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Question Absinthe 2: The Absinthe of Malice

7 years 6 months ago - 7 years 6 months ago #201 by Anne
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  • Malady wrote: And now I'm wondering about Markham and Cannell's histories that they get to work at Whateley... Bellows was former military of some kind?


    From the story where he gets permission to hear about the Dragon Slayers it is pretty clear that Bellows has some sort of military background. What that background is is not clear because we really haven't seen his back story. All we know for sure is that he is a low level empath and would have been probably considered an underdog if he had (maybe he did?) attended Whateley.
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    7 years 6 months ago #202 by E. E. Nalley
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  • I have moved this topic to the Characters section under a topic titled Psychiatric Department of Whateley Academy. Move any following conversations there and return to discussing Absinthe 2 here.

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    7 years 6 months ago #203 by marie7342231
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  • LOVE the latest chapter. I was wondering how you'd adjust canon material from what was Aunghadhail's recollection of Vauldrene. Inserting Kodiak was brilliant and made total sense.

    Can't wait for the conclusion and to see Gwen get into NEW adventures :-)

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    7 years 5 months ago #204 by Iwasforger03
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  • I finally caught up on Absinthe. As usual, I loved your work Morpheus.

    I'm a huge fan.

    And I really hope Collin can get past seeing "Adam" and start to just see Gwen... cause I really think he still has feelings for her. He's just not sure what to do with them and weirded out.

    I hope this whole fight works out, because I know Centurion is going to be going for hurt.

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    7 years 4 months ago #205 by MM2ss
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  • The newest installment is excellent as always. The adaptations from the non cannon to cannon version were wonderful, I dare say seamless. The only way this story could have been better would be with a true to the written word movie to go along with it.
    7 years 4 months ago #206 by Sir Lee
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  • One technical issue, however... missing a lot, and I mean a lot, of open quotes at the beginning of paragraphs. A quick regexp search found what seem to be more than 400 cases. Probably some issue with conversion scripts.

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    7 years 4 months ago #207 by mhalpern
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  • I always felt this was the best part of Absinthe 2, especially with the letter threat and the part where the Pranksters of Poe realized who pranked them

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    7 years 4 months ago #208 by DanZilla
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  • Sir Lee wrote: One technical issue, however... missing a lot, and I mean a lot, of open quotes at the beginning of paragraphs. A quick regexp search found what seem to be more than 400 cases. Probably some issue with conversion scripts.


    Thanks, yeah 403 of them as far as I can tell... all fixed now but let me know if you see anything else.
    7 years 4 months ago #209 by Angeldude
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  • I wonderful finale to book 2.

    As awesome as it was, I think that beat-down she gave to Centurion disqualifies her from Lawful-Good. That was pretty brutal and the pain illusion is something I've only seen villains like Exquisite use.

    I find it amusing that she mentions having trouble with brute-force spells. If I'm not mistaken, in the not-yet-canon Whisper 2, Whisper mentions having the exact same problem.

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    7 years 4 months ago - 7 years 4 months ago #210 by Malady
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  • It was great rereading it again!

    And hinting at True Names with the pixie names or something...

    Hope they'll eventually know Fey isn't Aung, and warm up to her... Koehnes might have an issue with that, though.

    ... *Wonders at worldwide pixie population count* ... IIRC, are pixies Tink-sized? Or larger?

    The summary at the end feels real different to the rest of the story, but has a nice conclusion-y feel.

    When her dad is told / figures out that Collin X Gwen are a couple... So waiting for that!

    Porcelain's Porcelain is hiding her aura, IIRC?

    Fixx X Porcelain Ship! YEAH!

    ^ Lol if Whisper's a reincarnation of Absinthe's ancestor's mom.
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    7 years 4 months ago #211 by Katssun
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  • Strangely enough, I found it the official version to be quite moving when it comes to Centurion's friends. When Gwen casts the faerie fire pain illusion, Slingshot and Switchblade are genuinely concerned for him.

    They're rat bastards sometimes, but they're still people.

    It's easy to forget that the villains are people too, who have their own perspective. Maybe they don't deserve sympathy for what they've done to Gwen and friends, but I still felt that little ping of empathy.
    7 years 4 months ago #212 by annachie
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  • Whisper is unique among the elves as she is the only one that isn't a reincarnation of an earlier elf in some form or another. (Though I believe ther are still some elves that haven't specifically said they are)

    So we have at least one more Glow/Psyber story in the works?
    7 years 4 months ago #213 by Morpheus
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  • I do have plans for another Glow story.

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    7 years 4 months ago #214 by Dreamer
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  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


    Absinthe 2: The Absinthe of Malice Part 5 comments
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    7 years 4 months ago #215 by Iwasforger03
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  • I was so happy to get more Absinthe! It was great! I'm so happy for Gwen and Collin, but I admit... I want to see a date. I want to see Gwen OR Collin work up the courage to ask the other out to a proper and official date at the new campus restaurant Phase created.

    I also want someone to explain to Collin just a little of what's going on, to confirm his suspicions. I also want someone to tell Cindy, Lina, Dana, and Jinx that Collin has already pegged to them being couples.

    I'm really happy for the mutual feelings (I think) between Porcelain and Fixx, though I'm a touch worried how a relationship between them will work given her condition... and I imagine she feels the same way. Perhaps she's given up hope of controlling her power too soon. While a permanent removal of her shell may be impossible, perhaps she could learn to restrain it for a few hours or even minutes at a time, or to partially remove it. I can only hope.

    I'm a touch worried about Gwen having an unapproved magical Skype Tree on campus like that. It just seems like there's a chance it could be used for serious ill.

    I too am eager for the day Dad learns about Collin. I suspect this will happen over Christmas, since they live in the same hometown. They'll go on a date, have an incident, get seen kissing, something. It will probably be Adorable, however. However: Gwen, don't go for sex too early. I'm not gonna tell you to wait for marriage (I don't have the experience to speak first hand on that), but I do know second hand that waiting for the right person and moment is worth it. Second hand, granted. I'm also just a romantic and I think it makes the moment sweeter for us readers.

    Which reminds. Mutant relationships shown so far have a seemingly higher degree of permanency than normal for high school romance. Perhaps we've been shown a misleading sample size, but that just feels like the case. It's been noted in a few stories.

    I don't have any problem with that, in point of fact. I like the idea of relationships working past their issues and staying together. I think it's sweet, and I'm a major Romantic/Shipper. I like my perferred couples to stay together, or even just my favorite characters to find and keep that measure of happiness.


    As ever Morpheus, you are awesome. We love you. Thank you. Since my return, you've rapidly pushed yourself to my top favorite whateley authors. No, I will not name the others. This is not a competition. But I really do love your work.

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    7 years 4 months ago #216 by Valentine
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  • annachie wrote: Whisper is unique among the elves as she is the only one that isn't a reincarnation of an earlier elf in some form or another. (Though I believe ther are still some elves that haven't specifically said they are)


    Koala wanders by, "I'm not a bloody elf."

    So we have at least one more Glow/Psyber story in the works?


    The Liberty League is going to be looking for an odds mangler given the number of mutants that keep dropping in on them.

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    7 years 4 months ago #217 by pumpernickel
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  • Iwasforger03 wrote: I'm really happy for the mutual feelings (I think) between Porcelain and Fixx, though I'm a touch worried how a relationship between them will work given her condition... and I imagine she feels the same way. Perhaps she's given up hope of controlling her power too soon. While a permanent removal of her shell may be impossible, perhaps she could learn to restrain it for a few hours or even minutes at a time, or to partially remove it. I can only hope.


    If you want to know what the deal with Porcelain is and what happens to her and Fixx, may I direct you to: bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/50816/porcelain-mask
    Her story has been out for over three years, since shortly after Absinthe 2 was published the first time, so if you want to find out, it's there for you. I won't spoil anything though.
    7 years 4 months ago #218 by Anne
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  • pumpernickel wrote:
    If you want to know what the deal with Porcelain is and what happens to her and Fixx, may I direct you to: bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/50816/porcelain-mask
    Her story has been out for over three years, since shortly after Absinthe 2 was published the first time, so if you want to find out, it's there for you. I won't spoil anything though.


    Considering this story, how soon should we expect to see a canon version of it? Not much needed except a bit of a proofread if Morpheous wishes to have that accomplished.
    7 years 4 months ago #219 by Iwasforger03
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  • I would love to see Porcelain's story, and I approve!

    I'm eagerly looking forward to Absinthe 3.

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    7 years 4 months ago - 7 years 4 months ago #220 by Kettlekorn
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  • Angeldude wrote: As awesome as it was, I think that beat-down she gave to Centurion disqualifies her from Lawful-Good. That was pretty brutal and the pain illusion is something I've only seen villains like Exquisite use.

    Yep, illusory-pain is super evil. She should invest in a more ethical means of self defense, like a Taser that incapacitates people with the soft tickling of high voltage electricity. Or for maximal goodness, get herself a tactical baton like Collin so that she can't do anything worse than gently shattering somebody's bones or giving them a harmless little concussion.

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    7 years 4 months ago #221 by Rose Bunny
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  • pumpernickel wrote:

    Iwasforger03 wrote: I'm really happy for the mutual feelings (I think) between Porcelain and Fixx, though I'm a touch worried how a relationship between them will work given her condition... and I imagine she feels the same way. Perhaps she's given up hope of controlling her power too soon. While a permanent removal of her shell may be impossible, perhaps she could learn to restrain it for a few hours or even minutes at a time, or to partially remove it. I can only hope.


    If you want to know what the deal with Porcelain is and what happens to her and Fixx, may I direct you to: bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/50816/porcelain-mask
    Her story has been out for over three years, since shortly after Absinthe 2 was published the first time, so if you want to find out, it's there for you. I won't spoil anything though.


    True, but to fit into canon, there might be changes that make it a much different story.

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  • Rose Bunny wrote:

    pumpernickel wrote:

    Iwasforger03 wrote: I'm really happy for the mutual feelings (I think) between Porcelain and Fixx, though I'm a touch worried how a relationship between them will work given her condition... and I imagine she feels the same way. Perhaps she's given up hope of controlling her power too soon. While a permanent removal of her shell may be impossible, perhaps she could learn to restrain it for a few hours or even minutes at a time, or to partially remove it. I can only hope.


    If you want to know what the deal with Porcelain is and what happens to her and Fixx, may I direct you to: bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/50816/porcelain-mask
    Her story has been out for over three years, since shortly after Absinthe 2 was published the first time, so if you want to find out, it's there for you. I won't spoil anything though.


    True, but to fit into canon, there might be changes that make it a much different story.


    It's possible, but I doubt it. Absinthe had only VERY superficial changes and that had to deal with the loss of a pretty important character. There's nothing apparent in Porcelain's story that would require changing to fit it into canon. So if some things change, I'd be shocked if the main plot or course of the story did. I'd say it's pretty safe to go ahead and read it with confidence that it's going to keep. And even if it doesn't, heck, it's still not a bad read.
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  • Good to get the extended version of Porcelain's story, but that puts the kibosh on one theory for the identity of TWFKAH.

    She would have been a good fit as her GSD means that she has a set of excuses for keeping other people at a distance, and being slightly friendly to others, whilst keeping them at a distance.

    She would also have a great set of self-generating ceramic weapons.

    Back to re-reading the stories to see if i can glean some other hints...


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  • Mister D wrote: Good to get the extended version of Porcelain's story, but that puts the kibosh on one theory for the identity of TWFKAH.

    She would have been a good fit as her GSD means that she has a set of excuses for keeping other people at a distance, and being slightly friendly to others, whilst keeping them at a distance.

    She would also have a great set of self-generating ceramic weapons.

    Back to re-reading the stories to see if i can glean some other hints...

    Yes, except we've already gotten a description of TWFKAH, and Porcelain doesn't fit it.

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  • I really doubt that's Porcelain. I think anyody that Former Hekate was using would not pay attention to somebody like Fixx, and would probably have a smaller group of friends, and pay a little more attention to Team Kimba than Porcelain does (on screen, i mean. As in, they'd always have an eye on the Kimbas). I find it likely, given her pride, she hijacked somebody on the magic track.

    I really want to see Porcelain and Fixx admit they're dating sometime, AND have a reaction from Absinthe and co to finding out Porcelain is a genderswap.

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    7 years 4 months ago - 7 years 4 months ago #226 by konzill
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  • removed, I'm late to the party and was only repeating what has already been said.
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    7 years 4 months ago #227 by Valentine
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  • konzill wrote: removed, I'm late to the party and was only repeating what has already been said.


    That's never stopped anyone before. :P

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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Yes, except we've already gotten a description of TWFKAH, and Porcelain doesn't fit it.

    Dague de L'esprit Part 1 wrote: He was picturing wonderfully humiliating revenge plots when he noticed one of those idiot freshman girls skipping along the trail towards him. She wasn't bad looking, not super hot exemplar body that got you so jaded, but she was fresh meat, and everybody had a first, so why not him and...


    I missed that. TY.

    Another reason to re-read them. :D


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  • Angeldude wrote: As awesome as it was, I think that beat-down she gave to Centurion disqualifies her from Lawful-Good. That was pretty brutal and the pain illusion is something I've only seen villains like Exquisite use.

    I realise I'm slightly late, but I don't think Gwen can qualify as lawful-good anyway, since she herself hates having rules. She's learning she can do a lot if she works with them, yeah, but the underlying emotion is that they're there to be subverted.

    That's more Neutral or Chaotic Good, depending on how far she goes in deciding rules have their place.

    Whisper is unique among the elves as she is the only one that isn't a reincarnation of an earlier elf in some form or another. (Though I believe ther are still some elves that haven't specifically said they are)

    IIRC from the first meeting Nikki has with the four sidhe students on campus: Only one is claiming to actually be a reincarnation with memories. The other three don't care about any past lives and in fact mock the one who does.

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  • Koala isnt a reincarnation of anything. She can be mistaken for a Sidhe easily, but she's really just a batshit crazy devisor.

    And she wants to punch people who call her a poncy fae.

    Or disintegrate them.

    Or implode them.

    Or unleash class 3 disassembler nanos upon them.
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  • Zephyr is actually somewhat hostile towards Nikki for being of a "higher station", if she found out Gwen were connected to Aung, and had been connected in some way to the Queen of the West, that'd get her on the shun list.

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  • I wonder how Zephyr will react to Elle, then.

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    7 years 4 months ago #233 by Iwasforger03
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  • Speaking of Elle... I'll go find that thread and ask.

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  • JG wrote: Koala isnt a reincarnation of anything. She can be mistaken for a Sidhe easily, but she's really just a batshit crazy devisor.

    And she wants to punch people who call her a poncy fae.

    Or disintegrate them.

    Or implode them.

    Or unleash class 3 disassembler nanos upon them.


    Koala is just your dislike of Sidhe made manifest, isn't she? :-p

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    Koala is just your dislike of Sidhe made manifest, isn't she? :-p


    I have no idea what you are talking about. :whistle:
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  • elrodw wrote: I wonder how Zephyr will react to Elle, then.


    Coldly.

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  • Astrodragon wrote:

    elrodw wrote: I wonder how Zephyr will react to Elle, then.


    Coldly.


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