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Question All Hallows Ball
- Yolandria
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- Dreamer
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- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Malady
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If Tansy is a EX-6, that'd be hilarious that it's so high.
Oooh, so many ties to Gen2! Sooo many! There's only a two year gap between then and now!
I'm wishing for a better memory 'cause I think I'm missing a lot...
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Well, now we know a bit about Gen2...
And I need to refresh on Gen2 to see what they know about what's really going on...
Oh, and even more about Gen2's sitch with Elaine, and Laneth and stuff, beyond the obvious black mirror thing!
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Nimbus... And his thing... I wonder what that'll do, if anything, to Ayla and Puppet...
But he's got something happening in Spring 2008, so likely he survives until then...
- mhalpern
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- Dpragan
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Oh dear, Nimbus you FOOL!!!
22. No matter how tempted I am with the prospect of unlimited power, I will not consume any energy field bigger than my head.
151. I will not set myself up as a god. That perilous position is reserved for my trusted lieutenant.
Is Jericho felling well, reduced to just tasteless?
Somehow I think Nimbus arranged for the transfer, but then again he is apparently a control freak(Probably a micro-manager as well) as well as several heinous acts.
In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
All Hallows Ball part 1 comments
Nimbus is in on the campus and has pulled an avatar spirit from its host using a mechanical device! Who is the young woman he is going to test this device on? A college student kidnapped by a rented Syndicate agent for Nimbus, hating him more and more. He has her under a thrall spell, kill him with fire! What he has done to this girl, he is a monster who deserves torment before he dies.October 30th, 2007 A Forgotten Lab, Whateley Academy Tunnel System
Poor Susan, that thrall spell is pure evil, if only she could be freed from it as those Hekate had under it were. That mirror, the one the twins saw in the tunnels in Gen 2 from its description. And he created it to rip spirits out of avatars, sickening.
Okay, not only is he evil, but insane as well. And what he will do if she dies, Nimbus needs to be put down like a rabid dog.There it will stay until I have stolen every avatar spirit on this campus and compress them all into a single, all powerful Force. The Nimbus Force, which only I will control! I will become a god!”
Those lyrics sound like someone has had enough and is standing up to false accusations.
Magical artifacts rumored to be Atlantean, wish I could go to this version of the Smithsonian. Tansy is there is a sim, interesting. Lanie in that form with that outfit on, hehe.The National Museum of American History, The Smithsonian Complex, Washington, DC
Kayda should be glad they are in the sims for this or there would be an audience. At least her face is obscured. Bwahahaha, love how they can tease each other this way and still be friends, one of my favorite things about Lanie and Kayda.She was wearing the new costume Tansy had helped her make, swapping the mini-dress and beads for a tunic and pants. While the outfit was made to look like buckskin, it was actually Kevra with Cemakote and leather accents.
It was also skin tight.
Voice of Hartford to get them back on mission, rats, was enjoying the banter. New codenames for their work with the Committee, She-Bear for Lanie, good grief. And the argument between Hartford and Kayda about her new codename, yikes. And no wonder Kayda argued against it so much, Coyote as a codename, seesh, Hartford could have gone with a different Native American spirit for a codename.
Closed museum so what is the mission? Okay, outfits like that, this man and woman are obviously thieves, what woman in her right mind except for cosplay maybe would wear medieval armor like that. Knight and Daze, great, they are a pun-themed name combo. Dazzle Uniform, bragging about it only to get kicked in the groin, classic. Ouch, blasted right in the nose by one of Tansy's pistols and got a broken nose, Knight needs to learn to never underestimate your opponent.
Darn, Daze is more competent than first thought, taking Tansy's battery packs for her pistols and her spares as well. A brutal move by Tansy, that elbow would take a normal person at least several weeks to months to heal after that. Broken nose, broken elbow, and now broken knee all from Tansy, if I were Knight I would surrender at this point. Oops, Lanie would have killed Knight if this were real or at least put her in critical condition.
*sigh* They had to take down the thieves despite orders."Investigate the alarm, patrol the building and report,” Tansy replied sullenly.
About time someone realized Lanie needs help with her anger issues, they have only gotten worse without help. Tansy in armor and going to see Ito, oh boy, more fun. Now, who is Hartford calling?Elaine's face flushed. “Look, what happened in the sim was an accident, she just fell where...anyway, yes, if someone were to try and kill Tansy or Kayda Ah will gut them like trout!”
Hartford's face was a mask of suppressed fury. “This is no longer a request. From here you will report to Dr Geintz in Hawthorne and set up a schedule of counseling sessions to deal with your anger issues and your inability to scale your attacks properly.”
Boy, Mr. Geintz set-up is getting better down there. And tea made since he was expecting Lanie, most considerate teacher and therapist I've ever seen. Spinoza has some sage advice more could learn from nowadays.Basement, Hawthorne Cottage
Always thought that was how his projections worked, not much use for interacting as we've seen without it. Control and harness her temper for productive ends, once she does look out. Wish more therapists were like him, nice to see Lanie getting help. And a nice quote from Sir Francis Bacon I loved that.The swarthy face split into a smile. “Yes, I can and feel as well. I'm so affectatious that I have all of this for show,” he said with a vague gesture at the books. Shaking his head ruefully he added, “I likely would have gone mad if I could not escape that glass prison and get to experience at least some aspects of life. But, my shortcomings are not what we are here to discuss.”
Room 211, Poe Cottage
Ouch, Kayda still reeling from that one. Wakan Tanka having a talk with Kayda about fighting against her nature, how she is a shaman.There were times the realism in the sims, and her memory, were too good and the memory of the horrific death of Knight gnawed at her the way none of the sims ever had before.
All this may be true, but sometimes it seems like the world has moved on and Wakan Tanka still believes it has barely changed.“You have no place in the war party. Your hand will always find the handle of the tomahawk uncomfortable. You dance the ritual that ensures the hunt, you chant the magic that heals the sick, you beat the drum that call The People to Council Tent to pass the peace pipe and sheath their knives.” The intense gaze turned away, back to the gourd. “Your feet do not walk the War Path.”
“I'm not a pacifist!” Kayda protested. “I won't stand by and let people hurt my friends when I can stop it.”
“Use your mouth to stop it,” the Ptesanwi ordered her. “Not your fist! Wisdom is your club, words your arrows and knowledge is the strength of a shaman. And you are not just a shaman, Wihakayda, you are the shaman, first among equals at the fire circle, it is your voice that others must heed.”
Talk of making a future for the People, how the stars could be that future, if only.
Now that is the Kayda I enjoy reading about.“Would you rather stay here, or move on to something better?” demanded Kayda, with her hands on her hips. “And how much of this is our fault? Did the Great White Father dump all of this trash on the ground or did we do that? Does the Cavalry still keep us here or can we go out and attend schools and learn skills and trades? We point one finger at the white man for our ills but four others point back at us! No matter how much we may hate it, the past we lived, that life we lived is gone and it cannot come back! We can sit in this filth or we can get up and make something of ourselves!” The Ptesanwi smiled as she looked at her host and once more they were in the idyllic village.
She thought the source of fire was from Lanie, not from Kayda's side, hehehe. I have to agree with Kayda, a kid of hers and Lanie's, I doubt even Jade could handle babysitting her.Caressing her cheek, the Ptesanwi beamed at Kayda. “That is the way of the shaman! While we cannot forget the past, we cannot return to it either,” she said sadly, but with pride. Her smile turned a bit sad as she brought up her other hand and held Kayda's face. “I had hoped that by joining with you, not the child of yours and the Pict Daughter, that some of the belligerence and stubbornness of her blood could be avoided, but now I see the real source of that fire.”
Just like a frustrated mother who has to let their child grow up despite the mistakes she knows they will make. Nice new haircut for Kayda, when Debra sees her again, hehe.She sat back and raised both hands in surrender. “On your own head.”
Ancestress' clothing and can see the tattoos her experiences had bequeathed upon her, don't let Wyatt see you in that Lanie. And with Laneth and seeing what she wore more often a green kirtle dress. A dress made by her mother for her 16th birthday, now that is a huge present back then.Room 210 Poe Cottage
Does Laneth know something about Lanie we don't know?The Banshee frowned. “What? Nursing? You'll know soon enough.” She smiled and gently separated the infant from her to hold her up and pat her back.
Laneth pulled cheap pranks back in her day, figures, Lanie has some of that impish nature herself. Choose between being a warrior or a mother, fat chance of that, Lanie is too stubborn. Laneth touched Lanie is wearing the clothing to honor her, but Grizzly has something to talk with Lanie about, oh boy.
Uh oh, this sounds bad for Lanie if she doesn't give up calling up Laneth like this. Compartmentalizing herself, yikes. I hope Grizzly can get through to Lanie how dangerous this can be to her mental health.The human Amazon melted away into the huge brown bear that enveloped her host in a massive hug. “Because I am worried about you!” the spirit declared. “Laneth daughter of Joan is dead, my love, and has been for over a thousand years!”
“But she...Ah...it was mah soul in that life...”
“And that life is over, child,” Grizzly scolded her. She pressed the end of her muzzle against Elaine's forehead in a wet nosed kiss of the human in her arms and her dark eyes were watery and sad. “Yet you keep calling her up, like you are keeping her separate from you. A different person in your body, that isn't healthy.”
“You told me it would do me good to remember her life.”
“There is a fine line between remembering and reliving, dear heart,” Grizzly replied. The she bear sighed and as gently as a mother caressed the young girl's cheek with her massive paw. “Lanie, multiple personality disorder is a very real thing. I am being concerned how 'real' Laneth feels to you.”
Lanie grinned and gently touched the nose of her spirit. “Said the voice in mah head!
Tansy hiding from security in the 100 Year Oak, taking medicine to ease her painful muscles, Ito can be brutal. And slipping out of her holds that easily and hitting her with nerve strikes, ouch.October 31st, (Just Barely) 2007. 100 Year Oak, the back quad behind Schuster Hall
Ito, you [self-censors this portion].Then, after keeping her well after curfew, had slyly informed her he would not be giving her a pass and if she was caught on the way to her cottage he would double the detention. Which wasn't in itself so bad, kids sneaked around this campus all the time. Then, with that my shit doesn't stink grin of his he had reached up and tripped the fire alarm.
Darn, enjoying flying only for 3rd Patrol to show up, takes all the fun out of sneaking around. A trap set up for her by Ito, he plays hardball. A fine kettle of fish, don't hear that expression often. Ooo, help from Jill Harris, this is going to be fun.
Now that is a diversion of the top order.By the time the Ketoprofen had taken most of the ache from her muscles, a tremendous fireball rose up from the little shed behind Melville Cottage that the groundskeepers used to store fuel oil mixtures for their tools. Bellow her, she saw the guards, despite their challenged ethics immediately turn to the explosion and start to run towards it.
All the way to Dickenson's roof and to the stairs inside, only for someone to catch her at last moment, darn it! And it is Imp, figures only she would be on a rooftop this late at night, is she in on this with Ito or what. Darn it, Imp was part of the test by Ito, that is over the top.
So Imp is who Hartford called earlier.The Imp's face grinned a sly grin. “She can be taught!” The teacher admitted as she gave the girl a long, appraising glance. “Hartford asked that I give you some coaching on your escape and evasion tactics, and I wanted to see what you could do first. And for a solid from one of the best hackers in the world, why not?”
Tansy is smart enough not to make The Imp a personal enemy, only idiots and the arrogant do that. A visit to Dr. Hewley and find out what Tansy's real exemplar rating is, about time.“I have no doubt you could break into any bank or home I own,” Tansy replied. “Of course, the bank is FDIC guaranteed and everything I own is insured for at least three times what it is really worth, so that won't exactly hurt me.”
The demonic yellow eyes narrowed. “Is that a challenge, Blondie?”
Ah, a fan of the old Hulk TV show. And Imp lets Tansy off by not rating her out to Ito about failing the test, very nice.“And Blondie, don't make the mistake of trying to fool me. Being lied to makes me angry. Miss Walcutt, don't make me angry; you wouldn't like me when I'm angry.”
Walcutt blinked in confusion. “You...turn into a six and half foot tall green rage monster? You don't look like Bill Bixby...”
Adam Lambert, hair on his head grown back that quickly and stains nearly out of his skin, that is awesome.October 31st, 2007. 3rd Floor Rest Room, Twain Cottage
Now that is what I like to hear, an invention that helps people, especially victims. And Prue as his girlfriend, hope things keep getting better for Adam.His bank account had a nice infusion of cash now that the patent for his 'Grease Skin' had been leased by Johnson and Johnson. He was told that it was a godsend to burn victims and being proud of helping his fellow man was doing wonders for his self confidence.
*sigh* No one believes Peeper's about the glasses that block his powers which Tansy bought him, she is going to have to make a public announcement for him to be believed, isn't she. John trying to apologize to Adam, yet he really doesn't accept it and starts to storm off. When Jericho stops you to say you being kinda harsh, you have gone too far.
And got Adam to actually listen to John, about time, the healing needs to begin.Jericho's expression didn't change. “No, brother, I think you can do better when somebody is trying to apologize. I mean, if you're just going to be a dick, why bother not hanging around with Peeper, right?”
Adam frowned, but couldn't argue the bigger boy's logic. “That hurts, Joe.”
Reverend Englund called in to talk with Mrs. Carson, eep.Headmistress's Office, Schuster Hall
Anything happens and Englund is involved, I don't think he would survive what Mrs. Carson would do.“Perhaps,” she admitted, walking over to her desk and sinking into the chair behind it. “But when forgiveness is abused as a means by the wicked to do additional harm, well, that is usually used as a justification for all manner of unspeakable actions. Wouldn't you agree, Reverend?”
And here is why no one messes with Mrs. Carson once they learn their lesson, she is terrifying when angry or her ire is rose.The temperature in the office cooled noticeably by the Headmistress' gaze. “Absolutely, Reverend,” she whispered. “Because while I believed that you had seen the error of your actions last year, and that you intended to correct the faults of your character that led you to make such a horrendous mistake, I must admit that my judgment has failed me from time to time. I am, only human, after all and I can be deceived.”
As I said, I'm not sure even an Eldritch horror would look her in the eye when she is like this. Glad this ended well, this is the scariest I think we have ever seen Mrs. Carson be and I don't want to see it again any time soon.“Don't quote philosophy to me, Reverend,” she ordered quietly. “This is your warning. And as I respect you as a person, as one of the founders of this school and one of its oldest serving Trustees I give you this warning which I might not have otherwise. If there is a repeat of what happened last year, Reverend, or if I found out that you had anything to do with Sara Waite's disappearance, understand that there is nowhere on this Earth you will be able to hide from me.”
Ed 'Quickdraw' Rutherford, staying at the state's largest Juvie detention center and called over by a guard. All those to hobble him, despite his plea deal he is being sent to FCI Berlin, an adult prison. After he murdered Jamie as part of his buddy's plan, hard to pity him. His lawyer getting paid for it, wait, don't tell me Nimbus is behind this!John H. Sununu Youth Services Center, Concord, New Hampshire
Great, attack on the van and breaking out Quickdraw. Nimbus needs to get a new costume.Ed beheld a sinister looking man, dressed rather like a wizard, robe like flowing coat and a completely black stocking over his head, under the hat.
Quickdraw was set up to take the fall or work with Nimbus, yet he willingly works with him for a chance at revenge on his old partner Speakeasy and the rest of Whateley, a piece of work this kid.“And I'm going to help you get revenge on Darren Haskins and everyone else at Whateley, Quickdraw. Or, you can stay here, be transferred to an adult prison and take the fall for those two dead guards. Your choice.”
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You guys seriously gotta stop being mean to all the tiny little spirits.
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Rose Bunny wrote: Nooooo! Little Bluebird spirit....
You guys seriously gotta stop being mean to all the tiny little spirits.
Does that mean the bigger spirits are fair game?

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- Schol-R-LEA
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Beyond this, well while you didn't personally make Sara Waite disappear Rev Englund, I'm thinking that the mess you caused trying to assassinate her probably helped the people who did trap her on a sheet of Tyveck!
So we see some of the building blocks for Gen 2 being put in place...
Also, I agree with Griz, you really ought to not continue to feed energy to the memory of Laneth. Of course Lanie will not listen and we see that Laneth is still haunting Jennifer Kelly...

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- null0trooper
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* Knight and Daze could have been working an op that the Amigas were meant to provide overwatch and cover for.
* They could have been a loosely-scheduled distraction meant to support the Amigas, or even the designated fall guys for the night's events.
* They could have been unrelated operators that could have been easily warned off through secured comms, or heroes working some Batman-style gambit against a deadline.
* If it weren't obvious from their clothing that the girls weren't working for Security, Knight's guts would be a clincher.
Even if it weren't something else, calling in a Code Whiskey-Tango-Foxtrot could have gotten them a rundown on the duo's powers, or the best alternate route to avoid them.
Sure, it's consistent for the characters at this point in their lives, but it must have looked like a horror show to Hindmost.
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I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
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Have we already seen it Imp 6 part 3Cryptic wrote: Looking forward to Halloween hyjinks. Bet Imp's gonna have a good costume.
"Imp wrote: Whateley Academy, Wednesday afternoon, Oct 31st, 2007
Halloween was my favorite holiday, which wouldn’t surprise anyone who actually knew me. It was a day of mystery and spooks, of tricks and treats, and of costumes and disguises.
At a school like Whateley, which was filled with devisors, magic users, and people with other powers, the classic elements of Halloween had the opportunity to be taken to the next level. I was bursting with excitement as I arrived at the campus party, eager to see what thrills and amusements awaited.
A couple students saw me, stared for a moment, and then began to snicker. I just grinned and waved, basking in their admiration for my costume. Or at least, their appreciation of the irony.
I saw a couple of familiar and friendly faces, so made my way over to join them. Louis was wearing a Star Fleet uniform, from the Next Generation, and he was talking to Lillian Dennon, who was dressed as the Queen of Hearts.
“Off with his head,” Dennon said, holding up a wicked looking battle axe. I hadn’t heard any of the conversation before this, so I didn’t know who she was referring to.
“Greetings and salutations,” I greeted my fellow teachers, and in Dennon’s case, she was also a former member of the black hat club.
Louis stared at me for a moment, then burst out laughing. “That costume is quite…fetching.”
Dennon gave me a look of amusement. “And ironic.”
“You think so?” I asked, posing a little.
I was currently wearing a flowing white dress, along with a pair of white feather wings and a halo, which I’d ‘borrowed’ from the theater departments prop room. My being dressed as an angel definitely went against my usual reputation, and may not have had the full effect since my horns and tail were still showing.
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- Malady
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Midnight, perhaps, a good time for Magic of all kinds?
- E. E. Nalley
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Malady wrote: Midnight, perhaps, a good time for Magic of all kinds?
Magic? Oh yes. Lots of magic....

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Malady
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Or Speakeasy will be Kayda's first kill...
IIRC, Kayda hasn't killed anyone yet, right?
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Malady wrote: WMG: Museum Mission is relevant 'cause it means when Kayda or someone, sees Speakeasy, they'll investigate instead of immediately trying to kill.
Or Speakeasy will be Kayda's first kill...
IIRC, Kayda hasn't killed anyone yet, right?
Only in the sims. Not in real life.
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Malady wrote: WMG: Museum Mission is relevant 'cause it means when Kayda or someone, sees Speakeasy, they'll investigate instead of immediately trying to kill.
Or Speakeasy will be Kayda's first kill...
IIRC, Kayda hasn't killed anyone yet, right?
I think the tie-in isn't from the mission itself, but from her talk with Walkie Talkie afterwards. We've already seen when Kayda finally quits playing hero, and now, we might get to see Kayda's return as a mediator like she was in Crying for a Dream.
It's very interesting that Nimbus sells Quickdraw on getting revenge on Speakeasy, and not on Kayda or any of the others that helped Kayda prove her innocence. That potentially puts Kayda in a position where she is going to have to save one of the worst, if not the worst, of her mortal enemies.
We know Nimbus is looking to push her toward Mythos magic. We know the faculty is using her, with her permission, to find out who Nimbus is. We know that The Witch is watching her and Danny, looking for an opportunity to get revenge on Nimbus. Now we know Speakeasy and Quickdraw will be dragged back into that picture.
We're in for one hell of a mess, aren't we? That's not even counting Team Awesome's presence on campus, Kigatilik still licking his wounds, or the fact that the TLW have adamantium wands this Halloween.
Loved the callbacks stitched in all over the place for the trio. Is it a callback or foreshadowing if the published order is before the chronological?
Now that Imp knows Tansy gets some of her references, will Tansy, Jadis, and the illustrious Imp arrange cartoon and 1970s TV nerd nights so that the student body will finally appreciate the classics?

- Malady
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Katssun wrote: Loved the callbacks stitched in all over the place for the trio. Is it a callback or foreshadowing if the published order is before the chronological?
I'd say foreshadowing is supposed to follow publishing order, since most people read in publishing order.
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null0trooper wrote: * Knight and Daze could have been working an op that the Amigas were meant to provide overwatch and cover for.
Unlikely. It would have been uncharacteristically stupid to send them in with no word about that, a fact the girls were well aware of.
* They could have been a loosely-scheduled distraction meant to support the Amigas, or even the designated fall guys for the night's events.
Same argument.
* They could have been unrelated operators that could have been easily warned off through secured comms, or heroes working some Batman-style gambit against a deadline.
Iffy, at best. Knight's immediate response to a non-lethal attack was to attempt a killing blow. That being said, they came across as immature and inexperienced so that could be put down to seriously bad judgement rather than criminal intent.
* If it weren't obvious from their clothing that the girls weren't working for Security, Knight's guts would be a clincher.
There is no indication that they would have stuck around for awkward questions in either case.
Even if it weren't something else, calling in a Code Whiskey-Tango-Foxtrot could have gotten them a rundown on the duo's powers, or the best alternate route to avoid them.
Or not. And it could have run the risk of giving away their presence and location while they waited for and then evaluated the reply.
Sure, it's consistent for the characters at this point in their lives, but it must have looked like a horror show to Hindmost.
It would seem to be largely her own fault. Knowing their natures, it looks like she deliberately set them up to "fail", thereby allowing her to make her point about staying within mission parameters - a move that is well within her known nature.
Another possibility: the intention was to order them to allow the duo to complete their theft, then follow them. That could give them valuable experience in following unexpected directives in rapidly evolving circumstances and set up another planned scenario.
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The Three Amigas need to pay attention to mission briefings. Kayda needs to avoid museums, like the Kimbas need to avoid Boston.
I have to agree with Grizzly, honoring your ancestor - good, remembering your ancestor - good, reliving your ancestor - bad (and a bit creepy).
Don't Drick and Drive.
- E. E. Nalley
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joreymay wrote: It would seem to be largely her own fault. Knowing their natures, it looks like she deliberately set them up to "fail", thereby allowing her to make her point about staying within mission parameters - a move that is well within her known nature.
Another possibility: the intention was to order them to allow the duo to complete their theft, then follow them. That could give them valuable experience in following unexpected directives in rapidly evolving circumstances and set up another planned scenario.
I'm glad that came across as it was Hartford's expected and hoped for outcomes. She expected them to confront Knight and Daze, though even she hoped it would not have been as bad as it happened. On the plus side she hoped that they would at least move the fight OUT of a museum full of priceless, irreplaceable artifacts. All three of them have a history of over reacting, though Tansy is not as bad as Kayda and Lanie, and this was a bait to see if they could restrain themselves and be discreet.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Malady
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CrazyMinh wrote: also, like at the beginning of 'all hallow's ball', weeping hand cannot refrain = mind control of some character we love at a critical moment?
Seriously, it's looking like this halloween or sometime around it will be the critical point in Gen 1's story. I'm betting that the fact that halloween is a occult day will play into that...
It looking like the next year's going to see a lot of events happening in the WU.
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From The Three Little Witches:
Al-Feyez raised an imperious eyebrow. “And what about that insane ‘Halloween’ holiday of yours? How are you going to keep them apart during a night when the Malkuthean veils are so thin?”
I wonder if that thinning is important to Nimbus's plan...
And Seraphim is connected to the Malkuthean stuff, IIRC...
Lol if Nimbus's plan is interrupted from the TLW being on closer watch due to getting their wands and having their wells lit.
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- Schol-R-LEA
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Malady wrote: Lol if Nimbus's plan is interrupted from the TLW being on closer watch due to getting their wands and having their wells lit.
That would make it two years in a row, given the impact that both Palantir and Clover had on the fight against Deathlist (even if no one - other than perhaps Mrs. Potter - is entirely aware of the odds-mangling aspect of those events).
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- Malady
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Schol-R-LEA wrote:
Malady wrote: Lol if Nimbus's plan is interrupted from the TLW being on closer watch due to getting their wands and having their wells lit.
That would make it two years in a row, given the impact that both Palantir and Clover had on the fight against Deathlist (even if no one - other than perhaps Mrs. Potter - is entirely aware of the odds-mangling aspect of those events).
Yep! That's what makes it really funny!
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What does it mean that the black mirror wasn't destroyed by Halloween's events??
Or, he could have a backup? Gotta remember that the appearance of uniqueness isn't actual uniqueness.
- Katssun
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So, whatever happens tomorrow in this plot thread, happens where it can all get swept under the rug.
- Malady
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Katssun wrote: So, whatever happens tomorrow in this plot thread, happens where it can all get swept under the rug.
Given Nimbus's mind / body control abilities...
Maybe it ends with him getting a few more people under his control, and then his plot thread goes on until Spring 2008... Maybe Easter, maybe Spring Equinox...
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Also, if Nimbus is here, where's Abigail?
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or someone could have made something that at least looks similar later, for all we know it a mirror with tinted glass and any magical markers are from something behind the mirror rather than the mirror itselfMalady wrote:
Schol-R-LEA wrote:
Malady wrote: Lol if Nimbus's plan is interrupted from the TLW being on closer watch due to getting their wands and having their wells lit.
That would make it two years in a row, given the impact that both Palantir and Clover had on the fight against Deathlist (even if no one - other than perhaps Mrs. Potter - is entirely aware of the odds-mangling aspect of those events).
Yep! That's what makes it really funny!
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What does it mean that the black mirror wasn't destroyed by Halloween's events??
Or, he could have a backup? Gotta remember that the appearance of uniqueness isn't actual uniqueness.
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Which would point to Nimbus's fake identity being a Poesie, presumably one of the sophomores or juniors in 2006-2007 (he had to be around before Fall 2006, and if he graduated in Spring 2007 he'd need a new excuse to be around WA). He would have known about the changelings, but would realize that Tansy wouldn't, so the lack of information about that would make a good 'obvious' clue that she was the prime suspect (for the reasons already discussed by Phase at various times).
Yes, we know that Nimbus has a female lover; but he could be bi, or this 'student' being attracted to men could just be an act.
So, which upperclassman that year was a Devisor who kept to himself most of the time, but would be seen in the labs often enough to go unnoticed? Why, Askey, of course.
OK, so there are at least three other named characters it could be; the first is Sonex, who we know for a fact was working on the BIT-Splicer, a project Nimbus is definitely interested in.
The next is Omega; we don't know what Omega's powers are, and I doubt someone with that name would seem like a weak nerd unless they are faking Deidrick's Syndrome and claming that they were dricking out when the chose it (a la Megadeath). However, it would fit with what we've seen from Nimbus if CORE were yet another set of his pawns. Though I would expect Shadow/CORE to be Nimbus in that case, and since he is supposedly on online ghost, the whole 'faking being a student' thing wouldn't be necessary... or would it? Are they both Nimbus, with 'Shadow' being a some sort of remotely-monitored AI and the claim to be an uploaded spirit is just a diversion?
Or it could be Skylar Howes; all we know about him is that he was taking Intro to Ranges in Spring 2006 and that Erik felt the need to complain to Mrs. Horton about his behavior. Would Nimbus fake having an obvious crush on a range instructor? Maybe.
I'm probably in the weeds on this, of course, but it's fun to speculate wildly sometimes.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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My money is still on Hazmat.
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All the hints are there, somewhere. We've all collectively kept missing it. Which isn't unusual, when you look back at various story lines where we get to speculate.
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Plus someone to give to Abigail for an easy disguise / identity / whatever.
If it is him... Does Aquerna have the skills to survive? ... Hopefully.
Also had access to Puppet. ... And Sleepy Gas + Tranqs are good to hide ones tracks...
And has links to Ayla 'cause he's making stuff for her...
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Stealing spirits to make a Force and copying/mangling BITs seems like separate goals.
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Kettlekorn wrote: It would be unsatisfying if he turned out to be somebody we've hardly seen.
My money is still on Hazmat.
The problem with Hazmat, MD, Jericho, and a few others is their families. They are still in close contact with their immediate family, and either Nimbus close to perfectly learned their memories, or mind controlled the family to the point no one noticed anything weird going on. Either of these would mean that he's wasting his time at Whateley and should have already won.
But we should probably take this speculation to...
whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/spec.../250-hekate-s-master
Or
whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/spec...aracters/1223-nimbus
My money is on Slapdash.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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But that's not why I'm posting. Was the Carson/Reverend discussion weird to anyone else? The Rev is not know to have any syndromes that would cause him to reenact a major fuck up on the anniversary of that fuck up. Does Carson seriously think the Rev would/could pull a stunt like that again? If she did, she would have fired him and had him kicked from the board. So she had this conversation for some other reason. What reason?
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jmhyp wrote: Nimbus is Belphegore, the incompetence and Diedrick's are all an act.
We see Belphegore in Gen 2, harassing Nick and AJ.
But that's not why I'm posting. Was the Carson/Reverend discussion weird to anyone else? The Rev is not know to have any syndromes that would cause him to reenact a major fuck up on the anniversary of that fuck up. Does Carson seriously think the Rev would/could pull a stunt like that again? If she did, she would have fired him and had him kicked from the board. So she had this conversation for some other reason. What reason?
He actually suffers from the worst sort of syndrome. He's a zealot. If he thought he could get away with killing Sara, he would try again. On the other hand when Carson finds out about the Atlantean League, she'll probably kill him anyway.
Speaking of which, any stories on that front?
Don't Drick and Drive.
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jmhyp wrote: Was the Carson/Reverend discussion weird to anyone else?
Not really. He is still involved in clandestine activities that are not necessarily in the best interests of the school or all of the students and faculty. And emotions can run very high on such anniversaries, leading to impulsive acts by people on all sides.
Does Carson seriously think the Rev would/could pull a stunt like that again?
Yes. Not one exactly like that, but bad enough. His focus is excessively narrow and his judgement is questionable at best under certain circumstances.
If she did, she would have fired him and had him kicked from the board. So she had this conversation for some other reason. What reason?
She doesn't have the power to have him kicked off of the Board. And he does serve a real - if narrowly defined - purpose at the school under certain circumstances. Not his role as teacher and chaplain, but as a defense against certain specific kinds of attacks. But if she - or the Board - becomes convinced that he is more of a liability than a benefit, he will be out. And he is on the edge of that status.
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jmhyp wrote: Problem is the last thing we've really seen Rev do is bring Seraphim to Whateley. He's been invisible otherwise for the most part.
Teaching Oak how to go Don-dunking without leaving evidence of the assault while Charlie Lodgeman drove Kerry to the school was amusing.
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null0trooper wrote:
jmhyp wrote: Problem is the last thing we've really seen Rev do is bring Seraphim to Whateley. He's been invisible otherwise for the most part.
Teaching Oak how to go Don-dunking without leaving evidence of the assault while Charlie Lodgeman drove Kerry to the school was amusing.
There's also the gradual recruitment effort of Bladedancer for the Goobers which has been running over the last academic year, his becoming the Academic sponsor of the Atlantean League, his regular Sunday services at the Whateley church, and, the other GOO/Mythos-fighting activities alongside Whateley Security.
He's been there in the background, but he's been keeping his profile low.
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That's been the fascinating thing about Englund. He means well, his methods are bad. As with all "born again" types, he works in absolutes. That's why Carson is so harsh with him. He doesn't understand anything else. Carson banished him, and he spent his time trying to save Kerry. He's good at heart. So she asks him bluntly, if he's going to try something again. I feel like he doesn't lie to Carson. He doesn't really lie to anyone. He's plain in his motives, as brutal and exacting as he was before he reformed from his criminal past.
He's the epitome of a "good monster." He'd sacrifice himself in a heartbeat for a good cause. He simply can't see the grey.
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All along, you had all of us thinking you had some super sinister dark plan in the works, and then it turns out you're as generic as Dr. Evil. Hell, you might as well have demanded a million dollars. Pinky and the Brain had better plans than you.
I like it!
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except that his plans require the rather brutal murder of innocents, and he's better at blending inGreatdingo wrote: Nimbus, you generic doofus!
All along, you had all of us thinking you had some super sinister dark plan in the works, and then it turns out you're as generic as Dr. Evil. Hell, you might as well have demanded a million dollars. Pinky and the Brain had better plans than you.
I like it!
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mhalpern wrote:
except that his plans require the rather brutal murder of innocents, and he's better at blending inGreatdingo wrote: Nimbus, you generic doofus!
All along, you had all of us thinking you had some super sinister dark plan in the works, and then it turns out you're as generic as Dr. Evil. Hell, you might as well have demanded a million dollars. Pinky and the Brain had better plans than you.
I like it!
True, but isn't that to be expected? We know that Nimbus is a psychotic murderer who dabbles in not just dark magic, but worse than that, primeval corruption of magic (I guess it's okay to call mythos magic that).
I like the story about Nimbus, how he's hidden in plain sight and how he's manipulating people, events and the school. I like how he's the hidden enemy spreading terror among the faculty and the students. How he could literally be anyone (except for what we now know), that adds an even further level of terror to him.
This is a guy who's apparently possessed some poor smuck, destroyed their soul and now lives said smuck's life without anyone the wiser. Further, apparently, he's either already come back to life, or is dead but has been powerful enough to escape death.
And then; "I shall have my own Nimbus force and be unstoppable!"
Nimbus, dude, don't be that guy.
But here's the thing, I'm not complaining, I mean it when I say I like it. Here's this terrifying dark and sinister mastermind of insurmountable power and unfathomable purpose. Or so we think, when in fact, his purpose is really rather mundane and can be boiled down to a petty grab for power.
Or, at least that's how it currently appears to me. I look forward to seeing what he actually intends to do with that power.
The parts about Dr. Evil and Pinky & Brain were obviously jokes.
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Also, yeah, he wants a Force... Lol if it's just to take down the Goodkinds with.
Hmm... If Susan lives... She gets experimented on... Which she could also survive... Future POV character / hero / villain / thing!
I wonder if he's got Deidricks...
And what's with the Power Booster Drug, and the Technomatic Transformation Drug... Lol if the latter is just for a body for Abigail, for some reason.
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Greatdingo wrote: And then; "I shall have my own Nimbus force and be unstoppable!"
Nimbus, dude, don't be that guy.
For clarity, let me elaborate a bit as I think most of what I am about to say is obvious, but perhaps people don't really grasp what is truly going on here.
Nimbus is aware of the Mythos and is so adept at using their magic, he can do so with out detectable taint to himself. He brags to the Don he will feed him to beings that:
A Pocketful of Tansy wrote: “I am the master of power the likes of which would melt your pathetic little mind!” 'Nimbus' gloated. “You think yourself my equal! Why, I could feed you to beings that would feast on your soul for a thousand years!"
Obviously, he is confident that such beings pose no threat to him. And by being aware of the Mythos, he is probably aware of Atlantis and the Five Fold Court and the larger beings they dealt with in the cosmos. Nimbus isn't looking to rule the world. He doesn't have aspirations of Dr Evil or The Brain.
He has aspirations of out doing Thanos.
He means to enslave the Elder Gods and take over the Universe.
Now, I could be messing with you, that's true. Unreliable narrator and all that. But if you go back over the stories, I think you'll come to one conclusion.
He can.
Now, the only question is can he be stopped?

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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E. E. Nalley wrote: He has aspirations of out doing Thanos.
He means to enslave the Elder Gods and take over the Universe.
Now, I could be messing with you, that's true. Unreliable narrator and all that. But if you go back over the stories, I think you'll come to one conclusion.
He can.
Now see, while I still think that's a petty grab for power, it does move the indicator on the scale up quite significantly.
So, I wonder, is his capability more a question of having the power, or having the will to actually do it?
There are several characters I could see having the ability as well, but not the will.
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E. E. Nalley wrote: He means to enslave the Elder Gods and take over the Universe.
If it were that easy, they'd have done it already. Tap them for power to use however it amuses him: that looks achievable. But understand those well enough to play them? He's not the first to try, so I'd hazard a guess that that's not as simple as it looks to anyone either.
E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Yes. But the one person who's had the most (if limited and only temporary, possibly illusory) success is the last person anyone would consult, and it looks like HM's preparing to dash that person's last hope.
Or I could be wrong.

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null0trooper wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Yes. But the one person who's had the most (if limited and only temporary, possibly illusory) success is the last person anyone would consult, and it looks like HM's preparing to dash that person's last hope.
Or I could be wrong.
You referring to Lady Jettatura?
I wonder who her person inside Whateley is...
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Greatdingo wrote: And then; "I shall have my own Nimbus force and be unstoppable!"
Nimbus, dude, don't be that guy.
For clarity, let me elaborate a bit as I think most of what I am about to say is obvious, but perhaps people don't really grasp what is truly going on here.
Nimbus is aware of the Mythos and is so adept at using their magic, he can do so with out detectable taint to himself. He brags to the Don he will feed him to beings that:
A Pocketful of Tansy wrote: “I am the master of power the likes of which would melt your pathetic little mind!” 'Nimbus' gloated. “You think yourself my equal! Why, I could feed you to beings that would feast on your soul for a thousand years!"
Obviously, he is confident that such beings pose no threat to him. And by being aware of the Mythos, he is probably aware of Atlantis and the Five Fold Court and the larger beings they dealt with in the cosmos. Nimbus isn't looking to rule the world. He doesn't have aspirations of Dr Evil or The Brain.
He has aspirations of out doing Thanos.
He means to enslave the Elder Gods and take over the Universe.
Now, I could be messing with you, that's true. Unreliable narrator and all that. But if you go back over the stories, I think you'll come to one conclusion.
He can.
Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Well I don't think he should fear the most formidably do gooders, he should fear the rookie. because the rookie is hard to predict...
I know who could stop him.... Aegis..
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Greatdingo wrote: And then; "I shall have my own Nimbus force and be unstoppable!"
Nimbus, dude, don't be that guy.
For clarity, let me elaborate a bit as I think most of what I am about to say is obvious, but perhaps people don't really grasp what is truly going on here.
Nimbus is aware of the Mythos and is so adept at using their magic, he can do so with out detectable taint to himself. He brags to the Don he will feed him to beings that:
A Pocketful of Tansy wrote: “I am the master of power the likes of which would melt your pathetic little mind!” 'Nimbus' gloated. “You think yourself my equal! Why, I could feed you to beings that would feast on your soul for a thousand years!"
Obviously, he is confident that such beings pose no threat to him. And by being aware of the Mythos, he is probably aware of Atlantis and the Five Fold Court and the larger beings they dealt with in the cosmos. Nimbus isn't looking to rule the world. He doesn't have aspirations of Dr Evil or The Brain.
He has aspirations of out doing Thanos.
He means to enslave the Elder Gods and take over the Universe.
Now, I could be messing with you, that's true. Unreliable narrator and all that. But if you go back over the stories, I think you'll come to one conclusion.
He can.
Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Easily the Unbeatable Squirrel Girl is on our side.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Yes. I can see how that is going to go. Nimbus has been sucking spirits left and right and is almost at the critical point for forging a Force. He needs just one more, he would like to get a strong spirit such as the Kodiak, but that squirrel girl pretty much fell on his lap, so...Valentine wrote: Easily the Unbeatable Squirrel Girl is on our side.
And then it all goes wrong. Aquerna's spirit does merge with the others and form a Force, all right... but that Force somehow goes into Aquerna, not Nimbus. Behold... the SQUIRREL FORCE!
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E. E. Nalley wrote: He means to enslave the Elder Gods and take over the Universe.
He can.
He clearly has not read Douglas Adams.
The univerise is big. You would not believe how mindbogglingy huge it is.
Truly understanding how completely insignificant you are to the universe would crush your spirit and drive you mad instantly.
Or maybe he should listen to Carl Sagan's Pale Blue Dot instead.
Humanity does not have a good track record with taking over even a measurable percentage of the planet. Other than creating vast amounts of misery and suffering in the process that is.
And he really needs to hear the warning Nacht tried to give to Marzala, that stuffing power in a little box is not how you make a Force.
It is how you make a black hole.
(not that he would want to hear the warning, nor that he would heed it; being too convinced of his own invincibility and brilliance. And while he will accelerate his causing incredible amounts of misery and suffering, he, too, will learn the very hard way that existence does not mix at all well with black holes).
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This is not a weakness shared by all humans. It doesn't matter if I'm insignificant on the scale of the universe because that universe is also insignificant to me. Just like the people in the apartment next to me. I've never met them and don't even know what they look like. They may as well not exist. They aren't part of my world, and this is fine. It doesn't bother me that I'm not significant to them. I'm significant to the people I care about, and that's all that matters.Erianaiel wrote: Truly understanding how completely insignificant you are to the universe would crush your spirit and drive you mad instantly.
Perhaps Nimbus is the kind of person who'd be bothered. However, he's also the kind of person who chooses to work with all kinds of other things that supposedly drive people insane, so I don't think it's safe to make assumptions about what would and wouldn't crush his spirit and drive him mad instantly.
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Mutants usually win?
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Malady wrote: Mutants vs. ppl from the rest of the galaxy, in a planetside war.
Mutants usually win?
Home field advantage.
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joreymay wrote:
Malady wrote: Mutants vs. ppl from the rest of the galaxy, in a planetside war.
Mutants usually win?
Home field advantage.
I am not so sure that the mutants will win.
First of all, Mrs. Carson strongly suggests to the students that if it comes to war between (all) mutants and the baseline humans, the humans will win due to sheer numbers alone.
The teachers of the various combat oriented classes (e.g. Ido, Bardue, Mahren) gleefully drive home the point that brains can always come up with technology to overpower mutants. The Goodkinds and the MCO are researching the same subject but not with the purpose of teaching an object lesson to cocky teenage mutants, but because they want that war and plan to win it.
Second, there are some 15 million civilisations in our galaxy alone, by the best guestimates for the Drake equation (ignoring the Fermi paradox). Even if only 1% of them is as technologically advanced as is under the assumptions of the question, that's still 150,000 with the technology to travel hundreds, or hundreds of thousands, of lightyears without requiring millions of years to do so. That alone is a level of technolgy (and raw power) that might as well be called magic by baseline humans and mutants alike.
They don't even have to bring their entire population. Just 100,000 (out of tens of billions) for each of those advanced civilisations will swamp the earth with twice the total number of humans.
There won't be a homefield advantage if the homefield is reduced to a slowly expanding cloud of dust and tiny pebbles

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We haven't seen superpowered aliens, right? Do we know if they have magic? ... Tennyo found that psychic crown-thing...
Although, yeah, I'm assuming, a "fight with what you've got on hand", not a pre-preped battle.
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Can you see the galactic one-per-centers?
"Earth is a danger. Terra delenda est."
"But daaady, Bfl'tbr stood me up again! I need some Hersheba..."
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Even Morpheus' daemons from their side universe proved to be exceptionally challenging to our heroines.
Aliens aren't really the problem. It's all the intersections that are far more terrifying. They're probably dealing with their OWN elder gods.
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For a moment she considered the Seven of Wands, with its depiction of a warrior, standing astride the world, turning back the other wands that attacked him. He stood in opposition to The Magician and The Sun shined over him
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Maggie's gone completely around the bend.
Kayda is about to be yelled at for the destruction of the The Piasa Bird .
I'm kind of surprised that Kayda didn't have any idea who Imp is. Imp is pretty blatant about being out in the open. Sure she's just the Art teacher, but considering Alicia, and the number of Posies in her classes, you would think that someone might have mentioned Imp around Kayda. Of course Kayda is kind of blasé about Imp, just another adult.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Malady wrote:
null0trooper wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Yes. But the one person who's had the most (if limited and only temporary, possibly illusory) success is the last person anyone would consult, and it looks like HM's preparing to dash that person's last hope.
Or I could be wrong.
You referring to Lady Jettatura?
I'm pretty sure Null0Trooper means the Bell Witch. After all, she and Nacht did, in fact, create a Fused Spirit (which may or may not have been the same as a Force, but even if not, was similar enough for most purposes) powerful enough to empower a minor Apotheosis - Marzena simply didn't understand what that really meant, especially regarding her attempts to pawn her own
(sorry, old M:tA habits showing.)
Speaking of which, Katie still has the "Do not open until ZULU" letter from her own divine self, which presumably will play a role in this. As for the rest of the Oracle of Erebeal Wisdom (or whatever they end up calling the book Goddess!Nacht wrote), I suspect that will show up some time in Gen 2, possibly with Okami, Fey, Nacht, and Eldritch having to play keep-away with it when the servants of either Izanami or Tsukuyomi (or both, a huge Gambit Pileup) try to get grabby with it...
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Kayda coming back from the showers to find Chou let Danny into their dorm room, annoyed because she doesn't wish to change in front of him while Danny is male. Now that is a cold October, brrh. Math help and Mrs. Bell is having them do Game Theory, good grief.October 31st, 2007
Room 211, Poe Cottage, Whateley Academy
Bwahaha, love the book Peggy loaned Danny/Dani, The Last Ride of Black Jack Kingston, plus Kayda's reaction to the picture of the people in the story, eerie. Oh brother, having to get permission to be tutored, that is just silly imo.
David Archer with the Bad Boys, only working with him because he promised they could beat up the 'fags' of the school, a bunch of bigoted idiots. And now they are thinking of using the Halloween Ball so they can be in disguise and attack with impunity, I hope they get sent to Doyle!Path between Emerson Cottage and the Crystal Hall
Maggie creeping through the wood line, this is very bad.Woods north west of Laird Hall
A necklace designed to fool Fubar, why do I have the feeling she will be expelled or worse by the end of this. Mandrake, she is messing with Mandrake, she is insane!It was not by accident that these woods were so littered with herbs and plants useful in magical rituals. There were many that were grown in the green house by Kirby hall, but some rituals required the practitioner to harvest the plants themselves, some at special times or with special tools, and a few required them to be sourced from the wild.
Thuban on the radio, 8 minutes to noon, spreading rumors without full information on the incident between Peeper and Greasy, *sigh* Stormwolf and Heartbreaker promising the All Hallows Ball won't be like last year. We can only hope.105.7FM WARS
Pru 'Chemtrail' Tavori going to her dorm room to switch out books for classes, only to find a box on her bed.Room 308, Dickinson Cottage
And it is a dress made by Tansy for her dear friend, just like the one Elizabeth Taylor wore in Cleopatra, wonder how long that took to make.The lid had a logo she didn't recognize and taped over it by the bill of lading was a hand written note.
Aww, Adam only able to go with a cheap costume for his Marc Anthony to Pru's Cleopatra. And proof that gadgeteering doesn't give you skills like sewing, at least not in Adam's case. And distracted by Mr. Filbert delivering a package, Stephen carrying it upstairs for Adam.Houseparent's Apartment, Twain Cottage
An apology letter from Tansy and a full Roman officer's uniform including a gladius, those people do good work.Museum Replicas Limited, in Conyers, Georgia
Finally, have been waiting for Tansy to be tested again so we can know her real power ratings. Heh, if Imp warns you not to deceive them again, it would be foolish to do so. Dr. Hewley not following her, Lab E for testing, curiouser and curiouser.Powers Testing Lab, Lab (E) Doyle Medical Center Tunnels
Now that is a thorough testing lab.Lab E or (Exemplar) was a combination gym, obstacle course and gameshow stage. There were memory puzzles, spacial awareness puzzles, a Nautilus machine that could measure just about any way a human could lift or move weight. There was a track about the diameter of a basketball court, and finally an obstacle course like something out of American Superhuman Challenge, the TV Sports Entertainment Show.
Ms. Hartford, Sensei Ito, and Ms. Imp there, she isn't getting away with anything today.
An adult male touching a teenage girl like that, Tansy is right, f*** the MCO.Ms Imp looked up from her tablet which was displaying Tansy's MID she noticed. “You actually convinced an MCO classifier you were an exemplar one with that body?” the Imp demanded. “Blondie, I am impressed!”
It didn't use traditional weight stacks, but a single metal plate mounted to hydraulic rams whose resistance could be scaled from pounds of resistance to tons.
3 tons with Mustang, dang. Great, dragging Kayda down here, thinking she did to Tansy what happened with Lanie because they don't know about Tansy's avatar trait.“You started to struggle at eight hundred and the bar began to lower at one thousand four, making you just barely an exemplar four. Then suddenly you doubled down and pushed it back up. You didn't struggle again until fifteen pounds over three tons. You lost your grip at...” she consulted the read out on the display. “Six thousand, one hundred and twelve pounds! Explain that!”
Lanie left in charge of the shop while Mr. Donner went to get Bonnie, his Ford Flathead V8. Bet the students who worked to restore the car loved it. Wonder what idea Lanie got from seeing the car eased into the bay.Devisor Lab (Vehicle) Kane Hall Tunnels
Robin McGraw having a panic attack from looking in a mirror, Mrs. Carson worked her magic to get Robin's face back, how bad was it to cause a panic attack? Crud, one of security hurt in the Halloween attack of last year, no wonder she is having a panic attack. Told to bring Kayda to Lab E, makes Robin wonder who Kayda has ticked off this time.Ladies Rest Room, Broadway Tunnel
Darn, Kayda starting to freak out because of how she is being brought to the lab. And now Kayda under the gazed of Ms. Hartford who doesn't understand what Kayda did for Tansy fully. Kayda explains everything, telling the truth, yet Hartford thinks she is lying under Tansy stands up for Kayda and tells about her avatar trait being the first one which manifested. Ouch, 5 years ago and Tansy's DNA doner found out Jadis's real identity, how her father reacted to this is the act of a raving bigot.
A hallow with a nature spirit in it, sucked it up into her hallow, no wonder she is so hard on herself.“The estate backed up to Iao Valley State Park. It didn't take me long to get lost in the jungle. When I stopped running I was at this spot some of the groundskeepers kept talking about, this 'special place' with a waterfall that fell into a pool.”
And now we know what happened and why she is so hard on herself, ripped the poor thing to pieces.“You don't understand!” she shouted. “I let this beautiful thing into me and it was just trying to console me, to give me serenity. That's what it was, some kind of serene spirit. And it gave me the power to call animals to me. I needed to be strong, to fight my father! And all I got was little furry animals like I was some kind of blonde Snow White!”
Ah, good.“You can't,” Kayda told her. “It sounds like she cast it out of herself and probably forced it to have to reform. Nasty shock, but the spirit is fine. Tansy, on the other hand...”
Leave it to Imp to ruin a tense moment. And Tansy reveals what happened with Jade and Jinn last year, plus how she accidentally pulled Grizzly into her, sounds like this an unheard of ability for an avatar. Tansy, Kayda, and Lanie excused from classes so they can help Tansy come to terms with all this, knew Hartford can be understanding.Kayda blushed and looked at her hands. “Um, well, last summer, the three of us were on a road trip to go home. And we stopped because Tansy said she didn't know what love felt like...”
The Imp crossed her arms and smirked. “Am I old enough for this conversation?” she demanded.
Liz going over the school budget while enjoying some Benny Goodman's Orchestra.Headmistress's Office, Schuster Hall, Whateley Academy
Yikes, guess a rebuilding of that level had to show the cracks in the other 'historic' cottages. And of course, Hartford shows up with some concerning news.Completely rebuilding Poe over the summer, despite the not so anonymous donor footing the bill for the complete job, had shown issues with the building that likely affected the other 'historic' cottages. She had arranged for some discreet testing and, as she had feared, it looked like these problems were endemic to all those cottages. That meant four major building projects; even if she could find the money in the budget, the amount of disruption over the summer would be staggering.
The Champion Force and Astarte Force fought each other while Carson held a piece of it, yikes.
Whoa.“Like a cat and a dog in a burlap sack; and I got to be the burlap sack. The Astarte Force had long since...molded is the best word I can think of, to me. It had become separate, and more powerful than it had been. And it very much refused to be a part of the Champion Force again!”
If that isn't how the avatar trait works, wouldn't that means she is Avatar 7 and it works differently or has some unusual abilities a normal avatar trait wouldn't have. Either that or there is another power out there similar yet different to the avatar trait, so rare it hasn't been classified, and Mrs. Carson is one of those with the unclassified power.“Amelia, I think that, somehow, I don't know how, but that somehow I have the ability to not just host more than one spirit, but to...compress...them together.” She saw Amelia lean forward and took that as an acknowledgment to continue. “I think that I took that little piece of the Champion Force and I attracted other, low powered spirits or spiritual energy. So low powered I don't even notice I'm doing it. I think it started when I lit my essence well and by storing essence I somehow began to 'feed' that Force, making it stronger. And that, when I took the Champion Force into me, the Astarte Force tried to absorb it and it fought back.”
Dr. Quintain talking down to her like that, I would have punched him.
And that is where I thought this conversation was going, that is a lot of power.“Liz...I think Tansy can do the same thing.”
Love seeing them tease each other like this. The Committee might work for the greater good, but I still wouldn't trust them with the means they would go about it with certain things.“I swear I am going to kidnap you and drag you on a vision quest one of these long weekends,” Carson threatened.
“And when that white hat on your head stops glowing like a Clorox commercial, I might be worried,” Hartford snapped back, but there was no venom in either woman's remark and both were smiling. Quickly, Amelia recounted the story Tansy had told her of her adventures with spirits, both in her youth and more recently.
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I foresee a headache in her immediate future, especially with what the bullies have planned and anything else that might come up.The school day was over, Gerald had volunteered to oversee the Samhain Rituals for the handful of students who would be casting over the mystically significant event, which meant it was her turn to be one of the chaperones for the costume ball most of the students would be attending.
A Tarot reading like that, hope it is accurate and no trouble happens. Another reading, warning about Hekate's Master, yet this time a sign of hope, who is the warrior the Seven of Wands predicts?
Maggie there because she is Doctor Al-Feyez's student assistant this term. After the oath she made to Lanie she shouldn't have that kind of access to anything without supervision. A tube of crystals made alchemically, plotting against Grizzly, please let her get caught soon.Student Alchemical Lab, Kirby Hall, Whateley Academy
Any chant like this is bad news, she could harm a lot more than Grizzly with this. Destroying the mortar and pestle safely, just how dangerous is what she created to require this level of disposal? A vial of poison and quotes the Princess Bride, extremely dangerous.“Blood for blood, life for life,”
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Kayda doesn't recognize Imp... Hmmm She has been rather distracted this year...
Tansy in testing, and oh! oh! She reveals that she is an avatar, has always been an avatar, and that if you read closely, she might be able to create spiritual 'forces'.
Is Wyatt the warrior or is it someone else? Just because Eliza thinks it is a male does that mean it absolutely must be a male?
Spirit Chan lives as Valentine noted. Then again I've suspected that for a bit.
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E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Yes. But the one person who's had the most (if limited and only temporary, possibly illusory) success is the last person anyone would consult, and it looks like HM's preparing to dash that person's last hope.
Or I could be wrong.
You referring to Lady Jettatura?
I'm pretty sure Null0Trooper means the Bell Witch.
Nope! Marzena is outclassed by Jettatura, Nimbus, TWFKAH, Nacht, Pejuta ... my sandwich ...
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A hallow with a nature spirit in it, sucked it up into her hallow, no wonder she is so hard on herself.“The estate backed up to Iao Valley State Park. It didn't take me long to get lost in the jungle. When I stopped running I was at this spot some of the groundskeepers kept talking about, this 'special place' with a waterfall that fell into a pool.”
And now we know what happened and why she is so hard on herself, ripped the poor thing to pieces.“You don't understand!” she shouted. “I let this beautiful thing into me and it was just trying to console me, to give me serenity. That's what it was, some kind of serene spirit. And it gave me the power to call animals to me. I needed to be strong, to fight my father! And all I got was little furry animals like I was some kind of blonde Snow White!”
We hadn't been told the circumstances, but all the joking about Spirit-chan has been about this particular spirit.
Dreamer wrote: And Tansy reveals what happened with Jade and Jinn last year, plus how she accidentally pulled Grizzly into her, sounds like this an unheard of ability for an avatar.
It may be unheard-of for the characters in this story. Timeless has also pulled a spirit or two into his hallow.
Dreamer wrote: The Champion Force and Astarte Force fought each other while Carson held a piece of it, yikes.
There's still an ongoing in-universe debate about whether spirits are truly sentient or not, and if so at what point do you call it for any given spirit. I'm assuming that the Astarte Force had grown/developed enough during its time with Liz Carson to at least gain an instinctual sense of territoriality if not a sense of self.
If Whateley were an RPG, this would be the point where we get referred back to a "one spirit per customer" core rule and then to a couple of splat books that tromp their muddy boots all over that guideline.
Dreamer wrote: If that isn't how the avatar trait works, wouldn't that means she is Avatar 7
It's probably important to note that it's the spirit that is being described as growing by incorporating available spiritual energy, not the mutant. That spirit just might be able to slowly grow the Hallow being provided to it like any other Hallow on this plane. Not all spirits will want to do that, or even be able to.
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null0trooper wrote:
Schol-R-LEA wrote:
Malady wrote:
null0trooper wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, the only question is can he be stopped?
Yes. But the one person who's had the most (if limited and only temporary, possibly illusory) success is the last person anyone would consult, and it looks like HM's preparing to dash that person's last hope.
Or I could be wrong.
You referring to Lady Jettatura?
I'm pretty sure Null0Trooper means the Bell Witch.
Nope! Marzena is outclassed by Jettatura, Nimbus, TWFKAH, Nacht, Pejuta ... my sandwich ...
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Valentine wrote:
null0trooper wrote:
Nope! Marzena is outclassed by Jettatura, Nimbus, TWFKAH, Nacht, Pejuta ... my sandwich ...
What kind of spells does your Sand Witch know?
Peanut Butter Adhesion!
Mayonnaise Rejection!
and Meatballs of Doom (or Italy, the effects are a bit uncertain)!!!
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oh come on, that's just a lot of bologna.null0trooper wrote:
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Nope! Marzena is outclassed by Jettatura, Nimbus, TWFKAH, Nacht, Pejuta ... my sandwich ...
What kind of spells does your Sand Witch know?
Peanut Butter Adhesion!
Mayonnaise Rejection!
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Anne wrote: What did I draw from this?
Over all a lot of development on the characters and world building. Bravo!Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]First, Dumbtruck and company are still not getting the message... Does anyone else think that maybe they are reacting to even the slightest bit of MM attraction?
Kayda doesn't recognize Imp... Hmmm She has been rather distracted this year...
Tansy in testing, and oh! oh! She reveals that she is an avatar, has always been an avatar, and that if you read closely, she might be able to create spiritual 'forces'.
Is Wyatt the warrior or is it someone else? Just because Eliza thinks it is a male does that mean it absolutely must be a male?
Spirit Chan lives as Valentine noted. Then again I've suspected that for a bit.
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Actually this extension of the story raised more questions than it answered!
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- Tansy had the beginnings of her epiphany when she heard Nimbus talking to Don Sebastiano.
- Nimbus is trying to create a force on his own by stealing spirits and smushing them into his black mirror. From what we've seen, little nature spirits.
- Tansy (and Carson) can do this all on their very own. Tansy, moreover, can forcibly steal spirits.
- Tansy was previously a blond Snow White, and is known to be quite the fan of nature in general (sailing, riding horses, etc.)
I think Elyzia is looking for Tansy, she just doesn't know it yet.
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Katssun wrote: I think Elyzia is looking for Tansy, she just doesn't know it yet.
I'd throw Greasy, Esoteric, and Rev. Englund into the running.
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Maybe all those spirits being gathered in the mirror are released, but were congealed into mini-forces that apply their energies on the impressions that are formed about the costumes. Sorta Batson-y?
Tansy's note to him was so nice!
Good thinking with the group that's meeting her for her Exemplar testing.
And Tarot's gonna be a thing this part? Hmm.
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Oh... Or the Mirror Spirits are released and go to Tansy, who gets her own... Dagger Force, or whatever she calls it.
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Why did we have fanfic that David Goodkind was gonna mutate in Hawaii... With Pele as an Avatar?
If Avatar is one of the things that Nimbus wants, then David is gonna bond with Spirit-Chan? Would also help being an M2F, with a Fem spirit aiding the process...
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What if Carson, Tansy, and Kayda are all each correct?null0trooper wrote:
Katssun wrote: I think Elyzia is looking for Tansy, she just doesn't know it yet.
I'd throw Greasy, Esoteric, and Rev. Englund into the running.
- Forces can be made by compressing spirits together, or splintering off part of an existing Force that is then grown separately. Nimbus seems to believe this as much as Liz does.
- Tansy thought she ripped Spirit-chan apart, and perhaps she very well did. How many other avatars are also espers?
- As Imp started and Kayda confirmed, you can't kill individual spirits. You can evict them and force them to reincorporate.
What level of control does being a powerful, highly experienced esper and an avatar give Tansy? She's used to manipulating, controlling, and even dominating an environment created from someone's mind. How different is dreamspace from dreamwalking? Can Tansy rip another spirit from another person, especially if her hallow is more welcoming and she has no intention of using them against their true natures? We already know that Forces can be splintered. Can Tansy do it more easily through sheer will, bolstered by her esper abilities and experience? Carson believes it took a long period of time for the other spirits she attracted to get compressed into the Astarte force as it exists today. Will the Nimbus force be stable when he first begins to use it?
Could Tansy steal it, shatter it, and return it to the spirits that made it up? My guess is she can.
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Rose Bunny wrote: I am happy. Survival confirmed! Now she just has to arrive on the mainland and kick much ass.
Why did we have fanfic that David Goodkind was gonna mutate in Hawaii... With Pele as an Avatar?
"A Girl for Pele" was hardly a full fanfic, it was mostly me complaining about being unable to finish it.
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Rose Bunny wrote: I am happy. Survival confirmed! Now she just has to arrive on the mainland and kick much ass.
Why did we have fanfic that David Goodkind was gonna mutate in Hawaii... With Pele as an Avatar?
"A Girl for Pele" was hardly a full fanfic, it was mostly me complaining about being unable to finish it.
Thank you for the link!
... To clarify things, I was wondering whether or not David has canon reasons to be in Hawaii at the right time to get Technomantified into a Avatar and host Spirit-Chan.
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It might be a nice epilogue, depending on if the divorce / lawsuit / whatever between Marissa Dawson and Theodore Walcutt resolves...
If Tansy can go back to Maui and that sacred spot and apologize to Spirit-Chan...
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Malady wrote: It might be a nice epilogue, depending on if the divorce / lawsuit / whatever between Marissa Dawson and Theodore Walcutt resolves...
If Tansy can go back to Maui and that sacred spot and apologize to Spirit-Chan...
Oh I think the epilogue to this story will be quite spectacular. I'm sure everyone will agree. I mean its Halloween after all! Somebody has to die...

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Katssun wrote: - Tansy thought she ripped Spirit-chan apart, and perhaps she very well did. How many other avatars are also espers?
Heyoka was an astral avatar and an empath. Key word being "was".
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If you want to count espers that look to be capable of learning magical channeling: Diamondback.
Judging by their interesting lives, Hartford's right to be very, very concerned.
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Katssun wrote: - Tansy thought she ripped Spirit-chan apart, and perhaps she very well did. How many other avatars are also espers?
Heyoka was an astral avatar and an empath. Key word being "was".
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If you want to count espers that look to be capable of learning magical channeling: Diamondback.
Judging by their interesting lives, Hartford's right to be very, very concerned.
You have to wonder if there was a serious staff discussion about the feasibility and ethics of giving team Kimba an all expenses trip to Easter Island (or rather than little coral reef just a couple of hundred miles to the norht east thereof) to spend Halloween? I mean, having that many lightning rods in one place is begging for trouble and after 2006 the school has no excuse of ignorance...
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Serious question: Are all the probability manglers allowed to attend the same party? I'm guessing they all get to attend the graduation ceremony, but that is a far more controlled event.Erianaiel wrote: You have to wonder if there was a serious staff discussion about the feasibility and ethics of giving team Kimba an all expenses trip to Easter Island (or rather than little coral reef just a couple of hundred miles to the norht east thereof) to spend Halloween? I mean, having that many lightning rods in one place is begging for trouble and after 2006 the school has no excuse of ignorance...
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What if there are 'hidden' odds manglers? What I mean is people who mangle the odds, but not enough that they've come to the notice of the administration? What would happen if one of them heterodyned with someone like Jinx?Katssun wrote:
Serious question: Are all the probability manglers allowed to attend the same party? I'm guessing they all get to attend the graduation ceremony, but that is a far more controlled event.Erianaiel wrote: You have to wonder if there was a serious staff discussion about the feasibility and ethics of giving team Kimba an all expenses trip to Easter Island (or rather than little coral reef just a couple of hundred miles to the norht east thereof) to spend Halloween? I mean, having that many lightning rods in one place is begging for trouble and after 2006 the school has no excuse of ignorance...
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Anne wrote: What if there are 'hidden' odds manglers? What I mean is people who mangle the odds, but not enough that they've come to the notice of the administration? What would happen if one of them heterodyned with someone like Jinx?
There are always unaccounted-for odds manglers; for example magicians who aren't well-practiced in holding onto the Essence in their wells.
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If Tansy gets it first, she'll summon all the forest creatures, and there will simply be nothing left of Nimbus to examine or bury. He will simply evaporate from the tranquility and positive emotions.bergy wrote: Who else here is curious as to what the Tansy Force will be like?
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Erianaiel wrote: You have to wonder if there was a serious staff discussion about the feasibility and ethics of giving team Kimba an all expenses trip to Easter Island (or rather than little coral reef just a couple of hundred miles to the norht east thereof) to spend Halloween? I mean, having that many lightning rods in one place is begging for trouble and after 2006 the school has no excuse of ignorance...
You mean Isla salas y Gómez ? It's not a coral reef, it's a volcanic island, like Easter Island itself. Like Hawaii, both islands were formed by a volcanic hot spot before the plate drifted eastwards. There's a whole chain of seamounts.
Anyway, that's not the most isolated place I could think of. Just drop the Kimbas in a boat in Point Nemo . On second thought, maybe that's not the best idea, since Point Nemo is supposed to be where R'lyeh is located.
If you want to be sure, talk Tennyo into taking them in the Yukinojo to visit the Magellanic Clouds.
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Who? The Cannibals or Team Kimba? Frankly you might end up leveling Miami, then again that might be your intention...null0trooper wrote: Send them to Miami. Cannibal Season ends with Labor Day, so they should be relatively safe.
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Who? The Cannibals or Team Kimba? Frankly you might end up leveling Miami, then again that might be your intention...null0trooper wrote: Send them to Miami. Cannibal Season ends with Labor Day, so they should be relatively safe.
TK should be safe, even with a month left to go on hurricane season (e.g., Wilma, October 24, 2005).
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Ugh... We don't have a page for Soaring, on the Wiki...
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So Happy, then we knew it wasn't gonna go well, but. Wow, that's horrifying.
And might also be Murphy having Bad Luck, right after she basically hit her cap on Good Luck??
This post is basically just gonna focus on the ending, but the rest of the story is cool too!
Did Lifeline just utterly screw up?
'Cause if it's "“Left for thee and right for me,”", and Right was what Murphy took. That's sorta suicidal?
Or is it actually a coma, or would've worked differently with Lifeline, allowing her to fight Grizzly or something? Or did Nimbus actually tamper with it?
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Given that Murphy's spirit went away, depending on how important she is to Nimbus's plan, might he actually work to revive her?
But no, this seems quite final, if really sudden.
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Malady wrote: 'Cause if it's "“Left for thee and right for me,”", and Right was what Murphy took. That's sorta suicidal?
No, she held out her left hand and that is what was taken.

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Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Malady wrote: 'Cause if it's "“Left for thee and right for me,”", and Right was what Murphy took. That's sorta suicidal?
No, she held out her left hand and that is what was taken.
OH! ... Yeah, I thought Elaine took the cup already, and Murphy took the other cup...
Whoops!

So, I'm basically thinking there's no hope anymore. *sad*
And wow, Murphy's costume. It's so... on-the-nose, might be the phrase I want?
Adam grew two inches taller as he gave his elbow to this queen and set forth to a high school party as though he had earned a Roman Triumph. For once, almost appropriately, in the back of his mind, his conscience warned, Be wary, Caesar, for all glory is fleeting...
That makes me very afraid for Adam's love life...
Those BIT resort tickets... Who might make good use of it? Not Generator, not Ayla... Hmm...
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Jericho gave Tansy a guitar as a gift, he must have loved her playing. Aww, forgot Kayda missed that jam session, though not seeing Jericho in a kilt might balance that out. Seesh, talking about your sex life in front of Kayda, poor girl is pining for Debra bad now.October 31st, 2007
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Hey, he has good taste.Elaine made a gesture of innocence. “Blame mah dad, he loves Monty Python.”
The International American's Cup, nice that Tansy's team and boat won it. Ouch, only getting the boat because he dad didn't want it anymore. Bwahahaha, Lanie sure knows how to get to Tansy with the teasing. Pretty nice shower for 4 people. Kayda stealing a jealous glance, girl, you need to learn to let go. Nice to see them remind Kayda they both love her in their own way, she needs it from time to time.
Poor Lina, having to deal with all that and not able to talk to her mother about it. Game room only to find Lara Croft and it is Steve, shifting when not thinking about sometimes, that has to make things complicated.October 31st, 2007
1st Floor Game Room 'A', Poe Cottage, Whateley Academy
And add another condition to the growing list which mutants can have. Doesn't know what he looks like, now that is a scary condition once he spells it out.“I have Chaney Syndrome.” Seeing her confusion, he continued. “It's named after the actor, Lon Chaney, the so-called 'man of a thousand faces'. This,” and he gave a gesture to indicate himself, “isn't what I look like.”
Steve's dad is an ass, ditching his wife and son when he manifested, and ouch, Lina's dad dying in Afghanistan. And now the embarrassing discussion of how to get her 'little buddy' under control, heh. And Steve is interested in Lina, guess the rumors have died down about him for this to just get out. And Lina being sensitive to Steve's nature, now there is someone you should be proud to have as a friend. Mario Cart, ah, good times, now that was a fun game and still is.
Well that is a surprise, Tansy is in Ms. Hartford's old room in Dickinson, class of 88'.October 31st, 2007
Room 502, Dickinson Cottage, Whateley Academy
Another serious matter, what is it this time? Telling Tansy she might be able to create a Force, heavy. Can't even speak about this amongst themselves, eep.“Good,” Hartford declared solemnly. “I need you to understand this and for all of your sakes, you are not to breathe a word of this to anyone, other than myself, Sensei Ito or Headmistress Carson.”
And Tansy is a powerhouse as if we haven't suspected it before now.“Oh,” Amelia declared with a smile. “Tansy you are an Exemplar Four, though there are some overlaps with your spirit's assistance. With Mustang's help you can pass yourself off as a five or even a six if needs be, but my advice is for you to be discrete. Speaking of Mustang, our best guess is for your avatar trait is that we don't have one. Were I to have to update your MID, I would probably mark it as a four because that would give you some plausible deniability with our theory. In reality, if people were not evil, you would be a five simply because that is where we classify people with 'beats us' abilities.”
Hehe, Mrs. Horton eavesdropping on Steve and Lina, at least she does it for a good cause. And she loves mothering so it isn't even a job, how sweet. And a crush on Trish Savage, working out with her over the summer and fall and gotten into shape. Aww, doesn't think Trish would go for her. WIth those teens around she will never be alone, plus I wouldn't doubt if more than one of her charges had a secret crush on Mrs. Horton.October 31st, 2007
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So this is the de facto party location for the school, nice. Heartbreaker and the Alphas setting up the decorations, and food and drinks by Chef Marcel, *tries to dive through the screen into their reality*October 31st, 2007
Fixer's Patio, Schuster Hall next to the Crystal Hall, Whateley Academy
Melvin Donner as the Incredible Hulk, now that is priceless. Ms. Dawson costume, yeow! Ian Parker as the Green Hornet and his husband Bo Zhang-Parker as Kato, now there is a cute couples costume. Tansy as Catwoman in that outfit might need some medics on standby. Nice to see Jericho went simple, was scared he might have gone as the Crazy Quilt but with his own mix of colors.
Ouch, Murphy dressing up like that, thinking it is her future.
And two tickets so she can take a parent along, Tansy is really living up to doing good anyway she can. And now wishes to patch up Lanie and Murphy's relationship, hope it works.“Just trying to help,” Walcutt returned. “There is a specialty clinic on Tortola in the British Virgin Islands. “They deal in BIT malfunctions, probably the best on the planet. And they know how to bill me.”
Joanne frowned and put the envelope on the stage in front of Tansy. “I haven't done anything to earn something like that, and I don't want your charity. I earn my own way in the world.” Tansy reached down and pushed the envelope back at Joanne.
“Once, another hero asked The Batman what his superpower was. Do you know what he answered?” Murphy shook her head, a strange expression on her face with her disturbing black eyes. “He said, 'I'm Rich,'” Walcutt said with a smile. “I know I'm a bitch, Jo, and I know I can't buy forgiveness, but if I can't use my money to do good, then what is it good for? The tickets are good for a year. Think about it.”
Wyatt as Batman and Lanie as Poison Ivy, a nice theme with all there costumes. And Tansy using her telepathy to try and help Murphy fix this before it is too late, instead of living in regret. Ouch, memories of the incident with the Lit Chix and Maggie blowing up at Lanie over Grizzly. And Murphy thinks it was her power to manipulate probability which caused this, oh brother if she only knew Maggie's history. Seeing all this again from Murphy's perspective, she took it way worse and the Lit Chix need counseling.
Tansy, at that age sometimes it can be very hard to say, fearing how the other person might react, that in doing so all hope of regaining their friendship might be lost.Tansy smirked behind the mask. “Honey, a simple misunderstanding between friends has nothing on me! It was just a mistake, Joanne! Is it so hard to say, 'I'm sorry'?”
Now that was a great set-up for a joke response.Joanne tried and failed to hold onto her anger, and spit a little as she couldn't contain a laugh. “Cow? Me? All ninety eight pounds soaking wet of me?”
Tansy admired the claws built into her glove like they were her own nails. “I happen to like Skinny Cow ice creams,” she retorted, then joined the other girl in a giggle.
And yup, fear of making it worse and that her power was the cause of the end of Lanie and Maggie's friendship.
Dang, Tansy sure knows how to make a point in a harsh way. Glad to see Murphy is at least going to try and mend her friendship with Lanie, good job, Tansy.“Let me tell you what I know,” Tansy replied softly. “I know that saving me and redeeming Wyatt and the Alphas cost Elaine every friend she's had here. She did it anyway and she'd do it again because to her it was the right thing to do. Her mutation cost her the friends she grew up with in Georgia. She is alone, putting on a very brave face, but I am a telepath and she can't fool me. And as the Queen of Selfish Bitches, I'm here to tell you, Jo, either go make up with her or put my crown on your head, because you'll have earned it.”
Adam in that costume is going to have more than his date checking him out tonight.October 31st, 2007
Foyer, Dickinson Cottage, Whateley Academy
And she talks about Adam getting her out of later, dang.On the landing above him, Prudence Tavori stood, her lush model's body covered in spun, liquid gold, that clung to every curve and flowed like a river to her feet. Her left shoulder was covered in a cape that left the right arm bare and gathered at her hip. She was bedazzled in what looked like a King's Ransom in jewelry and was as regal as if Liz Taylor herself had been reincarnated in her. She gathered up the skirt and floated down the stairs to a fanfare of trumpets Adam was sure he heard, then smiled as she reached out and pushed his chin up to close the mouth he didn't even know was hanging open.
Of course the freshmen, even if they heard the tales of what happened last year on Halloween, might not believe them. Stronghold and Megagirl as Beta Ray Bill and Lady Sif, I would hate to be in a costume contest at their school.October 31st, 2007
Fixer's Patio, Schuster Hall next to the Crystal Hall, Whateley Academy
Rebecca Corbin's obsessive attention to detail won her the first place award for her exactingly perfect Lady Lightening costume.
Arrrgh, why must you paint such descriptive scenes I wish to see drawn?More than one gasp ran through the crowd as Lord Paramount, looking exceptionally regal as Prince Charming, escorted Amelia Hartford, who was dressed in Cinderella's classic blue ball gown, out to the dance floor and slowly waltzed to an epic cover of Celine Dion and Peabo Bryson's duet of Beauty and the Beast by Diamondback and Jericho.
Mrs. Carson as the Imp and Imp as an Angel will never get old.

Mindbird just won't leave Tansy alone, trying to make a bitch analogy and failing.
Ugh, really don't like Mindbird at this moment.The Black Canary took a step forward. “You're a bitch, Walcutt, from a family of bitches and assholes and that is your legacy!”
Ugh, can't stand Mindbird at all now, people can change and you refuse to accept it doesn't change that.“You disgusting cunt!” Dale hissed. “You think you can pretend or buy your way out of all you've done? That you won't have to answer for Montana? Or Trap Door? Or me? You haven't changed. You can't change! You might change sides, you might even fool Carson, but deep down you will always be the selfish little whore that almost made Montana hang himself.”
Maggie dressed as Indiana Jones and Mrs. Carson even makes a joke, what has me concerned is she asked for two drinks. Is she going to try to slip her concoction to Lanie? Maria watching the punch, no need for Bobby Earl to spike it and everyone wake up the next day wondering what happened. And yup, spiked punch, Maggie is in major trouble if this harms Lanie.
Jo going up to talk to Lanie, joking how she could be Rainbow Death if she were a My Little Pony. At least now all this is getting out, how Jo didn't know the truth about Tansy, what happened with Hamper and Damper and such.
At least they have made up now, about time.Jo's black eyes came up and she bravely held back the tears. “No, it is my fault! I'm an odds mangler! Whatever can go wrong will! Don't you see? I am the reason you and Maggie are screaming at each other! If you hadn't taken me in, you'd still have your friend. I'm sorry, Lanie! God, I'm so sorry!”
Maggie showing up with the drinks, offering Lanie one, Lanie thinking this is the best night ever and she is getting her friends back. Only for Murphy to take the drink and drink it, her own spirit forced from her body, Murphy is dead! No, no, no, no! It can't end like this, it just can't not after Lanie just got Murphy back as a friend.
Quickdraw back at Whateley, sneaking into a room in Whitman which Nimbus told him about. Nimbus using nameless horrors, yikes. Wanting pages from the book of shadows, a copy of the one Kayda was arranged to find. An Ambulance from Doyle on the way.October 31st, 2007
Room 308, Whitman Cottage, Whateley Academy
Don't tell me Nimbus manipulated Maggie into making that potion, Nimbus has another thing to pay for.Rutherford smiled as he ran. “Looks like Nimbus' test was a big success!”
All the build-up, all the different costumes, and excitement from students for the Halloween party, everything with Lanie needing counseling to let go of her past life, to learning Tansy's true power ratings and such were great. Even seeing Murphy helped by Tansy to get up the nerve to apologize to Lanie and be friends again was great. But killing off Murphy, I never expected that, that hit hard. Someone with mental issues and troubles trying to work to make their life better and restore lost friendships, hit way too close to home for me. Good storytelling just really shocked she is gone.
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Dreamer wrote:
Quickdraw back at Whateley, sneaking into a room in Whitman which Nimbus told him about. Nimbus using nameless horrors, yikes. Wanting pages from the book of shadows, a copy of the one Kayda was arranged to find. An Ambulance from Doyle on the way.October 31st, 2007
Room 308, Whitman Cottage, Whateley Academy
The spell was copied into a Book of Shadows, which is a strictly Western practice. Kayda is neither a Wiccan nor a strega, and we've never seen her enter "Freak House Femme".
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Don't tell me Nimbus manipulated Maggie into making that potion, Nimbus has another thing to pay for.Rutherford smiled as he ran. “Looks like Nimbus' test was a big success!”
That wasn't Maggie Finson's room either (Room 316, with Shelly Carson, at the opposite end of the hall from Room 308). She might have pre-empted one of Nimbus' tests, but the night is still young and Cleopatra has time enough to practice her charms.
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If so, can Kayda find it? If not Kayda, can Diamondback find it? If Diamond can't...can Fury?

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Katssun wrote: Murphy's spirit didn't actually get obliterated though, did it? It just got banished deep into the astral realm.
I believe the technical term for her condition is "dead".
Katssun wrote: If so, can Kayda find it? If not Kayda, can Diamondback find it? If Diamond can't...can Fury?
How many years of applicable magical training do these three have at this point in their stories?
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null0trooper wrote: That wasn't Maggie Finson's room either (Room 316, with Shelly Carson, at the opposite end of the hall from Room 308). She might have pre-empted one of Nimbus' tests, but the night is still young and Cleopatra has time enough to practice her charms.
Dang it, it seems no matter how hard we try some little mistakes always get through. The room number is a typo, it was meant to be 316 and has been corrected. Oops!

We certainly are grateful for having such eagle eyed fans!
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Several thoughts occur.
If Nimbus is trying to make a Force. then he would potentially have had some form of capture device/devise/spell waiting to capture Grizzy.
It's possible that Murphy's spirit was caught by this, so may be retrievable.
Failing that if Murphy is Dead-Dead, and not just Slightly-Dead, then she'll be missed.
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Also, the whole "those with mystical sight saw her spirit leaving her body" thing appeared to be... well... different from a normal death. I expect that The Hunt For Murphy's Soul (tm) will be a standalone story.
Somehow, I think that Tansy's ability to play spirit-catch-and-release and/or spirit-mashing-into-a-Force will play a role. Maybe Tansy will have to play host to Murphy's soul while her body is thawed back from suspended animation or whatever? Or maybe Murphy's body is dead, but Murphy herself will end up joined with Suwakawan into the Tansy Force?
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Sir Lee wrote: I think Murphy's story is not finished yet. I mean, J.G. went to all the trouble of setting up the mysterious attack that imprinted her with Vamp's BIT for... nothing?
Grafting an extended lifespan without increased cancer risk to Regeneration-4 and mutant Chanelling-2 would make for a nice start toward building HM's next body donor. I think we'll get to see if HM learned anything from Jared Sinclair in the follow-up story.
Sir Lee wrote: Also, the whole "those with mystical sight saw her spirit leaving her body" thing appeared to be... well... different from a normal death. I expect that The Hunt For Murphy's Soul (tm) will be a standalone story.
There is an open question regarding how the poison kills, and how it manages to do so so rapidly.
Sir Lee wrote: Somehow, I think that Tansy's ability to play spirit-catch-and-release and/or spirit-mashing-into-a-Force will play a role. Maybe Tansy will have to play host to Murphy's soul while her body is thawed back from suspended animation or whatever? Or maybe Murphy's body is dead, but Murphy herself will end up joined with Suwakawan into the Tansy Force?
When the body is thawed out, the poison will still be inside her. Whether it has been able to adapt to the alchemical poison, who knows? But if Tansy could sustain Shroud, there's a good chance to do so for Murphy if she's a stable Class 3.
Kayda may not have to do the spirit fetching this time, but as a shaman she should learn how to shove a lost spirit back into where it belongs. The body does have to be viable.
If Maggie's work can be replicated, an antidote could theoretically be devised. Longer odds for developing one from Murphy's recovered body. But it's something the Good Guys should really, really want, ASAP.
gpoetx wrote: Just as heyoka, it kind of hurt a little to see another older character killed. Really built up the redemption in the story with a powerful ending. Maggie's going to jail...
People that HM has a use for have a habit of escaping from physical imprisonment.
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The theft of the page from Maggie's room was critical for part of that plan. There was enough detail about what the poison does, how it does, and the full ingredients list. Mandrake root, the "death scream" kind, was the main ingredient. Maggie also compared it to iocaine powder as a joke to herself, so she knew it would kill nearly instantly.null0trooper wrote:
Sir Lee wrote: Also, the whole "those with mystical sight saw her spirit leaving her body" thing appeared to be... well... different from a normal death. I expect that The Hunt For Murphy's Soul (tm) will be a standalone story.
There is an open question regarding how the poison kills, and how it manages to do so so rapidly.
Sir Lee wrote: Somehow, I think that Tansy's ability to play spirit-catch-and-release and/or spirit-mashing-into-a-Force will play a role. Maybe Tansy will have to play host to Murphy's soul while her body is thawed back from suspended animation or whatever? Or maybe Murphy's body is dead, but Murphy herself will end up joined with Suwakawan into the Tansy Force?
When the body is thawed out, the poison will still be inside her. Whether it has been able to adapt to the alchemical poison, who knows? But if Tansy could sustain Shroud, there's a good chance to do so for Murphy if she's a stable Class 3.
Kayda may not have to do the spirit fetching this time, but as a shaman she should learn how to shove a lost spirit back into where it belongs. The body does have to be viable.
If Maggie's work can be replicated, an antidote could theoretically be devised. Longer odds for developing one from Murphy's recovered body. But it's something the Good Guys should really, really want, ASAP.
I'd question whether or not it works the same way with some kind of tolerance that can be built, doubtful though, Maggie was lead to believe it could kill spirits, but not a person. I'm not sure how it would have worked on Lanie, but my guess would be not how Maggie expected.
How much mythos magic is involved in the creation of the toxin, if any? It comes from the book of shadows, no?
Who needs to identify what happened to Murphy. Doyle or Magic department? Would the latter even know to look? If it is mythos based despite its natural ingredients, and works the same way that Maggie jokingly compared it to iocaine, there may be none. Maggie intended to kill off Grizzly for good, and thought she had made a supernatural spirit poison.
With the page gone, they need to rely on Maggie remembering what she put in it and how she worked the magic to make it. She's likely very distraught and probably headed for ARC. She may have no idea what she made.
Lacking any info on what it does, Doyle potentially not being able to remove the poison, and it very likely being mythos-based? Kayda and Lodgeman seem to be the prime candidates for fixing her body, if that's where the story goes.
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Katssun wrote: How much mythos magic is involved in the creation of the toxin, if any? It comes from the book of shadows, no?
"Book of Shadows" is the Craft (Wicca) name for a person's or a circle's book of spells and rituals. Wiccan and other neopagan practices shouldn't be broadly equated with demonology or mythos sorcery.
Katssun wrote: Who needs to identify what happened to Murphy. Doyle or Magic department? Would the latter even know to look?
I would expect someone in the Magic Dept. to know something about alchemy, herbal lore, and magical poisons. If you meant the former (Doyle) I'd have to point out that that's where Donna Fields was treated.
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Here's yer one-way ticket to an MCO prison, ya stupid git!
I mean, if something like this was real, what the hell was she thinking? Would she have watched one too many bad spy movies? Or worse (and more likely), has she read one too many bad spy pulp novel?
Is she now going to use her "grief" to blame Loopy again?
Or will she take responsibility for her actions and admit that she's now a murderer?
Stupid, stupid girl!
In any case, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the consequences of this play out. Very well written, Nalley!
Also, it just goes to show that the road to hell is paved with good intentions, and the road to super hell is paved with what you claim are your good intentions.
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She wasn't thinking, she swore a blood oath against Grizzly, all that needed to be done to lead her to try to follow through with it is to present her with a means,Greatdingo wrote: Why hello Maggie!
Here's yer one-way ticket to an MCO prison, ya stupid git!
I mean, if something like this was real, what the hell was she thinking? Would she have watched one too many bad spy movies? Or worse (and more likely), has she read one too many bad spy pulp novel?
Is she now going to use her "grief" to blame Loopy again?
Or will she take responsibility for her actions and admit that she's now a murderer?
Stupid, stupid girl!
In any case, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the consequences of this play out. Very well written, Nalley!
Also, it just goes to show that the road to hell is paved with good intentions, and the road to super hell is paved with what you claim are your good intentions.
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elrodw wrote: Will there be a sequel? Maybe. Maybe not. If so, who would write it? EE again? Perhaps. Maybe with contributions of JG and Elrod, or some combination thereof. Or an unknown anonymous author.
JG's already described how Murphy might look at the end-point of her transformation. If and when it happens it should be a wild ride for all concerned.
elrodw wrote: Will we learn about Maggie's actions and motivations? Possibly - if there IS indeed a sequel. Or maybe Maggie is going to be shipped to an insane asylum or prison, and Murphy is dead - unless her spirit is vacuumed up by the spirit-sucker.
We've seen that she's been blinded by her fear and hatred, so what she intended when she started reversing her resurrection project (Girl's been on a dark path for a while!) doesn't mean that's what she got. First stop for her should be jail and a competency hearing (Note: prisons can have mental wards). If Our Boi HM wants her, she can disappear during transport just like Quickdraw, Make, and Overclock.
Wouldn't it be fun to see the look on Lanie's face when she finds herself strapped to a table for Grizzly to be extracted from her: she looks up, and the Master's doting assistants are none other than Maggie and Kayda?
With that mythos thrall spell, Kayda's spirit-calling and spirit-binding knowledge, and a handy vessel like Elaine Nalley at his disposal, HM could milk them for every Native spirit the Lakota recognize in building his Master Force.

Murphy's spirit was seen pulling a Leia , not dropping into one of the local underground labs, so she may not be in the same danger that Heyoka's spirit found themselves in. (It could be much worse.) By the same token, I don't think it was ever revealed who or what Murphy was a Channel for - they might not be finished with Whateley (Make that a lot worse.)
elrodw wrote: Or she binds with someone and becomes the spirit of some unknown avatar.
That could happen, except that folks who can handle a discorporate human intelligences or a pure astral life form for an extended time without altering the entity and/or the host are rare. (Basically, Tansy and maybe Timeless)
elrodw wrote: Or possibly by the time it is to be returned, something evil has taken up residence in Maggie's body - like HM or TWFKAH, or something completely unexpected - like Spirit-Chan!
If the poison does what I think it does and it still only gave Murphy the boot, I know an OC whose life just got a bit more complicated with this story.

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knew Maggie's plan was gonna go bad some how, but i didn't see innocent by stander death. Remember kids the more a plan is explained or obvious, the more it's likely to fizzle.
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How deep ? 'Cause I thought that if she were vacuumed up, we'd see her being drawn that to the mirror already...
But, maybe Nimbus's mirror has the sucking end happening inside the astral, and pulling all the small spirits to some point in the astral, then pulled back to the Prime Material Plane?
Or the Force is being made in the same relative location as the Mirror, in the Astral, since it isn't stable in the PMP...
Murphy Force, because she's being mashed with other spirits?
Lol if Grizzly Force was the other possibility.
What was Nimbus's plan? 'Cause both of those seem BAD, for him. ... I feel like I shoulda been ninja'd, but maybe not. TTYL.
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Murphy's Channelling is tied to her spirit, and if she goes near Laura, and Laura, can't die? Or is reanimated?
Can Nimbus handle that?
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Wasn't he sticking to small spirits since the mirror wasn't ready for the big time?
Or does he have enough mage sight, and is watching, to know that this wasn't a proper test?
Wait... Is there a specific reason why Heyoka's spirit was still on campus? Was it trapped somewhere?
All the spirits of the dead at Whateley, if they died after a certain date, are stuck on campus?
IIRC, it was confirmed that Heyoka couldn't be revived, through a bio-dev generated body, even though their soul was still on campus? But why?
Too late right now, ttyl.
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Cryptic wrote: Wasn't Lifeline the one who had done all the spirit/reserection study in Forger List? been a bit since I read it.
Yeah, but her resurrection spell could only be done at the moment of death, before the spirit went off into the Astral. Murphy is too late, unless she's been caught by Nimbus or something.
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Cryptic wrote: Wasn't Lifeline the one who had done all the spirit/reserection study in Forger List? been a bit since I read it.
Yeah, but her resurrection spell could only be done at the moment of death, before the spirit went off into the Astral. Murphy is too late, unless she's been caught by Nimbus or something.
That's what I thought, Whih makes me wonder if she realized that it was to late or if she tried to snag Murphy's soul
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“Be glad you didn't,” Lanie told her. “Jericho in a kilt. Ah still have nightmares.”
“Oh you do not,” Tansy scolded her.
“How would you know?”
“Because I'm usually having sex with you in your dreams!” the blonde shot back.
Hey, I want nightmares like this too!
“Uh, guys? I'm right here, ya know!” Kayda complained, which got the blonde and red head laughing. “I wish Debra were here,” she mumbled.
“Oh stop pining for the fjords!” Lanie told her with a grin. “If Ah know you two, you're up to this and that in Dream Space just the same as Tansy, Wyatt and me!”
I think she's salty for not getting any copyrights. You're ripping her off, after all.
Tansy came back from the wardrobe, handing Lanie a bath robe and a bundle of clothes. “Oh, that was the victory celebration at the International America's Cup. I actually drank enough champagne to get tipsy! That's my yacht, the Tansy IV. We won.” She gave Kayda a critical gaze. “Kayda, I'm not sure I have anything that will fit you, looks like we have about the same hips, but all of my jeans will be too long for you.”
“What do I need clothes for?” she asked, puzzled. “And you named your yacht after yourself?”
Kayda is asking all the important questions.
“Uh, sure,” the Lakota girl replied. “You and Lanie swap clothes a lot?”
“Well, Lanie is top heavy, but we're otherwise the same size,” the blonde returned.
“Ah don't recall you complaining about the size of mah tits when...”
More light-hearted than the most recent switch of clothing involving them...
Kayda stole a jealous glance or two as she disrobed, both because of some part of her remembering her time with Lanie in the sweat lodge and the fantasy of marital bliss that Coyote had tempted her with.
Fuck, even here. Forget it, Kayda. You have some just as nice as these ones home, and Vile E Coyote is a filthy liar who promised mountians of nothing anyways.
They moved over the nozzle and turned it on, steam quickly beginning to fill the room, some from the heat of the water, some from the passionate embrace the two engaged in as the water soaked their hair to their scalps and began to make their skin glisten. “I need to take a trip to Souix Falls,” she muttered under her breath as she got under the other shower head and let the hot water beat on her and tried not to listen to the sounds of their embrace as she did so. “Oh, get a room!” she scolded them.
They have one. The whole proble is that you don't.
Lina sighed as she found nothing that interested her in the vending machines lining one wall of the little kitchen area and so left it, feeling despondent. Tonight was one of the biggest party days of the school year but she definitely didn't feel like celebrating. The 'extra' gift her male spirit had bestowed on her made her feel like a freak, even as her exemplar BIT was turning her into the luscious curves of the body of a male adolescent fantasy she had always wanted, her spirit was working over time making sure it's maleness was well marked on her.
Aetheric bastards, still living as if their precious UberKewlLand wasn't a puddle between Americas, Europe and africa.
“Yeah, sorry,” the senior replied in his normal voice as he paused the game and put down the controller to give Lina his full attention. “Sometimes I still shift forms when I'm not thinking about it.” He flashed a perfect smile that Lina desperately wished did something for her. “Hey, it's the big party night, aren't you going?”
Well, you don't seem in any hurry either.
The smile flashed again, but didn't make it to his eyes. “Yeah, I guess I just assumed I'm the leading topic of gossip still.” He sighed and laid his forearms over his legs to lean on. “I have Chaney Syndrome.” Seeing her confusion, he continued. “It's named after the actor, Lon Chaney, the so-called 'man of a thousand faces'. This,” and he gave a gesture to indicate himself, “isn't what I look like.”
Mutation, aka the way to create always more syndromes to ruin your life. At least you're getting superpowers out of the deal.
He laughed darkly. “Oh yeah, my parents. Man I thought nothing would be worse than coming out to them. Oops!” The smile left his face. “My dad bailed on mom, couldn't take it that 'his boy' was a flaming queer and a mutant.”
Lina flinched and in a quiet voice said, “My dad died in Afghanistan.”
“Sorry,” he told her. After a long moment of silence he softly said, “I think Mom blames me. I mean, she doesn't say it, but... Anyway, why would I want to be that guy?”
Misery poker, nobody wins. Ever. Don't matter how much justification you have and hwo good they are.
He looked up, his face wasn't so perfect, in fact it was rather forgettable, with mousy brown hair instead of the windblown blond boy band locks. But it was an honest face. “Thanks,” he said and made a gesture at the game. “You wanna play some?”
That's more like my nights than any fiesta... except anime/RPG/videogames conventions.
“Thanks, Danny, uh, Pounce suggested baseball...” She paused as the thought of the exotic cat girl in the shower made her predicament worse and, fit to die of embarrassment, she had to adjust herself to be comfortable. “God, I'm so sorry!”
Still not the worst thing happening to Danny here in Poe. Right, Generator? And heck, every single girl of that dorm.
He shook his head ruefully. “Oh, there was a time! Mrs Horton really chewed me out last year, said I was putting the whole cottage at risk, being a jerk. Told me there was a difference from being out and proud as opposed to being a walking stereotype. She didn't pull any punches. I've tried to be discreet ever since.”
And yet we readers never saw any of this... I know, focus isn't on him. Still mmakes you wonder how is life going outside cameras... Could Betas be decent for instance? Nah, just impossible.
“You are one of the good ones, Lina. And I'm glad I know you. Now, I'm going to kick your ass in Mario Cart.”
“Bring it, Goldilocks! You are going down!”
Is that mispelled knock-off nowhere near the savagery levels of the original? If so, they're not remaining friends for long.
“This was your room?” Walcutt demanded somewhat incredulously. “You were in Dickinson?”
I know it's not a 100% thing, but she doesn't strike me as a Whitman or Hawthorne girl, her current interrest in Paramount seems to disqualify Poe unless other data comes in... It was a toss up thing here.
“Good,” Hartford declared solemnly. “I need you to understand this and for all of your sakes, you are not to breathe a word of this to anyone, other than myself, Sensei Ito or Headmistress Carson.”
So, standard Whateley stuff.
“And that you expelled more than one spirit without suffering spirit separation shock?” The confused blonde nodded slowly. “Tansy, Elizabeth and I think you may be able to create a Force.”
“No way!” she protested instantly.
Eh, don't feel down, now you can fit with all the cool kids competing for the new rage: creating a Force.
“Oh,” Amelia declared with a smile. “Tansy you are an Exemplar Four, though there are some overlaps with your spirit's assistance. With Mustang's help you can pass yourself off as a five or even a six if needs be, but my advice is for you to be discrete. Speaking of Mustang, our best guess is for your avatar trait is that we don't have one. Were I to have to update your MID, I would probably mark it as a four because that would give you some plausible deniability with our theory. In reality, if people were not evil, you would be a five simply because that is where we classify people with 'beats us' abilities.” She chuckled ruefully and then turned her attention to Lanie. “Now, Elaine, what did Professor Geintz say to you?”
It even comes with this nice bonus.
Mrs Horton smiled to herself as she quietly left the door way of the game room where she had been eavesdropping on Steve and Lina. It was good to see Lina making friends and coming out of her shell. She had been so withdrawn when she first arrived, Bella had been worried about her. Of course, it was also good to see all the work she had put into Steve Rossiter was paying dividends and he was becoming a fine young man, or whatever he would eventually choose to be.
My, my, only your most excellent and perfect work of moral and emotional support with Danny tops that achievement, you know that?
She shook her head, laughing at herself. She had thought herself far too old for crushes, but she had to admit, the fascination she had for the younger housemother of Whitman was wearing out its welcome. Too many more dreams about the tall, shapely blonde and she might actually have to do something about it. “As if she would be interested in an old frump like me,” Bella muttered to herself, catching her reflection in one of the mirrors in the laundry room as she pulled the door shut.
Eh, you don't know about your chances before trying.
Working out with Mrs Savage over the summer and fall had had results. She was no longer in danger of being called an 'Earth Mother' and truth be told she liked to consider herself back in the Rubenesque range; certainly full-figured, but the right kind of full-figured. And she had lost a good thirty pounds doing it, which made her doctors happy.
Meh, the living skeleton fashion is in need of a replacement anyways.
Tansy had decided to own her reputation and wear it on her sleeve. She was dressed in a dark purple jumpsuit and a hood type mask covered her head completely and came down to a mask with eye holes. The face of the mask was black as were the cat ears on the top of the hood. The jumpsuit had a belt of yellow disks that were actually compartments and surprisingly well designed. It was set off with black thigh-high boots and over-the-elbow gloves that had sharp, hard 'claws' in the fingers. Over her left shoulder to right hip was a coiled black bullwhip.
Pray nobody akes comment about wanting you in the version of the costume oming from that movie.
The boy grinned, not quite looking at Tansy. “What? You don't like my costume? I'm a teenager!”
“Bravo! Well played!” Tansy complimented. She noted that Murphy's skin was now completely milky white and both eyes were disturbingly black, but she was wearing a T-shirt of a rock band Tansy had never heard of and jeans. “What are you dressed as, Miss Murphy?” she asked.
Like she said, a teenager.
“No, the future of Joanne Gunnarson,” the rainbow haired girl replied. “Ever since this thing with my BIT every time I heal, my skin goes white. Just like Vamp, who's BIT got tangled with mine. There's nothing I can do about it, so...” she gave a gesture to indicate herself. “Scary, huh?”
Eh, could be worst, you could have gotten the hermaphrodism out of the deal too.
“What's this?” she demanded, opening the envelope to see and pair of boarding passes inside. “Plane tickets? You trying to get rid of me?”
Doubtful. More economic means exist.
“Once, another hero asked The Batman what his superpower was. Do you know what he answered?” Murphy shook her head, a strange expression on her face with her disturbing black eyes. “He said, 'I'm Rich,'” Walcutt said with a smile. “I know I'm a bitch, Jo, and I know I can't buy forgiveness, but if I can't use my money to do good, then what is it good for? The tickets are good for a year. Think about it.”
That, and it could work better than UV sessions and hair dye. Just an opinion.
“She was,” Tansy admitted, “But I talked her out of it.” She gave a pause long enough to give Murphy a chance to answer her question if she was going to. When it became obvious she wasn't going to, she asked, “Honestly, what is going on with you two?”
Given her reaction when she saw the two of you after the holidays... Burning jealousy?
The shade of Murphy left her new friends and headed towards the Crystal Hall, followed invisibly by her future self and the former object of her ire. There was an actual spring in her step as she filled her tray and began to walk to the Lit Chix table. The good mood didn't last long as she saw the shouting match that was in progress. “Ah will not leave the Lit Chicks just because you…”
Oh. Right. That moment where the whole pack of the Lit Bitches proved they were all grace under fire and true friends able to take a rift between two members of the group rationally to a bitch... Shallow bints, all of them.
“You have this obsession with this stupid Wicked persona and then you go and have someone bind a bear spirit into you and you expect me to sit still and watch you parade around like you’re not wearing my friend’s skin like a fucking cloak?”
First, blame Carson for Wicked. Second, for all my burning hatred of the aetheric bastards, their smugness and literally everything about them, I can still call bullshit about your drivel. Chew on that.
“Oh thank God, at least someone could get it through her…”
Yup, all grace under fire. I could almost hear these bints begin to complain that Elaine left before crying in their glasses so they could take the time to taste her tears...
“You don’t...” started Rebecca, but Murphy would have none of it.
“You’re right, I don’t. I’m done with you.” She turned on her heel and snatched up her book bag. “I’m done with all of you!” Her final taunt hanging in the air, Murphy watched herself vanish.
I never had many friends, Lit Bitch, but from the few I had, and everything I heard about it, I know that your behavior here was abject, repugnant, and many similar epithets. You little degerantes are supposed to be here for all your friends, and try to find a just middle when two begin arguing, not go gang-bang. Eh, did you learn that from the H1 mobs who went after you after betrayals of thers of your so-called friends?
Tansy smirked behind the mask. “Honey, a simple misunderstanding between friends has nothing on me! It was just a mistake, Joanne! Is it so hard to say, 'I'm sorry'?”
Again, teenager. For no reason I can't understand, they'll try to eat a fragmentation grenade whole before doing this. I wasn't a good teenager.
Tansy admired the claws built into her glove like they were her own nails. “I happen to like Skinny Cow ice creams,” she retorted, then joined the other girl in a giggle. “Ok, so if it's not pride, Joanne, clue me in, what is it? Why won't you just go talk to Elaine?”
Teenager, again.
Murphy stared at the boards of the stage and sighed. “Fear, alright?” she whispered. “I'm afraid that I'll make things worse. I don't care what you think, I know my mangling is what put Lanie and Maggie at each others throats. Come on! I asked around, those two were BFFs for life. Damn near sisters. I came and shit all over it. Lanie is better off hating me.”
First, odd mangling can be the awesome to save lifes. Ask the Loose Cannons when they manage to reach Whateley. Second, most emphatically nope: if they were even half the friends you describe here, the situation would be quite different.
“Let me tell you what I know,” Tansy replied softly. “I know that saving me and redeeming Wyatt and the Alphas cost Elaine every friend she's had here. She did it anyway and she'd do it again because to her it was the right thing to do. Her mutation cost her the friends she grew up with in Georgia. She is alone, putting on a very brave face, but I am a telepath and she can't fool me. And as the Queen of Selfish Bitches, I'm here to tell you, Jo, either go make up with her or put my crown on your head, because you'll have earned it.”
Again, none of these bints were friends in the first place if their behavior here is anything to go by. Guilt however, shows you as an actual friend. Don't waste that thinknig about thhese bints.
Adam grew two inches taller as he gave his elbow to this queen and set forth to a high school party as though he had earned a Roman Triumph. For once, almost appropriately, in the back of his mind, his conscience warned, Be wary, Caesar, for all glory is fleeting...
Especially when you disguise yourself into someone famous for losing and his suicide... Could have gone for less omnious foresadowing here.
Rebecca Corbin's obsessive attention to detail won her the first place award for her exactingly perfect Lady Lightening costume.
Funny, I remember 'Fractious' Castle as the Lit Bitch with an obsession for every single detail... Although connection Lady Lightning/becky is the way to go...
It wasn't perfect, there were a couple of scuffles that almost got to violence but the great aplomb with which Mr Donner was pulling off the alter ego of Bruce Banner, usually kept tempers from getting out of hand. As the evening wore on, people seemed to relax and genuinely begin to enjoy themselves. For many, the highlight was the surprise of the evening. More than one gasp ran through the crowd as Lord Paramount, looking exceptionally regal as Prince Charming, escorted Amelia Hartford, who was dressed in Cinderella's classic blue ball gown, out to the dance floor and slowly waltzed to an epic cover of Celine Dion and Peabo Bryson's duet of Beauty and the Beast by Diamondback and Jericho.
General consensus remains 'better than last year'. Except for Nacht.
The Black Canary took a step forward. “You're a bitch, Walcutt, from a family of bitches and assholes and that is your legacy!”
Hey Mindbird, you and your merry band of Cop Bullies are one year late here. Remember, that time you were content doing nothing except oppress bullying victims further as the virtuous Lawful Asshole you were (and you were one of the good ones)? Guess it's easier now everybody else did the work. Also, that remark is better be paternal-family only.
The sound of the slap across her face rung around the patio and was so unexpected it caught Tansy flat footed, exemplar reflexes or no. It didn't truly hurt, but feeling the anger burning off of Dale Townsend did. It was the kind of rage that wasn't healthy, that would fester into ulcers and worse. “You disgusting cunt!” Dale hissed. “You think you can pretend or buy your way out of all you've done? That you won't have to answer for Montana? Or Trap Door? Or me? You haven't changed. You can't change! You might change sides, you might even fool Carson, but deep down you will always be the selfish little whore that almost made Montana hang himself.”
Crawling Chaos, is that a Mantle thing where Head Beta is automatically hit with Concentrated Douchebaggery and Lawful Assholishness?
As for Carson... Let me speak moron so you even you can get it, pétasse. Lady Astarte. Champion's Pupil. Holder of Astarte Force. One-Time User of the Champion Force. Superhero with decades of experience. Mother. Teacher for decades. Headmistress for years.
Where the fuck did this description let you think, you and any other loser using that line (like, random wild crazy shot in the dark, Barney), that a teenage girl would have anything else than a snowball's chance in hell of running circles around Elizabeth Carson. Duck, can you even picture the monumental arrogance involved. Even Stormdork would call bullshit, and he had the Head Cop Bully Mantle before you.
Maggie nearly dropped the glasses from surprise. “Oh! Mrs Carson! Yes...Yes, ma'am, I've got the NAZIs taken care of!” She forced a smile and gave a terrible Harrison Ford impersonation. “NAZIs, I hate those guys!”
Drop it, bitch. You're nowhere near cool enough to play Indiana Jones.
Maggie looked over her shoulder as she moved to a more secluded spot to see that Mrs Carson wasn't watching or following her. Wyatt had left and someone with pure milky white skin was walking up to Elaine. It was her moment, she had to go now. Setting the punch down, she dug into the bag and took out the small wooden vial and broke the wax seal. The powder disappeared into the punch, making it bubble slightly as she picked the glasses back up carefully.
Maggie swallowed to calm her nerves. She must not spill. “Left for thee and right for me,” she half sang half whispered to herself and began to walk towards Elaine and the other girl. “Left for thee and right for me...”
Can't even remember Murphy. Repugnant.
Gunnarson forced a grin and tried to feel like this wasn't so important to her. “Heh, yeah, great look right? If I were a Little Pony, I could be Rainbow Death.”
Dunno, Rainbow Dash would be 20% cooler... And still pale in front of Best Pony Sunset Shimmer.
“It's almost November, Jo,” Elaine told her softly. “Why didn't you tell me this last year? Or this year before now?”
Rule of Three: Teenager.
Joanne found she could no longer meet the other girl's gaze and looked at the bricks that paved the patio. “When I came around the path the first thing I saw was you. But you weren't alone, you were with Tansy. And...and you hugged her. The bitch that I knew sent Hamper and Damper after us, who set us up to be raped and murdered!”
Fodder for the 'jealousy' file... If I was smashed and drugged up to the gills. Yes I have gills. Yes, I am weird, news at eleven.
Jo's black eyes came up and she bravely held back the tears. “No, it is my fault! I'm an odds mangler! Whatever can go wrong will! Don't you see? I am the reason you and Maggie are screaming at each other! If you hadn't taken me in, you'd still have your friend. I'm sorry, Lanie! God, I'm so sorry!”
Don't sweat it. Sometimes wrong will let you escape a black lab, or create chaos in a mall to let ou escape, or drop a flower pot on your enemy's head during a fight. Always keep a camera to immortalize the latter at first opportunity.
“I...I...” the blonde stammered. “We...we're too young to smoke. And I don't have a peace pipe, so, punch?”
Alarm bells, punch is the first thing spiked in anything involving students.
“No!” Maggie shouted, but it was too late, the rainbow haired girl had already tossed the glass back, gulping it down. She smacked her lips as the cup slipped from her fingers to break on the bricks below.
To anyone with mage sight, they saw the shade of Joanne Gunnarson forced backward out of her body a look of shock and ecstasy on her face that was lost as the spirit vanished out, deeper into the astral realms.
On the Prime Material Plane, the All Hallows Ball came to a sudden halt, one of those moments where the zeitgeist of a crowd becomes aware as one that something horrific was happening. In the tableau of silence, under the gaze of the entire school, the body of Joanne 'Murphy' Gunnarson fell over dead.
Maggie screamed in horror as she stared down at the dead girl.
Welp, success to you, bitch. Nope not sorry, I don't expect that Elaine would have fared much better here, and this bint still went for it.
Speaking of bints... To the rest of the Lit Bitches, you couldn't even do the 'make sure friends don't go earn Darwin Awards' thingie right? What? I'm trying to not focus on the very acute pain of seeing an actually decent and nice character potentially kicks the bucket for good. I'm not wasting mercy on that one.
Quickdraw ran, counting on his speed to keep him invisible, but carefully stuck to the route Nimbus had specified that would keep him out of range of any of the cameras. There was a hell of an uproar by the Crystal Hall, shouts, someone screaming their head off and over the band loudspeakers, the voice of Ms Hartford loudly telling everyone to stay calm. An Ambulance was bouncing over the grass up the hill to get to the party from Doyle Medical center, lights and strobes flashing.
Rutherford smiled as he ran. “Looks like Nimbus' test was a big success!”
Enjoy this while it lasts, he's right next to WitBitch and Don Assholo on the list for disposal. Also Carson, please prove naysayers like Barney and Brainy Birdie wrong by keeping Maggie under a lid.
Welp, it happened, bis. And now Nimbus has the 'Remove Avatar' part of his plans ready... Thanks again, Maggie.
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Did Maggie's chant to herself remind anyone else of this?:Maggie swallowed to calm her nerves. She must not spill. “Left for thee and right for me,” she half sang half whispered to herself and began to walk towards Elaine and the other girl. “Left for thee and right for me...”
High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan
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yepRose Bunny wrote:
Did Maggie's chant to herself remind anyone else of this?:Maggie swallowed to calm her nerves. She must not spill. “Left for thee and right for me,” she half sang half whispered to herself and began to walk towards Elaine and the other girl. “Left for thee and right for me...”
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In some ways, except for the repetition Maggie seemed much more together than the inept knight...Rose Bunny wrote:
Did Maggie's chant to herself remind anyone else of this?:Maggie swallowed to calm her nerves. She must not spill. “Left for thee and right for me,” she half sang half whispered to herself and began to walk towards Elaine and the other girl. “Left for thee and right for me...”
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Nowhereville discussion
- Malady
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If he was on campus for Phobos's death, could he have captured her soul??
Unlikely, I assume.
- null0trooper
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Malady wrote: 'Cause this is the latest story for Nimbus's black mirror-thing...
If he was on campus for Phobos's death, could he have captured her soul??
The chances are pretty good that on the school day during the morning classroom hours when Phobos went into burnout HM was in class (but not in Lillian Dennon's class).
If he had knowledge of the events as they were happening.
If he had reason to be interested in capturing mortal souls instead of the spirits that he designed his "soul chest" to hold - which rolls back the last half year of stories.
If he could spirit a dying Phobos out of Doyle Medical Center, past the Outcasts, without being stopped.
If he could the get her into his laboratory where the equipment to grab spirits was still being worked on in April 2007.
And if he could retrieve Adrienne's soul intact from that container without it being melded into the mix as it was designed to do with spirits, because anyone who knows more about his toys than he does is NOT someone any of the in-universe characters want to be making deals with.
Then maybe Adrienne could be "saved".
Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.
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Discussion Thread
- Malady
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Are Knight and Daze, real villains? Or just made for the sims? 'Cause if it's the latter, I'd rather not make pages for them in the Wiki? But if they are, at least it's simple to make it, given that they only appear once...
TTYL.
- Schol-R-LEA
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!