Question The Micro-Scenes Discussion thread

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Hmm... So, the stone's exerting its influence... without its on-person presence? Or is it, and it's just not mentioned directly, considering that she is working on something...

Any physical transforms, I wonder...

Soul-location swap? Catgirl into Sam, Sam into stone?

Brands... Wonder what's the relevance of that... Slavery? Mad Mage Branding?

So many things to speculate on... Like how's the customer gonna respond to these events regarding the stone? ... The customer's a guy, right? I guess that point might not matter?

Malady wrote: Guy wants choker for daughter / wife / other female??

Domoviye wrote: Just watched it on Youtube. Interesting.

mhalpern wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Just watched it on Youtube. Interesting.

I find YouTube often fudges the audio, giving all the characters a high pitched voice.

Domoviye wrote: Kettlekorn, my main concern with that type of house is what does it do when it's hungry or starts to grow?

She heard a noise behind her. It was the last thing she noticed before a sharp pain ran through her body knocking her out cold.

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Hmm...

She heard a noise behind her. It was the last thing she noticed before a sharp pain ran through her body knocking her out cold.

I guess if it was a recognizable noise, like a car, it would be said? So it might be Sonic or Devise or something?

Domoviye wrote: Malady, I'm not sure when you'll learn what it was, but its going to be funny when you realize what attacked Rose.

Dreamer wrote: *Triple ties duct tape around mouth and hands to prevent from commenting on the last part of Domoviye's last post*

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: /facepalm

Oh, yeah supper slow me, I finally recognised what this is Dom.

Just one question, why are you doing it as Micro-scenes and not as Fan Fiction?

Jarjaross wrote:

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: /facepalm

Oh, yeah supper slow me, I finally recognised what this is Dom.

Just one question, why are you doing it as Micro-scenes and not as Fan Fiction?

Really, I realized back when… nope can't say that, spoilers.

Needless to say I've been annoyed that I can't reveal anything until it all comes to light.

Domoviye wrote: Malady, I'm not sure when you'll learn what it was, but its going to be funny when you realize what attacked Rose.

Malady wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Malady, I'm not sure when you'll learn what it was, but its going to be funny when you realize what attacked Rose.

So, it was an attack?

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@CPrime - Cool! ... Have we ever seen inside one of those training centers for adult Powereds? I guess your fanfics, if you continue them, might be our first glimpse? Hmm...

Magic is a thing that can be learned at home, though...

It feels weird having culturally-aware spirits, with Avatars-R-Us, being a play on Toys-R-Us... But, Kodiak and Grizzly have been active for a while, enough to grasp culture. The same could be said for other spirits?

Malady wrote: @Schol-R-Lea - I thought you made up fictons , but obviously, I'm wrong.

Initially, I thought they were a portmanteau of 'fiction' and the -ton suffix. ... Which might have been true all along? Meh.

Schol-R-LEA wrote:

Malady wrote: @Schol-R-Lea - I thought you made up fictons , but obviously, I'm wrong.

Initially, I thought they were a portmanteau of 'fiction' and the -ton suffix. ... Which might have been true all along? Meh.

Dunno if Heinlein ever explained it in quite those terms, but given that his definition was "a basic or indivisible unit of imagination", I would say it probably was what he had in mind.

elrodw wrote: re: Cprime and the micro-scene with Danny.

I like it. It's got that extra touch of Whateley Wierdness (TM) that makes it fun and interesting. And no, it's not too dark, at least not in comparison to some of the tortures Phoenix had suggested for Danny.

Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

elrodw wrote: re: Cprime and the micro-scene with Danny.

I like it. It's got that extra touch of Whateley Wierdness (TM) that makes it fun and interesting. And no, it's not too dark, at least not in comparison to some of the tortures Phoenix had suggested for Danny.

Hey!

I almost had them convinced that it was all you and I was trying to rehabilitate you!

Domoviye wrote: CPrime, to back up what Elrod said, that Danny story was iknteresting, not dark.
About the only way you'll get into trouble is if you have abuse mixed with cannibalism, don't ask me how I know, just take my word for it.
As always, good story.

Malady wrote:

Domoviye wrote: CPrime, to back up what Elrod said, that Danny story was iknteresting, not dark.
About the only way you'll get into trouble is if you have abuse mixed with cannibalism, don't ask me how I know, just take my word for it.
As always, good story.

... And now I want to make a story involving abuse + cannibalism, but couched in enough mystery for public viewing... As anything that vague is good enough to be a Parental Bonus... Mmm... Nah...

On the new scene:

Interesting Mind-working mechanics, with being able to resist with sufficient will, such that it seems like a creeping compulsion, instead of just slamming with "Go Put On The STONE!"

Perhaps her shopgirl will be affected instead?

Ok... the stone's entity or whatever doesn't care for the host's well-being... ... Is the catgirl life merely a mental smokescreen for something else? ... No, that doesn't fit. ... I guess it's like a Mass Effect Prothean Beacon, or something, just forcing life-data into the person, without any sentience behind it or anything...

Perhaps after viewing all of the life, there's a MacGuffin at the end of it, to find? Like Assassin's Creed?

Mithril Choker? It's not like we know every single magical metal in the Whateley-verse...

Reverse Psychology by the message writer? "I say not to take pictures" ... No, but the picture taking might lead someone to the stone, by some picture detection magic or something...

cprime wrote: I'll admit I debated over the necessity of adding in the spoiler tags (It is practically a walk in the forest, compared to what his sister has gone through), but I decided to play it safe and use them as it kinda comes out of left field. One variant that had danced through my mind was that both Paige and Danny could end up carrying kittens - at the same time. I think the idea was spawned in part (and scuttled by) the thread about the (lack of) teen pregnancies at Whateley.

Sir Lee wrote: Let's consider the mechanics for both of them becoming pregnant.
Given that Danny/Wihinape is a "switcher", that is, he is either male (in human form) or female (in mountain lion form);
Given that it was implied in this first part that if he gets pregnant, he won't be able to shift back -- at least, not fully (maybe he will be able to shift as far as humanoid-cat form without changing back to male, so he could attend classes and such).
But anyway, after he gets pregnant he won't be able to impregnate Paige.
But Paige is a bilateral full hermaphrodite, so she doesn't have this limitation.
So, Danny would have to first impregnate Paige (in human, or at least in male humanoid cat form);
And then Paige would impregnate Danny when he was in full female mountain lion form.

So, the both-get-pregnant scenario sorta requires Danny to enter in a relationship with Paige, since in his male form he appears to have more control at this point.

A minor point is that entire scene also implies that Paige now has better control over her Energizer power, so she didn't fry Danny accidentally. But learning control is the whole point of going to Whateley, so it's believable.

But, in a way, yeah, I could see them going for each other, or at least trying to bond -- they are sort of in the same boat: gender-confused, cat hybrids.

But Paige is marked by a GOO. I have to wonder how Wihinape would take that...

Birthday Brawl 6 wrote: I nodded. Jamie had talked enough about his past that I knew he had liked being a girl. But the problem with Shifters who don’t have control over their shifts is that they have no chance of carrying a normal baby for nine full months and giving birth. They have very little chance of getting pregnant and staying pregnant even long enough to realize that they’re actually pregnant. And Jamie still remembered girl-Jamie’s dreams about being a wife and mother. I knew exactly how that went. Trevor Goodkind had just assumed that he would be growing up male and following in Father’s footsteps: finding Miss Right, marrying her, having a happy marriage, and having a house full of kids. If I couldn’t get my body back to a male form, I had very little chance of making all that work out for me. On the other hand, I at least had a reasonable chance of finding Miss Right and having a family: in fact, I was kind of hoping I had already found Miss Right. Jamie had pretty much zero probability of finding Mr. Right and having his babies.

Domoviye wrote: They could, Jimmy T just needs to get a girl pregnant. With Jello and Reach, staying in a human female form and not messing around too much with their bodies would let them have a baby, they just need to plan for it.
Other shifters like the one who turned into Demona from Gargoyles, and anyone who can change into an animal, inorganic thing or sex without a lot of control have the most problem.

mhalpern wrote: (for Rose)

It's Clear that there's an unsavory factor somewhere, or is there? could be someone THINKING they are saving Rose, or it could be someone who is targeting Mind over Matter...

In any case my first thoughts are that Samuel Morse might save the day, if you know basic electronics, making a radio transmitter is relatively simple, and Rose is a gadgeteer, she can improvise what she needs to do it. the listening end could be those that keep those old systems in place for disaster response, fall back and rescue, the radio telegraph might not be used for general communication anymore but it never has nor shale loose its place as a fall back option, as it doesn't take much to convert a damaged audio radio transmitter into a telegraph.

My second thoughts are, even if that route isn't taken, she won't be a helpless captive, she will do most of the escape/rescuing herself. in a way ONLY a gadgeteer can.

Domoviye wrote: I like where you're going here. It's a good use of logic.

Malady wrote: Well, no, but... Hmm... What purpose might there be? There might be hints of a purpose that I haven't noticed. Not likely though ... Wild (and rapid) speculation is wild and without deep consideration.

Who is this mystery Devisor? ... Any connection to Cat's Eye Request Guy? Or is he new and gonna live? Or gonna die in Explosive Instrumentation?

Has Mind tracked her down, and responsible for the explosions outside wherever Rose is being held?

What could the machine's purpose be, that makes it terrifying for Rose to understand? ... Rose isn't an Energizer or anything with powers that can be amplified for a direct attack, right?

Jarjaross wrote: With how many people have come forward knowing about what is happening I'm surprised it's not an open secret.

Ib12us wrote: It's really Loopholes AI having been supplanted into a working robot made to believe she was really human and has the body to show that she is thus her parents not wanting to have her tested as she will be found out.

Her real parents are Loophole and Sasquatch.

Domoviye wrote:

Jarjaross wrote: With how many people have come forward knowing about what is happening I'm surprised it's not an open secret.

I've only sent it to about six people for proof reading.
Its almost done now and boy has it been improved.

Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

Jarjaross wrote: With how many people have come forward knowing about what is happening I'm surprised it's not an open secret.

I've only sent it to about six people for proof reading.
Its almost done now and boy has it been improved.

And in my defence, I'm not one of them. Dom sent me an early draft as Thank you for an idea I unintentionally gave him

Domoviye wrote:

Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

Jarjaross wrote: With how many people have come forward knowing about what is happening I'm surprised it's not an open secret.

I've only sent it to about six people for proof reading.
Its almost done now and boy has it been improved.

And in my defence, I'm not one of them. Dom sent me an early draft as Thank you for an idea I unintentionally gave him

Oh yeah, I didn't send you any follow ups. If you want one, let me know. I have the 3rd draft of _ _______ _________, almost finished.

Domoviye wrote: The second one with the two characters who shall not be named running from the police, only you have seen it.

mhalpern wrote: I realized too late that big reference points were missed on what someone would call a friend of Rose's...

Domoviye wrote:

mhalpern wrote: I realized too late that big reference points were missed on what someone would call a friend of Rose's...

???

mhalpern wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

mhalpern wrote: I realized too late that big reference points were missed on what someone would call a friend of Rose's...

???

Rosebud....

Malady wrote: All this creepyness is making me think of Bioshock... Gardens, Mental Manipulation, Sci-Fi... But, mainly just 'cause Rosebud ...

... In other news... I bet Mind's gonna save Rose's mind... ... Mental speed up in the Garden Sim? So... ...

Wait... Gardens (Sim)... Old Man... Mind Magic...

Erfworld Spoiler [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]

Is the old man, Charlie?

And the Garden is a reference to the Garden Channel?

... I'm not even sure if the Garden is a sim, instead of real and having the latest scene be time-skipped to post-battle... But, the tech and stuff seems to indicate sim?

Dreamer wrote: I was blocking myself from seeing it this whole time, the fate of Rose, because I didn't want it to be true based upon what I already know. Darn you, Domoviye! You made me care about Rose and did that to her, can't say any more or it will spoil things.

mhalpern wrote: I was thinking Citizen Kane with Rosebud...

Domoviye wrote:

mhalpern wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

mhalpern wrote: I realized too late that big reference points were missed on what someone would call a friend of Rose's...

???

Rosebud....

Hadn't even thought of it. I'll have to figure out a way to fit that in.

Malady wrote: @Kettlekorn - How'd they manage that theft? And how is the counter-theft supposed to work??

she ran into and through the nearest crystal panel

Malady wrote: @Domoviye -

she ran into and through the nearest crystal panel

... Durable + Fast + Strong?

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Kettlekorn!

You know Elrod is taking notes right?

If Danny gets caught up in a huge Kitty-on-kitty caper it will be all your fault!

Kettlekorn wrote:

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Kettlekorn!

You know Elrod is taking notes right?

If Danny gets caught up in a huge Kitty-on-kitty caper it will be all your fault!

Well, I'd have thought it would be cprime's fault, given that I haven't written anything with Danny in it yet. But I can fix that, never fear! Soon, the faults will be mine, all mine, muahahahahaaha!

Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

Kettlekorn wrote:

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Kettlekorn!

You know Elrod is taking notes right?

If Danny gets caught up in a huge Kitty-on-kitty caper it will be all your fault!

Well, I'd have thought it would be cprime's fault, given that I haven't written anything with Danny in it yet. But I can fix that, never fear! Soon, the faults will be mine, all mine, muahahahahaaha!

Well, I'd apologise, but something tells me it would be premature...

Now the bigger question, how on earth did I mix the two of you up?

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: I don't if that is disturbing because it is Domoviye, or because of what he wrote.

I just know I'm shuddering.

Domoviye wrote:

Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

Kettlekorn wrote:

Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Kettlekorn!

You know Elrod is taking notes right?

If Danny gets caught up in a huge Kitty-on-kitty caper it will be all your fault!

Well, I'd have thought it would be cprime's fault, given that I haven't written anything with Danny in it yet. But I can fix that, never fear! Soon, the faults will be mine, all mine, muahahahahaaha!

Well, I'd apologise, but something tells me it would be premature...

Now the bigger question, how on earth did I mix the two of you up?

It's because of their beautiful smiles.

Domoviye wrote: Really, I've got nothing to do except avoid getting killed by a haunted hotel until 2:30 when I try to figure out how to do some important paperwork I was shown once, and messed up last night.

Malady wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Really, I've got nothing to do except avoid getting killed by a haunted hotel until 2:30 when I try to figure out how to do some important paperwork I was shown once, and messed up last night.

Huh? Why 2:30 instead of right now? ... I guess 'cause that's when your shift ends? Or something? ... *shrugs*

...

Threads can't catch a break, can she? ... Is this before, or after Mistaken Identity?

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - I wonder why no response? ... They been captured or otherwise indisposed for tbe duration, and if anyone's checking on the buyer's email, that searcher is who Samantha'll be seeing soon?

Domoviye wrote: Arcanist Lupus, I see that Danny is once more our chewtoy. At least this time its a bit more enjoyable for him. If disconcerting.

Domoviye wrote: Sorry somehow I copied your name instead of Kettlekorns.

I wonder how effectively Carson could control the school once her little romp is discovered by the students.

Arcanist Lupus wrote: Tyson seems like a good person. But it always pays to be cautious. Especially when you're a Domoviye character.

NeoMagus wrote:

Arcanist Lupus wrote: Tyson seems like a good person. But it always pays to be cautious. Especially when you're a Domoviye character.

LOL. No kidding.

Domoviye wrote:

NeoMagus wrote:

Arcanist Lupus wrote: Tyson seems like a good person. But it always pays to be cautious. Especially when you're a Domoviye character.

LOL. No kidding.

Hey come on! What bad things have happened to Miss Powerful so far?

elrodw wrote: I've been debating myself over something since the issue was raised in the canon writers' forums. We have a lot of talented fan-fic authors, and the creativity is really wonderful.

But ...
(and you knew there was a 'but' coming, didn't you?)

When it comes to upcoming stories the community knows are going to be written - such as the Wondercute conclusion, or Danny getting to Whateley, I'm a little uncomfortable and for one reason: Some authors are, by random chance or logic or sheer blind luck, going to get elements of the plots right in their micro-scenes. The reason this bothers me is that a fan-fic author might feel that his or her ideas are being stolen without credit, or the readers might think the author isn't crediting the fan-fic author, and so on.

I don't want to discourage micro-scenes or fan-fiction, but maybe we should discuss this and come up with some reasonable guidelines? Possibly refraining from fan-fic and microscenes on elements that are near-term upcoming or known to be in work? As one example, of the (hilarious) micro-scenes featuring Danny, some have actually touched on ideas that I'm working in for the 07/08 school year. Even if they're not ideas I'm going to use, they're entertaining as hell. At the same time, I want to avoid copying ideas or not giving credit when I get around to the Danny stories.

Is it worth discussing, or am I worrying too much?

Arcanist Lupus wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

NeoMagus wrote:

Arcanist Lupus wrote: Tyson seems like a good person. But it always pays to be cautious. Especially when you're a Domoviye character.

LOL. No kidding.

Hey come on! What bad things have happened to Miss Powerful so far?

I rest my case.

elrodw wrote: Is it worth discussing, or am I worrying too much?

Domoviye wrote: I understand why you're worried and it is a concern, as I've had one fanfic closely compared to a Morpheus story, which I kiboshed as quickly as I could.
I'm not sure of the best way to deal with it other than having a disclaimer on the fanfic section stating that writers don't use them for ideas, so if similar characters or situations appear it's purely by chance.

elrodw wrote: I've been debating myself over something since the issue was raised in the canon writers' forums. We have a lot of talented fan-fic authors, and the creativity is really wonderful.

But ...
(and you knew there was a 'but' coming, didn't you?)

When it comes to upcoming stories the community knows are going to be written - such as the Wondercute conclusion, or Danny getting to Whateley, I'm a little uncomfortable and for one reason: Some authors are, by random chance or logic or sheer blind luck, going to get elements of the plots right in their micro-scenes. The reason this bothers me is that a fan-fic author might feel that his or her ideas are being stolen without credit, or the readers might think the author isn't crediting the fan-fic author, and so on.

I don't want to discourage micro-scenes or fan-fiction, but maybe we should discuss this and come up with some reasonable guidelines? Possibly refraining from fan-fic and microscenes on elements that are near-term upcoming or known to be in work? As one example, of the (hilarious) micro-scenes featuring Danny, some have actually touched on ideas that I'm working in for the 07/08 school year. Even if they're not ideas I'm going to use, they're entertaining as hell. At the same time, I want to avoid copying ideas or not giving credit when I get around to the Danny stories.

Is it worth discussing, or am I worrying too much?

Arcanist Lupus wrote:

elrodw wrote: Is it worth discussing, or am I worrying too much?

It's certainly worth discussing. Unfortunately, I don't have much to say on the topic.

EDIT: In a flurry of ninja'ing, I now do have a comment to make.

Domoviye wrote: I understand why you're worried and it is a concern, as I've had one fanfic closely compared to a Morpheus story, which I kiboshed as quickly as I could.
I'm not sure of the best way to deal with it other than having a disclaimer on the fanfic section stating that writers don't use them for ideas, so if similar characters or situations appear it's purely by chance.

There is a slight problem there in that sometimes, the writers have used them for ideas. Danny being case in point. Although most of those ideas have come from Phoenix, who has since been upgraded to canon.

Even so, even if the authors don't intentionally borrow ideas, it's easily possible for a fanfic version of a character to get lodged in an author's mind and start displacing the canon version. Which is part of the reason (besides legal reasons, and rule 34) that many professional authors make it a point to never read fanfiction. And while it's all in good fun to take over a character once in a while and make them the micro-scene butt monkey, I'd rather not derail any of the wonderful character arcs the authors have planned.

Arcanist Lupus wrote: There is a slight problem there in that sometimes, the writers have used them for ideas. Danny being case in point. Although most of those ideas have come from Phoenix, who has since been upgraded to canon.

Domoviye wrote:

elrodw wrote: I've been debating myself over something since the issue was raised in the canon writers' forums. We have a lot of talented fan-fic authors, and the creativity is really wonderful.

But ...
(and you knew there was a 'but' coming, didn't you?)

When it comes to upcoming stories the community knows are going to be written - such as the Wondercute conclusion, or Danny getting to Whateley, I'm a little uncomfortable and for one reason: Some authors are, by random chance or logic or sheer blind luck, going to get elements of the plots right in their micro-scenes. The reason this bothers me is that a fan-fic author might feel that his or her ideas are being stolen without credit, or the readers might think the author isn't crediting the fan-fic author, and so on.

I don't want to discourage micro-scenes or fan-fiction, but maybe we should discuss this and come up with some reasonable guidelines? Possibly refraining from fan-fic and microscenes on elements that are near-term upcoming or known to be in work? As one example, of the (hilarious) micro-scenes featuring Danny, some have actually touched on ideas that I'm working in for the 07/08 school year. Even if they're not ideas I'm going to use, they're entertaining as hell. At the same time, I want to avoid copying ideas or not giving credit when I get around to the Danny stories.

Is it worth discussing, or am I worrying too much?

I understand why you're worried and it is a concern, as I've had one fanfic closely compared to a Morpheus story, which I kiboshed as quickly as I could.
I'm not sure of the best way to deal with it other than having a disclaimer on the fanfic section stating that writers don't use them for ideas, so if similar characters or situations appear it's purely by chance.

Malady wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

elrodw wrote: I've been debating myself over something since the issue was raised in the canon writers' forums. We have a lot of talented fan-fic authors, and the creativity is really wonderful.
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I understand why you're worried and it is a concern, as I've had one fanfic closely compared to a Morpheus story, which I kiboshed as quickly as I could.
I'm not sure of the best way to deal with it other than having a disclaimer on the fanfic section stating that writers don't use them for ideas, so if similar characters or situations appear it's purely by chance.

Umm... Sorry about that! ... I'm not even sure how deep that analysis was... I think it was really shallow? ... Sorry!

... Well, at least it wasn't as shallow/silly as: "They're both girls, so obviously there's a connection there!"

Hmm... How many more scenes are in each of the four lines? I wanna try and guess what's gonna happen in each scene, and likely fail hilariously! ... Miss Powerful's basically complete, IIRC...

Is Rose complete? If yes, I'll bet her rescue's in the big story that's gonna follow.

... Wait... Is Marni near that place with all those mutant homeless kids? ... Where is that... Searching...

Domoviye wrote: Marni and Samantha have about six scenes left and they'll be posted once each week.

Domoviye wrote: Marni has a very important part to play, if she doesn't do it then so many things fall apart and a years worth of storylines crumble. you'll be surprised.

Malady wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Marni has a very important part to play, if she doesn't do it then so many things fall apart and a years worth of storylines crumble. you'll be surprised.

Hmm... ... Given that Tink's got something in the offing... Marni does something that does Universal Transfer into the Tink continuity and the 'main' Domoviye-verse? ... Canon Welding? No... Wrong term?

Perhaps Tink is studied and is found that when she's hit with Abinsthe, she turns into a Precog that interprets the data as Peeks Into The Fourth Wall... Something of a Retcon, Justification, Doing in the Scientist/Wizard... Whatever it is that El Goonish Shive does.

And berating the author is her interpretation of altering probabilities to fit a new fate-thing...

Domoviye wrote:

Malady wrote:

Domoviye wrote: Marni has a very important part to play, if she doesn't do it then so many things fall apart and a years worth of storylines crumble. you'll be surprised.

Hmm... ... Given that Tink's got something in the offing... Marni does something that does Universal Transfer into the Tink continuity and the 'main' Domoviye-verse? ... Canon Welding? No... Wrong term?

Perhaps Tink is studied and is found that when she's hit with Abinsthe, she turns into a Precog that interprets the data as Peeks Into The Fourth Wall... Something of a Retcon, Justification, Doing in the Scientist/Wizard... Whatever it is that El Goonish Shive does.

And berating the author is her interpretation of altering probabilities to fit a new fate-thing...

OK, that is cool enough I am seriously considering doing something like that just to screw with everything.

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Getting addicted to another life... Even at the possible expense of your health. Mmm... It's not like it even gives powers, it's just giving visions... Sad?

Domoviye wrote:

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Getting addicted to another life... Even at the possible expense of your health. Mmm... It's not like it even gives powers, it's just giving visions... Sad?

Sure, let's go with that.
The stone doesn't do anything. Nothing at all.

Dreamer wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Getting addicted to another life... Even at the possible expense of your health. Mmm... It's not like it even gives powers, it's just giving visions... Sad?

Sure, let's go with that.
The stone doesn't do anything. Nothing at all.

We know you wouldn't do that, it isn't cruel enough to your character. Giving her powers and a connection to an unknown past, now that fits more.

Domoviye wrote:

Dreamer wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Getting addicted to another life... Even at the possible expense of your health. Mmm... It's not like it even gives powers, it's just giving visions... Sad?

Sure, let's go with that.
The stone doesn't do anything. Nothing at all.

We know you wouldn't do that, it isn't cruel enough to your character. Giving her powers and a connection to an unknown past, now that fits more.

Leaving her obsessing over a stone that causes her to live in a fantasy world isn't cruel?
Wow, I must be really vicious if I can top that.

Sir Lee wrote: I'm a bit confused by the usage of "ordered" in Wyverntamer's tale.

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Is that Pepper and Monterey?? I guess Pepper's ESP would let her know Sabawaelnu's real emotions...

Tink! Curiosity nearly killed the Butterfly there...

Domoviye wrote:

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Is that Pepper and Monterey?? I guess Pepper's ESP would let her know Sabawaelnu's real emotions...

Tink! Curiosity nearly killed the Butterfly there...

The twins are totally different from Pepper and Monterey. They just really don't like the superhero for personal reasons.

NeoMagus wrote:

Domoviye wrote:

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Is that Pepper and Monterey?? I guess Pepper's ESP would let her know Sabawaelnu's real emotions...

Tink! Curiosity nearly killed the Butterfly there...

The twins are totally different from Pepper and Monterey. They just really don't like the superhero for personal reasons.

Can we get an "Understatement of the Century" award over here please?

Malady wrote: @Domoviye - Is that Pepper and Monterey?? I guess Pepper's ESP would let her know Sabawaelnu's real emotions...

Tink! Curiosity nearly killed the Butterfly there...

Wyverntamer wrote:

Sir Lee wrote: I'm a bit confused by the usage of "ordered" in Wyverntamer's tale.

I am good at writing origins for characters and the like, and this is a character I have had in the back of my mind for a while, but I couldn't figure out in what kind of universe a character that was forced to crossdress would fit in. That's why this character is here.

In WU, she would be rated a devisor, and the use of "ordered" is something that she made, she added an order machine into her room that can produce small items and can be used to efficiently store stuff, she calls it an order terminal because it looks like one, so naturally, you order stuff from it.