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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Malady wrote: ^ - Still one Link to "?" from Absinthe 2...
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So, "Team Awesome" or "Team Awesome!"?
The former has 4 links, the latter has 3.
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So, I guess you guys are happy about my gap pages:
* 1975-12-18
* 1975-12-19
Gonna make a page for " 1995-03 " as my idea on what flashback-only months could be like.
Oh... " 1975-12 " is a thing... Hmm... Still gonna make my version in 1995-03, and then you can decide which is better.
Capping off the ends of date sequences like in 1975 and 1995 isn't a priority, though...
And dunno what to put in "See Also", either. TTYL!
I'll see if I can find the sucker. (The question mark). maybe that ought to be another superhero name, like the Asterisk.
I think I looked at them and didn't have an opinion. I wasn't intending to use them.
I've got an idea for month pages: make them look like a calendar. That would put the whole thing on one screen and probably be a lot easier to navigate rather than the list format we've got now. I may experiment some this afternoon to see how it looks.
- Sir Lee
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As for Team Awesome!, I like the name better with the bang. It's the sort of thing that kids would do, I guess. If there's canon evidence for the bang being integral to the name (as in Evolution Rocks! and Humanity First!), that's what it should be. With an appropriate redirect for the variant spelling, of course.
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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In "The Garden of Good and Evil", two of the references to Team Awesome! have the exclamation marks, one doesn't and the category name doesn't.
- Malady
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Now, if only... Oh... I wonder if "If Statements" can detect if a page exists and activate / deactivate links for dates based on that?
Possibly...
There's ifexist ... But it might trigger Wanted Pages anyway, so that's possibly pointless?
But, could present a message like: "No Story has scenes for the next day".
- Sir Lee
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Yeah, I would say that those occurrences in S&S are pretty clear: there should be an exclamation mark. Team Awesome! includes Miranda, therefore it falls in JG's bailiwick. A JG story with the exclamation mark is pretty solid evidence pro-bang. I'll look into standardizing it in the wiki.
- Malady
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But "Eisenmadel I" redlinks have also started popping up...
Maybe I'll get into making character pages for the brief mentions / appearances...
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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How does it look?
I think I got the last couple of question marks yesterday.
- Malady
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On the calendar, Portrait is getting me the Year column, and months from January to May.
Landscape gets January to October.
It might be better to give years' their own pages, and use lists for that.
The calendar for months likely won't work in portrait on my phone either... But I'm wrong, it does work! Weird. I thought it'd be too long...
... So, for the yearly calendars, it might be that "2007" and other 4 digit year enumerations makes it only hold 6 rows?
- null0trooper
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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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The thing that concerns me is whether someone using it might lose orientation and click on the wrong box.
Will this work on a phone in landscape mode now?
- Malady
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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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- Malady
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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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I might try doubling up the rows next.
- elrodw
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At times, it's tough for us authors to keep straight who did what when, especially when our stories are not being developed and released on the same timeline, so we always have to search and dig to find out how to weave the different POV stories together. Sometimes, I've been at the point that I would have paid to have it all neatly documented. (if I won a lottery, I WOULD pay someone to do it). In any event, everything the volunteers do to document things helps more than you suspect.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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elrodw wrote: It's gonna be a hell of an effort to get through all the stories and finding the dates and noting what happened when.
At times, it's tough for us authors to keep straight who did what when, especially when our stories are not being developed and released on the same timeline, so we always have to search and dig to find out how to weave the different POV stories together. Sometimes, I've been at the point that I would have paid to have it all neatly documented. (if I won a lottery, I WOULD pay someone to do it). In any event, everything the volunteers do to document things helps more than you suspect.
In case you were responding to my comment about removing the dates: that applied to some work I'm doing to make the timeline indexes look prettier. You'll notice that the gen1 month indexes almost all have calendar format instead of list format, for example. I'm trying to do the same thing to the year index (the page that's linked from the front page), and the table was too wide to fit properly on a phone, even in landscape mode. I was trying to shrink the width by removing the dates from the cells.
There are, by the way, over a thousand wanted pages. More hands are urgently needed.
As far as getting the timeline into shape: I only recently returned to working on it, and I'm estimating that it may take at least two years to get all the stories documented and into the timeline. Assuming I live that long (not guaranteed at this point) and that my interest in working on it continues. More hands would make the work go faster.
One consideration: when I dropped out a few years ago, it felt like a weight had rolled off my back. I was only able to get back to work on it by making an agreement with myself that I wouldn't force myself to reread for summarization any story that really set wrong. I've already encountered one.
- Malady
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@Sir Lee - Do you have a copy of Silver Linings Chapter 2 Part 2 to 9, but with notes on where each part stops and starts?
Presuming the references from places like "Quinn Seabury" are accurate, then some bits can already be figured out...
- Sir Lee
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My personal reading copy of stuff might not be 100% faithful to the original -- I tend to do minor editing on stuff that annoys me. But I'm a bit OCD in spots, so I might have kept the original breakpoints as HTML comments inside it. I have to check. It's highly unlikely to include posting dates, however. Let me see...
...OK, no posting dates, but the stories are structured roughly in this way:
- Silver Linings
-- Part 1 (2006-04-11)
-- Part 2 (2006-08-20)
-- Part 3 (2006-10-08)
-- Part 4 (2006-10-17)
-- Part 5 (Begins with the sentence "As the bizarre man sneered"
-- Silver Linings Chapter 2 (2006-11-01)
-- Enter the Madcap (2006-11-09)
-- 3 (2006-11-16)
-- 4 (2006-11-21)
-- 5 (2006-11-22 -- the second 22nd, the one that begins with Stacy getting out of bed and doing exercises)
-- 6 (2006-11-26)
I have no idea why the chapter count in the Wiki goes up to 9; I THINK that whoever did the numbering considered each forum post as a separate chapter, but I chose to consider two consecutive posts in the same day as a single chapter too long to fit in one forum message.
If I had my druthers, I would consider anything from "Enter the Madcap" onwards as a separate story (to be named "Silver Linings 2: Enter the Madcap"), and rename "Chapter 2" as "Part 6". But it's not my decision to make. Also, if Bek were willing to allow for that revision, I would ask for her to have a look at the two November 22nds problem.
- Malady
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Like Pike's.
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Note to self. Mrs. Kelling seems to be 1.2, not 1.1...
- Sir Lee
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- Malady
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'Cause that would cut down on wanted pages... So we can just point Angloswen to Absinthe, etc.
I assume that all the Wickhams, such as Belinda Wickham , link to their section of Wickham family ...
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In other thoughts, what should the common ref-name be for "Murphy's Laws Of Whateley"? And is the "Of" capitalized or not? It's got one use with capitals, one without. The story itself has one for the page name, one for the story itself.
I need that reference for Albert Dietrich being "Wulfin the Purifier"'s minion... And Dietrich's own page... At least he's only mentioned in two stories... Murphy's Laws of Whateley, and Blood Siblings.
Oh, could just use "Murphy#"... Oh, it already is used for refs, just under the other name.
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Who is the Phobos's twins' father? .... I guess that was in Blood-Sister, Blood-Brother... I really should get around to using my Story Samples, instead of crafting minor characters...
- Sir Lee
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As for the capitalization... since canon is ambiguous, I would go with what most style manuals recommend and have a lowercase "of"
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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This is the first character page I've done since I got back, so can someone take a look at it and tell me what needs fixing? Especially categories, which I'm not clear on for character pages.
- Malady
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Categories are usually shared between similar people, so their similarities are noted.
So, I put T-rex in the Heroes, Faculty, and Warper categories, since he's a Hero that became a teacher at Whateley, and has Warper powers.
Maybe stick how he doesn't like Imp, somewhere.
And The pages that link to "Roland Williams" should likely have links back.
In other news, I seem to have triggered a Spam Protection, "r in the (Block #370783)" on "Claudia Banacrof" when changing:
She's mentioned exactly once.
She's mentioned exactly once, by [[Father Pete]]:
What do we call the people of the Royan Marches, from "Tennyo's Easter"? I'd like to call them something beyond:
"humanoid aliens, as indicated by Tennyo's narration saying:"
"There were a few slight differences that made them seem just a bit alien but if she hadn’t been looking for it they could probably walk down any street on earth and not draw too much attention."
But I think that's the best we'll get, on their species.
* Should that new group be called "The Triangle", instead of just "Triangle"? It seems most uses give them the article, and possibly the only lack is when Ribbon says "those Triangle assholes" in Ribbon 2...
* "Reilley" should probably be moved to Mr. Reilley? ... Not gonna mess around with Jade 1 related pages until that's concluded. Less edits that way.
* "Crippler" maybe go to "The Crippler"? It's got the definite article in "Father John's Basement", but not in "Saks and Violence", the latter which needs to mention him or her... And they fought PowerJack... as said in the latter.
* "Greg Goodkind" to "Grace Goodkind"?
* Strongarm mentioned in "Father John's Basement" is the same one from "Diamonds Are a Vamp's Best Friend: Part 4"?
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Oh~! Here's my copy of Silver Linings 2! Just turn that txt back into an html!
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I gotta figure out when the Astro-Witch's staff starts appearing in Silver Linings...
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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I was working on Phase 1, and converted July and August 2006 to calendar format, but the links aren't working. The day page to day page links are working fine, though, for the exact same dates.
I hope it's just a transient.
- Malady
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Maybe we need to hard refresh, stored up too much cache?
Ctrl+F5. ... EDIT: Yep, that seems to have worked?
- Malady
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Maybe link to Wikipedia for the person, but make a page for the concept of Agrippas? Which are mentioned in "VEGAS, BABY, VEGAS! Part 6" and "Silent Nacht Chapter 2"?
Silver Linings:
This book is what’s called an ‘Agrippa’, which is a hideous slander on the good name of Heinrich Agrippa, a German occultist. An Agrippa isn’t a Grimoire, which is just a book of spells and occult lore. An Agrippa is a minor demon bound into the shape of a book. Besides occult lore, Agrippas give their owners infernal power to work their magic.
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Also, from Silver Linings 1.3... is Arascham in "Gold Star loves Arascham" supposed to be "Aracham", of "IG Aracham"?
- Sir Lee
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Even if there is something unique (for instance, named characters who are part of the institution, or some incident in which they played a role), focus our page on those unique aspects, leaving the real-world extensive description to the Wikipedia or other relevant external source. Look at the FBI, DARPA and other government pages for examples.
In the example you cited, I agree with the approach you proposed: new page for Agrippa (as in the type of book), external link for Heinrich Agrippa.
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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The reason I'm asking is that I've started doing something that's been on my "should do" list for a while: putting references to the stories in the character pages.
- Malady
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Main, Side Character-ness, and Mentions as well.
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Appearances is for when they actually do something on-screen, so more like "Personal History" or something?
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Appearance and General Description are usually synonymous? ... Maybe use Auto-Sir Lee to standardize?
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You can change the Sample if you think of something good.
- null0trooper
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Malady wrote: Appearance and General Description are usually synonymous? ... Maybe use Auto-Sir Lee to standardize?
FWIW, I see them as:
Appearance: What does the character look like.
General Description: Whatever else identifies the character (voice, accent, attitude, nervous habits, clothing/vehicle preferences, etc.) I recall a non-WU story in which the fact that one character always wore Shalimar was a clue/point for recognition.
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General Description talks about the kind of clothes they are likely to wear, their attitude to life (Peace? PEACE? I HATE the word! As I hate Hell, all Montagues...and thee!) and how the character is portrayed. Make sense?
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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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E. E. Nalley wrote: There is some overlap, but the idea was that we used them so that the characters would act the same across appearances, even by different authors. For example, let's take John Leguizamo's Tybalt from Romeo + Juliet. Appearance would be how tall, skin color, the greasy hair cut with those sharply defined side burns and the soul patch beard.
General Description talks about the kind of clothes they are likely to wear, their attitude to life (Peace? PEACE? I HATE the word! As I hate Hell, all Montagues...and thee!) and how the character is portrayed. Make sense?
In other words, appearance is for quick recognition: for example, Ribbon looks like a 9 or 10 year old girl with long white hair and wearing a "goth Lolita" outfit. General Description is the rest of the characterization, including characteristic phrases: "Pardon my French" and "If wishes were horses, we'd all be wearing hip waders."
That makes a good deal of sense.
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Malady wrote: Stories, I just use for gathering any reference to the character.
Main, Side Character-ness, and Mentions as well.
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Appearances is for when they actually do something on-screen, so more like "Personal History" or something?
On-screen, at least to me, means anything other than Mentions. I don't see a difference then between Appearances and Stories except that Stories has a Mentions subsection and it's got a hide/reveal option.
- Malady
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:
Malady wrote: Stories, I just use for gathering any reference to the character.
Main, Side Character-ness, and Mentions as well.
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Appearances is for when they actually do something on-screen, so more like "Personal History" or something?
On-screen, at least to me, means anything other than Mentions. I don't see a difference then between Appearances and Stories except that Stories has a Mentions subsection and it's got a hide/reveal option.
True, Stories should be scrapped since Appearances and Mentions together, would work just as well...
But, if you wanna literally find a story by who appeared in it, there's nothing better...
TTYL. Gonna try and get us to 3500 pages by night's end, mainly through Silver Linings low hanging fruit.
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Made "Mr. Weatherbee" go to Wikipedia, since I think that's a shout out?
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Made "Agrippa", but nothing links to it...
- Sir Lee
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- Malady
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- null0trooper
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Malady wrote: Is there any source for Gadget and Mega-Death's combat final being December 21, 2006, instead of the day before, the latter which comes from Hive's Christmas Holiday ?
Hive's Christmas Holiday has the final on Dec. 21, 2006, after Sam wakes up with a hangover from drinking with Curly on the 20th.
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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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I suppose I could make a guess because it's got internal "Day 1," etc. notes, if I knew when school ended for Summer Vacation.
Where do I put the link in the story indices?
- Malady
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To pin down the start of summer vacation, I'd look through the summer stories and see when they start vacationing, and pick the earliest date.
June 10th 2007, as the first day of summer vacation, perhaps? From One Woe Doth Tread Upon Another's Heel ? 'Cause that's the day that Hank leaves Whateley for home?
- null0trooper
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Here's a weird one. Blood-Sister, Blood-Brother is in continuity, but it's undated. It occurs during summer vacation 2007, but that's as close as it can be dated.
I suppose I could make a guess because it's got internal "Day 1," etc. notes, if I knew when school ended for Summer Vacation.
Commencement was Saturday, June 9, 2007. (Pomp and Conspiracy)
Tansy, Lanie, and Kayda were out on their road trip Monday, June 11, 2007 (The Boys of Summer, Part 1) That should also be the first official day of Summer Break.
“She’s stopped talking, eating. She stopped talking three days after she returned home."
Fly out to Washington on the 10th, shutdown from the empathic version of sensory deprivation by the 13th,
five days of no bathing to clean up for could put day 1 around the 18th or 19th.
(Blood-Brother, Blood-Sister)Telekinesis was difficult for some, but hardly a brain-breaker. She’d personally worked with Caitlin on her techniques over the first weeks of summer and found the girl to be brutally ineffective at gross manipulations such as creating fire, or lifting objects.
Underclassmen combat finals were over by June 2 (Odds and Ends). A couple of weeks work takes us maybe to the 16th, give or take.
40 days from the 18th takes us to July 28th. (Blood-Brother, Blood-Sister)
Caitlin's been working a straight week at her forge on August 27th, after a month of preparation (Siblings and Savages) pulling her back in to work at Whateley maybe July 23. Note that Hartford's at her desk, and a teleporter was used for transit,
Kick Day 1 back to June 13, 2007, make the skipped baths start with her travel date and fly Dimes out on the 9th because she has NO mental reserves, and we're good.
Start date: June 13, 2007
End date: July 23, 2007

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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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I'll see if I can make it work.
Thanks again.
Edit: I just put it against the calendar. If I assume Janine left on the 9th and the Outcasts arrived on the 14th, then Day 40 is July 23. We can probably overlap ordinance and weapons delivery with prep time since Caitlin doesn't sleep, so that fits. Barely. I can shove things down a couple more days by assuming that the "month" of prep time was closer to three weeks, which isn't all that unlikely given the wiggle room people usually leave in phrases like "a month."
So I'll make it June 16 to July 26. That makes the prep time two days short of a 4-week month.
Thanks again.
Edit 2: I'm going to have to back it up at least two days. I just discovered that Carson offered the Imp the job on June 30, so the scene on Day 16 can take place no later than June 29. At least the 30th is a Saturday, which gives a break from the reconstruction being done on Poe and Hawthorn. So it's now June 14 to July 24.
Thanks again.
- Sir Lee
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a) Rename the current "Firefly" to "Roland Atley", since he no longer uses the codename actively.
b) Fix the original links so they go directly to "Roland Atley" instead of through a redirect
c) Turn the redirect into a "Firefly" page for the student, and add a hatnote to it linking to "Roland Atley."
I can easily do A and B. C is the job of whoever is working on a page for the student.
EDIT: OK, phases A and B are done.
- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Sir Lee
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But disambiguations are inherently kludgy, because they add another step into the visitor's navigation. Whenever the situation is such as the current one with "Firefly", with only two claimants and there is clearly one that has a better claim, a hatnote is probably enough.
One reason why Wikipedia uses so many disambigutions is because, due to the size of their database, they had to disable autofill for links. So the editor has to know beforehand the exact name of the page they are trying to link to, and they end up using the most generic link they can conceive. Which more often than not goes to a redirect. With autofill, it's much easier: type "[[Champ" and the editor will offer all the possibilities, if any.
- Malady
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Just realized we've got at least a few Darcies.
* The member of the Trix, in Dr. Macabre's Monsters , whose real name is apparently actually Darcy...
* Darcy Blake, Noah Blake's sister, the Junior High Supergirl of the constantly shifting codename.
* Adrian Darcy (Vamp's bio-dad?)
* Father Peter Darcy of the Church.
* Sizzle (Darcy Dreyer)
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- Katssun
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Malady wrote: Made the Firefly page.
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Just realized we've got at least a few Darcies.
* The member of the Trix, in Dr. Macabre's Monsters , whose real name is apparently actually Darcy...
* The Junior High Girl of the constantly shifting codename
* Adrian Darcy (Vamp's bio-dad?)
* Father Peter Darcy of the Church.
* Sizzle (Darcy Dreyer)
There is a Gen 2 Darcy as well.
Per Wasamon in the Dorms 4, dramatis personae thread:
Darcy Blake - first canon appearance in Myriad Meetings. Souffle Girl original character. Noah's little sister. Enthusiastic mini-supergirl with codename indecision.
- Malady
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Katssun wrote:
Malady wrote: Made the Firefly page.
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Just realized we've got at least a few Darcies.
* The member of the Trix, in Dr. Macabre's Monsters , whose real name is apparently actually Darcy...
* The Junior High Girl of the constantly shifting codename
* Adrian Darcy (Vamp's bio-dad?)
* Father Peter Darcy of the Church.
* Sizzle (Darcy Dreyer)
There is a Gen 2 Darcy as well.
Per Wasamon in the Dorms 4, dramatis personae thread:
Darcy Blake - first canon appearance in Myriad Meetings. Souffle Girl original character. Noah's little sister. Enthusiastic mini-supergirl with codename indecision.
OH! That's the JH girl's last name! Thank you!
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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I noticed the edit to 2016-08-28. I'm going to change it back because I did it deliberately. That's how I'm handling a sequence that goes through several locations. Giving them separate location headings suggests (to me, at least) that they're separate events that don't relate to each other. That's the usual case, of course.
This may not be the best way of handling it, and I'm certainly open to suggestions, but all the ways I've come up with are ... sub-optimal, in my opinion. suggestions welcome.
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- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Anyone have suggestions?
Edit: One possibility that occurs to me is to put miscellaneous month pages in a separate table, three or four per row, and only create a year row when there are several months. Put that below the main year table (there are only four rows, and there are not likely to be more than another couple of rows in the next few years).
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Many of these are for people who have a single mention in one story, and don't appear anywhere else. There's not only nothing interesting to put in a character page, the likelihood that there will ever be anything else to put in a character page is indistinguishable from zero.
One possible idea to handle them: we stick them into alphabet pages. That is, all minor characters whose name begins with "A" goes into, for example, page char-a. However, this has the disadvantage that it would eliminate the ability to use the "links-to" facility, since we'd get all pages with a character whose name begins with A.
- null0trooper
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: As long as I'm here. I've noticed that there are over a thousand wanted pages. I have no idea how many over a thousand: the wanted page list quits at a thousand.
Many of these are for people who have a single mention in one story, and don't appear anywhere else. There's not only nothing interesting to put in a character page, the likelihood that there will ever be anything else to put in a character page is indistinguishable from zero.
They could still be of use when a writer needs a list of people appearing in Story X or Location Y, including the extras (They do sometimes get promoted)
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: One possible idea to handle them: we stick them into alphabet pages. That is, all minor characters whose name begins with "A" goes into, for example, page char-a. However, this has the disadvantage that it would eliminate the ability to use the "links-to" facility, since we'd get all pages with a character whose name begins with A.
Page extra-char-a ?
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null0trooper wrote:
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: As long as I'm here. I've noticed that there are over a thousand wanted pages. I have no idea how many over a thousand: the wanted page list quits at a thousand.
Many of these are for people who have a single mention in one story, and don't appear anywhere else. There's not only nothing interesting to put in a character page, the likelihood that there will ever be anything else to put in a character page is indistinguishable from zero.
They could still be of use when a writer needs a list of people appearing in Story X or Location Y, including the extras (They do sometimes get promoted)
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: One possible idea to handle them: we stick them into alphabet pages. That is, all minor characters whose name begins with "A" goes into, for example, page char-a. However, this has the disadvantage that it would eliminate the ability to use the "links-to" facility, since we'd get all pages with a character whose name begins with A.
Page extra-char-a ?
Many of the stories do seem to have all the extras listed in the character section, although many don't. I've been adding some comments on each character, but most stories don't have that.
Location pages are an interesting idea. It certainly could be useful, I keep track of it in the timeline date pages, but those are summaries that don't necessarily mention all spear-carriers. My impression is that there aren't a lot of location pages.
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- MageOhki
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You guys are doing a thankless, endless task and doing it as well as it can be done. Thanks at least from me.
- Malady
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And at least to me, we get thanked frequently enough that it doesn't feel thankless!
Thanks!
- Sir Lee
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Done!Malady wrote: "2007-08A" can be deleted now, as it's not needed to handle wrong links now.
- Sir Lee
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There are quite a few off-main-timeline stories yet to be added. Some of them fall in the period between Gen1 and Gen2 -- Would the Last One Out Please Turn out the Lights, The Hand You're Dealt, Islands in the Sun (ok, this one is already there), flashback scenes in the Loophole/Wicked Gen2 stories, Tears and Fears, Rises the Sun... and this time period will tend to get more and more explored as time goes by. Which would make the "off-timeline" section less and less understandable as it grows.
I would suggest, as a rule of thumb, that as soon as any year has a set number of month pages, it gets moved to the main timeline table. Personally, I would go with two.
Alternately, we could use a number of stories rule -- as long as there is only one story linking to that particular year, it can stay in the "special cases" section; if there are two or more stories using that year, it gets moved to the main table.
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Sir Lee wrote: Xalt, I did some minor revision to the text in the timeline master index, so the visitor can understand what your are doing. But in doing that, a thing struck me:
There are quite a few off-main-timeline stories yet to be added. Some of them fall in the period between Gen1 and Gen2 -- Would the Last One Out Please Turn out the Lights, The Hand You're Dealt, Islands in the Sun (ok, this one is already there), flashback scenes in the Loophole/Wicked Gen2 stories, Tears and Fears, Rises the Sun... and this time period will tend to get more and more explored as time goes by. Which would make the "off-timeline" section less and less understandable as it grows.
I would suggest, as a rule of thumb, that as soon as any year has a set number of month pages, it gets moved to the main timeline table. Personally, I would go with two.
Alternately, we could use a number of stories rule -- as long as there is only one story linking to that particular year, it can stay in the "special cases" section; if there are two or more stories using that year, it gets moved to the main table.
Thanks for organizing the master index.
Yeah, I've been trying to balance a number of concerns: not polluting the "wanted pages" list with unused month pages; keeping the two tables small enough to be manageable; making navigation on the main year table easier. The latter could be a problem because the years are over on the side where it's easy to lose orientation while the cursor is skating along.
So I think I'm going to suggest YAGNI (You Aren't Going to Need It - from Extreme Programming), and simply revisit the idea when the special cases table starts getting unmanageably large.
Part of the navigation issue is that I was trying to squeeze the main table so it would be visible on a phone, at least in landscape mode. Didn't quite make it. The navigation issue can also be revisited when I starts to bite.
I expect we'll need the 2008 row sometime in the next couple of months.
- Malady
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I'm looking through all the pages that start with The :
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So, " The Occultist ", should be moved to just "Occultist"? The latter is Wanted, and a redlink, right now.
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Then, we have both " The Keeper ", and " Keeper "...
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The Sphincter took a step back, gasping as though I’d just hit him. “No… I am the mysterious…the awesome…the incredible…”
“The long winded,” I added cheerfully.
“Asterisk,” he finished, giving a sweeping bow.
Not much available on The Chaldean.
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Anyone around who is a grammar geek?
OK, I copied the ones who are characters (or similar -- consider The Tao) from that page. Here is the list:
The Bastard
The Chaldean
The Don
The Green Ghost
The Keeper
The Kodiak
The Mamba
The Man Called Vengeance
The Necromancer
The Occultist
The Palm
The Peddler
The Purifier
The Specter
The Tao
I would say that "The Don" and "The Man Called Vengeance" should keep the "The", because, well, it's quite likely that they made a point of including the article in their official MIDs -- The Don because without it it sounds like the nickname for a cartoon duck, and The Man Called Vengeance makes a point of demanding that people use the full name.
There's a possible disambiguation usage -- "Kodiak" (the student) and "The Kodiak" (the spirit) are the poster boys for this usage. Generally speaking, most of the cases of "The" in the wiki are for cases where you wanted to drive home the point that this is a specific character, instead of "a" {class of people}. Therefore, THE Necromancer, THE Occultist, THE Bastard, THE Peddler, THE Specter (as opposed to "a" necromancer, "an" occultist, "a" bastard, "a" peddler" or "a" specter).
I don't think there's much justification for keeping the definite article for The Chaldean (really, how many people from Chaldea are there walking around?), The Green Ghost or The Mamba.
Still, quite a few edge cases.
The Palm? Considering that there's an in-universe usage for "a" Palm, maybe it's justified. Or maybe it's just incorrect?
The Keeper? We don't know that much about him/her...
The Purifier? It's a redirect to Wulfin the Purifier, so I guess it's OK.
The Tao? Maybe to make it clear that we are talking about the entity, not the religion.
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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In the list above, while I could quibble about a number of the items, the only one I'd say to leave the definite article out is Green Ghost, unless the stories specify it as the correct usage.
In a side issue, I'll note that they use Longman's Student Dictionary. That has one interesting feature which the half dozen or so other language learner dictionaries don't: the defining vocabulary has an on-line resource that builds vocabulary from the ground up, starting with cartoons for the 65 semantic primes (that is, words that have the exact same meanings in all analyzed languages). That's at learnthesewordsfirst.com
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Sir Lee wrote: I don't think there's much justification for keeping the definite article for The Chaldean (really, how many people from Chaldea are there walking around?),
Some of his contemporaries are still alive and interacting with people. Of these various immortals, he's the Chaldean one.
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The '''Darkling Horde''' is supervillainous, and is presumably a group of things called Darklings, . They are connected in some way to a "Horrid Horn" that the [[Purple Witch]] re-powered during her fight at the Cincinnati supervillain power item collectors' convention on [[2006-11-08|November 28th 2006]].<ref name="silver2.2">[[Silver Linings##Chapter 2.2 to 2.9|''Silver Linings: Chapter 2, Parts 2 to 9'']]</ref>
==References==
{{Reflist}}
- Malady
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Now I gotta fix that, after my computer resets...
Although, should it actually be, "Naishinno Kako" as the main one, and "Kako Naishinno" as a redirect, or are we going by Western Order always?
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Malady wrote: Although, should it actually be, "Naishinno Kako" as the main one, and "Kako Naishinno" as a redirect, or are we going by Western Order always?
Kasai Tetsuko is listed in "Japanese name order" and Wong Ah Lam in "Chinese name order", but the evil old guy is listed as Tatsuo Ito.
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I suspect we're going to need to simply pick one, stick to it and specify which we're using in the character pages and sections.
Since Tatsuo Ito is probably the most referenced by a wide margin, I suspect we're going to be stuck with Western name order.
Sigh.
- Sir Lee
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Yeah, I know, as far as standardization goes it's crap. But I prefer to have the wiki adapt to the characters rather than force the characters into the wiki mold.
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Anyway, Hikaru has a code name, so that's the obvious main page. If I understand, there should then be two redirects: one for Hikaru Myoujin and one for Myoujin Hikaru? Although the latter may turn out to be a disambiguation page since there are two Myoujin's in the story (Hikaru's great-grandfather).
- Sir Lee
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"Myoujin Hikaru" wouldn't be a disambiguation because her grandfather is named Ichiro.
(EDIT: I went ahead and created a few redirects and clarified the name order in a few entries)
- MageOhki
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Oh, for more humor.
Kako can also be Yamoto Kako, Princess Kako, do you want me to go on? (I hear the cries already...)
- Sir Lee
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- Malady
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We've / I've got to replace all "Carlisle" with "Carlyle"... Done. And the former only appears in the Advancer series...
And what to do about Reinforce / Adam Carlyle? Is it a spoiler that he's Reinforce? Should his real name redirect to Reinforce?
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Now I gotta refresh on what we said about stories with names like "Glyph 3: Ink in Her Veins"...
Going from the Imp stories, we do keep the character's name...
But, we actually haven't decided... It's just that no changes have been made... It's basically "Maker Decides". ... Well, we can keep putting it off... Don't like that, but not really urgent as of yet...?
- Sir Lee
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Regarding Adam/Reinforce: I don't think it's much of a spoiler, no. He's a minor character in Gen1, but he's the brother of a known mutant, so the likelihood that he will activate is rather high. I did add a redirect from "Adam Carlyle" to "Reinforce," but I think that in this particular case we shouldn't edit the Gen1-related pages to point directly to "Reinforce" -- instead, let them route through the redirect.Two reasons:
1. It makes it easier to tell apart the pages that refer to the Gen1 kid from the ones who refer to the Gen2 mutant teen if, for instance, we want to do some wholesale edit to one set but not to the other.
2. It only acts as a spoiler if the visitor actually clicks on the link; mouse-hovering does not give away the codename.
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crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Fall_2016_Student_List
The first appearance of the Bohemians leadership in Gen 2 is IDTWIKA, Part 5.
All live in Melville, as far as we've been shown, but we'll need some clarification from Wasamon or Souffle Girl on the spellings here.
Karel Lorenc (IDTWIKA 5) or Lorencz (Dorms of Our Lives 4). M
Jane (IDTWIKA 5) or Janet (Dorms 4) Chorley - Knock-Out
Melisande (IDTWIKA 5) or Melanie (Dorms 4) Shinall - Glam
Not sure what cottage:
Jenifer Chalmers - Scarlyt, officially named in Dorms 4, Part 5.
- Malady
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Can we just scrub those redlinks?
- Sir Lee
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Categories wanted might be categories that we are already using but haven't got around to add a description to the page yet.
- Malady
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Are they sufficiently similar in the lack of information, for "Ruby" as a disambig?
- null0trooper
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Malady wrote: Found another "Ruby"... We've got "Ruby (Scale?)", Sapphire's sister, and "Ruby (Rascomb?)" connected to "Ted Rascomb"...
Are they sufficiently similar in the lack of information, for "Ruby" as a disambig?
Probably? Only Ruby Scale gets an appearance.
There's also Dolores Gardner (code name "Ruby Boots") working as the Wichita Warriors in "Eisenmadel: Summer of My German Heritage"
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That ring any bells? @XaltatunOfAcheron, since you added it?
'''Alisaundra Hunter'''<ref name="SS1.1">''[[Siblings and Savages#Chapter 1|Siblings and Savages: Chapter 1]]''</ref>, codenamed '''Adore''', is a [[Hawthorne Cottage]] resident of the class of 2011, and started off as male, as revealed by being part of the TG tour hosted by [[Eldritch]], [[Diamondback]], [[Razorback]], and [[Anomaly]].<ref name="YAD">''[[Yet Another Day as an Outcast]]''</ref>
She gives her manifestation as
: manifested while playing host to a succubus, so now not only did my BIT imprint her, all of my powers are rigged to force people to pay attention to me<ref name="SS1.1">''[[Siblings and Savages#Chapter 1|Siblings and Savages: Chapter 1]]''</ref>
But, [[Outcast Corner]] think there's more to the story.
==Stories==
<div class="mw-collapsible mw-collapsed">
===Main Character===
===Appearances===
* [[Yet Another Day as an Outcast]]
* [[Siblings and Savages]]
** [[Siblings and Savages#Chapter 1|Chapter 1]]
** [[Siblings and Savages#Chapter 2|Chapter 2]]
* [[A Little R&R]]
* [[A Little R&R 2]]
* [[A Little R&R 3]]
===Mentions===
* [[Siblings and Savages#Chapter 3|Chapter 3]]
</div>
==Personal Description==
: [she] looked like someone’s cheesecake depiction of a succubus brought into the real world. Red, curly hair fell down her body like a cloak to her hips, and she had a figure that stopped just shy of pornstar while being completely natural. Her eyes were slitted in reptilian fashion, colored green, and she had a pair of gazelle-like horns erupting from her forehead which followed straight back along her head to end almost six inches behind her skull.<ref name="SS1.1"/>
==Powers==
: The girl was Darwin’s grab bag of Siren and mind-bending psychic-ish and biological response triggers that would get anyone with a libido nearby feeling like they were sucking on the frayed end of a power cable<ref name="SS1.1"/>
* [[Siren]]<ref name="SS1.1"/>
==References==
{{Reflist}}
[[Category:Gender-complicated]]
[[Category:Siren]]
[[Category:GSD]]
[[Category:Hawthorne Cottage]]
[[Category:Class of 2011]]
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- Sir Lee
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1- Heaven and Hell: The Recruiter (Maggie Finson)
2- The Ways of Power (Maggie)
3- Angelique - A (Hell) Maid's Work is Never Done (Maggie)
4- Balancing Act (Maggie)
5- Third Party Hardy (Bek D. Corbin)
6- Joy to the World (Bek)
7- Rebecca's Tale (E.E. Nalley)
8- Wedding of the Century (E.E.)
9- Lilith's Ransom (Maggie)
10- Tails of Shadow (Starwolf, unfinished story)
11- Lucifer's Daughter (Dr. Bender)
12- There's Always Hope (Hope Eternal Reigns) (personally, I didn't like this one very much)
Most of those should be available on Sapphire's, if they aren't available here. Some of them might be found in BigCloset or Fictionmania too.
On a completely separate note, expect a lessened level of contributions on my part over the next couple weeks. Holidays with the family, and stuff. I should be able to touch base daily or almost so, but not actually _do_ as much as usual -- I didn't bring my own computer (I don't own a laptop, I find them very uncomfortable for daily use and I don't travel enough to justify the expense of a second computer) so I'm sharing one here. But yes, I did bring AutoWikiBrowser (the wiki 'bot) in my portable drive, so I probably can do wholesale changes if requested. On the plus side, maybe I'll manage to finish the beta-reading I promised to a writer (I have it in my phone, in an annotation-capable program).
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Sir Lee wrote: Which ones aren't in the Library? To the best of my knowledge, there are 12 Heaven & Hell stories:
1- Heaven and Hell: The Recruiter (Maggie Finson)
2- The Ways of Power (Maggie)
3- Angelique - A (Hell) Maid's Work is Never Done (Maggie)
4- Balancing Act (Maggie)
5- Third Party Hardy (Bek D. Corbin)
6- Joy to the World (Bek)
7- Rebecca's Tale (E.E. Nalley)
8- Wedding of the Century (E.E.)
9- Lilith's Ransom (Maggie)
10- Tails of Shadow (Starwolf, unfinished story)
11- Lucifer's Story (Dr. Bender)
12- There's Always Hope (Hope Eternal Reigns) (personally, I didn't like this one very much)
Most of those should be available on Sapphire's, if they aren't available here. Some of them might be found in BigCloset or Fictionmania too.
There are only six in the library: 1-4, Lilith's Ransom and Lucifer's Daughter, which I presume is # 11. In other words, all of Maggie's and Dr, Bender's. Bek, Starwolf, EE and whoever wrote the last one either haven't chosen to put them in the library, or haven't gotten around to it. And I haven't heard of two of them (10 and 12)..
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:
Sir Lee wrote: Which ones aren't in the Library? To the best of my knowledge, there are 12 Heaven & Hell stories:
1- Heaven and Hell: The Recruiter (Maggie Finson)
2- The Ways of Power (Maggie)
3- Angelique - A (Hell) Maid's Work is Never Done (Maggie)
4- Balancing Act (Maggie)
5- Third Party Hardy (Bek D. Corbin)
6- Joy to the World (Bek)
7- Rebecca's Tale (E.E. Nalley)
8- Wedding of the Century (E.E.)
9- Lilith's Ransom (Maggie)
10- Tails of Shadow (Starwolf, unfinished story)
11- Lucifer's Story (Dr. Bender)
12- There's Always Hope (Hope Eternal Reigns) (personally, I didn't like this one very much)
Most of those should be available on Sapphire's, if they aren't available here. Some of them might be found in BigCloset or Fictionmania too.
There are only six in the library: 1-4, Lilith's Ransom and Lucifer's Daughter, which I presume is # 11. In other words, all of Maggie's and Dr, Bender's. Bek, Starwolf, EE and whoever wrote the last one either haven't chosen to put them in the library, or haven't gotten around to it. And I haven't heard of two of them (10 and 12)..
These five are linked to the stories on Sapphire's Place, on the wikia pages for the authors, and on the Links page ( crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Links )
5- Third Party Hardy (Bek D. Corbin)
6- Joy to the World (Bek)
7- Rebecca's Tale (EE)
8- Wedding of the Century (EE)
10- Tails of Shadow (Starwolf, unfinished story)
12- There's Always Hope (Hope Eternal Reigns) may only exist on the Wayback Machine: https://web.archive.org/web/20150514031902/http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/47677/heaven-and-hell-theres-always-hope
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Katssun wrote: A few updates for the Gen 2 student list:
crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Fall_2016_Student_List
The first appearance of the Bohemians leadership in Gen 2 is IDTWIKA, Part 5.
All live in Melville, as far as we've been shown, but we'll need some clarification from Wasamon or Souffle Girl on the spellings here.
Karel Lorenc (IDTWIKA 5) or Lorencz (Dorms of Our Lives 4). M
Jane (IDTWIKA 5) or Janet (Dorms 4) Chorley - Knock-Out
Melisande (IDTWIKA 5) or Melanie (Dorms 4) Shinall - Glam
Not sure what cottage:
Jenifer Chalmers - Scarlyt, officially named in Dorms 4, Part 5.
Whoops.... <_<
Let me fix that in Dorms. (i.e. use the earlier attested names)
Check this out sometime!

- Malady
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Malady wrote: Where is it shown that Adore is Gender-complicated? Or is that WoG?
She's the Hawthorne participant among the students that Mrs. Carson asked the Outcasts to show around because every other one of them had switched genders (just like Caitlin, Sandra, Jack, and Monica.)
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So, my Adore Draft seems pretty complete, anyone got anything to add?
whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/the-...wiki?start=680#61203
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Since she's with the other Gen2 froshes, can we assume Rapunzel's in the class of 2020?
'''Rapunzel''', real name unknown, is a girl with prehensile hair that "grew at a rate of several feet a day, and she had to cut it every day just to keep it at a manageable length"<ref name="Glyph3.3">''[[Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins#Part 3|Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins (Part 3)]]''</ref>. The only description we have of her, is "long light-blue hair, that was pulled into a ponytail, which hung past her butt"
==Stories==
<div class="mw-collapsible mw-collapsed">
===Main Character===
===Appearances===
* [[I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore]]:
** [[I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore#Part 6|I Don’t Think We're in Kansas Anymore: Part 6]]
* [[The Writing On the Wall]]:
** [[The Writing On the Wall#Part 2|The Writing On the Wall: Part 2]]
** [[The Writing On the Wall#Part 3|The Writing On the Wall: Part 3]]
* [[Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins]]:
** [[Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins#Part 1|Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins (Part 1)]]
** [[Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins#Part 3|Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins (Part 3)]]
===Mentions===
</div>
All of her appearances have been around Martial Arts class:
Sparred with:
* [[Dragonblade]]<ref name="Glyph3.1">''[[Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins#Part 1|Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins (Part 1)]]''</ref>
* [[Glyph]]<ref name="Glyph3.3"/>
* [[Mouse]]<ref name="Kansas 1.6">''[[I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore#Part 6|I Don’t Think We're in Kansas Anymore: Part 6]]''</ref><ref name=Glyph2.2>''[[The Writing On the Wall#Part 2|The Writing On the Wall: Part 2]]''</ref>
==References==
{{Reflist}}
[[Category:Class Unknown]]
[[Category:Unknown Cause of Powers]]
[[Category:Unknown Real Name]]
[[Category:Cottage Unknown]]
[[Category:Gen 2]]
- Malady
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Also, we have pages like "Major Burghoff" and "Mr. Layton".
- Schol-R-LEA
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- Schol-R-LEA
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Power Sense
Power Sense, also call power detection or (at the higher levels) power analysis, is the ability to sense when someone possesses superhuman abilities, and in some cases, the nature and capabilities of those abilities. The mechanics of how the power operates vary, with some people having the ability needing physical contact while others are able to use it at a distance.
It is a relatively rare powerset. It is in at least one instance associated with the Power Mimicry powerset, which can make the latter far more efficient and formidable if used effectively.
Individuals known to possess Power Sense
* The Marquis
* Assay
Does anyone have any objections or additions to this?
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
- jenny
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(Dated Stories - AY 2007-08)
It is missing these great stores I love - Envy and the Gilded Cage (Part 1,2,3) by Dr Bender
and - The Final Trump (Part 1,2,3,4,5) By Bek D Corbin and DanZilla
Plus a lot of others
I would add them if I knew how (I am bad with computers).
If some who know how could please please add these stories or some other gen 1 year 2 stories it would be the most wonderful christmas gift

Thank you

- Kristin Darken
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Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- Malady
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Adore seems basically complete...
Darkling Horde, I'm not sure on the phrasing, since we've never had groups of uniform entities that seems to have overarching goals, and not spiritual...
Rapunzel has that "Roulette 3" redlink, which makes me not want to post, but it can always be fixed later...
And I've got a Weaponeer draft I'll edit into here, tomorrow.
'''Elliot Conner''', codename '''Weaponeer''' is a [[Devisor]], according to [[Miss Violet]]<ref name=Glyph3.3>''[[Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins#Part 3|Glyph 3: Ink in her Veins: Part 3]]''</ref>. He was harassing [[Tinker]]<ref name=Glyph2.1>''[[The Writing On the Wall#Part 1|The Writing On the Wall: Part 1]]''</ref>, and was said to be hired by [[Chained Melody]] to attack [[Glyph]]
He is:
: short, about 5 foot 2 at most. He was a ginger, with unkempt and messy reddish orange hair, along with a heavy splattering of freckles on his face<ref name=Glyph2.1>''[[The Writing On the Wall#Part 1|The Writing On the Wall: Part 1]]''</ref>
==Associations==
* [[Photech]]
==References==
{{Reflist}}
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Seriously, does the Wiki have a draft feature? Where is it?
- Malady
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Go to the previous page and search for "Draft". You should find a spoiler box with Wiki code inside?
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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jenny wrote: I love that the Gen 1 year 2 page of dated stories is being updated.
(Dated Stories - AY 2007-08)
It is missing these great stores I love - Envy and the Gilded Cage (Part 1,2,3) by Dr Bender
and - The Final Trump (Part 1,2,3,4,5) By Bek D Corbin and DanZilla
Plus a lot of others
I would add them if I knew how (I am bad with computers).
If some who know how could please please add these stories or some other gen 1 year 2 stories it would be the most wonderful christmas gift
Thank youMerry Christmas
It takes quite a bit of work to make a decent story page, and you're welcome to do that if you want, We'll be delighted to help!
As far as Envy and the Gilded Cage is concerned, while it's a great story, it doesn't have any dates, so it's not going into the Gen 1 Year 2 index. It can go into the undated stories index, though. Even so, the existing story page doesn't have a narrative summary, so simply putting it into the index isn't going to help all that much.
When will that happen? I'm primarily concerned with the timeline, so I simply skip undated stories. Someone else will do it, or it isn't going to get done. I'm currently working forward alternating Gen 1 and Gen 2 stories. I suspect that I'll finish Gen 2 sometime in February or March, and Gen 1 sometime in 2020. It simply takes around 5 to 8 hours to do a story.
I know this isn't what you'd like to hear. If you want to see if there's a story page (and there are a number of story pages that aren't in the index) simply click on Search and enter the name. If it's there, it will be in the drop-down before you've finished typing the name.
- Malady
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Check WhatLinksHere.
Thanks for all your hard work! Wow, 6-8 hours per story!
- XaltatunOfAcheron
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Malady wrote: Envy is already listed in the "List of Canon Stories" or something, under Undated.
Check WhatLinksHere.
Thanks for all your hard work! Wow, 6-8 hours per story!
It's listed in the List of Canon Stories, which is by release date. However, for some reason, the code is "Fino" rather than "Envy". I had to go back snd forth a bit before I matched release dates and discovered that was what it was listed under.
As far as how much work it takes per story, that depends on story size. I start by reading the story to get a feel for it. Then I reread section by section and create a short paragraph for each section for inclusion in the timeline. Then I go through a third time to get characters. The three reads are what takes the time.
Now that I've got all of that on scratch pages in my text editor (Textedit in Mac OS), I put together the story page, then the links from the sortable indexes, and finally the actual timeline pages. This is, by the way, why story pages I create look like I've simply listed the timeline pages in order. That's exactly how I work. I create the story pages as side effects of creating the timeline for a story.
- null0trooper
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The Onsen visit is on a Friday, and it comes two weeks after the events of "Saks and Violence" (Which needed to be on the originally published dates. Jobe's engagement party makes more sense on the 4th, when everybody had to be back for class the next day, than on the 25th when anyone who planned on travelling would have already left.)
Part One: Thursday - Monday
Part Two: Monday & Tuesday
Part Three: Wednesday & Thursday
Part Four: Friday, a couple of weeks after Jobe is thrown in jail in NYC.
Part Five: Saturday, JJ's 15th Birthday
Edit for a couple of date problems:
* Jadis is mentioned as hitting the news last Spring Break (although her luck does seem to run that way)
* The next problem is reconciling Serafina arriving at JJ's birthday party. There was an incident involving the Strega in Massachusetts "a few weeks ago", but Envy's story starts in mid-May, three days before prom. (Then again, like Roulette, "Envy and the Gilded Cage" may not have been the first time Fino had been Fina)
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Wasamon wrote:
Katssun wrote: A few updates for the Gen 2 student list:
crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Fall_2016_Student_List
The first appearance of the Bohemians leadership in Gen 2 is IDTWIKA, Part 5.
All live in Melville, as far as we've been shown, but we'll need some clarification from Wasamon or Souffle Girl on the spellings here.
Karel Lorenc (IDTWIKA 5) or Lorencz (Dorms of Our Lives 4). M
Jane (IDTWIKA 5) or Janet (Dorms 4) Chorley - Knock-Out
Melisande (IDTWIKA 5) or Melanie (Dorms 4) Shinall - Glam
Not sure what cottage:
Jenifer Chalmers - Scarlyt, officially named in Dorms 4, Part 5.
Whoops.... <_<
Let me fix that in Dorms. (i.e. use the earlier attested names)
Also whoops, but I forgot the answer the other question. Scarlyt is a Whitman girl, hence why her first mention (Dorms 3?) is by Tanya, warning the others to avoid her.
Check this out sometime!

- Malady
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whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/spec...-widening-gyre#61135
- Sir Lee
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(Edit) And done!
- Malady
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A.k.a "The Revelation", "28 Fools Later", and "I Looked into the Abyss... and it Winked - April Fool's Day Edition"...
Do we just have a page like "Knife in the Ribs"
{{Non-Canon}}
'''''[http://whateleyacademy.net/index.php/original-timeline/349-april-fools-knife-in-the-ribs Knife in the Ribs]''''' is a '''non-canon''' story written by [[Diane Castle]] as an April 1st prank.
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Hmm... Since "The Revelation" or something wasn't posted 'cause it was NSFW... Since we're ad-less now, can't it be reposted?
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Any reason not to cut the "The Garou of Ragnarok" link from "Telchines' Astrolabe", since it's only right now related to "Lycarax"? Or turn it into a redirect to Lycarax's "The Garou of Ragnarok" section?
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Malady wrote: Any reason not to cut the "The Garou of Ragnarok" link from "Telchines' Astrolabe", since it's only right now related to "Lycarax"? Or turn it into a redirect to Lycarax's "The Garou of Ragnarok" section?
Voting for redirect. There's a huge "pull the other leg, it's got bells on" factor with this one.
... says the guy who played a Modern Orthodox Get of Fenris kinfolk in one game.
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That's why they're all a few hours off from me, in my EST?
Is the right time, -5 hours, or 4? Or should we using GST for the Wiki?
I'm thinking it's -4, so Golden Angel part 3 is on Monday, just so I have something to put.
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Also, we sticking with "Dec Xth" names for the sections? Not making any such, so whatever.
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@Null - Well, I've no preference, so if you wanna wait for more opinions, or take the initiative, go ahead.
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It seems we've got the Wanted pages almost under 1000, since the list appears to go in reverse alpha-numerical order, so the dates are listed last...
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EDST is -5 hours from GST
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Do either Branwen or Bek have any comments on this?
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Malady wrote: It seems we've got the Wanted pages almost under 1000, since the list appears to go in reverse alpha-numerical order, so the dates are listed last...
As far as I can tell, when I do Special:wantedpages, it's in sort of random order, with the dates scattered throughout. There are blocks of a few dozen or so in alphabetical order, but that's it. Is there a setting somewhere to make it alphabetize the output?
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Should it be "Valcar", or "Valcar the Damned"? I'm thinking the former?
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My starting proposal for it:
The Code of the Honorable Outlaw is a general set of principles agreed to by many (but by no means all) supervillains, and apparently tacitly supported if not explicitly promulgated by The Syndicate. While it seems to have several formulations, being largely a set of unstated understandings, it mostly boils down to
- Don't bring family into it if you don't have to. Hitting someone's family as revenge will get everyone against you.
- Don't buddy-fuck; if you make an agreement with another Honorable Outlaw, do your best to keep it, unless they backstab you first.
- Don't be too greedy; take what you need, but not so much that the LEOs and superheroes come down on you too hard, as that can turn up the heat for everyone else.
- Don't be excessively vicious; things like torturing people in public or killing civilians for no good reason brings the heat down too hard, and others will get splashed with it.
- Don't play with fire; deals with people known to do those the things listed above is almost certain to backfire, one way or another.
- Keep your eyes open but your mouth shut; snitches get stitches.
- Play nice with the Syndicate and the Syndicate will cover your back. Screw over the Syndicate, and you may not live long enough to regret it.
While a number of supervillains have mentioned it, it does seem to be honored in the breach more than anything. As Jadis Diabolik puts it:
“Standard of professional conduct?[ ...] No, it’s more like Organized Crime: it’s a business, and nobody wants to do business with someone who’s too fucking greedy or rabid, but on a very real level, you have to watch your back. They put a polite face on it to make doing business possible, but it’s still dog-eat-dog.”
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Schol-R-LEA wrote: From the recent references in "SGGA", it sounds like the 'official' dates for the start of "Envy and the Gilded Cage" are getting reset to early November 2006; this will probably mean changes to the story itself, with the dance being Homecoming instead of Junior Prom.
That's the major event for (US) public schools. St. Andrews might have an Oktoberfest or end-of-term/St. Andrew's Day event.
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Malady wrote: It seems ordered by # of Links to Page, then inside that, it goes Category, Template, and MediaWiki: types pages, then reverse alphabetical, then presumably reverse numerical.
Ah, that seems to be it. So the tail end is now single references to dates. I wouldn't be too surprised if a lot of them are mistakes.
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Malady wrote: Should it be "Valcar", or "Valcar the Damned"? I'm thinking the former?
Remember the de facto working language is English, learn from the SCA's early headaches, and go with the latter, as the binomial form of: given name(Valcar) + byname(the Damned) reduces the likelihood of needing more disambiguation pages because the One Steve Limit isn't in play. Plus, some people may not remember anything more than Somebody the Damned.
"Valcar" just happens to be a Scottish surname, which makes it fair game for use as a given name.
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null0trooper wrote: EST is -4 hours from GST
EDST is -5 hours from GST
Just the opposite, actually. Also, correcting the acronyms:
Eastern Standard Time (EST) is UTC-5
Eastern Daylight Time (EDT) is UTC-4.
UTC (Coordinated Universal Time/Temps Universel Coordonné -- the acronym was deliberately chosen as a compromise, so it does not match either the English or French names) replaced Greenwich Mean Time (GMT) for most purposes, although it's almost the same.
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Also, do we link cities? 'Cause we've got 3 wanted links for Cincinnati...
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Malady wrote: So, move Necromant, to "Xenomar the Necromant"?
That would be consistent, though there should be fewer Necromants than Damned.
Then after a couple of years of relative peace, Buffy the Necromant enrolls as a freshman...
Malady wrote: Also, do we link cities? 'Cause we've got 3 wanted links for Cincinnati...
If we don't have a page for Chicago or St. Louis, maybe not?
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What's the source for Techwolf's mom, being named Marilyn?
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Malady wrote: For the bot, change all "Drama" links to "Drama Queen"?
I think Drama is actually her code name, but people call her Drama Queen for obvious reasons. I don't know why anyone would deliberately choose Drama Queen as a code name because of the negative connotations, but then teenagers aren't always that rational.
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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I assume we make pages similar to Frostbite 's for characters who are named the same but not 100% clear on being the same character? Like Slipstream of "Vegas, Baby, Vegas" and "Brief Glimpses"... or "Star Witch" of the latter and the Silver Ghost series?
And also for Edgar Goodkinds? One from "The Last Ride" and the from "Ayla and the Mad Scientist" and "Silver Linings"?
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Sir Lee wrote: Yeah, that's pretty much the reason I hadn't changed any of those previously. I'm waiting for some sort of canon evidence or Word of God on that subject: whichone is the official codename and which one is the nickname?
Here it is, from "A Little R&R 2":
I turned to glare at Drama, or as a lot of people had begun calling her, Drama Queen. It wasn’t meant to be a compliment.
Bethany Farrow was a mousey brunette girl, who wasn’t much at all to look at. But in spite of that, she acted as though she was the prettiest and most popular girl in school, and since she was an empath, and could manipulate people’s emotions, she sometimes got other people to go along with this delusion. I was pretty sure there were rules against doing that kind of thing at school, but whether anyone had reported her or not, I had no idea.
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As for Prime Minister Abe, yes, since he has a somewhat active role in the story, the appropriate course would be to make a Wiki page for him and have a Wikipedia link in that page. We have done that for institutions that are somewhat different in the WU than in the "real world", such as DARPA and the CIA. I think we might have to do one for a certain Donald J. Trump, because I remember someone in the Cabal mentioning that he is one of the Whateley trustees in Gen2. But so far that has not been confirmed. Oddly enough, I can't remember any mention at all about there being an election for POTUS in Gen2... and that's second half of 2016!
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Gonna leave it for the bot.
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Sir Lee wrote: I think we might have to do one for a certain Donald J. Trump, because I remember someone in the Cabal mentioning that he is one of the Whateley trustees in Gen2. But so far that has not been confirmed.
Confirmed in A Wellspring of Sorrows , instead of just Forums WoG:
Not having that much time to waste I let myself drift on and I even learned quite a bit about the history of the school. I mean, who would expect people as varied as Stephen Hawking and Donald Trump to be on the Board of a private high school for mutants
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Also, we calling Art 1 and 2 from Imp 4.1, In the format of "Art 1", or "Art I"? Latter is the link in the classes list, but former is what's stated in story, in Imp's speech.
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Sir Lee wrote: Oddly enough, I can't remember any mention at all about there being an election for POTUS in Gen2... and that's second half of 2016!
They're being cagey on that - though it has been hinted in the forums that neither Obama nor McCain was elected POTUS in 2008, and that whoever did win that year wasn't re-elected in 2012.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Also, can anyone find "Helena Smart" on "Wanted Pages"? 'Cause if we're reaching the end of the Wanted Pages, she should be on there, but I can't find her...
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What do we name pages for those with contracted middle names? Like "Something L. Something" of Ayla 3 ?
Notes: He's Aries' parents' bank's vice president, and "who happens to have a gambling problem and that he just happens to owe $37,450 to the Wapina Reservation Casino".
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Malady wrote: Also, can anyone find "Helena Smart" on "Wanted Pages"? 'Cause if we're reaching the end of the Wanted Pages, she should be on there, but I can't find her...
Does this work?
crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Helena_Smart?veaction=edit&redlink=1
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null0trooper wrote:
Malady wrote: Also, can anyone find "Helena Smart" on "Wanted Pages"? 'Cause if we're reaching the end of the Wanted Pages, she should be on there, but I can't find her...
Does this work?
crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Helena_Smart?veaction=edit&redlink=1
Yes, I can make the page if I want to, but I'm wondering if I'm wrong on "We've almost got Wanted Pages under 1000!", since I can't find Helena Smart on the list, and she should be there, since she is Wanted...
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For the bot: Move "Guardian Mother" to "Mere de Tuteur" or perhaps, "Mère de Tuteur"?
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There's also a "Monkeywrench II", which seems to refer to the character currently in "Monkeywrench".
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Redirect "Pierre Hicks" to "Warhorse"?
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Should we be linking "Pool of Vigor" in "Green Witch"? It doesn't seem to be anything other than her name for her healing pool? Or is it used by others?
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"Evolution Rocks" as a redirect to "Evolution Rocks!"?
I assume we should call "Major Smythe-Barnes", his full title, instead of just "Smythe-Barnes"?
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Malady wrote:
null0trooper wrote:
Malady wrote: Also, can anyone find "Helena Smart" on "Wanted Pages"? 'Cause if we're reaching the end of the Wanted Pages, she should be on there, but I can't find her...
Does this work?
crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Helena_Smart?veaction=edit&redlink=1
Yes, I can make the page if I want to, but I'm wondering if I'm wrong on "We've almost got Wanted Pages under 1000!", since I can't find Helena Smart on the list, and she should be there, since she is Wanted...
Well, I put 17 filler pages into the timeline last night to extinguish that many wanted pages. The naive view suggests that it should have shrunk the wanted pages to where we could see daylight at the end.
What actually happened is that the single-link timeline pages have simply vanished off the end - and it shouldn't have - there should still be several dozen. And - there are still a thousand wanted pages.
The recent pages list doesn't suggest adding that many new wanted pages, so whatever it's doing, it's not building a complete table, sorting it and then truncating it at a thousand.
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Perhaps tomorrow will reveal newer insights on how the Wanted Pages work...
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In other news, where is Mach-5 said to be a Whateley Alumnus?
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Malady wrote: Well, I spawned some new links, due to editing Charge 1... But yes, it seems like some new links have popped up, from somewhere...
Perhaps tomorrow will reveal newer insights on how the Wanted Pages work...
How about today? The following is over the top of the Admin Wanted Pages report:
The following data is cached, and was last updated 10:33, December 28, 2018. A maximum of 1,000 results are available in the cache.
So, we don't actually know how many pages there are, only that its more than 1000. Sorry guys.
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Malady wrote: Well, I spawned some new links, due to editing Charge 1... But yes, it seems like some new links have popped up, from somewhere...
Perhaps tomorrow will reveal newer insights on how the Wanted Pages work...
How about today? The following is over the top of the Admin Wanted Pages report:
The following data is cached, and was last updated 10:33, December 28, 2018. A maximum of 1,000 results are available in the cache.
So, we don't actually know how many pages there are, only that its more than 1000. Sorry guys.
Yes, but we've removed all of the (1 link) date pages, which should leave pages starting with "A" at the bottom of the list, but somehow, the last entry is "Indigo Sorceress"... Meaning that there's likely 1-link pages from H to A, remaining...
Then there's the "Last Ride" redlink dates of September 1874, 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 24th...
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I really should link Helena Smart somewhere, since she appears often... And then we'll see if she shows up.
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Malady wrote: Well, I spawned some new links, due to editing Charge 1... But yes, it seems like some new links have popped up, from somewhere...
Perhaps tomorrow will reveal newer insights on how the Wanted Pages work...
How about today? The following is over the top of the Admin Wanted Pages report:
The following data is cached, and was last updated 10:33, December 28, 2018. A maximum of 1,000 results are available in the cache.
So, we don't actually know how many pages there are, only that its more than 1000. Sorry guys.
Yeah, we know about the limit of a thousand entries. The discussion is more about the algorithm. The way it sorts the pages, the one-link date pages should be at the end, so when Malady looked at it a few days ago, and there were a lot of one-link date pages at the end, it looked like we were seeing daylight. However, that's only true for a naive algorithm that builds a complete table, sorts it and then chops it at 1000.
It appears to be doing something more complicated, but we won't really know until we quit putting new wanted pages in there for long enough to get a few dozen pages off the list.
Since I'm putting new story pages out there pretty much daily, I'm probably as guilty of making new wanted pages as ce is.
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Malady wrote: I really should link Helena Smart somewhere, since she appears often... And then we'll see if she shows up.
She shows up or is mentioned in multiple stories, but I think there's only one outgoing link.
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So, we calling the Teacher's Village, "Village", or "The Village"... And it seems like nothing discusses that location, not even "Whateley Academy"...
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I think I'll ask Elrod directly if we can treat that "de" as a typo and call the character "Mère Tuteur", before renaming the page.
(Interestingly, when I was fiddling with Google Translate, it suggested I might have misspelled "Mère Tueuse"... which is "Mother Slayer". Holy Buffy Summers, Batman!)
The wanted list is updated only once a day, as E.E. has pointed out. When we create a wanted page, it remains in the list until the next refresh, just crossed out, and the end of the list does not move up.
Oh, and I think The Village does deserve the "The". "Village" by itself sounds too generic.
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Katssun wrote: I thought Imp's stories defined it as "The Village" and its location in relation to the school. That or Laura and the Village did.
I meant that no Wiki page discusses it.
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And I meant that is we were right in that we almost got Wanted Pages down under 1000 pages, we should've seen it today, but no...
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Or should it be its own page?
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For the bot: Change "Clarkson (Sheriff)" links to "RL Clarkson"?
And / or have a "Sheriff Clarkson" redirect?
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Oh! And I heard from Elrod, he's OK with calling "Guardian Mother" just "Mère Tuteur" and ignoring the "de" as a typo. I think I'll leave a redirect or three in place, just in case...
And another thing: I went to add some info to the Elizabeth Carson page and noted an Easter Egg from the authors...
Liz's first marriage was to Dr. Arcane, whose surname was Stevens.
They had a daughter named Samantha.
Now, Dr. Arcane was a mystic. Liz developed magical powers. And they have a daughter named Samantha Stevens...
I wonder if she looks like Elizabeth Montgomery?
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I notice you added the subtitles to the sections in Summer of my German Heritage. You do realize that existing links to those sections will no longer find the correct section? In fact, they'll probably get the corresponding section in the Characters.
I left the subtitles off deliberately when I made the story page, just so that the references wouldn't get absurdly long.
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Sir Lee wrote: Oh, and I think The Village does deserve the "The". "Village" by itself sounds too generic.
I agree. There are a lot of places in the US informally named "The Village," and it's always with the The. Locals always know what's meant.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Sir Lee:
I notice you added the subtitles to the sections in Summer of my German Heritage. You do realize that existing links to those sections will no longer find the correct section? In fact, they'll probably get the corresponding section in the Characters.
I left the subtitles off deliberately when I made the story page, just so that the references wouldn't get absurdly long.
I understand, but we have been adding subtitles to all stories in the past, so it became a sort of ad-hoc standard. I'll look into the inbound links to see if any need fixing.
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Anyone against cutting "English I", since I just ran a search, and neither "English I" nor "English 1" appear in any story...
We do have an article for "Freshman English"...
And I'm against having " English " wanted links, like it's a class. Although, making that a page a collection of all known English classes, or the English Department?
Although, we do have Physics ...
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"Trigonometry/Pre-Calculus" is a weird title... But it is called " trig/pre-calculus " by Ayla, but does that mean that they're doing trig, but the whole class is officially "Pre-Calculus", the "AP Physics I" pre-req?
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Classes are tricky stuff... Maybe I'll just see what easy Characters there are to make... And the daily Wanted Pages report... Err... Not yet...
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And our 1000th entry is "1874-09-03 (1 link)"... So we might possibly be at the light... Let's see what happens tomorrow...
I know "1874-09-01" still is Wanted... And "Helena Smart" is still not on the list...
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Give "2016-07" its Calendar page, since it's got 10 days?
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Should "Danielle Schroeder" be a redirect to just "Miene"?
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Freshman English: English 101, English 102
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Malady wrote:
And our 1000th entry is "1874-09-03 (1 link)"... So we might possibly be at the light... Let's see what happens tomorrow...
I know "1874-09-01" still is Wanted... And "Helena Smart" is still not on the list...
Give "2016-07" its Calendar page, since it's got 10 days?
1874-09-01 may not be 1 link, though. I remember seeing 2 1874 dates that had two links each.
No, that would add another 20 days to the wanted list, just when we're trying to figure out how the darn thing works.
Oh, I've just killed a lot more links in the timeline area. And fixed a couple of problems as well.
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And yeah, I forgot I gave Colonel Goodkind's Wife, a link to the dates of possible marriage.
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Doing Catgirl Madness's dates would take out... Like, ten? Especially since they've already got summaries on the Story Page, but we can wait, and I don't feel like making them, if you're gonna change them eventually, Xaltatun.
And we might not need to, depending on what tomorrow shows...
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Wait, is this confirmation of Glass being a Dickinson Cottage Freshman of the Class of 2010?
Aquerna 1.4 :
Anna started ticking names off on her fingers. “Skids and Glass and Geomancer are already on my floor
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Doing Catgirl Madness's dates would take out... Like, ten? Especially since they've already got summaries on the Story Page, but we can wait, and I don't feel like making them, if you're gonna change them eventually, Xaltatun.
And we might not need to, depending on what tomorrow shows...
Catgirl Madness certainly looks like it's in shape to have timeline pages written right off the story summary page. It looks like Sir Lee and other contributors did an excellent job. And it would be closer to 20 when filler pages are added to the total. And in the direction I'm going now, I probably wouldn't get to it until sometime in 2020 during the cleanup phase to find anything that got missed.
OK, I'll do that tonight before I get back to work on A Dragon Abroad.
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Change "Charles Moore" to "Charles Buchanan Moore"?
Only two left, though.
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Also, "Victor Rivera" to "Tidestriker"? Or as a redirect?
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"Robert Russell" to "Robert Russel", because that's the correct one. Only 2 links, though.
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Move "Racoon" to "Raccoon".
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"Drop-Bear" or "Drop Bear"?
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"Hermione" into disambig for the Goodkinds' chef, and the Gen2 girl?
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"Agent Glas" and "Agent Sandmann", or just "Glas" and "Sandmann"?
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"The Mighty Squid", or just "Mighty Squid"?
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Okay, so it seems to take about 24 hours and 30 minutes, for the list to update...
And we're still not under 1000, the list ends at the unknown "J A" of Riddle of Sappho: Canto V .
And note for the future: (1 link) pages start at 644, today.
2007-05-15 and 1874-09-03 are still single link wanted pages...
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Okay, so it seems to take about 24 hours and 30 minutes, for the list to update...
And we're still not under 1000, the list ends at the unknown "J A" of Riddle of Sappho: Canto V .
And note for the future: (1 link) pages start at 644, today.
2007-05-15 and 1874-09-03 are still single link wanted pages...
Yeah, I think we can now say we have around 1200 and change wanted pages.
I note that Major Smythe-Barnes has a first name, so I'll correct that.
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elrodw wrote: I believe someone will have to roll back a lot of changes - someone listed as A Fandom user has gone into a lot of pages and made 'corrections'.
Not to re-open old wounds, but did we ever hear back from this individual, or at least get a username for them? As I said at the time, my impression was that she would probably find the themes and premise of the series as offensive as the wording then used in the wiki, if not more so, but I was at least hoping that they would contact us to air their opinions about it.
I am fairly certain that they had no idea what the series was, or even that it was a fiction series rather than something related to the real world - she seemed outright puzzled by the entry for 'Anlage', for example. I almost wonder if she had simply been scanning websites to find 'inappropriate' terms.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Our mystery editor edited around 19 Jan 2017. Here's the members page for those who registered around then.
I did an IP lookup based on their IP... It gives a lot of info, but I'm really sure how to use that...
Could check if they're on any big Wiki Blacklists or something... *shrugs*
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Oh well. They came, they did an edit rampage, they got blocked, and they left in a huff. But they had a point, and I think the wiki is ultimately better for their short-lived... I'll call it "presence." I bear them no ill will, and if they ever want to come back, I won't hold this against them.
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What do we do with "User:Mittfh/test", which is spawning, 3 redlinks... like "Thomas" and "Theresa"?
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Listed some things for the bot, on the previous page... Well, tomorrow will bring new info, even if those changes don't happen by then. It's a Monday, so yeah.
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Should we redirect "Jennifer Kelly" to "Wicked", or what?
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It seems like the list flickers after it gets past the honorifics, 'cause it jumps from "Mr. Copely" to "Ashtaroth", at 860-861...
It could be gathering the first... 860 from "memory", then populating the rest from reverse alphabetical, which is why "1874-09-03" is at the bottom of the list, today... So, we've got all the letters from "Ar"-"J", unaccounted for... That's... ~10 letters...
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We really should standardize how "Last Name Only" people work, 'cause I've been making links for "Favager (MCO)", while the Dated Stories uses "Agent Favager", same for "Delacroix"... Maybe should've used Agent...
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"Princess Kiko" or just "Kiko"?
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Ideally, Mittfh themself would delete the test page after it's no longer needed, but if they are not available, I might check to see if it's within my admin powers to do so.Malady wrote: What do we do with "User:Mittfh/test", which is spawning, 3 redlinks... like "Thomas" and "Theresa"?
I think I had a look at those, but I'll check again.Malady wrote: Listed some things for the bot, on the previous page... Well, tomorrow will bring new info, even if those changes don't happen by then. It's a Monday, so yeah.
Hmmm, good question. Probably the best course in the long run, even if it's a bit of a spoiler for the first couple Jennifer Kelly stories. We should take some care not to be too spoiler-ish regarding the whole Tansy/Lainie switch-and-amnesia if possible.Malady wrote: Should we redirect "Jennifer Kelly" to "Wicked", or what?
Yeah, too many of those. Generally speaking, I like "Favager (MCO)" better than "Agent Favager", because (a) knowing the organization is more informative than knowing the name of his job, and (b) it still works even if he's transferred to another role. But there are exceptions. Nobility is one such case -- not only they are rarely referred to by surnames, lots of times they don't have surnames. Consider "Elizabeth Windsor" versus "Queen Elizabeth II"... which one is more recognizable?Malady wrote: We really should standardize how "Last Name Only" people work, 'cause I've been making links for "Favager (MCO)", while the Dated Stories uses "Agent Favager", same for "Delacroix"... Maybe should've used Agent...
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"Princess Kiko" or just "Kiko"?
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Change "Charles Moore" to "Charles Buchanan Moore"?
Only two left, though.
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Also, "Victor Rivera" to "Tidestriker"? Or as a redirect?
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"Robert Russell" to "Robert Russel", because that's the correct one. Only 2 links, though.
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Move "Racoon" to "Raccoon".
OK, checked all of the spoiler section above.
Hmm, not sure. Best would be Word of God. Otherwise, I would have to check the sources to see which is the more prevalent. Keep the other form as a redirect, though.Malady wrote: "Drop-Bear" or "Drop Bear"?
I think a main page for the Gen2 girl, with a hatnote linking to a possible page for "Hermione (chef)" would be enough. Even Ayla stopped mentioning Chef Hermione after a while, she's unlikely to show up in camera unless Diane comes back and decides to do something with the character.Malady wrote: "Hermione" into disambig for the Goodkinds' chef, and the Gen2 girl?
"Glas" and "Sandmann" are probably unique enough on their own, I think.Malady wrote: "Agent Glas" and "Agent Sandmann", or just "Glas" and "Sandmann"?
Hmmm. The adjective sounds a bit odd without the article, don't you think? I would go for the "The."Malady wrote: "The Mighty Squid", or just "Mighty Squid"?
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So, since those were prospective bot changes (sorry for not being clear):
"Agent Favanger" and "Agent Delacroix" to "Favanger (MCO)" and "Delacroix (MCO)", respectively...
The single "Mighty Squid" to "The Mighty Squid"
The single "Kiko" to "Princess Kiko"
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I suppose that Ayla's lightheaded-ness on 2006-07-20, even though not in-scene, just mentioned, is good enough for a page... Like I did for "2001-10-18"? ... And also his prospective plans?
Gonna make "2006-07-20", at least.
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Should "Danielle Schroeder" (2 links) be a redirect to just "Miene"?
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"Victoria Rafferty" and "Danille Dumont"... Redirect to "Witch Queen" and "Sycorax", respectively?
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Sir Lee wrote: Consider "Elizabeth Windsor" versus "Queen Elizabeth II"... which one is more recognizable?
Wasn't Windsor her maiden name? Wouldn't she be Elizabeth Mountbatten?
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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But then, it gives her son Charles full name as just "Charles Philip Arthur George", with a footnote that "Charles does not usually use a family name but when one is needed, it is Mountbatten-Windsor."
Prince William has used both "Mountbatten-Windsor" and "Wales" as surnames. His brother Harry rarely uses a surname, and when he does use one, it's usually "Wales."
It's a nobility thing. They have their own rules for how surnames work.
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Sir Lee wrote: Consider "Elizabeth Windsor" versus "Queen Elizabeth II"... which one is more recognizable?
Wasn't Windsor her maiden name? Wouldn't she be Elizabeth Mountbatten?
Windsor was her maiden name, but hers is the senior title.
Besides, it's a myth that women have always taken their husband's inherited surname, even in the British Isles.
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I checked Wikipedia for Drop Bear. It's two words, not hyphenated,
I like the organization solution for last-name-only entries. It's more specific, and it also follows disambiguation practice for duplicates.
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Other than it being bought by "Hofstadter & Cooper Product Testing Lab", and to mention it on "Hazardite", as having "a ridiculously high shielding rating, even better than Hazardite™”...
Should we have a "Super-hard materials" page, for Hazardite, Messingite, etc?
Although, I guess that's what the Substances category is for...
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Dorms of Our Lives has finally been made! Thank you, so much, XaltatunOfAcheron!
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The page calls the "Beret Mafia" by "European Promotional League"... Makes sense... That should be a redirect for them?
Cover all bases? "Euro-Promotional League", and "Euro Promotional League" too?
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Main issue, is the multiple seasons and parts of Dorms of Our Lives... Do we split the seasons up, like the "A Little R&R" series? Or bunch them together, like "Silver Linings" 1 and 2?
Although, the latter does have "2 being a direct sequel to 1", going for it?
Or, has our referencing already made our decision for us, given that we, or is it just me, link to "Dorms of Our Lives#Season 4", etc?
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Bot: "Jamie Howe" links to "Calibrate", 'cause "Dorms of Our Lives, Season 4 (Part 5)".
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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"SGT Anders" or "Sergeant Anders"?
"Ethan Anders" should redirect to "Camille Anders", I assume... Also, different from that previous Anders...
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Bot: "Milena" is "Sister Secret"
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Note to self: Change "Reese (Student)" back to just "Reese".
Also, make "Nefertiti" a disambig, for the two...
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Sir Lee wrote: "Dorms" splitting... when each "season" was a single chapter, it seemed to make sense to treat them all as a single story. But with this recent one -- which has a subtitle, yet! -- it's starting to look as if it makes more sense to treat each "season" as a separate story in a series. Although I have asked the authors, and they said that they conceive of all of "Dorms" as a single, long story.
I can do it either way, since there are no story pages for the rest of the Dorms segments. Doing it as a single massive story page would require editing what's out there now, but that's purely mechanical. In any case, according to my current plan, I wasn't going to get to the next parts for a while, since I'm taking Gen 2 in posting order. I could change that if you think finishing Dorms now is worthwhile.
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I'm arbitrarily fixing the dates and putting the REACT action on the next Monday and Tuesday.
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I actually prefer to have discrete pages dedicated to each "season" rather than a massive, never-ending, never-finished page for a never-ending, never-finished story. Yes, it will involve some repetition -- but OTOH, less spoilers. So, the way you did it is fine -- I even added an "It's followed by Dorms of our lives, Season 2".XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: I can do it either way, since there are no story pages for the rest of the Dorms segments. Doing it as a single massive story page would require editing what's out there now, but that's purely mechanical. In any case, according to my current plan, I wasn't going to get to the next parts for a while, since I'm taking Gen 2 in posting order. I could change that if you think finishing Dorms now is worthwhile.
And, if you have any sort of plan, go with it. It's bound to be more efficient than going haphazardly. The old rule for collaborative projects is, "if something itches you, scratch it." Meaning, if I feel that something needs doing NOW, I shouldn't ask people to do it, I should go and do it.
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Malady wrote: "Drop-Bear" or "Drop Bear"?
From "Reinforce: Don't Call Me A Pretty":
“Drop-Bear.” The Junior grinned at her and shook the massive hand.
“Did you actually call yourself Drop-Bear?” She laughed as she considered the ramifications.
“Oh yeah, and told them all about the dreaded beasts and their horrible, horrible face-devouring tendencies.”
Adam laughed. It was too easy to kind of fall into it, and “Drop-Bear” was funny, and handsome in his own right. She found herself wondering what it would have been like to have enrolled as a girl.
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Sir Lee wrote: I actually prefer to have discrete pages dedicated to each "season" rather than a massive, never-ending, never-finished page for a never-ending, never-finished story.
For what it's worth, Season 5 is going to be the last of that series.
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Also, the Wanted Pages have updated sooner than expected, by a whole hour... I wonder what that means...
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Hmm... Lillian, Wahrheit, Mauer, Glas, and Sandmann, are all Eugen von Groenwald's children? Presumably, they all have the "von Groenwald" surname? Or does only Lillian, and the rest have the surnames of their mothers?
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With that said... A while ago, a sort of ad-hoc standard sort of evolved for series & multipart stories, in which we use something like "[name]X.Y", in which "name" is a short mnemonic for the story or series, "X" is the number of the story in a series (if any) and "Y" is the chapter/part number. But you will see, for instance, "Phase5.3" in one place and "Ayla 4.2" in other places. Some editors use spaces, some don't. Some use hyphens instead of periods as separators. Sometimes we disagree on where a story fits in the sequence, so, for instance, Imp's origin story might be tagged "Imp0" by one editor, "Imp4" by another and "Imp3b" by a third one. As long the usage is unambiguous within a page, it's not really worth fighting over it.
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The one that's got me puzzled is the Loophole/Wicked and Solange swap that will culminate in "The Sorrows of Red October". How the heck am I going to get any kind of accurate reference to the scenes in "Laura and the Village" without giving the game away early? Even without those scenes, if I tag Kodiak's wife as "Solange", it's either going to attract editors to correct my "mistake" or give the game away completely.
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In my view, what we'd have is essentially a one-line summary of a section or such. For example, in what I'm writing about Shine right now, one entry of the storyboard would be "Shine returns late from his France trip, pays off McTavish and Mendez, and says a cryptic good-night to the girl who chaparoned / tutored him. In Melville, Jadis explicitly tries to warn Shine about Alexis and Heather's intentions."
Dorms is great, and there's a lot happening, but trying to catch up to get my stories back in line is almost overwhelmingly intimidating because we don't have a storyboard.
And BTW, this would be a huge part of a 'day by day' summary of the story universe.
Now, if someone can help me out by doing the high-level summary of Dorms for Gen 2, I have an offer of something as a way of saying thanks.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Got a weird spoiler problem. There are a number of threads that have scenes scattered through different stories that will (or will probably) culminate in an actual story, like the one that involves Hilde Stauffer.
The one that's got me puzzled is the Loophole/Wicked and Solange swap that will culminate in "The Sorrows of Red October". How the heck am I going to get any kind of accurate reference to the scenes in "Laura and the Village" without giving the game away early? Even without those scenes, if I tag Kodiak's wife as "Solange", it's either going to attract editors to correct my "mistake" or give the game away completely.
The catch is that there will always be new readers who haven't gotten that far in those stories yet.
However, she's Mrs. Elaine Cody to the students, and her MID reads "Loophole".
On Wicked's page it can be explained that this has always been one of Elaine Nalley's identities, along with "Elaine Nalley", "Elaine Cody", "Jennifer Kelly"
On Solange's and Loophole's (and Pejuta's since she helped) pages the identity swap could be discussed in a "2013-present" section that people who can't enjoy a story if they know how the next one turns out can exercise their own agency for a change and decide whether they want to read about "future" events or not.
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elrodw wrote: This may be a wiki thing, but I'm now at a crossroads for gen 2. With the life interruptions (no need to recap), I'm now WAY behind the curve in terms of what's happening to whom and when - to the point that I'm very hesitant to start a new Laura story because I'm not up-to-date on what's happened. I know it's been discussed before, but now I'm the one who's saying that as much as we authors rely on the Wiki, having a day-by-day or story-by-story storyboard is becoming a critical need.
In my view, what we'd have is essentially a one-line summary of a section or such. For example, in what I'm writing about Shine right now, one entry of the storyboard would be "Shine returns late from his France trip, pays off McTavish and Mendez, and says a cryptic good-night to the girl who chaparoned / tutored him. In Melville, Jadis explicitly tries to warn Shine about Alexis and Heather's intentions."
Dorms is great, and there's a lot happening, but trying to catch up to get my stories back in line is almost overwhelmingly intimidating because we don't have a storyboard.
And BTW, this would be a huge part of a 'day by day' summary of the story universe.
Now, if someone can help me out by doing the high-level summary of Dorms for Gen 2, I have an offer of something as a way of saying thanks.
I'll probably be doing Dorms later this month. If someone wants to do it earlier, I'll be eternally grateful (eternity = a few days). On the other claw, I don't know how to summarize things any more than I'm doing now, and a more skeletal summary wouldn't help me very much in doing the timeline: I do the story summaries as a side effect of doing the timeline: they're almost the same.
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null0trooper wrote:
XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Got a weird spoiler problem. There are a number of threads that have scenes scattered through different stories that will (or will probably) culminate in an actual story, like the one that involves Hilde Stauffer.
The one that's got me puzzled is the Loophole/Wicked and Solange swap that will culminate in "The Sorrows of Red October". How the heck am I going to get any kind of accurate reference to the scenes in "Laura and the Village" without giving the game away early? Even without those scenes, if I tag Kodiak's wife as "Solange", it's either going to attract editors to correct my "mistake" or give the game away completely.
The catch is that there will always be new readers who haven't gotten that far in those stories yet.
However, she's Mrs. Elaine Cody to the students, and her MID reads "Loophole".
On Wicked's page it can be explained that this has always been one of Elaine Nalley's identities, along with "Elaine Nalley", "Elaine Cody", "Jennifer Kelly"
On Solange's and Loophole's (and Pejuta's since she helped) pages the identity swap could be discussed in a "2013-present" section that people who can't enjoy a story if they know how the next one turns out can exercise their own agency for a change and decide whether they want to read about "future" events or not.
I think I'm just going to put a huge "here be spoilers" note at the top, and suggest that if this worries people to go read "The Sorrows of Red October" first. And then put a note inside spoiler tags that "Loophole" is actually Solange, and Wicked is actually Loophole. And also point out that I'm being a lot more explicit about Hilde Stauffer's agents on campus than is disclosed in the story itself.
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I wonder if we can nest them...
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@eldodW - On Dorms 3+, I think Cerulea is basically just there for breakfast, lunch, then leaves for her own thing?
But, yeah, totally get needing the full campus sitch for stuff.
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Hmm... We have "2016-09-10"... Which is the first day of Dorms 2... But no reference to Dorms 2... Checking for event overlap...
I assume events are listed in chronological order, even without "time of day" sub-headings?
Wait... Dorms 2 is just breakfast?!??? Nope, it just has no other time markers, except in-text ones like noting the assembly... Also, the word "Laura" appears 21 times... And "Val, for the Colombian's flirtations with the blue fake-girl"...
... Kelly is Melville RA... Where else do you appear... I want your full name... Ah yes, you are "Kelly Mishkin", "Bistable Shifter"... Do we know your codename? I guess not...
Alvery Rosseau is Avery is "Elfe de Feu"? ... Alvery, or Avery?
And "Onishi Kiyoko", I don't think we're gonna get any better than that, for now...
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====Some time in the morning====
=====Poe=====
[[Glyph|Bianca]] is in the [[Poe Cottage]] day room, reading “The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo” in the original Scandinavian, when she meets [[Façade|Jessica]], who seems to be going with the frumpy librarian look at the moment.<ref name="Wall 1">''[[The Writing On the Wall#Part 1|The Writing on the Wall: Part 1]]''</ref>
[[StahlFaust|Greta]] decides to make an example of [[Dragosfyre|Morgana]] to keep the changelings away from the [[Amazons]]. [[Eurydice]] revises the plan so it will actually work and keep them out of trouble: the beatdown will be administered by [[Kammie Ovallette]].<ref name="Dragon">''[[A Dragon Abroad#Part 1|A Dragon Abroad: Part 1]]''</ref><ref name="Kansas 1.5" />
=====Outside=====
Then she goes out to look at the campus. She checks out the lake and reluctantly decides the fishing is something the White Lady wouldn’t do. She goes to the quad, and discovers a [[Tinker|girl]] setting up a very complicated set of dominos, which a couple of bullies, [[Weaponeer]] and [[Photech]] destroy. She drives them off, and then Security arrives. (They let her off with a warning since she didn’t actually attack anyone.)<ref name="Wall 1" />
====Early Morning===
A spar supervised by [[Kelly Mishkin]] happens, between [[Okami|Hikaru]], [[Tiff Lock]], [[Kenshin]]. At the end, all three participants are collapsed on the ground.<ref name="Glimpses"/>''[[Glimpses of the Sun]]''</ref>
[[Eisenmädel|Erica]] does her morning exercise routine, with [[Calliope]], they see [[Kenshin]] and his admirers, and the [[Amazons]] feel them out, with plans on getting Erica and Calliope to join. [[Stahlfaust]] is expressly against letting M2Fs join.
[[Calliope]] goes to breakfast, with [[Erica]]. She meets [[Donut]], who goes unnamed, as the one behind the pastries counter, as the "pink-eyed boy", and such. After meeting him, she is dragged to [[Essemmelle]], and the [[Junior High Program]] table.
[[Eisenmädel|Erica]] and [[Calliope]] get to the [[Mutant Mayhem Machine]] table, and everyone else is already there.
Then everyone's called off to the opening day assembly.
[[Wahnsinnig]], a.k.a "Kirsten Bischofsheim", has an informant, [[Arni]], who is helping with her obsession with [[Eisenmädel]]. Wahnsinnig spots Erica, who is [[Eisenmädel]], and informs Arni.
====Mid-Morning====
Okami wakes up in Doyle, [[Amanda Tolman]] is there to remind her, forcefully, that the level of spar has to be supervised by staff, not by a student, no matter how competent. She lays out a few restrictions as well. Then [[Tiff Lock|Nancy Bandis (Tiff Lock)]] bounces in to say no hard feelings - she enjoyed the spar but hadn’t really understood the level required.<ref name="Glimpses"/>
[[Lapin|Tia]] and [[Okami|Hikaru]] go for their driving test. They pass.<ref name="Kansas 1.5">''[[I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore#Part 5|I Don’t Think We're in Kansas Anymore: Part 5]]''</ref>
====Late Morning and post-assembly====
[[Cerulea|Laura]] and the other 700 students attend the opening day assembly given by [[Elaine Claire]], and then the new headmaster, Dr. [[Geoffrey Mazarin]].<ref name="Kansas 1.5" />
[[Lapin|Tia]] and [[Okami|Hikaru]] head for the lake and the picnic.<ref name="Kansas 1.5" />
[[Eisenmädel|Erica]] and [[Calliope]] discuss the [[Amazons]] with [[Sister Secret|Milena]], and hear some gossip, and Milena confirms that the other two are are going to the picnic, before leaving.
[[Eisenmädel|Erica]] and [[Calliope]] then discuss the [[Amazons]] among them selves.
And onto the picnic, where [[Eisenmädel|Erica]], [[Calliope]], [[Kenshin]], and [[Okami|Hikaru]] are.
====Lunch====
[[Lapin|Tia]] and [[Okami|Hikaru]] reach the lake. And spend some time there.
[[Cerulea|Laura]] and [[Dragonsfyre|Morgana]] are in the Quad, taking in a number of the clubs, including the science fiction club, the [[Commonwealth]], one of the martial arts clubs. [[Cerulea|Laura]] is privately introduced to the Worn Wrench.<ref name="Kansas 1.5" />
[[Eisenmädel|Erica]] and [[Calliope]] explore the campus fair.
====Afternoon====
A pair of students report to [[Hilde Stauffer|Dr. Stauffer]] about two students she’s interested in. No names yet.<ref name="Kansas 1.5" />
The band Unladen Swallow was recruiting. They got Nick, [[Calliope]] and [[Cerulea|Laura]].<ref name="Kansas 1.6'>''[[I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore#Part 6|I Don’t Think We're in Kansas Anymore: Part 6]]''</ref>
At the picnic, someone gives [[Dragonsfyre|Morgana]] a message from [[StahlFaust|Greta]] for a private meeting. The message leads to an attempted beating.<ref name="Dragon" />
[[Eisenmädel|Erica]], [[Invictus|Tanya]], [[Cerulia|Laura]] and [[Glyph|Bianca]] realize there’s something wrong, so they go to check. They intervene, and then Security finally arrives with [[Lillian Dennon|Ms. Dennon]].<ref name="Dragon" />
[[Lillian Dennon|Ms. Dennon]] gets [[Dragonsfyre|Morgana]] to Doyle Medical. She gives Kammie two weeks of detention in Hawthorne. [[Dragonsfyre]] gets a week of being in [[Lillian Dennon|Ms. Dennon’s]] evening brick class.<ref name="Dragon" />
====Evening====
[[Okami|Hikaru]], [[Kenshin]] and several other Japanese are at an inaugural meeting of [[Pan-Asia]]. The teacher who is sponsoring it turns out to be a partisan of the [[Iron Dragon]] and has a very obvious hatred of the Japanese, probably derived from the historical incident called the Rape of Nanking before World War II. It does not go well, and both Hikaru and Kenshin decide to withdraw.<ref name="Glimpses" />
[[Lillian Dennon|Ms. Dennon]] has dinner with the [[Imp]]. They discuss the incident, showing that the teachers are well aware of what the [[Amazons]] are up to.<ref name="Dragon" />
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"J Dean"... Possibly "Justin Dean", based on Kansas 5 ...
At least he only seems to appear in "Sunshine & Fury", "Glimpses of the Sun", and that ^. Also mentioned in "2016-09-08". Gonna leave him unlinked, until we know more.
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I guess all "Drop Bear" links should become "Drop-Bear"?
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If they are, or aren't separate substances... Need to raid its WhatLinksHere for Wexlerite, 'cause I know I made some...
[[Wexlerite]] is "one of those other super-strong stuff things made by scientists with egos that demanded they plaster their name all over everything"<ref name="OddsEnds.2">''[[Odds and Ends#Part 2|Odds and Ends: Part 2]]''</ref>.
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- "I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore" part 5, released 2016-08-02 -> No hyphen
- "Don't Call Me a Pretty", released 2017-04-04 -> hyphenated
- "A Dragon Abroad" part 2, released 2017-08-04 -> No hyphen.
Wikipedia, in reference to the mythical animal, also lacks an hyphen. Unless we get Word of God saying otherwise, I'm going with the majority of occurrences, the original occurrence, the most recent usage and the most widespread form outside the Whateley context.
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"Stahlfaust" or "StahlFaust"? They're both wanted, and are actually different pages... The bot should one change to the other.
I think it's the latter, since it is two words, compounded, and it's the spelling used in the Dramatis Personae ...
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Now we've just got the 13th onward, from Dorms Part 2.
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Malady wrote: "Stahlfaust" or "StahlFaust"? They're both wanted, and are actually different pages... The bot should one change to the other.
I think it's the latter, since it is two words, compounded, and it's the spelling used in the Dramatis Personae ...
Stahlfaust - with an umlaut somewhere since it's a noun.
Since Britta is German, that's the way German does compound nouns.
While I've been using StahlFaust, that's turns out to be because I'm a software developer, and most modern computer languages have a name creation convention that capitalizes the first letter of each component. For those interested, the convention is called CamelCase, and discussing that and other options is the closest that software developers ever get to a good, old-fashioned bar fight.
Of course Word of God governs. BTW - who is god in this case?
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I'm pretty sure he never bothered with an umlaut, though.
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Now for a question for EE. The Sorrows of Red October says that Lanie changed her official code name to Wicked, but never used it. So should I be using Wicked as the code name in the stories, or is Loophole still correct, especially since she's been pretty vocal about not liking it.
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Finally done with Dorms 2! Now onto Dorms 3. After lunch... ... And now to do 2016-09-19... Doing 20 first, 'cause it's only got Cookie's POV, which is nice and short.
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Bot: Convert "Agent Owens" links into "Owens (MCO)"?
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Yes, after Graduation, Elaine does have her MID changed to show Wicked as her official code name and Loophole is reverted back to the school. She did actually do some hero work as Wicked, see Would the Last One Out Please Turn Out the Lights ? While the DPA shows Wicked as Inactive, that is not the same as Open. There are lots of reasons why a hero would go Inactive for a bit.
The official reason being she took the teaching job at Whateley.
If I understand your question right you're talking about what to call her in the summaries? In that case Elaine or Lanie is probably best. If that's not what you meant, please let me know!
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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In Gen1 her student codename is Loophole, in Gen2 her official codename is Wicked.
Wicked was originally created as a fake supervillain, then became Lainie's official codename.
AND then there's the whole identity-swap thing...
What we are trying to figure out here is, among other things:
- What should the main Lainie page be called?
- Should we split the information between two or more pages to avoid spoilers, like we did with Mahren/Eldritch? If so, how many and which?
- How do both Tansy and Jennifer Kelly figure in the above?
I'm thinking at the very least, we are going to need separate Loophole and Wicked pages... which we already have, but for a different reason... and perhaps to make a clear distinction in the "Wicked" page between the alleged supervillainess and Lainie's heroic ID.
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E. E. Nalley wrote: Hey Xalt!
Yes, after Graduation, Elaine does have her MID changed to show Wicked as her official code name and Loophole is reverted back to the school. She did actually do some hero work as Wicked, see Would the Last One Out Please Turn Out the Lights ? While the DPA shows Wicked as Inactive, that is not the same as Open. There are lots of reasons why a hero would go Inactive for a bit.
The official reason being she took the teaching job at Whateley.
If I understand your question right you're talking about what to call her in the summaries? In that case Elaine or Lanie is probably best. If that's not what you meant, please let me know!
It's mostly for the links to the character pages and to keep things straight. So should the references to Tansy (as Elaine) be "Wicked|Mrs. Cody or "Wicked (Hero)|Mrs. Cody"", and should the references to Jennifer Kelly be "Wicked (Villain)|Jennifer Kelly". Or what? I presume Tansy, as Tansy, is still Solange.
Or should we make a redirect for "Elaine Cody" that goes to a page that untangles the snarl? Or maybe "Wicked (Solange)" would do to keep things straight.
Now that I think it through, I think "Wicked" for Lanie, "Wicked (Solange)" for Solange as Lanie and "Wicked (Villain)" for Jennifer Kelly.
I am, by the way, putting spoiler tags on the front of the summaries to make sure people actually read the stories before looking at the summaries.
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Also, speaking of names, but less important. Alvery, or Avery, for Elfe de Feu?
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Anyone got the reference for Carson being official full headmistress in 1989? Ah. Forums info. OK.