×

Notice

The forum is in read only mode.
× Float your latest theory on who is going to be this school year's big bad, piece together plot points to unravel one of the big mysteries, or guess what's coming up next in your favorite stories.

Anything is fair game... just don't complain when someone with more Whateley-verse savvy shoots your theory out of the sky.

Posting rules: Any registered member can create threads or post to existing ones.

Question Dorms of our Lives!!!

7 years 11 months ago #1 by Yolandria
  • Yolandria
  • Yolandria's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 595

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Looks like the newest soap opera has just hit the airwaves!

    Comments down below!

    Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
    7 years 11 months ago #2 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


    Dorms of Our Lives comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    7 years 11 months ago #3 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Oh my gawd.

    What delicious teen drama you two have cooked up!

    You get a stalker! And you get a stalker! Everyone gets a stalker!

    There's just so much to unpack. Erica love drama, Calliope love drama, both evidently lying on their applications...Calliope not as helpless as she comes off in the other segments, and a temper paired with it. Lots of little lies from this pair.

    Vic remembered Sterling! Makes us question how many Tanya appearances at meals and between classes have been...just Tanya. :ohmy:

    I know we've seen some of them before here and there, but I loved the menagerie of new side characters, that first felt like they came in a flood of just name after name, but the more prominent ones filled out (bonus pun for Essemmelle fitting!) over the course of this story to become good additions. I've always liked the supporting cast of Gen 2, because it feels very natural the way that Mutant Mayhem Machine branches out into other social circles, drifts in and out of their little group, and breaks up into smaller groups when moving the stories forward.

    I thought it would be Greta that would be the angriest about Eisenmädel title, but Kirsten is way, way creepier. The Euro League kids are way too aware of how obsessed she is with Erica's grandmother. I wonder if some of that will be defused from creepy stalker to clingy fangirl trying to meet Erica's grandmother, once she knows why Erica is the only one allowed to have it.

    I don't want to dig too deeply into the love drama, triangle, square, dodecahedron whatever in this post, but let's just say for now that you two had me hanging on every scene, the two girls noticing each other's reactions when the perspectives switched, with Calliope being more attuned to Erica's denials, despite being more socially awkward compared to Erica's (enforced?) openness to finding someone.

    Still leaves a question hanging, since Calliope has already sworn a vendetta. What dorm is Jamie Howe in?
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #4 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • ^ lol at the stalkers summation!

    I need a refresher on Erica's sexuality. I forget if Cally has a chance or not.

    ... I am sorta disturbed by how Jacques marries a girl whose first name matches his sister's.

    Still haven't gotten Cally's origin... Getting a GenderBender while her twin didn't. External forces at work, or just gene fluke??
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Malady.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #5 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Malady wrote: I need a refresher on Erica's sexuality. I forget if Cally has a chance or not.

    Cally has absolutely no chance with Erica, and should be asking Laura to send some girls her way, though she's already met Bewitched (Nina/Noah plus Glee), so she's making some inroads there already.

    The serum made Erica super straight. She lost all interest in women immediately, shown in the scene where she saw Green Cross' poster in the base and knew that she should have felt something, but didn't, same considering the time she spent with Penny and the other girls. She found herself admiring men shortly thereafter.

    It's revealed here that Penny and she even tested it, and nope. No attraction to girls whatsoever.
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Katssun.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #6 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by mhalpern.
    7 years 11 months ago #7 by NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1053

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 26 Jul 1991
  • mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"


    Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.

    ... . . -.- / .--- ..- ... - .. -.-. . .-.-.- / .-.. --- ...- . / -- . .-. -.-. -.-- .-.-.- / .-- .- .-.. -.- / .... ..- -- -... .-.. -.-- / .-- .. - .... / -.-- --- ..- .-. / --. --- -.. .-.-.-
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #8 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • One small thing, which I may be wrong about anyway: Assay uses the "eh?" verbal tic at times, but it was mentioned that she is from the Maritimes. If memory serves (going waaaay back to the fan mail page for the first several issues of Alpha Flight), that's mainly a thing with people in Manitoba and Alberta. I recall that John Byrne specifically mentioning that, because some of the fans were wondering why, out of all his major characters, only Wolverine and Puck seemed to use it (and only infrequently at that). He did mention that it was common where he grew up, so he could at least say that it was authentic rather than just a stereotype created by SCTV.

    I had remembered that when I was thinking up my micro scene for Raul Tenant as a boy , and specifically considered adding it (since I had him living near Winnipeg most of the year, which would be the right area as I understand it), but it really was such a short scene that it just didn't come up. Also, I got the impression that it was sort of a lower-class, tough guy sort of thing, mainly (sort of along the lines of the old Brooklyn 'youse'), at least from Byrne's comments, and I had Raul's father being a politician who had just been elected to Parliament; I figured they had money, and he'd probably gone to private schools where proper diction would have been drilled into him.

    Of course, she could have picked it up from someone who was originally from that area, though that would be like picking up a Texas accent from a neighbor despite living in Seattle. Is Hannah the sort to do it it on purpose, just to poke fun at Americans who expect it? Or am I just wrong about it being a regional thing?

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 11 months ago #9 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • NeoMagus wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"


    Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.


    Oops point stands

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    7 years 11 months ago #10 by Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon's Avatar


  • Posts: 1998

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Schol-R-LEA wrote: One small thing, which I may be wrong about anyway: Assay uses the "eh?" verbal tic at times, but it was mentioned that she is from the Maritimes. If memory serves (going waaaay back to the fan mail page for the first several issues of Alpha Flight), that's mainly a thing with people in Manitoba and Alberta. I recall that John Byrne specifically mentioning that, because some of the fans were wondering why, out of all his major characters, only Wolverine and Puck seemed to use it (and only infrequently at that). He did mention that it was common where he grew up, so he could at least say that it was authentic rather than just a stereotype created by SCTV.

    I had remembered that when I was thinking up my micro scene for Raul Tenant as a boy , and specifically considered adding it (since I had him living near Winnipeg most of the year, which would be the right area as I understand it), but it really was such a short scene that it just didn't come up. Also, I got the impression that it was sort of a lower-class, tough guy sort of thing, mainly (sort of along the lines of the old Brooklyn 'youse'), at least from Byrne's comments, and I had Raul's father being a politician who had just been elected to Parliament; I figured they had money, and he'd probably gone to private schools where proper diction would have been drilled into him.

    Of course, she could have picked it up from someone who was originally from that area, though that would be like picking up a Texas accent from a neighbor despite living in Seattle. Is Hannah the sort to do it it on purpose, just to poke fun at Americans who expect it? Or am I just wrong about it being a regional thing?


    I've heard it in Toronto.
    My (Canadian) wife insists they do it in the Maritimes, but then the Maritimes are a sort of standing joke to Torontonians...

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #11 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Ah, OK, I may be wrong then. Also, now that I look, Ladybird said 'Atlantic Provinces', which also covers Newfoundland and Labrador as well as the Maritimes (Nova Scotia, New Brunswick, and Prince Edwards Island), though her surname and description seem to be pointing to Nova Scotia so far (to an almost stereotypical degree).

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #12 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • NeoMagus wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"


    Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.

    My guess is that Kirsten is just going to stalk and challenge her for who deserves the name more, while digging through the fake backstory Erica's family has created, and that dynamic shifts when she eventually learns Erica is the descendant.

    She's a crazy obsessed fangirl, the German authorities even forced a codename on her, but we don't know if she's a sadist like confirmed with Greta. She struck me more as a German version of Mega-Girl, who acts like Wondercute about a specific hero, then pushed another order of magnitude. Earnest, but dangerously obsessive, mostly to herself.

    Meanwhile, Stahlfaust is annoyed by it, because she obviously wanted it too at some point. But Kirsten's information gets spread out over time.

    When that information eventually lets Stahlfaust learn that Erica used to be Eric (because she and Cally aren't covered by Horton's Poe spelling, or at least presumably more than a slip of the tongue), Stahlfaust will then proceed to try and kill Erica over corrupting the title/codename.

    This assumes she hasn't already been expelled over her feud with Morgana.
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Katssun.
    7 years 11 months ago #13 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Katssun wrote:

    NeoMagus wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"


    Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.

    My guess is that Kirsten is just going to stalk and challenge her for who deserves the name more, while digging through the fake backstory Erica's family has created, and that dynamic shifts when she eventually learns Erica is the descendant.

    She's a crazy obsessed fangirl, the German authorities even forced a codename on her, but we don't know if she's a sadist like confirmed with Greta. She struck me more as a German version of Mega-Girl, who acts like Wondercute about a specific hero, then pushed another order of magnitude. Earnest, but dangerously obsessive, mostly to herself.

    Meanwhile, Stahlfaust is annoyed by it, because she obviously wanted it too at some point. But Kirsten's information gets spread out over time.

    When that information eventually lets Stahlfaust learn that Erica used to be Eric (because she and Cally aren't covered by Horton's Poe spelling, or at least presumably more than a slip of the tongue), Stahlfaust will then proceed to try and kill Erica over corrupting the title/codename.

    This assumes she hasn't already been expelled over her feud with Morgana.


    I like that theory except all Horton's magic on Poe students does is keep the subject of Poe being the LGBT cottage from coming up as a conversation tangent, you can't accidentally reveal the secret and I am sure it doesn't survive less than friendly forms of interrogation,

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    7 years 11 months ago #14 by NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1053

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 26 Jul 1991
  • Katssun wrote:

    NeoMagus wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: Prediction Kirsten Bischofsheim "Stahfaust" isn't going to make certain connections related to Erica and threaten "whomever gave her the codename Eisenmädel" and therefore get hit with the "threatening another student's family"


    Just so you know, Kirsten Bischofsheim and "Stahlfaust" are NOT the same student.

    My guess is that Kirsten is just going to stalk and challenge her for who deserves the name more, while digging through the fake backstory Erica's family has created, and that dynamic shifts when she eventually learns Erica is the descendant.

    She's a crazy obsessed fangirl, the German authorities even forced a codename on her, but we don't know if she's a sadist like confirmed with Greta. She struck me more as a German version of Mega-Girl, who acts like Wondercute about a specific hero, then pushed another order of magnitude. Earnest, but dangerously obsessive, mostly to herself.

    Meanwhile, Stahlfaust is annoyed by it, because she obviously wanted it too at some point. But Kirsten's information gets spread out over time.

    When that information eventually lets Stahlfaust learn that Erica used to be Eric (because she and Cally aren't covered by Horton's Poe spelling, or at least presumably more than a slip of the tongue), Stahlfaust will then proceed to try and kill Erica over corrupting the title/codename.

    This assumes she hasn't already been expelled over her feud with Morgana.


    Curious, Katssun, just where are you reading that Stahlfaust is at all interested in the Eisenmadel codename?

    ... . . -.- / .--- ..- ... - .. -.-. . .-.-.- / .-.. --- ...- . / -- . .-. -.-. -.-- .-.-.- / .-- .- .-.. -.- / .... ..- -- -... .-.. -.-- / .-- .. - .... / -.-- --- ..- .-. / --. --- -.. .-.-.-
    7 years 11 months ago #15 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Isn't it the idea that many a German mutant girl applies for the name Eisenmadel codename and gets denied? "Stahlfaust" implies that she went for the next best thing after not being able to get it.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #16 by Angeldude
    • Angeldude
    • Angeldude's Avatar


  • Posts: 255

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Canadian here: I live on the west coast and, while I can't speak for others, I myself I've used "eh" purely to play up the stereotype because it's funny.

    I wasn't able to post my thoughts earlier but...

    what's my dad doing in this story‽

    A little background: My dad's name is Claudio, same as one of Cally's relatives. That said, he's only half Italian; my grandmother is herself German, so it's kind of cool how half my family heritage is represented here. Now if only we had a Scandinavian student or 2. (specifically Sweden and Finland.)

    I'm very thankful that people don't ask about it much, because it's complicated; all my grandparents are from different countries. Funny how I have a completely Italian name though, and speak 0 Italian, or any of my grandparents' languages.

    I wonder if I would be eligible for the Euro-promotion League? Or the Commonwealth club? (because Canada, eh!) Or both!

    Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
    All ideas free to use. You can probably make better use of them than me.
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Angeldude.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #17 by Jarjaross
    • Jarjaross
    • Jarjaross's Avatar


  • Posts: 455

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Anyone else getting a glamour vibe from Fra?

    Erica hasn't reacted similarly to anyone else and appears rather fixated.

    Probably just me.

    Edit: as another canadian hailing from the west coast I can confirm that the concious use of 'eh' is mainly for playing to stereotypes. That being said a good description I was given of the unconcious usage (that has been given to me) is "if an American would say 'huh' at the end of a sentence a Canadian would say 'eh.'"

    My dreams take me to far off lands and times of distant past and future. They tell what has been done, what will happen and who I am. They show me things beyond the machinations of any man. Tell me, what are dreams to you?
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Jarjaross.
    7 years 11 months ago #18 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?
    7 years 11 months ago #19 by Jarjaross
    • Jarjaross
    • Jarjaross's Avatar


  • Posts: 455

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Malady wrote: Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?


    I want to see what would happen if she read Erica. Non-mutant with no powers other than faux-exemplar. Or Chou, Chou would be interesting. Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.

    If she does this in story I missed it.

    My dreams take me to far off lands and times of distant past and future. They tell what has been done, what will happen and who I am. They show me things beyond the machinations of any man. Tell me, what are dreams to you?
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #20 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • While we can't say anything about power gems or enchanted objects yet, it should be kept in mind that Erica isn't technically a mutant, so... she can probably sense at least some other types of Empowered humans.

    Whether it is only applicable to Augmented (e.g., ones who have been deliberately biologically altered in some way, such as through genetic engineering, or gee, a devise built by a pissed-off girlfriend - hey, Tia, wanna step over here for a moment?) or if she can sense baseline mages and Ki masters, Imbued, Enhanced (i.e., Cyborgs and human-centered Nano-Swarms - probably not, though Hive might be willing to help test part of that), Schimmelhorn engineers (as opposed to those altered by them... like, say, Erica), the odd Batson Factor, those subject to an Exaltation (a good one to test if the opportunity arises, as it might answer some questions about the relationship between Vril/Ki/Prana/Orgone and Essence - maybe), Dynahosts, Possessed, or any of the other Empowered types, or for that matter Fae (well, most modern Fae are Fae-mutants anyway, so...), Werefolk and other Courts era creatures, Artificers (uh, if she can tell that they are different from mutants, that's... a problem), Genii Locorem such as The Grove, Spirit Manifestations (like the Calibans, though presumably only when actually affecting the physical realm), Haunting Manifestations (Jimmy T. has mentioned their being some poltergeisten around campus, at least at that time), Undead, Dragons, empowered extraterrestrials (hi Mr West!), Ascended (I'm looking at you, Sun, and the Eight Taoist Immortals too), Mythos beings, etc., (damn, that's a long list, and I probably missed a few) are questions that are hard to answer.

    If she has any sense at all, she'd better start asking them before someone blindsides her about them...

    Oh, well, if she doesn't, maybe someone in powers testing will.

    You know, before it becomes plot-relevant.

    Yeah, I don't buy that either. No way it will get figured out before the fan shits the hit. (Wait, did I say that right? Anyway, Really Really Long List.)

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #21 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Jarjaross wrote:

    Malady wrote: Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?


    I want to see what would happen if she read Erica. Non-mutant with no powers other than faux-exemplar. Or Chou, Chou would be interesting. Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.

    If she does this in story I missed it.


    Actually, it was one of the first things she did in the story, though I can see why it wasn't clear on a quick read, because it came at the end of her introducing herself. I had to double back to pick it up myself, because the next few paragraphs weren't clear since I missed it.

    Dorms of Our Lives wrote: "Hi, I'm Hannah Sammish!" the brunette said suddenly, taking Erica's hand and pumping it vigorously. "Me and Nana here are rooming on the other end of the floor, but there's no one else over there right now but Josephine — that's our RA, yanno, Paint Oracle over there? — so we're just hanging out with the cool kids, eh? So what do you do? Oh, don't tell me just yet." Before Erica could get a word in edgewise, the girl draped her free hand dramatically over her eyes and started humming tunelessly. "Hmmm.... Exemplar, some sort of PK, but, um... huh, that feels odd." Brown eyes opened to stare at Erica quisically. "There's something odd about your powers. I've met lots of bricks with a bit of PK on top, but your flavor's slightly off."


    It is interesting not only because she could tell Eisenmadel's powers, but also that something was different, but she couldn't say how - meaning she probably hadn't tried reading a non-mutant before.

    As I said earlier, that's going to definitely have an impact on things, especially if she ends up taking any Ranges courses.

    Also, I noticed something I think some of My Fellow 'Merkins might have missed, but I have a feeling its an intentional bit of misdirection, so spoilers:
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 11 months ago #22 by Mister D
    • Mister D
    • Mister D's Avatar


  • Posts: 832

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • When Kristen finds out that Erica got the Eisenmadel codename, as it was a legacy from her grandmother, would Kristen go full fangirl/stalker on Erica?

    "I will help you be worthy of your codename!" :lol:


    Measure Twice
    7 years 11 months ago #23 by Mister D
    • Mister D
    • Mister D's Avatar


  • Posts: 832

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wouldn't Contact High's actions be the equivalent of roofying someone, so shouldn't it have been reported to security?

    And wouldn't the House parents be keeping an eye on him about this?


    Measure Twice
    7 years 11 months ago #24 by Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon's Avatar


  • Posts: 1998

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Schol-R-LEA wrote:

    Jarjaross wrote:

    Malady wrote: Hmm... The Power Reader girl, so, it's confirmed it only works on mutants? No reading power stones or anything else?


    I want to see what would happen if she read Erica. Non-mutant with no powers other than faux-exemplar. Or Chou, Chou would be interesting. Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.

    If she does this in story I missed it.


    Actually, it was one of the first things she did in the story, though I can see why it wasn't clear on a quick read, because it came at the end of her introducing herself. I had to double back to pick it up myself, because the next few paragraphs weren't clear since I missed it.

    Dorms of Our Lives wrote: "Hi, I'm Hannah Sammish!" the brunette said suddenly, taking Erica's hand and pumping it vigorously. "Me and Nana here are rooming on the other end of the floor, but there's no one else over there right now but Josephine — that's our RA, yanno, Paint Oracle over there? — so we're just hanging out with the cool kids, eh? So what do you do? Oh, don't tell me just yet." Before Erica could get a word in edgewise, the girl draped her free hand dramatically over her eyes and started humming tunelessly. "Hmmm.... Exemplar, some sort of PK, but, um... huh, that feels odd." Brown eyes opened to stare at Erica quisically. "There's something odd about your powers. I've met lots of bricks with a bit of PK on top, but your flavor's slightly off."


    It is interesting not only because she could tell Eisenmadel's powers, but also that something was different, but she couldn't say how - meaning she probably hadn't tried reading a non-mutant before.

    As I said earlier, that's going to definitely have an impact on things, especially if she ends up taking any Ranges courses.

    Also, I noticed something I think some of My Fellow 'Merkins might have missed, but I have a feeling its an intentional bit of misdirection, so spoilers:
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]


    It could have been Souflle without thinking about it.
    I didn't even realise you guys didn't call them ladybirds.
    Mind, for such pretty little bugs they are actually miniature carniverous tanks...:)

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #25 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • I also wonder if anyone noticed
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]
    and whether that's significant or a red herring. Especially in light of her home country's propensities for certain manifestations.

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 11 months ago #26 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • Schol-R-LEA wrote: I also wonder if anyone noticed

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]
    and whether that's significant or a red herring. Especially in light of her home country's propensities for certain manifestations.

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    I believe the bindings that were causing the itching were whatever she was using to squish her boobs. The "bra" she later tries on is made of plastic and causes no reaction.

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 11 months ago #27 by Ametros
    • Ametros
    • Ametros's Avatar


  • Posts: 435

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Rather excellent to see more Calliope, after so long without - especially a more focused narrative this time around.

    That said, this story has left me with some concerns (personal, not critique):

    Firstly, Erica's inner turmoil. That has to be a rough thing to adapt to, especially now things are settling down for her at Whateley and she now has the time for introspection, apparently.

    Secondly, Essemmelle terrifies me. Or rather, her power does, combined with rather impulsive tendencies with little thought for the ramifications. She can give people supremely bad days, as it seemed to be for Multi-Task (who I'm inclined to not call a bad sort, judging by the aftermath of that hustle), and that has the potential for some serious repercussions.

    Thirdly, Macarthur Price - or rather "Idiot", as he's likely to be known as from now on, due to my previous concern. Aside from Essemmelle's "curse" on him, he's just a sleazy jerk, albeit currently not as bad as Contact High, as demonstrated. I feel bad for Calliope's future, having to deal with him more.

    I'm loving all the G2 work thus far. Please continue as you are. :cheer:

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
    7 years 11 months ago #28 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Jarjaross wrote: Anyone else getting a glamour vibe from Fra?

    Erica hasn't reacted similarly to anyone else and appears rather fixated.

    Probably just me.

    I thought of that too, but actually I think that it's more likely that Erica is the source of the effect. I've seen things that claim that people can subconsciously identify people who would be good partners genetically. If such a thing is true (and possibly even if it isn't), I'd expect that Erica's package of evolutionary enhancement would strengthen those instincts. That would also explain why her change caused a full 180 on the attraction meter.

    Like Ametros, Essemmelle's power scares the bejeebers out of me for it's potential for misuse. I also have questions about it. Does it work better with adjectives or with nouns (eg labeling someone as "Mighty" vs. "Warrior")? How complex can the concepts that she uses be? (Would "Entrepreneur/Entrepreneurial" be possible?) Is the bearer of the jinx affected by it as well, or are any mental effects on them purely spillover from the collective regard of the community? Is Kareela affected by her own jinxes? Finally, what is Kareela's main power, the one that is always on but she finds uncomfortable?

    I feel like there are a lot of entertaining shenanigans that could happen with Kareela's power, but most of them have the potential to rapidly grow out of hand in horrible ways.


    The Mutant Mayhem Machine's supergroup (by which I mean 3M + friends (like Bunny and Riptide were to TK)) is rapidly growing into a small army.


    Somebody needs to call Sheim. They need their Bisch back. (To be fair, we haven't really seen any indication that she's anything other than a fixated overzealous cape wannabee. But the joke was too goodterrible to ignore)

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 11 months ago #29 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I agree about Essemmelle's power, but it is more the temperament of the person with it, and the chip on her shoulder.

    She seems very aware of how dangerous it can get, which is why she prevents its use with her TK when she starts getting annoyed and stressed. She's also smart enough to know exactly what words can be used to patch things up once things go too far and hit that critical mass point.

    Still, I also see the potential for good with it. A boy or a girl lacking confidence or getting left out? She can brand them as "friendly" or "good listener" and get others to engage them. Something as simple as that.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #30 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Finally, what is Kareela's main power, the one that is always on but she finds uncomfortable?


    One day that shall be revealed, and then the collective groan of understanding will shake the forums, hehe. Suffice to say that if you like short jokes as much as Kareela, then it will all make sense.

    Also, to answer a different question about our favorite midget: while she's definitely hobbit-sized, she isn't connected to the Sidhe in any way.
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Wasamon.
    7 years 11 months ago #31 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wasamon wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: Finally, what is Kareela's main power, the one that is always on but she finds uncomfortable?


    One day that shall be revealed, and then the collective groan of understanding will shake the forums, hehe. Suffice to say that if you like short jokes as much as Kareela, then it will all make sense.

    Also, to answer a different question about our favorite midget: while she's definitely hobbit-sized, she isn't connected to the Sidhe in any way.


    Calling it now, Size warper, makes her shorter and other parts bigger

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    7 years 11 months ago - 7 years 11 months ago #32 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wait, is power detector girl codenamed Assay?

    So, Erica's called an EX, but has none of the needed genes... If she doesn't actually have a BIT, then what is presumably-Assay detecting?

    I guess Syndromes, instead of Traits?
    Last Edit: 7 years 11 months ago by Malady.
    7 years 11 months ago #33 by Mister D
    • Mister D
    • Mister D's Avatar


  • Posts: 832

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Just had a thought about Eisenmadel.

    All she needs to say is "The original was my grandmother. I only inherited the name recently as a legacy. My family were also killed by the inherited enemies."

    This would put a stop to the questions, by anyone who thinks about things, and would leave enough hooks for the "interested enquirers" to trigger the traps that have been laid for them to find, when they start searching.

    You think that Opa and Oma aren't that paranoid?

    There's a reason that they survived for so long.... :evil:


    Measure Twice
    7 years 11 months ago #34 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • Katssun wrote: I agree about Essemmelle's power, but it is more the temperament of the person with it, and the chip on her shoulder.

    She seems very aware of how dangerous it can get, which is why she prevents its use with her TK when she starts getting annoyed and stressed. She's also smart enough to know exactly what words can be used to patch things up once things go too far and hit that critical mass point.

    Still, I also see the potential for good with it. A boy or a girl lacking confidence or getting left out? She can brand them as "friendly" or "good listener" and get others to engage them. Something as simple as that.


    Because using Psychic powers on someone in a "beneficial" way without their permission is a good thing. Forcing someone to do something they don't want to do is not a good thing, what if said person has an anxiety driven rager trigger and the anxiety is driven by having lots of strangers gathering around?

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 11 months ago #35 by Otherself
    • Otherself
    • Otherself's Avatar


  • Posts: 99

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • The highs and lows of the life at Whateley, the seeds of strife and chaos being sown, the emotional and social drama, a whole bunch of assholes, and at the end no indication about whether this was the whole story or just the first chapter (the ending is reasonable for both the cases). Not bad at all.

    The part that surprised me is the vendicative side of Cally, she might end up getting nicknamed 'V'.
    7 years 11 months ago #36 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Mister D wrote: You think that Opa and Oma aren't that paranoid?


    "It's not paranoia if they really are out to get you"

    Besides, Opa and Oma are just reasonably cautious. It's Uncle Adolf who's paranoid. :twisted:

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 10 months ago - 7 years 10 months ago #37 by Esar
    • Esar
    • Esar's Avatar


  • Posts: 328

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Jarjaross wrote: Oooooh or whats her name with the shoggoth kitten familliar.


    Timeless ?

    On the matter at hand, it was interesting. I am glad that you have addressed the fact that Kareela's power is another form of bullying in a way, (I wonder how it would fit into the Whateley Canon of Psychic Ethics).

    We didn't know much about Calliope so it's nice to know more. Erica and Cally have an interesting relationship dynamic.

    Thank you both for this story.

    (and now I want another Tia story even more because I really want to see the scene about Jamie from her PoV ... )
    Last Edit: 7 years 10 months ago by Esar.
    7 years 10 months ago #38 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Timeless has a paranormal pet kitten, but I think Jarjaross was referring to Josie Gillman from "I looked in the Abyss and it Winked"

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 10 months ago - 7 years 10 months ago #39 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Actually, it sort of raises the question of whether James stayed on as a staff member after graduating, assuming nothing else changed with his frozen condition. I get the impression that he was at Whateley as much to hide out as anything else, and if so, he could take the same route Eldritch seems to have taken (though given that Eric had been a range instructor before his transformation, it made sense anyway for Caitlin to stay on).

    It is possible he didn't, as there are real-world conditions that leave a person stuck looking like they are around that age (though they tend not to live past their twenties in some of those cases), which are problematic but no insurmountable. Surely others with similar conditions such as Jade and Alyss seem to have left, though I am guessing that Alyss will be back to work with the researchers as a grad student either at WA or ARC at some point given her desire to help cure Deidrick's Syndrome. There have been some references to Generator going into business (the 'Jinntech' phones), and if she is still with Thuban, then she probably isn't having too hard a time of it in that regard - though we don't know just what has happened, so she may have cured her form lock.

    More digressions, sorry.

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 10 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 10 months ago #40 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Essemmelle could definitely commiserate with someone stuck in a permanent immature state.
    7 years 10 months ago #41 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • So, is Gouyasse the first Dricker we've seen in G2? He seems to have a reasonably mild case of it... or perhaps they've successfully developed treatments that alleviate the worst of the symptoms?

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 10 months ago #42 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • I think Jamie Howe (" Down the Rabbit Hole, Pt. 2 ") also has Diedrick's Syndrome, though that may not be her only problem.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    7 years 10 months ago #43 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • null0trooper wrote: I think Jamie Howe (" Down the Rabbit Hole, Pt. 2 ") also has Diedrick's Syndrome, though that may not be her only problem.


    Right. How did I forget about her?

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 10 months ago - 7 years 10 months ago #44 by Esar
    • Esar
    • Esar's Avatar


  • Posts: 328

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I swear we have seen someone else with a strange case of diedrick (and I think it was in Gen 2), they couldn't stop laughing because of their diedrick ?

    Or maybe it was just a dream.

    edit: Yep (The writing on the wall) :

    Giggles stared at Tia for a moment and began to giggle. But instead of just giving a quick giggle and being done with it, she continued giggling, growing more manic in the process. I took a step back and gave her a worried look.

    “Are you all right?” I asked Giggles, who was still giggling.

    “It’s her Diedricks,” Janine explained as she put her hand on Giggles’ arm and gave her a worried look.

    “Diedricks?” Tia blurted out, going pale and taking a step back.

    Janine nodded. “She goes into uncontrollable giggle fits…”

    Giggles nodded agreement, though she was still giggling and looking mortified at the same time. Tears were beginning to form in her eyes and she was starting to turn away from everyone. If I was giggling uncontrollably like that, I probably wouldn’t want everyone to stare at me either.

    Last Edit: 7 years 10 months ago by Esar.
    7 years 10 months ago #45 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • null0trooper wrote: I think Jamie Howe (" Down the Rabbit Hole, Pt. 2 ") also has Diedrick's Syndrome, though that may not be her only problem.


    That may be the mildest of her problems.

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 10 months ago #46 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • There's a fine line between active Diedrick's and simply being a narcissistic jackass. I'm still not sure which one Gouyasse is, but the fact that he's named himself (or rather, I named him) after a particular Belgian beer is probably not a good sign, eh?
    7 years 10 months ago #47 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • Wasamon wrote: There's a fine line between active Diedrick's and simply being a narcissistic jackass. I'm still not sure which one Gouyasse is, but the fact that he's named himself (or rather, I named him) after a particular Belgian beer is probably not a good sign, eh?


    Not sure about the pronunciation of Gouyasse, but most teenage American boys is going to tease the heck out of him, starting by calling him "Goo Ass" and working into homophobic slurs from there.

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 10 months ago #48 by NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1053

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 26 Jul 1991
  • Valentine wrote: Not sure about the pronunciation of Gouyasse, but most teenage American boys is going to tease the heck out of him, starting by calling him "Goo Ass" and working into homophobic slurs from there.


    And they would learn VERY quickly that Gouyasse is NOT a good person to mess with like that...

    ... . . -.- / .--- ..- ... - .. -.-. . .-.-.- / .-.. --- ...- . / -- . .-. -.-. -.-- .-.-.- / .-- .- .-.. -.- / .... ..- -- -... .-.. -.-- / .-- .. - .... / -.-- --- ..- .-. / --. --- -.. .-.-.-
    7 years 10 months ago #49 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • NeoMagus wrote:

    Valentine wrote: Not sure about the pronunciation of Gouyasse, but most teenage American boys is going to tease the heck out of him, starting by calling him "Goo Ass" and working into homophobic slurs from there.


    And they would learn VERY quickly that Gouyasse is NOT a good person to mess with like that...


    And when did that stop Bloodwolf or Buster or Aries or any of the "asshats?"

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 10 months ago #50 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Well those bullies do avoid the students that regularly beat them. So it will work, eventually, if you hit them hard enough.
    7 years 10 months ago - 7 years 10 months ago #51 by annachie
    • annachie
    • annachie's Avatar


  • Posts: 597

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Not sure if it's been brought up. Hell it might even be an east west thing and I'm on the other coast to Perth.

    But for here it's "Fecked if I know". Past tense. Or "Stuffed" if you're being polite.


    :)
    Last Edit: 7 years 10 months ago by annachie.
    7 years 10 months ago #52 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I've got to admit I kind of forgot that calliope existed, since she didn't do too much in Calimari. But in this story she has shined very nicely. I'm assuming she's a bit of a pacifist because her powers make her feel the pain inflicted on others, so it would take a pretty strong need for revenge to cut loose.

    Good characters, some very unique powers and a good school drama. I especially liked how Erica points out the girl at the dance was really hurting and didn't deserve to suffer like that. It shows her empathy that didn't get a chance to show in her other stories.
    7 years 10 months ago #53 by Phoenix Spiritus
    • Phoenix Spiritus
    • Phoenix Spiritus's Avatar


  • Posts: 2595

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 20 Jan 1976
  • "Fecked if I know"?

    I'm guessing Father Ted was incredibly popular over there.
    7 years 10 months ago #54 by annachie
    • annachie
    • annachie's Avatar


  • Posts: 597

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Well, I assume a mixture of cleaning it up slightly, and some atrocious accents in written form.
    7 years 10 months ago #55 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • @Wasamon and Souffle Girl: I enjoyed the hell out of this. Thanks.

    Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    Jarjaross wrote: Anyone else getting a glamour vibe from Fra?

    Erica hasn't reacted similarly to anyone else and appears rather fixated.

    Probably just me.

    I thought of that too, but actually I think that it's more likely that Erica is the source of the effect. I've seen things that claim that people can subconsciously identify people who would be good partners genetically. If such a thing is true (and possibly even if it isn't), I'd expect that Erica's package of evolutionary enhancement would strengthen those instincts. That would also explain why her change caused a full 180 on the attraction meter.

    It's probably just a crush. Those can be kind of sudden and arbitrary, especially the first ones. This probably is not Erica's first crush, of course, but it's her first crush on a boy, so in many ways it's like starting all over from the beginning. She's back in that confusing state of vague denial where she's just starting to notice that those people she's always considered at least a little yucky maybe aren't so yucky after all. F-Man looked particularly attractive to her at a moment when her guard was down, so she accidentally voiced her real feelings. She can still maintain her denial around other guys, but she can't successfully lie to herself about the F-Man anymore, because she knows what she said and that it was true. There isn't really anything special about him; it's only the fact that she had that slip of the tongue with him that makes him stick out. And since she's suppressing her feelings about men in general, it turns into a fixation on the F-man.

    Milena's got the right idea, I think.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #56 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Wasamon wrote: There's a fine line between active Diedrick's and simply being a narcissistic jackass. I'm still not sure which one Gouyasse is, but the fact that he's named himself (or rather, I named him) after a particular Belgian beer is probably not a good sign, eh?


    After the beer, hmmn? I know that the name means 'Goliath' in the Walloon dialect of French (a fact I ran across when I first looked up the beer a couple years ago, so I may be misremembering) so I assumed it referred to a size warping power. If he named himself for the beer, that could lead to some amusing things. For that matter, just the fact that he shares the name with a beer would do the trick, really.

    Ah, OK, I looked it up and apparently 'Gouyasse' is the local pronunciation of 'Goliath'. This is definitely going to make for some interesting things, depending on whether he spells it like the Biblical giant, or like the brewery's name. Since we've only seen it spoken, so if the spelling is different it could lead to some amusing confusion. OTOH, if he spells it like the brewery... oh, my.

    I am waiting to see where you take that, Wasamon.

    EDIT[: Oh, right, Gouyasse himself mentions Goliath, so that's probably what he has in mind; it was Fortinbras who quipped about the beer. I am guessing that the beer was what you had in mind yourself, though.

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 9 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 5 months ago #57 by Yolandria
    • Yolandria
    • Yolandria's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 595

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Part 2 is now live. Please comment in the sections below!

    Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #58 by Angeldude
    • Angeldude
    • Angeldude's Avatar


  • Posts: 255

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Looks like Maidenclaw has joined Whisper's club of mutants turning into clones of their RPG characters.

    Tether would also qualify if it was generalized to characters the character created.

    He's doing this thing like radar. Yanno? The sweeps, the bleeps, and the creeps?

    I suddenly want to see someone throw Jam in his face. Ideally raspberry.

    Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
    All ideas free to use. You can probably make better use of them than me.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Angeldude. Reason: Tether, Raspberry Jam
    7 years 5 months ago #59 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


    Dorms of Our Lives Part 2 comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #60 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • At this point I'm so hoping for reveals, like the fact Oma Abendritter is actually Eisenmädel the First, I think the shock could kill Kristen at this point, or at least provide a good spectacle. Or better yet, let the Wicked Bitch of the Great North's Attack Bitches* realize their precious prospectives candidates are changelings too, the strokes could potentially decimate their little group...

    More seriously, I do hope it comes out because I don't like one bit the idea the Attack Bitches could got their hooks on Calliope and Erica and begin whatever mind-raping they've got in store for their new 'recruits' so they become like them, or worst, decide to take revenge on the 'deceitful False-Mädchen' if they iscover the truth after Calliope get enrolled for instance, and I don't like the way Stahlfaust sees Pat. And seeing the humble pie force-fed to Kristen would be most sweet. And I'm genuinely curious about the moment all girls of Team Havoc Mutant Mayhem Machine will look at each other and say 'So... all of us are changelings?!'. There is narrating gold there.

    *WMG, but not so Wild Mass in my opinion, from my part. Back in G1, the Wicked Bitch of the Great North decided she wanted to invade Whateley and build up an army to do so, and she was betting on a .ten year timetable... Well, it will be ten years soon, and she could potentially advance her timetable a little now Carson and so many heavy-hitters from the staff are out. And an excellent move during an invasion is always subverting some people inside to your side... And the Attack Bitches won't be the first psycho-lesbians she twists around her little finger. Note that I think it will happen, not that it already happened (Although the already may be a possibility). I can only wish to the Attack Bitches they get the Don Assholo/Stupido treatment.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Hardric. Reason: Blooper on G2 Team Name.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #61 by Kaitha39
    • Kaitha39
    • Kaitha39's Avatar


  • Posts: 172

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 19 Jan 1988
  • Wait... who's Team Havoc? I thought the gen-2 PoV's were the Mutant Mayhem Machine?

    Also, I'm interested that the Brit from the Beret Mafia wears the cross of St. George rather than the Union Jack. Did the Scottish independence vote go the other way in the WU?
    ("England", technically, does not exist as a country. It's a nation. The country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But let's not go there, it can get confusing.)

    And I'm getting a bit worried about Calliope's chances with the Amazons. Her wish for acceptance, if granted by them, might do bad things for her stance of pacifism. But she is prime material for their recruitment mindset.... The gender-bending not-withstanding that is.

    Any stories or Characters I put out are available to write around. Feel free to borrow them!
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Kaitha39. Reason: 3M does not stand for "Mutant Menace Machine" though Kane Hall might have agreed with me.
    7 years 5 months ago #62 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • And then... Pat Barnes. She'd read her girls' reports and immediately checked the school records. A boy turned female by mutation, she could almost accept as an unfortunate twist of fate. Almost. A person such as Pat... no. There were no words for such treachery.

    As opposed to Morgana, who was also a boy turned into a girl by her mutation? Careful, StahlFaust . If you continue to have contradictory opinions like this I might start thinking that you're a crazy person, despite the reasonable and well-thought out positions you take.

    I do find the implication that joining the Amazons is brain-melting to be interesting. I wonder if the effect is conscious, or a power that StahlFaust (or one of the others) is unaware of? If it is conscious, my guess is that it isn't actually StahlFaust causing it - that it's one of the other girls, controlling the group from behind the scenes.


    Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.

    And Donut and Cookie are hilarious. I look forward to seeing more of them.

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #63 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: I do find the implication that joining the Amazons is brain-melting to be interesting. I wonder if the effect is conscious, or a power that StahlFaust (or one of the others) is unaware of? If it is conscious, my guess is that it isn't actually StahlFaust causing it - that it's one of the other girls, controlling the group from behind the scenes.


    Put my money on totally conscious, and done by Eurydice. The way Kammie made 'second date' jokes about that one and her powers gives me the creeps.

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.


    Who is he, and can we have lins to these fanfics? Right now, I was thinking he's a FtM changeling, but for some reason I'm also thinking he could be a more 'classical' FtM transgender. Both of the answers would explain why Attack Bitch Alpha want him dead.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Hardric.
    7 years 5 months ago #64 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.


    Even though it's good to see Chessa and her brother, Pat was also one of my favorites.

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: And Donut and Cookie are hilarious. I look forward to seeing more of them.


    Cookie's name was just the right mix of appalling and adorable.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    7 years 5 months ago #65 by MM2ss
    • MM2ss
    • MM2ss's Avatar


  • Posts: 291

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Kaitha39 wrote: Also, I'm interested that the Brit from the Beret Mafia wears the cross of St. George rather than the Union Jack. Did the Scottish independence vote go the other way in the WU?
    ("England", technically, does not exist as a country. It's a nation. The country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But let's not go there, it can get confusing.)


    What's so confusing about it?

    State: 1, Montevideo Theory> a permanent population, a defined territory, a government, and a capacity to enter into relations with other States.

    State: 2, Constituitive Theory a country exist if it is recognized as sovereign by other countries. Thus, if other countries recognize a country as independent, it is, even if the country does not have control of its territory or a permanent population.

    Nation: a group of people who share the same culture, language, institutions, religion, and history—usually a group of people larger than a tribe or community. (the Kurds for example, they are a nation, but do not have a state)

    Country: Typically synonymous with State. A self-governing political entity.

    Nation-State: a nation possessing an independent state of their own.

    When I was in Scotland people were quick to identify as English, Scottish, Irish, etc. Much like Southerners in the USA often identify themselves as Southerners or by their state instead of merely identifying as "Americans" even when abroad. Several of us redneck types were quick to educate the English on the fact that we were not yanks/yankees and that we despised those loathsome critters from up North. The Scots understood our position on the matter rather well.

    The Saint George pin makes perfect sense to me, just like a Scot wearing a Saint Andrews Cross or a Thistle. Or perhaps an Irishman wearing a Shamrock. I would not be all that surprised if in some parts of Ireland some folks still lean more toward the provincial flags or maybe even the old Harp flag. After all, many Irishmen identify themselves by province or county affiliation.
    7 years 5 months ago #66 by Mister D
    • Mister D
    • Mister D's Avatar


  • Posts: 832

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • MM2ss wrote:

    Kaitha39 wrote: Also, I'm interested that the Brit from the Beret Mafia wears the cross of St. George rather than the Union Jack. Did the Scottish independence vote go the other way in the WU?
    ("England", technically, does not exist as a country. It's a nation. The country is the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. But let's not go there, it can get confusing.)


    What's so confusing about it?

    State: 1, Montevideo Theory> a permanent population, a defined territory, a government, and a capacity to enter into relations with other States.

    State: 2, Constituitive Theory a country exist if it is recognized as sovereign by other countries. Thus, if other countries recognize a country as independent, it is, even if the country does not have control of its territory or a permanent population.

    Nation: a group of people who share the same culture, language, institutions, religion, and history—usually a group of people larger than a tribe or community. (the Kurds for example, they are a nation, but do not have a state)

    Country: Typically synonymous with State. A self-governing political entity.

    Nation-State: a nation possessing an independent state of their own.

    When I was in Scotland people were quick to identify as English, Scottish, Irish, etc. Much like Southerners in the USA often identify themselves as Southerners or by their state instead of merely identifying as "Americans" even when abroad. Several of us redneck types were quick to educate the English on the fact that we were not yanks/yankees and that we despised those loathsome critters from up North. The Scots understood our position on the matter rather well.

    The Saint George pin makes perfect sense to me, just like a Scot wearing a Saint Andrews Cross or a Thistle. Or perhaps an Irishman wearing a Shamrock. I would not be all that surprised if in some parts of Ireland some folks still lean more toward the provincial flags or maybe even the old Harp flag. After all, many Irishmen identify themselves by province or county affiliation.


    And you also get people from older regions within the UK who identify as Cornish, Gwynnedd, Pictish, Celtoi, for some small examples.

    Some of the St.George's Cross-wearers are more into their English nationalism, heading into the National Front-territory, ie. UK flavour of right-wing fascism.

    This is usually expressed as prejudice against anyone who is not White, Anglo-Saxon, Protestant, as well as a large dash of aggression against people from other parts of the British Empire claiming their rights, as was originally laid out ion the treaty's that led to them becoming part of the Empire.

    This is also part of the de-humanisation process that is used against people that you are stealing energy from. "They deserve it because they are uncivilised/they are barbarians/they have no souls/etc."

    You get this in almost all cultures/empires that used some form of slavery.

    I can't find it with a quick google, but i'll keep looking, but there was an excellent article about this topic, that looked at why Rome didn't get the industrial revolution, due to the way that they approached slavery.

    It doesn't get much mention in the history books, but the British Empire nearly went the same way...


    Measure Twice
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #67 by MM2ss
    • MM2ss
    • MM2ss's Avatar


  • Posts: 291

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Yeah, there are always the fringe elements that like to hijack all the good stuff and try to mess it up so that the rest of us can't use it for more socially acceptable purposes.

    I am not all that up to speed on what is going on in the UK at the present (other than the Brexit thing, but even there I don't know much in terms of details). In the US a similar situation arises with the various "Confederate flags". The racists, KKK, and other fringe type groups have made it almost a form of social suicide to display any of them (or at least the better known flags). Yet many folks did or still do fly them for other reasons that are much more honorable and acceptable. Still, they end up getting painted with the broad brush thanks to the nuts. I have gotten to the point that I only fly three flags on a regular basis now (US, Navy and Alabama). I still fly others at certain times (Scottish, UK, Imperial German, the old French flag (pre tri-colour), those of some of the old German states (Prussia and Württemberg) and even a few of the less well known Confederate flags.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by MM2ss.
    7 years 5 months ago #68 by Rose Bunny
    • Rose Bunny
    • Rose Bunny's Avatar


  • Posts: 1956

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I'm just waiting for someone to put them in their place. "Stop the man-hating, some of us like the penis, you wouldn't be here without the penis!"

    That's what I tell my militant friends, after all...

    High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan


    7 years 5 months ago #69 by MM2ss
    • MM2ss
    • MM2ss's Avatar


  • Posts: 291

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • LoL. Nice one.

    I think the best I ever heard was, "If vibrators could mow grass I wouldn't need you" (not directed at me, thankfully, as that is pretty damn cold-hearted)
    7 years 5 months ago #70 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • So... many... new... characters... I don't know even where to begin with the wikifying... F1! F1!

    ahem. Anyway, regarding flags... I really don't have much use for the things. No, not even during the World Cup. Being raised during a military dictatorship that took the whole "national symbols" thing way too seriously sorta fueled my cynicism. But still, I'm curious: which old French flag? There's a number of possible ones, but AFAIK none of them was actually the "French flag." -- there were naval ensigns, standards of the royal family and such...

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #71 by konzill
    • konzill
    • konzill's Avatar


  • Posts: 500

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Hardric wrote: At this point I'm so hoping for reveals, like the fact Oma Abendritter is actually Eisenmädel the First,


    That was already revealed. It was straight out stated in her previous stories that Oma was the original Eisenmadel and was giving her the name as a legacy.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by konzill.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #72 by Kaitha39
    • Kaitha39
    • Kaitha39's Avatar


  • Posts: 172

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 19 Jan 1988
  • Regarding flags: Mister D essentially got it in one.

    The cross of St. George is only really used by two groups in the UK, or at least the towns of Ipswich, Chelmsford, Southampton, Canterbury, and Grimsby, which are the places I've personally lived:
    1) Sports venues where the nations are playing each other, so the need to distinguish between English, Welsh, Scottish and (Northern) Irish is actually apparent.
    2) By racist groups doing protest marches against multiculturalism.

    There is also a bit of an issue, which rankles many of the older English people, that there are certain things that the Scottish, Welsh, and Irish are permitted to do, but the English aren't really seen as able to do. Prime example, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland all have their own political assemblies, but Westminster (the one in England) is for all of the UK, and there isn't one for England itself. It leads many of the older generations to ask "Are we one country or not?"

    Needless to say, the point is that most English people would wear a Union Jack to represent their country, not the Cross.

    Also? My original meaning of "It gets confusing" is defining the terms of: Britain, Great Britain, (they're different) and the United Kingdom.
    (Well, I mean, CGP Grey did a video,
    but meh)

    @ Konzill,
    I think Hardric was meaning they couldn't wait for in-story reveals to other characters. We know who Oma is, but Kirstin doesn't. Hardric wants to see what happens when she finds out.

    Any stories or Characters I put out are available to write around. Feel free to borrow them!
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Kaitha39.
    7 years 5 months ago #73 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • konzill wrote:

    Hardric wrote: At this point I'm so hoping for reveals, like the fact Oma Abendritter is actually Eisenmädel the First,


    That was already revealed. It was straight out stated in her previous stories that Oma was the original Eisenmadel and was giving her the name as a legacy.


    I was thinking about Kirsten discovering the truth.

    'Hahahaha, this descendant from Baron Dämmerung will give me the Eisenmädel title, Generic Minion."

    "Euh, Kirsten. I have two bad news. First, Abendritter the son pretty much gave his father's legacy the middle finger and was fighting Themaagenten too."

    "I don't care about that. Only the Eisenmädel title is important."

    "That's the other one. I'm pretty sure the grandmother is Eisenmädel the first. Here, check this"

    "..."

    "Euh, Doyle, Wahnsinnig just had a stroke, she needs help."
    7 years 5 months ago #74 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • On a bit different part of the story, just whom is Mr. Bergamot collecting all the testing data for?

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 5 months ago #75 by Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus
    • Arcanist Lupus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1820

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Hardric wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: I do find the implication that joining the Amazons is brain-melting to be interesting. I wonder if the effect is conscious, or a power that StahlFaust (or one of the others) is unaware of? If it is conscious, my guess is that it isn't actually StahlFaust causing it - that it's one of the other girls, controlling the group from behind the scenes.


    Put my money on totally conscious, and done by Eurydice. The way Kammie made 'second date' jokes about that one and her powers gives me the creeps.

    What do we know about Kammie's powers again? I can't remember. But yeah, that scene was way creepy.

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yay! We get to see more of Pat! I was very excited when we learned that Pat had made it into canon - he was one of my favorites when he was still a fanfic character.


    Who is he, and can we have lins to these fanfics? Right now, I was thinking he's a FtM changeling, but for some reason I'm also thinking he could be a more 'classical' FtM transgender. Both of the answers would explain why Attack Bitch Alpha want him dead.

    Pat is from Wasamon's fic "Keeping Cool". The original was lost in the Great Site Migration, but I believe that a few people still have copies around. I forget who, though.
    As for Pat's exact situation...
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Valentine wrote: On a bit different part of the story, just whom is Mr. Bergamot collecting all the testing data for?

    The way that scene was worded sounded very ominous... but Bergamot shows up in the next scene doing power testing for Nick, so it would not be unreasonable to assume that he is collecting the information for the school itself. That doesn't mean that he actually is, though.

    I'm actually far more interested in a different part of the scene.

    Bells were warning of the impending second period, and only one soul was left in the classroom. Hannah Sammish, also sometimes maybe occasionally known as Assay when she wanted to sound professional, was busy tidying up. She didn't need to go anywhere.

    "Read, Miss Assay?" Mr. Bergamot asked. He pulled up a chair and set out a binder on the table.

    So is it Bergamot or Hannah that is missing a soul?

    "Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
    7 years 5 months ago #76 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: What do we know about Kammie's powers again? I can't remember. But yeah, that scene was way creepy.


    Nothing in the former G2 stories I could check, but the way she talks, she clearly has some psi factor, and empathy from Calliope was the only reason she didn't used it full force here, 'second dates' be damned (Duck, I need a story where these bitches bit the dust hard. Their fighting ring discovered and them being forced of demolishing it and patching up the 'secret entrance' to it themselves?).

    Pat is from Wasamon's fic "Keeping Cool". The original was lost in the Great Site Migration, but I believe that a few people still have copies around. I forget who, though.
    As for Pat's exact situation...

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]


    A shame for the story. As for the spoiler... Duck, the Attack Bitches really need the Don Assholo/Stupido treatment before it's too late.
    7 years 5 months ago #77 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • There's a lot of good gags, puns, and jokes in this segment, but this was the one that really stuck with me:

    Morgana and her two friends, the tricolore of the heresy

    As much as I dislike Stahlfaust, she really called it in one there. She's just wrong about the why. A pseudo-demon, more or less a witch, and as far as we know, a test subject.

    I loved that Erica's first date will be with someone actually nice, and not a subject of her imposed heterosexual lust. It was nice seeing Donut outside of the remedial class he has with Taka, spreading the love of baked goods.

    I'm definitely not sure what to make of Calliope and the Amazons. She's looking for a sympathetic ear, especially since she's a closeted lesbian, but she couldn't possibly have found a worse mentor in those girls. Part 1 revealed that Calliope has a serious temper about injustices, and if the Amazons start worming their way in it could be very bad for M3's overall peace. Much worse than Jimmy and Tanya finding out about Bianca's background. They're both pretty cautious about joining, especially after hearing all the rumors, but Calliope's insecurities about her sexuality are something that I expect Eurydice to fully exploit.

    Argh! If she's only talk to her friends or teachers! They'd move her to Poe, and she'd find all the support she needed and more!

    The miscommunication between Kirsten and Erica is just too funny. Kirsten's power set is pretty scary to be honest, and her codename makes perfect sense now. Still not sure how the steamroller came into play though. I'm still imagining the scenario where she finds out the truth, and harasses Erica endlessly until she takes her home to meet Erica's grandmother, with her entire collection of graphic novels. That, or Kirsten and Erica work together to smash Green Cross, and Kirsten finally gets her dream of being a hero. She's likable, she's just getting carried away about her favorite topic. Like Beret Mafia warned Erica about her.

    Is the last line of Assay's POV meant to be ominous? It sounded ominous!

    I'm a little confused about Alvery's appearance. In the previous mentions of her stalking Taka, she has medium brown hair. Or is this not the same one from IDTWIKA? Or is her hair turning aflame the reason the other students don't mess with her or Venus Inc.?
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #78 by konzill
    • konzill
    • konzill's Avatar


  • Posts: 500

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I lost it when I got to the D&D club member named Gazebo. And the question I most want answered is who will have to face the Gazebo alone come Combat finals time?


    https://static1.squarespace.com/static/55397e91e4b0061c5889b3f0/t/5949479829687fe3e66fc569/1497974716016/
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by konzill.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #79 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • ... Haven't finished reading the story, but, Keeping Cool is in my archives. See my sig. ... Do I need to reword it again, if people still don't get it? ... Or are y'all just not seeing it??

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]


    TLW Latest Wands spoilers [ Click to expand ]


    Micro Scenes Spoilers [ Click to expand ]
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Malady.
    7 years 5 months ago #80 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • konzill wrote: I lost it when I got to the D&D club member named Gazebo. And the question I most want answered is who will have to face the Gazebo alone come Combat finals time?


    https://static1.squarespace.com/static/55397e91e4b0061c5889b3f0/t/5949479829687fe3e66fc569/1497974716016/


    Come on it's obviously going to be Zephyr.

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    7 years 5 months ago #81 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Y'know, I really should have read up more on St. George's Cross before I included that detail... The direction I was coming from was that many (or even most) of the UK kids currently at Whateley in this Gen seem to be associated more with the Commonwealth club over the Berets, while Gregory's much more culturally connected to his friends and cousins on the continent (as seen in the flashback from "Meanwhile at Castle Groenwald"). I even went with putting his coat of arms on the flag board instead of the Union Jack to underline the disagreement a bit more. Probably should have stuck that on him as well instead of the St. George... oh well, live and learn.

    Malady: MageOhki was actually the one to come up with Gazebo; I just got to use him first. No real connection to the story you're thinking of, but thanks for remembering ;)

    SirLee: let me know if there are any specific characters you'd like help with in the wiki and I'll see what I can reasonably get away with mentioning.
    7 years 5 months ago #82 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • What I would like to see is Gazebo in a Combat Final... against a shrubbery.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #83 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • How about Flower, the flower-manifestor?

    ... What is Gazebo's power, exactly??

    ... Wait... Might the Amazons be actively suppressing other lesbians, so that they're only only ones frosh lezies can turn to?

    So, Security ''knows'' that it's that girl who was hiding under a holo, as Stahlfaust?? ... Although, it's not an offense to use holos, I think? But it does warrant investigation?
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Malady.
    7 years 5 months ago #84 by Rose Bunny
    • Rose Bunny
    • Rose Bunny's Avatar


  • Posts: 1956

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sir Lee wrote: What I would like to see is Gazebo in a Combat Final... against a shrubbery.

    in which they must chop down the biggest tree in the forest with a herring?

    High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan


    7 years 5 months ago #85 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Rose Bunny wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: What I would like to see is Gazebo in a Combat Final
    ... against a shrubbery.

    in which they must chop down the biggest tree in the forest with a herring?

    I'm sure The Grove will just love watching that.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    7 years 5 months ago #86 by MM2ss
    • MM2ss
    • MM2ss's Avatar


  • Posts: 291

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sir Lee wrote: So... many... new... characters... I don't know even where to begin with the wikifying... F1! F1!

    ahem. Anyway, regarding flags... I really don't have much use for the things. No, not even during the World Cup. Being raised during a military dictatorship that took the whole "national symbols" thing way too seriously sorta fueled my cynicism. But still, I'm curious: which old French flag? There's a number of possible ones, but AFAIK none of them was actually the "French flag." -- there were naval ensigns, standards of the royal family and such...


    The second flag of the Kingdom of France, blue with three gold fleur-de-lis. Or to get all technical..."Azure three fleur-de-lis Or".
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #87 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Malady wrote: So, Security ''knows'' that it's that girl who was hiding under a holo, as Stahlfaust??

    Yes. Morgana's story has the adults' POV on the situation, if you want to refresh on that.

    Dorms of our Lives (part 2) wrote: Erica von Abendritter and Fiorella Persico, Eisenmädel and Calliope, as fine a pair of Amazon candidates as they might find this year, already burned by contact with the toxic phallic threat.

    I find it hilarious how even the man-haters are obsessed with penis.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Kettlekorn.
    7 years 5 months ago #88 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...
    7 years 5 months ago #89 by Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon's Avatar


  • Posts: 1998

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...


    That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...:evil: :evil:

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    7 years 5 months ago #90 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • Two quotes come to mind...

    The Bard wrote: "The Lady doth protest too much, methinks"

    and

    Irina Dunn (not Gloria Steinen, as is usually thought) wrote: "A woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle."


    The point being that, if the Amazons simply didn't feel sexually attracted to males, penises wouldn't be important to them -- in fact, they would be pretty much irrelevant. This level of obsessions suggests some hidden level of emotion -- either a repressed attraction/fascination (possible if some of their members have been brainwashed into "the Sisterhood", as has been suggested) or some form of trauma (rape survivors?).

    Consider, for a mirrored view along the sexual preference range, this:

    Bob Schooley wrote: "Racists never imagine what it's like to be like the person they hate, homophobes imagine it in graphic detail for hour upon hour."

    often used as support to the tongue-in cheek Haggard's Law :

    The likelihood of a person harboring secret desires to engage in sexual and/or romantic activities with members of the same sex is directly proportional to the frequency and volume of said person's vocalized objections to homosexuality.


    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    7 years 5 months ago #91 by elrodw
    • elrodw
    • elrodw's Avatar


  • Posts: 3263

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Astrodragon wrote:

    Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...


    That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...:evil: :evil:


    Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!

    Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.

    Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #92 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Astrodragon wrote:

    Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...


    That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce... :evil:


    Does it have anything to do with being barbed with justice ?

    elrodw wrote: Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!


    I hope you're talking about whatever Colossus of the X-Men has going on, because articulated joints and rivets just aren't my cup of tea.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by null0trooper.
    7 years 5 months ago #93 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sir Lee wrote: if some of their members have been brainwashed into "the Sisterhood", as has been suggested

    I got those vibes too, but I also wouldn't be surprised if they were simply playing along in order to fit into the group.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #94 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Astrodragon wrote:

    Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...


    That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...:evil: :evil:


    Is she going to order the thing Strega bought Envy, or is she going to order a Prickles 2.0?

    elrodw wrote: Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!

    Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.

    I always thought it was Morgana being catty. Stall Force. Like stall speed.
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Katssun.
    7 years 5 months ago #95 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sir Lee wrote: Two quotes come to mind...

    The Bard wrote: "The Lady doth protest too much, methinks"

    and

    Irina Dunn (not Gloria Steinen, as is usually thought) wrote: "A woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle."


    The point being that, if the Amazons simply didn't feel sexually attracted to males, penises wouldn't be important to them -- in fact, they would be pretty much irrelevant. This level of obsessions suggests some hidden level of emotion -- either a repressed attraction/fascination (possible if some of their members have been brainwashed into "the Sisterhood", as has been suggested) or some form of trauma (rape survivors?).

    Consider, for a mirrored view along the sexual preference range, this:

    Bob Schooley wrote: "Racists never imagine what it's like to be like the person they hate, homophobes imagine it in graphic detail for hour upon hour."

    often used as support to the tongue-in cheek Haggard's Law :

    The likelihood of a person harboring secret desires to engage in sexual and/or romantic activities with members of the same sex is directly proportional to the frequency and volume of said person's vocalized objections to homosexuality.


    Great quotes, and nice insight. Also consider the possibility that StahlFaust might be using metonymy here, i.e. taking her idea of the male establishment / patriarchy and using its most visibly useless (to her) appendage as a symbol of the whole stupidly useless endeavor. Also, the fact that phallocracy has actually made it into dictionaries might suggest that she's also drawing on older militant memes here as well.
    7 years 5 months ago #96 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • elrodw wrote:

    Astrodragon wrote:

    Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...


    That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...:evil: :evil:


    Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!

    Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.


    OK, we need at least one scene where Morgana misnames Brita to her face, and then gets facially introduced to the steel fist.
    7 years 5 months ago #97 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • Wasamon wrote: Also consider the possibility that StahlFaust might be using metonymy here, i.e. taking her idea of the male establishment / patriarchy and using its most visibly useless (to her) appendage as a symbol of the whole stupidly useless endeavor. Also, the fact that phallocracy has actually made it into dictionaries might suggest that she's also drawing on older militant memes here as well.

    I normally would assume metonymy, yes. But in this case, the particular usage seemed a bit too... emotionally charged. In my personal experience, when I see militant feminists using this particular figure of speech, it's more in an attempt to dehumanize the male gender, in a dismissive way -- we are not people, we are "things". You don't fear "things" or treat them as enemy, you discard them. That's not the vibe I got from the Amazons -- they treat the Penis as the Enemy (capitals added by me). Thus my other comments.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    7 years 5 months ago #98 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • elrodw wrote:

    Astrodragon wrote:

    Wasamon wrote: well, obsession can be born of love or hate, and if there's one things those Amazons hate...


    That does give me a truly evil idea for Morgana's revenge on StahlForce...:evil: :evil:


    Stahl FAUST! Not StahlForce, StahlFAUST! As in Steel fist!

    Let's all say it together ... Stahl FAUST.


    Stale Fist?

    Oh, Stale Farce!

    ... Tinfoil Farce?

    (If the Attack Bitches ever get dissolved, the nicknames are ready.)
    7 years 5 months ago - 7 years 5 months ago #99 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Hardric wrote: Stale Fist?


    You do not want to know the mental image that brings to mind. Eew.

    "Seriously, Brita, get some hand sanitizer or something. I'm not gonna even shake hands until you clean up."

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 7 years 5 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    7 years 5 months ago #100 by Ametros
    • Ametros
    • Ametros's Avatar


  • Posts: 435

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Quite a few false assumptions between Kirstin and Erica. Kirstin's, however, is more a case of incomplete. Erica's though, could really get out of hand. Not only is she subject to her own inner turmoil and certainly some variant of Imposter Syndrome, but she incorrectly thinks her cover is blown, so I easily foresee her actually blowing her secret as a result.

    And unless I'm very much mistaken... I'm of the mind that Dreamer is correct with that tune being the opening for Cowboy Bebop. I thought the very same thing myself.

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
    7 years 5 months ago #101 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Ametros wrote: And unless I'm very much mistaken... I'm of the mind that Dreamer is correct with that tune being the opening for Cowboy Bebop. I thought the very same thing myself.

    That's also my assumption. But I'm biased, since Tank! is one of my favorite songs, second only to Guns & Roses by Paradise Lunch.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    7 years 5 months ago #102 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Kieron's piece was going to be "Tank" from Cowboy Bebop, but when I listened to it (several times in a row) I realized that the opening section is almost completely brass horns, and the saxophone section doesn't start until nearly the bridge. So instead, he's doing another bebop piece that strongly reminds Calliope of "Tank."

    Also, completely forgot to mention that Kieron's code name is in fact Bebop.
    7 years 5 months ago #103 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I figured he was just playing that bit with a sax anyway. It would sound a little different, but it would still work, and it would be a way to demonstrate flexibility in his try-out.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    7 years 5 months ago #104 by Mister D
    • Mister D
    • Mister D's Avatar


  • Posts: 832

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wasamon wrote: Y'know, I really should have read up more on St. George's Cross before I included that detail... The direction I was coming from was that many (or even most) of the UK kids currently at Whateley in this Gen seem to be associated more with the Commonwealth club over the Berets, while Gregory's much more culturally connected to his friends and cousins on the continent (as seen in the flashback from "Meanwhile at Castle Groenwald"). I even went with putting his coat of arms on the flag board instead of the Union Jack to underline the disagreement a bit more. Probably should have stuck that on him as well instead of the St. George... oh well, live and learn.


    Ish...

    The Union Jack was used by English nationalists ( and the UK's right-wing) right up until the Scottish, and the Welsh started getting their regional assembly's.

    That was when the English nationalists started to use the St.George's Cross, rather than the Union Jack.

    There was also a Nazi regiment known as the Legion of St.George, that consisted of people from the Britain who supported the Nazi's against the Soviets, in a similar way to the Vichy government in France.

    They were tried for treason after the fighting stopped.


    Measure Twice
    7 years 1 month ago - 7 years 1 month ago #105 by Souffle Girl
    • Souffle Girl
    • Souffle Girl's Avatar


  • Posts: 26

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Ok, I just read all these comments and I couldn't help but reply.
    First of all, it's nice to see how good a reception my character had and I thank you all for this. Life drew me away from this site over the past two years and my muse hasn't been kind to me so I don't know if you're going to see more stories with my name on them or not, time will tell. In the meantime Cally, Nina, Vicky and the others live on in Wasamon's work while I help him as a consultant of a sort.

    (Seriously, look at my baby girls all grown up and canon, awww so cute!)

    Anyway, I'll try and clear up what I can without giving you spoilers.

    First, a bit on how Cally was born. She came from my third Whateleyverse fanfic and the first one I wrote trying to stick as close to canon as possible. As someone might know, I'm MtF transgender, I didn't admit to it until I was in my twenties and I only recently completed my transition – in fact, me going through surgery was part of the reason I've been this busy these last two years, but I digress. The point is, while all our characters are us in some way, Cally is closer to the real me than any other. She was born from the question: what if something happened that caused me to accept I was T* when I was a teen?

    So yes, the first not-so-much-of-a-spoiler is that Cally is indeed a changeling. Boy Cally is a lot like me at her age, then I let her evolve spontaneously into something else. I think she'll end up as the kind of person I'd be if I was much more creative and much less sciency; academically speaking I'm much closer to her brother Claudio – I work in the field of biomedical research.

    Otherverse is correct in saying Cally is from Liguria. I'm from Genova (you Americans would say “Genoa”) and Calliope comes from there too. In her origin story I used real places as scenery, and someone who knows the city would spot them unless I did a much poorer job than I think. By the way, Otherverse, bello vedere un altro italiano qua! it's nice to see another Italian here!

    Going on to Cally's origin story. It was lost in the site crash, and I never put it back up because it was supposed to be adapted for canon quickly. It's been sitting in my hard drive for ages but it has some problems.

    Cally appeared originally in two fanfics, Due su Due and Summertime Blues. The former is her origin story proper and it's 99% ready for publishing IMHO. The problem is the latter: it was a crossover with Wasamon's Eisenmadel and it involved the events Cally, Vicky and Erica mention several times in Dorms of Our Lives. I think it's needed to explain how the three of them know each other, but it' unfortunately filled with stuff that simply can't get into canon. It's also very short, so my project was to drop it as an indipendent story and turn it into the ending of Due su Due, hence the delay in publishing the origin story itself. There's an origin story for Nina Blake too, I never started adapting it for canon so it's still available as a fanfic out there somewhere, in the wide wide web. Read it if you like but don't be disappointed if canon Nina turns out to be completely different later.

    Finally, a list of random facts and trivia about Cally that come to mind:

    1) I realized most of you wouldn't know the pronunciation for Cally's last name. Persico is an old word for “Persian”, so it's pronounced like that, with an accent on the “e”. Incidentally, in Italian, “persico” also means “perch”.

    2) I once had a kitten named after a muse. She died after only a dozen days from adopting her, because of a severe encephalithis. When I had to give Cally a codename I somehow thought about that kitten.

    3) No, Cally isn't named after the character from the book Middlesex. I found it extremely amusing when I found out there's a famous LGBTI book out there with a character named Calliope.

    4) The common theme for Cally's stories is music, so the three Persico siblings were named after famous Italian singers and songwriters from when their parents were young: Claudio Baglioni, Fiorella Mannoia, and you can choose between Francesco De Gregori and Francesco Guccini for the third – I won't tell ;)

    5) In keeping with the music/muse/bard theme, all of Cally's POV stories were originally supposed to be named after songs and have the songs lyrics somewhere in the story.

    6) Some people argued that Cally acts much more mature than her age, around sixteen or seventeen. It's been a flaw on my part, I admit it. Still, Cally should have been born in 2002. The concept of a high schooler having been born in the third millennium still breaks my mind every time, sorry!

    7) Cally was born ten minutes before Francesco. She technically is the older sibling.

    8 ) When I wrote the characters for these stories, I thought it would have been fun to model supporting characters after my friends. The only one of them who made it into canon is Victoria Stone, modeled after one of my best friends.

    8a) Apparently I never told her about Vicky. She found out about her yesterday and she was quite amused

    8b) I never read a DC comic in my entire life. Vicky was named like that just because I liked the sound of it.

    9) Diane Davies was the name of an old RPG character of mine. I played her in Vampires:the Masquerade, under the nickname “Red”. The other players never learned her birth name.

    From the magical kitchen of Souffles this is all for now. Kisses and love; and have fun.
    Last Edit: 7 years 1 month ago by Souffle Girl.
    6 years 9 months ago #106 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • Dorms of Our Lives Season 3 aka Part 3 is up. So read, enjoy, and please comment.

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #107 by Ahimsa
    • Ahimsa
    • Ahimsa's Avatar


  • Posts: 73

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • This story is the best one that I have read on here for a while. Well done :)

    Three things:
    1) Calliope's arc has really been special thus far.
    2) Cookie is underrated.
    3) Any story that includes "Everything is awesome" deserves at least 9/10.

    :)

    sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Ahimsa. Reason: Phrasing.
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #108 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Well the headmaster better pray Caitlin doesn't learn that he is indirectly but intentionally putting students in danger via Jamie Howe, or his life expectancy will shrink drastically

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by mhalpern.
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #109 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • @Ahisma you forgot to mention the electric vielle a roux. I pretty much squeed when I read that.

    I am very pleased to see several hurdy-gurdy players posting videos on YT lately, as they are quite amazing instruments. Seriously. In the right hands a wheel fiddle kicks ass, especially when paired with bagpipes. I hope you like a lot of reverb. For my own part, I am hoping that some day we'll see a either Patty Gurdy or Giulhem Desq in concert together with both 2Cellos and Celtica Pipes Rock. Though that might too much all at once...







    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    6 years 9 months ago #110 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • But that left the overeducated dolt sitting in the chair before him. "Yes, Mr. Bergamot?" he inquired wearily.


    Well, I laughed.

    Now I wonder when we'll meet Mr. Vetiver.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 9 months ago #111 by Ahimsa
    • Ahimsa
    • Ahimsa's Avatar


  • Posts: 73

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • @Schol-R-LEA - You give me too much credit; I did not even know what the electric vielle a roux was :D

    That being said, thank you for the videos - the music is amazing!

    I don't want to go too much O/T, but the sound does remind me a bit of the dudouk.


    sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
    6 years 9 months ago #112 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • I'll admit I recognized the description of a hurdy gurdy, because I'm weird that way. :-p

    Without spoiling too many of the reveals and hints, this is one of those story parts that calls for a second read to pick up on what I missed on the first read-through.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 9 months ago #113 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • Okay, this commentary is long. Due to this being the longest story entry I can recall ever, took me almost 9 and half hours to read and comment on. Very enjoyable read, couldn't stop until I finished it.

    SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

    Dorms of Our Lives Season 3 comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 9 months ago #114 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Its important to remember the real reason Kirsten hate Erica is her code name. Parents day will be interesting

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    6 years 9 months ago #115 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • I'm trying to recall, did we ever determine of Kenshin has a glamour?

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #116 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • ...So. That happened. Guess I'll start the review now.

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]


    Welp, that was certainly an emotional one. I hope we can see the next part soon, many things need resolution here, please. Including a stroke and a humiliation for Wahnsinnig, and Frak getting his a major part of his skeleton fractured.

    Also, important points...

    Persona fans here! Woohoo! If you want more lyrics, check the series' Wiki , although like I said for some strange reasons small differences can be seen. Also, G2 is happening during Fall 2016, meaning Persona 5 is out in Japan... If you write another story with songs, and especially ones lambasting thhe Attack Bitches... Yours is the most sacred duty of using Life Will Change ! Heck more songs in the stories look good anyways.

    Also... Any chance of a spin-off for Rachel 'Ratel' 'Kodiak 2.0, flavor Murphy'?
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Hardric.
    6 years 9 months ago #117 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Dreamer wrote: Cally able to practically taste the energy around Whateley Academy on the weekend, interesting.


    I've seen it done with empathy in other places, and it usually works. The brain needs to map those extra senses to something, and it's good to pick those things that call up memories similar to the input.

    Dreamer wrote:

    At the shoulder, the devisor's former guard dog stood almost four feet tall and about as broad, with legs that were short only in proportion to the rest of its body. One stubby tail wagged happily while two round heads with mashed in noses and Boston Terrier markings had huge grins. "Warf," they barked in stereo, tongues lolling.

    A Cerberus, now there is a dog no sane student will mess with.


    WA has an aptitude for enrolling students who aren't particularly sane.

    Dreamer wrote:

    At the moment, its only use seemed to be to serve as home to Mr. August's advanced music program and its corollary, the band known as the Unladen Swallows. She had yet to hear an explanation for that name that made sense.

    Okay, there has to be a story behind that band name.


    I wouldn't be surprised if their first outing involved banging two halves of a coconut together.

    Dreamer wrote:

    "Kay, 'kay," he said. "Um... folks moved us up to this small town in Idaho when I was little. More of a commune, actually. I didn't know the word till a few months ago, but it fits, I figger. The Revered... well, he didn't take kindly to, ah, our sort of people, so when my eyes turned pink, my mom and pop helped me get out quietly. They still live there." His smile had quickly turned upside down at that. Cookie padded over to nuzzle his ear.

    At least they got him out of there quietly, plus a friend of his mother's to stay with, so that is who Miz Debbie is.


    His mom knew her when she was little.

    I wouldn't put good odds on Daniel's parents having escaped punishment.

    Dreamer wrote:

    Officer Canterbury stepped in. "Rachel, unless you want to be in violation of Article 3, item 6 of the school dress code, to whit flagrant displays of wardrobe malfunction, you will go back to your dorm immediately and change into your next spare uniform.


    Janet Jackson Rules.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 9 months ago #118 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • If Kirsten is basically accusing Erica of being a Nazi, will she be mortified or enraged once she finds out that her idol is her grandmother? It really seems like she's actually a very nice person based on what everyone else is telling Erica about her, just not when it comes to this single topic and subject. I very much doubt she will become Erica's bosom friend and kindred spirit when she finally does find out, but I also got the impression from this segment that she's not likely to go Jamie Howe on Erica once she finally learns the truth. She might beforehand though...

    Mr. Bergamot seems like quite the threat to me. Even Hannah recognized that he is dangerously interested in Erica. Like he and a certain evil scientist currently in the Midwest could get along very, very well. Is he a Vanguard sympathizer that doesn't know they exist...yet? Mazarin seemed to indicate there was something specific in his file.

    Poor Cally though. To be outed by her brother being foolish and hanging out with jerks who want to exploit him. I have to appreciate Pete for figuring it out quickly, and knowing that those types are never anyone he should be spending time with.

    Not looking forward to the egotistical musical rivalry though! Cally forgot about it the moment she was given the first warning that she had encroached on a diva's feelings!

    If I had any constructive criticism to give, it was that I couldn't remember some of the details of the side characters. Was Neff a Poesie? I don't remember her being one, since she was at the mixer in the earlier parts. A refresher line might have been helpful for her and a few of Erica's new friends as well. Not all of them are quite as prominent as Essemmelle or Ham Sandwich.
    6 years 9 months ago #119 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Hardric wrote:

    "Um..." the man said. "Is this..." He checked his paper. "Doctor's Precious Badass Nihilistic Killer with–"

    "Just Cookie is fine," Daniel said, on top of pup's barks.

    ...What the fuck isn't this dog able to do?


    FIFY, HTH.

    Hardric wrote:

    The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.

    As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.


    I don't know if it holds true to the same extent for Italy, but some European school systems place a high priority on English language instruction.


    Hardric wrote:

    Bryon shook his head. "You're a chick. You wouldn't understand. Us guys gotta at least try and look tough and manly, but holding hands ain't either of those. What are other guys gonna think? What are girls gonna think if they see me holding hands with another guy?"

    You're shitting me? That's part of the poweer. And a awesome one, to boot. All RPG players of any kind knows it, nothing is better than a healer! A good one, at least.


    Not many classes are worse than playing a healer. Nearly every decision or move one makes is second-guessed by half the party. For example, one jerk was even obnoxious enough to tell me how I was going to level up my 6th-level cleric and how useful my channeling ability would be (for him): I talked it over with the GM then made it clear to the rest of the group that I was now double-classing to sorceror.

    That said, while there are some nutjobs who'd consider holding their hand while they are unconscious to be equivalent to rape, most people would be completely cool with it because medical emergencies should trump feelings.


    Hardric wrote: For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?


    Nope. Don't confuse the drinking age (e.g., there is no minimum drinking age in Belgium, France, or Italy) with the minimum age for purchase. For lower proof beverages , that is 16 for Austria, Belgium, Cyprus, Denmark, Germany, Gibraltar, Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Malta, Serbia and Switzerland.

    Unless they confused proof with %ABV, the authors are using a genetically altered strain of yeast for their "De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV" to weasel that much alcohol (double what you can get from champagne yeast) into a beverage without distillation. Perfectly acheivable in the WU. No one's going to mistake that for a porter or a doppelbock though.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #120 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • null0trooper wrote:

    Hardric wrote:

    The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.

    As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.


    I don't know if it holds true to the same extent for Italy, but some European school systems place a high priority on English language instruction.

    Hardric wrote: For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?


    Nope. Don't confuse the drinking age (e.g., there is no minimum drinking age in Belgium, France, or Italy) with the minimum age for purchase. For lower proof beverages , that is 16 for Austria, Belgium, Cyprus, Denmark, Germany, Gibraltar, Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Malta, Serbia and Switzerland.

    Unless they confused proof with %ABV, the authors are using a genetically altered strain of yeast for their "De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV" to weasel that much alcohol (double what you can get from champagne yeast) into a beverage without distillation. Perfectly acheivable in the WU. No one's going to mistake that for a porter or a doppelbock though.


    It's made worse three-fold actually. His sister is very fluent in English so he's losing to her, it shows that he can barely speak English, and it is also shown to be a remedial class for native speakers/readers.

    My first guess would have been freeze distillation, actually. It's quite common in craft beers seeking to achieve spirits-level concentration. Samuel Adams Utopias have been 24% ABV since 2002, and are higher more recently, nearly 30% in 2012, and that is without freeze distillation.
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Katssun.
    6 years 9 months ago #121 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wow, you guys are fast readers. Random responses:

    1) Electra's instrument was originally described as just "a violin mated to a car radio", but then three days later a Patty Hurdy video popped up on my Youtube feed and I suddenly had to go rewrite a few descriptive sections...

    2) Cookie's design incorporated a specific sort of empathy, with the intent of keeping its two heads in sync without direct neural connections. This had the side-effect of giving pup an extra sense to help understand all these humans.

    3) De Struisse Breweries of Belgium does in fact have a Black Damnation series of beers, and they are in fact incredibly hard, though null is right that it took a bit more than simple fermentation to get it that high. It was the first result when I googled "World's Strongest Beers" and it just happened to be Belgian, so...
    struise.com/bieren-beers/black-damnation-serie/

    3.5) Whateley's package screening for certain commodities has historically been pretty lax, for one reason (superior sneaky tech) or another (bribes). In Gouyausse's case, he's got an actual beer allowance for reasons that will probably be mentioned later on.

    4) The Machine's ice cream results were taken from a list of 100 Ice Cream Flavors from around the world, rolled with 2d10 to choose randomly for each character, just because.

    5) Life is not going to be kind to Cally from hereon out.

    6) Feel free to support your local author ;)
    www.amazon.co.jp/Princesses-Summer-Schoo...-ebook/dp/B01NBOFK96
    6 years 9 months ago #122 by ebony841
    • ebony841
    • ebony841's Avatar


  • Posts: 57

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Can somebody direct me to Calliope's fanfic? I could not find it anywhere.
    6 years 9 months ago #123 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • null0trooper wrote:

    Hardric wrote:

    The English Language Learners class had the dual embarrassment of focusing on his weakness while being openly designed for students who had issues with the language or its instruction. He felt he was being labeled a dunce just for sitting in the room.

    As every single person who began learning a foreign language. You're not an exception.


    I don't know if it holds true to the same extent for Italy, but some European school systems place a high priority on English language instruction.





    Hardric wrote: For fuck's sake, he's fourteen, and even in Europe, minimum age for drinking is supposed to be eighteen. How the fuck do they manage their hands on alcohol so easily? They're still fucking kids. Sixteen, i'd understand better, but fourteen, seriously?


    Nope. Don't confuse the drinking age (e.g., there is no minimum drinking age in Belgium, France, or Italy) with the minimum age for purchase. For lower proof beverages , that is 16 for Austria, Belgium, Cyprus, Denmark, Germany, Gibraltar, Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Malta, Serbia and Switzerland.

    Unless they confused proof with %ABV, the authors are using a genetically altered strain of yeast for their "De Struisse Brewery's Black Damnation IV" to weasel that much alcohol (double what you can get from champagne yeast) into a beverage without distillation. Perfectly acheivable in the WU. No one's going to mistake that for a porter or a doppelbock though.



    1) Oops, Italian system does begin to teach English in grade school, with an examen at the end of middle school...

    Let myself influenced by my French experience. Theoretically, we begin to study one foreign language in primary school, but the teaching actually gets serious in middle school (wonder how 'serious' the lessons are in primary Italian school), with two languages, one selected first year, and another in third year (we have middle school four years). I had chosen German as primary language, and English secondary... And we moved to another town at the moment of last year of middle school (same age as first year of high school in the States, so same age as Frak here), and the school I went after that only offered teaching In German and English as bilingual, as in the two from the start, and first day I had I English there, test on irregular verbs and their times, when we hadn't seen all of them back in my old school (yeah, problems there). You can bet I felt like an idiot for a while in English, and not really abetting Frak's whining here.

    2) Them getting the beer inside Whateley isn't the problem for me, getting through Security is unfortunately a sport back there. The problem is... Well, I could have jumped to conclusions while reading, with Frak trying to inflate himself in front of the losers rotting in the Pit, but it gave me the impression he knew enough about beer to have a vague idea of their qualiity, and 'know' the Italian beers aren't supposed to be worth much to have drunnk alcohol before... And while consumption of alcohol in Italy is indeed a private matter, and another blooper for me, he would be fourteen at the very best, and perhaps even less, to have drunk alcohol there, and that idea is frankly giving me the creeps, whatever you say about the minimum age...

    I dare think that parents and people aren't exactly warm an fuzzy at the idea of middle schoolers, who are still pretty much kids, drinking. Personal experience could taint this again, but back in middle school in France, where we have a mix of 18 to buy it and ''private discreetion'' about alcohol consumption too (and theoretically direct surveillance if under 16, and a crime if you gets a minor drunk), you didn't see the average student getting their hands on alcohol like this.

    Wasamon wrote: 4) The Machine's ice cream results were taken from a list of 100 Ice Cream Flavors from around the world, rolled with 2d10 to choose randomly for each character, just because.

    5) Life is not going to be kind to Cally from here on out.


    4) Put Passion-geranium in it, and my mother will try to get it.

    5) Figures... Please tell us than any future part won't end in total Bleak Pit for her. It's always disheartning at some levels to wait next part when characters are at the bottom, even when foreshadowing softens the blow... And tell us Frak will get proper retribution for how much of a fuck-up he is.
    6 years 9 months ago #124 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • This was great. I had a scary and stressful weekend, and this was just what I needed to cheer up again. So many great characters. The glimpses inside Cookie's heads were fun, and Rachel is a blast. My only complaint is that you've given me a craving for pastries.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 3 wrote: Silvery claws formed of feral dreams

    I love this description.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 3 wrote: But in this class and in his language lab sections, Kenshin felt he might actually be able to master the art of the word. Eventually. As with many things, it was easier thought than said.

    Nice phrasing.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 3 wrote: "Heck, you've had more datin' success this year than most of 'em. Figger I'll be askin' you for advice from now on."

    Smart man, this Mr. Foley. You're not going to find him living in a van down by the river.

    mhalpern wrote: Well the headmaster better pray Caitlin doesn't learn that he is indirectly but intentionally putting students in danger via Jamie Howe, or his life expectancy will shrink drastically

    That was Bergamot the Powers Theory teacher, not Headmaster Mazarin.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #125 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Hardric wrote:

    "Tut mir leid, aber mein Englisch is under aller Sau."

    She had to keep her expression carefully neutral there. "Did Herr Auer... explain what that meant?"

    "Just that it was useful for apologizing if we're in Germany, and that by the time we can decipher it for ourselves, we probably won't need to use it."

    'Ecxuse me, I speak English like a swine'... Pretty sure it makes him Best ProfTeacher Ever.


    Possibly better than you know; while I know next to nothing of German (I am tempted to quote Twain's quip that he'd sooner decline two beers than one German adjective - oops, I guess I just did - but I don't even know enough to dislike the tongue) , I am guessing from Erica's reaction that the sentence is rather more obscene. I am pretty sure that the visual metaphor underlying the idiom 'under all sows' is anatomical in nature. With the (pardon the pun) dependent clause "nastier than a..." being implicit in the original, but possibly necessary as part of a more fluent translation, I expect.

    I'm just surprised that it is 'Sau' and not /me checks English-German Dictionary for the word for 'boar' and crosses fingers 'Eber' - though either way, what's hanging there is probably not considered particularly delightful. Perhaps it is more metaphorical, though, and implies that you 'speak like a suckling piglet' (i.e., an infant using baby-talk).

    I may be wrong, however. If your translation is more accurate, then I would add: whether it is meant to describe one's grasp of English, or express disdain for Anglophones in general, is a matter of interpretation, I suppose. What little I know of German grammar inclines me to think the former, but if so, I would have expected the word to be 'Deutsche' rather than 'Englisch' (i.e., he's teaching them to apologize for their crappy German).

    On the gripping hand, if Auer really is trying to trick his students into saying (in effect), "Sorry for fucking up your beautiful language, I'm just another English-speaking dumbass", then more power to him.

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    6 years 9 months ago #126 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Schol-R-LEA wrote: On the gripping hand, if Auer really is trying to trick his students into saying (in effect), "Sorry for fucking up your beautiful language, I'm just another English-speaking dumbass", then more power to him.


    I think that depending on your dialect and how badly you butcher the second phrase, it can get frosty.

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 9 months ago #127 by konzill
    • konzill
    • konzill's Avatar


  • Posts: 500

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I take it I'm not the only one who thinks of this song every time I read the title of this story:
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #128 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • /me giggles imagining Freddie Mercury doing the opening narration for the soap opera



    (This being the version of the opening from the period Queen were most active, and also when my Mom was watching the show.)

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #129 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • Wasamon wrote: 3.5) Whateley's package screening for certain commodities has historically been pretty lax, for one reason (superior sneaky tech) or another (bribes). In Gouyausse's case, he's got an actual beer allowance for reasons that will probably be mentioned later on.


    Oh, lovely, I'm guessing he has an intoxication-based power, and one closer to Blotto than to Captain Trips. And he's already acting like a party-school frat boy, complete with roofies and a smug certainty that he'll never get caught.

    (For those fortunate enough not to have seen it, Blotto was a character from Delta House, an extremely cheesy and mercifully short-lived television spin-off of Animal House in 1979. Trust me, you didn't miss anything; since it had to pass the ABC's Standards and Practices folks, the humor of the original was nerfed into oblivion, and it lacked the drama aspect which was so crucial to the success of the TV version of M*A*S*H so the humor was all that could have carried it. It ended up watered down repeats of the gags from the original, paired with plotlines that would have been too weaksauce for a mid-1980s kids series on Nickelodeon. As for Blotto, he was the stand-in for the absent John Belushi, who had better things to do, so Blotto was given as Bluto's younger brother, whose sole interest trait was... becoming superhumanly strong when drunk. Uh huh... the series, all 13 episodes, is on YT if you care, but I wouldn't bother.)

    Worse, Gouyasse has fallen in with the sort of 'scoring' club which has surfaced in at least one US high school (though shows like Law and Order would make you think they were in every school in the US - even the nursery schools). And they are co-opting the whole 4chan /b/ "Beta Uprising" language and turning it on its head, making it even more obnoxious in the process! Stay classy, guys. One imagines that his 'friends' do everything to keep on his good side to ensure some of the beer keeps flowing their way, while calling him something like "Gooey Ass" behind his back.

    (The video below covers the "Lakewood Spur Posse" incident from 1993 that seems to be the root of that particular moral panic. The story is #9 in the video, and if it doesn't go to it immediately, it begins at 7:46.)


    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    6 years 9 months ago #130 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • Took me a while to find time to read this one... not much to say that hasn't already been said, but:

    1. Why are people (both characters and readers) behaving like pineapple ice cream is some sort of weird thing, like chocolate-frosted chicken or whatever? It's a fruit, you can make juice of it, you can make ice cream of it. I mean it, I think I haven't ever entered an ice cream place that didn't offer pineapple.

    2. Cookie is not a Cerberus, he's an Orthrus. Cerberus had three heads.

    3. It figures that Whateley would have its own version of the "manosphere" chat rooms, complete with all the toxic misogynist jargon. The part that actually creeped me most was their attitude to Whitman girls ("they are desperate, therefore should be easy pickings"). Kudos to Pete for seeing through the bullshit, a boo for Fra for not realizing that those creeps, particularly his "friend," are eager to use and discard his sister.

    I actually don't blame Fra that much for slipping Cally's secret. I mean, he was drunk. I only blame him for being there in the first place.

    Now, possible consequences for Cally... I see two possible ones:
    a) Her secret gets out. Very bad on the short run, getting put straight in every campus bigot's crosshairs, beginning with Brita... and Cally does not have much in the way of defensive powers. If she survives the first bashing,it might not so bad in the long run -- the other changelings, including roomie Erica, might open to her and that eventually leads to this unlikely group of mostly M2F changelings realizing they are all in the same boat.

    b) Her secret does not get out. That's actually the worst scenario in my mind: if the OutstandingCreepy DudesAssholes Club members keep quiet, it's because they see a way to exploit this info for their gain. I expect blackmail, possibly attempting to extort sex from Cally. Her best possible defense would be to come out as a changeling, nullifying their hold... but she seems so scared of coming out as anything but a normal, heterosexual girl, that I find her unlikely to go that route.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago #131 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • Sir Lee wrote: Took me a while to find time to read this one... not much to say that hasn't already been said, but:

    1. Why are people (both characters and readers) behaving like pineapple ice cream is some sort of weird thing, like chocolate-frosted chicken or whatever? It's a fruit, you can make juice of it, you can make ice cream of it. I mean it, I think I haven't ever entered an ice cream place that didn't offer pineapple.

    2. Cookie is not a Cerberus, he's an Orthrus. Cerberus had three heads.

    I don't think pineapple ice cream is weird, just I've never been able to find it where I live and wish to try it.
    And I did not know that was the term for a two-headed dog, thank you for that interesting piece of information.

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    Last Edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Dreamer.
    6 years 9 months ago #132 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sir Lee wrote: Took me a while to find time to read this one... not much to say that hasn't already been said, but:

    2. Cookie is not a Cerberus, he's an Orthrus. Cerberus had three heads.

    3. It figures that Whateley would have its own version of the "manosphere" chat rooms, complete with all the toxic misogynist jargon. The part that actually creeped me most was their attitude to Whitman girls ("they are desperate, therefore should be easy pickings"). Kudos to Pete for seeing through the bullshit, a boo for Fra for not realizing that those creeps, particularly his "friend," are eager to use and discard his sister.

    I actually don't blame Fra that much for slipping Cally's secret. I mean, he was drunk. I only blame him for being there in the first place.

    Now, possible consequences for Cally... I see two possible ones:
    a) Her secret gets out. Very bad on the short run, getting put straight in every campus bigot's crosshairs, beginning with Brita... and Cally does not have much in the way of defensive powers. If she survives the first bashing,it might not so bad in the long run -- the other changelings, including roomie Erica, might open to her and that eventually leads to this unlikely group of mostly M2F changelings realizing they are all in the same boat.

    b) Her secret does not get out. That's actually the worst scenario in my mind: if the OutstandingCreepy DudesAssholes Club members keep quiet, it's because they see a way to exploit this info for their gain. I expect blackmail, possibly attempting to extort sex from Cally. Her best possible defense would be to come out as a changeling, nullifying their hold... but she seems so scared of coming out as anything but a normal, heterosexual girl, that I find her unlikely to go that route.


    2) Funny thing, ealry Cerberus only had one head. It's only later in Antiquity than the three heads model took root.

    3) I blame him. So. Fucking. Hard. First for rotting for more than one session inside the Pit, thus showing level of intelligence earning him the well-deserved scorn of Darwin Award winners. Second, for getting wasted. Spiked or not, he chose to drink the booze, to drink lots of it, and the only difference was probably he only wanted to get wasted more slowly. And no matter how seemingly lax consumption could seem in Italy (or France), a middle schooler, or a kid freshly out of it, should have no fucking business around alcohol, let alone enough to claim familiarity with it (I is it was empty boasting). And with a bunch of unknown people, to boot (it can't be long enough for any friendship to form), especially when you have secrets to keep. Leading me to third, the almost total abscence of goading to get to the bomb. Bamboozled or not, the fact he let out with that as a fucking reflex isn't telling many nice things about that little shitbag, and making me wonder when, most certainly not if, he would have told it sober. Maybe he can crawl back from the rock bottom where he's processing his booze, but for me it will be a very hard sell for me.

    a) ...Seeing somthing like:

    "...Just wait a second. You're telling me I'm the only girl of the group not being... A changeling, you said you're called?"
    "Why, yes Tanya."
    "... How being closer to theoretic 'normal' is making even more of an outcast?"

    Would make it worth it. And it didn't lead to lots of pain to MHM girls, Stale Farce's face too.

    b) Yuck. The only silver lining I could see here is if the Pit's maggots decide they're "too alpha" to have sex with a changeling (yeah, they won't be that polite), and use the blackmail to set up dates... Meaning Cally will get some time to come clean to her friends, and prepare the counter attack for when said dates crash and burn, the maggots decide "let's fuck the fag after all" (the way they see Whitman, bleugh...)... And prepare for when they throw option 3) a) to the campus when that last brainfart crash and burn.
    6 years 9 months ago #133 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I agree with holding drunks responsible for their actions.

    But Fra's membership in this club? I'm pretty sure he's just not good enough at English to pick up on the fact that these guys view women as opponents to be bested, not partners to build relationships with. Note that Callie has been treating him as a nuisance, not a predator, and she knows him far better than we do. He also seems to understand that the issue lies with himself, not with women. He's recognized that there is some kind of cultural difference between American women and Italian women that he doesn't understand, which is resulting in him offending them instead of charming them. He's trying to figure out what he's doing wrong so that he can improve himself and stop offending people. He's a good person, but his lack of life experience and his poor grasp of English have resulted in him seeking help from the wrong people. Drama ensues.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    6 years 9 months ago #134 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • Hardric wrote: a) ...Seeing somthing like:

    "...Just wait a second. You're telling me I'm the only girl of the group not being... A changeling, you said you're called?"
    "Why, yes Tanya."
    "... How being closer to theoretic 'normal' is making even more of an outcast?"

    Would make it worth it. And it didn't lead to lots of pain to MHM girls, Stale Farce's face too.


    Minor point: we don't know that much about Tanya's origin, other than she somehow became a copy of her mother's and was sorta raised by her mother's teammates. I don't think it was ever unambiguously stated that she was born a girl, or that she was already a girl before becoming her mother's clone. I know, we have already seen a case of "boy becomes her mother's clone" in Knockoff; but "it has been done before" is not by itself negative proof. So, it could very well turn out that she's not the exception after all.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    6 years 9 months ago #135 by MageOhki
    • MageOhki
    • MageOhki's Avatar


  • Posts: 548

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • *snickers* *snickers so hard*
    6 years 9 months ago #136 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • MageOhki wrote: *snickers* *snickers so hard*

    I'm sure that for some of the canon cabal not revealing things in the forums is quite difficult!
    6 years 9 months ago #137 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sir Lee wrote:

    Hardric wrote: a) ...Seeing somthing like:

    "...Just wait a second. You're telling me I'm the only girl of the group not being... A changeling, you said you're called?"
    "Why, yes Tanya."
    "... How being closer to theoretic 'normal' is making even more of an outcast?"

    Would make it worth it. And it didn't lead to lots of pain to MHM girls, Stale Farce's face too.


    Minor point: we don't know that much about Tanya's origin, other than she somehow became a copy of her mother's and was sorta raised by her mother's teammates. I don't think it was ever unambiguously stated that she was born a girl, or that she was already a girl before becoming her mother's clone. I know, we have already seen a case of "boy becomes her mother's clone" in Knockoff; but "it has been done before" is not by itself negative proof. So, it could very well turn out that she's not the exception after all.


    ... Dang, I'd swear I had found somewhere a confirmation Tanya wasn't a changeling, but I can't find it again, if it ever existed... Leading me back to the theory 'they're all changelings'... Yup, including Kenshi.
    6 years 9 months ago #138 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Sir Lee wrote: So, it could very well turn out that she's not the exception after all.


    Well, you see, one of the other pup's in Cookie's litter had a little . . . accident. But, technically, that wouldn't make Tanya a changeling.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 9 months ago #139 by Ametros
    • Ametros
    • Ametros's Avatar


  • Posts: 435

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • So it's been a while, this portion is a lengthy one, and the cast was rather extensive.

    So naturally, I struggled to recall who many of the characters were. I'll second the mention that a few refreshers on characters would have been useful.

    I was somewhat surprised that some "arcs" were introduced and approximately finished within just this part - like Whirlibird getting her date (of sorts) with Donut. There's quite a lot of long-ranging consequences packed into it, too. Erica's now in a similar boat to Bianca, Fiorella's about to have a rather rough time and the threats of Jamie and Bergamot are looming. It was good to see more of Mazarin as Headmaster - he's still a mystery, but I'm beginning to trust he'll act in his role appropriately and with professionalism.

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
    6 years 9 months ago #140 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Noted on the issue of reminders on who is who. I'm hoping to keep Dorms 4 shorter than Dorms 3 ended up being, but you never know... There ended up being a lot more happening before my designated end-point on the third installment than I'd imagined at first.

    Other things to mention:

    It was said a few times, I think, but Cally and Fra did not attend the same high school in Genoa. Cally was at a school for arts and sciences, while Fra was attending a vocational school but spending more time on his football moves than his shop skills. When the mutations hit, his new good looks made him popular with the "wrong crowd" of his school, which is where he got most of his experience with everything. It's also why he spent so little time preparing for America; he was riding high as a big fish in a little pond. And then he got dunked

    As a side note, he has enough regen that he's never actually gotten drunk before, and never had anything strong enough to affect him. The morning after will not be kind. And also for the record, he isn't aware of the true nature of the ODS or what those duds are really capable of, though it'll be apparent soon enough.

    None of that excuses any of what he did, but it's nice to have context.
    6 years 7 months ago #141 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Wasamon wrote: Noted on the issue of reminders on who is who. I'm hoping to keep Dorms 4 shorter than Dorms 3 ended up being.


    Yeah, this isn't happening. As it turns out, the weekend of Oct. 1st is an exceptionally busy one, and I'm covering most of the action.
    6 years 6 months ago #142 by DanZilla
    • DanZilla
    • DanZilla's Avatar


  • Posts: 1648

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • A new episode is released... you know the drill.
    6 years 6 months ago #143 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • someone is playing dirty

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    6 years 6 months ago #144 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4, part 1 comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 6 months ago #145 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Dreamer wrote: A new girl in special orientation the last couple days, I wonder who. Sera Eir Magnusdottir a.k.a. Einherjar, why do I have a bad feeling about her?


    Let's see. "Sera" and "Eir" are far and away more common in Norway than Iceland.
    "Sera" is the short form of either Severina (m. Severin or Severus) or Seraphia (m. Seraph)
    "Eir" is the name of a Valkyrie in the Þulur, but one of the Ásynja in other sources.

    ... and the Einherjar (yes, plural) were Odin's pick of the battle-felled litter of warriors. Dump stats tended to be WIS and INT.

    Dreamer wrote: Whoa, did I forget something because I don't recall why Tia would be so chipper and full of energy and happy like that from her usual self.


    Doesn't Melville also have Hydroflux's more relaxing technologies?

    Shawn, on the other hand... He now had to deal with the likes of High Gear and Jack-in-the-Box, who'd made it clear what would happen to young men who didn't support the ODS agenda after signing on. He only hoped this would blow over soon.


    Quite ODS indeed.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 6 months ago #146 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • DanZilla wrote: A new episode is released... you know the drill.


    Power, dental, or fire?

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    6 years 6 months ago #147 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Valentine wrote:

    DanZilla wrote: A new episode is released... you know the drill.


    Power, dental, or fire?

    Tornado obviously...

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    6 years 6 months ago #148 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • So many things going on in this piece... ODS seems to be a group that someone in authority needs to discover and then squash like a cockroach.
    FSH and they want Tanya to abandon MMM? Haven't they ever heard that you ought to be careful not to accuse the children of their father's sins. Sure you can watch carefully to see that the person is not just shining you on... But really you can if you try break the habit of prejudice.
    Jack-ass... and just what has he done to Vic!? This if discovered should be a short trip to a place where learns to say: I love your p***s to his new best friend and roommate...
    All in all, waiting for the other shoe to drop on Callie...
    6 years 6 months ago #149 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • What makes this one really interesting for me isn't the actual events, though some of those are fun too, but what is hinted at in the background as world-building or setting re-establishing in the gap between Gen 1 and Gen 2.

    Like what Anne pointed out. The FSHA openly having a fight with the Masterminds and Bad Seeds last year. They seem to be returning to their roots as prejudiced "heroes," more in the vein of Imp's typical foes and Lamplighter, than the shift we saw in Gen 1 that started with Gloriana and Pendragon and is currently playing out as a hard line against the bigoted.
    What does this imply for Gen 2?! If the FSHA is returning to a more black-and-white view of things instead of the nuanced one they had started to get at Glor's insistence, it starts to creep into territory of why the Bad Seeds and the Order of the Worn Wrench were created in the first place. Only we know that the Seeds already alienated Bianca because of the arrogance of a single member, and the Mastermind's leader is a total "Asshole" who is now tormenting Vic for information for the ODS. Where exactly does this leave MMM? In the middle of conflicts they're being dragged into?

    My impression is that this maelstrom of high school drama and violence headed their way will drive them closer together, despite their differences of opinion and newly growing separate social circles and subdivisions.

    Outing Callie is another strange scenario, because she's not a Poesie. The administration can't move her there without drawing more attention. So this looming doom brings back to some references that were pre-Gen 1, where the support base for changelings just wasn't really there because there were so few. Will the existing bubble class of changelings, including our POV characters in Gen 2 risk outing themselves to support Callie? Will some of them shy away from helping her out of fear of ending up in her shoes? When the secret is already out, therefore keeping Stahlfaust's geas-erosion ability a secret, when will the Amazons come into play once they finally have a confirmed changeling where they don't have to worry about the administration's interference?

    Is Tia going crazy from anxiety?

    How could Hikaru do that to the other four girls? Subjecting them to 4chan?!

    Teacher/class evaluations are performed like Secret Shoppers? Very interesting. I wonder if this was a legacy idea from Carson, or something new that Mazarin thought up, due to his more business-like nature.

    I like that Vic was almost starting to break through the Psi/Devisor hijacking by using his water meditation and visualization techniques. Is this an offshoot or potential ability development of his hydrokinesis? He's still new at this psi game stuff, but I was definitely getting the impression that he might learn a few things from Tanya, and maybe even start seeing Sterling. Someone remembered her before. Was it Vic, or was it Jimmy?

    Looking forward to the next section. :cheer:
    6 years 6 months ago #150 by MageOhki
    • MageOhki
    • MageOhki's Avatar


  • Posts: 548

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Hikaru *warned* them. Best bit, is *pay attention* to her *excat* words, and *who* set up the account.... And... Dorms 4.2

    *whistles inncoently*
    6 years 6 months ago #151 by Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon's Avatar


  • Posts: 1998

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Laura is a teenager.
    The words 'careful' and 'take care' and 'are you sure this is a good idea?' don't really form part of her vocabulary...:)

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    6 years 6 months ago - 6 years 6 months ago #152 by Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA
    • Schol-R-LEA's Avatar


  • Posts: 1766

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 24 Oct 1968
  • MageOhki wrote: Hikaru *warned* them. Best bit, is *pay attention* to her *exact* words,


    You mean, the fact that she referred to it by its official name (Yotsuba Channel) rather than the rather more infamous (in English, at any rate) URL? I am sure Laura has heard of 4Chan, but she probably hasn't connected the name Yotsuba Channel to it (as image boards in generally never took off in the US; things like Imgur, Snapchat, and Pintrest aren't quite the same, and rather different from each other for that matter), so I am guessing that Hikaru is playing a prank on her by withholding the more common name.

    Or maybe it's Kurenai playing a prank on both of them - I get the impression that Okami has herself not noticed the URL or otherwise made the connection, assuming Kurenai even showed her the actual website rather than simply extracting the image macros. I doubt that Daniel Moate was one to pay much attention to things like image boards, and since her transformation Hikaru has too many had other things to do (though I expect she'd have gotten a warning by IHA not to post there herself, at the very least). It is very possible that even if Hikaru once knew the official name of 4chan, she could have lost those memories during one of her burnouts.

    MageOhki wrote: and *who* set up the account....


    Yeah, so very likely, Kurenai is the prankster. I hope she didn't 'forget' to give Laura the password...

    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
    Last Edit: 6 years 6 months ago by Schol-R-LEA.
    6 years 6 months ago #153 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • MageOhki wrote: Hikaru *warned* them. Best bit, is *pay attention* to her *excat* words, and *who* set up the account.... And... Dorms 4.2


    Somehow, I don't think the "account" is configured where and how Hikaru may assume it is.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 6 months ago #154 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Kurenai didn't necessarily say she posted it under the Caerula account, only that she created one?

    For all we know, Kurenai could be half the posters in a thread. Or the one creating a lot of Hikaru's "paparazzi problems" to date.
    6 years 6 months ago #155 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • You don't suppose that Kurenai thinks that Hikaru needs the 'paparatzi' in order to keep her from sinking into self isolation. If so she could be wrong. Some people pull a Howard Hughes over exposure to paparatzi, and with good reason. No one particularly likes to live their lives on 'camera'!
    6 years 6 months ago - 6 years 6 months ago #156 by MageOhki
    • MageOhki
    • MageOhki's Avatar


  • Posts: 548

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • While Japanese *tend* to be more reserved... not *always*. Idols, teen models, et al have active (very) twitter, tumblur, instagram accounts.

    Take that for what you will.

    Example of one:
    twitter.com/meruru20020306


    As for press in Japan? Hikaru is *off limits* outside *IHA* approved *directly* moments. Period, dot. That is *tradtion* and even if it's not, might as well *be* law. (Downside, Hikaru *is* expected to make a few appearances) (See how the *other* princesses in RL are treated)
    Last Edit: 6 years 6 months ago by MageOhki.
    6 years 6 months ago #157 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • MageOhki wrote: As for press in Japan? Hikaru is *off limits* outside *IHA* approved *directly* moments. Period, dot. That is *tradtion* and even if it's not, might as well *be* law. (Downside, Hikaru *is* expected to make a few appearances) (See how the *other* princesses in RL are treated)

    Thanks for the reminder that imperials are treated with far more respect than even royals in other countries, without(?) specific criminal penalties like in some other nations.

    But does that include fans and otaku, posting on their own social media accounts?

    Hikaru has reacted negatively toward being called a pop star by Tia and others. Is the comparison to an idol by regular citizens the paparazzi problem she's referring to? Or is she saying paparazzi when she means "spies" from other countries?
    6 years 6 months ago #158 by MageOhki
    • MageOhki
    • MageOhki's Avatar


  • Posts: 548

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Though otaku are *very* careful even now to present the royals 'right'. This is done in several ways, plus innate Japanese politeness.

    Hikaru's reactiving negatively for the simple reason is: In a *lot* of ways, she *feels like one*, since she's put on 'display' as much as the other princesses were/are at her age. Not to mention she did more apperances, 'spc with religious overtones (blessing buildings, for example, is something she's done, once or twice), plus of course, she's *only* known *active* Japanese avatar/paladin of one of the o-kami, at this time. Which gives her more 'exposure'.

    Add into that, that for the last oh, 20 years *before* manifesting, she was *very very private*...
    6 years 6 months ago #159 by Hebblejebble
    • Hebblejebble
    • Hebblejebble's Avatar


  • Posts: 66

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Dreamer wrote: Whoa, did I forget something because I don't recall why Tia would be so chipper and full of energy and happy like that from her usual self.


    Tia has medication to keep her nymphomania in check and without it she has been shown to be very... carefree.

    Dreamer wrote: Even Hikaru is confused by Tia's behavior.


    I saw Hikaru being more concerned rather than confused, and if she's aware of Tia's condition she has good reason for that concern.
    6 years 5 months ago #160 by Yolandria
    • Yolandria
    • Yolandria's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 595

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Part 2 is now up for your viewing pleasure. Feel free to comment in the sections below!

    Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
    6 years 5 months ago #161 by mhalpern
    • mhalpern
    • mhalpern's Avatar


  • Posts: 2026

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • well the bastard who was controlling Vic is now dead, or will wish he was,

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    6 years 5 months ago #162 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • mhalpern wrote: well the bastard who was controlling Vic is now dead, or will wish he was,

    He (Jackass) probably won't get what he deserves, which is a roommate named Bubba who hasn't seen the outside of the walls for more than ten years....
    Still hoping someone in the administration will find the ODS and crush them like the pathetic cockroaches they are!
    6 years 5 months ago #163 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Anne wrote: Still hoping someone in the administration will find the ODS and crush them like the pathetic cockroaches they are!


    I'm not sure they can, right now... What rules have they broken?
    6 years 5 months ago #164 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I'm thinking that the beer they fed Fra was probably not on campus legally. Also, I'm thinking that what is being done to Vic is pretty much a violation of several school rules.
    Maybe not enough by itself to get Jackass a suit of steel bar camouflage but given that it is a repeat of a past offense even if the victim is different it would be a good idea if the administration came down on him like a ton of bricks!
    6 years 5 months ago #165 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Oh, yeah, he got stomped on last year for the hypno-buzzer. Get that into general knowledge and the stompers from last year will stomp again, it seems.
    6 years 5 months ago #166 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • StahlFaust's reaction to Tia's actions make sense. There's little for a bully to enjoy with a no-sell like that. And it looks like the manic side to Tia's cycles isn't limited to grooving on romance endorphins.

    Sadly, it looks like the baked goods that Donut delivers will end up at the picnic with added "flavor" ingredients.

    I wonder if Derek could save himself some time by changing his monicker to Degaton?

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 5 months ago #167 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • null0trooper wrote: I wonder if Derek could save himself some time by changing his monicker to Degaton?

    Negaton?
    He certainly is a piece of work so far as I can tell. He never stopped to ask if maybe Vic might be being attacked by someone, or if the 'drugs' he assumed were something that Vic was doing voluntarily... No he just made and ass of U and me and someone ought to pin the tail on him very firmly to remind him that he is being asinine.
    6 years 5 months ago #168 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4, part 2 comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 5 months ago #169 by Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon's Avatar


  • Posts: 1998

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • For all the bad feelings towards them, the ODC are really not much different from a load of high school teenage boys.
    The difference is that they have powers.

    What, you thought High School wasn't full of cretins? :evil:

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    6 years 5 months ago #170 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • Yes, of course, teenagers will be assholes, that's pretty much a given. Heinlein tongue-in-cheekly proposed to raise kids in a barrel and feed them by the bunghole, and on their eighteenth birthday to have a formal decision whether to let them out of the barrel or to close the bunghole.

    But the ODS is also a pretty much on the nose expy for the so-called "manosphere". It's all there -- the "pick-up artist" as a role model, the self-aggrandizement of inadequate losers as alleged "alphas", the name which implies the whole "incel" mindset (in which one sees himself as a "nice guy" who is being unfairly deprived his due right of having the Swedish Bikini Team as a private harem), the misogyny, the homophobia implicit in calling M2F gender-changers "traps" -- particularly stupid in the context of Whateley, since some of the hottest girls started out as biological males. I wonder if their heads would explode if they discovered that Fey -- who is a teacher, so they probably wank a lot to her -- used to be a guy...

    To give the authors their due, I note that they are equal opportunity satirists -- the Amazons also have the features of an expy for the most obnoxious extremes of militant lesbian-only feminism, including the TERF thing.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    6 years 5 months ago - 6 years 5 months ago #171 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Oh hey, it's Scarlyt. I remember her from the before times. Somebody feed her to Ratel, please.

    I think my favorite part of this update is Callie comparing Nick to a deck chair. That was great.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    Last Edit: 6 years 5 months ago by Kettlekorn.
    6 years 5 months ago #172 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966
  • I just realized that Sterling is a walking "somebody else's problem field."

    Don't Drick and Drive.
    6 years 5 months ago #173 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Scarlyt v. Ratel, would Ratel survive?

    I should refresh on Scarlyt, but I like surprises.
    6 years 5 months ago #174 by I Think
    • I Think
    • I Think's Avatar


  • Posts: 1

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Sooo many hints about things going on! The thing I'm most worried about is... what happened to Louis? Am I forgetting something that was previously established, or did we just hear that Louis is no longer at Hawthorne and somehow left sometime in the past 4 years?! (also Lenape refers to him as Lewis...?)
    6 years 5 months ago #175 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • One thing that Gen 2 has been really great at conveying is the technological leap. Hacking in Gen 1 is fairly consistent with what a reader would expect from most real world experience, setting aside the notable cyberpath exceptions.

    But hacking or investigations in Gen 2? VIs versus AIs, instant breakthroughs or automated attack algorithms, countermeasure consoles, monitored fake social media profiles, curated honeypots, the works! It makes me think immediately of Gibson, Vinge, Stephenson, or even just Shadowrun and Cyberpunk 2020.

    And best of all? There's a very logical progression between the two generations. We're aware of all the budding developments of Gen 1, the precursors to the technological and social leap we're now getting into the details of Gen 2. All hinted at in the earliest stories. Take Gen 1, put gadgeteers and devisors to work on it for 9 years, and you have the brave new world we're now seeing described before us.

    Really love what the Gen 2 Crew has come up with here on that front.

    Other bits:

    The insidious reach of Essemmelle's ability! Even when it is a positive branding, it still gives me a bit of the creeps.

    I'm also glad that what was done to Vic was technological, and not some esper using their psychic egg beater on his brain. Then again, that's kind of what they're doing to him.

    Was this the first we've heard of Vic's step-sister? I seem to remember him hinting at his past before, alluding to someone like Gwen, but this seemed like a new development in this segment.
    6 years 5 months ago #176 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I Think wrote: Sooo many hints about things going on! The thing I'm most worried about is... what happened to Louis? Am I forgetting something that was previously established, or did we just hear that Louis is no longer at Hawthorne and somehow left sometime in the past 4 years?! (also Lenape refers to him as Lewis...?)

    I think this might be the first direct in-story mention that he isn't present, but it's been known via author commentary for a bit. We don't know what's actually happened, though.

    I like to think that he burned out in some heroic way and lost his powers, and then his body began to fall apart. But inside his blubbery shell was a shiny new mostly-human Louis with no powers of note beyond an abnormal psychic resistance. So, naturally, he threw on some pants, picked up a crossbow, and headed to Nebraska to hunt zombies.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    6 years 5 months ago #177 by jmhyp
    • jmhyp
    • jmhyp's Avatar


  • Posts: 359

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I'm not enjoying this lumping everyone together style of story writing. All the threads by themselves are interesting but reading them all in a long post-it notes dump is less satisfying. Why isn't there just a separate story for each of these threads? It feels like I'm channel surfing as the story keeps jumping from stream to stream.

    For example, you can't use the tagging system to find all the vic stories.or all the tia stories. This story has no tags. And if it were tagged, it would have most of then gen2 chars in the tags. Part 1 only lists Eisenmadel | Calliope | MaLagua and it also has a bunch of people running around in it.
    6 years 5 months ago #178 by Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon
    • Astrodragon's Avatar


  • Posts: 1998

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Because this story is one of our main arc stories, one which is tied in to our short and long term plots, and so affects most (if not all) the characters.
    Its not like a story centred around what one character is doing, with the other players being more peripheral (although still not ignored).

    So trying to find and read all the Tia bits is, frankly, silly, because it isn't a story about any one character - its just mainly seen from one or two pov. You shouldn't think of it as a selection of individual stories, because it isn't.

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    6 years 5 months ago #179 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I'm enjoying it. It's all the fun of the closely interlinked Gen-1 stories, but without the mind-numbing copy-pasta overlaps. I do get confused about the occasional side character, but ctrl-f or context usually fixes that pretty fast.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    6 years 5 months ago #180 by Erianaiel
    • Erianaiel
    • Erianaiel's Avatar


  • Posts: 133

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Kettlekorn wrote: I think this might be the first direct in-story mention that he isn't present, but it's been known via author commentary for a bit. We don't know what's actually happened, though.


    Realistically speakiing Louis would be one of the key targets for both Nimbus and The Bastard to take out post haste. He is that powerful a wildcard against any attack on Whateley and at the same time is he extremely vulnerable
    6 years 4 months ago #181 by DanZilla
    • DanZilla
    • DanZilla's Avatar


  • Posts: 1648

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Part 3 is up for your view... er, reading pleasure...
    6 years 4 months ago #182 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4, part 3 comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 4 months ago #183 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • One definitely cannot say that the Gen2 crew don't know how to ramp up the tension.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 4 months ago #184 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Rising back from the grave of Real Life Hiatus, and hoping to renew with the C&Cing with that part of that wild ride of a story.

    I only have thing to say about Eurydice and her newly discovered power... Fucking. Knew. It.
    6 years 4 months ago #185 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I loved the scene where Cally starts blasting off on Fra and everyone around them standing in rapt attention because they can't understand a word of it. I had a perfect visual of that scene, because I've seen it before. Different language mind you. The sense of pace, the stunned expression as the cause is revealed, growing into horror, regret, and shame.

    I also like the parallels with the twins' and Vic's family situation.

    Arguably, Cally is in even more danger now than she was with the ODS. The ODS are evil bastards, no doubt, but some of the Amazons will beat her to death if they also find out her secret. Morgana had a quick rescue and help. Cally may not be so lucky.

    Kareela's creepy power turned out for the best after all! In stalking Kenshin in a somewhat comical way that started to slide into creepy, Barker realized what good people do, and took the right side when it came to it.

    I'm guessing we should be very worried that Jamie is also recruiting.

    Vic's backstory just keeps getting more and more interesting. So much not fully known yet. Hints and glimpses, surrounded by lies of omission.
    6 years 4 months ago #186 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 3) wrote: Oh man, there was a stumper. For all that he'd been in the thick of the plot, he still didn't know why Jack-in-the-Box was doing this. "Er, well," he stumbled. "Jack, er, one of the guys back there, he... he was forcing me to spy on you and set you up for something, but I didn't know what or why, promise!"

    Nooo, Vic. You were mind controlled. Lead with that, not this weak-ass "I was forced" garbage!

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 3) wrote: I'm, uh, gonna go now. I need to speak with Security...

    That boy is a keeper.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    6 years 4 months ago #187 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • At risk of nauseating myself even asking this, are the Outstanding Dudes Society more self-styled Pick-Up Artists, Incels, a mix of both, or in Jack's case specifically...basically rapists?

    Shawn finally may have figured out he was barking up the wrong tree, even if the reason was Kareela's powers, and Fra is an idiot but realized his error, even if it was too late. But they seem to be the exception, not the rule.
    6 years 4 months ago - 6 years 4 months ago #188 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • I would say they are for the most part PUA wannabes, with liberal sprinklings of every "manosphere" toxic behavior and jargon you can list.

    Key word is "wannabe". They are too young to develop any actual pick-up techniques, so they aren't real PUAs. They are just starting in the dating & sex game, so they still have hope of success, not having descended into the failure despair that leads one to label oneself as "incel" or "MGTOW" or whatever other label they come up to cover their own self-loathing.

    But yes, a few of them are rapists.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    Last Edit: 6 years 4 months ago by Sir Lee.
    6 years 4 months ago #189 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • We're definitely seeing them mostly through the eyes of their worst members. For most of the freshmen new to the group, their situation's not too different from what Mac described in the opening paragraphs of Dorms 4: gawky, awkward teens who suddenly look super handsome, and while they're still trying to figure things out socially back home they're suddenly thrust into a new school where they're actually average. Again. That's frustrating and disheartening, not to mention perfect for someone else to come in and manipulate their feelings.

    After this weekend of story the club's roster is going to be a lot smaller, for what it's worth.

    A breakdown of the ones not likely to improve:

    High Gear - craves attention. Wanted girls to pay more attention to him, so being the sort of devisor he was, he went and found instructions on the internet, then applied analytical algorithms to figure out the best way to go about things. Unfortunately, he chose his source material poorly, and double-unfortunately, the results worked often enough to encourage him. Now he can brag to younger students and get attention from them as well. He's the only one who's really into the PUA concept, but since it's his club, it permeates everything they do.

    Jack-in-the-Box - likes control. Constantly negging on people, even his 'friends' in the club, in order to establish dominance, e.g. gives people nicknames to depersonalize and put them on the status of household goods. His major lines of research follow this trait, with a series of ever-improving mind control devises. Honestly the ODS would not have gone nearly so far as they have without him egging them along.

    Contact High - just dumb. Has one trick at his disposal and no brains or ability to see that it's a bad thing to use. He's not likely to learn to be a better person anytime soon, either.

    Gouyasse - a bully, plain and simple. He doesn't need the club or its philosophy, but they need him for his access to beer, and he likes that. He's in on the Calliope plot more because it's a strike against Erica's friend, which will make Wahnsennig happy (she probably wouldn't like to know the particulars, though).

    Macarthur Price a.k.a. 'the idiot' - probably a rotten egg from the get-go. The first we see of him, he's already gotten on Essemmelle's bad side, and he ends up getting tagged as an idiot for the rest of the day. This did nothing to improve his chances with the ladies from the very start, and he's a naturally bitter sort of dude. And then there's that unhealthy fixation on Calliope that came to a crashing end when he learned the truth. That's the sort of thing that High Gear can make use of.

    Lucky Lad - another attention-seeker. Formerly a sitcom child actor, and obsessed with reclaiming the level of attention he believes he used to garner. Since the rest of school sees him as pretty desperate, he's unlikely to be anything but more bitter and disenchanted as he goes on, which puts him about par with Mac right now.
    6 years 4 months ago #190 by Katssun
    • Katssun
    • Katssun's Avatar


  • Posts: 1333

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Thanks to both of you!

    My read of the situation had put Gouyasse in more of an active role in this, that his personality screamed more, "I'm God's gift to women," instead of him being more focused on his allegiance to the Berets and enjoying that the ODS was dependent on him. I think the way he had planned to mess with Fra pushed me in that direction.

    The others fell in line with my impressions thus far.
    6 years 4 months ago - 6 years 4 months ago #191 by Hardric
    • Hardric
    • Hardric's Avatar


  • Posts: 207

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Okay, later than expected... But not too late! Here I go.

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]


    Well, it happened. Guess brainwashing Siren here is the WitBitch to Stale Farce's Don Assholo?
    Last Edit: 6 years 4 months ago by Hardric. Reason: Hit 'Enter' too soon.
    6 years 4 months ago #192 by Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee
    • Sir Lee's Avatar


  • Posts: 3113

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 08 Nov 1966
  • Question for the Wiki:

    Do the authors see "Dorms of Our Lives" as a single story or a series of stories?
    Meaning, should we have separate pages for Season 1, Season 2, Season 3 and Season 4?

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    6 years 4 months ago #193 by Wasamon
    • Wasamon
    • Wasamon's Avatar


  • Posts: 342

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I've been treating it as a single, extended story. A lot of the stuff that's happening right now has roots in Dorms 1, and the early parts were originally intended to provide narrative support and base for the story Souffle Girl wanted to put Calliope through.
    6 years 4 months ago #194 by Yolandria
    • Yolandria
    • Yolandria's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 595

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Part 4 now up for your viewing pleasure!

    Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
    6 years 4 months ago #195 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Daniel Fontenot thought he knew what fear was, had thought the aftermath of his first Rager incident -- so bloody and yet so justified -- would remain the scariest memory of his life. He was wrong.

    He could feel his ears morphing into something more animalistic, just so they could droop in anxiety as he whimpered.


    :roflmao:

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    6 years 4 months ago #196 by Rose Bunny
    • Rose Bunny
    • Rose Bunny's Avatar


  • Posts: 1956

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Shisa demonstrating that there are benefits to being small and non-humanoid at times.

    High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan


    6 years 4 months ago #197 by Dreamer
    • Dreamer
    • Dreamer's Avatar


  • Posts: 984

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 03 Dec 1976
  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4, part 4 comments
    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    6 years 4 months ago - 6 years 4 months ago #198 by Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn
    • Kettlekorn's Avatar


  • Posts: 1383

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • I'm amused by how much more seriously Shawn is taking the situation than everybody else involved. I could be cynical and say he realizes his ass is on the line and he needs to act immediately to avoid being dragged down by the rest of the ODS, but I prefer to believe that he's simply the only character in the situation who understands that informing Security about the attack takes priority over watching a tournament and hanging out with friends.

    I wasn't really feeling the raps in the rap battle (more due to lack of audio than anything), but I really enjoyed the fact that they resorted to a rap battle at all. That was great.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 4) wrote: Instead of blankets, they'd brought in actual furniture and rugs, turning their little square of turf into a lounge.

    People like these are very considerate; they go out of their way to show off how full of themselves they are so that nobody has to waste time actually interacting with them.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 4) wrote: Much as she loved Brita, that girl had issues, back issues, and hardbound collections of classic issues.

    I like this line.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    Last Edit: 6 years 4 months ago by Kettlekorn.
    6 years 4 months ago #199 by Anne
    • Anne
    • Anne's Avatar


  • Posts: 1411

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
  • Well taking parts three and four together.... Half-ton proves to be a halfwit who manages to jump to the wrong conclusion then compounds his error by blaming the person whom he has insulted when that person has powers that can harm him. Also hasn't he ever heard of the idea that when people change suddenly they have to learn their new limits.
    Ah, Vic, your brother is gone... you have a sister. Gwen, do have some compassion on your brother, he isn't rejecting you, just isn't happy with the change...
    ODS duds get partly smashed, but not nearly hard enough. Poor Fra, you really stuck your foot in it dude. What you need to do, which you seem in capable of doing is buckling down on learning English and picking up a few friends who aren't out to hit on your sister. Otherwise you may be among those who fail to survive your freshman year.
    Jamie is still stalking Tia, wish someone would plug that bint with about ten extra holes, make at least two of them vertical between her eyes, and two over her heart with exit holes in the back... Yeah she ought to be used as a live target on the rifle range...!
    Val, you dirty bitch, you ought to be hung out to dry... Maybe even placed naked in a set of stocks in the quad for a week. That goes the same for the rest of the Amazons. Being a 'victim' does not justify what you are doing which is essentially attacking those who are weaker than yourself. Also using the powers that be the way you do is plain nasty. Here's hoping someone discovers Val in their mind and ties her in a pretzel!
    Lots of other stuff going on, but that probably covers the main points. Though really someone needs to get Gwen and Vic in a room and act as a referee while they talk to each other... Make them both listen, and yes both talk about what they feel about the situation!
    Darn at times like these having Louis missing from Hawthorn just shows how much he did to keep the peace on campus, and to make sure that people didn't violate the psi code of ethics.
    6 years 4 months ago #200 by null0trooper
    • null0trooper
    • null0trooper's Avatar


  • Posts: 3032

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 19 Oct 1964
  • Dreamer wrote: Competitions like this are sanctioned by the school now instead of in arenas with teachers as the refs, doesn't sound good.


    FSHA tryouts have been mentioned before, and without a reference to what exactly they were or who refereed. The fights that we've seen booked in Arena 77 were grudge/feud matches matches which needed a referee.

    a) Maybe we're just seeing the competition because the PoV characters are trying out.

    b) Maybe the FSHA has lost the trust of the student body and teachers with regard to who tried out and how they performed, to the point that they will hold open trials and the rules will be openly stated or the club will be losing privileges or chartered status.

    c) In Gen1 Year 1, the FSHA seem to have gotten much of their status from their combat simulator performance instead of public engagement. (Who are the campus Peacekeepers we first meet? Not them.) They may need the PR from putting on a show like this to get the attention of the people they want to attract.

    d) All of the Above.


    One has to keep in mind that as idealistic as they are, by 2011 Stronghold and Mega-Girl are out. By 2015, the people they will have recruited are gone.

    Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

    WhatIF Stories: Buy the Book

    Discussion Thread
    Moderators: WhateleyAdminKristin DarkenE. E. NalleyelrodwNagrijMageOhkiAstrodragonNeoMagusWarrenMorpheusWasamonsleethrOtherEricBek D CorbinMaLAguASouffle GirlPhoenix SpiritusStarwolfDanZillaKatie_LynMaggie FinsonDrBenderJGBladedancerRenae_Whateley
    Powered by Kunena Forum