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7 years 2 months ago - 7 years 2 months ago #2 by Malady
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  • Coyote is coyote! His reasons are inscrutable. We can guess that part of his purpose is to keep us from falling into ruts of various sorts.
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  • Dreamer wrote: Danny in general classroom, an ambulance pulling into Doyle, red flag day, wonder what is up myself.


    Danny, possibly like most of the students, may not know that Doyle is the local region's trauma center. Come to think of it, Doyle likely also handles any manifestations gone wrong or critical mutant cases that aren't closer to Montreal, Quebec City, or Boston.

    Dreamer wrote: Team Pleiades, oh boy, how many training teams is Kayda on now?


    Four. Ghostwalkers, The Nations, Team Phoenix, and now this one. Not bad for a junior who tried to refuse taking part in BMA when she arrived in March 2007. As far as not looking forward to the upperclassman finals, she did push to be placed as a junior this year.

    Dreamer wrote: good grief, Kayda in a buckskin halter dress with thigh high boots, agree with Tansy about reworking that uniform, don't give the perv announcers more fuel when combat finals come around.


    Not many woodlands where Kayda is from.

    Dreamer wrote: Peeper trying to beg him to stay, exceptions to every rule, brings up Lanie but calls her Loophole. *eyes bug out* Adam freaks out, yelling at Peeper, saying her name is Elaine and his name his Adam, saying they are people.


    This is a little bit odd, as the canon stories have always shown a number of folks going by their codename even in private - and Greasy would know that. Then again, Adam is upset.

    Dreamer wrote: Mica isn't a man, drifting through the world of dreams, I don't like the sounds of this. Path crossed with others Mica tracks, says he is a teacher with lessons to impart, Coyote! Messing with her, guilty conscience that teaches best, lover will see you had the best of intentions. Uh oh, he is trying to warn her into calling off that group for revenge over what happened to Lanie's family or it will end badly. And saying they will meet again, Coyote, you are going stir up more trouble again and I hate you for it.


    Tansy may well be interfering in her lover's plan of revenge - something the other woman would take as a deep betrayal. Coyote may be trying to be helpful in his own way.

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    7 years 2 months ago #7 by konzill
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  • One day I may have to extract the random Marty scenes out, and see if they make a story. They've been popping up for a while now but seem completly unrelated to the stories they are appearing in.
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  • The Evil That Men Do (Part 1) wrote: For the first time in Elaine's memory, Tansy blushed.

    Uh oh. At this point it's only been, what, five minutes since Tansy blushed after her Hawaiian outburst? Not surprising if Elaine has a glitchy memory by now, though, what with how many people have fucked with her mind. Hopefully it's just another temporary issue caused by Grizzly moving in, not permanent damage.

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    Dreamer wrote: Peeper trying to beg him to stay, exceptions to every rule, brings up Lanie but calls her Loophole. *eyes bug out* Adam freaks out, yelling at Peeper, saying her name is Elaine and his name his Adam, saying they are people.


    This is a little bit odd, as the canon stories have always shown a number of folks going by their codename even in private - and Greasy would know that. Then again, Adam is upset.

    Most people are fine with going by codenames, but most people picked their codenames. Elaine's codename was assigned as a punishment, and she routinely asks people not to use it. Adam is aware of this, but Peeper hasn't bothered to notice or care since to him she's just an attractive body, not a person.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
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  • Most people are fine with going by codenames, but most people picked their codenames. Elaine's codename was assigned as a punishment, and she routinely asks people not to use it. Adam is aware of this, but Peeper hasn't bothered to notice or care since to him she's just an attractive body, not a person.

    John really needs to get with Kodiak and see if he can get an off pill for his vision, or stop being quite such a creep. 'Cause he is looking to spend the rest of his life looking at dicks while being in a prison. Frankly involuntary or not he needs to a) stop staring at the girls and b) stop commenting on the girls he is seeing. Otherwise he's just a peeping Tom and deserves to be put where he can't see the people he is failing to identify as anything except objects in his world.
    7 years 2 months ago - 7 years 2 months ago #10 by Mister D
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  • A chewy start to the tale.

    Coyote is Coyote, indeed. ( When he is not being a dead goose by a lake...)

    While we are only getting the narrative snapshots that the authors present to us, but i am wondering what the reactions of the Spirit World to the corruptions caused by The Bastard.

    We saw some of the reactions in JG's Darwin stories.

    Is the "trouble-stirring" that Coyote is triggering part of this?

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  • Mister D wrote: A chewy start to the tale.

    Coyote is Coyote, indeed. ( When he is not being a dead goose by a lake...)

    While we are only getting the narrative snapshots that the authors present to us, but i am wondering what the reactions of the Spirit World to the corruptions caused by The Bastard.

    We saw some of the reactions in JG's Darwin stories.

    Is the "trouble-stirring" that Coyote is triggering part of this?


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    No the team that Tansy aimed at the Lt Governor (If I recall correctly) was a ADA when the incident happened. Discovered that the man has someone else after him I would guess, unless he's got a higher level of security that he is keeping a secret life behind.. And they just discovered he is dirty. But it read to me that they discovered that someone else was targeting him. Of course we will have to wait for the next installment to come out to see just what is happening!
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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Most people are fine with going by codenames, but most people picked their codenames. Elaine's codename was assigned as a punishment, and she routinely asks people not to use it. Adam is aware of this, but Peeper hasn't bothered to notice or care since to him she's just an attractive body, not a person.


    Here in is the root of John's problem. While his power set and his parents over eager ambitions to be sure their little snow flake had great self esteem feed into it, the real source of John's issue is he doesn't see people AS people. They're extra's in his movie, or in a nut shell, it's all about him. And whether he can over come this well meaning mistake in child rearing and realize there's a whole world of other folks out there is the 'hero's journey' if you will he is on.

    Kettlekorn wrote: Uh oh. At this point it's only been, what, five minutes since Tansy blushed after her Hawaiian outburst?


    Ah, call this one an edit mistake. But the point is blushing is a sign that Tansy is learning humility.

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  • Anne wrote: John really needs to get with Kodiak and see if he can get an off pill for his vision, or stop being quite such a creep. 'Cause he is looking to spend the rest of his life looking at dicks while being in a prison. Frankly involuntary or not he needs to a) stop staring at the girls and b) stop commenting on the girls he is seeing. Otherwise he's just a peeping Tom and deserves to be put where he can't see the people he is failing to identify as anything except objects in his world.

    His ability to see through clothes isn't really an issue. He's had this power for over a year; the novelty is gone by now. If he's still staring at girls, it's not because he can see through their clothes. It's because he likes staring at girls and doesn't see anything wrong with doing so; he'd do the same with or without his vision. Hell, if you fixed his eyes now, he'd probably stare at them even more over the short term, because not seeing through their clothes would be novel at this point. It would bring back the mystery of what's underneath. So, barring mindfuckery, medical solutions are out.

    That said, he does have another option besides not being such a creep. He could instead get better at being a creep. This is Whateley, after all, and among their most successful alumni are people like Emperor Wilkins. They train people to survive and thrive, not necessarily to be "good" people. Every year Whateley is going to push him harder and harder to get his shit together, whatever direction he chooses to go.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: That said, he does have another option besides not being such a creep. He could instead get better at being a creep. This is Whateley, after all, and among their most successful alumni are people like Emperor Wilkins. They train people to survive and thrive, not necessarily to be "good" people. Every year Whateley is going to push him harder and harder to get his shit together, whatever direction he chooses to go.


    Or even to become a useful creep - not unlike Princess Jobe. If the power is an esper power, there is theoretically a possibility for expanding the knack to greater penetration (as per the indy fic in which he becomes a very successful home inspector, though inspecting welds is Serious Business too!) Going in other dimensions, aura reading and/or extraplanar (ethereal, astral, whathaveyou) vision could be very useful to a medical team or even for some tactical missions.

    Side note: My primary OCs have always found astral perception and aura reading dead useful (And YAY!! for the Tres Amigas using the quiet person who can be invisible as a scout!) It's not just a function of their origin, but for Metro it's been a major part of his reality testing. Not advisable when meeting a dragon, but them's the breaks.

    Back to Peeps: The catch is that he's got to want to be more than a drive-by perv, learn to be less skeevy around the other guys as well, and be prepared to have to cope with seeing things he never wanted to see seeing him seeing them. Maybe Ecila Mason could help with that when she and Josie Gillman need a break from mind-bending maths?

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  • If peeper can see through clothing, then he must know that several Poe residents, including Marty, are not fully female. Interesting that he is keeping this information to himself.
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  • Under Marty's clothing is Marty's PK Shell, which functions as skin for the most part. Not that there is any big secret about Marty as in her freshman year she was knocked unconscious and the shell dropped a few times in BMA. More on that later on. Not to mention as we discovered earlier Marty is no longer visually male even under her shell. She's not the high school hottie her shell is yet, but she's not Martin any more.

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  • To me, it's fairly obvious that what triggered Adam was that Peeper called him "Greasy" RIGHT AFTER he reminded he of his real name. John seems unable to see his own roommate as a person, or to pay any attention to what he is saying. And therein lies the root of his problems.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Under Marty's clothing is Marty's PK Shell, which functions as skin for the most part. Not that there is any big secret about Marty as in her freshman year she was knocked unconscious and the shell dropped a few times in BMA.


    That's a very good point. I'd figure that most BMA students get cold-cocked at least once or twice. Not being in a dating situation, I wouldn't be surprised if many of her peers chalked it up to Whateley wierdness and proceeded to razz her mercilessly for weeks over a Cape wannabe being taken down so easily. Talk about having good reasons to keep that shell up non-stop!

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  • At first I thought Danny's comments about Peggy were referring to The Witch, but we know Peggy's background and there hasn't really been any opportunity for The Witch to take over her identity. At least that we've seen.

    But my favorite part was certainly Tansy freaking out about Kayda's dress-costume. Buckskin was worn coast to coast in what became the US and Southern Canada. Not everyone has to have a high-tech super fabric that's cut to form-fitting Erinyes proportions to be stealthy.

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  • Part Two is up! Enjoy!

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  • The relationship stuff is sweet, but that weather threat just seems soo much more important!

    Is it natural? Or supernatural??

    And that video. Wow. ... Ayla's reaction to it, is a big question... Unless he's seen it before??

    I was thinking the weather thing was because of Elle, but she's already at Whateley, so it can't be that?

    It's gotta be Mythos 'cause it's introduced in a Kayda / Elaine / Tansy story?

    "My little flower"! Aww! Wordplay! I bet she was the one who named Tansy! That's one of the things that Theodore couldn't take from her!
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  • Malady wrote: And that video. Wow. ... Ayla's reaction to it, is a big question... Unless he's seen it before??

    Most likely. He drank the Goodkind Kool-Aid a lot before manifesting, to the point that he was still quoting from Goodkind funded research projects while attending Whateley. There's also this to take into consideration:

    Ayla and the Late Trevor James Goodkind wrote: Mother was overseeing several major research projects, including a project that might even find a cure for mutants. I knew a lot about her work, since I had spent the previous spring break working at her offices, overseeing the process of reorganizing the lab files.


    Honestly, the only thing I found surprising about that video was that she's pushing to quarantine even the inactive MGC carriers. That's 1/6 of the population. In other words, totally batshit insane.

    To put this in perspective, consider that the Jews made up something like 0.8% of the German population when the Nazis came into power. That's less than one person in 120. It's a lot bigger than the mutant population, but MGC carriers? One in six is massive. Comparable to Black people, who make up one in eight Americans. You can't initiate oppression on that scale in a country as big, as armed, and as ornery as ours without a civil war. Period. No amount of FUD will make something like that happen peacefully. One sixth of '07 America is around 50 million people. That's two Australias, nearly a United Kingdom. Meanwhile our entire military, reserves included, is only about two million strong. And that's before you subtract the 1/6 of it that has an MGC.

    Mutants kill a lot of people, but they do not kill anywhere near as many people as the Quarantine War would kill.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Honestly, the only thing I found surprising about that video was that she's pushing to quarantine even the inactive MGC carriers. That's 1/6 of the population. In other words, totally batshit insane.


    We weren't kidding when we said Helen Goodkind was a mutophobe. :evil:

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  • Hmm... Mutants' low numbers is actually maybe hurting their cause, as most people actually don't know any mutants, and don't have a peaceful mutant example to point at?

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    So, Ty West's project with the trio... That's got nothing to do with the Blizzard right? Totally wrong location, etc...

    Wasn't there some Arctic Native American Creature??

    Actually, should we be able to figure out what's going on with the weather?? ... Likely not Durnir?

    Having them all sleep in the Crystal Hall will be interesting!
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  • Malady wrote: Wasn't there some Arctic Native American Creature??


    It's been only a little over two weeks since OC and Totem sent Kigatilik packing. It could be him, but with winter coming anyway, time's on his side.

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  • Don't look at me, my elemental mage is still back in Minnesota, all knocked up at this point.

    Is this a (no pun intended) perfect storm of coincidence, or something more... Hekate's master is allegedly hiding amongst the techies, and planning to knock out the heat would need insight into the system, furthermore if he is responsible for the weather as well...

    As for Danny, I am intrigued that someone has drawn his attention. This is either going to screw up the former Hekate, OR she was ridiculously thorough in establishing her cover to a berserk level, and that actually IS her...

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  • I've missed a story somewhere, and I don't know where. Quick question: Why is Eruption calling marty "Fag man" again? When did Marty get outted?

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  • From the story:

    Why did that asshole Archer call you Fake Girl?”

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    “My Freshman year, I had a lot of trouble keeping my shell up. It would drop when I fell asleep, or got knocked out. That happened in BMA and David was there. Within a day it was all over campus

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  • Iwasforger03 wrote: I've missed a story somewhere, and I don't know where. Quick question: Why is Eruption calling marty "Fag man" again? When did Marty get outted?


    To be fair, he's not. He calls Marty Fake Girl. "Fag Man" is his new nicknamed for Stronghold, both making hay with their desired future careers tacked in with gay bashing slurs.

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  • ok, but the reason he's calling Marty "Fake Girl" and Stephen "Fag Man" is because he knows marty IS (biologically at the moment) a boy... or because everyone knows marty looks REALLY boyish under her shell (but don't necessarily know she's actually a guy)?

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  • I'm thinking the weather is Kigatilik. We know he was still nearby, recovering from being barbecued.

    The real question is what the heck Coyote is up to, knocking out the heat at Whateley...

    If it is Kigatilik...how powerful of a psychic would you have to be to face down a demon and not get brain fried? Ayla managed to keep things together just from constant exposure to Nikki, but that was still a super dangerous thing if they ever made physical contact.

    If it isn't Kigatilik, do we know of anything else that could do that? Not Elle, as was suggested. She knows better!
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  • So if everyone is moving into Crystal Hall, what are the best inmates going to do, at least those that are stuck in Hawthorne? Puppet, Plasma, Sapphire, Frostbite, Static Girl, Antenna, Foobs?

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  • How many of the seniors will be talking about a backup heating system for Whatelay or a backup water line for senior projects?
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  • Hawthorne and Doyle likely have independent backup systems for medical reasons
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  • Yeah, after that experience, I doubt Class of 2008 will consider improvements to heating and water supply as "lame" ideas for their Senior Legacy. In fact, I'm a bit surprised that after Halloween, Class of 2007 didn't focus on improved campus defenses.Maybe someone tried before Kodiak came up with the Crystal Hall 2.0 idea, but Carson shot it down as impractical...

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  • I'm a litle dubious about the "keep them out of the tunnels because there's no steam" idea, because rock is a poor conductor for heat. That's why so many facilities needing temperature control close to "room temperature" are placed underground. That's also why the steam ipes were run in tunnels - less of a temperature gradient, less insulation needed. As long as the facilities managers aren't deliberately pumping freezing cold air into the ventilation, the tunnels will at worst feel a little cool.

    A follow-up attack on the ventilation systems could be an issue, but Crystal Hall is just as enclosed and vulnerable. Trampled underdogs at the exits would make the hall a better choice for a hit, once surveillance shows that heat signatures have relocated from the peripheral buildings to one central location.

    Re: Hawthorne. Between Antenna and Static Girl, plus other energizers from time to time, the building may even be a net producer of electricity.

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  • null0trooper wrote: I'm a litle dubious about the "keep them out of the tunnels because there's no steam" idea, because rock is a poor conductor for heat. That's why so many facilities needing temperature control close to "room temperature" are placed underground. That's also why the steam ipes were run in tunnels - less of a temperature gradient, less insulation needed. As long as the facilities managers aren't deliberately pumping freezing cold air into the ventilation, the tunnels will at worst feel a little cool.

    A follow-up attack on the ventilation systems could be an issue, but Crystal Hall is just as enclosed and vulnerable. Trampled underdogs at the exits would make the hall a better choice for a hit, once surveillance shows that heat signatures have relocated from the peripheral buildings to one central location.

    Re: Hawthorne. Between Antenna and Static Girl, plus other energizers from time to time, the building may even be a net producer of electricity.

    there is the fact that Whateley would naturally assume some form of attack and the tunnels are possibly some form of spell circle, don't want to give up the actual reason if it isn't an attack,

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  • mhalpern wrote: Trampled underdogs at the exits would make the hall a better choice for a hit, once surveillance shows that heat signatures have relocated from the peripheral buildings to one central location.


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  • You know finally seeing Helen Goodkind's infamous speach, i wonder if Nimbus' or whomever caused Ayla's mutation goal is a mutant that looks like her as an attempt to argue/insult her, it makes sense in a Deidrick's way...

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  • null0trooper wrote: I'm a litle dubious about the "keep them out of the tunnels because there's no steam" idea, because rock is a poor conductor for heat. That's why so many facilities needing temperature control close to "room temperature" are placed underground. That's also why the steam ipes were run in tunnels - less of a temperature gradient, less insulation needed. As long as the facilities managers aren't deliberately pumping freezing cold air into the ventilation, the tunnels will at worst feel a little cool.

    This last part is my best guess at the reasoning behind shutting the tunnels. They're a huge complex, with highly complicated ventilation system. One that is constantly being stressed by the number of gadgeteers, devisors, and mages creating all sorts of horrible fumes. If they can't heat the fresh air drawn down into the tunnels, it will be getting pretty cool, pretty quickly.

    I think of the tunnel system as less of a wine cellar, and more of coal mine.
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  • null0trooper wrote: I'm a litle dubious about the "keep them out of the tunnels because there's no steam" idea, because rock is a poor conductor for heat. That's why so many facilities needing temperature control close to "room temperature" are placed underground. That's also why the steam ipes were run in tunnels - less of a temperature gradient, less insulation needed. As long as the facilities managers aren't deliberately pumping freezing cold air into the ventilation, the tunnels will at worst feel a little cool.

    A follow-up attack on the ventilation systems could be an issue, but Crystal Hall is just as enclosed and vulnerable. Trampled underdogs at the exits would make the hall a better choice for a hit, once surveillance shows that heat signatures have relocated from the peripheral buildings to one central location.

    Re: Hawthorne. Between Antenna and Static Girl, plus other energizers from time to time, the building may even be a net producer of electricity.


    Ayla and the Tests wrote: Ernie stared at a couple gauges set behind heavy plastic in the wall behind the bed. "Hmm, it looks good. I'm seeing a big improvement in our scavenging, too. I'd say you're going to be powering maybe forty percent of the cottage while you sleep from now on."
    Antenna grinned, "Yeah, the Foob said I'm his own personal backup power supply."


    I don't remember Static Girl having the same sort of power dish in her room. Even so, they power Hawthorne, but not much more, unless there are way more than the two of them.

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  • The reactor is still going, because its cooling loop has to be closed and isolated, so there should be energy enough to warm the intake air. In case of loss of all power to ventilation there could be an issue eventually, because the tunnels enclose a finite volume of air and a finite volume of oxygen. But loss of heating steam is a non-issue.

    Mind you, the finite breathable volume == finite oxygen is also an issue for characters that manifest a volume of water around themselves. There's less oxygen dissolved in a set volume of water to support a working metabolism than in the same volume of normal air at standard temperature and pressure, and both temperature increase (from metabolism: the heat has to go somewhere!) and the square-cube law work against the manifestor. Unless the (hopefully oxygenated) water is continuously replaced with oxygen-saturated water, someone gonna drown.

    Sure, it's easier to replace the air in the Crystal Hall than in the tunnels unless the construction is tightly sealed and power to that building's ventilation drops. Then, you have to open the doors to the outside air and hope it's all cold and clean air outside. After all, each student is sucking up oxygen and dumping carbon dioxide, heat, water vapor, and some methane :)

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  • null0trooper wrote: The reactor is still going, because its cooling loop has to be closed and isolated, so there should be energy enough to warm the intake air. In case of loss of all power to ventilation there could be an issue eventually, because the tunnels enclose a finite volume of air and a finite volume of oxygen. But loss of heating steam is a non-issue.

    Mind you, the finite breathable volume == finite oxygen is also an issue for characters that manifest a volume of water around themselves. There's less oxygen dissolved in a set volume of water to support a working metabolism than in the same volume of normal air at standard temperature and pressure, and both temperature increase (from metabolism: the heat has to go somewhere!) and the square-cube law work against the manifestor. Unless the (hopefully oxygenated) water is continuously replaced with oxygen-saturated water, someone gonna drown.

    Sure, it's easier to replace the air in the Crystal Hall than in the tunnels unless the construction is tightly sealed and power to that building's ventilation drops. Then, you have to open the doors to the outside air and hope it's all cold and clean air outside. After all, each student is sucking up oxygen and dumping carbon dioxide, heat, water vapor, and some methane :)

    i would not be surprised if they think its an attack, in which case they have consolidated the student body into an easier to protect location and have the highest concentration of supernatural firepower in the world at hand should it come to it

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  • So this installment kicked off with quite the explosive interactions within Crystal Hall, and now the kids are going to largely stuck in there for a week or so? They'll be going stir crazy with cabin fever, and it will make for quite the sizeable helping of drama.

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  • Ametros wrote: So this installment kicked off with quite the explosive interactions within Crystal Hall, and now the kids are going to largely stuck in there for a week or so? They'll be going stir crazy with cabin fever, and it will make for quite the sizeable helping of drama.


    Think of all the kids with pheromone-based powers, odd emissions (tear gas, flatulence, etc.), glamour, poorly-controlled empathy/telepathy who aren't already stuck in Hawthorne.

    Then there's the issue of who showers where, when Marty and Ayla are the only known/"out" intersexed kids.

    Plus, there's the possibility of Lifeline (maybe others) going psycho-bitch on the GSD kids.

    With Exemplar hormone levels in play, how long will it take for monthly cycles to synch up - especially if there aren't sufficient shower facilities for a few hundred grubby teens?

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  • And surely there would need to either be security around, or some other staffers. You can't really pack them all together and tell them to behave. That would surely mean overtime, and staff not being able to go home.

    "This is Everheart to all security on the lower level, we have reports of Bloodwolf chasing Psydoe around down near the Underdogs tables"


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  • Rose Bunny wrote: And surely there would need to either be security around, or some other staffers. You can't really pack them all together and tell them to behave. That would surely mean overtime, and staff not being able to go home.

    "This is Everheart to all security on the lower level, we have reports of Bloodwolf chasing Psydoe around down near the Underdogs tables"


    They should be more worried about the other kind of chasing.

    Elizabeth Carson looked over the crowd of students in Crystal Hall, and immediately got a Beatles flashback. She saw Danny Franks and Scott Emerson being chased by a large number of girls. A hand pinching the bridge of her nose, she sent a discrete message to Miss Diabolik to ensure the Crown Princess wouldn't make things too ugly in such a confined space. As for Mr. Franks...well, she'd see how things played out.

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  • Bloodwolf X Psydoe would be soo freaky, no?

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    This scenario reminds me of the Ice Mutant Persecution Archive Micro...

    So, the Coldproof mutants can roam freely... And sleep anywhere, etc.

    Hmm... Are the Voodoo Wolves still a threat? Arrive under Blizzard cover...

    Lol if Downpour ends the Blizzard immediately, with her powers.
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    *facepalms* It's a dog-eat-deer world, after all.

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  • ^ Yeah, I know. ... I shoulda had a :lol:, for clarity in my humor.

    Hmm... So, is the Crystal Hall big enough to keep all the luck warpers safely separate? They all have lunch at the same time, so it's approaching "Yes"?

    Then there's the other powers that don't like being with others of their type, or a lotta people...
    ... Espers, mainly, but others as well?

    What does the astral look like, with so many sleepers packed together??
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  • Malady wrote: What does the astral look like, with so many sleepers packed together??


    Er... let's just say that we've found the soundtrack.


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  • null0trooper wrote: The reactor is still going, because its cooling loop has to be closed and isolated, so there should be energy enough to warm the intake air. In case of loss of all power to ventilation there could be an issue eventually, because the tunnels enclose a finite volume of air and a finite volume of oxygen. But loss of heating steam is a non-issue.

    Mind you, the finite breathable volume == finite oxygen is also an issue for characters that manifest a volume of water around themselves. There's less oxygen dissolved in a set volume of water to support a working metabolism than in the same volume of normal air at standard temperature and pressure, and both temperature increase (from metabolism: the heat has to go somewhere!) and the square-cube law work against the manifestor. Unless the (hopefully oxygenated) water is continuously replaced with oxygen-saturated water, someone gonna drown.

    Sure, it's easier to replace the air in the Crystal Hall than in the tunnels unless the construction is tightly sealed and power to that building's ventilation drops. Then, you have to open the doors to the outside air and hope it's all cold and clean air outside. After all, each student is sucking up oxygen and dumping carbon dioxide, heat, water vapor, and some methane :)


    Remember that Tennyo, Igneous, and a few others don't breathe.

    Any plant type mutants, like Earth Mother, that breathe CO2 and exhale O2?

    Judging from the crazy weather, who got Fey pregnant?

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  • Rose Bunny wrote: Don't look at me, my elemental mage is still back in Minnesota, all knocked up at this point.


    Metro would like to take this opportunity to remind people of his innocence.

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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Malady wrote: What does the astral look like, with so many sleepers packed together??


    Er... let's just say that we've found the soundtrack.


    2018 and still not posting the clearly superior love making music
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  • Love making music? Hmmm...
    Mrs Carson: "Find who put Barry White on the sound system. Whoever it is, they will get detention for the rest of the school year."

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  • Since it seems to be a sticking point and isn't a plot point I can say the air circulation in the Crystal Hall, even for a volume of air of that size is quite good. Between the live plants and the central HVAC there isn't a CO2 issue, even with so many people inside. Also, the Thornies are staying in Hawthorne which also is central HVAC and immune to the steam issues. This was required due to the specialized needs of the residents and food is already brought to them via the tunnels.

    And since it came up and there just happens to be a news story about it this morning here in Atlanta. This is what a two foot main water pipe break looks like:



    This break occurred at 4 this morning and Buford HWY, the road you see is expected as of this posting to be closed until 9am at least. That's without a blizzard impeding things...

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  • Still in the middle of reading but I reached the Goodkind presentation and had to comment.

    I can imagine the Ayla POV story where Ayla remembers being in the studio as his mother was recording her voice over. Little snippets might include noticing the crew nodding their heads as she made certain points. The framework for the story would be Ayla hearing through his contacts what the special Sophomore assembly was about and trying to get permission to be excused.

    "Ma'am, I'd like to be excused from the assembly as I know the content of the presentation."
    "Doesn't matter. You need to hear it for yourself. Certainly you know..."
    "No, I don't need to hear it myself," Ayla struggled for a moment to maintain the businesslike facade he normally presents. "I wrote most it."
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  • jmhyp wrote: Still in the middle of reading but I reached the Goodkind presentation and had to comment.

    I can imagine the Ayla POV story where Ayla remembers being in the studio as his mother was recording her voice over. Little snippets might include noticing the crew nodding their heads as she made certain points. The framework for the story would be Ayla hearing through his contacts what the special Sophomore assembly was about and trying to get permission to be excused.

    "Ma'am, I'd like to be excused from the assembly as I know the content of the presentation."
    "Doesn't matter. You need to hear it for yourself. Certainly you know..."
    "No, I don't need to hear it myself," Ayla struggled for a moment to maintain the businesslike facade he normally presents. "I wrote most it."


    I'm even more impressed by Phase if that is true. According to the Wiki, MIDs have been needed for border crossings since 1996, Phase was four years old in 1996. That is some speech for a little kid to have written.

    Do we know when the MID was first introduced?

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  • I doubt Ayla wrote it, as it has been pointed, he was just too young. And moreover, can you see any mother farming out the writing of what she considers to be an important speech to her child? Doesn't matter if said child is a genius, to her eyes he is still a child.

    A minor point... given the "Ideas Worth Sharing" slogan, this appears to be a TED Talk-like speech. That is, it was probably done as a stage presentation. So, I don't think there was much of a "voiceover recording studio session".

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  • Sir Lee wrote: A minor point... given the "Ideas Worth Sharing" slogan, this appears to be a TED Talk-like speech. That is, it was probably done as a stage presentation. So, I don't think there was much of a "voiceover recording studio session".


    Well played as always, Sir Lee!

    The Boya of Summer Part Two wrote: "Not everyone is," Lanie replied. "And those who aren't will bully and take advantage of those who are." She glanced in the mirror again, and decided she needed to cement the point that some people weren't so 'civilized' deep down inside. She said, "You haven't seen The Talk."

    Kayda's nose scrunched up in confusion. "The Talk?"

    "It's a one-day seminar," Tansy provided. "They give it in the fall to the sophomores. You came in too late this year to see it, so you'll probably have to take it this fall. It's called Paranormals: History and the Law. It's designed to scare the sophomores and make them realize just how deep the anti-mutant hate goes. The centerpiece is a TEDx Talk Helen Goodkind gave in 1998. It's on YouTube, so if you're interested look it up over the summer. Short form? The bitch talks about rounding us all up and putting us in camps."


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  • While Ayla probably did not write it, he most probably viewed it, both an uncut version, and an after editing version, and maybe even gave reactions so his mother could see if she was reaching part of her target audience. Yeah she's a piece of work she is, Helen Hilton Goodkind...
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  • *Cracks neck* Late for this, but I always wanted to start something like I do on spacebattle threads... We'll see how it looks like without quotes first.

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    I'd like to hear opinions about comments like this one, or if bringing in quotes could be needed. I hope to do that more, and also more often and quicker.
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  • "This is Everheart to all security on the lower level, we have reports of Generator chasing Bloodwolf around down near the Underdogs tables"


    fixed it for you. :)
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  • Let's see... Grits? An acquired taste. Steven, your taste in grits is a bit much...
    Foodie sort of thing here: Not quite that stiff, say cooked to the consistency of rice, that is moist and loose, add an egg or two over easy on top, then either bacon or salsa on top. Or eat with sausage gravy like you would biscuits... Any way to taste. Not bad in my not so humble opinion but that is my opinion.
    Grits are course ground hominy which is corn prepared a particular way. Grew up on hominy so grits not a surprise, just not something I had until grown.
    Weather? Goodness, can we say that we think this is the work of the shaman killer?
    Dump Truck & company can we say bigots, you deserve to share a cell with Helen Goodkind, you may not think you are as bad as she is, but you are!
    Helen Goodkind? See my above comment, except that no matter what, you really have no excuse for employing Dr Mengele's disciple. The only good thing I can say for you is that you didn't spare your own child when he manifested. And that is about as far as I will go, consistent evil is still evil!
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  • Hardric wrote: I'm curious, does your little 'every twelve days' include only this sort of manifestation, or the relatively normal ones too?


    Heheh, I was hoping someone would call her numbers into question. While the concept of what she describes happening every twelve days is terrifying, to get to that number she included every mutant manifestation event where someone was injured as a 'Rager' incident as well as any crime in the developed world where five people or more where injured and at least one of the criminals tested positive for the MGC. How did she get that information you ask? Why a generous donation from Goodkind Bio-Research to 'impoverished' jurisdictions world wide to provide genetic research, free of charge, for evidence in the crime itself.

    To be sure the "right" suspects went to trial of course.

    It's one of the reasons Dr Goodkind is criticized for this position by some of her peers and meta-human rights organizations for such tainted numbers. Dr. Goodkind responds that they cannot rule out that possessing an MGC did not influence these persons into becoming violent criminals...

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  • Hmm... And presuming she still assumes the MGC to be inherited... The idea that the MGC can just randomly show up, ala Ayla... That'd throw a lot of things into question... Then there's how it was due to magic... And no reason why a bio-gadg or bio-dev couldn't for real make a retrovirus that forces the MGC...
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  • Malady wrote: Hmm... And presuming she still assumes the MGC to be inherited... The idea that the MGC can just randomly show up, ala Ayla... That'd throw a lot of things into question... Then there's how it was due to magic... And no reason why a bio-gadg or bio-dev couldn't for real make a retrovirus that forces the MGC...


    Dunno, Nimbus is a Mago-Devisor relying on Mythos magic, and he had to sacrify human souls to create the magical solutions which caused Phase and his cousin's mutation, both of them marginal success at best in his books. I really doubt that's something so easily done.
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  • Hardric wrote: Oooh, polite fury, and on this is one of WitBitch's subtly brainwashed attack dogs. Not compalining at the idea he gets some punches in the face but... Marty, the duck was that? You're not an Exmemplar, you can't plead for Hercules or Galahad.


    Re: "polite fury"

    It's been observed of certain intersections of class, family background, and gender in the Southeastern US that many "Southerners" will tend to be more unfailingly and coldly polite the more lethal their mood.

    Translated for the benefit of Yankees: If the redneck's cursing up a storm, he might just start throwing punches. If he takes the time to point out - for example - that the local woods are dark and the rivers run deep***, he's making plans for disposing of your body.

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  • Ms. Goodkind also lied about Typhoid Mary. Only three deaths* out of 51 cases of typhoid can be attributed to her. It's also debatable whether she knew was sick at first.


    * It's possible that in the WU, all 51 died.

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  • The "polite fury" thing reminded me of a publication I have saved on my hard drive... It is a small text composed by a Southern gentleman by the name of John Lyde Wilson entitled, "The Code of Honor: or Rules for the Government of Principals and Seconds in Duelling". It very carefully details the importance of maintaining respectful tones in all overtures before sending a challenge, during the duel and for conduct after the event.

    Why mention this relic of a bygone era? Because as a person born, raised and still living in the South (by the grace of God), I can say that much of it is still strongly evidenced in Southern culture to this day in the "real world". I think it would be fair to say that the same would be true in the Whateley Universe, perhaps with those remnants being even more strongly stressed.

    I will include a few excerpts for illustrative purposes:

    1> "If the insult be by blows or any personal indignity, it may be resented at the moment, for the insult to the company did not originate with you."

    2> "If the insult be of a serious character, it will be the duty of the second of the challenger, to say, in reply to the second of the challengee: "We have been deeply wronged, and if you are not disposed to repair the injury, the contest must continue." And if the challengee offers nothing by way of reparation, the fight continues until one or the other of the principals is hit."

    3> " The Degrees of Insult, and How Compromised
    1. The prevailing rule is, that words used in retort, although more violent and disrespectful than those first used, will not satisfy,—words being no satisfaction for words.
    2. When words are used, and a blow given in return, the insult is avenged; and if redress be sought, it must be from the person receiving the blow.
    3. When blows are given in the first instance and not returned, and the person first striking, be badly beaten or otherwise, the party first struck is to make the demand, for blows do not satisfy a blow."

    4> "Any insult to a lady under a gentleman's care or protection, to be considered as, by one degree, a greater offence than if given to the gentleman personally, and to be regulated accordingly."

    In the case of 1>, how often do we hear things like, "don't start a fight, but be sure to finish it"? Same concept, "fighting words" or violence demand an immediate response, a common concept in the South to this very day.

    In case 2> we see the distinction of degrees in an insult. Some things you can ignore, other things demand action... We still get told to "pick our battles" down here, I doubt it is different elsewhere.

    In case 3> we learn how to grade those insulting words and deeds... You call someone a "poopyhead" and they can call you something worse, but you started it and so owe the first apology, with the second person then explaining away their transgression (yeah, they do not even have to apologize directly or specifically).

    Lastly, in case 4> we get to the very old and still common concept of the honor of a lady... You can call me whatever you want, but say it to or about my mother, sister, girlfriend or wife and we will fight...

    If you were to then read the entire work, the repeated point is that you must communicate in only the most respectful and gentlemanly manner... That "cold fury" that requires the duel to be fought in cold blood (or at least after time for the heat of the moment to have passed by). But to get to the point of slicing up or gunning down the person that insulted you, you must first show politeness and forbearance of an exemplary sort.

    But seriously? Look at the "rules" for the dueling culture in the old South and you find that it aligns with the "manners" we teach to this very day. The more rigidly polite the person becomes, you can almost count on the more irritated (or down right mad) he is with you.
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  • So I am guessing that the TEDx talk was produced before Rager's Night in Darwin (Dec. 21, 1998).

    She should have based her numbers on victims, not incidents. Rager's Night had 3 years or more of victims, at one every 12 days. The Fury incident in Murphy's Laws had close to a year worth of victims, even if a bunch Regened the injuries. How many incidents/injuries is Razorback responsible for? (Yes these occurred after the talk, but there aren't many examples.)

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  • Granted, she does have a point, it's just her logic is more than a little skewed...

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  • Valentine wrote: I'm still wondering how she planned on quarantining one billion people.


    A mutant shows up in some third-world back-country village? Call in an airstrike before it can escape into the bush. Besides, every knows that generations of endogamous couples means that the entire local population may be afflicted with the MGC.

    In more developed countries with questionable industrial safety standards, mutants have a nasty habit of breaching dams or compromising storage facilities. There's evidence to be had that shows that a mutant, and not Union Carbide, was responsible for the Bhopal disaster (which also resulted in the deaths of its entire extended family). But to be fair, many second-world/developing countries may have fiscal obstacles to avoiding overcrowding without more support from the U.S. State Department. So even those that can be discovered early and detained in a suitable facility face the unavoidable problem that one of the clients may manifest dangerously in a crowded barracks. (This is why ALL carriers need to be quarantined so that the good mutants can better assist authorities in maintaining peace and order.)

    The greatest risks to the plan may lie with the First-World nations, as there is a reluctance to tie up useful land with relocation centers and massive legal barriers to using even perfectly acceptable brownfields sites. Thus, extended transport distances can only be reliably served by long-haul highway carriers and rolling stock.

    The world being as it is, one must accept that there will be accidents even in the absence of sabotage by extremist elements on both sides of the issue. For the safety and well-being of all those involved, right-of-way easements in some areas must necessarily be extended and vigorously patrolled by Homeland Security forces to provide a security buffer against such threats.


    tl,dr: You only have to house and feed enough people to look good for the cameras. The locals will learn quickly enough to avoid where the buzzards are circling and to maybe think twice about buying the discounted Uncle John Goodkind's sausages.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Granted, she does have a point, it's just her logic is more than a little skewed...


    The disgusting part about her speech, and why Carson plays it for all sophomores, is that her argument makes some level of sense, especially with what we know about the ragers and Dragonslayers. It's the same argument that Ribbon used for years about Rachel.

    It's Helen Goodkind's "solution" that is appalling.

    But at the same time...we now know that the MGC was artificially created by the Five Fold Court. So there likely is a way to cure it from a baseline mage perspective...
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  • Katssun wrote: But at the same time...we now know that the MGC was artificially created by the Five Fold Court. So there likely is a way to cure it from a baseline mage perspective...


    Umm... What about a pure science perspective? A.k.a gene therapy to remove the MGC...
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    Katssun wrote: But at the same time...we now know that the MGC was artificially created by the Five Fold Court. So there likely is a way to cure it from a baseline mage perspective...


    Umm... What about a pure science perspective? A.k.a gene therapy to remove the MGC...


    There is, of course, speculation that quarantine was only phase 1 of her plan. The easiest and least expensive "gene therapy" could then be accomplished in phase 2: sterilization. That's the rumor, anyway.

    :ohmy: :sick:

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    Katssun wrote: But at the same time...we now know that the MGC was artificially created by the Five Fold Court. So there likely is a way to cure it from a baseline mage perspective...


    Umm... What about a pure science perspective? A.k.a gene therapy to remove the MGC...


    That strikes me as safer than magically attempting to return a faerie "gift".

    Considering that the original MGC introduced into the mammalian genome was intended to be used as a weapon by and for the Courts, there could have been counter-measures introduced to prevent successful tampering - as well as measures making the weapons more amenable to their intended use:

    Sara's Little Purple Book wrote: It doesn’t help that, thanks to the improvements to their bodies, Exemplars often feel sexual stimulus more keenly than others. If a norm feels the earth move, the Exemplar is at ground zero of the erupting volcano.


    ... one needs only read Fey's early appearances for hints at how easily one might obtain some of these stronger, prettier potential courtiers. (Edit: Conversely, exemplars are likely to be even more adverse to hanging around with my WhatIF's lead OC.)

    Also, some of the more lethal manifestations could have been caused/complicated by a failsafe being triggered. It has been a very long time since the herds were actively managed, and genetic errors can be expected to occur.

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    E. E. Nalley wrote: There is, of course, speculation that quarantine was only phase 1 of her plan. The easiest and least expensive "gene therapy" could then be accomplished in phase 2: sterilization. That's the rumor, anyway.

    :ohmy: :sick:


    Well given the number of regenerators I'd guess that #2 is right out the window for those who have manifested. Even possibly for those who are altered before manifestation. The final solution is the only viable solution and it must be done as soon as the MGC is detected.
    :sick: :sick: :ohmy:
    Otherwise there will be more generations of the untermenshen (not quite sure how that German word is spelled) so unspoken but understood is the intent of extermination and that it will have to be thorough...
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  • Anne wrote: Otherwise there will be more generations of the untermenshen (not quite sure how that German word is spelled) so unspoken but understood is the intent of extermination and that it will have to be thorough...


    But for now you can do your part by spaying and neutering your supers.

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  • Is this supposed to be on Oct 9, 2007? Because a lot of the stories are well passed that date, and Absinthe shows up on the 12th. It seems odd that no one mentioned the weird weather or camping in Crystal Hall.

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  • Valentine wrote: Is this supposed to be on Oct 9, 2007? Because a lot of the stories are well passed that date, and Absinthe shows up on the 12th. It seems odd that no one mentioned the weird weather or camping in Crystal Hall.


    Now that you mention it, there would still be snow on the ground at the school and in surrounding counties when Gwen and Collin arrive. But hey, what would a couple of new freshmen from Seattle know about New England weather?

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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Valentine wrote: Is this supposed to be on Oct 9, 2007? Because a lot of the stories are well passed that date, and Absinthe shows up on the 12th. It seems odd that no one mentioned the weird weather or camping in Crystal Hall.


    Now that you mention it, there would still be snow on the ground at the school and in surrounding counties when Gwen and Collin arrive. But hey, what would a couple of new freshmen from Seattle know about New England weather?

    This is why a collaborative universe is so hard to do. One small (or not so small) detail will trip the whole thing up!
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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Valentine wrote: Is this supposed to be on Oct 9, 2007? Because a lot of the stories are well passed that date, and Absinthe shows up on the 12th. It seems odd that no one mentioned the weird weather or camping in Crystal Hall.


    Now that you mention it, there would still be snow on the ground at the school and in surrounding counties when Gwen and Collin arrive. But hey, what would a couple of new freshmen from Seattle know about New England weather?


    Of course if it's all because of magic, maybe the snow clears up fast.
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  • Interesting... The student internment camp...er I mean Crystal Hall situation has a great deal of potential. If this situation last for a few days then there will be almost no secrets (I lived on a submarine, in close quarters there are no secrets after a fairly short time, I say almost due to the magical compulsion to preserve certain secrets at Whateley). All the bigots will be known quickly (with the possible exception of the "smart" bigots that can keep their tendencies on the down low), non-Poe changelings and alternative sexual persuasion individuals are likely to get identified to some degree, as well as other such discoveries. However, the dire nature of the situation could potentially result in better student relations overall after the initial skirmishes (we had people we would have killed on the boat, but no one from outside was allowed to kill them, such could, in theory happen here to a greater or lesser degree).

    I eagerly await the results in future installments.
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  • You really gotta feel for Danny. Will this push him into being Danica more, maybe into being non-furry Danica? Because I think if he were to appear as Danny, his life expectancy would be counted in minutes.

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  • Well Kayda is being Kayda.

    Steven is being Steven, along with Hippy.

    G-Force and Iron Jerk still being themselves, I wonder which side they will be on.

    So is Coyote responsible, or Kittagilkukufdyhvdyb (The Shaman Killer)?

    Missed a chance for a Generator cameo.:( Having Mrs. Carson bring her along to try to get supplies to the teepee. She would fail, but having her or Jinn try would have been nice, and a way to keep them in the stories without taking over.

    Aquerna's going to be going through hell with worry. Ayla is probably trying to figure out where to get a heater for the school grounds from. Fey is worried about the lack of magic. Toni is annoyed she can't try to weaponize the storm. Billie hasn't noticed that it's cold yet. Hank is being overprotective. Chou is cuddling with Molly, because what will be, will be.

    The Teepee surviving 50 MPH winds, not a problem. 60+ wind gusts are not uncommon between the Rockies and Appalachians, 70+ are rare but happen every year or so.

    BTW anyone else have a white Easter? I got about 5" of snow Easter Sunday.

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  • Valentine wrote:
    So is Coyote responsible, or Kittagilkukufdyhvdyb (The Shaman Killer)?


    Yes. :evil:

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Valentine wrote:
    So is Coyote responsible, or Kittagilkukufdyhvdyb (The Shaman Killer)?


    Yes. :evil:


    That limits it to two suspects.

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  • Wow, so much in this episode to comment on, I don't know where to begin... Kayda, have you forgotten winters in ND... When the snow goes sideways, you don't go out in it! People have died between the house and barn or been lost, even with a guide line! 50 degrees, plus absolute windchill! Yipe!
    So who is responsible? I'm still holding out for the shaman killer, though Coyote slinking around doesn't help the case for his innocence! Kayda and Wyatt alone in a teepee, she's near her fertile time and they have to share a blanket!?!? Can we say that if Coyote isn't responsible for the storm and I still hold that he is not as while he is the trickster he is never seen as entirely evil, more like the practical joker. So if the situation presents, like the storm, why not drain Kayda's magic a little to make her more amenable to his plan.
    I wonder just what is so important to Coyote about Kayda and Wyatt having a child? Some how it doesn't make sense. Stronghold and Kayda? Maybe, the genetic makeup would be close to the same as with Lanie and Brandon.
    Just what is that Coyote up to?!
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  • Poor Danny...

    The only thing I'm struggling with is how the storm is able to sap so much essence out of magic users. Kayda should have at least been able to make it to the teepee with her warming spell, though she probably wouldn't have made it back. She's spent hours outside in freezing weather hiding in the snow, invisible.

    Then Mrs. Carson is unable to even get out the door!

    Completely zero visibility from the snow would have been more than debilitating enough.

    Gripes aside, I enjoyed the scenes between Wyatt and Kayda.
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  • With the Essence drain, there are probably two characters that would have had the strength to make it for ANY amount of time ... maybe Three, but Nikki would have had trouble.... One is wrapped in plastic and MIA, and Billie would be the other- though in the swirling snow, she'd likely get lost. If it weren't for the essence draining, it'd just be as simple as say, asking Molly to open a gateway.

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  • Valentine wrote:

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    So is Coyote responsible, or Kittagilkukufdyhvdyb (The Shaman Killer)?


    Yes. :evil:


    That limits it to two suspects.


    I would say Shaman killer, Coyote is mischievous but this is big and more brute force something a trickster would take advantage of but not cause.

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  • Rose Bunny wrote: With the Essence drain, there are probably two characters that would have had the strength to make it for ANY amount of time ... maybe Three, but Nikki would have had trouble.... One is wrapped in plastic and MIA, and Billie would be the other- though in the swirling snow, she'd likely get lost. If it weren't for the essence draining, it'd just be as simple as say, asking Molly to open a gateway.

    Caitlin probably can as an essence source and not being organic, don't remember how biological she still is, but if she now lacks biological parts, Sam Everheart probably can survive it too. But the list is short

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  • I just realized something. Crystal Hall can't possibly have enough food for long. Energizers, teenagers, a lot of teenage energizers, other mutations that require high calorie intake...

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  • Anne wrote: Actually, the draining of essence is exactly why I think that the shaman killer is behind this storm. Let's not forget that Kayda and Lodgeman only tapped it sharply on its nose!


    Our South Dakota girl, Kayda, didn't do anything to Kigatilik.

    Diamondback was with Lodgeman when the shaman-killer showed up, and it was three of the other Outcasts that jumped in.

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    Re: essence drain, it helps to remember that Sidhe wizards aren't restricted to regaining essence from ambient influx the way a mutant wizard like Kayda or a trained baseline mage is. Of them, Elle Ruud is likely one of the cold-immune students.

    Of course, if the Tao wished it, Bladedancer could survive the cold.

    The problem is not whether there are individuals who could survive out there, but whether they could keep Wyatt and Kayda alive in those conditions while dragging them back to safety.

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  • mhalpern wrote: I just realized something. Crystal Hall can't possibly have enough food for long. Energizers, teenagers, a lot of teenage energizers, other mutations that require high calorie intake...


    The school takes deliveries by max length tractor trailers twice a week. One is JUST perishables, the other is topping off shelf stable items. By cutting out a good bit of choice (The so-called restrictive menu) the school can go for quite a ways. There is a warehouse full of shelf stable items, #10 (144ozs) cans of just about everything, in pallet lots.



    As will be pointed out in the next issue the school keeps about a month's of food on hand at any given time. Trust me, they think about this stuff. ;)

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  • What I especially like and enjoy is the way E E has been steadily building up the “Tension” in this story :) From setting up the storm scene and it’s growing strength, to the side events creating tension and now the tense(currently) situation created by Kayda and Wyatt being alone together in the Teepee 8-)
    I just hope we don’t have the excruciating agony of a long wait for the next part of the story :S :-( B) :)
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  • mhalpern wrote: That's good for the typical diets, what about the special diets and the freaking wierd diets?

    What about them? It doesn't really matter what people eat, nor how much. You just add all the daily diets together, multiply by 30, add in whatever maintenance supplies are needed to keep that food fresh, and presto. A one month buffer.

    So for example, your students eat F pounds of normal food, T pounds of paint thinner, and P live puppies per day, and each puppy in storage eats K pounds of kibble. So, to maintain a one month buffer, you need 30*F pounds of food, 30*T pounds of paint thinner, 30*P live puppies, and 30*P*K pounds of kibble. Let's call all of that M. So, you build enough storage space to store M (e.g. some very large pantries, refrigerators, and freezers, and a small kennel). You fill it all up, then you import or produce M/2 every two weeks to keep everything topped off. Easy.

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    mhalpern wrote: That's good for the typical diets, what about the special diets and the freaking wierd diets?

    What about them? It doesn't really matter what people eat, nor how much. You just add all the daily diets together, multiply by 30, add in whatever maintenance supplies are needed to keep that food fresh, and presto. A one month buffer.

    So for example, your students eat F pounds of normal food, T pounds of paint thinner, and P live puppies per day, and each puppy in storage eats K pounds of kibble. So, to maintain a one month buffer, you need 30*F pounds of food, 30*T pounds of paint thinner, 30*P live puppies, and 30*P*K pounds of kibble. Let's call all of that M. So, you build enough storage space to store M (e.g. some very large pantries, refrigerators, and freezers, and a small kennel). You fill it all up, then you import or produce M/2 every two weeks to keep everything topped off. Easy.

    there's a couple students who eat live food, hard to store a months supply of food that needs its own food

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  • mhalpern wrote: there's a couple students who eat live food, hard to store a months supply of food that needs its own food

    No it isn't. Say you have a student who eats one dog per day, and each dog eats thirty pounds of dog food in a month. That works out to a total of 900 pounds of dog food per month. A 30lb bag of dog food measures about 1.5' x 2' x 0.5', so it would only take 45 cubic feet to store that 900 pounds. That's basically a 3.5' cube; no big deal. Whateley has plenty of space. The real burden is in housing and caring for the thirty dogs, not storing their food. Still, dog care is a pretty well established industry with a lot of very mature solutions, so it's not like it's difficult. Just a hassle. Not as much of a hassle as housing, feeding, and educating 600 teenage mutants, though. Negligible, in fact.

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  • MM2ss wrote: It depends on the sort of live food also. If for example Sara needed one live dog per day, that's be doable, but if she needed say one horse per day, that's be much harder. On the other hand, a supply of lab rats takes up little space and uses only a little in the way of feed and water. Same with the plant eaters, you can keep lots of starter plants on hand, but a stash of full grown bushes and trees would be another matter. Lastly, there is the matter of how many students are on such special diets... If there are only a few it is not likely a huge problem and would be something that could be done fairly easily logistically speaking.

    Sara has been seen to eat everything from pot plants (Not Marijuana all you dope heads, but plants in pots) to a cage full of hamsters (also Jobe's experiments and weapons aimed at her...) to a dog that was due to be put down for disease or some other problem. So suppose that she could get by on lab rats for a month, that changes the equation quite a bit.
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  • I thought it interesting -- but, let's face it, unavoidable -- the FSA taking a strong stance against gay bashings.
    Unavoidable, I say? Yes. Look at the club's makeup. Half of the know seniors, including the club president, are out and proud gays. Two of their own members are being harassed about their it. And then there's Wallflower, who one would expect to be gay-friendly. Standing by while there is gay-bashing happening would be impossible for these five. And I expect most of the rest of the club, even if they have no strong feelings about the issue, would follow their lead.
    I read Saladin's hesitancy in declaring it a major club policy not as personal hypocrisy -- rather, I read it as his being overly-careful to not bend the club to his own personal issues. He has no problem taking a stance for gay rights, as a private person; he just does not want to drag the club with him and possibly jeopardize the club's future.

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  • mhalpern wrote: there's a couple students who eat live food, hard to store a months supply of food that needs its own food


    They have miles and miles of tunnels and storerooms dug into the mountain under Whateley. Plenty of space to store all sorts of food, live and dead.

    At the end of a month, Feral may be down to hunting for rats, but everyone else is going to be eating whatever is left too.

    The most unbelievable part of the story is:

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  • Anne wrote: Sara has been seen to eat everything from pot plants (Not Marijuana all you dope heads, but plants in pots) to a cage full of hamsters (also Jobe's experiments and weapons aimed at her...) to a dog that was due to be put down for disease or some other problem. So suppose that she could get by on lab rats for a month, that changes the equation quite a bit.

    She ate some people during the Halloween incident.

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    After all, it's not like you can evacuate Puppet and other 'thornies that require special situations, nor patients at Doyle that aren't stable enough to move. There likely are three occupied locations (Maybe four, if Security is still staffed). Doyle likely has doctors and Nurses on call, in case of an emergency. Cantrell and the Thornies that couldn't be evac'd to Crystal Hall are likely still in residence. Those locations are likely to have independent power generation for back-up.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: I just realized something. Crystal Hall can't possibly have enough food for long. Energizers, teenagers, a lot of teenage energizers, other mutations that require high calorie intake...


    The school takes deliveries by max length tractor trailers twice a week. One is JUST perishables, the other is topping off shelf stable items. By cutting out a good bit of choice (The so-called restrictive menu) the school can go for quite a ways. There is a warehouse full of shelf stable items, #10 (144ozs) cans of just about everything, in pallet lots.

    As will be pointed out in the next issue the school keeps about a month's of food on hand at any given time. Trust me, they think about this stuff. ;)


    It's a good story you and Elrod's got going here.

    Regarding Mhalpern's comment though, the snowstorm can't last more than a few days regardless without conflicting with other published canon stories. So I reckon there's food enough for that :)
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  • The other problem though more than solvable considering Whateley is disposal, empty cans and garbage has to go somewhere

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  • Well, as for organic garbage... there are probably some students who *need* to eat that.

    And getting rid of stuff is not really a problem. I mean, between Tennyo, Ayla and Gotterdamerung, you can disintegrate everything.

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  • mhalpern wrote: The other problem though more than solvable considering Whateley is disposal, empty cans and garbage has to go somewhere


    Plant, paper and non meat food scraps are used for mulch. Metal scraps are recycled in the workshop areas, or by Jade. Liquids are dumped into the sewers where they make their way elsewhere.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: The other problem though more than solvable considering Whateley is disposal, empty cans and garbage has to go somewhere


    Plant, paper and non meat food scraps are used for mulch. Metal scraps are recycled in the workshop areas, or by Jade. Liquids are dumped into the sewers where they make their way elsewhere.

    When you can't leave Crystal Hall some of those are a problem until you can,

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  • While the school recycles as much as is feasibly possible, there is just some trash that can't be, for that, they have a roll on/roll off compactor dumpster combination that is emptied monthly. While the school does face many challenges, they have the advantage of some of the greatest minds around thinking about their logistics, supply train, and refuse footprints. Those have been improved on over the years (Lanie won her iPhone for her logistics app she made for the school) but for the most part have been solved problems for some time.

    Now, are all the students and all the faculty in the Crystal Hall? No, of course not. Doyle Medical is the regions trauma center, so it has systems completely independent of the school with the ability to generate their own power, cook their own food and of course central heat and air. Anyone who was in Doyle is still there, sheltering in place. The same goes with Hawthorne, the special needs kids need those facilities and so they are also independent. The Crystal Hall is just the LARGEST of these independent facilities and, as Mrs Carson points out, they have to eat, it is just easiest to put the bulk of the students and enough adults to control them in the Crystal Hall.

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  • mhalpern wrote:

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    mhalpern wrote: The other problem though more than solvable considering Whateley is disposal, empty cans and garbage has to go somewhere


    Plant, paper and non meat food scraps are used for mulch. Metal scraps are recycled in the workshop areas, or by Jade. Liquids are dumped into the sewers where they make their way elsewhere.

    When you can't leave Crystal Hall some of those are a problem until you can,

    Food waste is smaller than food, so storing it during in an emergency is a non-issue. In the worst case scenario, they can simply use the same space that held the food to hold the waste.

    Also, the only people who "can't" leave the Crystal Hall are students. Going outside is extremely dangerous due to the blizzard, but the tunnels are simply cold. No wind, no wind chill, and no blinding snow. Give them some winter gear, and even baseline faculty could safely navigate the tunnels without issue. Being a large facility in the mountains of New Hampshire, they definitely will have cold weather gear or at least blankets in a supply closet somewhere nearby, even if all the individuals working there left their personal gear at home.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Also, the only people who "can't" leave the Crystal Hall are students. Going outside is extremely dangerous due to the blizzard, but the tunnels are simply cold. No wind, no wind chill, and no blinding snow. Give them some winter gear, and even baseline faculty could safely navigate the tunnels without issue. Being a large facility in the mountains of New Hampshire, they definitely will have cold weather gear or at least blankets in a supply closet somewhere nearby, even if all the individuals working there left their personal gear at home.


    The tunnels are carved meters down into rock, which is a fairly good insulator. Even if geothermal gradients weren't a real thing (but they are), and even ignoring any mantle upwelling under New England (The Black Gulf of N'Kai below the campus might have some environmental problems in a few million years), they're only going to get cold if they are opened to allow the outside air to circulate through them for a while.

    ... which is as good a reason to keep bored kids out of the tunnels, because it would be a matter of time before someone does something stupid. As we all know, Rick O'Seay is no one's friend.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: While the school recycles as much as is feasibly possible, there is just some trash that can't be, for that, they have a roll on/roll off compactor dumpster combination that is emptied monthly.

    Monthly? That seems like a really long time. Too long. Even assuming most of the food for meals is eaten, it really adds up. As many might do over summers or before a full time job, I used to work at a grocery store. The compactor was full at least twice a week. Granted, that was driven by OSHA guidelines about disposing of food past its "Sell By" date.

    null0trooper wrote: The tunnels are carved meters down into rock, which is a fairly good insulator. Even if geothermal gradients weren't a real thing (but they are), and even ignoring any mantle upwelling under New England (The Black Gulf of N'Kai below the campus might have some environmental problems in a few million years), they're only going to get cold if they are opened to allow the outside air to circulate through them for a while.

    ... which is as good a reason to keep bored kids out of the tunnels, because it would be a matter of time before someone does something stupid. As we all know, Rick O'Seay is no one's friend.

    I assumed the issue was ventilation. The administration doesn't want to be pulling air that is -35F into the tunnels, so they have to shut the system down. If fresh air isn't being drawn down into the tunnel network, you don't want any students in there either.
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  • Katssun wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: While the school recycles as much as is feasibly possible, there is just some trash that can't be, for that, they have a roll on/roll off compactor dumpster combination that is emptied monthly.

    Monthly? That seems like a really long time. Too long. Even assuming most of the food for meals is eaten, it really adds up. As many might do over summers or before a full time job, I used to work at a grocery store. The compactor was full at least twice a week. Granted, that was driven by OSHA guidelines about disposing of food past its "Sell By" date.


    Monthly is way too long to be storing kitchen waste, no matter what any given person can get away with in their own unregulated private residence. There's an issue with this being precisely the fast-decaying material most likely to attract disease-carrying vermin. Sanitary landfills are managed to ensure that municipal waste (most definitely including food waste) is covered with either "fresh" incoming material or some neutral fill (like sand) within 24 hours, give or take. Bugs and rodents digging into the fill for tasty scraps end up dying from asphyxiation (most animals do poorly when their oxygen is displaced by methane) only to get covered up the next day.

    On top of the methane generation - but what's an explosion hazard among students - there's going to be stuff leaching out of the pile of refuse (which will be warmed by decaying organics regardless of how cold it is outside) and that can be nasty (organic acids leach chromium, iron, and other metals out of fill material quite nicely). Gravity still works in the WU, so if there's any leakage at all, the toxic brew will end up taking whatever downward route that it finds: into underground storage, classrooms, labs, the sewers, etc.

    Even on a reservation, public health and safety would trump public distaste for mutants.

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  • Depending on how the effluent is treated from the sewers (I don't see the school getting past the 70s without something being done to protect what's left of the local environment) there might be a system for macerating the school's food waste so it can be bioremediated alongside the sludge. It might even be worthwhile to attempt reclamation of rare earth, lanthanide, and platinum group metals. The systems would need water, no matter how much or how little done.

    Edit: I'm suddenly reminded of a Bill Cosby skit:

    Noah: "What's going on? How come you want me to do all these weird things?"
    God: "I'm going to destory the world."
    Noah: "Right! Am I on Candid Camera?"

    Noah: "How you gonna do it?"
    God: "I'm gonna make it rain for a thousand days and drown 'em right out"
    Noah: "Right! Listen to this, you'll save water - Let it rain for 40 days and 40 nights And wait for the sewers back up"
    God: "Right!"




    So, while most of the students might be happy about getting a rare "snow day", losing that pump station is really Serious Business as multiple systems that they wouldn't think about fail out behind the scenes.

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  • null0trooper wrote: Depending on how the effluent is treated from the sewers ...


    Read the early Jade stories, the school is basically making some eldritch nightmare worse by dumping its raw sewage into a handy portal to hell it found.
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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Katssun wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: While the school recycles as much as is feasibly possible, there is just some trash that can't be, for that, they have a roll on/roll off compactor dumpster combination that is emptied monthly.

    Monthly? That seems like a really long time. Too long. Even assuming most of the food for meals is eaten, it really adds up. As many might do over summers or before a full time job, I used to work at a grocery store. The compactor was full at least twice a week. Granted, that was driven by OSHA guidelines about disposing of food past its "Sell By" date.


    Monthly is way too long to be storing kitchen waste, no matter what any given person can get away with in their own unregulated private residence. There's an issue with this being precisely the fast-decaying material most likely to attract disease-carrying vermin. Sanitary landfills are managed to ensure that municipal waste (most definitely including food waste) is covered with either "fresh" incoming material or some neutral fill (like sand) within 24 hours, give or take. Bugs and rodents digging into the fill for tasty scraps end up dying from asphyxiation (most animals do poorly when their oxygen is displaced by methane) only to get covered up the next day.

    On top of the methane generation - but what's an explosion hazard among students - there's going to be stuff leaching out of the pile of refuse (which will be warmed by decaying organics regardless of how cold it is outside) and that can be nasty (organic acids leach chromium, iron, and other metals out of fill material quite nicely). Gravity still works in the WU, so if there's any leakage at all, the toxic brew will end up taking whatever downward route that it finds: into underground storage, classrooms, labs, the sewers, etc.

    Even on a reservation, public health and safety would trump public distaste for mutants.


    Food wastes are being composted on-site somewhere well away from people by the ground keepers, the compactor is just for un-compostable, un-recyclable waste, which is kept to the bare minimum because it costs to dispose of that stuff, whereas recycling kind of breaks even, and composting cost no more then the time of staff your already paying for to truck out and dump somewhere and let nature take its course.
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  • Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

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    Katssun wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: While the school recycles as much as is feasibly possible, there is just some trash that can't be, for that, they have a roll on/roll off compactor dumpster combination that is emptied monthly.

    Monthly? That seems like a really long time. Too long. Even assuming most of the food for meals is eaten, it really adds up. As many might do over summers or before a full time job, I used to work at a grocery store. The compactor was full at least twice a week. Granted, that was driven by OSHA guidelines about disposing of food past its "Sell By" date.


    Monthly is way too long to be storing kitchen waste, no matter what any given person can get away with in their own unregulated private residence. There's an issue with this being precisely the fast-decaying material most likely to attract disease-carrying vermin. Sanitary landfills are managed to ensure that municipal waste (most definitely including food waste) is covered with either "fresh" incoming material or some neutral fill (like sand) within 24 hours, give or take. Bugs and rodents digging into the fill for tasty scraps end up dying from asphyxiation (most animals do poorly when their oxygen is displaced by methane) only to get covered up the next day.

    On top of the methane generation - but what's an explosion hazard among students - there's going to be stuff leaching out of the pile of refuse (which will be warmed by decaying organics regardless of how cold it is outside) and that can be nasty (organic acids leach chromium, iron, and other metals out of fill material quite nicely). Gravity still works in the WU, so if there's any leakage at all, the toxic brew will end up taking whatever downward route that it finds: into underground storage, classrooms, labs, the sewers, etc.

    Even on a reservation, public health and safety would trump public distaste for mutants.


    Food wastes are being composted on-site somewhere well away from people by the ground keepers, the compactor is just for un-compostable, un-recyclable waste, which is kept to the bare minimum because it costs to dispose of that stuff, whereas recycling kind of breaks even, and composting cost no more then the time of staff your already paying for to truck out and dump somewhere and let nature take its course.

    Actually there is very little that is utterly unrecyclable. Difficult to recycle, hazardous to recycle, those are a given and why stuff doesn't get recycled. Looking at the kitchen they have food waste. That is going to go down! Why? Because if they are there for very long they are going to be put on restricted diets, that means that there will be less food served to everyone. Human? vacuum cleaners like Tennyo are going to be looking for any uneaten scrap before it leaves the dining area. So you have the residue that is on plates, in cookware, and the containers the food came in... The containers are going to be steel cans for the most part. Very easily recycled, and possibly given their usage rates the school separates them from other waste and sends them off to someplace that does just that. Then there is cardboard... again recyclable, and probably segregated and sent off to someplace that recycles it. Finally you have plastic. Most of this will be containers for fresh, refrigerated or some sauces and pickles. Again when you've recovered as much as possible food from the container, wash, crush and separate according to type of plastic, mostly PET if I recall correctly for food. I honestly expect that the school has at least three industrial balers that produce a tractor trailer load sized bale of these things. If that is true it would make things quite a bit easier. I worked for a bit in a place that packaged a lot of stuff they had several bailers through out the shop. They baled cardboard (two or three balers that I recall) PET plastic, two bailers that I'm sure of, and film plastic (like the pallet wrap that comes on or goes on pallets) were baled there and shipped away by the tractor trailer load.
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    null0trooper wrote: Depending on how the effluent is treated from the sewers ...


    Read the early Jade stories, the school is basically making some eldritch nightmare worse by dumping its raw sewage into a handy portal to hell it found.


    I totally must have missed that part or maybe even that story!

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  • Most of what happens to the waste is described in stories.

    The sewers drain into a portal to somewhere else, that is described in one of the early Jade stories, where Jinn can see the Portal, while they are cleaning and posting notices.

    Paper, plant waste, vegetable waste from the kitchens is all composted. That's from Straight from the Squirrel's Mouth.

    Metal waste, at least from the labs is all recycled. From The Big Idea.

    They may even recycle fryer grease and other liquid greases into fuels by the Gear Heads. That's from me.

    Regular garbage dumpsters were emptied weekly I think. Those outside Cottages, etc. That's in A Single Fold.

    Worse comes to worse, the various disintegrators can zap the excess.

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  • null0trooper wrote:

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    null0trooper wrote: Depending on how the effluent is treated from the sewers ...


    Read the early Jade stories, the school is basically making some eldritch nightmare worse by dumping its raw sewage into a handy portal to hell it found.


    I totally must have missed that part or maybe even that story!

    It's in Jade 3: Being a Girl . If you want to skip to the relevant bit, CTRL-F for "Class X".

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  • Well, who knew there was this kind of drama and demand for singing of the unsung heroes of Whateley. Obviously, no one is interested in what's going on with Coyote, or the Bastard or Hekate and her Master. So, I'll get a hold of Elrod and we'll get started on our next 2 million word epic, Stan and Morrie and the Schedule Thirty Nightmare!

    A riveting tale of duct work, plumbing and logistics all conspiring to bring a faint bad odor to one seldom used bathroom in Dickinson Cottage. Watch our heroes be caught up in a world wide web (see what I did there?) of conspiracy, import duties and plumbers night mares as they attempt to find the one true left hand pipe wrench that can end the chaos and bring order to the Waste Management Environmental Impact Statement for Whateley Academy! Read about a supply chain, so well thought out even the ordinary lives of delivery truck drivers, warehouse pickers and palette loaders become high drama as they struggle to load trailer 2256 with the EXACT needed contents, all while staying within DOT weight requirements.

    Will Mike the warehouse man ever get the nerve to ask out Rita from accounts receivable?

    Will Jan in human resources ever get over her jealousy of Rita's youth and relative attractiveness in the mind numbingly dull day to day grind of loading trailers from a central ware house?

    Will Elrod and I manage to stay awake to write 2 million words about supply trains and waste management?

    Who Cares? We need to be certain that every tire of every trailer is inflated to exactly 90PSI! Only then can we truly understand the inventory mystery that is Whateley Academy! Tune in next week!

    :rolleyes:

    And at this point the logistics discussion can be routed to the distribution ware house of a new thread.

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  • Oh we're most interested to see if TWFKAH can keep it together for more than 48 hours in a confined space. However someone complained that there was a logic breaking bit in the story, so we all hunted that rabbit down and shot it so much that we plumb forgot to ask the pertinent question: What will happen when a space time rift opens in the Chrystal Hall due to so many odds manglers being so close together!?
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  • Anne wrote: What will happen when a space time rift opens in the Chrystal Hall due to so many odds manglers being so close together!?


    An interesting story, for another time.

    Hey, if JJ can get away with it, so can we! :whistle:

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  • Anne wrote: Oh we're most interested to see if TWFKAH can keep it together for more than 48 hours in a confined space.

    This isn't the first time she's been stuck in a confined space, and this time she doesn't even have to share it with the Necromancer. If anything, she's likely to see this as an opportunity.

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    null0trooper wrote: Depending on how the effluent is treated from the sewers ...


    Read the early Jade stories, the school is basically making some eldritch nightmare worse by dumping its raw sewage into a handy portal to hell it found.


    I totally must have missed that part or maybe even that story!

    It's in Jade 3: Being a Girl . If you want to skip to the relevant bit, CTRL-F for "Class X".


    That I recalled. However, "But here … the same nutrient-rich sludge trickled along the floor." doesn't strike me as matching "Hey! We're dumping all of an entire prep school's sewerage and stormwater drainage down this one hole", especially considering the Class X site is several miles from the school, a little over halfway to Dunwich.


    As far as TWFKAH goes, while this seems like a perfect opportunity to get closer to her chosen catspaw, it's also under circumstances in which she's most likely to show too much of her hand to her Master. She might be impatient enough to make a move anyway, since she only has ten weeks left until the winter break.

    Coyote hasn't shown any interest in wanting Kayda dead - far from it! It's not his fault that Kayda blew off enchanting those copper spikes until after summer vay-kay, travel, and nookie plans. Teenagers. So now Wyatt and Kayda want to make it easier for them to be the first encountered, out of sight of the rest of the students once the school's perimeter wards fail? I don't see him complaining. Teenagers, again. And if the headmistress wants to put so many dreamers close enough together that no one can pick up on whose dreamspace is being visited how or when, who's he to argue? Teenagers everywhere!

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Will Mike the warehouse man ever get the nerve to ask out Rita from accounts receivable?

    Will Jan in human resources ever get over her jealousy of Rita's youth and relative attractiveness in the mind numbingly dull day to day grind of loading trailers from a central ware house?


    Okay, now that it's been suggested, I can't lie, I wouldn't mind something like this in the next Tales of Summer style anthology entry. Maybe the drama comes to a climax because of a particular student or another giving a gentle mental nudge? Or a very potent potable?
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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Will Mike the warehouse man ever get the nerve to ask out Rita from accounts receivable?

    Will Jan in human resources ever get over her jealousy of Rita's youth and relative attractiveness in the mind numbingly dull day to day grind of loading trailers from a central ware house?


    I just want to know who's pipes are cleaned and when will the next time be? I mean come one, how long will it take to flush them out?

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  • And that E E is why I rarely log in because I get exasperated by all the tangential or totally irrelevant comments that have little or nothing to do with the story :-(
    Clearly amongst the small number of members who do log in(usually 35 is max logged in) they thoroughly enjoy conversing about stuff that has little to do with the stories and also making countless attempts to compare stories to real life 8-) I just wish these members would realise what’s happening and create a thread somewhere else to discuss this stuff because clearly they enjoy conversing about these details or hypothesises :)
    I am wondering if maybe it’s one of the reasons few members comment on the stories and why we have over 2,000 “Guests” most of the time :-?

    As I said before I am really enjoying the Tension that you have steadily built up over the three episodes so far, it’s getting so strong I’m beginning to hurt :) The tension though gets these little “relief” bits like the way you show Tansy almost feeling sorrow for peeper and deciding to help him :) But then you build the tension write up again by showing us how even Lady Astarte cannot completely break through the Storm followed by a sort of Tension on/off created by the interaction between Kayda and Wyatt :blink: :)
    Thank you EE & Elrod for giving us such an interesting story 8P
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  • @Wavehead - We dunno what the guests are looking at... Although, 2K Guests. Nice!

    ...

    So, wondering if Kayda + Kodiak sex is gonna be a thing, 'cause, then all of Kayda's trio / whatever will have bumped uglies with Kodiak. ... Also 'cause alliteration. And 'cause it's possibly what Coyote wants. And maybe Ptesanwi + Kodiak reconciliation. (No entendre intended.)

    So, yeah, really wild if that were actually gonna happen, in both senses of the word.

    Lol if Coyote is actually fought by Kodiak, in some spiritual slugfest.

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    ... Hmm... Can spirits have kids? Wondering about Kodiak + Grizzly having a kid... Kodiak + Pteswani having a kid would be sooo weird.

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    And, that Gateway / Sewer Dump. Anything hiding in there? They only clean it out every 6 months, seems like a good place for some Mythos guy, like Hekate's Master or someone, to hang out? ... Then again, maybe hidden alarms, etc. ... And there might be better Class X sites around, that aren't actually monitored.
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  • Keep in mind that the Whateley Universe has long been said to follow real life, with certain notable exceptions. Sanitation is almost never going to be one of those exceptions unless folks really like stories about cholera or noroviruses (I prefer not to invoke Rule 35) in a Mythos setting.

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    Malady wrote: So, wondering if Kayda + Kodiak sex is gonna be a thing, 'cause, then all of Kayda's trio / whatever will have bumped uglies with Kodiak. ... Also 'cause alliteration. And 'cause it's possibly what Coyote wants. And maybe Ptesanwi + Kodiak reconciliation. (No entendre intended.)

    So, yeah, really wild if that were actually gonna happen, in both senses of the word.



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  • Ok, so we have had the mention that Wyatt tracked Kayda by her hormones, that she's nearly ovulating. They talked about her and Lanie and the sex while under the influence. Coyote is seemingly pushing the two of them into this situation. There was the " I was supposed to marry Lanie" talk. All we are essentially missing is the "We need to get you out of those wet clothes" ... I think it's going to happen, the sex. Gen 2 has no mention of a Kayda/Wyatt baby. It still is possible. And if Kayda does get pregnant, she may not carry to term. We all know Kayda is the "How do we make you even more neurotic?" character... followed closely by Danny.

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  • Rose Bunny wrote: We all know Kayda is the "How do we make you even more neurotic?" character... followed closely by Danny.


    Challenge accepted!

    Years after the "recent should I stay (as a girl) or should I go decision", Kayda realizes that Brandon's foredestined daughter by Lanie would still have been a 1/8th blood lineal descendent, just like Danny and Amelie's kids. Native, but not Native enough for some people (bureaucrats!)

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  • Rose Bunny wrote: ... I think it's going to happen, the sex.


    J.J.J., I need a reparty:


    More seriously, the idea of sex happening between Kayda and Wyatt now would be not just utterly unlogical, but wildly OOC. First time sexual relationship with a rape victim was in the cards for Wyatt was with Songbird, and it only happened once in a dream because of Bedside Rug's manipulations... And he was livid and emphatically against the idea once he knew about it. And I'll bring back for the record how violent his reaction was when he thought Songbird abused Elaine.

    When Kayda's rape was outed and one idiot thought he had the Dick of Healing and could help her that way, Wyatt made it painfully clear the idea showed Darwin-Awards levels of intelligence and how out of question such thinking should be. I cannot imagine him having sex with Kayda with these sorts of factors to take into consideration... And let's not forget the fact Kayda still had to swallow up her fear at the mere idea of being in contact with him. For the life of me I can't imagine her consenting to go that far.

    Even more in the present circumstances: they know Kayda's essence isn't renewing, at to me it seems a pretty obvious sign that blizzard is not natural, and that means more trouble are coming. Even without the facts I already mentionned, having sex right now... I'm sure even Darwin Awards winners would find a course of action like this utterly stupid, and that's not like they can add much more to the debate.
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  • Hardric wrote: More seriously, the idea of sex happening between Kayda and Wyatt now would be not just utterly unlogical, but wildly OOC. First time sexual relationship with a rape victim was in the cards for Wyatt was with Songbird, and it only happened once in a dream because of Bedside Rug's manipulations... And he was livid and emphatically against the idea once he knew about it. And I'll bring back for the record how violent his reaction was when he thought Songbird abused Elaine.

    When Kayda's rape was outed and one idiot thought he had the Dick of Healing and could help her that way, Wyatt made it painfully clear the idea showed Darwin-Awards levels of intelligence and how out of question such thinking should be. I cannot imagine him having sex with Kayda with these sorts of factors to take into consideration... And let's not forget the fact Kayda still had to swallow up her fear at the mere idea of being in contact with him. For the life of me I can't imagine her consenting to go that far.

    Even more in the present circumstances: they know Kayda's essence isn't renewing, at to me it seems a pretty obvious sign that blizzard is not natural, and that means more trouble are coming. Even without the facts I already mentionned, having sex right now... I'm sure even Darwin Awards winners would find a course of action like this utterly stupid, and that's not like they can add much more to the debate.


    Coyote. A biiig factor is Coyote. We dunno what he wants, nor what he can do... Is he even confirmed as Anti-Bastard? If so, then we need to see how what he does relates to that goal, if he's not just doing things for shits and giggles.

    Chances that he's wanting Kodiak and Kayda to boink... Pretty high? ... I'd say he might be "How do we make you even more neurotic?" incarnate?

    And I really like the completeness of Kodiak boinking 3/3 of Tansy, Elaine, and Kayda.

    Does it make sense in character, without Coyote / Mythos / Whatever influence? No. But, 3/3 just sounds so neat and tidy?

    ... Can Coyote summon up some Lust Essence? Does Coyote know where Sara is??
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  • In my own defense of the idea. Kayda is comfortable with Wyatt, in a way she isn't with other men. He can be close and even touch her without her freaking out. She sees him as a source of protection and nurturing. In her weakened state, they might get close and he might hold her, for warmth. That could turn into a feeling of safety and security, that might go further. Sex isn't always volatile clothes ripping lust. Sometimes it can be gentle and caring and tender.

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  • Malady wrote: Coyote. A biiig factor is Coyote. We dunno what he wants, nor what he can do... Is he even confirmed as Anti-Bastard? If so, then we need to see how what he does relates to that goal, if he's not just doing things for shits and giggles.


    When the hunts have gone well, food is plenty, and peace is among the peoples is the time for fun and games.

    There are many enemies arrayed against the People and against, not just one half-Sidhe abomination, and they need little miss "Nobody wuvvs me" to be getting her photogenic butt in gear for those enemies now, not just when it's convenient for her. Wakan Tanka's manipulations brought back the Ptesanwi in Brandon instead of via Brandon, inflicting traumas they'll be decades in overcoming if ever. But, I suspect that like every DI ever, he works with what he gets. At the end of the day it cannot matter if the scum he's stuck with enlisted, drafted, or were given a choice by a judge (or an angry father... same thing), they are going to shape up as a unit one way or another.

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  • Despite a virulent hatred of Vile E Coyote (My roasted soy sauce chicken ass he was telling the truth with his 'oh-so-fucking perfect what-if'. What would it tell about free will and determinism that you can pull out perfect prediction about the future and alternate events originating from one diverging event out of your aetheric ass? Likeliest scenario? Why not. The 'gospel' he was trying to sell? I refer you to my precedent appeal of J.J.J.), I dare think now the 'Is she the Ptesanwi' issue is as settled as it could be, he would be on the side of very Winter Fae-grade though love help of the People (can't be trickster spirit for a people if they're all dead, right?).

    And right now it seems to me it's indirect help to survive the Shaman Killer's little breeze (okay, between the mega-blizzard and the Essence drain so bad even Whateley-grade heavyweights are wavering, how did that OP bastard not slaugther mystics of all America in the past?), to see if she's able to survive it in direct confrontation.

    What exact purpose would be served by having Kayda and Wyatt have sex exactly? And I dare think the 'complete the 3/3' thingie is a joke...

    Also, while Kayda is more comfortable with Wyatt than other men, it's still not up to actually comfortable. She has to fight against the reflex to freak out even with him. I fail to see how sex could happen in these conditions, even 'gentle and caring and tender' one. I remind you the only time she ever considered sex with him was indirectly, and while she was being drugged up to the gills with lust essence of a Mythos-grade entity. And while he's not a saint, I dare think Wyatt is noble to not take advantage of the situation with Kayda, especially when they should rather be concerned about what the heck is behind the mega magic-draining blizzard trapping them here. Bluntly told, I think you severly underestmate Kayda's emotional scars. The Dick of Healing/Redemption never existed, I fail to see why Wyatt would be an exception, or how he could think of himself as one when his opinion about consent was made plain in precedent stories.
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  • Hardric wrote: I dare think now the 'Is she the Ptesanwi' issue is as settled as it could be, he would be on the side of very Winter Fae-grade though love help of the People (can't be trickster spirit for a people if they're all dead, right?).


    There's a lotta People, it's not like they're on the verge of extinction. Presuming that all ~5 million Native Americans could be used for his goals, there's a lot of pawns he could move around. ... He could (although I don't think he would) kill Kayda and set up a people with Lupine starting that new tribe.

    Hardric wrote: What exact purpose would be served by having Kayda and Wyatt have sex exactly?


    Getting her pregnant might fit well into some of the prophecies and stuff. Brandon's kid was supposed to be the Ptesanwi, IIRC, so giving her a kid now, does... Stuff?

    Hardric wrote: And I dare think the 'complete the 3/3' thingie is a joke...


    Well, I don't think it'll happen because 3/3, but, to rephrase, Kodiak's boinked 2/3, so 3/3, makes sense narratalogically speaking? Even though it may be out of character.

    Hardric wrote: Bluntly told, I think you severly underestmate Kayda's emotional scars. The Dick of Healing/Redemption never existed, I fail to see why Wyatt would be an exception, or how he could think of himself as one when his opinion about consent was made plain in precedent stories.


    Which "you" are you talking to exactly? There's at least... 2 people you could be responding to.

    "The Dick of Healing/Redemption never existed" ... Well, apply the right mind magic while having sex, and the effect is the same. And Kodiak the spirit still has an independent existence from Wyatt the person, plus, the oath was just not to mess with Lanie anymore, right? ... Can Kodiak the spirit use mind-magic on Wyatt??

    And consent is thrown out the window when you can have a god-thing mind control both parties... Although, I don't think mind control is in Coyote's skill set... But, forcing sleepwalking? I dunno... Soo many ways things can go!
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    Hardric wrote: I dare think now the 'Is she the Ptesanwi' issue is as settled as it could be, he would be on the side of very Winter Fae-grade though love help of the People (can't be trickster spirit for a people if they're all dead, right?).


    There's a lotta People, it's not like they're on the verge of extinction. Presuming that all ~5 million Native Americans could be used for his goals, there's a lot of pawns he could move around. ... He could (although I don't think he would) kill Kayda and set up a people with Lupine starting that new tribe.

    Hardric wrote: What exact purpose would be served by having Kayda and Wyatt have sex exactly?


    Getting her pregnant might fit well into some of the prophecies and stuff. Brandon's kid was supposed to be the Ptesanwi, IIRC, so giving her a kid now, does... Stuff?

    Hardric wrote: And I dare think the 'complete the 3/3' thingie is a joke...


    Well, I don't think it'll happen because 3/3, but, to rephrase, Kodiak's boinked 2/3, so 3/3, makes sense narratalogically speaking? Even though it may be out of character.

    Hardric wrote: Bluntly told, I think you severly underestmate Kayda's emotional scars. The Dick of Healing/Redemption never existed, I fail to see why Wyatt would be an exception, or how he could think of himself as one when his opinion about consent was made plain in precedent stories.


    Which "you" are you talking to exactly? There's at least... 2 people you could be responding to.

    And consent is thrown out the window when you can have a god-thing mind control both parties... Although, I don't think mind control is in Coyote's skill set... But, forcing sleepwalking? I dunno... Soo many ways things can go!


    Bullet points time.

    1 It's not that much either. And there is still a certain Mythos Bastard out for their blood. Let's worry about the spoils after, the storm is over.

    2 Prophecies probably went off the rails at some levels when Ptesanwi got up one generation sooner. Not sure how it could work.

    3 It's not narratiely logic yet if the only way to make it happen is by throwing characters OOC.

    4 Sorry, I was mainly thinking about Rose Bunny at this point. That said, I dare say that the idea we could have mind-controlled characters for that sort of purpose creep me out extremely. And for all the shit Vile E Coyote pulled out, I think I remember a 'Solomon Pact' all about curtailing spirits actions on the world. And despite this the random spirit can pupeteer not-so random people at will? Even Vile E Coyote is supposed to have some *cough*incredibly dubious*cough* moral ambiguity, and the sort of action implied by 'many ways things can go'... Ordinary coercicion methods are disgusting enough.
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  • Regarding Kittyfuckalick wiping out all mystics, he's not that powerful. The bulk of his success thus far has been because he catches his prey by surprise while they're more or less alone -- thus his current strategy with the storm (assuming this really is him; seems likely). If he were to make a serious effort at killing even just every shaman, he'd probably get ganged up on and rebuffed or killed. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if that's already happened a few times.

    As for Kayda, between her trauma and her concern about cheating on Debra, I can't imagine her having sex with Wyatt right now unless it was literally life or death. Only way that happens is if she forgets that jumping jacks exist and decides sex is the only way to warm up, or if Wyatt reveals that Tansy taught him some of that tantric stuff and he thinks he can use it to refill Kayda's essence. Otherwise, they're going to be sticking with friendly awkward cuddles. And that's perfectly fine by me.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Regarding Kittyfuckalick wiping out all mystics, he's not that powerful. The bulk of his success thus far has been because he catches his prey by surprise while they're more or less alone -- thus his current strategy with the storm (assuming this really is him; seems likely). If he were to make a serious effort at killing even just every shaman, he'd probably get ganged up on and rebuffed or killed. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if that's already happened a few times.


    Another possibility is that while Kigatilik may be resistant to shamanic magics, he's not so resistant to other forms. Hence there would be a need to drain essence beforehand with a killing storm, depowering a shaman's potential allies (like the Sorceress and the Pack Stalker he'd met)

    Kettlekorn wrote: As for Kayda, between her trauma and her concern about cheating on Debra, I can't imagine her having sex with Wyatt right now unless it was literally life or death. Only way that happens is if she forgets that jumping jacks exist and decides sex is the only way to warm up, or if Wyatt reveals that Tansy taught him some of that tantric stuff and he thinks he can use it to refill Kayda's essence. Otherwise, they're going to be sticking with friendly awkward cuddles. And that's perfectly fine by me.


    There's an important point that's been made more than once about where Kayda's essence comes from and some of the rules and restrictions on pushing it through to her that apply in the mundane world. That tap could be augmented through tantric practice, but there are forms of yoga that do not rely on sex to raise and tune one's energies. Yoga, that is, among other things. I'd be surprised if The Kodiak weren't just as capable of being a coach for Cody as Mustang recently was for Tansy. One detail to tie the others together, is that the tent is near pine trees. For a first-timer, it's probably very good for Kayda to have an experienced physician backing her up - and one who likely never restricted himself to North American shamanism.

    The authors may have something else in mind, but it looks like Kayda has what she needs close at hand. The catch is figuring that out and acting in time.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: As for Kayda, between her trauma and her concern about cheating on Debra, I can't imagine her having sex with Wyatt right now unless it was literally life or death. Only way that happens is if she forgets that jumping jacks exist and decides sex is the only way to warm up, or if Wyatt reveals that Tansy taught him some of that tantric stuff and he thinks he can use it to refill Kayda's essence. Otherwise, they're going to be sticking with friendly awkward cuddles. And that's perfectly fine by me.


    This makes me wonder if Kodiak can manifest a smaller form -- like Rythax or Tatanka -- so that Kayda can cuddle a real, live teddy bear.
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  • bergy wrote: This makes me wonder if Kodiak can manifest a smaller form -- like Rythax or Tatanka -- so that Kayda can cuddle a real, live teddy bear.


    Ironically, appearing as a large example of a Kodiak bear is the smallest The Kodiak can manifest himself. It is as small as his ego will allow...

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    bergy wrote: This makes me wonder if Kodiak can manifest a smaller form -- like Rythax or Tatanka -- so that Kayda can cuddle a real, live teddy bear.


    Ironically, appearing as a large example of a Kodiak bear is the smallest The Kodiak can manifest himself. It is as small as his ego will allow...

    :evil:


    How about Grizzly?

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    Wonder how many parts this'll be... Blizzard seems to be such a big threat, I'm expecting it to continue past the next part?

    ... What could Vlad actually do in such a sitch??
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  • Malady wrote:
    How about Grizzly?

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    Wonder how many parts this'll be... Blizzard seems to be such a big threat, I'm expecting it to continue past the next part?

    ... What could Vlad actually do in such a sitch??


    Grizzly is more flexible. ;) And, The Evil That Men Do is a Novel in 5 parts, and is complete and in the que for delivery.

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  • Malady wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote:

    bergy wrote: This makes me wonder if Kodiak can manifest a smaller form -- like Rythax or Tatanka -- so that Kayda can cuddle a real, live teddy bear.


    Ironically, appearing as a large example of a Kodiak bear is the smallest The Kodiak can manifest himself. It is as small as his ego will allow...

    :evil:


    How about Grizzly?

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    Wonder how many parts this'll be... Blizzard seems to be such a big threat, I'm expecting it to continue past the next part?

    ... What could Vlad actually do in such a sitch??


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  • Malady wrote: And, that Gateway / Sewer Dump. Anything hiding in there? They only clean it out every 6 months, seems like a good place for some Mythos guy, like Hekate's Master or someone, to hang out? ... Then again, maybe hidden alarms, etc. ... And there might be better Class X sites around, that aren't actually monitored.


    Forget Mythos - what about Jobe?! I'm sure there's no end to the horrors they could create on a diet of nutrient-rich sludge.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Regarding Kittyfuckalick wiping out all mystics, he's not that powerful. The bulk of his success thus far has been because he catches his prey by surprise while they're more or less alone -- thus his current strategy with the storm (assuming this really is him; seems likely). If he were to make a serious effort at killing even just every shaman, he'd probably get ganged up on and rebuffed or killed. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if that's already happened a few times.


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    Not so sure about that. Yeah, the fact he boasts about boredom and lack of worthy targets as the reason he was chilling (eh) wherever he was could be bluster, but he seems at least in the same least as Uh-Are-So-Ugly Snake, and remember Carson was pretty much left on her knees after launching one spell (and that also tanks the idea his tricks are anti-shamans only). And she is pretty much not kindergarten-grade practitioner. And it didn't went close enough to go physical (although admittedly, Carson is a very much not soft target). Frankly, I think the Shaman Killer title isn't stolen, and the main reason it's 'only' Shaman is because there weren't any other kind of mystics to slaughter the last time he moved his lazy OP ass. The idea of going after Lodgeman and the Ptesanwi didn't seem to faze him the slightest at least.
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  • Sure, Carson failed to accomplish much single-handed and unprepared against a hidden enemy who is intentionally using roundabout methods to avoid people interfering with him. That is completely in line with what I'm saying. Kibbleticksquick is mighty, but not he's not omnipotent or he wouldn't need to use these methods in the first place.

    If a handful of Outcasts caught by surprise can chase him off, then so can a coalition of 10% of America's mystics.

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  • Hardric wrote: remember Carson was pretty much left on her knees after launching one spell (and that also tanks the idea his tricks are anti-shamans only).


    If you are referring to the scene of Lady Astarte trying to reach Kayda and Wyatt, it wasn't so much something the storm did to her. The spell she cast through the Earth to reach their fire she put almost all of her essence into, to the point she nearly extinguished her Well, and that is extremely dangerous. That is why she was so weakened after wards.

    But, who ever is behind the storm is obviously not a slouch either...

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Sure, Carson failed to accomplish much single-handed and unprepared against a hidden enemy who is intentionally using roundabout methods to avoid people interfering with him. That is completely in line with what I'm saying. Kibbleticksquick is mighty, but not he's not omnipotent or he wouldn't need to use these methods in the first place.

    If a handful of Outcasts caught by surprise can chase him off, then so can a coalition of 10% of America's mystics.


    Not to take away any due awesomeness from the Outcasts, but that wasn't exactly a walk in the park, even with Lodgeman playing support with a spell I understand was pretty mcuch 'power-up from all past People' with the sort of magic geared for taking it out while it hadn't brought up its A-Game, and it still ended up requiring a 'Hail Mary' tactic to deliver the final punch, a punch Diamondback coudln't have delivered with Lodgeman's Essence supplies... Okay, despite the apearances, I'm not aiming to 'OMG, that thing is invincible!', but 'OMG, how is that cheat fuck able to keep pilling up meaner punches like that again and again?', but still I think judging it from the way that fight looked like is grounds for getting killed.

    If you are referring to the scene of Lady Astarte trying to reach Kayda and Wyatt, it wasn't so much something the storm did to her. The spell she cast through the Earth to reach their fire she put almost all of her essence into, to the point she nearly extinguished her Well, and that is extremely dangerous. That is why she was so weakened after wards.

    But, who ever is behind the storm is obviously not a slouch either...

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    Ah, happy to be wrong... Wait, you mean she felt like she needed to go Hail Mary mode like that to make sure the spell went through? Less frightening than how I understood it, but duck, how much more can this thing escalate the threat?
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  • And I just thought of something which others might bring up. Eldritch. She is immune to cold of this level, she could go out in the blizzard and bring back Wyatt and Kayda with the right gear. Nope, her physical form is fueled by essence she draws in, go out into that storm and have her essence start getting drained out fast, she might not last as long as Wyatt did before all her essence is gone and she is toast. :freezing:

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  • Dreamer wrote: And I just thought of something which others might bring up. Eldritch. She is immune to cold of this level, she could go out in the blizzard and bring back Wyatt and Kayda with the right gear. Nope, her physical form is fueled by essence she draws in, go out into that storm and have her essence start getting drained out fast, she might not last as long as Wyatt did before all her essence is gone and she is toast. :freezing:

    This is what a lot of people seem to be forgetting. That is that this storm is not natural. Therefore unless, or until there is some way to address the unnatural origin of the storm then sending out a being (like Eldritch) who is dependent on essence would be a bad idea.
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  • Since Mrs Carson has felt the storms effects on her. I would expect her to gather up the staff practitioners, and to begin to research a counter measure.

    Also.I don't think it would take too much for a warper who is familiar with the area to pop in grab the two and pop back out.

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  • Yolandria wrote: Since Mrs Carson has felt the storms effects on her. I would expect her to gather up the staff practitioners, and to begin to research a counter measure.

    Also.I don't think it would take too much for a warper who is familiar with the area to pop in grab the two and pop back out.


    Blue Jay is a warped/teleporter and a member of The Nations.

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  • I don't think it has been shown that Bluejay can carry other people with him when 'porting. Also, consider the risks inherent in teleporting. Would you be certain that a mystical blizzard wouldn't be able to throw you off course?

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  • If it weren't for the supernatural essence-stealing of the storm, it'd be a simple matter of pointing Molly at the problem and saying "get them!"
    However the magic of the storm is sufficiently powerful that it nearly KO'd Lady Astarte, it's blocking FUBAR from communicating with the people in Crystal Hall, and is blocking Tansy so severely that she can barely sense people in lower levels of the Hall. It's highly probable that the only person strong enough on the campus to withstand the storm for any duration would be Tennyo. There are other cold-immune people, but the storm would still eat away at their essence and weaken them before they got to the teepee.

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  • Rose Bunny wrote: There are other cold-immune people, but the storm would still eat away at their essence and weaken them before they got to the teepee.


    And keep in mind, in her present state, even if someone could get to them, how likely is Kayda to survive the trip back?

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Rose Bunny wrote: There are other cold-immune people, but the storm would still eat away at their essence and weaken them before they got to the teepee.


    And keep in mind, in her present state, even if someone could get to them, how likely is Kayda to survive the trip back?


    And do they absolutely KNOW that Kayda and Wyatt are (still) in the tipi? They knew that was Kayda's destination, but they could have ended up elsewhere - like in the Nations clubhouse - because Kayda hadn't made it to the tipi. So knowing WHERE to warp or teleport or open a portal would be a pure gamble.

    WE all know for absolute certain that Kayda and Wyatt are in the tipi, but no-one else at Whateley does know with certainty.

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  • Sir Lee wrote: I don't think it has been shown that Bluejay can carry other people with him when 'porting. Also, consider the risks inherent in teleporting. Would you be certain that a mystical blizzard wouldn't be able to throw you off course?


    It was in one of the Merry stories that Bluejay stated that he could carry people but it made him logarithmically more tired depending on the number of people with him.
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  • A large problem with the "send a student who can teleport" plan is that it involves sending a student. There will be no sending of students, and any students who indicate that they are inclined to make an unauthorized rescue attempt are likely to be watched carefully and/or restrained until the storm is gone.

    A bird in the Hall is worth two in the tipi.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: A large problem with the "send a student who can teleport" plan is that it involves sending a student.


    It seems to me that teleporting blind (psychics/espers are being hit as hard as the magicians) to a structure one's never been to before that's surrounded by trees would be the deal-breaker.

    Depending on how one interprets the source of her powers, or the writer, even America Chavez should have trouble teleporting through that mess outside.

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  • Sir Lee wrote: I don't think it has been shown that Bluejay can carry other people with him when 'porting. Also, consider the risks inherent in teleporting. Would you be certain that a mystical blizzard wouldn't be able to throw you off course?


    In Insanity Prerequisite he teleports his band, at least 5 members onto the stage, then teleports himself a couple times, plays a song and then teleports the band back off the stage.

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  • I have an idea of how Phase could get to them. (S)He could take them more fuel for their fire. She might even be able to create a spiral stair from where they are down to the tunnel system depending on what is in her way...
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  • The problem there Anne is that the storm is still draining essence. Phase still has a connection to mystical arts, enough that Circe took him on as a student. Additionally, the storm seems to be messing with non-mystical powers, as evidenced by the things its doing to FUBAR and Tansy. If it weren't, it'd be a simple matter of having Molly open a portal for Wyatt to carry Kayda through.

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  • The question is this though: Are Phase' powers magically based or is he just a warper with magical sensitivity? He, like Jade can see magic.
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  • Anne wrote: The question is this though: Are Phase' powers magically based or is he just a warper with magical sensitivity? He, like Jade can see magic.


    The bigger question is: Is Mrs. Carson or Phase willing to take that risk?

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  • Valentine wrote:

    Anne wrote: The question is this though: Are Phase' powers magically based or is he just a warper with magical sensitivity? He, like Jade can see magic.


    The bigger question is: Is Mrs. Carson or Phase willing to take that risk?


    As far as Mrs Carson goes? That answer is a resounding, "NO."

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Valentine wrote:

    Anne wrote: The question is this though: Are Phase' powers magically based or is he just a warper with magical sensitivity? He, like Jade can see magic.


    The bigger question is: Is Mrs. Carson or Phase willing to take that risk?


    As far as Mrs Carson goes? That answer is a resounding, "NO."

    And that is the only answer that will matter until it doesn't matter. Mrs Carson knows where Kayda is, she knows where Kodiak is, she did what was necessary for them to survive. Coyote helped that along by creating a windbreak that might not be noticed by the supernatural power behind the storm, which even though no one in the Chrystal Hall will know about it until later helped insure their survival as well. Now provided that someone outside of the area attacks Kittystuckittoem and makes 'him' back off there will be a more than even chance that everyone will survive. Since Mrs Carson and Tansy and Lanie et al are seen in Gen 2 we know that most of them did survive the storm from frozen hell.
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  • Hmm... Could Kayda and Kodiak raid the pine trees for firewood? Or do they not need it? ... Well, it's not like they know that the pine trees are there... Are they sleeping?? Or is Kodiak at least awake?
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  • Knowing that Coyote is around, and having both magical and spiritual problems, why aren't they seeking out Danny and Wihinape to see if she has any ideas of what going on. Wihinape is at least easily accessible. Putting Danny at risk by having them help wouldn't be something Mrs. Carson would normally do, but she should know that she needs more information, and Wihinape may have some.

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  • Anne wrote: Nobody has thought that far yet. Also they regard Danny as a freshthing (which he is) and are not thinking that they could make contact with his spirit....


    Except just the night before there was a HUGE blowup because of the changes forced upon his body by his spirit, changes that the staff, at least Carson, Shugendo, Hartford, and others know about.

    It looks like Grimmsy is a Shaman and one of the targets.

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  • Ms. Grimes knows the year of her death? Literal chills up my spine when I read that scene, you two.

    But since it is next year, it also makes me wonder if we'll see three very serious witches come into their own after her death.

    I also loved Jobe's open invitation. At first, it makes no sense. Jobe! It must be Harley's idea. But no, Jobe is thinking about her father founding the Order of the Worn Wrench, and wants something similar for the outed changelings. And wow...Jobe on your side, plus Marty (which brings along the whole FSA) and Harley, the only truly competent Squirrel, and probably a good portion of the Devisors along with her.

    Jobe means well, for once, but this is Jobe.

    But then it all goes wrong between now and 2016?

    This just makes me want to know more about the origins of the Amazons. I wonder if they campus is only going to get more polarized during the remainder of Gen 1, all started by the FSA's newly very authoritative stance.
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  • Katssun wrote: Ms. Grimes knows the year of her death? Literal chills up my spine when I read that scene, you two.

    But since it is next year, it also makes me wonder if we'll see three very serious witches come into their own after her death.

    I also loved Jobe's open invitation. At first, it makes no sense. Jobe! It must be Harley's idea. But no, Jobe is thinking about her father founding the Order of the Worn Wrench, and wants something similar for the outed changelings. And wow...Jobe on your side, plus Marty (which brings along the whole FSA) and Harley, the only truly competent Squirrel, and probably a good portion of the Devisors along with her.

    Jobe means well, for once, but this is Jobe.

    But then it all goes wrong between now and 2016?

    This just makes me want to know more about the origins of the Amazons. I wonder if they campus is only going to get more polarized during the remainder of Gen 1, all started by the FSA's newly very authoritative stance.


    And imagine what would be Jobe's or Harley's reaction if they ever discover how much more changelings there are in Whateley. And that leads me to a question: Howcome the fact changelings exist seem to be that much of a secret, and how can it still be one? I mean, when you see the sort of changes mutations can create, sex change seems almost... trivial. I may be saying it wrong, but the more I think about it, the less I find the idea of mutations causing the sex changes remaining that big secret with only blatant outliers like Reach, Marty or Jobe, or ones like Poe credible, and that's accounting for this 'magic oath to silent the residents' (And now I think about it too, Stale Farce can't be the first one going around that magic oath in some ways, decades of different mutant/close enough students, something has to have slipped in the past...).

    And now I'm touching of the finger another point bugging me: Where the hell is Lodgeman? He's a mystical expert with speciality in shamanism too, and after his own meeting with Kigatilik, I think suspecting the OP bastard of pulling out Round 2 with ths blizzard isn't really left field out of nowhere thinking, and rushing to Carson to warn her seems like a rather high priority once these suspscions are there.

    And last point about Dreamer's speculations about Englund... Between the wielding of Hellfire and the way he behaves, I think he was already thoroughly burned by whatever pulled up this scam with him, and he's painfully aware of it being Not Good News.
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  • In point of fact, Mr. Lodgeman is on a plane, on his way to the scene of one of the previous murdered shamans to assist in the investigation and try to assuage the threat, if any, by what killed this shaman.

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  • Hardric wrote: Howcome the fact changelings exist seem to be that much of a secret, and how can it still be one?


    It isn't, any more than the existence of homosexuals/bisexuals, transexuals, and other sexual minorities is a secret (in WA, the WU, and RL). The secrets are the identities of such individuals, and the fact that Poe is a sanctuary of sorts for changelings and sexual minorities (a derivative of the first set). And the reason is simple: bigotry. As seen in this story and several others, there are people who react negatively - even violently - to individuals who are sexually different (just like in "real life"). And in the cases of some of the foreign students, such sexual differences can subject them to arrest and even execution.

    In a quirk of human psychology, the notion that Poe is populated with students with psychological problems (and therefore, any individual student living there has them) is far less inflammatory than the truth.

    While a few individuals might "come out" by choice, and others might be outed by people or events beyond their control, the majority are kept safer by the current system and the school is protected from the (sadly real) threat of being torn apart in a war between the bigots and the "different".
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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: In point of fact, Mr. Lodgeman is on a plane, on his way to the scene of one of the previous murdered shamans to assist in the investigation and try to assuage the threat, if any, by what killed this shaman.


    Man I wonder what his reaction will be once he saww another Kigatilik victim and the dust settles back at Wateley... And how long before Carson or Gries realize the situation (Lodgeman probably told them about being attacked by it back in late September).

    It isn't, any more than the existence of homosexuals/bisexuals, transexuals, and other sexual minorities is a secret (in WA, the WU, and RL). The secrets are the identities of such individuals, and the fact that Poe is a sanctuary of sorts for changelings and sexual minorities (a derivative of the first set). And the reason is simple: bigotry. As seen in this story and several others, there are people who react negatively - even violently - to individuals who are sexually different (just like in "real life"). And in the cases of some of the foreign students, such sexual differences can subject them to arrest and even execution.

    In a quirk of human psychology, the notion that Poe is populated with students with psychological problems (and therefore, any individual student living there has them) is far less inflammatory than the truth.

    While a few individuals might "come out" by choice, and others might be outed by people or events beyond their control, the majority are kept safer by the current system and the school is protected from the (sadly real) threat of being torn apart in a war between the bigots and the "different".


    I knew I was saying it wrong... I don't contest the reasons for the existence of the current situation as defined right from the first stories of the 'verse, but I can't help but feeling growing skepticism about the fact this secret is able to hold up in the long run. Even in G1, you end up with many people wondering 'what the hell is up in Poe?', and the idea they all meet a wall along the years or accept to cooperate with keeping the secret, them and all the others coming before and after them we don't see, is growing a bit thin over time... And that's not taking into consideration accidental revelations, or characters like Stale Farce, as blatant about their way of life as they can be, and/or able to go around the limitations for enforcing silence about the situation from Poe students (and with the potential power mutants can get, she can't be the first of her kind). And now I said it, I'm morbidly curious about the idea that G2 could bring up the end of Poe secrecy because of Attack Bitches' shenanigans, and the potential consequences... Might be a subject for a new thread, though.
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  • Hardric wrote: I knew I was saying it wrong... I don't contest the reasons for the existence of the current situation as defined right from the first stories of the 'verse, but I can't help but feeling growing skepticism about the fact this secret is able to hold up in the long run. Even in G1, you end up with many people wondering 'what the hell is up in Poe?', and the idea they all meet a wall along the years or accept to cooperate with keeping the secret,


    That's just it: they don't meet a wall. There is a clear and standard answer to 'what the hell is up in Poe?': it is the cabin of the "crazies", just as Hawthorne is the cabin of the uncontrolled GSD/power extremes. For instance, it is readily accepted that Generator is in Poe because of her overt (and surprisingly dangerous) eccentricities, and not even suspected that she is there because of her sexual identity issues. As far as most students are concerned, there is no mystery to solve. Even when one of the residents is outed for a sexuality issue, that just reinforces the cover story.
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  • joreymay wrote:
    For instance, it is readily accepted that Generator is in Poe because of her overt (and surprisingly dangerous) eccentricities, and not even suspected that she is there because of her sexual identity issues. As far as most students are concerned, there is no mystery to solve. Even when one of the residents is outed for a sexuality issue, that just reinforces the cover story.


    And not just Jade. Zenith is a well know bipolar type with Everything is GREAT(!) highs and No one will EVER love me(!!) lows. Hippy is, well, anger issues don't begin to cover it. Fey is apparently a full on schizophrenic who spent months last year looking for her spirit when she wasn't insisting she was a reincarnated Fairy Queen. Mokele' is a raging psychotic, Omega is a sociopath who doesn't care about ANYTHING. Go-Go is manic, Angel is obsessive compulsive, Boudacia is antisocial, etc, etc, etc.

    While there might be some who regret this cover, it is brilliantly self healing and works very well. Most of the kids just write it off. "Oh, you're a Posey? That explains it..."

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