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Question Laura and the Village
- Yolandria
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- E. E. Nalley
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In… The village…
What you want?
We want… Information…
Whose side are you on?
That would be telling… We want… Information… Information…! INFORMATION!
YOU WON'T GET IT!
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Esar
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- Iwasforger03
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So Laura was the work of Frau Doctor it seems (did I use that right?)
This is going to be an emotional rollercoaster.
I am a Sexy Shoeless God of War - So suck it CP!
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- Astrodragon
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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Laura and the Village comments
Alice Roberts aka Gecko, very interesting look but cute. And Smooth goes after cute girls with GSD, just how many girlfriends has he had just because he gets bored with one and moved on, I wonder. Boy, Laura read Dr. Barton like a book. He is the kind of teacher I wish I had more of growing up.
Jennifer Kelly, what kind of job does she has, hard to guess. Why is this woman staring at her with a shocked look on her face, determined to talk to her. And Jennifer running in a panic like that, thinking she is a stalker. Just what is going on there, almost seemed like a long-lost relative trying to reconnect to me, someone who might have been changed by a BIT so Jennifer wouldn't recognize them.
Huh, no school I ever went to had a teacher try to teach students how to interact with adults as peers, wish they had. And opening her mind to new ideas and possibilities, yeah, really wish I had a teacher like him. Vanessa teasing her husband about having already 'caught one', like he did with Kayda all those years ago who was his first history-phile. Bwhahaha, the playful teasing between them and with Vanessa to Laura, even the Borg reference, too funny.
Not wanting to conference because he thinks Lanie is too busy with her kids and duties in the shop, and that Imp is a bad influence and leaves traps and tricks around the house when she sits for Lanie's kids from the sound of it. Donna and Maria available to help Vanessa as well, they have a lot of friends. Jake is stubborn, only Vanessa already having bought the tickets and made the reservations gets him. Ever since the incident he always worries about what will happen to Vanessa if he isn't around, he needs to learn to trust in his friends again.
Laura offering to help by staying with Vanessa, Jake can't accept due to policy, but Vanessa says she can hire her to help. Love when someone finds a loophole.

A blonde and another woman with the dark-haired woman, she felt someone's presence and knew it was her, interesting. Wait a minute, a blonde, a tall redhead, and a dark-haired exotic woman, Debra, Lanie, and Kayda! Accept that who is gone, what could have happened that has Kayda such a mess beyond the Unhcegila incident. Really curious who was possibly lost that has Kayda this messed up, as it sure sounds like it is those three. Wait, wild guess, almost sounds like something happened to Tansy to me.
Laura that excited, and I like how Kenshin talks like Yoda right now when speaking in English.

Awww, cute chat with her mom. Ouch, Bailey upset whenever Laura talks to her mom on the phone. And not wanting to talk about the subject of talking to her mom, Bailey needs some counseling on that issue if it hurts her so much.
Yikes, imagination causing Laura to think Melville residents are judging her with their gazes. Gerard Cox, nice to see friendly residents as well. Tia darting to girl Laura a hug, just a friend greeting a friend or are Tia's meds not working as well as hoped. Teasing about Laura being a minion, but she isn't a small yellow being.

All those plushies from Kako, hehehe. That poor wolf plushie, the wrath of Amaterasu shows no mercy for cute dolls. Kurenai teasing Hikaru like that, that AI is going to go too far one of these days. Sucking up to Laura now, Tia on the bed laughing, why did Hikaru have to tell Kurenai that Laura is a gadgeteer. A book on Asian history, written by Daniel Moate, boy, huge hint there which Laura won't get.
Using her power to heat up a teapot, even Hikaru can't resist using her powers. A cabinet made to look like a shrine including a gate, Kako needs to ease up on these things. Just how much is Hikaru paying Laura!?!
The cabinet is bigger on the inside! A gift from a fashion designer, a wardrobe like that could store a lot. Fifteen by twenty meters, if it is even close to that big inside, dang. Organize something that size, good grief, you would need a team or at least a couple speedsters to do that kind of job. Army dress uniform with Myoujin name and stripes of rank on it which Laura recognizes, Hikaru took a big risk with that. At least Hikaru didn't freak out and Laura and Tia promised not to tell anyone about it, plus didn't figure out what it hinted at.
And given one of the kimonos by Hikaru because Ammy won't wear those colors, nice perk to the job.
That is a huge tip.Tia caught her arm. "Hikaru, you can NOT use Laura to re-gift!"
What are this boy and girl up to, baiting Medina into believing their second subject is the daughter of Spinel. And the Capes sound like they have gotten worse over the years, never really verifying where their information about villains comes from. Making the Secret Squirrels think their second subject is their link to taking down a major villain, *groans* So many ways this could go wrong, especially if the SS are anything like their Gen 1 counterparts. And using Swarm to monitor their two subjects by means of suggested blackmail, great.
Students getting to see the Village, Laura and Tanya are lucky. Dr. Wyatt Cody, mountain of a man sounds right for description of him. Christine, Imp is going by her real name now, nice. Imp wants to get Laura in her class, Wyatt teases she just wants more students to torture, Imp won't change and for that I'm thankful. Teasing between Vanessa and Wyatt about taking her help to babysit his herd, tehehehe.
That many history books, guessing it is enough for a small library at least. Laura curious about Tanya's reaction to Dr. Barton, wondering if she should tell her about "Heroes of the Prairie-The History of the Sioux Falls League", plus the cover picture of the book the same one as on Dr. Barton's desk which has her curious about Debra and Kayda.
Vanessa part of the magic department, grading papers from introductory magic and annoyed at how the Harry Potter books have tainted views on magic. Sitting by the lake and chatting, good way to pass the time. Going into town to get ingredients with Vanessa driving and Laura having to put on make-up to hide her GSD, oh boy, I always suspect trouble will happen in these kind of situations.
Working on ideas to help out Vanessa, Laura is a good friend. Oh boy, grandmotherly woman thinks Vanessa and Laura are mother and daughter, awkward. Ouch, talking about it later, painful reminder she can't carry a child, poor Vanessa. Can't bake without baking some cookies, too, I like that rule. For Laura the change was a blessing in many ways, especially getting her out from under the thumb of her dad and brothers.
Pizza with the works, ack! Olives and mushrooms... Chocolate-chili pots de crème, sounds yummy. The 'rack' which Lanie developed for Vanessa, so many uses for something that stimulates muscles so they don't atrophy, hope she patented it. *eyes bug out* Okay, we know why she doesn't use a power walking frame, yikes doesn't cover it. And the 'rack' in action, I would pay for something like that.
Interesting idea on modifying the car for Vanessa. Laura working with Lanie on modifications for Vanessa's car, this will be epic.
Kim Hashida aka Perfume and Ed Temple, from the sounds of it part of the Secret Squirrels and worse than Gen 1 were. They didn't even check a second source other than the Capes database on Spinel, plus think just because someone is stated their parent or parents are supervillains they are ones as well, ugh. They are making the same and worse mistakes than the Gen 1 SS did, even not trusting the new headmaster because he was Syndicate. They are going to get in trouble and act like they are the law, just like the original group did, like watching a train wreck in slow motion.
Brita Baumann messing with Laura like this, talk about petty, using her RA status. Dragging Laura to Mrs. Horton's office like that, ugh. Stahlfaust needs to change her attitude or soon she will get herself expelled. So focused on messing with Laura she didn't check her RA app, just know she is going to use this against Laura later. Laura trading recipes and cooking techniques with Laura, fun.
Financier, who is this woman, is it the same one from the earlier scene. Miss Hartnett, the secretary, is an Exemplar as well. Mr. Buffet making small talk, Financier's SO delivered their baby, interesting. All that security for doing business and she brings out something that is a jammer and more. Cube that would make others hear just standard business discussions, sounds like one of Nikki's crystals.
Hugo Butler is the money manager of Evolution Rocks, guess they need someone smart to keep them going. And Financier is a Whateley Alum from the sounds of it, had testing done and Butler has an active meta-gene complex. And he is a part of Vanguard, making headway in improving relations between the mutant and baseline communities until Fullerton. Whoa, new details about Fullerton and it is worse than imagined, sounds like death would be a blessing.
Ack! Growth in so-called reality shows, gossip TV, and growth in sports, wonder what it could be covering up in our world. Pro-mutant candidates and pro-mutant-rights laws, this is a conspiracy I could back if they didn't hook up with Stauffer.
With how Financier talks, is a Whateley Alumni, and so good at gathering information on others, I'm making a guess that she is actually a he where it counts, Ayla.Someone who knows business, who knows intimately how the levers of power are worked, and who knows the mutant community, which I've mostly hidden from, much better than I. Someone who reputation in the business world is stellar.
Oh boy, Bailey is upset that her mom and Aunt Matilda never said they were mutants, or that her mom is also a changeling. Bailey feeling like a lie of omission is still a lie, oh boy. Vanessa actually came up to the 2nd floor to check out how the cottages have changed since she was in school. Some of best friends and one former teammate were Poesies, so knows to keep the secret.
Bwahaha, the teasing about the 'old days' by Flower and Vanessa's response, too funny. Tales from Mrs. Horton about Debra and Kayda, so cute how Laura reacts to Vanessa bringing up Antonia. Whateley alums having much higher odds of romances actually lasting, one of the benefits of going there.
Making chicken for Vanessa and Lanie and the kids are there.
Bwahahaha, nice reference. Constance, Wyatt Junior's red-headed twin sister, trying to sneak cookies, that never gets old.Laura's jaw dropped. "I am not a minion!" she protested. "Why does everyone keep calling me a minion?" "Yeah!" Wyatt Junior retorted boldly from one door of the kitchen. "Everyone knows minions aren't blue! They're yellow!"
Wyatt takes the cookies and the little cutie, young Steven, tattles on him to Laura. Boy, Laura knows how to manipulate little kids, she is going to make a great mother. Caramel custard, I would take that over cookies. Wyatt puts the cookies back and Steven tattles again, well trained boy, his siblings won't get away with anything with him around.
Oh boy, Lanie and Wyatt see how good Laura is with cooking and kids and say she is hired for babysitting, too good for her own good. Aunt Kayda, all of Lanie and Wyatt's kids are so adorable. Nice to see Laura watch the kids while Lanie and Vanessa chat.
Laura isn't tired after all that, starting to think she has the energy of a higher exemplar than 1. And proven wrong, dozed off five minutes later. And Laura spending the night.
Time so far like mother-daughter and a tear of regret to her eye, ouch."Can I keep her?" Vanessa chuckled.
Great, blood samples to confirm the two subjects are stable, have the Secret Squirrels tailing one of them, which is Laura. They messed up their own plans by having the SS watching one target. And how the talk, sounds like Dr. Stauffer on the other end.
Yikes, woken up by Vanessa screaming because of a nightmare and going to comfort her. Out at the lake and Vanessa tells Laura what happened with Unhcegila. Telling how she lost friends and it ended the Sioux Falls League. No amount of therapy will completely end the nightmares caused by that trauma. Laura feeling the responsibility of helping Vanessa could end up crushing her, she doesn't know her own strength.
Lanie and the kids back to visit again. And Laura taking the kids to the park so they don't make Vanessa feel worse, Lanie understanding why. With the way Lanie talks about the twins and the look she gave Laura, I'm guessing those two manifested early and have a telepathic link among other things.
MCO being asses to Jake on his return flight and won't be in until late, no wonder Vanessa is upset. And Lanie excited about Laura being on the tech track, she teaches in the advanced technology department.
Lanie and Laura tech talk, priceless. And Lanie taking them to the Brown Moose for lunch, no arguing, don't even try when Lanie has her mind made up."Laura, you are in the presence of the Lab Legend, the Gadgeteer Goddess, the Mechanism Maestra, the Gizmo Queen..." "Stop it!" the redhead protested. "Have you heard the tales yet about a student called Loophole?" Vanessa continued. Laura's eyes bulged forth and her jaw dropped. "You're...Loophole?" she stammered. "Everyone talks about you...you're a...a legend!"
Laura left with the kids while the adults went to pick up Dr. Barton and she is making caramel-pecan rolls!
Genius! Awww, borrow it already, Lanie, it would help you so much with the twins.Laura handed her the device. "I didn't shoot them or anything," Laura said quickly in her defense. "This is a neural dampener. When the twins get a little too...conspiratorial, I....kind of guessed it was because of some level of telepathic connection. So I set the neural dampener to generate a very low-level field."
And Dr. Barton is right, Laura is pretty amazing, most girls her age can't do what she does, keeping those kids under control especially. And if Laura knew how bad that incident was, she would never ask about it again. Nightmare fuel doesn't cover it.
Latonya Mullens, a member of the Masterminds, goes to meet someone in the woods near Whitman Cottage. Blood samples and put Latonya in contact with the committee, playing a dangerous game. Open up the targets so they can get samples, very not good.
Jennifer Kelly and Sarah Williams, girlfriend is a doctor and Nubian princess as Jennifer calls her. Wait, Jennifer has amnesia, yet is an Exemplar, sounds like she could be who Kayda is looking for after all. Mysterious extra sensory perception that allowed her to pick up on Kayda, sounding more and more like Tansy to me.
Not the villain on that MID, and called an Irish Rose, what is going on."Why would I want more...kids..." Jennifer said slowly, her eyes going wide as she realized a she had just had a flash of memory from before her amnesia.
Wait, what?! Jennifer and Sarah after Jennifer is checked out, yet this line confuses me.
A mother at least twice, what is going on. Is this somehow Lanie yet not Lanie or what. And she has a red band on her MID, thus a villain who has been in prison, so doesn't want to be that person. Who is she?"Ladies?" he asked softly and Elaine smiled, touched by the older doctor's respect for her modesty.
Brought down to the vehicles lab to ask Laura to babysit so Lanie and Wyatt can go on a movie date. Good thing she has the time to do it, plus coding her ID to come and go to The Village without causing security and staff to worry, very nice.
'Mayhem central', good name for the Cody household with the parents and kids. The book on the history of the Sioux Falls League, oh boy, hope it doesn't go into too graphic of detail on their final mission together.
Laura is good, all the kids asleep, she deserves to be paid well. Guessing the friend that told Lanie that piece of advice was Ayla. Dr. Barton wished to get Daniel Moate into the History Department at Whateley, he would have been great. A secret room behind the bookcase which Dr. Barton reveals to Laura, their old supersuits in there among other things. Laura shocked to find out he was Tractor and Vanessa was Vanity Girl, why hide the medals since they are heroes.
Calling Farm Boy, Ping Pong and Card Trick the real heroes and himself just a survivor, ouch.
A friend which Vanessa needs, Vanessa is like a second mother to Laura with how they interact, it is great to see them together."Because Vanessa needed you the other night, and you were there for her. She...she needs someone like you. Someone younger, caring, supportive, non-judgmental. Someone who doesn't remind her of...of things."
Luring the SS tail away with an illusionary double, telepathic illusion from how the boy responds. Invisible knockout gas in a dart, KOed target on her way to her cottage, Laura out and he takes a sample and leaves, with no evidence otherwise except maybe a close medical examination on the inside of her elbow.
And with the concern from Mrs. Horton and call from Dr. Barton, Laura confirmed as the target from her missing time while unconscious. And another babysitting job for the Codys, this time on Sunday morning.
Sloppy, they left evidence, bruised on her arm and small spot of dried blood on the shirtsleeve."You should answer it, 'Laura's Babysitting Service'," Bailey shot back. "Oh, hush!"
Wait, sample from the boy, got it when he came into medical center with an injury, so Laura is the female target, who is the male. And leaving Kansas City for Los Angeles area, Dr. Stauffer works out of the Kansas City area if I recall. Plus Laura is from there. Who is male and from the Kansas City area which we have seen?
Loved this story, lots of character development and interaction for Laura, learning how good she is with cooking, housework and even kids like Wyatt and Lanie's firsthand. Plus a friend to Vanessa Barton, like having a second mother and being someone the older woman can confide in. Excellent story, plus the details of those monitoring Laura plus now we know the second target is a male, adds more questions than answers but still opens up a lot for more speculation. Can't wait for the next story, seeing Laura interact with everyone is fun.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Malady
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... Fullerton has Memory Mods associated with it... We have an Amnesiac. Connecting...
Omg. I'm so out of it! Amnesiac is Laura's mom, who was a supervil, Spinel, as the Vanguard and other data shows?? And the woman who she thinks is her mom, actually isn't, 'cause she got memory modded post-Fullerton? ... Do those who were post-Fullerton even know their status??
Woah. Nightmares... Sad! ... Hints at Gen2 Biotech allowing homosexual reproduction and kids from infertiles, 'cause cells are cells, and sufficient biotech can change one type into others...
Could Laura get enough Daniel Moate info to divine Hikaru's past??
- E. E. Nalley
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Wait, what?! Jennifer and Sarah after Jennifer is checked out, yet this line confuses me.A mother at least twice, what is going on. Is this somehow Lanie yet not Lanie or what. And she has a red band on her MID, thus a villain who has been in prison, so doesn't want to be that person. Who is she?"Ladies?" he asked softly and Elaine smiled, touched by the older doctor's respect for her modesty.
I'm afraid this is my fault. I was in the middle of writing something else, when Elrod reminded me he needed this scene and so I banged it out in 5 minutes and had a brain fart. And since it was put in right before being published yesterday it slips through editing. So Mea Culpa on that one. It has been fixed.
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I will say as far as the nicknaming goes, Jennifer's last name is Kelly, which is an Irish surname. Jennifer calls Sarah her Nubian Princess because she is African-American with classic features, so both nicknames are playing on their family origins you might say.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Katssun
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Laura is really raking in the cash. Perfect for components for weapons! Will Tia be able to afford Laura's new competitive housekeeper-babysitter rates? Someone might have to start modelling~
At least Hikaru has an entire country (and blue and green clothing) to pay for it.
Well, Laura is blue. She would know what a bruise looks like on her skin where a normal student/ninja would assume that everything went perfect.Malady wrote: Woah. Such many reveals! ... Why didn't that plan work on Laura like it was supposed to? Or did it work fine, and they just didn't expect her to check?
"Spinel being Laura's mom" is a scam to have the Squirrels keep an eye on Laura while the Vanguard Ev Rocks student group is unable to maintain surveillance due to their smaller numbers. Laura's mom is her own mother, it just looks like Laura's mutation was forced, which assuming she stays healthy, isn't really a problem for her, to be honest. Aside from being blue.Omg. I'm so out of it! Amnesiac is Laura's mom, who was a supervil, Spinel, as the Vanguard and other data shows?? And the woman who she thinks is her mom, actually isn't, 'cause she got memory modded post-Fullerton? ... Do those who were post-Fullerton even know their status??
"Jennifer" is someone Kayda knows, but is registered as a villain. I mean, it could be Tansy, but I don't feel like Tansy is stupid enough to get caught and end up with a villain MID. I assumed that Tansy is too busy working for Amelia Hartford to keep things in order in Wallachia while her hubby is missing.
- Malady
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... I thought the watcher was Kayda, 'cause she seems like the kind of person to have supernatural hints and stuff? But it's never explicitly said? ... What are the hints?
- Iwasforger03
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More info! Not everyone died! Survivors left with visions and ghosts!
What on earth?
Psychic mutant run out of control?
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- Katssun
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Brown skin, dark hair, lives in New York (confirmed by Tractor when Laura asked about the photo in his office), blond lover, and redhead friend. Then it's confirmed when she mentioned dreamwalking.Malady wrote: ... I thought the watcher was Kayda, 'cause she seems like the kind of person to have supernatural hints and stuff? But it's never explicitly said? ... What are the hints?
- Valentine
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Malady wrote: And Hikaru just brushes off the closet like it's no big deal. 'Cause of the mem loss? Or are they relatively cheap in Japan??? Or its a thing any rich girl has?
... I thought the watcher was Kayda, 'cause she seems like the kind of person to have supernatural hints and stuff? But it's never explicitly said? ... What are the hints?
Isn't she a member of the Japanese Imperial House? A Mobius closet wouldn't be too much to expect.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- Katssun
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Vanessa and Laura's relationship is endearing and kind of weird at the same time. She's helping the Barton's experience something that they had put off for too long until it was too late, but Laura already has a loving mom, so maybe she's getting more out of the Jake side of this equation, with getting a surrogate father figure. I mean, she's totally latched onto him to the point that everyone notices. Still, what she's providing to Vanessa is invaluable.
But I'm really confused by Bailey's situation. We definitely need some more information there.
When does the mean teasing about Laura being a total suck-up going to start? After Brita starts making nasty remarks meant to be overheard in the cafeteria?
- Astrodragon
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Katssun wrote: Lanie has got to be the only mother in the world who doesn't get upset that the babysitter is using a psychic dampening field (or any other kind of brainwave inhibitor) on her children.
Normal For Whateley.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- mittfh
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Meanwhile, as for Hikaru's wardrobe (both the furniture and contents), don't forget she's a member of the Imperial Family, who's also avatar to a pretty important deity, so she is likely to get showered with gifts. OK, so most of them come from Kako, but nonetheless...
Speaking of Hikaru, hopefully at some point in her four year stint at Whateley, knowledge of her former identity will be downgraded from what appears to be Top Secret - and she'll be clued in to the nature of Poe (while there is potentially the complicating factor of Kurenai, given the AI's mission [referred to as a VI here as Laura's unaware of Kurenai's true nature], it's likely she'd make a solemn oath on pain of deletion to uphold the secret).
Then there's our enigmatic amnesiac gem courier, who we're still getting teased with nuggets of information and hints; with the added revelation she reminds Kayda of someone significant from the past, who she once felt a connection to. Puzzling. While it's possible she's been encountered before in G1, it's equally plausible she's someone we haven't met yet in G1 - or someone whom Kayda first encountered after graduating. Of course, the Canon Authors probably know exactly what's going on, but almost certainly won't reveal anything immediately useful to us outside the context of their tales...
We've also got two more confirmed teachers: Vanessa in Mystic Arts (we already knew Jake taught history, of course, but I don't think we'd previously been told Vanessa taught), while Lainie couldn't bear to be parted from the workshop so now teaches down there (possibly with Carmen surrepticiously helping keep an eye on projects, so they don't mysteriously vanish at the hands of a light-fingered student)

As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
- null0trooper
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Katssun wrote: Lanie has got to be the only mother in the world who doesn't get upset that the babysitter is using a psychic dampening field (or any other kind of brainwave inhibitor) on her children.
Other than television? It's been used to pacify entire populations at a time.
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I concur the Financier is probably Ayla, with the coffee, and other clues OF COURSE I didn't see any of his common speech patterns (other than status based) in the Financier's dialog, but of course that means little, and the rest of Kimba may have teased that out of him.Anne wrote: I'm going to say that Financier is Ayla. The facts fit pretty closely. My guess for Jennifer Kelly is probably off the wall but I think she is Lanath. Again the facts that we know lead that way... And just where are her children? We know that Lanie has one, she's pregnant in gen 1... Given what we know of mutant biology, it's a wonder that she only has three!
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No, not really. Still. I actually do agree, both our courier and our "I lost my spirit" lady are likely to be either new or someone very recently introduced.
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The only circumstance in which I could see Ayla being Financier would be if he deliberately built a second identity, probably with the help of some appearance-changing devises, in order to keep a presence in the... less-open... aspects of mutant business. Meaning, there is the well-known young tycoon Ayla Goodkind of AJK Inc, and there's this shady character named Financier, and very, very few people know they are one and the same.
As for the jewel courier being Laneth... well, the only way I can imagine it happening is if Laneth was somehow split from Lainie. Which we were told that would kill both of them eventually. Perhaps someone cloned Loophole?
- Iwasforger03
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And we are always looking for new signs of our favorites from Gen 1 surviving in Gen 2.
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- Anne
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Sir Lee wrote:
As for the jewel courier being Laneth... well, the only way I can imagine it happening is if Laneth was somehow split from Lainie. Which we were told that would kill both of them eventually. Perhaps someone cloned Loophole?
Maybe I was misreading the last bit about her (Lanath), but it seemed that she was given an ID by Mrs Carson. That she was acting as an independent person. I can't recall the story title but it seemed like the Coyote essentially split her off and gave her a body somehow..
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I can't help thinking that I should have been able to make the connections between all the elements you have shown us in this story and those from previous stories but it seems my brain does not want to allow me to do that.
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- Ametros
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However, I (like a few others) can only say that this story seemed rather... Wicked.

Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
- Valentine
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Don't Drick and Drive.
- E. E. Nalley
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Anne wrote:
Sir Lee wrote:
As for the jewel courier being Laneth... well, the only way I can imagine it happening is if Laneth was somehow split from Lainie. Which we were told that would kill both of them eventually. Perhaps someone cloned Loophole?
Maybe I was misreading the last bit about her (Lanath), but it seemed that she was given an ID by Mrs Carson. That she was acting as an independent person. I can't recall the story title but it seemed like the Coyote essentially split her off and gave her a body somehow..
You're remembering events from 2 different stories. Coyote gave Laneth the body as a temporary measure in Kayda 10 There's no Place like Poe, but the wicked identity was created at Mrs. Carson's request by Ms. Hartford back in the mind blowing Whilst Any Speaks!
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I don't know why, but this seems like the type of grey-hat role that Hartford is grooming her towards.
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I concur the Financier is probably Ayla, with the coffee, and other clues OF COURSE I didn't see any of his common speech patterns (other than status based) in the Financier's dialog, but of course that means little, and the rest of Kimba may have teased that out of him.Anne wrote: I'm going to say that Financier is Ayla. The facts fit pretty closely. My guess for Jennifer Kelly is probably off the wall but I think she is Lanath. Again the facts that we know lead that way... And just where are her children? We know that Lanie has one, she's pregnant in gen 1... Given what we know of mutant biology, it's a wonder that she only has three!
You have to bear in mind that I am not nearly as good with Ayla's speech patterns as Diane, the original writer. Same holds true for any of us writing any other Team Kimba members. So regardless of whether the Financier is Ayla, the speech patterns of Financier alone are not a legitimate clue. And there are clues aplenty strewn about throughout the story

And perhaps it's Tansy? Interesting theory. Not Ayla or Ayla? I won't say.
But we WILL be seeing more of the Financier as the plot
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So unless Elrod is doing something besides throwing out a red herring (ya know that needs an emoticon) with the Tansy bit here, I'm sticking with my guesses until proven wrong by the next episode. Part of the issue of why no one is discussing Laura is that her story has so many old faces in new places and other plots that while they involve Laura they don't yet cause her much angst except the lost time and bruise bit.
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The Bartons aren't really "old faces" in my opinion. Almost all their character development has been within Gen 2. Laura's name is in the title, but this was really a story about the Bartons.Anne wrote: Part of the issue of why no one is discussing Laura is that her story has so many old faces in new places and other plots that while they involve Laura they don't yet cause her much angst except the lost time and bruise bit.
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The Bartons aren't really "old faces" in my opinion. Almost all their character development has been within Gen 2. Laura's name is in the title, but this was really a story about the Bartons.Anne wrote: Part of the issue of why no one is discussing Laura is that her story has so many old faces in new places and other plots that while they involve Laura they don't yet cause her much angst except the lost time and bruise bit.
Do you think that there might be a REASON that I have Laura interacting so heavily with the Bartons and the Codys? Like some nefarious plot and scheme?
I wouldn't do that, now, would I? Not to dear, sweet, innocent Laura ....
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elrodw wrote: Do you think that there might be a REASON that I have Laura interacting so heavily with the Bartons and the Codys? Like some nefarious plot and scheme?
I wouldn't do that, now, would I? Not to dear, sweet, innocent Laura ....
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But seriously, I think it's more Laura being inspired into domestic tech and stuff, which is a rare field of Gadgeteering / Devising? ... And into power dampeners, like that psi dampener. ... Which may also relate to anti-Diedricks tech?
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Laura's mom and sister get eaten by zombie bison, Tractor and Lanie fight over who gets to adopt her, trashing a portion of Schuster, and Laura decides that no matter who wins...she needs a raise?!?elrodw wrote:
Do you think that there might be a REASON that I have Laura interacting so heavily with the Bartons and the Codys? Like some nefarious plot and scheme?
I wouldn't do that, now, would I? Not to dear, sweet, innocent Laura ....
Edit: or like Malady said, it might be putting Laura on the track to continue developing nervous system medical devices, which she already has some limited experience with from her favorite weapon.
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I ran through several people it could be, before I came up with who I think it is:
Jade/Jinn/Jann was one option. Spending years working with and for Ayla, she would be in a great position to learn High Finance.
Vox would be a choice too, but we've already seen her.
Tansy works, as she already knows the Finance stuff.
Diamondback, but I think the GSD would have been mentioned.
Jadis, but she is now Frost.
Bunny? Nah, she likes making stuff too much to spend her time being Warren Buffet.
Reach was a thought, mostly just from the girl/boy with a pregnant S/O.
But I finally came down to two, and eliminated one of them. My final choices.
Zenith and Sahar, with Sahar winning. Between the two of them,they could easily dominate the financial markets, and Sahar is perfect for infiltrating an organization.
So I think Sahar is "Financier."
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MageOhki wrote: And she wouldn't have brought the closet, it was a gift as a bribe. (Side note, a lot of her 'gifts' that she gets ala clothing, or stuff like that is more that she gets them to wear/be seen in/seen using, for avdert purposes as much as 'buying favor' with Hikaru's goddess. There's actually a subplot about that in detail.)
So what you're saying... Is that if one were to give an honest gift to Hikaru, they should include a wolf plush to make it clear it's not an attempt to curry Amaterasu's favour?

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Iwasforger03 wrote: Thanks Elrod, good diversion with the Tansy toss.
Anne wrote: So unless Elrod is doing something besides throwing out a red herring (ya know that needs an emoticon) with the Tansy bit here,
What am I, chopped liver? Elrod's not the one who first brought up Tansy as possibly being Financier.
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I think you're on to something. Financier is Warren Buffet, who Nimbus dosed by accident due to a mishap during David Goodkind's birthday party.Valentine wrote: Bunny? Nah, she likes making stuff too much to spend her time being Warren Buffet.
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elrodw wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
I concur the Financier is probably Ayla, with the coffee, and other clues OF COURSE I didn't see any of his common speech patterns (other than status based) in the Financier's dialog, but of course that means little, and the rest of Kimba may have teased that out of him.Anne wrote: I'm going to say that Financier is Ayla. The facts fit pretty closely. My guess for Jennifer Kelly is probably off the wall but I think she is Lanath. Again the facts that we know lead that way... And just where are her children? We know that Lanie has one, she's pregnant in gen 1... Given what we know of mutant biology, it's a wonder that she only has three!
You have to bear in mind that I am not nearly as good with Ayla's speech patterns as Diane, the original writer. Same holds true for any of us writing any other Team Kimba members. So regardless of whether the Financier is Ayla, the speech patterns of Financier alone are not a legitimate clue. And there are clues aplenty strewn about throughout the story
And perhaps it's Tansy? Interesting theory. Not Ayla or Ayla? I won't say.
But we WILL be seeing more of the Financier as the plotthickensdevelops.
So above I posited Jennifer Kelly as Lanath, but what if she's actually Tansy? With the new information in Autumn Leaves it seems remotely possible. I really am enjoying all the work the authors here put out.
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Financier could be a name Ayla uses when working deals "off the table" or "behind closed doors" etc. Stuff that isn't supposed to make it into the press.
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The new revelations don't rule out Tansy as Jennifer Kelly the jewel courier. They do make it unlikely. But as she is living in disguise and we may assume that she is whom Kadya is looking for, it may be possible that she is living among those who lost their memories due to whatever disruption happens in 2013 and has taken up a new life. Which may mean that one or more of the Cody kids is hers... Hey I'll stretch the facts my way at least as an opinion.

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Do remember that Jennifer Kelly's natural hair colour is apparently red, and she's referred to as an Irish Rose for it and presumably more. We know that Tansy was in the know about why Elaine would rather Kayda avoid New York, but not much more than that.
So at least a few of us have a semi-wild theory that Laneth somehow got a permanent body and becomes Jennifer Kelly. But what if it that last part isn't the case? What if Lanie became Jennifer Kelly, and Laneth is the Elaine Cody we know in Gen 2?

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Nah. David's too busy being Jennifer Kelly.Valentine wrote: We've skipped the obvious person to be Financier. David Goodkind.
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If he is, then "Mysterious Boy" and "Mysterious Girl" are likely... Wait, no, they're not Cadets / Squirrels / Spy Kids, given how they speak of them... Hmm...
If we already know the Mysterious Boy and Girl, then presumably they're not anyone close to their targets, else they could just chat them up...
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Iwasforger03 wrote: With the recent reveal that it is extremely improbable to be Tansy and the implication their partner is a woman, that drastically narrows the list... but Ayla is still ON that list.
Financier could be a name Ayla uses when working deals "off the table" or "behind closed doors" etc. Stuff that isn't supposed to make it into the press.
And of course we do not know if Ayla even survives Zulu.
Of team Kimba most are unaccounted for and some fo them are extremely high profile.
We know Fey is still around as she appears in several stories, but Tenyo would be equally difficult to hide anywhere in the world, being a class X entity herself too, being able to power much of the global economy by herself and equally able to blow a huge chunk out of the planet. And it is not as if her distinctive likeness is possible to hide. I can't see her working for the CIA (and I don't think 'uncle' understood at all what kind of power he was trying to scam into signing up) so she either must have gotten killed during Zulu or she left the planet along with Jade (who is also mia, though in her case that is more understandable as creatively powerful as she is, she is not powerful on a world shattering scale)
Chou is missing too, though that is likely because it has been set up that she was at Whateley for Zulu, and once that was solved she was either killed fixing the imbalance (like many (most?) Handmaids were in the past) or she was allowed to retire.
And Ayla is also on the list of being too famous and too powerful to conveniently disappear in obscurity. Being a billionaire teenager and a Goodkind to boot (and the relation with those Goodkinds was going to come out sooner rather than later once the more determined journalists started digging) his likeness would have landed her on every publication, and not just the financial ones. Just the act of saving Marvel from itself (and assuming the marvel movie universe took off in the Whateleyverse as well) would make her the hero of millions of fans who would want to know everything about the saviour of superhero movies. And who had the collective resources to find out that everything.
So if Ayla is Financier (and the story does go out of its way to suggest it is) something major must have happened that deeply affected both his character and his appearance that none of those present recognised him.
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Fey, Chaka, Jadis, Dragonrider, Nephandus, Ringo, Kodiak, Loophole, Pejuta, Tansy, Eldritch... there must be more people... who am I missing?
(We have also seen a few younger siblings of Gen1 students, but that by itself is no evidence that the older sibling is still alive)
Maybe we should start adding a special category to the Wiki for "Gen1 characters with data from Gen2?" Man, that's a mouthful and a half... perhaps "Spoilers from Gen2"?
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Then there's Spark Suits, Grease Skin or whatever, Bunny and Jinntech.
Diamondback?
... Hmm... No Gen1-refs in the Homer Gallery?
Sahar...
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What? Her most distinctive features are weird hair, pointy ears, cat eyes, and big canines. These are all very possible to hide.Erianaiel wrote: And it is not as if her distinctive likeness is possible to hide.
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Erianaiel wrote:
Iwasforger03 wrote:
Financier could be a name Ayla uses when working deals "off the table" or "behind closed doors" etc. Stuff that isn't supposed to make it into the press.
And of course we do not know if Ayla even survives Zulu.
And Ayla is also on the list of being too famous and too powerful to conveniently disappear in obscurity. Being a billionaire teenager and a Goodkind to boot (and the relation with those Goodkinds was going to come out sooner rather than later once the more determined journalists started digging) his likeness would have landed her on every publication, and not just the financial ones. Just the act of saving Marvel from itself (and assuming the marvel movie universe took off in the Whateleyverse as well) would make her the hero of millions of fans who would want to know everything about the saviour of superhero movies. And who had the collective resources to find out that everything.
So if Ayla is Financier (and the story does go out of its way to suggest it is) something major must have happened that deeply affected both his character and his appearance that none of those present recognised him.
Remember the Bek patterns of creating different public persona's that are the same person behind the mask.
There's no reason that Ayla couldn't be behaving like Hartford, using one public persona for her white-hat work, and another for her grey-hat work.
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Erianaiel wrote:
Iwasforger03 wrote: With the recent reveal that it is extremely improbable to be Tansy and the implication their partner is a woman, that drastically narrows the list... but Ayla is still ON that list.
Financier could be a name Ayla uses when working deals "off the table" or "behind closed doors" etc. Stuff that isn't supposed to make it into the press.
And of course we do not know if Ayla even survives Zulu.
Of team Kimba most are unaccounted for and some fo them are extremely high profile.
We know Fey is still around as she appears in several stories, but Tenyo would be equally difficult to hide anywhere in the world, being a class X entity herself too, being able to power much of the global economy by herself and equally able to blow a huge chunk out of the planet. And it is not as if her distinctive likeness is possible to hide. I can't see her working for the CIA (and I don't think 'uncle' understood at all what kind of power he was trying to scam into signing up) so she either must have gotten killed during Zulu or she left the planet along with Jade (who is also mia, though in her case that is more understandable as creatively powerful as she is, she is not powerful on a world shattering scale)
Chou is missing too, though that is likely because it has been set up that she was at Whateley for Zulu, and once that was solved she was either killed fixing the imbalance (like many (most?) Handmaids were in the past) or she was allowed to retire.
And Ayla is also on the list of being too famous and too powerful to conveniently disappear in obscurity. Being a billionaire teenager and a Goodkind to boot (and the relation with those Goodkinds was going to come out sooner rather than later once the more determined journalists started digging) his likeness would have landed her on every publication, and not just the financial ones. Just the act of saving Marvel from itself (and assuming the marvel movie universe took off in the Whateleyverse as well) would make her the hero of millions of fans who would want to know everything about the saviour of superhero movies. And who had the collective resources to find out that everything.
So if Ayla is Financier (and the story does go out of its way to suggest it is) something major must have happened that deeply affected both his character and his appearance that none of those present recognised him.
Hiding Tennyo is easy, she doesn't have to be on the planet, Ayla : not in focus for POV g2 characters, rich but can keep out of spotlight after family issues taken care of.
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mhalpern wrote: Hiding Tennyo is easy, she doesn't have to be on the planet, Ayla : not in focus for POV g2 characters, rich but can keep out of spotlight after family issues taken care of.
That was the point I was trying to make. If she is on earth Tenyo /would/ be hard to hide. Not necessarily impossible but hard. The combination of Tenyo and the J-team would be harder to hide still. So the lack of common reference to her suggests that either she is dead or she left earth (or the more realistic possibility is that none of the gen 2 authors felt confident in giving her a cameo

Regarding Ayla, the biggest argument against the Financier being her is that even if Ayla is keeping a low profile, just by virtue of being a multi billionaire, owner of Marvel movies (and how many other famous purchases she made since and being a high school student at the time) would have made him famous and is likeness well known. I mean, Bill Gates is keeping a low profile nowadays but everybody still would recognise him in an instant.
So even if Ayla would go by the alter ego of Financier these days, it still stands to reason that he would be recognised. Since he was not this leaves open the possibility the Financier is not Ayla (and in that case, what happened to Ayla), or that something drastic happened in the decade since (and the most likely source of that drastic still is Zulu.)
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Tennyo is capable of space travel and could be on another part of the world.Erianaiel wrote:
mhalpern wrote: Hiding Tennyo is easy, she doesn't have to be on the planet, Ayla : not in focus for POV g2 characters, rich but can keep out of spotlight after family issues taken care of.
That was the point I was trying to make. If she is on earth Tenyo /would/ be hard to hide. Not necessarily impossible but hard. The combination of Tenyo and the J-team would be harder to hide still. So the lack of common reference to her suggests that either she is dead or she left earth (or the more realistic possibility is that none of the gen 2 authors felt confident in giving her a cameo)
Regarding Ayla, the biggest argument against the Financier being her is that even if Ayla is keeping a low profile, just by virtue of being a multi billionaire, owner of Marvel movies (and how many other famous purchases she made since and being a high school student at the time) would have made him famous and is likeness well known. I mean, Bill Gates is keeping a low profile nowadays but everybody still would recognise him in an instant.
So even if Ayla would go by the alter ego of Financier these days, it still stands to reason that he would be recognised. Since he was not this leaves open the possibility the Financier is not Ayla (and in that case, what happened to Ayla), or that something drastic happened in the decade since (and the most likely source of that drastic still is Zulu.)
For Ayla, you do realize that maybe only 5% of the top 1% are household names, if Ayla doesn't take a visible part in owning those properties, then no one would know, also Ayla owns Marvel COMICS the MCU is owned by Disney...
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Also, you're really overstating the likeliness that we'd have heard about her. Let's say Tennyo has settled down as a local hero in Colorado Springs and isn't using any kind of disguise or secret identity. When not fighting crime, she openly teaches ballroom dance at the Starstalker Studio, where she routinely dances on the walls and ceilings. Zero secrecy. Yet, why would Laura, Erica, Hikaru, Pat, or any of the other students who aren't from that specific city or region even know she exists, let alone think to comment about her? The adults at Whateley like Caitlin and Imp might know what she's up to, but at what point would she have been a relevant person to think about during their POV sequences, or to bring up during dialog? Nor has her existence been pertinent to the Kayda/Tansy/Elaine stuff.
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Also, Disney DOES own Marvel Comics in the RealWorld. They bought the company, lock, stock and barrel so they would own the characters outright. But as for Ayla selling Marvel to Disney? Might happen, I guess, but Ayla strikes me as more of a Warren Buffett-style investor -- purchases undervalued corporations, fixes what's wrong with them (usually bad administration) so they become profitable, and keeps them. Berkshire Hathaway hardly ever divests a company they own.
And you do have a point about most billionaires being unknown to the general public, Ayla's name might be a bit notorious due to his youth, but if he does not draw attention to himself (the way that, say, Elon Musk does), few people would know what he looks like. That is compounded by the facts that (a) Beautiful people (and Ayla is model-beautiful) tend to have less distinguishing features, (b) Adult 24-year-old Ayla might look somewhat different than teenager Ayla, and (c) women (and Ayla counts as a woman, appearance-wise) have all sorts of options to change their looks. So, it's conceivable that Financier is Ayla with a different hairstyle, different makeup, different clothes, leveraging the fact that he's unlikely to meet somebody who knows him well enough as Ayla to see through the disguise.