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Question Calling out the troops. (Call for readers aid)

7 years 8 months ago #1 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Ok, guys, I must be loosing my memory. I KNOW I wrote a scene from the POV of Kodiak and Mrs Carson on the opening morning of the Crystal Hall with it's new tiers and dais and such. (February 1st?) It should be somewhere between Even Murphy's Laws Have Loopholes and The Case of the Forgers List, perhaps a bit beyond, but I can't find it anywhere!

    My Posted stories here jump from January to March, like there is a story missing. Does anyone else remember this scene and what I'm talking about? Help! It's driving me nuts!

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    7 years 8 months ago #2 by Valentine
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  • I honestly do not remember such a scene.

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    7 years 8 months ago #3 by Rose Bunny
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  • Was it in a full-fledged story, or was it a micro-scene?

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    7 years 8 months ago #4 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Rose Bunny wrote: Was it in a full-fledged story, or was it a micro-scene?


    It should be in a story, and it's possible it wasn't in one of mine, but inserted into one of the others stories. We do this all the time.

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    7 years 8 months ago #5 by Astrodragon
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  • I dont remember it (which is why I queried it), and also the diagram you posted - never seen that before, either.

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    7 years 8 months ago #6 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • I recall the scene where the remodeling was announced, but I don't remember anything about how it was re-opened. It sounds as if there was a story written that never actually got published, or more likely, that it was re-written and somewhere along the line the scene was cut for one reason or another.

    Do you have backups of your stories anywhere else? While I can't speak for anyone besides myself, I have had too many instances where I experienced problems when writing and posting in a forum's editor to want to write anything longer than a micro-scene in the forum directly, so I expect a most of the stories get written and saved locally, sent to the other CC members (TINCC) for review and comment, then posted only after all of that.

    However, this alone might not be enough, as it means only the final versions will usually be saved. In programming, hard-won experience says that source code needs to not only be backed up, but also versioned - that each time a change is made or a milestone is reached, a copy of the changes needs to be saved, and an audit trail maintained to allow you to go back and review the changes made over time.

    I - and several others, including Ted Nelson and Doug Engelbart back at the time before even revision control was really even a thing - have long argued that similar tools would be a immense value to writers, musicians, and videographers, but for the most part they never emerged.

    Maybe it is time I go ahead and work on making some.

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    7 years 8 months ago - 7 years 8 months ago #7 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Astro, that Diagram I drew up quick today to make the picture easier to understand, that's why you hadn't seen it before, but ones like it did float around the group back in '10 or so when my brother drew up the Crystal Hall in Maya for us and suggested the use of the wasted space.

    I'll go back through my archives, see what I can find tonight.

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    7 years 8 months ago #8 by Polk Kitsune
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  • Mmmmnnn. I'll admit, I don't remember having read that scene, though I do remember the Hall being built, and re-opened.

    Let me make a search with Cody's name on the stories I passed over quickly. I'll see what I can find.
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  • There was one where kodiak bullied (relatively speaking) carson into sponsoring the alphas and laying out the plans. I do not personally remember the unveiling scene publishing.

    Just reaction bits from characters.
    7 years 8 months ago #10 by Polk Kitsune
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  • Hrmmm... Between Murphy and Forger's. You're sure? Because Forger happens during Ayla and the Birthday Brawl, and the Kimbas only get introduced to the Hall in the next Ayla story, the Mad Scientist. (Yeah, Ayla was REAL vocal of the temporary cafeteria during the Brawl story)

    Using the wiki's dated timeline as a reference, but then again, it could be inaccurate (No offence). Could it be that the scene was a flashback? I do remember a few scenes of Cody working on rebuilding the Hall, but not the opening.

    ... Huh. Seems I may have mistakenly skipped a few other stories. Missed the creation of Wondercute. May have to go back on those.
    7 years 8 months ago #11 by Malady
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  • I remember some scene talking about the changes to the place, but I think it was one of Ayla's stories?
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  • The Crystal Hall was supposed to be closed for renovation over the Winter Term, so the opening was likely to have been early March coinciding with Spring Break and "Ayla and the Mad Scientist" The first mention of which groups sat where that I've seen, I pulled from AatMS Chapter 2.

    "Ayla and the Mad Scientist, Ch. 1" has Vamp moving in with Phase Feb 19. Meals are in Dunn Hall, and Vamp's and XO's escapades take them to a Crystal Hall that's under construction. I'm not sure if that helps pin things down or not.

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    7 years 8 months ago #13 by Kristin Darken
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  • Sorry E.E. ... I pulled up the old site files and didn't find anything there. If it was ever posted, it had to have been on the forums... and while I might be able to find it there... it would be some pretty serious digging to make it happen.

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    7 years 8 months ago #14 by E. E. Nalley
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  • I'll go through my archives, it may have been in the aborted Lit Chix Top Gear Affair that the two scenes of Lanie questioning her morality on her boat after bedding Kodiak came from.

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    7 years 8 months ago #15 by Kristin Darken
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  • No... I have that. It wasn't in it.
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    7 years 8 months ago #16 by Sir Lee
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  • How odd. I must have had a copy of that at one time, because -- I kid you not -- I have a Windows shortcut *pointing to it*, but it's no longer there. My only explanation is that I might have deleted it if it was eventually incorporated into another story, but full-text searches haven't identified where.

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  • Kristin Darken wrote: No... I have that. It wasn't in it.

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    And this scene is textbook "Why Joe doesn't drink" right there.
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  • JG wrote: And this scene is textbook "Why Joe doesn't drink" right there.


    *Blink*

    You don't drink?

    All that was done sober?

    Everything in the list?
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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Ok, guys, I must be loosing my memory. I KNOW I wrote a scene from the POV of Kodiak and Mrs Carson on the opening morning of the Crystal Hall with it's new tiers and dais and such. (February 1st?) It should be somewhere between Even Murphy's Laws Have Loopholes and The Case of the Forgers List, perhaps a bit beyond, but I can't find it anywhere!

    My Posted stories here jump from January to March, like there is a story missing. Does anyone else remember this scene and what I'm talking about? Help! It's driving me nuts!


    All I know for sure is that it never made it into any of the stories I read. And I think I've read most all of the canon stories.
    7 years 8 months ago - 7 years 8 months ago #20 by JG
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  • Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
    *Blink*

    You don't drink?

    All that was done sober?

    Everything in the list?


    I am going to share with you a secret truth passed down from generation to generation for the last 240 or so years.

    There is nothing, and I mean literally NOTHING in this universe more dangerous to the health and well-being of everything and everyone than a bored Marine.

    Except a platoon of bored Marines.

    To paraphrase another Marine, only two things can happen when Marines are bored. It will either be truly amazing, or utterly horrifying. There is no middle ground. The author of the link below, in fact.

    terminallance.com/2014/09/16/terminal-lance-344-bored/

    The secret to this phenomena is based upon the highly classified diet your average Lance Corporal is subjected to while in Fleet Marine Force.

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    7 years 8 months ago #21 by Valentine
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  • JG wrote: To paraphrase another Marine, only two things can happen when Marines are bored. It will either be truly amazing, or utterly horrifying. There is no middle ground. The author of the link below, in fact.


    That's not entirely true. I've known a few Marines, and sometimes it is truly amazing AND utterly horrifying at the same time.

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    7 years 8 months ago #22 by Kristin Darken
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  • That's when they have inspiration as a direct result of having to put up with sailors. Most marines show their true genius only when challenged by the necessity of one-upping sailors. The same is true of most sailors. Some theorize the amount of genius is directly proportional to the alcohol available at the time.

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  • JG wrote:

    Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
    *Blink*

    You don't drink?

    All that was done sober?

    Everything in the list?


    I am going to share with you a secret truth passed down from generation to generation for the last 240 or so years.

    There is nothing, and I mean literally NOTHING in this universe more dangerous to the health and well-being of everything and everyone than a bored Marine.

    Except a platoon of bored Marines.

    To paraphrase another Marine, only two things can happen when Marines are bored. It will either be truly amazing, or utterly horrifying. There is no middle ground. The author of the link below, in fact.

    terminallance.com/2014/09/16/terminal-lance-344-bored/

    The secret to this phenomena is based upon the highly classified diet your average Lance Corporal is subjected to while in Fleet Marine Force.

    Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]


    You now have my undying wrath pointed your way (well maybe not undying wrath, I'll eventually hear or read something stupid, or get an annoying guest, or watch a funny video that will make me forget all about this, but until then this wrath is undying).
    Anyways, why did you have to post that link. I've now archived binged most of it while I was at work. I could have been doing something productive like editing a story, writing down ideas, characters or important scenes, or maybe doing my job. But NO you had to send me to an honestly funny web comic.
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    7 years 8 months ago - 7 years 8 months ago #26 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

    JG wrote: And this scene is textbook "Why Joe doesn't drink" right there.


    *Blink*

    You don't drink?

    All that was done sober?

    Everything in the list?


    Of course. that's why Joe did them. He doesn't have the solace of sweet, sweet ethanol to quiet the craziest ideas down long enough to forget them, the way the rest of us here do.

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  • Kristin Darken wrote: That's when they have inspiration as a direct result of having to put up with sailors. Most marines show their true genius only when challenged by the necessity of one-upping sailors. The same is true of most sailors. Some theorize the amount of genius is directly proportional to the alcohol available at the time.


    Which explains why you see that sort of thing in the Army among the Psyops units. Drawing badly-made propaganda posters all day is apparently dull as dishwater.

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    7 years 8 months ago - 7 years 8 months ago #28 by Iwasforger03
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  • Chiming in, yeah, I don't remember anything like that. And I was definetly around for that period. I will never forget Secret of the Forger's List.

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    7 years 8 months ago - 7 years 8 months ago #29 by Schol-R-LEA
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    7 years 8 months ago #30 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Hey guys, thanks very much to everyone who racked their brains for me. I was able to find part of it in my archives which are spread across like 6 HDDs and God knows how many USB keys and SD cards. It wasn't published, and was entitled Codys' A.R.C. most of which was folded into Whilst Any Speaks. Of course I also found lots of other stuff that hasn't seen the light of day either. Would anyone be interested in a From The Cutting Room Floor thread?

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  • Yes. Definitely. Can we have it tonight!
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  • As long as its canon status or lack thereof is made clear...

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