gave her a strange look, figures the bio-devise dog can sense her.
Ouch, doesn't even have her teddy bear to comfort her. Kinesio and Feedback smoking weed which Sterling's nose leads her to, and seem to be able to notice her and offer her the joint which she takes a drag from, oh boy.Sterling's greatest wish in the world was that she could've brought her teddy bear, Sir Snugsalot, with her from home when everything had gone weird. She missed his stuffed self.
I don't like this girl. And poor Kinesio, no wonder he has a medical waiver. Oh shit, it's Jamie! Run, Kinesio, run! Bad idea to take her up on that offer, girl is nuts.Kinesio huffed and twitched. "I need it--"
"Yeah, yeah, to control the pain from your mutation. Incomplete internal energizer setup, isn't it? That's why they call you Spazz. Even if I reported you, there's that medical waiver. Your pal Skitz, on the other hand..." That grin aimed itself at Feedback.
Please don't let that mean Handmedown is dead or worse because of Jamie.Jamie had her smartpad out. On the screen, Sterling could see a list of code names. Kinesio was halfway down the list, along with some other odd ones, like Nightingale, Eisenmädel, Cerulea, Ping... A bright red X had been marked next to the code name Handmedown, whoever that was.
Ratel on the prowl once again with that shirt on, eep. Daniel Fontenot, a.k.a. Wilder. Oh no, not messing with him again, not after that stupid fight which she jumped into. Great, trying to start a fight with him and Daniel is trying to avoid it. Smacking him until he goes berserk, I hope she gets several months of detention for this one. All that to make a point, calls him boyfriend and goes skipping off, even blows him a kiss and leaving poor Daniel confused, Ratel is a piece of work.
Back to Vic, who is trying to think of loophole to get out from under the control of Jack-in-the-Box. TP-1 and might be able to use it to get out of this mess, yes! Listed date of manifestation off by several months, the report doesn't list his own mother, this is getting good. And lost his mother, ouch. Having to mentally yell and get a telepath and pick up on what is going on, oh boy.
Back with Cally who is thinking about all the ways her life is practice, even dancing in private with Neff. Electradyne upset that Cally wore an outfit for her performance and did it better, that girl has to learn to share the stage with others. Even Nick starting to show annoyance at Electradyne, that is no easy feat. Kieran makes a suggestion and Electra giving her a look of betrayal, good grief.
Music acts for the event as well, interesting. Cally sings an interesting song, who is it by?"Space is reserved," Dalton reported. "Um, performance order is Kieron, Electra, Nick, and Calliope for showcasing. Not a lot of room for fancy maneuvers."
Whirlibird, all that focus just to get 8 inches off the ground, at least she is improving. And donut holes from Daniel, good thing Monica caught herself before she finished that expression. Asked her roommate Jordain to go with Daniel for the delivery to the Bohemians, hope he is strong enough to protect Daniel and himself. And Monica so worried about Daniel she is having trouble focusing, aww.
Back with Vic, whoever he was looking for is a sophomore at the Cape Squad table, please let it not be Megaton. It's his step-sister Gwen, former step-brother Ollie, and she tried to make him come home with her at their last little family reunion, oh boy. Chrissy and Les come back and think Vic is bothering her, *sigh* Can only send simple messages to Gwen and not Jack-in-the-Box, great, should have known it wouldn't be that simple.
Great, Chrissy just wants to leave Vic in the lurch because she doesn't want to deal with Jack-in-the-Box. Followed him by drone when he went into a trace, sounds like Les is a gadgeteer or devisor who built her own. Footage of what happened between him and Jack-in-the-Box, and he is using a devise the school made him destroy every one of. Guessing he kept one, bet that would get him expelled and handed over to the MCO if caught with it.
Oh Jack is is so much trouble."Post-hypnotic command," Les explained. "The buzzer shocks your brain into a receptive mode, and then he tells you what to do. Regular buzzes reinforce the previous orders and let him add on more."
And they have the means to override it, yes!If Gwen's face was stormy, Chrissy's was volcanic. "Bastard was using it to pick up girls last year, including me," the brunette said. "Only it works weird on people with certain types of ESP or mental skills, and he was too careless to realize. Should've been expelled," she declared.
Thanks for this, was curious about what song Cally was singing.Music credits:
"Wine Red" by The Hush Sound
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- Astrodragon
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The difference is that they have powers.
What, you thought High School wasn't full of cretins?

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Sir Lee
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But the ODS is also a pretty much on the nose expy for the so-called "manosphere". It's all there -- the "pick-up artist" as a role model, the self-aggrandizement of inadequate losers as alleged "alphas", the name which implies the whole "incel" mindset (in which one sees himself as a "nice guy" who is being unfairly deprived his due right of having the Swedish Bikini Team as a private harem), the misogyny, the homophobia implicit in calling M2F gender-changers "traps" -- particularly stupid in the context of Whateley, since some of the hottest girls started out as biological males. I wonder if their heads would explode if they discovered that Fey -- who is a teacher, so they probably wank a lot to her -- used to be a guy...
To give the authors their due, I note that they are equal opportunity satirists -- the Amazons also have the features of an expy for the most obnoxious extremes of militant lesbian-only feminism, including the TERF thing.
- Kettlekorn
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I think my favorite part of this update is Callie comparing Nick to a deck chair. That was great.
- Valentine
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Don't Drick and Drive.
- Malady
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I should refresh on Scarlyt, but I like surprises.
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- Katssun
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But hacking or investigations in Gen 2? VIs versus AIs, instant breakthroughs or automated attack algorithms, countermeasure consoles, monitored fake social media profiles, curated honeypots, the works! It makes me think immediately of Gibson, Vinge, Stephenson, or even just Shadowrun and Cyberpunk 2020.
And best of all? There's a very logical progression between the two generations. We're aware of all the budding developments of Gen 1, the precursors to the technological and social leap we're now getting into the details of Gen 2. All hinted at in the earliest stories. Take Gen 1, put gadgeteers and devisors to work on it for 9 years, and you have the brave new world we're now seeing described before us.
Really love what the Gen 2 Crew has come up with here on that front.
Other bits:
The insidious reach of Essemmelle's ability! Even when it is a positive branding, it still gives me a bit of the creeps.
I'm also glad that what was done to Vic was technological, and not some esper using their psychic egg beater on his brain. Then again, that's kind of what they're doing to him.
Was this the first we've heard of Vic's step-sister? I seem to remember him hinting at his past before, alluding to someone like Gwen, but this seemed like a new development in this segment.
- Kettlekorn
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I think this might be the first direct in-story mention that he isn't present, but it's been known via author commentary for a bit. We don't know what's actually happened, though.I Think wrote: Sooo many hints about things going on! The thing I'm most worried about is... what happened to Louis? Am I forgetting something that was previously established, or did we just hear that Louis is no longer at Hawthorne and somehow left sometime in the past 4 years?! (also Lenape refers to him as Lewis...?)
I like to think that he burned out in some heroic way and lost his powers, and then his body began to fall apart. But inside his blubbery shell was a shiny new mostly-human Louis with no powers of note beyond an abnormal psychic resistance. So, naturally, he threw on some pants, picked up a crossbow, and headed to Nebraska to hunt zombies.
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For example, you can't use the tagging system to find all the vic stories.or all the tia stories. This story has no tags. And if it were tagged, it would have most of then gen2 chars in the tags. Part 1 only lists Eisenmadel | Calliope | MaLagua and it also has a bunch of people running around in it.
- Astrodragon
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Its not like a story centred around what one character is doing, with the other players being more peripheral (although still not ignored).
So trying to find and read all the Tia bits is, frankly, silly, because it isn't a story about any one character - its just mainly seen from one or two pov. You shouldn't think of it as a selection of individual stories, because it isn't.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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- Erianaiel
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Kettlekorn wrote: I think this might be the first direct in-story mention that he isn't present, but it's been known via author commentary for a bit. We don't know what's actually happened, though.
Realistically speakiing Louis would be one of the key targets for both Nimbus and The Bastard to take out post haste. He is that powerful a wildcard against any attack on Whateley and at the same time is he extremely vulnerable
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- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4, part 3 comments
Erica going to the picnic area, setting up their tarp in a reserved spot, nice. Kirsten with her gang, Adrienne le Floc'h, Gregory Crumbley, and Leslie, but not sign of Gouyasse, this isn't good. Nice snapback by Erica to the insult Kristen threw at her.
Francesco Persico, awake and sober, finally worried about what he might have said to the idiots. Macarthur ignoring his calls, the others of the ODS in hiding and the clubhouse locked up, Fra, go to someone about your suspisions. Smart to leave Erica alone, and Arsi Khan is interesting, setting up a yurt and cultural representative for Mongolia, cool. Bone darts, sounds fun and nice to see Fra is realizing he needs true friends and not the guys in the ODS.
Donut having time to clean up before going to work.
And Donut is one of the few students specializing in the culinary arts, Mrs. Sampleton the Home Ec. teacher sounds nice. Ah, so actually learning the old fashioned way of cooking improves his creations as well since he would understand them better, nice.Whateley's Home Ec. department wasn't as glamorous or eccentric as its other branches, but it had a very well stocked kitchen area in the tunnels near the cafeteria.
Always interesting to learn about the limits of someone's powers.His power had limits, he'd learned. Not really a hard limit, like one dozen cookies an hour, but a soft one. Single, big items took more out of him than lots of little ones, even if all the little ones together were a lot bigger. Stuff like cookies or donuts could get spaced out, but cakes...
Chessa Barnes, their family is an interesting group to say the least. Dr. Derek Speers dating Myra, cleaned up for her and bringing along a devise. A prototype model of the Machine, now that is something I would love to own.
Gah! With those kind of options in that version of the Machine I would never use the big red button.The prototype's keypad allowed for six-digit combinations. Chessa didn't know if there actually were one million flavors of ice cream on the planet, and no one else could say for sure either. In between the cracks of possibility, there lurked things like Ghost Pepper Honey Surprise, Prickly Pear Puree, and Phlegm. Affixed to the front of the devise was a big red button labeled DO YOU FEEL LUCKY?
Ah, sitting near Erica and friends spot thanks to Pat, good choice. So Myra has a room in Poe to help out Marcus, good big sister. Getting parts from Marcus and Derek, just what is this birthday present which Uncle Adolf is making? Erica and Chessa with RPG sourcebooks, I would join a game.
Matsu aka Michelle Brown checking out girls no matter their figure or height. Ah, thought I recognized that codename, naming herself after someone from Sekirei, fits that she is good at surveillance tech.
And she just went from cute to creepy, yikes.She knew when each girl from her floor of Melville went to the wonderfully spacious showers, what their favorite shampoo brand was, and even what patterns they preferred on their knickers.
Stalking girls like this, taking a picture of Elizabeth "Velvet" Taylor like that, why isn't she is in Poe? Caught and scared out into the open, she actually flirts with the girl who caught her, good grief. And Michelle is bi, at least she hands over her camera without a fight.
And creepier still, and of crud, the girl who caught her is Jamie. And Michelle just screwed up and outed Time Bomb, which Jamie says her name is on the list, just what we don't need. And we finally know Jamie's codename, Calibrate."My RA is a literal ray of sunshine. Total hime-sama type, of course. And those junior high girls are just so adorable. Natural boku-chan in the flesh, and I cannot wait for them to grow up more. Eliza's got that o-jou-sama vibe going for her, and then there's Tia for the moé."
Vic going with the plan because it is the only one available, poor kid. Ping putting electrodes on him, ooo, a jolt to reboot the part of his brain Jack messed with, nice. Chrissy and Gwen there as guards, the thing is powered by a car battery, eep.
Please let that not be Gwen because of what is happening to him or Cally because the attack is happening.From somewhere deep, he could hear a girl screaming in fear and in pain. It all went black after that.
Star Sentry, nice codename for Gwen, who seems to think Ping almost killed him. At least Vic has a strong pulse, scared there for a moment. Whoa, why did Vic lash out like that on Gwen, memory loss due to the experiment or what? And it worked, Vic is free to speak and not Jack is going to be in a lot of trouble.
Cally having to deal with Electra's negative vibes at band practice, ouch. Neff waiting for her and Cally happy to skip down the hall of the tunnel together, so cute. Lights shutting down behind them, at least Neff has the right idea to keep the wall to their backs. Cally can hear and sense the idiots coming, sensing those kind of emotions towards her I would be scared myself.
Oh shit, I knew they were idiots and what they said earlier suggested it, I didn't think they would try to gang-rape her!She'd felt this mix before. Not at Whateley, and certainly not from the same people. In Italy, Genoa, a group of young men hellbent on making her understand what it meant to be a girl, in their eyes...
Calling her a trap like that, what they plan to do, I hope the lot of them are expelled. Nice kick by Neff to one of the creeps, they deserve worse. Manipulative monsters, calling her a trap over and over just to try and justify what they are doing. She had no choice in changing her physical sex when she manifested, saying she is lying and calling her by her old name, sickening.
And Cally in a panic like that, warping what she sees and hears, she and Neff need help now! Contact High subduing her like that, and just as all seems lost the voice of a young woman calls them out for their cowardice.
Okay, I would cut his tongue out for this, blaming his victim and acting like they are the injured parties pisses me off."You don't know the score here, and have no business interfering. I tell you now, we are the ones who are in the right, the injured parties seeking justice for a lie maliciously told."
And a 2nd girl coming to their aid, yet this idiots still try to justify their actions. Dang, nice taken of several of these idiots. Contact High hit with a small devise and taken down, seems Star Sentry, Ping, and Vic are the rescuers. Getting outside like that, wish they had bound the creeps and brought them in to security. Celerity is the other girl, good to hear the Cape Squad is trying to fix their image after a bad year. And Vic there as well, hope they got evidence while doing the rescue and it isn't 'he said, she said'.
Crud, Vic tells how he was forced to spy and Cally doesn't even want to listen to him explain, hope this gets fixed soon. Vic upset at Cally, then upset at Gwen because of a past incident, and at first it sounds like Gwen is in the wrong. Until you find out Vic was trying to find a way to change her back into Ollie, including saying she never thought about what he wants, ugh. Vic needs counseling and to learn to accept his brother is now his sister, adapt the relationship and not just lash out in anger and frustration.
Shawn Baker, ODS dud, ignoring calls from Jack and watching Arsi Khan facing challengers in a rope ring to Bökh, Mongolian wrestling, now that sounds awesome. And Arsi actually out-wrestles Kenshin, now there is a match I would have filmed. Shawn shoved towards the ring, wonder how he will fare.
Interesting wrestling."Pretty simple. No shirts, no shoes. Step out of bounds, you lose. Anything but your feet hits the ground, you lose. Powers are allowed within reason, cuz we know it's hard to turn off the super-strength, but if you got something like laser-beams out your eyes, keep it out of the ring."
Whoa, now that is an interesting power. Actually lasted a while thanks to his power, Arsi actually liked it and wishes to practice again sometime."Vibrating" almost covered it, except it wasn't really a physical effect. He was a warper; when he vibrated, it wasn't necessarily in three dimensions.
Oh boy, I hope this doesn't end badly for Shawn and he can be friends with Kenshin.Senpai notice me...
Fra watching the watches, should have known it was Bacon who faced Arsi before, seeing him taken down would make most wary. Goes to greet Cally and gets slapped, she knows he blabbed to those idiots.
And Fra doesn't remember, this is why you don't drink."Were they your friends?" she demanded. "Were they this group you have been hanging out with, thick as thieves and dense as rock? Belin!" she spat. "They are, aren't they? You told them!"
Shawn spills it all to Cally and is going to talk to security, good.
Ouch, I hope Cally gets some advice from her friends on all this and soon.He had to concede the point. "Yes. Fair. And they will not be friends from now on, except maybe the kid from just now. Fio, please!"
With a twist of her arms, she threw him face-first intot the dirt. As she stepped over and around his head, she said in perfect English, "That is not good enough. We are finished, Fra. I no longer have a twin brother. Goodbye."
Val aka Eurydice, planning things like this, how to manipulate girls into joining the Amazons and become lesbians, that is just sick. And now she is going after Cally, Val is toast once Cally's friends find out. Saying the sisterhood can be her shield for now, not if Stahlfaust finds out about Cally. Leading them to the Amazon's territory, this is very bad. Please let Cally's friends stop this before it is too late.
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- Hardric
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I only have thing to say about Eurydice and her newly discovered power... Fucking. Knew. It.
- Katssun
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I also like the parallels with the twins' and Vic's family situation.
Arguably, Cally is in even more danger now than she was with the ODS. The ODS are evil bastards, no doubt, but some of the Amazons will beat her to death if they also find out her secret. Morgana had a quick rescue and help. Cally may not be so lucky.
Kareela's creepy power turned out for the best after all! In stalking Kenshin in a somewhat comical way that started to slide into creepy, Barker realized what good people do, and took the right side when it came to it.
I'm guessing we should be very worried that Jamie is also recruiting.
Vic's backstory just keeps getting more and more interesting. So much not fully known yet. Hints and glimpses, surrounded by lies of omission.
- Kettlekorn
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Nooo, Vic. You were mind controlled. Lead with that, not this weak-ass "I was forced" garbage!Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 3) wrote: Oh man, there was a stumper. For all that he'd been in the thick of the plot, he still didn't know why Jack-in-the-Box was doing this. "Er, well," he stumbled. "Jack, er, one of the guys back there, he... he was forcing me to spy on you and set you up for something, but I didn't know what or why, promise!"
That boy is a keeper.Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 3) wrote: I'm, uh, gonna go now. I need to speak with Security...
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Shawn finally may have figured out he was barking up the wrong tree, even if the reason was Kareela's powers, and Fra is an idiot but realized his error, even if it was too late. But they seem to be the exception, not the rule.
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Key word is "wannabe". They are too young to develop any actual pick-up techniques, so they aren't real PUAs. They are just starting in the dating & sex game, so they still have hope of success, not having descended into the failure despair that leads one to label oneself as "incel" or "MGTOW" or whatever other label they come up to cover their own self-loathing.
But yes, a few of them are rapists.
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After this weekend of story the club's roster is going to be a lot smaller, for what it's worth.
A breakdown of the ones not likely to improve:
High Gear - craves attention. Wanted girls to pay more attention to him, so being the sort of devisor he was, he went and found instructions on the internet, then applied analytical algorithms to figure out the best way to go about things. Unfortunately, he chose his source material poorly, and double-unfortunately, the results worked often enough to encourage him. Now he can brag to younger students and get attention from them as well. He's the only one who's really into the PUA concept, but since it's his club, it permeates everything they do.
Jack-in-the-Box - likes control. Constantly negging on people, even his 'friends' in the club, in order to establish dominance, e.g. gives people nicknames to depersonalize and put them on the status of household goods. His major lines of research follow this trait, with a series of ever-improving mind control devises. Honestly the ODS would not have gone nearly so far as they have without him egging them along.
Contact High - just dumb. Has one trick at his disposal and no brains or ability to see that it's a bad thing to use. He's not likely to learn to be a better person anytime soon, either.
Gouyasse - a bully, plain and simple. He doesn't need the club or its philosophy, but they need him for his access to beer, and he likes that. He's in on the Calliope plot more because it's a strike against Erica's friend, which will make Wahnsennig happy (she probably wouldn't like to know the particulars, though).
Macarthur Price a.k.a. 'the idiot' - probably a rotten egg from the get-go. The first we see of him, he's already gotten on Essemmelle's bad side, and he ends up getting tagged as an idiot for the rest of the day. This did nothing to improve his chances with the ladies from the very start, and he's a naturally bitter sort of dude. And then there's that unhealthy fixation on Calliope that came to a crashing end when he learned the truth. That's the sort of thing that High Gear can make use of.
Lucky Lad - another attention-seeker. Formerly a sitcom child actor, and obsessed with reclaiming the level of attention he believes he used to garner. Since the rest of school sees him as pretty desperate, he's unlikely to be anything but more bitter and disenchanted as he goes on, which puts him about par with Mac right now.
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- Katssun
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My read of the situation had put Gouyasse in more of an active role in this, that his personality screamed more, "I'm God's gift to women," instead of him being more focused on his allegiance to the Berets and enjoying that the ODS was dependent on him. I think the way he had planned to mess with Fra pushed me in that direction.
The others fell in line with my impressions thus far.
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"Okay, here's what we got so far..." It was, Jack was loathe to admit, not much at all. Of their surveillance missions that morning, only Vapo-rub had delivered any reliable intel. That Shieldwall kid had proven as beta as he seemed -- Mac'n'Cheese had complained of boredom -- and as for the fag... Jack was still trying to make sense of the one report that Shake'n'Bake had sent in. Queries for more intel had gone unanswered.
You might need a new spy for Kenshin. His Even Dudes Want Him Field is operating full-force. And the more it reduces your ranks, the better.
"Okay, here's what we got so far..." It was, Jack was loathe to admit, not much at all. Of their surveillance missions that morning, only Vapo-rub had delivered any reliable intel. That Shieldwall kid had proven as beta as he seemed -- Mac'n'Cheese had complained of boredom -- and as for the fag... Jack was still trying to make sense of the one report that Shake'n'Bake had sent in. Queries for more intel had gone unanswered.
I guess that means they're brain-dead sub-human losers who were saved of their well-deserved Darwin Award by dumb luck so concentrated it took a solid form? Cream of the crop, I see.
"I shouldn't be here," Ruthie said. "Seriously, if we get caught, then that's my third strike."
Duck, I can't even believe they let you have two. Also, you went back twice. By that point, you deserve everything.
"Gutentag, Kirsten," Erica said with a sigh. Turning her head, she could see the dark-haired German girl from Mannheim loitering with her usual contingent of Euro students. The redheaded Adrienne le Floc'h held a basket, while the young British peer Gregory Crumbley was carrying a heavier load with a pair of oversized PK arms projected in shimmering cobalt over his own appendages. Leslie, the Scottish wolf-girl, was trotting along behind them.
I want to see that whole pack of losers for Parents Day. I can see it all in my mind: They see Opa and Oma, start the dissing. One Eisenmädel revelation and history lesson later, all the losers are in catatonic shock, and Wahnsinnig drop dead on the floor, after a few moments where intense shock, horror and desire to fervently lick Oma's boots warred on her thugish face.
"Why, she speaks! And politely, too!" said Kirsten. "It is true then; even pigs can learn etiquette."
Nope they don't. Looking at a living proof right now.
"You haven't been looking in the mirror lately, have you?" Erica asked back.
My point. Still, Erica, it's probably better than the abject servitude she will display if she (unfortunately) recovers from that stroke.
He was awake and sober, washed and fed, and feeling much better physically. It was his mind that was still ill at ease. The more he'd moved away from the morning's hangover, the clearer his few memories of the night before had become, and though too many details were still obscured, there was enough there to make him worry.
Oh, so now you worry, little degenerate? Not cutting slack for the spiked drinks, he chose to take a dump in the Pit. Forgiving is a Nope for me.
It was nice. A better afternoon than hanging out with Mac and the ODS, that was for certain.
Look, just because you finally turned on your brains certainly doesn't mean I'll be cutting you any slack.
He was making an extra dozen cookies for her, to say thanks.
Cookie bribing, can't go wrong. Unless white chocolate is there. Seriously don't, not even for enemies. Things like Geneva were created to forbid that stuff.
In the cart was a devise, a prototype model of the one in the Crystal Hall that students knew simply as the Machine. Pour milk in one end, choose a number combination, and out came ice cream. What kind of ice cream, that was left for the user to discover. The cafeteria's Machine had a two-digit code system, allowing one hundred options from 00 to 99, which made it easier to ensure that everything was edible, if not always recognizable.
Don't mind me crashing in. I'm stocking up my Dark Chocolate Sorbet reserves, and Cranberries ones. And also searching Pomegrenate-Geranium for my mother, boy would she love a Christmas gift like this.
In the cart was a devise, a prototype model of the one in the Crystal Hall that students knew simply as the Machine. Pour milk in one end, choose a number combination, and out came ice cream. What kind of ice cream, that was left for the user to discover. The cafeteria's Machine had a two-digit code system, allowing one hundred options from 00 to 99, which made it easier to ensure that everything was edible, if not always recognizable.
Potterverse, you found your master.
Erica picked up her smartpad. "That reminds me..." she said. "Marcus, would you know how to make or acquire anything on this list?" She passed it over for his perusal. "My Uncle Adolf is getting things together for my cousin's birthday, and... well, long story short, but he's making up for lost time."
Yeah, that old already, and still not a raygun. Truly a massive fault here.
Much like her codenamesake, a technologically supreme yet misunderstood genius from the anime series Sekirei, Michelle was the mistress of surveillance tech. She knew when each girl from her floor of Melville went to the wonderfully spacious showers, what their favorite shampoo brand was, and even what patterns they preferred on their knickers.
Negative Buzzer Sound. Matsu is much-more equal-opportunities than you, young lady, so you can't have that nickname. I'm sure you'll understand (can't believe I missed that reference when it was done in precedent episodes).
"I'm only going to say this once," said the other girl. "The slut-bunny is mine. Do you hear? She is mine. If you so much as touch her..."
Duck, that's Jamie right? Other point, Michelle: Matsu would have been smart enough to stay the duck away from her.
Not good, though. No plan involving this many electrodes could ever be called good.
You were ready to join the Masterminds. Your opinion on good idea is debatable.
"Er, is that a car bat-t-teree-ee-ee-ee-ee-ee..." Once he hit the final syllable, he found it hard to stop. For that undefined length of "moment," miniature bolts of lightning snaked across his vision, leaving behind a trail of black so bright it made every other color invert: red to green, blue to yellow, and then all of them together turned into something best described as "blgrglhrgl..." because that was all he could say.
Okay, maybe you're not totally wrong.
Damnit, Les!" Gwen shouted. "We're trying to help him, not kill him!"
You're Capes. Pretty sure you're doing it on the grounds of Wannabe Mastermind.
Damnit, Les!" Gwen shouted. "We're trying to help him, not kill him!"
Duck, had everything to be rebooted with G2? Why none of these clubs are allowed to retain even to brain cells to rub together?
Vic's head bobbed and weaved, and for a moment she feared he would pass out again, but: "He, he gave me instructions. To, to find Cally -- Calliope, one of my teammates -- and, and..." He gulped. "We, we need to find her, right now!"
You are miles better than Frak could ever dream to be.
Neff's grin was the moon. "Gotcha. Had to deal with the same shee-yit -- pardon my French -- all the time back at dance school. Always somebody out there who envies whatcha got, or is jealous of you cuz they think you're a threat to what they've got. That's life, I guess."
Was expecting of doing it for Morpehus one day... Oh well. Proper French here is merde, Neff'. Maybe conneries sometimes.
With a quiet dun sound, the lights behind them shut off. Dun, dun, dun, the lights ahead of them joined in the blackout. The long bulb directly above them stayed lit, though it only served to make the darkness deeper.
Dramatic tune wasn't needed here, Elan.
Calliope strained to hear, with ears that were both there and not there. She caught the sound of footfalls, light and furtive, and the harsh buzz of negative emotions. It was a complex blend, far from subtle but well-sloshed, and she caught traces of anger, desire, fear, and loathing, both towards her and towards themselves. Her stomach flipped and her palms went cold with the sweat of terror.
Fucking degenerates. Account for Caliope's following paragraph too. I really want to see them bite the dust.
"Nuh-uh." Neff stood tall and defiant in front of her friend. "That ain't copacetic. Not at all. But..." she said, turning a grin that gleamed under the sole working light, "I am. Just call me Copacetic."
I'll call you Real Cool too.
"What does that even mea... oof!" The owner of the second voice had come close enough to be seen at the light's edge, his face hidden behind a crude mask. Neff had aimed a bit lower, one toned dancer's leg finding its mark unerringly.
Ai for the balls next time.
"Brave words, little trap. Your friend is free to go, but you... you need to face the consequences of lying, of saying things which aren't true... Fabrizio."
I wish Carson was here for when they go down. She had the best melt in terror glares. And maybe hypothetically she could ave been mad enough to punt just one fucktard from the academy's gate, right? I can have this completely chimerical dream, it's one of the only things left.
A hand grabbed her wrist. The corner of her mind capable of thought and hoped wished it were Neff's, but then the sickly chill registered through her skin, and she turned her head to stare at the crude mask of Contact High. She knew it had to be him; the sedative touch was achingly similar to what he'd done at the dorm mixer weeks before. It numbed and froze her thoughts, forcing the panic to subside as her voice died in her throat.
Guess how's getting the boot, fucktard?
A loud clap repeated broke in, repeating several times with a cadence that could almost have been ironic in its slowness. "What a brave group," came the voice of a young woman. "Facing down two dangerous girls like this." The speaker was barely visible in the murky darkness beyond the lights.
Forget the almost. Also couldn't you have been just a tiny bitty faster? Still, they're up for the taking.
Even with the mask on, Calliope could see the second boy go stiff with indignation. "You, madamoiselle, are mistaken! We are justice! We are retribution! We are..."
Indetention in Hawthorne's toilets and the sewers for the remaining of the year. And by that,I unfortunately mean December.
"The previous school year wasn't good for our image..." Star Sentry admitted. "But we're trying to fix that."
You better do. That cycle of 'people-with-brains/ fuckers' the clubs go through is getting tiring. lease try to make sure the goons stay out this time. Also, nice start here.
Oh man, there was a stumper. For all that he'd been in the thick of the plot, he still didn't know why Jack-in-the-Box was doing this. "Er, well," he stumbled. "Jack, er, one of the guys back there, he... he was forcing me to spy on you and set you up for something, but I didn't know what or why, promise!"
2/20. Didn't mention the important part, the brainwashing.
"You, you set me up!?" Cally screamed. "Why? We were friends, Vic! How could you go and do a thing like that to a friend, you... you... belin! No!" she cried as Gwen stepped in to defend him. "I am not ready to listen to excuses or apologia! Thank you very much, miss superheroes, but I am out of here!" Grabbing the black girl by the wrist, Cally stormed off, audibly humming with rage.
Case in point.
Vic's brain was still grasping for a clue. "That... that bitch!" his mouth started without him. "Everything I had to go through today, all the freak outs and black outs and electrodes, all to help save her skinny ass, and this is the thanks I get!?"
You were an essential part of the massive you-literally-can't-picture-how-monumentally-bad shit thrown at her here, and didn't mention the brain-benders. Man up and accept it.
Vic stared her right in the eyes, the one part that hadn't really changed in the last two years. "What I wanted was to have Ollie back."
Careful, guy, you're about to join Frack and Wahnsinnig in the 'Bash Your Head Against A Wall Until I Fall Asleep' Club.
His phone had buzzed twice in the past hour, both times with messages from Jack. Shawn ignored them. There were more pressing things at the moment. Awesome things.
I see the Field is working perfectly.
There was a general chuckle from the crowd, but no takers. Shawn was mulling it over when a hand to his back made the decision for him, shoving him forcibly towards the ring. He turned around to glare, but couldn't tell who'd done it.
See as your chance with Senpai.
"Th-thank you." He'd been trailing Kenshin all day, but this was the first time they'd spoken. And it was a compliment, even. A great many feelings were duking it out in his head, but the first thing that came to mind was a meme he'd seen often on the internet. It made more sense to him now.
Senpai notice me...
Okay I'll admit I wrote the former comment knowing about that... Can you blame me? It was made to be used this way.
Fra would have, only he had bigger things to worry about. His sister was now storming across the grass nearby, and it did not take an empath to see she was pissed. He could hope she wasn't angry at him, but he knew the odds were against him there.
Nah, you think? One thing: Try to look good for the camera while you die. I'm posting this on Youtube for a quick buck before someone strike it.
"Were they your friends?" she demanded. "Were they this group you have been hanging out with, thick as thieves and dense as rock? Belin!" she spat. "They are, aren't they? You told them!"
"I, I don't remember..."
He deserved the next slap, and the one after that.
Go for the crotch. He won't need it anymore.
"Um, I hate to interrupt..." It was the brave lad from before, showing even more courage now than he had in the ring. Belatedly, Fra recognized him from the ODS. "I, er, can't understand a word you're saying," the boy continued, "but I think I know what it's about. Never thought Jack would go through with it... Um, well, they gave the F-dude here a spiked drink last night and got him babbling. For the fun of it, that's all. But then they got suspicious and did some real digging, and, um..." The ODS boy was beginning to wilt under Fio's glare. "Er, what it's worth, I think you're perfect and beautiful as you are, and the rest of them are idiots. I'm, uh, gonna go now. I need to speak with Security..."
Plus side, you'e about to score massive Senpai Points. Also, be thorough. the more of these jackasses are booted, the better.
"I didn't know!" he protested. "They're... I thought they were my friends! You told me to make friends, remember?"
*Resumes aforeentionned head-bashing* Even a brain-dead comatose loser would have known betterr than friends with alcohol as approach of choice, and a place with a name like a Pit. Don't you fucking dare make it her fault, repugnant little sub-human degenerate. Once I' done with the head-bashing, next step is the rusty chainsaw. My advice? Bend over.
With a twist of her arms, she threw him face-first intot the dirt. As she stepped over and around his head, she said in perfect English, "That is not good enough. We are finished, Fra. I no longer have a twin brother. Goodbye."
*Mortal Kombat voice* Finish Him!
As her club's chief recruiter, Val had developed a particular and peculiar sense of timing. The approach was everything with most girls; few would run straight to the Amazons with open arms, simply because most girls were straight and emotionally reliant on men. Yet inevitably there would be a moment in their life, some minor tragedy or act of melodrama, where the female faith in males was at its lowest. All she need do was step in with a few kind words and a little practical psychology. Most times she didn't even need to exercise her psionic faculties of persuasion.
Cooler, please?
And she never regretted taking theater classes, despite the number of unfortunate Romeos she'd been forced to kiss.
I can see the logic, but don't you dare sully theater little sick bitch.
"Who're you?" demanded the black girl side-tailing Calliope. The girlfriend. Val had done some digging into Ms. Nefertiti "Copacetic" Copeland, and she liked what she'd found.
Good side, it doesn't seem Neff is mindng the TG thing...
"Valentina Maria de Sanchez y Hernandez," she said. "A friend to those in need. And it certainly seems that Calliope is. Come, come." Val motioned to the spot chosen by the Amazons for their picnic. "Whatever is happening, the sisterhood can be your shield for now."
Remember one word, Calliope: Pat. You know that shield thing is pure bullshit.
The black girl nodded. "Amen and hallelujah, yeah. I'm still feeling a little loopy over here."
And here is the bad part. Even once things blow up with Calliope and Stale Farce hatred of changelings, there is that nasty risk that Neff' will be getting more Attack Bitches Brainwashing...
Well, it happened. Guess brainwashing Siren here is the WitBitch to Stale Farce's Don Assholo?
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Daniel Fontenot thought he knew what fear was, had thought the aftermath of his first Rager incident -- so bloody and yet so justified -- would remain the scariest memory of his life. He was wrong.
He could feel his ears morphing into something more animalistic, just so they could droop in anxiety as he whimpered.

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Ouch, having to bride his way through the crowd with manifested food. And Melanie Shinall aka Glam greets him, good grief does she dress up to show off. And interesting power as well, good for disguises I'm sure.
Ugh, another manipulative b. Scarlyt, now we know why she is with the Bohemians, yikes. And Danny has a new friend, Jordain seems like a girl who you want on your side."Boys." Jordain hissed. "Yins all get caught by her pretty face. Look. She covers stuff up. Hides it under little illusions. How many kids in Whitman or Twain would do anything to look normal, huh?" Her jaws clenched, revealing some unusual muscles at work under the lightly scaled skin of her face. "The first time's always free -- or even better, some big show of charity for a little thing. But once yins get used to it..."
"Price goes up?" Daniel guessed.
"Worse. Those illusions ain't permanent, of course, but what she never mentions is that she can turn 'em off at any time, from anywhere. She decides ya did her wrong, bam! the whole world sees yer real face."
Jack-in-the-Box and the ODS crew dragging themselves from the tunnels, ditching the masks and going to the picnic site as if nothing happened. And High Gear hacked security camera feed to give them alibis, ugh. And he most fears if those who saved Cally can prove the ODS' involvement, I hope security is able to bust these creeps. Glad those 3 got so beaten up in the fight, even with hard-hitting blows sometimes its hard to tell with mutants.
Jack going to try and scare those who wish to leave the ODS into keeping quiet. Great, he knows Vic was involved and suspects who the girls might be. Blaming being beaten up on one of the Amazons, that is going to come back to haunt him. Plan C and it will take time to set up, great, these bigoted A-holes just don't learn.
Vic late for the picnic and an hour late for meeting with Tanya, ouch. Tanya suited up already for a match in the ring, And upset at Vic, she called and waited and Vic can't think of what to say, dang it. Gwen there as Star Sentry, explaining to Tanya why he is late and Vic thought being here for Tanya's big match was more important than going to security for his report, ah, to be a teenager again. And this is helping Gwen and Vic's relationship to begin healing, good.
The Bohemian Lion aka Karl Lorencz, all those people hanging out with them just for the level of entertainment or were the help he gathered to him. Scarlyt leaving, what he calls quirks are probably mental issues in need of treatment. Never seen Scarlyt happy, worse than I thought. These two are starting to remind me of Dom and Hekate when we first met them, except manipulating people through charisma and shows of wealth.
Janet Chorley figures Melanie's roommate would be in the same circles. Okay, the sound of giving Scarlyt a lesson and the victory party, this group is more twisted than their public appearance show. Knock-Out and she is bi, yet no one talks about the kisses she gives Melanie because of the power structure of their group, not good.
Val aka Eurydice isn't happy about where the Amazon's picnic space was, too close to the Bohemians court for some. She was going to try and recruit Janet and Melanie if they didn't hang out with Karl. And StahlFaust having serious issues, including with Karl, oh boy. Val messing with Cally and Neff to keep them shaken up using her projective empathy, really hate Val now. And she wants to lure in Cally and Neff, ugh.
Brita wishes to see one of the Amazons beat up one of the Capes, hope the Amazon loses.
Nice to see Cally speaking her mind. And of course, Brita doesn't like Celerity and Star Sentry, bigot.Calliope's mouth formed a moue of distaste. "There is a saying from one of the northern Italian dialects. I believe Umberto Eco used it in his writing: Pull the cork out. Much as I have enjoyed my talks with her in the past, I am afraid Brita's cork is too well wedged in for it to be removable."
Talk of the true concept of justice, Val, you wouldn't know true justice if it bit you in the ass, otherwise, everyone you've manipulated would snap out of it and take turns 'getting justice' for being mind raped. Competitions like this are sanctioned by the school now instead of in arenas with teachers as the refs, doesn't sound good. Tanya up there and various others, some of which I recognize but blank on the names of right now. Okay, I recognize Ratel, I pity whoever is facing her. D'oh! Cally telling Val that Ratel loves to fight, now she is going to try and recruit her, I hope her spirit gives Ratel resistance to empathic manipulation. Assist in inter-dorm drama and try to ruin friendships, I want Val caught soon, she is twisted.
Tanya in the girls' changing room, having met Zapper a few times. LightSaber in Poe as well doesn't like Zapper, wonder why. And of course Rachel aka Ratel, nice bit about the Ratel-Signal. Plus Tanya is smart for not wanting to face someone with the spirit of a honey badger again, those suckers are vicious.
Erica happy to have a good view of the ring and enough room around her for neighbors. Right next to the Barneses, very nice spot, and should have known that ice cream machine would draw in the junior high class. Melville freshman girls with Hikaru holding court, Breakdance, and Heartbreaker introducing everyone to everyone, eager girls to make friends. Aww, Scheherezade off by herself.
Tia energetic and drags Sche over to the others, what has gotten into her today? MMM wandering in, Laura chatting with Dr. Speers along with Marcus and Twitch. Morgana and Bianca chatting, Erica thinking it is in code, hehe. Kenshin dragged off by Venus Inc. girls, worse fates out there. Wilder actually stuck around, interesting. Cally didn't answer Erica's call, this isn't good. Tanya and Zapper up, Bailey turning bright red like that as she snaps her mouth shut is so cute. Crud, Tanya versus LightSaber, we have no idea what this girl can do.
Brita hasn't beaten anyone up for more than a week, no wonder she is so riled up. She wants to beat up Karl, only Muliebris using her field to calm Brita keeps Brita's hand. Only LightSaber amenable to the Amazons out of all the girls in Poe, seems the other girls have more common sense.
Tanya and everyone having to listen to Megaton tell all the official tournament rules, this would be the perfect time for everyone to start singing "Have you ever seen a windbag" like in that Highway to Heaven episode. It seems LS's gloves are devises that generate blades of light the color of blood. Nice counter-hit by Tanya and focusing her PK field into her hands, too bad LS lands on her feet. Fancy display with her blades, those tend to backfire most of the time.
All to distract Tanya from the kicks, ouch. And Tanya has LS pinned, and LS says auntie, Tanya wins the match! Urgh, LS flirts with Tanya, that girl. And when Tanya goes to say she has a boyfriend LS says he will cheat on her eventually, that girl has issues.
Cally cheering on Tanya, then worries the Amazons will be upset about it. Val saying they will cheer for the girl if one is matched against a boy, serious issues. Get out of there already, Cally and Neff!
Vic sitting with Gwen in the Cape Squad area, everyone except Gwen and Chrissy giving him the side-eye, good grief. Oh boy, he called Megaton a blowhard, Gwen's boyfriend and also FSHA lieutenant.
See, when even your clubmates agree you have a problem. And he doesn't recall meeting him while under Jack's control, great."Oh." Well, that could've gone better. "Um, then... as your little stepbrother, I guess I feel obligated to dislike him?"
"He does make it easy sometimes," one of the older kids in the club admitted. The atmosphere lightened considerably as a chuckle passed its way around.
Danny surrounded by all those freshman girls, Cookie getting attention from the girls and a happy pup. Anaïs and Shisa curled up on Cookie's back, we need a drawing of this now! Jordain telling Danny stories of her native Pittsburgh, soon having a crowd of listeners including Avsel and an RA girl who looks like a panda. Ratel versus Groundpounder seems he isn't that nice.
Ratel in the ring.
Bwahaha, sorry, the thought of her thinking those words is funny to me. Aww, concerned about Wilder and knowing he is sticking near Ms. Barnes so she can take him down in a hurry if needed.Oh goody-goody gumdrops.
Hope no one teases Wilder and sets him off.'Hey, boyfriend!" she yelled, her pointer finger aimed unerringly at Wilder. "This one's for you!" She didn't have time to appreciate his reaction; her opponent had just entered the ring.
Ratel is fast and those PK claws of her are brutal.
Huh, thought he was stuck as some form of living earth and stone at first. She seems to have the edge, able to dig through his earth suit, but he causes it to grow another pair of arms to hold her. And doesn't like being called by his real name, serious issue there. PK claws from the feet and kicks free, nice. And Ratel wins, no way you want to risk her going further with those claws. And what she says to Wilder, poor boy is stuck with Ratel it seems.The real Claude Rousse, as she well knew, was barely five feet tall and curled up in the chest and abdomen of the earth suit his power built for him. Arms, legs, or even the head could be severed with impunity.
Poor Wilder.Daniel Fontenot thought he knew what fear was, had thought the aftermath of his first Rager incident -- so bloody and yet so justified -- would remain the scariest memory of his life. He was wrong.
He could feel his ears morphing into something more animalistic, just so they could droop in anxiety as he whimpered.
Oh boy, finding out Ratel finds him cute in human form too, fate seems to like taunting Wilder. Bwahaha, Morgana wants Tanya to pull her around on the lake to water ski.Ms. Barnes had a hand on her trusty baseball bat as she spoke. "I would advise against running; she'd only find you eventually, and here you have witnesses."
Darn, hard to remember the name of her not-a-demon girlfriend. Nice Robert Frost quote.""Something like that. An appointment I have to keep," Morgana said cryptically. Then she gave Ms Barnes a half smile. "For I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep..."
Jimmy is up against Humorless, oh boy. D'oh! Jimmy just had to make that bad joke. A 5 or 6 Exemplar for Humorless, eep. PK shell up and Humorless hits hard coming out, almost taking out the PK shell in a couple of blows. Avoiding kicks Jimmy goes out of bounds, Humorless is pissed. Testing a technique he worked on with Sensei, this should be interesting. Whoa, sent the PK shell around Humorless, nice trick.
Hitting Humorless and not hurting him, Humorless slowed by the field around him and fighting against it. And Jimmy charges Humorless and knocks Humorless down, releasing the PK field from Humorless. 3rd round basically the same and crowd booing Jimmy, oh brother. And 4th round, too drain to pull the same trick again and got knocked out by Humorless, ouch. A healer taking care of him and a lecture, yet he still wishes to break the tie. Same trick and this time too tired to put up his own PK shell, about to get clobbered and he yields, smart move.
Talk to your friends.He'd learned a couple of important things in that fight and the last thing he wanted to do was talk about it with anyone.
Macarthur Price with the ODS crew, Lucky Lad calling Jimmy a Beta, idiot. At least Mac is smart enough to know none of them could take Humorless. High Gear still plotting, and they see Cally with the Amazons thinking it is trouble. I want to see the ODS and Amazons end up getting each other expelled at this rate.
Catherine Brooks aka Zapper, a wave and kiss towards Bailey as she enters the ring, hope no one figures out who that was for unless they are out in the open already. Franklin Post aka Hardnose, so that is the guy who looks like a rhino. A debate over music, heh. Energized speedster and a dozen punches to the chest in less than a second, dang. She can't hurt him and he can't hit her, so they have an idea of their own for the match. A rap battle between Cajun hip-hop and Chicago rap, interesting.
Saumer, was curious who the Twain guy with parabolic bunny ears was. And he can duplicate music, nice. Bwahaha, and he messes with each of them. Nice set of rules too and even got a laugh from some of the teachers with a comment. Ouch, my sides, those lyrics of Catherine's are too funny, especially that last bit. Nice verbiage by Franklin. Nice rhymes from them both, I would give it to Franklin myself. Seeing Catherine concede on good terms with Franklin, nice to see a friendly rivalry.
Darn it, Myra, no one likes a teacher who rewards them with more work. And teasing from Marcus to poor Wilder, Ratel better make this up to him somehow."I do believe," she said to her little brother and his friend, "that Mr. Post has been holding out on me. The boy has the soul of a warrior poet. I think I might have to move up the class unit on rhyme, meter and verse to... next week."
Jordain cheering like that for Franklin and the way she is biting her lower lip, the girl has the hots for him. Strawberry-iced ring donut, Franklin has good taste in donuts. And ouch, Jordain's kisses can cause chemical burns, she definitely needs a guy with a tough skin to date. Monica taking over the spot Jordain just vacated.
Figures they like each other and just too shy to approach the other until now. All those girls, Danny is going to be busy getting guys and girls together. Cute seeing Cookie taking a nap with Sisha on his shoulders."S'what friends are for," he replied. "And anyhoo, Franklin told me he liked her earlier this week. Wasn't sure what to do 'bout it till just now."
Now Megaton is glad his part in the event is over.
If his ego were any more inflated he would float into the atmosphere. Noting where the 'usual suspects' are seated, his thoughts on the Seeds are as backward and uninformed as some of the original Cape Squad from G1.The student organizers should've been begging him to keep at the announcements, and he'd relished the thought of politely turning them down, as his dignity had suffered enough so far, but no one had bothered. Instead they'd drafted that rabbit-eared twerp from Twain to cover the entire rest of the tournament and let him go without a second word.
Chillout and Cherry Bomb, Star Sentry, Celerity, yet when he spots Vic amongst them he freaks out and even insists on having a word with Star Sentry when she says Vic is her stepbrother, sheer arrogance and assuming things without all the facts. And Gwen tries to explain to him the meeting with Jack wasn't what it looked like, but Megatwit won't listen.
Okay, he is starting to sound like the asshats that made up the Imp Revenge Squad members."It's never what it looks like, is it? That's what they all claim, the thugs and punks and lowlifes. It's all relative this and subjectively that, until they've got our brains on the runaround. I know what I saw, Gwen, and I want him out of here, pronto."
And he bashes someone for their appearance, I want to see Megaton taken down several notches."You've had a stressful day?" he shot back. "What do you think I'm doing, huh? Keeping this joke of an event together when we all know it's a waste of time, bread and circuses to keep the student body happy, and then getting myself kicked to the curb? By some frosh from the weird cottage who's got frickin' bunny ears?"
Now he seems to think he knows what is best for others and is threatening an underclassman, proving himself a thug.He'd warned her just that morning about choosing her friends, but it seemed the lesson had not taken.
As a lieutenant in the FSHA, it was his duty to protect others, even from themselves. Brushing away Gwen's hand, he stormed over to the smirking little punk. His palm prickled as motes of metal formed in his hand, arranging themselves into a crude but usable sword, its tip pointed at the punk's chest. "Get out," he ordered.
Vic is going to suffocate him with the water, after he badmouthed him and attacked him with a sword I don't think he is overreacting, the bully needs a lesson in humility. Only Tanya showing up calmed Vic and got him to release the water and leave with Tanya.
From what Cherry Bomb says here it sounds like all the problems the Cape Squad had last year are due to Megaton's attitude."Man," Chillout spoke up from the sidelines, "if you just turned off a new recruit, SturmMeister's gonna have words with you again."
"But I..."
"Misread a situation, made assumptions, started a verbal attack, reacted badly to the response, and then physically threatened a freshman," Cherry Bomb said, ticking each item off on her fingers. "Really, Megaton, didn't you learn anything from last year?"
Great, huge ego and thin skin, always a bad mix.Little punk had shown up on his turf, disrespecting him, assaulting him, and apparently had hurt his own sister, Derek's girl. There was no way that he as Megaton, son of the west coast hero Gigaton, was going to let that slide. Sooner than later, the two of them would settle this.
Val's comment about what happened between Vic and Megaton, calling them bull monkeys, but Cally isn't convinced. She realizes she said bad things to him and needs to apologize, but Val is manipulating her again, trying to get Cally and Neff to go with her to make a report to security, acting like the concerned friend once more. Wonder what the alarm was that called Neff away, why is her dancer's grace absent though? Great, the signal to Kammie suggest she is going to follow Neff, I hope things turn around in the next part for our heroes.
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I wasn't really feeling the raps in the rap battle (more due to lack of audio than anything), but I really enjoyed the fact that they resorted to a rap battle at all. That was great.
People like these are very considerate; they go out of their way to show off how full of themselves they are so that nobody has to waste time actually interacting with them.Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 4) wrote: Instead of blankets, they'd brought in actual furniture and rugs, turning their little square of turf into a lounge.
I like this line.Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 4) wrote: Much as she loved Brita, that girl had issues, back issues, and hardbound collections of classic issues.
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Ah, Vic, your brother is gone... you have a sister. Gwen, do have some compassion on your brother, he isn't rejecting you, just isn't happy with the change...
ODS duds get partly smashed, but not nearly hard enough. Poor Fra, you really stuck your foot in it dude. What you need to do, which you seem in capable of doing is buckling down on learning English and picking up a few friends who aren't out to hit on your sister. Otherwise you may be among those who fail to survive your freshman year.
Jamie is still stalking Tia, wish someone would plug that bint with about ten extra holes, make at least two of them vertical between her eyes, and two over her heart with exit holes in the back... Yeah she ought to be used as a live target on the rifle range...!
Val, you dirty bitch, you ought to be hung out to dry... Maybe even placed naked in a set of stocks in the quad for a week. That goes the same for the rest of the Amazons. Being a 'victim' does not justify what you are doing which is essentially attacking those who are weaker than yourself. Also using the powers that be the way you do is plain nasty. Here's hoping someone discovers Val in their mind and ties her in a pretzel!
Lots of other stuff going on, but that probably covers the main points. Though really someone needs to get Gwen and Vic in a room and act as a referee while they talk to each other... Make them both listen, and yes both talk about what they feel about the situation!
Darn at times like these having Louis missing from Hawthorn just shows how much he did to keep the peace on campus, and to make sure that people didn't violate the psi code of ethics.
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Dreamer wrote: Competitions like this are sanctioned by the school now instead of in arenas with teachers as the refs, doesn't sound good.
FSHA tryouts have been mentioned before, and without a reference to what exactly they were or who refereed. The fights that we've seen booked in Arena 77 were grudge/feud matches matches which needed a referee.
a) Maybe we're just seeing the competition because the PoV characters are trying out.
b) Maybe the FSHA has lost the trust of the student body and teachers with regard to who tried out and how they performed, to the point that they will hold open trials and the rules will be openly stated or the club will be losing privileges or chartered status.
c) In Gen1 Year 1, the FSHA seem to have gotten much of their status from their combat simulator performance instead of public engagement. (Who are the campus Peacekeepers we first meet? Not them.) They may need the PR from putting on a show like this to get the attention of the people they want to attract.
d) All of the Above.
One has to keep in mind that as idealistic as they are, by 2011 Stronghold and Mega-Girl are out. By 2015, the people they will have recruited are gone.
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